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Vena Cava - TOHKA (feat. Raya) [OsuMania]

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Identikit
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2018년 7월 8일 일요일 at 오전 6:37:06

Artist: Vena Cava
Title: TOHKA (feat. Raya)
BPM: 170
Filesize: 13482kb
Play Time: 05:05
Difficulties Available:
  1. Dedication - 7Key (4.03 stars, 3331 notes)
Download: Vena Cava - TOHKA (feat. Raya)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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will feel uplifted
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Timing Mod

Hi! Well... i think this should be fine for that slow end, but i'm not completely sure about the snapping in some offsets at the middle tick (red tick) sounds a bit offbeat at 25% of the speed ( '-') hope someone else check those parts :P

Timing Point/s:

Add this ooffsets.

04:55:228 - At 160 Bpm.

04:55:978 - At 143 Bpm.

04:56:397 - At 130 Bpm.

04:56:858 - At 115 Bpm.

04:57:379 - At 102 Bpm.

04:57:967 - At 91 Bpm.

04:58:626 - At 77 bpm.

04:59:405 - At 65 Bpm.

05:00:330 - At 53 Bpm.

05:01:462 - At 40 Bpm.

05:02:962 - At 31 Bpm.

Hope this helps :D

PD: Sorry if my english is bad (? :o

Goodluck with the Beatmap! ;)
Topic Starter
Identikit

Loli Master wrote:

Timing Mod

Hi! Well... i think this should be fine for that slow end, but i'm not completely sure about the snapping in some offsets at the middle tick (red tick) sounds a bit offbeat at 25% of the speed ( '-') hope someone else check those parts :P

Timing Point/s:

Add this ooffsets.

04:55:228 - At 160 Bpm.

04:55:978 - At 143 Bpm.

04:56:397 - At 130 Bpm.

04:56:858 - At 115 Bpm.

04:57:379 - At 102 Bpm.

04:57:967 - At 91 Bpm.

04:58:626 - At 77 bpm.

04:59:405 - At 65 Bpm.

05:00:330 - At 53 Bpm.

05:01:462 - At 40 Bpm.

05:02:962 - At 31 Bpm.

Hope this helps :D

PD: Sorry if my english is bad (? :o

Goodluck with the Beatmap! ;)
I really thank you. It helped me a lot.
x-treme
Your mp3 is 128 kbps, so you can use a 192 kbps mp3 for better quality. Here is an 192 kbps mp3: http://puu.sh/g197L/777117b70e.mp3 :)

You do not need to change your offset.
Topic Starter
Identikit

x-treme wrote:

Your mp3 is 128 kbps, so you can use a 192 kbps mp3 for better quality. Here is an 192 kbps mp3: http://puu.sh/g197L/777117b70e.mp3 :)

You do not need to change your offset.
The current mp3 file is 188kbps.
DarkSider2442
Hi! From Kivi's random queue.
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
Dedication
OD8

00:14:287 (14287|3) - move to 7
01:10:934 (70934|2) - move to 4
01:11:993 (71993|1) - move to 7
01:15:169 (75169|0) - move to 2, 01:15:522 (75522|0) - move to 3
01:20:111 (80111|3) - move to 5
01:20:464 (80464|2) - move to 4
01:22:405 (82405|5) - move to 4, 01:22:405 (82405|6) - move to 6
01:30:522 (90522|3) - move to 5
01:34:934 (94934|5) - move to 7
01:38:993 (98993|0) - move to 3, 01:38:993 (98993|3) - move to 7
01:40:228 (100228|4) - move to 6
01:40:581 (100581|3) - move to 3
01:50:111 (110111|5) - move to 5
02:01:228 (121228|6) - move to 6, 02:01:405 (121405|5) - move to 7
02:20:464 (140464|2) - move to 2
02:56:287 (176287|2) - move to 2
02:56:640 (176640|1) - move to 3
02:58:405 (178405|5) - move to 7, 02:58:758 (178758|4) - move to 6
03:00:699 (180699|5) - move to 5
03:01:758 (181758|2) - move to 2
03:34:405 (214405|3) - move to 6, 03:34:405 (214405|4) - move to 7
04:10:405 (250405|1) - move to 4
04:38:993 (278993|0) - move to 2, 04:39:522 (279522|5) - move to 5, 04:39:699 (279699|6) - move to 6
04:41:993 (281993|5) - move to 5
04:44:286 (284286|4) - move to 3

Good luck! :)
Topic Starter
Identikit

DarkSider2442 wrote:

Hi! From Kivi's random queue.
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
Dedication
OD8 OD8.5, instead

00:14:287 (14287|3) - move to 7
01:10:934 (70934|2) - move to 4
01:11:993 (71993|1) - move to 7
01:15:169 (75169|0) - move to 2, 01:15:522 (75522|0) - move to 3
01:20:111 (80111|3) - move to 5
01:20:464 (80464|2) - move to 4
01:22:405 (82405|5) - move to 4, 01:22:405 (82405|6) - move to 6
01:30:522 (90522|3) - move to 5
01:34:934 (94934|5) - move to 7
01:38:993 (98993|0) - move to 3, 01:38:993 (98993|3) - move to 7
01:40:228 (100228|4) - move to 6
01:40:581 (100581|3) - move to 3
01:50:111 (110111|5) - move to 5
02:01:228 (121228|6) - move to 6, 02:01:405 (121405|5) - move to 7
02:20:464 (140464|2) - move to 2
02:56:287 (176287|2) - move to 2
02:56:640 (176640|1) - move to 3
02:58:405 (178405|5) - move to 7, 02:58:758 (178758|4) - move to 6
03:00:699 (180699|5) - move to 5
03:01:758 (181758|2) - move to 2
03:34:405 (214405|3) - move to 6, 03:34:405 (214405|4) - move to 7
04:10:405 (250405|1) - move to 4
04:38:993 (278993|0) - move to 2, 04:39:522 (279522|5) - move to 5, 04:39:699 (279699|6) - move to 6
04:41:993 (281993|5) - move to 5
04:44:286 (284286|4) - move to 3

