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Sakura
Red = Major issue, you should fix this
Purple = Issue, It's better if you fix this, and can sometimes pass if justified
Blue = Minor issue, you can ignore if you dont want to change
Green = Feedback / Comments
Black = Suggestion

[Files]
There a .osb but i dont see any storyboard, delete .osb and Full submit

[MIN of Love] (Modding based off "easiest difficulty of the set" stuff)
Star rating 1.19? Lies! this has so much stuff anti-newbies.
00:11:537 (2) - 1/4 slider, not very newbie friendly i'd say, try 1/2 sliders at most
00:11:970 (3) - 1/2 Notes maybe on stacks, but hell no like this >_< SPECIALLY after a 1/4 slider
00:20:335 (3,4,5) - It may be small, but try to not use theese
00:43:989 (3,1,2) - Spacing, move the next combo a bit more to the left
00:54:373 (2,3,4) - Try to avoid theese on an Easy, Easy should be really Easy
01:33:027 (1) - Awww how cute!!! ♥

[MED of Love]
Ehh... i find it funny how i didnt see the 1/4 slider here which is supposed to be harder
This one's ok

[MAX of Love]
01:23:220 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - EEEK! 1/8 stream, for the love of god please no ;_;

That's about it, i love the song, fix those issues and you may get even more than a regular star =)
Topic Starter
Leorda

Sakura301 wrote:

Red = Major issue, you should fix this
Purple = Issue, It's better if you fix this, and can sometimes pass if justified
Blue = Minor issue, you can ignore if you dont want to change
Green = Feedback / Comments
Black = Suggestion

[Files]
There a .osb but i dont see any storyboard, delete .osb and Full submit

[MIN of Love] (Modding based off "easiest difficulty of the set" stuff)
Star rating 1.19? Lies! this has so much stuff anti-newbies.
00:11:537 (2) - 1/4 slider, not very newbie friendly i'd say, try 1/2 sliders at most No, sorry
00:11:970 (3) - 1/2 Notes maybe on stacks, but hell no like this >_< SPECIALLY after a 1/4 sliderNo, sorry
00:20:335 (3,4,5) - It may be small, but try to not use theese Fixed
00:43:989 (3,1,2) - Spacing, move the next combo a bit more to the leftFixed
00:54:373 (2,3,4) - Try to avoid theese on an Easy, Easy should be really EasyFixed
01:33:027 (1) - Awww how cute!!! ♥ >///<

[MED of Love]
Ehh... i find it funny how i didnt see the 1/4 slider here which is supposed to be harder
This one's ok

[MAX of Love]
01:23:220 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - EEEK! 1/8 stream, for the love of god please no ;_; Fixed

That's about it, i love the song, fix those issues and you may get even more than a regular star =)
That's for modding
Sakura
Well AIMod will soon be able to tell you how your difficulty plays like, so i guess keep em for now if you dont wanna remove those 1/4 spaced ones on MIN of Love. and then i will not be needed anymore ;_;. Just wanted to also say, nothing justifies the use of 1/4 notes on an Easy, not even the BPM, faster BPMs are naturally harder and everyone should know that, not because a BPM is slower an Easy should be made harder, but ehh, you can keep em, not sure if someone will complain in the future, it's only ONE note anyways.

[MED of Love]
00:44:566 (1) - Out of bounds, move a cpl grids down

[MAX of Love]
No problems found

Ehh well the stuff i pointed out is easily fixed anyways so, here +Stars
tsuka
MAX of love:
00:29:421 (4) - add a circle between 00:28:989 the (3) and (5)
then copy that part into the 00:30:720 is better imo

Med of love:
(just suggestions below)
00:24:085 (2,3,4) - make it to the slider?(if its the normal difficulty)
00:40:527 (2,3,4) - ^

1/4 beats are too hard for the newbie 8-)

00:19:758 (2) - remove the whistle and add clap
00:20:335 (3) - make it contrary to (2)
00:20:912 (4) - clap
00:21:489 (1) - ^
00:26:104 (1,2) - replace the hitsound each other
00:28:412 (1) - add clap at the end of slider
00:29:566 (2) - remove clap
00:34:181 (1) - remove clap
00:34:758 (3) - add clap
00:44:566 (1) - over grid /./
01:24:373 (1) - add clap
01:24:950 (3) - remove the clap
01:25:527 (4) - add clap

general put the claps on the even beats will sounds better /./

others fine
TTTTTTTTTTTT
im lateee D:

Blue:just suggestions

First of all
:D

MIN of Love
00:30:720(2) - make symetric~
00:39:950(1) - add a finish(soft)
00:49:181(1) - ^
01:23:220(3) - finish(soft) at end


MED of Love
fine.

