Hello, my modding column will be
1 l 2 l 3 l 4 l 5 l 6 l 77K HD- Check your
aimod, unsnapped note
- Many Inconsistent notes, I reccomend you spend some quality time to self-mod your map
- I hope I'm wrong, but you didn't used 1/16 beat divisor snap, aren't you?
Moving along,
00:15:600 (15600|0) - add 2 more notes, there's quite loud crash and drum here, deserve overall 3 notes
00:28:800 (28800|0,29100|2,29400|0,29400|4,29700|2,29700|6,30000|4,30300|6) - press Ctrl + H, pitch wise is better imo
00:30:600 (30600|0) - what sound is this following? i recommend moving it 1/2 beat backward to the red lines. Then, move it to 3
00:31:800 (31800|3) - i don't see any meaning for this long note
00:31:500 (31500|6,31500|0,31800|6,31800|0,32100|6,32100|0) - kinda boring, might want to spread them apart
00:33:300 (33300|5) - if you want a long note here, don't end it prematurely, it feels kinda off. I suggest you end it on 00:34:200 (34200|5) -
00:33:881 (33881|3,34050|4,34050|1,34200|4,34350|1) - re-pattern this, due to the addition of long notes
00:36:600 (36600|5,36600|3) - move to 1 and 7 respectively,
00:36:900 (36900|3) - move to 6. better flow, also change it to long note as well, same length as this 00:36:600 (36600|2) - . gotta chain those lns
00:37:200 (37200|0) - this as well, change to long note
00:38:400 (38400|6,38700|6,39000|6,39300|6,39600|6) - this is kinda boring, spread them apart, perhaps stair-like pattern?
00:48:000 (48000|0) - can be a long note which ends on 00:48:900 (48900|0) -
00:50:400 (50400|3) - move to 3, better note presentation + flow
00:57:600 (57600|5,57600|4,57900|5,58200|4) - these notes are not supposed to be included in this group of pattern anymore 00:57:000 (57000|2,57300|3,57300|4) - because there's abrupt disturbance/pause on 00:57:116 . please separate them apart
01:06:900 (66900|3,66993|2,67087|1,67200|0) - the music at that time was ascending, it should go to the right instead. therefore press Ctrl+H
01:11:100 (71100|2) - add 1 more note here, louder sound can be heard
01:21:600 (81600|0) - what is this sound represent? supposed to be on the red tick, below by 1/2 beat
01:24:000 (84000|0) - this as well, move to red tick
01:26:700 (86700|2,87600|3) - plot notes between these notes, why are you leaving it empty
01:29:400 (89400|0) - deserve to have another note added, loud sound
01:30:600 (90600|2) - same reason
01:32:100 (92100|0,92100|6,92100|3) - kinda felt off-beat, hmm
01:36:000 (96000|0,96150|1,96300|0,96450|1,96600|0) - not balance and awkward, you may wanted to make the pattern symmetrical around this area
so the right side does not felt so empty
hmmm
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Friendly advices:
1. Please plot your map by mostly dependent on 1/4 beat snap divisor, Unless you know what you're doing.
2. Listen closely while plotting the map. There's quite many off-sounded notes as i scanned through during modding.
3. Be Consistent. Louder part of the song deserved 2 or 3 notes, depending on how many instrument playing simultaneously at that moment. If the area wasn't that loud (just some kick and cue sound playing). there is no need to put additional notes/
4. Pitch Relevancy. Sometimes, pitch > pattern, because by plotting your map base on pitch, the notes presentation become more neat, and understandable. Try to plot your notes with this in mind: the very left of the horizon is weakest sound. and the very right deserves highly-pitch sound.
5. Sometimes, self-modding is even more rewarding than waiting others to mod your map. After all, no one understand you better than yourself, so fine tuned your own style and maximized your potential in your own way, but ofc within the right way. Therefore, stick to the mania mapping guidelines provided somewhere in the forum? seriously just check it out.
Good luck with your map, there's lot of room for improvement, and if you're really serious about it, you will succeed definitely