Tachibana Keita - Michishirube -TV version- · forum

-Hanashi-

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

-Hanashi- 2015-01-14T02:24:05+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, April 28, 2015 at 5:20:47 PM

Artist: Tachibana Keita
Title: Michishirube -TV version-
Source: 家庭教師ヒットマンREBORN!
Tags: manga katekyo hitman reborn tsuna gokudera yamamoto kyoko lambo LixRei
BPM: 111
Filesize: 5360kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.22 stars, 78 notes)
Hard (2.63 stars, 218 notes)
Normal (1.85 stars, 152 notes)
Rei's Dying Will (3.18 stars, 230 notes)

Download: Tachibana Keita - Michishirube -TV version-
Download: Tachibana Keita - Michishirube -TV version- (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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REDOWNLOAD IF YOU DOWNLOADED BEFORE 4/28/2015!! CHANGED BG
Mapset #7: Tachibana Keita - Michishirube -TV version-
1st ending of Katekyo Hitman Reborn!
~~~
Difficulty Credits:

Easy by me (100% Completed)

Normal by me (100% Completed)

Hard by me (100% Completed)

Rei's Dying Will by LixRei (100% Completed)
~~~
Special Credits:
• Thanks to LordRaika for Hitsounding!! ^^
• Thanks to Cayman for Testplaying!! ^^
• Thanks to RuberusuScarlet for the Metadata Check!! ^^

Big thanks to the modders also!! ^w^

• Thanks to Lokovodo for the mod!! ^^
• Thanks to TAILOW for the mod!! ^^
• Thanks to baraatje123 for the mod!! ^^
• Thanks to Domi200 for the mod!! ^^
• Thanks to sukiNathan for the mod!! ^^
• Thanks to kamikin for the mod!! ^^
• Thanks to Neil Leo for the mod!! ^^
• Thanks to monstrata for the mod!! ^^
• Thanks to dorothy3242 for the mod!! ^^
• Thanks to -Nya- for the mod!! ^^
• Thanks to Kocari for the mod!! ^^
• Thanks to -Tochi for the mod!! ^^
• Thanks to Xelasto for the mod!! ^^
• Thanks to JudgeTheDude for the mod!! ^^

~~~
Pending - Ready For Mods

Last edited by -Hanashi- 2015-04-29T00:21:17+00:00, edited 59 times in total.

Lurei

667 posts

Joined March 2014

Lurei 2015-01-18T20:56:58+00:00

Hi there!
Well, here's the Insane you requested. It's a slow song, so I couldn't do much to increase Star Difficulty (it's still pretty hard, through).

.osu code!

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: michishirube.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 46431
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 1160,9803,18458,27106
DistanceSpacing: 1.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.3

[Metadata]
Title:Michishirube (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:道標 (TVサイズ)
Artist:Keita Tachibana
ArtistUnicode:橘慶太
Creator:-Hanashi-
Version:Rei's Insane
Source:家庭教師ヒットマンリボーン!
Tags:anime japanese manga katekyo hitman reborn -Hanashi- LixRei
BeatmapID:603423
BeatmapSetID:261633

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6.8
CircleSize:4.3
OverallDifficulty:7.5
ApproachRate:7.7
SliderMultiplier:2.15000000596046
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"michishirube moving bg ;).avi"
0,0,"michishirube bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Also, I suggest you check your Hard, since it seems a bit overmapped to my ears. You can use a lower Playback Rate (check your lower-right corner) to confirm where is overmapped and where not.

Also, don't shoot kudosu to this post, please.

-Hanashi-

216 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

-Hanashi- 2015-01-19T02:09:51+00:00

LixRei wrote:
Also, I suggest you check your Hard, since it seems a bit overmapped to my ears. You can use a lower Playback Rate (check your lower-right corner) to confirm where is overmapped and where not.

On second thought, it kinda is. Thanks for the observation! I'll fix it as soon as I can!

Lurei

667 posts

Joined March 2014

Lurei 2015-01-19T02:16:27+00:00

Yeah, it is. Even my Insane has a minor note density than that Hard. LOL

And a friendly advice: You should delete your name from tags since you're mapper creator and map appears if someone searchs with your username already.

Lokovodo

463 posts

Joined December 2012

Lokovodo 2015-01-25T10:54:34+00:00

This is Ayano-chan~

And this is a mod!~

Hello! You are my first person i am going to try to help from my modding queue. \o/

[Easy]
All around looks good only thing i can comment on is...

01:21:296 (5) - I believe newer players find slider velocity changes difficult, however it fits absolutely just fine with song. However if you were to change the slider into just being a spinner than you would add playability to the many people who all mod easys for rank #1s (by adding extra spinner) and you avoid the problem of slider velocity changes being hard for newer players but you could say the exact same for both spinners, and spinners with a circle and not slider afterwards (because its hard for newer player to time circle after spinner) but this is just my intake and you are totally find bro, your decision just my insight.

[Normal]

00:32:647 (3,4) - I don't feel like the wiggle of these sliders is impactful enough to wiggle at all, though it fits fine with the adjacent notes though personally i would just curve them like this

01:13:458 (2) - this looks and feels a bit ugly in my opinion, I would personally do something like this

01:21:296 (1) - Maybe consider start a new combo here. I don't think it really matters but i would personally do it.

[Hard]
There are a lot of things i like in this difficulty for example the slider at 00:03:187 (5) - and your use of 1/4 also your somewhat "filler" notes like 00:30:214 (5,6,7,1,2) - are positioned in such a way where it looks and feels nice. I can't really give advice on this difficulty because i like it how it is so much. It is the kind of thing i would spend time to Flashlight due to love of mapper kinda like Kyubey and his amazing trigger happy

[Rei's Dying Will]
I don't see any real problems with this diffculty other than i really don't like 01:19:133 (1,2,3,4) - at the end since it feels anti-climatic and boring to play in my opinion. What i would do is...

01:19:404 (2,3) - Crtl + Shift + R than rotate 120* on selection centre or something of the likes to avoid stacking because stacks like that are extremely boring to play.

Goodluck! and btw nice milky holmes avatar! Hercule-chan is cute like ayano! (though i think kokoro-chan wins my heart with milky holmes

)

Lincher

Lincher 2015-01-25T12:08:02+00:00

[General]
OD=5
[Easy]
00:55:350 (1) - hidden slider, like for the same rhytmical before?
01:21:296 (5) - like said before, do not that slow timmers, then make it no-reverse + NC
[Normal]
HP -1
00:04:268 (6) - I personally don't think this circle is appreciated for the rhytm
00:10:755 (2) - make it 1/2 slider than one circle. same thing as before
00:11:566 (3) - +NC
00:22:377 (1) - no NC
00:48:593 (1) - add here hitsound
00:50:755 (4) - delete hitsound, then add it here maybe 00:49:944 (3)
01:20:214 (8) - +NC
[Hard]
HP -2
00:03:998 (6) - add the hitsound of that kind of sliders
00:10:755 (4,5) - hard to predicte
00:23:323 (2,3) - maybe hidden circles, as for this rhytm?
00:31:025 (1) - no NC
00:35:350 (1) - no NC, 00:35:890 (5) - NC this
00:46:701 (3) - NC
00:48:593 (1,2,3) - same here
00:54:809 (1) - no NC, then NC slider as before
01:03:458 (1) - no NC
01:03:998 (1) - NC for the refrain
01:05:890 (1,2,3) - again this with NC, just NC there when the finish hitsound is
01:11:296 (1,2,3,4) - not sure it happens before
[Rei's Dying Will]
It looks that you have used differently DSes. please stay at once
00:19:268 (2) - this slider is missunderstood
00:21:160 (2,3) - that for no rhytm
00:36:296 (2,3) - it doesn't work
00:52:917 (6) - NC
01:04:539 (2,3,4) - almost weren't hear. try clap
01:14:539 (4,1) - this is next missunderstood, and this NC
01:16:971 (1) - it was jumped before, why it's hidden now?