MAX of Love
fine.

starrrr~
Topic Starter
Leorda

Sakura301 wrote:

Well AIMod will soon be able to tell you how your difficulty plays like, so i guess keep em for now if you dont wanna remove those 1/4 spaced ones on MIN of Love. and then i will not be needed anymore ;_;. Just wanted to also say, nothing justifies the use of 1/4 notes on an Easy, not even the BPM, faster BPMs are naturally harder and everyone should know that, not because a BPM is slower an Easy should be made harder, but ehh, you can keep em, not sure if someone will complain in the future, it's only ONE note anyways.

[MED of Love]
00:44:566 (1) - Out of bounds, move a cpl grids down Fixed

[MAX of Love]
No problems found

Ehh well the stuff i pointed out is easily fixed anyways so, here +Stars

tsukamaete wrote:

MAX of love:
00:29:421 (4) - add a circle between 00:28:989 the (3) and (5)
then copy that part into the 00:30:720 is better imo Fixed

Med of love:
(just suggestions below)
00:24:085 (2,3,4) - make it to the slider?(if its the normal difficulty) Fixed
00:40:527 (2,3,4) - ^ Fixed

1/4 beats are too hard for the newbie 8-)

All fixed?
00:19:758 (2) - remove the whistle and add clap
00:20:335 (3) - make it contrary to (2)
00:20:912 (4) - clap
00:21:489 (1) - ^
00:26:104 (1,2) - replace the hitsound each other
00:28:412 (1) - add clap at the end of slider
00:29:566 (2) - remove clap
00:34:181 (1) - remove clap
00:34:758 (3) - add clap
00:44:566 (1) - over grid /./
01:24:373 (1) - add clap
01:24:950 (3) - remove the clap
01:25:527 (4) - add clap

general put the claps on the even beats will sounds better /./

others fine

H-boy wrote:

im lateee D:

Blue:just suggestions

First of all
:D

MIN of Love
00:30:720(2) - make symetric~ Fixed
00:39:950(1) - add a finish(soft) No
00:49:181(1) - ^ No
01:23:220(3) - finish(soft) at end No


MED of Love
fine.

MAX of Love
fine.

starrrr~
Thank you
Sure
[MIN]
Fine


[MED]
01:26:104 (1) - use grid snap
01:43:412 - add note here like this


[MAX]
00:23:508 - I expected note here


Cute background video! :D
Nakagawa-Kanon
I'm suggetion just [MAX of Love]

00:12:258 (1) - remove new combo
00:12:547 (2) - add new combo
Shulin
MIN of Love:

00:11:537 (2) - Really small slider will confuse beginners imo.
01:22:643 (2) - Move from under slider.
01:43:412 (2) - Add returning slider like other diffs.

Max of Love:

01:22:643 (1,2,3) - Use a returning slider of something, this almost looks like 1/2.
01:23:220 (1,2) - Volume please.
01:23:941 (2,3) - Doesn't fit the rhythm.
01:43:412 (1,2,3) - 1/3 hard to read in stack especially after 1/2 stack.
DJPop
~MIN of Love~
00:11:537 (2,3) - delete

~MED of Love~
Fine.

~MAX of Love~
00:46:585 (8) - place on the right side of (7)


+Star
Topic Starter
Leorda

DJPop wrote:

~MIN of Love~
00:11:537 (2,3) - delete NO

~MED of Love~
Fine.

~MAX of Love~
00:46:585 (8) - place on the right side of (7) Fixed


+Star
AngelHoney
im baba D:
Topic Starter
Leorda

AngelHoney wrote:

im baba D:
lol
Sallad4ever
Sorry I'm sangat late :cry:

Bagus :)
Videonya juga lucu cuma di file videonya masih ada musicnya, g d remove? dan juga wa masih dapet osb file jadi jgn lupa buat di hapus nanti
hoho tentu saja g usah di kds

pokoknya Star
Kim Jin Seok
Can I make a taiko map?
Topic Starter
Leorda

Kim Jin Seok wrote:

Can I make a taiko map?
NO
Shinxyn
Where have I heard this before...
.osb file.. X_X

MIN of love-
Just slight hitsound suggestions-
00:25:527 (4) - I keep thinking there should be a clap here (like 00:20:912 (4)), if you do add...then maybe change 00:27:835's clap to finish (end of slider...so it doesn't sound too continuous)?
00:56:104 (1) - add whistle to end (so this 00:54:373 (2) whistle doesn't sound awkward)?
01:29:566 (2) - add claps to both ends to match 01:24:950 (2,3) a bit?
~ Fair

MED of love-
00:21:489 (1) - clap at end?
00:24:229 (3) - ... this is the only triple click in the whole map? not that I mind, but maybe add some more throughout the map? or just remove this one...?
00:24:950 (5) - clap at end?
rest of map sounds and plays fine.

