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Jerry Barnes Quiana - Moon without the stars

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XinCrin
2,846 posts
Joined January 2012
XinCrin
A quick mod here :o

General

  1. 00:08:001 - 00:13:903 The custom Clap doesnt fit with the music at the beginning , I would really like if you remove them and use another sound.
Normall

  1. 00:08:001 (1,2) The current blanket doesn't look very good at all, Maybe you could try something like this:
    SPOILER
  2. 00:13:411 (3) I suggest you to add a Whistle at the beginning of this slider, fits very good with the music
  3. 00:13:903 (1) Whistle (^)
  4. 00:20:542 (2,3) Stacked objects could be a bit confusing for beginner players, since this is the easiest diff in the whole mapset. You should consider unstack them
  5. 00:24:477 (2) (^)
  6. 00:45:378 (1) I feel this NC very unnecessary. What to about to remove it?
  7. 00:55:214 (1) Finish doesn't feel very good at here in my opinion. Maybe you should remove it
Hard

  1. 00:13:411 (3) A whistle at the beginning of this slider gives a good touch
  2. 00:14:395 (4,6) You should consider to CTRL+G these slider, since if you keep the current pattern there will be an antijump at (4). But if you don't want to do this, you should add a NC at (4) because of and antijump.
    SPOILER
  3. 00:32:100 (2) I feel that the NC should be at here because of voice rhythm change
Really cool beatmap, good luck with the ranking :)
HootOwlStar
750 posts
Joined May 2014
HootOwlStar
Short and late mod from #modreqs :3
My favourite Deemo song of all times BTW #yay
Anyway, MISSION START!!!

General


  1. Nice song
  2. Nice storyboard
  3. Nice skin
  4. Nice mapper and storyboarder
    What could I say more lol

Normal


  • Mostly suggestions so you cn simply ignore them if you want lol
  1. 00:08:001 (1,2) - XinCrin's suggestion looks better for this so maybe you can try?
  2. 00:14:395 (2,3) - Avoid the pattern that two curve sliders in same orientation and same direction appearing in same time for design. At least you should Ctrl+H 00:14:395 (2)
  3. 00:18:329 (2,3,1) - The flow seems unnatural here. You don't really need to symmetry for 00:18:329 (2,1) and the note 00:19:313 (3) seems breaking the flow. Making 00:19:805 (1) straight seems more better. You can try sth similar to this instead
  4. 01:15:870 (2) - Follow vocals better. You can try this
  5. 01:16:854 (1) - The star is not similar to the star in Hard diff. There is sth like this so can it be fixed idk
    Nice diff overall

Hard


  1. 00:10:952 (3,4) - The distance between two notes to make sth like imperfect stack idk is different w/ 00:08:001 (1,2). Try to make 00:10:952 (3,4) be more closer
  2. 00:12:673 (2,3) - Suggestion: for 00:12:673 (2), move slider to x:300 y:340, move red turning point to x:256 y:324 and move slider end to x:212 y:340. Just minor change for slider design to make the slider nt too bump-out (?). And sth similar w/ 00:13:411 (3), 00:24:231 (3,4), and 01:05:051 (1,2)
  3. 00:30:133 (1) - tat slider nvm let us go on
  4. 00:56:198 (3,1) - As stated, try avoid the pattern that two curve sliders in same orientation and same direction appearing in same time. You cn try somewhat concept like this
  5. 01:16:608 (4) - Make it to single note will do, in my opinion

I know my suggestions like sh*t so if you hv problems, feel free to PM me or find me in-game
Overall well-polished mapset, ald could be ready for ranked
Anyway, good luck for both of us
Pappy
1,020 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Pappy
HootOwlStar

HootOwlStar wrote:

Short and late mod from #modreqs :3
My favourite Deemo song of all times BTW #yay
Anyway, MISSION START!!!