01:21:296 (1) - maybe jump + no hitfinish

Bara-

11,955 posts

Joined April 2013

Bara- 2015-01-25T15:31:31+00:00

From LordRaika's Modding Party

didn't read you requested Hitsounds, I didn't read xD

[Easy]

DO NOT CHANGE SLIDERVELOCITY IN EASY OR NORMAL
IT'S UNRANKABLE
00:03:458 (3,4) - This blanket is pretty bad, try improving it
00:14:268 (1,3) - These sliders overlap, but that looks kinda ugly, please change it
00:27:241 (1,3) - ^^
00:31:025 (4,1) - You shouldn't stack notes in low diffs
00:31:566 (1,2,3) - Try to improve the blanket
00:35:350 (4,1) - Don't stack in low diff
00:37:512 (2,3) - Doesn't flow really good.From (1) to (2) you go to top right, but then you suddenly go down, and then again go right.
Try to change that
00:42:377 (3) - Select this slider, and then click on the coordinates top-right, then enter the following

This way, the end of (3) will be the same as the start of (1)
00:46:701 (1) - WAY to soon after a spinner. Keep at least 4 beats between them (For now, delete the spinner, and keep it this way), only add a note at 00:44:539

00:52:647 (2) - Distance is to low with the previous note

This diff needs quite some work, sorry

[Normal]
Cs to 3,5
Hp to 4
DO NOT CHANGE SLIDERVELOCITY IN EASY OR NORMAL
IT'S UNRANKABLE

00:03:458 (5) - NC
00:07:782 (6) - NC
00:14:268 (1,2,3) - Blanket needs some improving
00:20:214 (3,4,5,6) - This looks really ugly, please remap this part, due to ugly overlaps
00:22:917 (2,3,4) - Blanket needs some improving
00:29:133 (4,5) - Overlaps quite ugly
00:35:890 (1,2) - Looks really ugly
00:37:512 (3,4) - Improve blanket
00:48:323 (4) - Move to 388:96 (1 grid to the left)
00:49:944 (3,4) - Blanket needs some improving
01:19:404 (6,7) - ^^

[Hard]
Wut, more objects than Insane?
For a hard, the note density is way to high, use 1/4 reverse sliders for longer 1/4 patterns, like 00:54:809 (1,2,3,4,5) - (also applies to triplets)
00:25:079 (4) - NC
00:26:160 (8) - Make it only a circle

Quite a neat diff, but way to overmapped

[Rei's Dying will]

00:10:485 (3) - Move to 00:10:620
00:12:512 (2,3) - Feels overmapped, make them circles (When there are vocals)
00:16:836 (2) - Too high distance with (1), as it's only 1/4 away
00:19:268 (2) - ^^
00:25:620 (2,3) - WTF were you thinking when you did this? It doesn't flow with the music at all
00:36:296 (2,3) - Feels overmapped, make them circles (When there are vocals)
00:38:458 (2,3) - ^^
00:59:404 (5) - Move to 20:200
01:14:539 (4) - Distance with the next note is too high

Good luck!

Lurei

667 posts

Joined March 2014

Lurei 2015-01-25T16:19:05+00:00

Lokovodo wrote:
And this is a mod!~
[Rei's Dying Will]
I don't see any real problems with this diffculty other than i really don't like 01:19:133 (1,2,3,4) - at the end since it feels anti-climatic and boring to play in my opinion. What i would do is...

01:19:404 (2,3) - Crtl + Shift + R than rotate 120* on selection centre or something of the likes to avoid stacking because stacks like that are extremely boring to play. B-but I'm stacking notes to emphatize the beats. ;w;

TAILOW

TAILOW wrote:
[Rei's Dying Will]
It looks that you have used differently DSes. please stay at once No need to always stick to a single DS value on Insane. Variations I use are only when I make a large jump or when I increase value gradually.
00:19:268 (2) - this slider is missunderstood I can't really see the problem with it. SV was already high from the start, so it can't be missunderstood.
00:21:160 (2,3) - that for no rhytm Those follow beats + vocals.
00:36:296 (2,3) - it doesn't work ^
00:52:917 (6) - NC I'm NC'ing the strong beat.
01:04:539 (2,3,4) - almost weren't hear. try clap I applied hitsounds in the most general of ways, and I honestly think it's alright.
01:14:539 (4,1) - this is next missunderstood, and this NC NC is on strong beat, and I honestly think it's okay.
01:16:971 (1) - it was jumped before, why it's hidden now? Because both melody and vocals pause. When that happens and you make a stack after a jump, it has a slight increase in difficulty.
01:21:296 (1) - maybe jump + no hitfinish ^ (also, I think the finish is needed here)

baraatje123

baraatje123 wrote:
From LordRaika's Modding Party

didn't read you requested Hitsounds, I didn't read xD

[Rei's Dying will]

00:10:485 (3) - Move to 00:10:620 I'll keep for now. When I move it, it sounds just very ankward (since I'm skipping a beat of song). I actually wanted to use a slider at that point, but felt it was too risky, since map was just starting.
00:12:512 (2,3) - Feels overmapped, make them circles (When there are vocals) I need more opinions on this... It sounds okay for me, but overmapping is such a subjective concept, actually (when you map lots of beats that are actually following something, of course).
00:16:836 (2) - Too high distance with (1), as it's only 1/4 away Jump is okay. 1/4 sliders are treated as single circles, after all; and song is slow enough to be able to move quickly enough.
00:19:268 (2) - ^^ ^
00:25:620 (2,3) - WTF were you thinking when you did this? It doesn't flow with the music at all Wat. It follows beats + vocals accurately enough IMO.
00:36:296 (2,3) - Feels overmapped, make them circles (When there are vocals) Same as other one.
00:38:458 (2,3) - ^^ ^
00:59:404 (5) - Move to 20:200 Done.
01:14:539 (4) - Distance with the next note is too high It's okay, and this one keeps it's flow while jumping, so no changes.

Thank you for modding, everyone!
As for the 1/4 sliders, I need more opinions on them, but they certainly follow something. And it doesn't seem like this is very hard, since it's perfectly FCable. God of osu!, please give me more acc. ;w;

.osu Update

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320,132,49944,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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140,289,53998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,100,57377,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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137,317,58323,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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20,200,59404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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LordRaika

Elite Mapper

1,438 posts

Joined September 2013

LordRaika 2015-01-25T19:50:24+00:00

Hitsound Mod request from my Modding Queue

osuu~

Here is my HM as request :

Hitsound Mod

[Hitsound]

oh damn, u got lots of mod piles up orz , i'll make this short then
so you wont be lazy to do this hitsounding. anyway dont forget their kudosu...

Here's the fitting kick sound ex : 00:01:296 - , 00:01:566 - , 00:02:106 - , 00:02:647 - 00:03:187 - and so on...
For the drum snare like : 00:01:836 - , 00:02:917 - i have 2 option for you
Fitting but its a bit loud
Fitting and it's a soft type
.
and here's for the custom cymbal

well, i think that's really all since this song is pretty much simpleeeeee~ >w<

GL on hitsounding all of this
GL for rank too ^^

-Hanashi-

216 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

-Hanashi- 2015-01-26T02:03:13+00:00

Woah. I got mod spammed overnight xDD.
Blue means fixed.
Green means fixed, but in my own way.
Red means I think it's fine the way it is.
Bold means extra comments.

Lokovodo's Mod

[Easy]
All around looks good only thing i can comment on is...

01:21:296 (5) - I believe newer players find slider velocity changes difficult, however it fits absolutely just fine with song. However if you were to change the slider into just being a spinner than you would add playability to the many people who all mod easys for rank #1s (by adding extra spinner) and you avoid the problem of slider velocity changes being hard for newer players but you could say the exact same for both spinners, and spinners with a circle and not slider afterwards (because its hard for newer player to time circle after spinner) but this is just my intake and you are totally find bro, your decision just my insight.
Fixed. Instead of a spinner though, I added a big circle slider instead. Also fixed the slider velocity changes.