MAX of love-
00:23:220 (5) - I say replace this for a single note (with clap still), that extra beat on 1/4 sounds.. unnecessary
00:25:095 (8,9) - gaaah the vocal keeps messing me up here, maybe remove 9 and have 8 be a slider that extends to where 9 used to end? even though you're not mapping to vocal exactly, it still... dominates x-x
00:46:297 (7) - add clap to start?
00:46:585 (8) - mmm this, I think would fit as a 1/4 slider as well o.o
01:13:556 & 01:13:845 - add notes to match the 5 notes before? (doesn't really matter)
01:38:508 (4) - left a bit so the formation looks like a curve please~
Fine

Hmm...
Beuchi
Well, I can't see anything wrong. Just...

~MAX of Love~
01:36:489 (1,2,3) - Maybe this jump is a little bit too harsh? Just my opinon xP

As I already told you, I'm not going to bubble/rank maps since I'm not a BAT, so call Shinxyn again to bubble it, take my star for now~
Topic Starter
Leorda

Beuchi-chan wrote:

As I already told you, I'm not going to bubble/rank maps since I'm not a BAT, so call Shinxyn again to bubble it, take my star for now~

Shinxyn wrote:

Don't ask me for a bubble unless I say so within my mod... I'm picky, so don't expect one from me easily
Shinxyn never say "call me for bubble", so I won't ask him again
Beuchi

Leorda wrote:

Beuchi-chan wrote:

As I already told you, I'm not going to bubble/rank maps since I'm not a BAT, so call Shinxyn again to bubble it, take my star for now~

Shinxyn wrote:

Don't ask me for a bubble unless I say so within my mod... I'm picky, so don't expect one from me easily
Shinxyn never say "call me for bubble", so I won't ask him again
Awww, sorry didn't notice :(
WyndII
:D
Bianco
korean version is even better!
banvi
Hello.
I know BoA and this song. Thismap is very nice~ :)

I can't find any problem and my suggestion.
Of course , I give you star~ ;)
Topic Starter
Leorda

banvi wrote:

Hello.
I know BoA and this song. Thismap is very nice~ :)

I can't find any problem and my suggestion.
Of course , I give you star~ ;)
ありがとう バンヴィーちゃん
Lizbeth
Hola Leorda =)

Good map =3
only thing i can tell you is in..

MAX of Love
I get a lil confuse with this while playing: 01:23:220 (1,2,3,4)

anyway star!
Topic Starter
Leorda

Lizbeth wrote:

Hola Leorda =)

Good map =3
only thing i can tell you is in..

MAX of Love
I get a lil confuse with this while playing: 01:23:220 (1,2,3,4)

anyway star!
I think this is fine, sorry, no kudosu
arien666
1 and 2 and 3 :3
Umm... Valenti is good song ;_;
[Also, that song is on TnT :3]

Anyway, good luck :3
lepidopodus

arken1015 wrote:

[Also, that song is on TnT :3]
Well then, Can I make taiko map of this? it will be semi-authentic as I think...
You already refused once...
Lunah_old
:)
Mafiamaster
[MIN]
00:11:537 (2,3) - Too hard for Easy. Mainly just 2 because it looks too much like 2 notes. Or rather the slider is too short for an Easy.
Topic Starter
Leorda

Mafiamaster wrote:

[MIN]
00:11:537 (2,3) - Too hard for Easy. Mainly just 2 because it looks too much like 2 notes. Or rather the slider is too short for an Easy.
Fixed
abcde1234qaz
stared~ :D :D
Backstep
mod4mod Request :)

Little sound mod. ;)

[MIN]
00:11:970 (3) Spacing ?

[MED]
00:53:220 (5) add clap.

[MAX]
00:28:989 (3) add clap ?
00:31:296 (3) ^

Nice map & song.

+Star ~ = w = b

If you have freetime please mod my map This.
Thanks in advance.
Topic Starter
Leorda

backstep wrote:

mod4mod Request :)

Little sound mod. ;)

[MIN]
00:11:970 (3) Spacing ?

[MED]
00:53:220 (5) add clap.

[MAX]
00:28:989 (3) add clap ?
00:31:296 (3) ^

Nice map & song.

+Star ~ = w = b

If you have freetime please mod my map This.
Thanks in advance.
All Fixed
Takuma
Alright.
Andrea
Looks good to me.

Ranked~
Neethime
;) congratulations!
Topic Starter
Leorda

osuplayer111 wrote:

Looks good to me.

Ranked~
/me kiss osuplayer111's lips

EDIT : thanks Neethime
EDIT2 : wait, the genre should be "Pop (Korean)"
Andrea
Other version of this song was Pop (English) so I did here the same...

Fixed both now XD
Topic Starter
Leorda

osuplayer111 wrote:

Other version of this song was Pop (English) so I did here the same...

Fixed both now XD
Thank you
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