General


  1. Nice song
  2. Nice storyboard
  3. Nice skin
  4. Nice mapper and storyboarder
    What could I say more lol

Normal


  • Mostly suggestions so you cn simply ignore them if you want lol
  1. 00:14:395 (2,3) - Avoid the pattern that two curve sliders in same orientation and same direction appearing in same time for design. At least you should Ctrl+H 00:14:395 (2) It plays and looks nice, so why I should change it?
  2. 00:18:329 (2,3,1) - The flow seems unnatural here. You don't really need to symmetry for 00:18:329 (2,1) and the note 00:19:313 (3) seems breaking the flow. Making 00:19:805 (1) straight seems more better. You can try sth similar to this instead Flow on 1/1 in normal, I didn't know that it exists. It plays nice, so keeping as it is.
  3. 01:15:870 (2) - Follow vocals better. You can try this I wanted to use very plain rhytms at this moment, so keeping.

Hard


  1. 00:10:952 (3,4) - The distance between two notes to make sth like imperfect stack idk is different w/ 00:08:001 (1,2). Try to make 00:10:952 (3,4) be more closer It's okay for me.
  2. 00:12:673 (2,3) - Suggestion: for 00:12:673 (2), move slider to x:300 y:340, move red turning point to x:256 y:324 and move slider end to x:212 y:340. Just minor change for slider design to make the slider nt too bump-out (?). And sth similar w/ 00:13:411 (3), 00:24:231 (3,4), and 01:05:051 (1,2) I want to keep as it is.
  3. 00:56:198 (3,1) - As stated, try avoid the pattern that two curve sliders in same orientation and same direction appearing in same time. You cn try somewhat concept like thisIt would change rhytm too much comparing to other patterns, so keeping.
  4. 01:16:608 (4) - Make it to single note will do, in my opinion Keeping because guitar.

I know my suggestions like sh*t so if you hv problems, feel free to PM me or find me in-game
Overall well-polished mapset, ald could be ready for ranked
Anyway, good luck for both of us
Sorry that I denied so much stuff. :<

XinCrin

XinCrin wrote:

A quick mod here :o

General

  1. 00:08:001 - 00:13:903 The custom Clap doesnt fit with the music at the beginning , I would really like if you remove them and use another sound. I don't have anyone that fits :<
Normall

  1. 00:55:214 (1) Finish doesn't feel very good at here in my opinion. Maybe you should remove it Imo it fits, so I'll keep it.

Thanks you both, you helped me alot! :D

I also applied Xgor's mod. So,
RE-DOWNLOAD PLS
Sieg
3,981 posts
Joined February 2012
Sieg
find me ingame
we did few adjustments and beatmap should be ready to go now

metadata confirmation from Deemo
SPOILER
also
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jQYiTz82WQk
those 2 spaces are pretty much legit

to qualifying bn: recheck sb lyrics before qualifying, please
meii18
3,577 posts
Joined October 2013
meii18
ok
Pappy
1,020 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Pappy

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

ok
ok?
Sieg
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Joined February 2012
Sieg
alright
meii18
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Joined October 2013
meii18

Lyrics
  1. From ''No matter of the cost'' The word ''of ''should be removed because the singer said ''No matter the cost''

Continue morning
Pappy
1,020 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Pappy

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

Lyrics
  1. From ''No matter of the cost'' The word ''of ''should be removed because the singer said ''No matter the cost''
I can clearly hear "of" here. Krfawy agrees with me ;w;
Sieg
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Joined February 2012
Sieg

Pappy wrote:

I can clearly hear "of" here.
I can confirm.
Aka
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Joined January 2012
Aka
Sieg
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Joined February 2012
Sieg
I saw this, not official and I think have some errors inside, so that's why I've asked to recheck sb lyrics D:
hehe
1,959 posts
Joined November 2012
hehe
no matter of the cost doesn't even make sense
00:36:280 - all its mysteries
00:53:739 - without the rain
00:58:411 - That's how it feels
01:03:083 - like what's a heartbeat

aehaehaueaeh
bn swarm for lyrics
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Krfawy
1,374 posts
Joined March 2012
Krfawy
ByBy, are you aware natives won't say 'I am aware of that' with stressed 'of' preposition and they will use a reduction while talking and there actually is 'of' word and it's seriously audible?