[Normal]

00:32:647 (3,4) - I don't feel like the wiggle of these sliders is impactful enough to wiggle at all, though it fits fine with the adjacent notes though personally i would just curve them like this Fixed.

01:13:458 (2) - this looks and feels a bit ugly in my opinion, I would personally do something like this Fixed.

01:21:296 (1) - Maybe consider start a new combo here. I don't think it really matters but i would personally do it. Sure, Fixed.

[Hard]
There are a lot of things i like in this difficulty for example the slider at 00:03:187 (5) - and your use of 1/4 also your somewhat "filler" notes like 00:30:214 (5,6,7,1,2) - are positioned in such a way where it looks and feels nice. I can't really give advice on this difficulty because i like it how it is so much. It is the kind of thing i would spend time to Flashlight due to love of mapper kinda like Kyubey and his amazing trigger happy Sankyuu! :33

Goodluck! and btw nice milky holmes avatar! Hercule-chan is cute like ayano! (though i think kokoro-chan wins my heart with milky holmes

) xDD
Thanks!!^^

TAILOW's Mod

[General]
OD=5 I don't get how OD=5 falls in "General," But if you mean the Easy diff, no.
[Easy]
00:55:350 (1) - hidden slider, like for the same rhythmical before? No thanks.
01:21:296 (5) - like said before, do not that slow timmers, then make it no-reverse + NC Sure, Fixed.
[Normal]
HP -1 Sure, it's a pretty slow song so yeah.
00:04:268 (6) - I personally don't think this circle is appreciated for the rhythm. I think it's fine as is.
00:10:755 (2) - make it 1/2 slider than one circle. same thing as before It fits the rhythm more, so fixed.
00:11:566 (3) - +NC No thanks
00:22:377 (1) - no NC It's fine
00:48:593 (1) - add here hitsound Sure
00:50:755 (4) - delete hitsound, then add it here maybe 00:49:944 (3) Ok!
01:20:214 (8) - +NC On it!
[Hard]
HP -2 Sure, but I'll only do -1
00:03:998 (6) - add the hitsound of that kind of sliders On it!
00:10:755 (4,5) - hard to predict I think it's fine
00:23:323 (2,3) - maybe hidden circles, as for this rhythm? No thanks
00:31:025 (1) - no NC Ok!
00:35:350 (1) - no NC Kk, 00:35:890 (5) - NC this Kk
00:46:701 (3) - NC Sure
00:48:593 (1,2,3) - same here Sure
00:54:809 (1) - no NC No thanks, then NC slider as before On it!
01:03:458 (1) - no NC Ok!
01:03:998 (1) - NC for the refrain Ok!
01:05:890 (1,2,3) - again this with NC, just NC there when the finish hitsound is Sure
01:11:296 (1,2,3,4) - not sure it happens before I think it fits the section better, so I'll leave it as is.

baraatje123's Mod

From LordRaika's Modding Party

didn't read you requested Hitsounds, I didn't read xD Well, the more the merrier! xDD

[Easy]

DO NOT CHANGE SLIDERVELOCITY IN EASY OR NORMAL
IT'S UNRANKABLE Fixed! xDD
00:03:458 (3,4) - This blanket is pretty bad, try improving it I actually think it's just fine.
00:14:268 (1,3) - These sliders overlap, but that looks kinda ugly, please change it Fixed!
00:27:241 (1,3) - ^^ Just fine.
00:31:025 (4,1) - You shouldn't stack notes in low diffs On it!
00:31:566 (1,2,3) - Try to improve the blanket Ok!
00:35:350 (4,1) - Don't stack in low diff On it!
00:37:512 (2,3) - Doesn't flow really good.From (1) to (2) you go to top right, but then you suddenly go down, and then again go right.
Try to change that No, sorry!
00:42:377 (3) - Select this slider, and then click on the coordinates top-right, then enter the following

This way, the end of (3) will be the same as the start of (1) Sure! But I changed it to (264, 52) instead.
00:46:701 (1) - WAY to soon after a spinner. Keep at least 4 beats between them (For now, delete the spinner, and keep it this way), only add a note at 00:44:539 The start of the slider is pretty close to the middle, so I think it's fine.

00:52:647 (2) - Distance is to low with the previous note Fixed!

This diff needs quite some work, sorry A mod is a mod!

[Normal]
Cs to 3,5 Sure!
Hp to 4 Sure!
DO NOT CHANGE SLIDERVELOCITY IN EASY OR NORMAL
IT'S UNRANKABLE Fixed! xDD

00:03:458 (5) - NC Okkk!
00:07:782 (6) - NC Okkkk!
00:14:268 (1,2,3) - Blanket needs some improving Fixed!
00:20:214 (3,4,5,6) - This looks really ugly, please remap this part, due to ugly overlaps Suurreee!
00:22:917 (2,3,4) - Blanket needs some improving Fixed!
00:29:133 (4,5) - Overlaps quite ugly Fixed!
00:35:890 (1,2) - Looks really ugly Sure!
00:37:512 (3,4) - Improve blanket I think it's fine.
00:48:323 (4) - Move to 388:96 (1 grid to the left) Sure! But moved to (392, 108) instead.
00:49:944 (3,4) - Blanket needs some improving It's fine!
01:19:404 (6,7) - ^^ It's fine!

[Hard]
Wut, more objects than Insane? I try my best to lower it!
For a hard, the note density is way to high, use 1/4 reverse sliders for longer 1/4 patterns, like 00:54:809 (1,2,3,4,5) - (also applies to triplets) I fixed it where it fits!
00:25:079 (4) - NC Sure!
00:26:160 (8) - Make it only a circle No thanks.

Quite a neat diff, but way to overmapped

Good luck! Thank you! ^^

Thanks to everyone that modded!
Man, that was very tiring.
~~I'll do hitsounding another time.~~
ALRIGHT! DONE WITH HITSOUNDS!! RAKE IN ZE MODDUU xDD

Domi200

183 posts

Joined November 2013

Domi200 2015-01-31T13:53:27+00:00

Hey here is my mod (◕‿◕✿)

[General]

Timing etc seems fine √

[Easy]

Good job nothing to add √

[Normal]

00:01:296 (1,2) - Might be personal preference but I dislike overlapping sliders in easier difficulties
00:25:890 (8,9) - I would choose a different pattern for a Normal here
00:35:890 (1,2) - Maybe use the same pattern as here 00:29:404 (6,7) - Looked better that way (Wont point out the overlapping ^^)
00:37:512 (3,4) -
Different suggestion
01:20:214 (1,2) - As mentioned just personal preference

[Hard]

00:09:944 (2,3) - The sliderchange on the blue tick feels strange while playing - Could just be me :p
00:25:079 (1) - and ongoing - This part feels a bit squished. Maybe a bigger DS would help.
Generally some cosmetiques about overlapping but yea personal preference again
Overall its nice

[Rei's Dying Will]

00:34:809 (4,5,6) - This feels overmapped, slider would be better choice here imo
Rest is fine

Could find a lot sorry ^^

Good luck with your map

-Hanashi-

216 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

-Hanashi- 2015-01-31T18:49:38+00:00

Blue means fixed.
Green means fixed, but in my own way.
Red means I think it's fine the way it is.
Bold means extra comments.

Domi200's Mod

Hey here is my mod (◕‿◕✿)

[General]

Timing etc seems fine √ Thank you! ^^

[Easy]

Good job nothing to add √Thanks!!

[Normal]

00:01:296 (1,2) - Might be personal preference but I dislike overlapping sliders in easier difficulties Sorry, I'm not fixing this.
00:25:890 (8,9) - I would choose a different pattern for a Normal here Sure!! I was kinda looking for somebody to say something about it. ^^
00:35:890 (1,2) - Maybe use the same pattern as here 00:29:404 (6,7) - Looked better that way (Wont point out the overlapping ^^)Fixed, but not exactly like that.
00:37:512 (3,4) - Fixed! [box=Different suggestion]
01:20:214 (1,2) - As mentioned just personal preference No thanks.