Good luck! :)
All done.
Thanks.
playin14
Hi :) Sorry for the delay

click
column 0|1|2|3

[Dedication]
01:10:758 (70758|2) - delete 2, no drum
01:30:522 you use here 4 notes for the drum. Therefore you should use not more than 3 notes at the following positions
01:30:875 delete one note
01:31:228 ^
01:32:640 ^
01:32:993 ^
01:33:346 ^
01:33:699 ^
01:34:052 ^
01:35:464 ^
01:35:817 ^
01:36:169 ^
01:36:522 ^
01:36:787 ^
01:38:287 ^
01:38:640 ^
01:38:993 ^
01:39:346 ^
01:39:699 ^
01:41:111 ^
01:41:464 ^

01:41:817 (101817|3) - delete 3

01:42:169 delete one note
01:42:522 ^
01:43:934 ^
01:44:287 ^
01:44:640 ^
01:44:993 ^
01:45:346 ^
01:46:758 ^
01:47:111 ^

Same problem from 01:53:111 to 02:12:699
This goes through the whole map. I would recommend you to remap these parts.

Oh, and delete the timing points from 04:42:214 to 04:42:522 I don't see the reason for these timing points

Ok, I hope this will help :)
Good luck!
Topic Starter
Identikit

playin14 wrote:

Hi :) Sorry for the delay

click
column 0|1|2|3

[Dedication]
01:10:758 (70758|2) - delete 2, no drum It's not a drum note.
01:30:522 you use here 4 notes for the drum. Therefore you should use not more than 3 notes at the following positions Not all the notes were put in there because of the drum. I don't know the reason why there shouldn't be more than 3 notes. Nothing changed.
01:30:875 delete one note ^
01:31:228 ^ ^
01:32:640 ^ ^
01:32:993 ^ ^
01:33:346 ^ ^
01:33:699 ^ ^
01:34:052 ^ ^
01:35:464 ^ ^
01:35:817 ^ ^
01:36:169 ^ ^
01:36:522 ^ ^
01:36:787 ^ ^
01:38:287 ^ ^
01:38:640 ^ ^
01:38:993 ^ ^
01:39:346 ^ ^
01:39:699 ^ ^
01:41:111 ^ ^
01:41:464 ^ ^

01:41:817 (101817|3) - delete 3 ^

01:42:169 delete one note ^
01:42:522 ^ ^
01:43:934 ^ ^
01:44:287 ^ ^
01:44:640 ^ ^
01:44:993 ^ ^
01:45:346 ^ ^
01:46:758 ^ ^
01:47:111 ^ ^

Same problem from 01:53:111 to 02:12:699
This goes through the whole map. I would recommend you to remap these parts.

Oh, and delete the timing points from 04:42:214 to 04:42:522 I don't see the reason for these timing points The reason was to give emphasis as it was the point where the drum beat stops suddenly.

Ok, I hope this will help :)
Good luck!
Thank you.
lenpai
This still alive?
Taking my chances because of the good music.
Sorry for 1 month delay. Studies became very harsh on me.

Omg good music mod
00:22:669 (22669|6) - suggest moving this to 3
00:28:581 - i know you're going for mirrored effect but pitch must be taken into consideration imo so instead of [3][1] go for [1][3]
00:39:611 (39611|5,39699|4) - interchange lane
00:39:964 - 00:44:993 interchange lanes 1 and 3 for the same reason
01:13:581 - 01:14:817 i suggest dispersing the 1/2 repeats
01:16:405 ^
01:47:640 (107640|0,107817|1) - shift to the right once
01:53:022 (113022|2) - move to 6
03:17:817 - 03:23:464 overmapped imo. Crop some notes. Maybe the chords since the music is simply in the rising effect and needs to be more "chill". Just an opinion.
03:31:052 break the the 1/2 repeats at column 4
03:34:758 It's ok to do repeats but not at this length. They unnecessarily make the map harder
03:40:405 suggesting to convert this to jumpstream

Solid map. Go get other people to mod this. ^^
*throws a star
Topic Starter
Identikit

Lenfried- wrote:

This still alive?
Taking my chances because of the good music.
Sorry for 1 month delay. Studies became very harsh on me.

Omg good music mod
00:22:669 (22669|6) - suggest moving this to 3
00:28:581 - i know you're going for mirrored effect but pitch must be taken into consideration imo so instead of [3][1] go for [1][3]
00:39:611 (39611|5,39699|4) - interchange lane
00:39:964 - 00:44:993 interchange lanes 1 and 3 for the same reason
01:13:581 - 01:14:817 i suggest dispersing the 1/2 repeats
01:16:405 ^
01:47:640 (107640|0,107817|1) - shift to the right once
01:53:022 (113022|2) - move to 6
03:17:817 - 03:23:464 overmapped imo. Crop some notes. Maybe the chords since the music is simply in the rising effect and needs to be more "chill". Just an opinion.
03:31:052 break the the 1/2 repeats at column 4
03:34:758 It's ok to do repeats but not at this length. They unnecessarily make the map harder
03:40:405 suggesting to convert this to jumpstream

Solid map. Go get other people to mod this. ^^
*throws a star
all fixed.

Thanks. :)
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