Bo tak w ogóle to mogę zrobić czepialskiego moda Papuszku. :3

Ogólnie
  1. Drugi kolor combo jest strasznie podobny do szóstego, a pierwszy do piątego. Możesz troszkę rozjaśnić jedynkę i dwójkę?
Hard
  1. Może jednak OD6 bez połówki? XD
  2. 00:16:854 (2) - Początek jest na (X148 | Y216) a koniec jest już mniej symetryczny. Wiesz, co zrobić. =3=
  3. 00:59:149 (1,3) - Też nie są 100% symetryczne. Zobacz że jest minimalnie inaczej jak się je na siebie nałoży. *Krfawy runs
  4. 01:13:903 (3,1) - ^
Normal
  1. 00:08:739 (2) - Weź zrób go bardziej symetrycznego. : /
  2. 00:35:296 (6) - Ogólnie następne combo jest nafaszerowane obiektami że aż strach jak na normala który jest najłatwiejszym poziomem. Może usuniesz ten obiekt żeby było trochę lżej, miau? JA WIEM ŻE PIANINO ALE PODKREŚLMY WOKALE C'NIE ;w; XD
  3. 01:14:641 (3) - ^
  4. 01:08:493 (3,4) - A z tego dałoby się zrobić slajdera żeby było mniej klikania?
Dobra mapa. Polecam. Krystyna Czubówna.
Sieg
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Joined February 2012
Sieg
just find a native speaker before qualify
sheela
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Joined October 2011
sheela

handsome wrote:

no matter of the cost doesn't even make sense
00:36:280 - all its mysteries
00:53:739 - without the rain
00:58:411 - That's how it feels
01:03:083 - like what's a heartbeat

aehaehaueaeh
bn swarm for lyrics
handsome seems to point them all.
meii18
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Joined October 2013
meii18
@Krfawy I know the ''of'' preposition is almost audible but in lyrics that word doesn't appear ;w; and I hear ''no matter the cost''
sheela
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Joined October 2011
sheela

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

@Krfawy I know the ''of'' preposition is almost audible but in lyrics that word doesn't appear ;w; and I hear ''no matter the cost''
I hear the of in the lyrics, so it's fine. Might slow down the song a bit to hear it.
meii18
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Joined October 2013
meii18
ok continue


  • handsome mentioned some missed words or wrong words so :
  1. At ''with a heartache'' should be ''?'' at the end of lyric because it's a question. Same as at ''without the rain'' , ''what's the moon without the stars''
  2. At ''That's how it feels'' how handsome said the correct lyric is ''That's how I feels'' because the singer say about himself

@Krfawy you can qualify it I can't qualify it today I should wait till tomorrow ;w;
ac8129464363
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ac8129464363

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

ok continue

At ''That's how it feels'' how handsome said the correct lyric is ''That's how I feels'' because the singer say about himself
sorry, but handsome is correct. please leave this sort of thing to those who can speak English at a better level :p
Akari-
211 posts
Joined May 2010
Akari-

deetz wrote:

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

ok continue

At ''That's how it feels'' how handsome said the correct lyric is ''That's how I feels'' because the singer say about himself
sorry, but handsome is correct. please leave this sort of thing to those who can speak English at a better level :p
"That's how it feels when we're apart" - singer describing their own feeling with "it"

"That's how I feel when we're apart" - singer describing that they ("I") feel that way

they both express the same thing and are both correct, but in this case it sounds more like the former

btw "That's how I feels ..." is not grammatically correct
ac8129464363
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ac8129464363
YA

was responding to "that's how I feels", I'm aware that that's another interpretation lol. just better to not spread false information + the voice does sound much more like "it" at that part
Krfawy
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Joined March 2012
Krfawy
After fixing storyboard issues it's time to rank this cute, adorable and relaxing mapset.