[Hard]

00:09:944 (2,3) - The sliderchange on the blue tick feels strange while playing - Could just be me :p It's fine.
00:25:079 (1) - and ongoing - This part feels a bit squished. Maybe a bigger DS would help. I think it's just fine.
Generally some cosmetiques about overlapping but yea personal preference again
Overall its nice Thanks!!

Could find a lot sorry ^^

Good luck with your map

Thanks for modding!! ^^

Nathan

Beatmap Nominator

2,144 posts

Joined August 2014

Nathan 2015-01-31T21:33:02+00:00

[Normal]

01:25:620 (1) - Having a spinner start with a finish feels really awkward, make it a start a tick later and add a circle with the finish right before

[Hard]

00:04:539 - Could use a note here, it feels inconsistent with parts like 00:30:214 (5,6,7,8,9)
01:23:728 (2) - NC with rhythm change?
01:25:620 (1) - Same thing mentioned in Normal

[Rei's Dying Will]

01:09:133 (2,3,4,5) - Spacing inconsistency?
01:11:566 (3,4,5) - ^
01:25:620 (1) - Same thing mentioned in Normal

All I found good luck with your map~

-Hanashi-

216 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

-Hanashi- 2015-02-01T03:32:06+00:00

Blue means fixed.
Green means fixed, but in my own way.
Red means I think it's fine the way it is.
Bold means extra comments.

sukiNathan's mod

[Normal]

01:25:620 (1) - Having a spinner start with a finish feels really awkward, make it a start a tick later and add a circle with the finish right before Fixed!

[Hard]

00:04:539 - Could use a note here, it feels inconsistent with parts like 00:30:214 (5,6,7,8,9) Sure!
01:23:728 (2) - NC with rhythm change? Sure!
01:25:620 (1) - Same thing mentioned in Normal Fixed!

All I found good luck with your map~

Thanks for modding Nathan!! ^^
Yes!! Halfway to +12!!

kamikin_old

286 posts

Joined June 2014

kamikin_old 2015-02-02T16:54:05+00:00

General

Your BG is a bit meh, try another one (e.g. http://images5.fanpop.com/image/photos/24800000/KHR-Wallpapers-katekyo-hitman-reborn-24814882-1680-1050.jpg)
Turn off Letterbox during Breaks in the Setup tab - design (as there are no breaks)

Easy

Your SV is quite high, the normal SV for an Easy is 0.8 so I would definitely consider changing this
The difficulty settings are quite high for a calm song, I would use HP 3.5, AR 3 and OD 3.5
00:03:458 (3) - Imperfect blanket, use the hitcircles approach circle to make a good blanket (e.g. http://puu.sh/fnomz/89804521b6.jpg)
00:05:620 (1) - This is a uneven slider shape, try and use a different one as this one looks a bit off
00:07:782 (3) - ^
00:18:593 (1) - Inelegant slider shape
00:20:755 (3) - they look a bit weird (the curved part should be bigger or equal to the size of the straight part)
00:22:917 (1) - Awkward slider shape
00:25:079 (3) - ^
00:27:241 (1,3) - Bigger curved section needed
00:31:566 (1) - imperfect stack
00:31:566 (1,3) - use these to blanket 2 to make a nicer and cleaner pattern
00:44:539 (1) - in an Easy you need recovery time after spinners (which for your song would be about 3 white ticks on easy and 1 and 1/2 on normal)
00:51:025 (1) - use the first part of this slider to blanket 4
01:03:998 (1) - There is an ugly sharp point in this slider http://puu.sh/fnpmB/d72601b156.jpg
01:06:160 (3) - ^
01:12:647 (1) - Imperfect blanket on 1's tail
01:16:971 (1) - Awkward slider shape
01:19:133 (3) - ^

Normal

HP rate should be 5 imo
00:06:431 (3) - this wave could be made better (e.g. http://puu.sh/fnpZx/1e0c487022.jpg)
00:14:268 (1,3) - imperfect blanket
00:16:431 (5) - Wave could be made better
00:23:998 (5) - Strange slider shape
00:33:728 (6) - Wave could be made better
00:44:268 (1) - More recovery time needed
00:52:917 (4) - curve this for a consistent pattern
01:02:917 (8,9) - Curve these for consistency
01:20:214 (1) - the start of this could blanket 7 better
01:21:296 (2) - the end of this slider is slightly overlapping the start
01:25:890 (1) - This spinner doesn't end on the same place as Easy

Hard

HP drain is better at 6
00:02:106 (3) - imperfect blanket
00:04:539 (1) - No NC here but NC on 00:05:620 (5) - as it fits the music better
00:07:512 (1,1) - rmeove NC and add on 00:09:944 (2) -
00:26:971 (1,2,3) - this pattern is kinda of meh
00:30:214 (5,6,7,8,9) - This may cause inaccurate players to break their combo quite easily, maybe convert some to sliders?
00:40:214 (1,2,4) - Lots of overlaps
00:44:133 (1) - A bit more recovery time needed
00:46:701 (1) - Why NC?
00:53:187 (2,4) - Overlap
00:57:512 (2) - You normally curve this
01:04:809 (4) - Wave could be improved
01:06:160 (1) - ^
01:15:350 (3,4) - Awkward flow as you go to the beginning of 4 then backwards

Good luck! I hope I helped!

Lurei

667 posts

Joined March 2014

Lurei 2015-02-02T17:03:00+00:00

Oh, I forgot I had to apply mods here!

Domi200 wrote:
[Rei's Dying Will]
00:34:809 (4,5,6) - This feels overmapped, slider would be better choice here imo Nope. A stream definitively fits here.
Rest is fine Good!

sukiNathan wrote:
[Rei's Dying Will]
01:09:133 (2,3,4,5) - Spacing inconsistency? I know. The idea here is to gradually increase Distance Snap.
01:11:566 (3,4,5) - ^ ^
01:25:620 (1) - Same thing mentioned in Normal Done.

Thanks for modding, through I only applied very few things.

.osu Update!

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-Hanashi-

216 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

-Hanashi- 2015-02-03T02:23:18+00:00

^ Sorry, Rei!! I'll try to find more people to mod your map!! Also, thanks for the star!!

Blue means fixed.
Green means fixed, but in my own way.
Red means I think it's fine the way it is.
Bold means extra comments.

General

Your BG is a bit meh, try another one (e.g. http://images5.fanpop.com/image/photos/24800000/KHR-Wallpapers-katekyo-hitman-reborn-24814882-1680-1050.jpg) Well, it's a pretty slow ending song in the Daily Life Arc, so I think my BG of them having fun together is ok.
Turn off Letterbox during Breaks in the Setup tab - design (as there are no breaks) Fixed.

Easy

Your SV is quite high, the normal SV for an Easy is 0.8 so I would definitely consider changing this Well, it's a pretty slow song, so I think it would pass.
The difficulty settings are quite high for a calm song, I would use HP 3.5, AR 3 and OD 3.5 Agreed, fixed.
00:03:458 (3) - Imperfect blanket, use the hitcircles approach circle to make a good blanket (e.g. http://puu.sh/fnomz/89804521b6.jpg) Fixed.
00:05:620 (1) - This is a uneven slider shape, try and use a different one as this one looks a bit off Fixed.
00:07:782 (3) - ^^
00:18:593 (1) - Inelegant slider shape Well, I tried to make it so that the slider tick would be after the curved part so it feels better. So, no.
00:20:755 (3) - they look a bit weird (the curved part should be bigger or equal to the size of the straight part) ^
00:22:917 (1) - Awkward slider shape Fixed so that it flows better.
00:25:079 (3) - ^^
00:27:241 (1,3) - Bigger curved section needed No, as I said earlier.
00:31:566 (1) - imperfect stack Fixed.
00:31:566 (1,3) - use these to blanket 2 to make a nicer and cleaner pattern Just fixed the blanket.
00:44:539 (1) - in an Easy you need recovery time after spinners (which for your song would be about 3 white ticks on easy and 1 and 1/2 on normal) Since the ticks are pretty far apart in this map and the slider start is pretty close to the center, I think it could slide.
