Ah, sorry for no change, I do the shape like this to reflect drums at both white and red tick.
ts8zs wrote:
[Insane]
00:21:729 (2) - add normal sampleset at head 好補上了
00:28:022 (2) - 没包好 fixed
00:38:092 (2) - ^ 感覺還好...
00:35:155 (3,4,5,6) - overmap 這個先這樣...
01:01:169 (1,2) - keep same fixed
01:06:204 (1,2,3,4) - 这梗看起来好蠢……haha 改了XD
kiai感觉能加不少finish 我露了一堆finish..現在都補上了
[Hard]
00:15:435 (4,5,6) - 换成折返滑条吧感觉节奏有点乱 好,換了折返滑条
00:24:246 (1) - 尾部右歪一点 好!
00:32:638 (1) - 尾部歪一点 ^
00:51:729 (2) - 扭曲莫名其妙 不太會扭.......
01:16:064 (4,5,1) - 手工堆叠不然会偏移 fixed
[Normal]
00:39:351 (1) - 弯度大了 ok fixed
00:47:743 (4) - 弯度大了 這個不改了
謝謝包子啊~~~~
update me and Amamiya Yuko diff
bigfrog wrote:
雖然這樣說不過我還是不能保證我的mod是好的
只是希望不會有重覆到的內容...畢竟同時看到一樣的問題應該會覺得很煩吧wwNormal
00:18:372 (3,1) - 這兩個平行看起來比較整齊 這個是故意放這樣的
01:04:526 (2) - 讓轉折點跟01:02:847 (1) 在一樣的位置 ok fixedHard
00:51:519 (1,2) - 可以往下一格重疊在00:49:701 (1) - 的位置 這個也是故意的
00:54:036 (4,5) - 覺得ctrl+g更好,在00:54:036有一個重音,距離應該可以拉遠,不過主要還是看你怎麼想 這個就放這樣吧!
00:57:393 (4,5) - ^ ^
01:05:365 (4) - 往下彎曲似乎打得比較順~ 好!往下彎曲Insane
00:35:155 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 這連擊擺得更圓滑會更好看 好改了:3
00:50:540 (4,5) - 強烈建議ctrl+g, 打起來比較順 fixed
01:20:680 (4,5) - ^ 這個是左右對稱
做的還不錯,就是flow和有點亂而已 (我好像沒資格說
抱歉我真的不會抓Insane難度之上的難度
然後這首歌最近好像滿多人做阿,新風潮?? XDDD
大概只有這些, Good Luck~~
謝謝bigfrog>.<
謝謝Kagamine Ren呀>.<Kagamine Ren wrote:
[Normal]
- 00:12:498 (5) - 滑条头加一个clap,这里这音还挺重的. 好!
- 01:06:204 (1) - 中间的finish换成clap? 這個音效不改了!
- 00:17:533 (1) - 取消NC?这里没有特殊的音或者物件 wa這邊之前換了一個滑條忘了改..... fixed
- 01:13:756 (2,3) - 这两个并不平行啊,稍微调整一下 感覺還好...><
[Hard]
- 00:20:050 (3,4) - 这两个滑条都Ctrl+G一下感觉更舒服 這個感覺還可以 ....
- 00:49:701 (1) - 这个离前面间距大一点,毕竟中间 稍微拉近一點了!
[Insane]
- 00:35:889 (10,1) - 简单insane里隔这么远有点坑吧。 ok fixed
- 01:21:729 (2,3) - 这跟前面间距太大了,而且又逆flow,建议往右移一点.:3,考虑到对称,还要对前面也调整一下 這個先保留!
- 01:23:267 (1) - 这个滑条头应该是跟着01:23:197 - 这里这个音的吧 這裡是1/3呀QAQ
- 01:25:085 - 没用的绿线 ok刪了!
- 01:25:295 (1) - 这个转盘可以早一点在01:25:295 (1) - 开始.-. ok 改了
Xinchii wrote:
Hello ~~
Form game pm
[Normal][Hard]
- 00:19:211 (1) - 考慮跟(5)擺平行? 這邊的話是故意的:3
[Insane]
- Nor用AR5 Insane用AR9 , Hard就用Ar7吧 , 也比較好讀 好改了!
- 00:20:470 (4) - Ctrl+G 把Jump留給(1)的重音 好!
- 00:57:729 (2) - 感覺作對稱會比較好看 這個也改了
- 00:15:225 (6,7,8) - 讓這些Slider的起點距離統一一下比較好 , 1/4 Slider比較接近單Note , 所以間距用他的start來定玩起來會比較沒違和感 fixed
- 00:16:274 (2) - 感覺Ctrl+G的Flow比較好看 好!
- 00:35:994 (1) - 這個就跟前面一樣用0.7x重疊 , 或著加大成像00:37:673 (1,2) - 的距離吧 , 這邊碰到一點看起來感覺不是很工整 這邊我放0.7x重疊:3
- 00:51:729(2) - 感覺這個Slider的形狀不是很好看 , 這種Slider我個人喜歡錨點分配平均一點的 fixed
- 00:52:777 (1,2) - 因為是副歌段 , 所以還是推薦和後面一樣用1.5x的距離 這個也改了
- 01:23:826 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 這邊的排列其實不是很好按 , 感覺有點拘束
推薦配合音樂作個漸進式的加大間距Jump如何 ? 好~~~!!!
- 01:06:204 (1,2,3,4) - 這一段的Hitsound感覺特別突兀 , 要不要在01:09:561 (1,2,6) - 的開頭也加上Finish保持平衡?
或是直接把這一段的Finish簡化 這些+finish不怎麼好聽 所以不加><- 01:12:917 (1) - Add Finish ? ok add
好爽的圖
Good luck !!
