Wait, i have~Pappy wrote:
I know, this one is from Revolution Era. ;-; I just can't find backround from this song in good quality...gokugohan12468 wrote:
BG is wrong <..<
XinCrin use that BG~ :3
So, ask with XinCrin~
Can i add you as friend?
Wait, i have~Pappy wrote:
I know, this one is from Revolution Era. ;-; I just can't find backround from this song in good quality...gokugohan12468 wrote:
BG is wrong <..<
-[ Asuna ]- wrote:
General
preview point is a bit more faster and feels "i need to wait, is this gud song?", im suggest move it a bit backward at 00:46:846 Preview Point in Deemo game is the same so keeping, it's just some ms plz.Normal
- 00:11:436 (3) - why no 1/2 slider to consistent with the ritme as previous ? Idk, simple note feels better for me. ;w;
- 00:15:616 (4) - remove this sounds nice for me Leaving it for piano sound.
- 00:41:436 (1,2) - feels empty and a bit awkward at 00:41:682, change (1) into 1/1 and remove reverse at (2) then move into 00:42:174 -,*timeline I like as it is. D:
- 00:45:125 - add note ? isn't part like 00:15:616 - , so you can add a note here i guess, the sound more loud than previous There isn't any place do do this, adding this note would let me move every note after this. D:
- 01:14:879 (1,2) - the follow is a bit awkward, make it more natural please :3
Hard
- 00:38:977 (5,6) - i just thinking this is should be 1/2 slider instead I like as it is. D:
- 00:47:092 (3,1) - i dont know what to say but i want to move it a bit down like http://puu.sh/fwhvD/71237b99d7.jpg There's no need to do this. D:
ok thats it
nice map and song~
hope this helped and Good luck!!~
EDIT: idk what should i do with my kds
[Storyboard Design]Xgor wrote:
You haven't removed the background image even if you don't use it in the SB at all
How to do it here (t/55177)
As the default color when you remove the screen will be black you won't need the black image you have behind the background at all time.
If you do these things you'll save +2 SB load!
15:12 Nhawak: IRC mod? owo
15:13 Pappy: okay
15:14 *Nhawak is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/598365 Jerry Barnes Quiana - Moon without the stars [Normal]]
15:14 Nhawak: 00:23:731 -
15:15 Nhawak: try y 164 ;w;
15:16 Nhawak: 00:39:469 -
15:16 Nhawak: http://puu.sh/fE4wJ/5bf23371ac.jpg
15:17 Nhawak: try this :3
15:17 Nhawak: is more beautiful <3
15:18 Pappy: l
15:18 Pappy: k
15:18 Pappy: *
15:18 Nhawak: 00:43:403 -
15:18 Nhawak: x 168 :3
15:18 Nhawak: y***
15:19 Nhawak: OH
15:19 Nhawak: y 327***************
15:19 Nhawak: sorry
15:19 *Nhawak runs
15:21 Pappy: k
15:23 Nhawak: hard diff is perfect for me <3
15:23 Pappy: Glad to hear it <3
15:24 Nhawak: sorry for the poor mod
15:24 Nhawak: :'<
An inherited timing section may be placed on an uninherited timing section (but only to change the slider speed).You didn't use any SV changes so the green line has to be removed.
Sorry that I denied so much stuff. :<HootOwlStar wrote:
Short and late mod from #modreqs :3
My favourite Deemo song of all times BTW #yay
Anyway, MISSION START!!!General
- Nice song
- Nice storyboard
- Nice skin
- Nice mapper and storyboarder
What could I say more lolNormal
- Mostly suggestions so you cn simply ignore them if you want lol
- 00:14:395 (2,3) - Avoid the pattern that two curve sliders in same orientation and same direction appearing in same time for design. At least you should Ctrl+H 00:14:395 (2) It plays and looks nice, so why I should change it?
- 00:18:329 (2,3,1) - The flow seems unnatural here. You don't really need to symmetry for 00:18:329 (2,1) and the note 00:19:313 (3) seems breaking the flow. Making 00:19:805 (1) straight seems more better. You can try sth similar to this instead Flow on 1/1 in normal, I didn't know that it exists. It plays nice, so keeping as it is.
- 01:15:870 (2) - Follow vocals better. You can try this I wanted to use very plain rhytms at this moment, so keeping.
Hard
- 00:10:952 (3,4) - The distance between two notes to make sth like imperfect stack idk is different w/ 00:08:001 (1,2). Try to make 00:10:952 (3,4) be more closer It's okay for me.
- 00:12:673 (2,3) - Suggestion: for 00:12:673 (2), move slider to x:300 y:340, move red turning point to x:256 y:324 and move slider end to x:212 y:340. Just minor change for slider design to make the slider nt too bump-out (?). And sth similar w/ 00:13:411 (3), 00:24:231 (3,4), and 01:05:051 (1,2) I want to keep as it is.
- 00:56:198 (3,1) - As stated, try avoid the pattern that two curve sliders in same orientation and same direction appearing in same time. You cn try somewhat concept like thisIt would change rhytm too much comparing to other patterns, so keeping.
- 01:16:608 (4) - Make it to single note will do, in my opinion Keeping because guitar.
I know my suggestions like sh*t so if you hv problems, feel free to PM me or find me in-game
Overall well-polished mapset, ald could be ready for ranked
Anyway, good luck for both of us
XinCrin wrote:
A quick mod here
GeneralNormall
- 00:08:001 - 00:13:903 The custom Clap doesnt fit with the music at the beginning , I would really like if you remove them and use another sound. I don't have anyone that fits :<
- 00:55:214 (1) Finish doesn't feel very good at here in my opinion. Maybe you should remove it Imo it fits, so I'll keep it.
ok?ByBy_ChAn wrote:
ok
I can clearly hear "of" here. Krfawy agrees with me ;w;ByBy_ChAn wrote:
Lyrics
- From ''No matter of the cost'' The word ''of ''should be removed because the singer said ''No matter the cost''
I can confirm.Pappy wrote:
I can clearly hear "of" here.
handsome seems to point them all.handsome wrote:
no matter of the cost doesn't even make sense
00:36:280 - all its mysteries
00:53:739 - without the rain
00:58:411 - That's how it feels
01:03:083 -likewhat's a heartbeat
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bn swarm for lyrics
I hear the of in the lyrics, so it's fine. Might slow down the song a bit to hear it.ByBy_ChAn wrote:
@Krfawy I know the ''of'' preposition is almost audible but in lyrics that word doesn't appear ;w; and I hear ''no matter the cost''
sorry, but handsome is correct. please leave this sort of thing to those who can speak English at a better level :pByBy_ChAn wrote:
ok continue
At ''That's how it feels'' how handsome said the correct lyric is ''That's how I feels'' because the singer say about himself
"That's how it feels when we're apart" - singer describing their own feeling with "it"deetz wrote:
sorry, but handsome is correct. please leave this sort of thing to those who can speak English at a better level :pByBy_ChAn wrote:
ok continue
At ''That's how it feels'' how handsome said the correct lyric is ''That's how I feels'' because the singer say about himself