00:51:025 (1) - use the first part of this slider to blanket 4 Fixed.
01:03:998 (1) - There is an ugly sharp point in this slider http://puu.sh/fnpmB/d72601b156.jpg It's fine.
01:06:160 (3) - ^^
01:12:647 (1) - Imperfect blanket on 1's tail Fixed.
01:16:971 (1) - Awkward slider shape It's fine.
01:19:133 (3) - ^^

Normal

HP rate should be 5 imo Sure, since you seem to be pretty good in these kind of things.

00:06:431 (3) - this wave could be made better (e.g. http://puu.sh/fnpZx/1e0c487022.jpg) Fixed.
00:14:268 (1,3) - imperfect blanket Fixed.
00:16:431 (5) - Wave could be made better Fixed.
00:23:998 (5) - Strange slider shape Fixed.
00:33:728 (6) - Wave could be made better Fixed.
00:44:268 (1) - More recovery time needed As said in before, but just a little further cuz it is a harder difficulty.
00:52:917 (4) - curve this for a consistent pattern Sure, fixed.
01:02:917 (8,9) - Curve these for consistency Sure, fixed.
01:20:214 (1) - the start of this could blanket 7 better Fixed.
01:21:296 (2) - the end of this slider is slightly overlapping the start Fixed.
01:25:890 (1) - This spinner doesn't end on the same place as Easy Fixed.

Hard

HP drain is better at 6 Sure
00:02:106 (3) - imperfect blanket Fine.
00:04:539 (1) - No NC here but NC on 00:05:620 (5) - as it fits the music better Fix.
00:07:512 (1,1) - rmeove NC and add on 00:09:944 (2) - Fix.
00:26:971 (1,2,3) - this pattern is kinda of meh Then what do you want me to do with it? No.
00:30:214 (5,6,7,8,9) - This may cause inaccurate players to break their combo quite easily, maybe convert some to sliders? I think it's just fine. The 4 or 5+ people above didn't mind, and I even got a compliment for it.
00:40:214 (1,2,4) - Lots of overlaps Fixed, was waiting for someone to point that out.
00:44:133 (1) - A bit more recovery time needed It's a hard diff so it's just fine.
00:46:701 (1) - Why NC? Fixed.
00:53:187 (2,4) - Overlap Fix.
00:57:512 (2) - You normally curve this Fix.
01:04:809 (4) - Wave could be improved Fix.
01:06:160 (1) - ^^
01:15:350 (3,4) - Awkward flow as you go to the beginning of 4 then backwards Fixed.

Good luck! I hope I helped!

Thanks for the mod, kamikin!!

Factorial

691 posts

Joined August 2013

Factorial 2015-02-04T01:42:20+00:00

From NLOMQ, as you requested:
[General]

Upscale image to 1366x768 or find an alternative image.
You can use silent sliderslide here.

[Easy]

00:44:539 (1) - Spinner too short and there must be 3 beats recovery time for Easy. Replace with this one.
SPOILER

[Normal]

00:35:890 (1,2) - Not distance snapped. You may reconstruct this.
01:20:214 (1,2) - ^ You can still do that by reducing 2 to 01:22:917 and adding note at 01:23:458
00:44:268 (1) - There must be 2 beats recovery time for Normal. Replace with this one.
SPOILER
01:25:620 (6) - Remove note and start spinner here.

Edit: You don't need to apply all of it.

Last edited by Factorial 2015-02-04T03:08:43+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Lurei

667 posts

Joined March 2014

Lurei 2015-02-04T01:46:00+00:00

Neil Leo wrote:
00:44:539 (1) - Spinner too short and there must be 3 beats recovery time for Easy. Replace with this one.
SPOILER

You're mistaken here, my friend. The gap for recovery time is of a measure (or 4 beats) of recovery time. But well, it's a Hanashi's diff, so he chooses what to do.

-Hanashi-

216 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

-Hanashi- 2015-02-04T02:33:13+00:00

I really don't know why I didn't think of a reverse slider way earlier. Thanks Leo!! Will soon make a full reply and apply it later.
EDIT: Will soon see if it fits or not.

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,642 posts

Joined May 2013

Monstrata 2015-02-05T23:00:09+00:00

M4M as we agreed.

Oh. We meet again, LixRei xD. Looks like I'm modding a lot of your maps today ;o.

[Rei's Dying Will]

00:01:296 (1,2,3) - 2 is over mapped imo...
00:09:944 (1,2,3,4,5) - I feel like you could have followed the vocals a bit better here.
00:25:890 (3) - Ctrl+G better flow.
00:42:917 - This is a particularly strong beat. Please map with a circle.
00:59:674 (1,2) - No blanket here?
01:15:350 (2,6,1) - Okay the other slightly-imperfect stacks on the map are okay because they are your style, but why here? Just stack imo...
01:16:161 (5,6,1) - I should also add, the spacing here keeps shortening... From the star pattern right before, to 5, 6, which are only pentagonal, to 6, 1, which are a whole 1/1 beat apart. You could carry on the star pattern by putting 6, where 01:14:809 (1) - ended.

[Hard]

00:02:106 (3,5) - Stack perfectly.
00:04:539 (7,8,9,10) - Evenly space.
00:39:674 (8,1) - Separated by a full tick... space a bit farther apart?
00:48:863 (2,3) - Check blanket.
00:51:025 (1,2) - Bad flow. Ctrl H 1.
00:53:187 (2,3,4) - This doesn't flow well either... and is unnecessarily difficult to read with the overlap of 4.
01:10:214 (6,7) - Shouldn't overlap like this...
01:11:296 (1,2,1) - Poor flow. Rearrange the pattern please, maybe Ctrl + G 01:11:296 (1) - for better flow into 2, but still have to work on getting 2, to flow back to 01:12:377 (1) -
01:18:458 (2,4) - Check blanket.

[Normal]

00:35:890 (1,2) - Poor flow into overlap...
01:05:890 (4) - 01:06:160 - This is a strong note. Please map this to something besides slider-end.
01:19:674 (7,1,2) - Uneven spacing. Actually, i see this quite a bit on your map... You might want to go through and make sure all the spacing is uniform, even if they satisfy AIMod

Lurei

667 posts

Joined March 2014

Lurei 2015-02-06T03:15:58+00:00

monstrata wrote:
M4M as we agreed.

Oh. We meet again, LixRei xD. Looks like I'm modding a lot of your maps today ;o. Mod more! (ok no xD I won't force you)

[Rei's Dying Will]

00:01:296 (1,2,3) - 2 is over mapped imo... But there's a beat there
00:09:944 (1,2,3,4,5) - I feel like you could have followed the vocals a bit better here. Yeah, but it would feel very overmapped if I did that. I agree with you here, but I don't want to make lots of beats to follow everything.
00:25:890 (3) - Ctrl+G better flow. Using inverted flow.
00:42:917 - This is a particularly strong beat. Please map with a circle. I would love to do it, but I haven't used extended sliders in this map and I don't want to do it. Curiously, extended sliders doesn't seem to fit with this song.
00:59:674 (1,2) - No blanket here? Okay, fixed.
01:15:350 (2,6,1) - Okay the other slightly-imperfect stacks on the map are okay because they are your style, but why here? Just stack imo... Most imperfect stacks are just mere manual stacks or modifications to DS values. But you're right, not needed here. Fixed.
01:16:161 (5,6,1) - I should also add, the spacing here keeps shortening... From the star pattern right before, to 5, 6, which are only pentagonal, to 6, 1, which are a whole 1/1 beat apart. You could carry on the star pattern by putting 6, where 01:14:809 (1) - ended. The star pattern is actually only composed by 01:14:809 (1,2,3,4,5) - and the spacing was reduced on 01:16:161 (5,6,1) - since song stops for a sec. It's a way to create "suspense" and make players lose their focus (a form of anti-jump, I guess? Idrk).

Thank you again! o/

.osu code Update!