Edit : 你kd給的也太迅速wwww hahaXD
thanks Xinchii >.<
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Ranger wrote:
[Normal]
00:19:211 (1) - make angle to same at 00:18:372 (5). ok fixed
00:49:421 - add circle here. no>.<
01:06:204 (1) - remove finish at reserve. it`s not necessary.. no. remove
01:07:463 (2) - ^ at front ^
[Hard]
00:15:435 (4) - make that slider to stream and add circle 00:15:750. Good idea
00:24:875 (2,3) - improve blanket this. fixed
00:37:673 (1) - move to x:272 y:136. cause that`s more associate at 00:37:253 (4,5). fixed
00:40:190 (4) - how about make like this? ok fixed:3
01:06:624 (2) - remove finish here. no. remove
01:07:463 (4) - ^ ^
[Insane]
00:31:484 - add circle here? nope
01:06:624 (2,4) - same like other diff. i don`t like same like other diff no remove
01:23:826 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - make that balanced. ok fixed
Good luck for the Rank~
thanks Ranger:3
video offset修成-412了
smallboat wrote:
- Red words: Should be fixed.
- Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
- Black words : In my opinion.
[General]
- Disable widescreen in Insane fixed
[Normal][Hard]
- 01:15:435 (5,6) - Also keep a good curve better : fixed
- 01:23:826 (2,3) - This rhythm in the same at the hard diff,so complicated in normal,suggest change this (Cancel slider reverse) : fixed
[Insane]
- 00:05:784 (1,2) - This flow road looks weird and place have a a bit far,also can reduce a distance better : fixed
- 00:41:239 (2) - Sounds like has no reason do a jump for this note,also can stack 00:41:239 (2) - here fixed
- 00:54:246 (5) - Same reason as 00:05:784,suggest stack 00:54:036 (4) - make plays better fixed
- 00:57:603 (5) - Same above fixed
- 01:13:547 (2,3) - 這兩個放太遠了相差了3倍也沒對稱,有可能QAT會挑這裡建議改了。 (3)使用ctrl+g。 fixed
- 01:14:386 (4) - And move to (370|260) or another close place (Same DS) fixed
- 01:21:099 (4,1) - Seems this jump plays a bit not so good flow,suggest make close a bit. fixed
- 00:35:260 (4,6) - Has no stream notes here,suggest remove these 2 notes make easy to read (星爺就沒放) fixed
- 01:16:274 (1) - Missed finish,suggest add to all your diff. 以補上
- 01:23:826 (2,7) - Also it can do a symmetry for this 2 notes,crooked off now. fixed
謝謝小船呀>.<
update Skystar's Insane
thanks smallboat :3smallboat wrote:
Confirm all fixed by my suggestion,so Bubbled !
Konei wrote:
[Skystar's Insane]
- 00:02:428 (1,2,3) - Space those equally? Would look nicer in my opinion. sliders are usually easier to hit than circles, so here i put the slider farther but the circle closer for a better playing experience.
- 00:05:784 (1,2,3) - Same here.
- 00:06:624 (1,1) - Why this overlap? Seems avoidable to me. fixed
- 00:09:036 (1) - This spacing is really unreasonable and hard to catch, could you fix this up? fixed
- 00:26:554 (1,2,3) - I don't understand why this is spaced so weirdly, why not just make this a consistent triplet pattern? it's obviously because i wanna separate vocals and drums into two different patterns, that's why.
- 00:34:316 (1) - Why is this 1/6? I don't hear anything in the song suggesting the 1/6 snap, the piano is on the blue tick for sure. it's for emphasizing the piano, plus the head of the slider is snapped to a beat, not even infringing the guideline anyways.
- 00:41:029 (1) - Same here as above.
- 00:55:295 (1,2) - Again, I don't see why you snap them 1/6, it's not only hard to catch in game but the rhythm doesn't make sense to me, changing from 1/4 to 1/6 all over just confuses. well, fixed this one and the below.
- 01:04:526 (1,2) - Try using an 1/2 Slider here instead? Might be giving a better emphasis to the drums and is easier to catch than the sudden 1/2 stack. not really, it has 2 snares in the song, putting one 1/2 slider would let one snare end at the end of the slider, which is not even "emphasis" at all, the propose of stacking is obviously to do emphasize the snares.
- 01:08:722 (1,2,1,2) - Same as for the previous one of course.
Konei wrote:
Hey there.
[General][Insane]
- Remove opening from the tags as it's already in the title. no Remove
- Add an Audio Lead-in from at least 1000 seconds please.ok add
- 00:30:120 (3,4) - You might want to try making this a 3/4 + 1/2 Slider pattern as previous ones to follow the vocals. Sorry this i do not change >.<
- 00:31:694 - Add a note here? Fits the vocals and flows nicely. ok add
- 00:41:554 (3) - Remove this note? Rhythm sounds much closter to the guitar without it. good idea,Remove
- 00:54:456 (1) - Try to make this 3/4 and replace the next Slider to follow the vocals like you did in the start of the KIAI. ok change
- 00:57:812 (1) - Same here. ^
- 01:02:638 (7,1) - Increase the spacing here a bit? Current one feels a bit dull. i do not change >.<
[Hard]
- 00:10:400 (4,5,1) - Try to replace this with a repeating 1/2 Slider, will be less confusing because of the rhythm change. ok change
- 00:28:442 (3) - Make this 1/2 please, 3/4 is not following anything here. fixed
- 00:40:190 (4) - Try to make this wiggle symmetrical? Current doesn't look really appealing. fixed
- 01:16:274 (1) - Add a finish to the start to emphasize the cymbal sound. ok add
Easier difficulties are alright, call me back after you had a look.
thanks Konei :3
thanks 柚子QAQKawaiwkyik wrote:
Everything is fine
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