*Krfawy robi ranku-ranku na mapsecie Papsa, bo może. W
Pappy
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Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Pappy
I'm idiot and I forgot to check the mapset myself before qualify, can someone disqualify this...?

I wanted the last four colours appear only in kiai, but after changing one NC it changed and I forgot about it... D:



But oh well, it's probably not possible to dq with this reason qwq Anyway thanks to everybody! :3
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FlobuFlobs
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Joined June 2011
FlobuFlobs
Gratz qwq
Nozhomi
Global Moderator
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Joined May 2013
Nozhomi

Pappy wrote:

I'm idiot and I forgot to check the mapset myself before qualify, can someone disqualify this...?
You still can ask you know, but if you think it's ok then ^^

Gratz (Krfawy 2nd shoot)
Mystyk
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Mystyk
I never got a reply to my mod...(even though I wanted to rank it...) but congrats
Skyhmer
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Skyhmer
Gratz!
meii18
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meii18
Congrats /w\
ErunamoJAZZ
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ErunamoJAZZ

Pappy wrote:

...But oh well, it's probably not possible to dq with this reason qwq ...
This is in Qualified, if you need a DQ, just ask to a QAT about this, btw, they rank this without a responce to Mystyk's mod... this is bad, imo.

Good Luck o/
Pappy
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Pappy

Mystyk wrote:

I never got a reply to my mod...(even though I wanted to rank it...) but congrats
I am really sorry for this! Totally forgot to say that, I fixed everything from your mod without one thing (I don't remember which one...), just when I checked it I was like "uh I'll post reponse later" than I left this map and forgot to reply. I promise this won't happen again. D:
ac8129464363
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ac8129464363
you can dq on request within 12 hours or something, as we learned from fergas' map
Pappy
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Pappy

deetz wrote:

you can dq on request within 12 hours or something, as we learned from fergas' map
I know this rule, but every QAT I requested this was too busy uh. D:
hehe
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Joined November 2012
hehe
great map though. congratulations!

this lacks a shadow i think
Mystyk
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Mystyk

Pappy wrote:

Mystyk wrote:

I never got a reply to my mod...(even though I wanted to rank it...) but congrats
I am really sorry for this! Totally forgot to say that, I fixed everything from your mod without one thing (I don't remember which one...), just when I checked it I was like "uh I'll post reponse later" than I left this map and forgot to reply. I promise this won't happen again. D:
It's fine I'm glad you fixed everything except one xD these new fast BNs taking away my ranks ;_; -.-" *runs*
PatZar
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PatZar
wow grazt pappi xD
mystyk mod my STD
KUURAhoshi
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Joined January 2014
KUURAhoshi
Ohh.. It's already ranked ? I'm too late..

But could you please remove "Cytus" from the tags ? This song has nothing to do with that..
Where's QAT ?
Pappy
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Pappy

Kazamastar11 wrote:

Ohh.. It's already ranked ? I'm too late..

But could you please remove "Cytus" from the tags ? This song has nothing to do with that..
Where's QAT ?
Deemo and Cytus are games from the same producers, so why not to add it? :P
KUURAhoshi
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KUURAhoshi

Pappy wrote:

Deemo and Cytus are games from the same producers, so why not to add it? :P
Hmm.. I agree with that, trust me i don't have a plan to unrank your map..
I just remember the last time i said that thing. (o.o scroll down)
Pappy
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Pappy

Kazamastar11 wrote:

Hmm.. I agree with that, trust me i don't have a plan to unrank your map..
I just remember the last time i said that thing. (o.o scroll down)
This can't be unranked because it went out of qualified section. Tags are choose of the mapper, Cytus is somehow related to this map so I can keep it.
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