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 46431
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
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GridSize: 4
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TitleUnicode:道標
Artist:Keita Tachibana
ArtistUnicode:橘慶太
Creator:-Hanashi-
Version:Rei's Dying Will
Source:家庭教師ヒットマンリボーン!
Tags:anime japanese manga katekyo hitman reborn tv size version LixRei
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Noffy

Nomination Assessment Team

1,656 posts

Joined April 2012

Noffy 2015-02-06T05:05:16+00:00

Hello there with a mod you requested from the Banana Queue!
It's kinda on the short side but hopefully still helpful. I hope q.q

[Easy]
While for the first few times it is done, it seems pretty cool to have a slider, a circle, then the same slider as be symmetrical to or a rotated copy of the first slider. After the first few it can start making the map feel a bit repetitive though. Maybe consider sprucing it up by mixing your variety of slider shapes throughout the difficulty?

00:01:296 (1) - I think moving this up to x:61 y:73 will give it more of that rotated symmetrical feel you seem to be going for.
00:09:944 (1,2,3) - This seems to have a lot of unnecessary back and forth motion for a calm part of a calm song in an easy difficulty. Maybe move 00:11:566 (2) - to x:492 y:189 and 00:12:106 (3) - to x:465 y:295 so that it'll be a more linear motion and still distance snapped? :3
00:14:268 (1,2,3) - This blanketing is, er, hm. Use the approach circle of (2) and match up the slider borders to it to improve it or use the points recommended in the box below
Blanket ;w;?
The first point means the head of the slider o/
00:14:268 (1) - First point to x:141 y:204 , second point to x:94 y:129 and the third point to x:147 y:16
00:16:431 (3) - First point to x:265 y:20, second point to x:313 y:119 and the third point to x:259 y:208
00:18:052 (4) - move to x:192 y:291 so that the distance snap after changing (1) and (3) around is unharmed.
00:46:701 (1,2) - These two notes are rather close together.
00:51:025 (1,2) – These two notes are rather too far from eachother.
01:14:809 (3,4) - These two notes are a bit close together.

[Normal]

You might wanna have Ncs be the same as the beginning where you had one every big white tick, because having combos of 7+ when it can be avoided is a bit high for a normal since it affects health drain.

00:35:890 (1,2) - While this looks nice, it shouldn't be done if it will cause a large distance gap in a normal especially when this part isn't particularly different from the rest of the song. How about doing it like this instead, and it'll be more like 00:29:404 (6,7) - as well.
00:57:782 (6,7) - These notes felt a bit funny as circles when playing, maybe change them to a slider instead?

[Hard]

00:18:052 (6) – The short rest following this feels pretty empty, maybe consider making this a ½ slider instead of a lone hitcircle?

[Rei's Dying Will]

00:08:323 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Maybe this kind of pattern instead? It allows for the player to flow into it better after following the line of 00:07:782 (1,2) - and forms like two triangles like 00:13:187 (4,5,6) - in order with one rotated to fit in the spaces of the other one.

Lurei

667 posts

Joined March 2014

Lurei 2015-02-06T21:56:27+00:00

@dorothy3242: Oh, good idea! Will do that. Thanks for suggestion!

Please update as soon as possible! o/

.osu Update!

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 46431
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.2

[Metadata]
Title:Michishirube
TitleUnicode:道標
Artist:Keita Tachibana
ArtistUnicode:橘慶太
Creator:-Hanashi-
Version:Rei's Dying Will
Source:家庭教師ヒットマンリボーン!
Tags:anime japanese manga katekyo hitman reborn tv size version LixRei
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BeatmapSetID:261633

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CircleSize:4.3
OverallDifficulty:7.5
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SliderTickRate:1

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-Hanashi-

216 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

-Hanashi- 2015-02-07T06:23:15+00:00

No more sleazy bag!! Let's get this started!!

Blue means fixed.
Green means fixed, but in my own way.
Red means I think it's fine the way it is.
Bold means extra comments.

Neil Leo's Mod

From NLOMQ, as you requested:
[General]

Upscale image to 1366x768 or find an alternative image. Will try to find something else or find someone to improve it.
You can use silent sliderslide here. I actually think the sliderslide fits pretty well.

[Easy]

00:44:539 (1) - Spinner too short and there must be 3 beats recovery time for Easy. Replace with this one. Fixed but not exactly that way.

[Normal]

00:35:890 (1,2) - Not distance snapped. You may reconstruct this. Fix.
01:20:214 (1,2) - ^ You can still do that by reducing 2 to 01:22:917 and adding note at 01:23:458 No thanks.
00:44:268 (1) - There must be 2 beats recovery time for Normal. Replace with this one. Fix.
01:25:620 (6) - Remove note and start spinner here. No thanks. Will see if any other people say anything about it.

Edit: You don't need to apply all of it.

monstrata's Mod

M4M as we agreed.

Oh. We meet again, LixRei xD. Looks like I'm modding a lot of your maps today ;o. Hmm, interesting.

[Hard]

00:02:106 (3,5) - Stack perfectly. Fix.
00:04:539 (7,8,9,10) - Evenly space. Fix.
00:39:674 (8,1) - Separated by a full tick... space a bit farther apart? Placed a circle there.
00:48:863 (2,3) - Check blanket. Fix.
00:51:025 (1,2) - Bad flow. Ctrl H 1. Fix.
00:53:187 (2,3,4) - This doesn't flow well either... and is unnecessarily difficult to read with the overlap of 4. Fix.
01:10:214 (6,7) - Shouldn't overlap like this... It's fine.
01:11:296 (1,2,1) - Poor flow. Rearrange the pattern please, maybe Ctrl + G 01:11:296 (1) - for better flow into 2, but still have to work on getting 2, to flow back to 01:12:377 (1) - Fix.
01:18:458 (2,4) - Check blanket. Fix.

[Normal]

00:35:890 (1,2) - Poor flow into overlap... Fix.
01:05:890 (4) - 01:06:160 - This is a strong note. Please map this to something besides slider-end. No thanks.
01:19:674 (7,1,2) - Uneven spacing. Actually, i see this quite a bit on your map... You might want to go through and make sure all the spacing is uniform, even if they satisfy AIMod Fixed what I thought was awkward.

dorothy3242's Mod

Hello there with a mod you requested from the Banana Queue!
It's kinda on the short side but hopefully still helpful. I hope q.q It's fine! I'm open for any kind of help.

[Easy]
While for the first few times it is done, it seems pretty cool to have a slider, a circle, then the same slider as be symmetrical to or a rotated copy of the first slider. After the first few it can start making the map feel a bit repetitive though. Maybe consider sprucing it up by mixing your variety of slider shapes throughout the difficulty? Tried my best to spruce up the sliders.

00:01:296 (1) - I think moving this up to x:61 y:73 will give it more of that rotated symmetrical feel you seem to be going for. Fix.
00:09:944 (1,2,3) - This seems to have a lot of unnecessary back and forth motion for a calm part of a calm song in an easy difficulty. Maybe move 00:11:566 (2) - to x:492 y:189 and 00:12:106 (3) - to x:465 y:295 so that it'll be a more linear motion and still distance snapped? :3 Sure.
00:14:268 (1,2,3) - This blanketing is, er, hm. Use the approach circle of (2) and match up the slider borders to it to improve it or use the points recommended below: Fix!!
The first point means the head of the slider o/
00:14:268 (1) - First point to x:141 y:204 , second point to x:94 y:129 and the third point to x:147 y:16
00:16:431 (3) - First point to x:265 y:20, second point to x:313 y:119 and the third point to x:259 y:208
00:18:052 (4) - move to x:192 y:291 so that the distance snap after changing (1) and (3) around is unharmed.
00:46:701 (1,2) - These two notes are rather close together. Fix.
00:51:025 (1,2) – These two notes are rather too far from each other. Fix.
01:14:809 (3,4) - These two notes are a bit close together. Fix.

[Normal]

You might wanna have Ncs be the same as the beginning where you had one every big white tick, because having combos of 7+ when it can be avoided is a bit high for a normal since it affects health drain. Fix.

