Feels a bit mistimed offset 302 maybe
Immersive:
00:08:580 (1,2,3) - I think you should rearrange this so that you form a triangle with slider head 1 and slider end 2+3
00:11:856 (3,4) - I think you should fix the angle on the 4 slider so that it would puzzle into the 3 slider
00:15:822 (5,6,7) - arrange it better fix the blankets 5/7. A trick to get this better is to ctrl+g slider 5 and just move the 7 slider so that you can use the approach circle 5 to fix the blanket.
http://puu.sh/gKvJw/be6bad3af2.jpg Using the approach circle you can fix the blanket
Try also to make a triangle out of all the slider ends
00:19:442 (6) - found this a bit awkward maybe replace with two singles
00:20:994 (2,3) - I don't think you should stop movement here. unless you maybe stack it on 00:21:339 (4) - for increased emphasis on 4
you had movement in this triple 00:22:891 (2,3,4) - and this triple 00:24:960 (7,8,1) - but not in 00:25:649 (4,5,6) - even though they all give the same sound to me
00:27:891 (1,2,3) - fix triangle
00:30:477 (6,7,1) - triplet consistency 00:31:167 (4,5,6) -
00:35:822 (4,1) - make the angle for 4 slider so that it puzzles into 1 slider
00:38:753 (5,6) - feel like this should be a downward movement and not that angled
00:51:339 (1,2) - some weird flow here either ctrl+g 2 or change its angle maybe like this
http://puu.sh/gKwbd/b380ba1d6e.jpgif you change the angle you would have to rearrange the second part of the combo a bit.
00:58:063 (5,6,1) - stack 5 6 on 1, it will give a lot of emphasis on 1 which is better suited to the music and consistent with 00:58:753 (3,4,5) -
00:59:615 (1,2,3,4,5) - shoudl rearrange here to make it a bit neater, move slider 3 so that its slider end makes a pattern with slider end 4 and 5. something like this maybe.
http://puu.sh/gKwkb/1d43152c24.jpg01:13:063 (4,5,6,1) - triangle fix
01:46:684 (1,2) - don't see why you have to slow down here 2 sounds nothing different from the other parts
01:44:960 (5,6,1) - stack
02:04:442 (1,3) - make the puzzle
02:07:029 (4,5,1) - stack for consistency in this singing part
02:12:546 (7,8,1) - stack for consistency in this singing part
02:20:822 (4,5,1) - stack for consistency in this singing part
03:28:580 (1) - ctrl + j for better flow
04:08:408 (6) - replace with 2 notes for consistency
04:20:822 (4,1,2) - straighten triangle
04:21:684 (1,2,3,4) - straighten this pentagon use ctrl+shift+d to get the perfect shape out
04:31:684 (3,4,1,2) - this movement is a bit awkward maybe rearrange 3 and 4 a bit
http://puu.sh/gKwZg/1c4bd417a4.jpg you'll probably find a better pattern than this
04:31:684 (3,4,1,2) - fix triangle shape here distance to 2 is longer than distance to 1 from the triplet
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