00:35:890 (1,2) - While this looks nice, it shouldn't be done if it will cause a large distance gap in a normal especially when this part isn't particularly different from the rest of the song. How about doing it like this instead, and it'll be more like 00:29:404 (6,7) - as well. Fix.
00:57:782 (6,7) - These notes felt a bit funny as circles when playing, maybe change them to a slider instead? It's fine.

[Hard]

00:18:052 (6) – The short rest following this feels pretty empty, maybe consider making this a ½ slider instead of a lone hitcircle? Fix.

Thanks for modding, everyone!!

-Nya-

2,133 posts

Joined December 2011

-Nya- 2015-02-07T10:13:34+00:00

Sorry for the delay >.< Please leave me a vote in my queue after applying my mod.
So let's get started~

Note: Everything in bold is highly suggested.
Everything in red is unrankable.

General:

I don’t really like your background image. Try something like this instead:
http://puu.sh/fAnEN/71bb9bb774.jpg
Don’t add “anime” into your tags, since it will be added to your genre once your map gets ranked.
Since the word “tv” is too short, rather use “tv_size” in your tags.
Use a background image that’s 1366X768. The BG in my first suggestion has the right resolution. I also managed to fix your current BG.
http://puu.sh/fAo7f/692174e913.jpg
Add this soundfile into your song’s folder to get rid of that annoying sliderslide sound.
http://puu.sh/fAojH/e7a2be9930.wav

Easy:

00:05:079 (4) –Move this circle a bit upwards, somewhere here: X:448 Y:196 to improve the blanket with 00:03:458 (3) –and to fix the distance spacing. If you do this, please remember to move the next notes so the spacing is still consistent.
00:05:620 (1) –Not a nice shape at all. Try something like this instead:
Picture
00:07:782 (3) –Try to follow the same suggestion as above.
00:09:404 (4) –Not the best placement for flow purposes. Remember that in Easy diffs especially, you should always try to maintain a nice flow, which means that you should try to avoid placing notes behind the tail of a slider like you did here: 00:07:782 (3,4) – Maybe try something like this instead:
Picture
00:29:404 (3,1) –Not a good idea at all. Overlaps like these look messy and can cause confusion for newbies. Maybe try this instead:
Picture
00:33:187 (2,4) –Ugly overlap. Please try to avoid overlaps like these. So try something like this:
Picture
00:46:160 (6) –Stack this on top of 00:43:998 (4) –properly please. It’s possible.
01:12:647 (1,2) –Fix this blanket please. Right now, it looks pretty bad. Use two controlpoints when making this blanket.
Picture
01:12:647 (1,3) –If you followed my above suggestion, make sure those two sliders look similar. Do that by using the copy and paste option.

I guess your slidershapes can do with a bit more improving. Visit this page: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/37194

Normal:

00:04:809 (3,1) –Make these two sliders look symmetrical. So do this:
Picture
Copy and paste 00:04:809 (3) –and then Ctrl+H and then Ctrl+G.
00:26:971 (1) –Remove new combo here and add new combo here: 00:27:241 (2) –since the emphasized beat is here: 00:27:241 (2) – You also did your combos like my suggestion here: 00:31:296 (4,1) -
00:32:647 (3,4) –Make a double blanket here?
Picture
00:47:512 (2,3) –Improve this blanket please.
00:48:323 (4,2) –Even though it’s a teeny overlap, it’s still noticable. So rather make the slider straight. Like this:
Picture
00:55:350 (3) –Add new combo here please. The finish sound clearly suggests it.
01:03:458 (5,1) –Improve this blanket please. Try to avoid 01:03:458 (5) –lightly touching 01:03:998 (1) – since it looks ugly.
01:13:458 (2) –Do this instead? It looks much nicer and tidier in my opinion.
Picture
Copy and paste 01:12:647 (1) –then Ctrl+H and then Ctrl+G.
01:16:431 (7,2,3) –I’m not a fan of this overlap at all. You should try to avoid it by placing the notes away from 01:16:431 (7) – Maybe try this rhythm to avoid that overlap:
Picture
01:25:890 (1) –Silence this spinner’s end please, like you did in the Easy diff.

Hard:

00:03:187 (5) –I’d say add new combo here. The current combo feels too long in my opinion.
00:07:782 (7) –Add new combo here as well. Same reason as above.
00:07:782 (7) –Add a soft-hitfinish on the head of this slider please. It works better than the clap in my opinion.
00:53:728 (3) –Try this instead:
Picture
Copy and paste 00:53:187 (2) –then Ctrl+H and then Ctrl+G.
01:11:836 (2) –Try this:
Picture
Copy and paste 01:11:296 (1) –then Ctrl+J

Overall your rhythms, patterns and placement of notes still require a lot of work in this diff in my opinion. Try to get modders that can help you with this. This diff has a lot of potential, but it still needs more work till it will be ready.

Looking at the entire mapset, your hitsounding can still improve a lot. Try asking a hitsound modder, like LordRaika to help you with this.

Good Luck on getting this map ranked~!

Winnie

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Joined November 2013

Winnie 2015-02-07T16:48:57+00:00

[Easy]

First off I want to say that there isn't that much hitsounding in this. The 1/4 notes doesn't have a distinct clap sound making them bland. What will do the charm would be implementing a slider-tick in there so it brings out the emphasis of the drums in each of those locations.
00:01:296 (1,3) - Try to make more symmetrical with copy paste and ctrl+h
00:05:079 (4) - Use Distance Snap
00:09:944 (1) - Same here
00:31:025 (4,1) - This is a little too difficult for beginners to read, I suggest changing (1) in a different location
00:33:728 (3) - Distance Snap
00:35:350 (4) - Kinda messed up so try hard to find a way to stack that

[Normal]

00:16:160 (4) - Distance Snap
00:19:404 (2) - Same
00:32:377 (2) - ^
01:08:323 (1) - ^
01:19:674 (4) - ^

TBH most of the others seems fine so I believe it's ok for now

-Hanashi-

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Topic Starter

-Hanashi- 2015-02-08T02:19:33+00:00

Blue means fixed.
Green means fixed, but in my own way.
Purple means I think it's fine as is.
Pink means extra comments.

-Nya-'s Mod

Sorry for the delay >.< Please leave me a vote in my queue after applying my mod. It's fine! And I will!

So let's get started~

Note: Everything in bold is highly suggested.
Everything in red is unrankable.

General:

I don’t really like your background image. Try something like this instead: I just fixed my BG.
http://puu.sh/fAnEN/71bb9bb774.jpg
Don’t add “anime” into your tags, since it will be added to your genre once your map gets ranked. Fixed.
Since the word “tv” is too short, rather use “tv_size” in your tags. Fix.
Use a background image that’s 1366X768. The BG in my first suggestion has the right resolution. I also managed to fix your current BG.
http://puu.sh/fAo7f/692174e913.jpg Ok!!
Add this soundfile into your song’s folder to get rid of that annoying sliderslide sound. Sure!!
http://puu.sh/fAojH/e7a2be9930.wav

Easy:

00:05:079 (4) –Move this circle a bit upwards, somewhere here: X:448 Y:196 to improve the blanket with 00:03:458 (3) –and to fix the distance spacing. If you do this, please remember to move the next notes so the spacing is still consistent. Fixed.
00:05:620 (1) –Not a nice shape at all. Try something like this instead: Fix.
00:07:782 (3) –Try to follow the same suggestion as above. ^^^
00:09:404 (4) –Not the best placement for flow purposes. Remember that in Easy diffs especially, you should always try to maintain a nice flow, which means that you should try to avoid placing notes behind the tail of a slider like you did here: 00:07:782 (3,4) – Maybe try something like this instead: Fixed.
00:29:404 (3,1) –[b]Not a good idea at all. Overlaps like these look messy and can cause confusion for newbies. Maybe try this instead: Fixed.
00:33:187 (2,4) –Ugly overlap. Please try to avoid overlaps like these. So try something like this: Fixed.
00:46:160 (6) –Stack this on top of 00:43:998 (4) –properly please. It’s possible. Fixed.
01:12:647 (1,2) –Fix this blanket please. Right now, it looks pretty bad. Use two controlpoints when making this blanket. Fix.
01:12:647 (1,3) –If you followed my above suggestion, make sure those two sliders look similar. Do that by using the copy and paste option. ^^

I guess your slidershapes can do with a bit more improving. Visit this page: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/37194

Normal:

00:04:809 (3,1) –Make these two sliders look symmetrical. So do this: No thanks

Copy and paste 00:04:809 (3) –and then Ctrl+H and then Ctrl+G.
00:26:971 (1) –Remove new combo here and add new combo here: 00:27:241 (2) –since the emphasized beat is here: 00:27:241 (2) – You also did your combos like my suggestion here: 00:31:296 (4,1) -
00:32:647 (3,4) –Make a double blanket here? Fix.
00:47:512 (2,3) –Improve this blanket please. Fix.
00:48:323 (4,2) –Even though it’s a teeny overlap, it’s still noticable. So rather make the slider straight. Like this:
00:55:350 (3) –Add new combo here please. The finish sound clearly suggests it. Fix.
01:03:458 (5,1) –Improve this blanket please. Try to avoid 01:03:458 (5) –lightly touching 01:03:998 (1) – since it looks ugly. Fix.
01:13:458 (2) –Do this instead? It looks much nicer and tidier in my opinion. Fix.

Copy and paste 01:12:647 (1) –then Ctrl+H and then Ctrl+G. fix.
01:16:431 (7,2,3) –I’m not a fan of this overlap at all. You should try to avoid it by placing the notes away from 01:16:431 (7) – Maybe try this rhythm to avoid that overlap: No thx.
01:25:890 (1) –Silence this spinner’s end please, like you did in the Easy diff.

Fix.

Hard:

00:03:187 (5) –I’d say add new combo here. The current combo feels too long in my opinion. Fix.
00:07:782 (7) –Add new combo here as well. Same reason as above. fix.
00:07:782 (7) –Add a soft-hitfinish on the head of this slider please. It works better than the clap in my opinion. fix.
00:53:728 (3) –Try this instead: fix.

Copy and paste 00:53:187 (2) –then Ctrl+H and then Ctrl+G. fix.
01:11:836 (2) –Try this: fix.

Copy and paste 01:11:296 (1) –then Ctrl+J

Overall your rhythms, patterns and placement of notes still require a lot of work in this diff in my opinion. Try to get modders that can help you with this. This diff has a lot of potential, but it still needs more work till it will be ready.

Looking at the entire mapset, your hitsounding can still improve a lot. Try asking a hitsound modder, like LordRaika to help you with this.

Good Luck on getting this map ranked~!

Thanks for the mod, -Nya-!! Will soon update this to include Kocari's mod.~~

Last edited by -Hanashi- 2015-02-14T12:30:14+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

RuberusuScarlet

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RuberusuScarlet 2015-02-08T19:28:13+00:00

hi ~

metadate check request from my queue

Artist : ok
Romanised Artist : ( ! ) Keita Tachibana → Tachibana Keita
Title : 道標 → 道標 (TV Size)
Romanised Title : Michishirube → Michishirube (TV Size)
source : 家庭教師ヒットマンリボーン! → 家庭教師ヒットマンREBORN!
tag delete : tv_size version
bg : dying will.jpg 1365 × 768 → 1366 × 768
　　　michishirube bg.jpg ok

good luck >w</

-Tochi

Elite Storyboarder

1,444 posts

Joined November 2013

-Tochi 2015-02-09T21:13:15+00:00

From my modding queue

General

Fine.

Rei's Dying Will

HP: 7, AR: 7, OD: 7.
00:04:268 (2,7) - Why not stack them?

Not really my style, but i couldn't find anything wrong than this.

Hard

Fine owo

Feedback

Sorry, my mod is really really short D: Shot 1 kd because of that!

Lurei

667 posts

Joined March 2014

Lurei 2015-02-11T23:25:33+00:00

@-Tochi: No changes. Difficulty settings are pretty balanced IMO for this diff. As for the stacking, I wanted a slight rotation, so I did that instead.

So, no update for now. Thanks for modding, anyway! o/ (that kds might get denied, tho ;w; Sorry)

/off-topic: Cool BG, bro.

-Hanashi-

216 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

-Hanashi- 2015-02-12T01:47:24+00:00

LixRei wrote:
@-Tochi: No changes. Difficulty settings are pretty balanced IMO for this diff. As for the stacking, I wanted a slight rotation, so I did that instead.

So, no update for now. Thanks for modding, anyway! o/ (that kds might get denied, tho ;w; Sorry)

/off-topic: Cool BG, bro.

@LixRei: It's fine ^^ +15 is more than enough anyways.

Just found the BG somewhere and I thought it would do well for a diff named "Dying Will'' xDD

Xelasto

728 posts

Joined May 2014

Xelasto 2015-02-13T21:35:01+00:00

Hello! From my modding queue. But you probably don't remember because I'm lazy and slow

Easy

00:01:296 (1,3) - Make same slider and make them more symmetrical
00:03:458 (3) - Fix blanket
00:05:079 (4) - AI mod says it's too far from 3
00:27:241 (1,2,3) - Try and make more symmetrical, looks odd.
00:40:214 (1,3) - Stack better
00:43:998 (4,6) - Stack
00:46:701 (1,2,3) - Make it so both 1 and 3 blanket 2
01:08:323 (1,2,3) - Do that double blanket

01:14:809 (3) - Too far from 2 Ai mod says
01:23:998 (2) - Curve less

Excellent job. Just work on symmetry and cleanliness.

Normal

00:04:809 (3,1) - Make the same slider
00:06:431 (3) - Fix this slider
00:14:268 (1) - Fix this blanket
00:16:431 (1) - Fix this
00:20:755 (5) - This blanket is slightly off
00:23:998 (1) - Fix slider
00:29:404 (1) - Put the end closer
00:33:728 (1) - Why even bend this?
00:51:025 (1) - Just make it bend to the right
00:55:350 (3) - Make this the new combo, not 1
00:59:674 (1) - Don't make this an "S" slider
01:00:755 (3) - ^
01:10:214 (4,5,6) - Try and make this more symmetrical
01:23:998 (4) - New combo?

Pretty good. However the "S" sliders are not that great. Only a few problems about the cleanliness of the map. Good job

Hard

00:02:106 (3) - Curve slightly less
00:11:566 (6) - New combo here not on 1
00:18:593 (1,2) - Make same slider
00:22:917 (4,5) - ^
00:35:890 (1,2) - ^
00:38:052 (3) - New combo here not on 1
00:43:187 (9) - Curve less
00:44:133 (1) - Begin this on the red tick at 00:44:268
00:51:025 (1,3) - Fix stack
00:53:187 (2,4) - ^
01:04:809 (4) - This a bit too short for a wiggle slider. Looks odd.
01:06:160 (1) - ^
01:24:268 (3,4) - Fix blankets

Nice map. This is quite good, just try not to use the same "slider, slider, note" pattern so much. Or just make each one look more different.

Rei's Dying Will

00:01:836 (3,6) - Stack
00:04:268 (2,7) -
00:05:079 (6,1) - ^
Why are all the difficulty settings at weird decimals? Why not just round?
Why is the background different from the others?

I can't find anything wrong with this

Like everything is perfect ;-; Lol Great job

Very good map! Just a few minor problems like cleanliness and slider shapes. Other than that it's great. Keep up the good work and I hope this gets ranked

Lurei

667 posts

Joined March 2014

Lurei 2015-02-15T02:12:05+00:00

@Xelasto: No changes. Those are manual stacks, created for the sake of readability (and to create a slight rotation in triangular pattern).
As for settings, I dunno; I just arranged them as I saw fit.
As for BG, that's -Hanashi-'s choice.

Hope that clears any doubt. Thanks for modding, anyway! o/

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