7!! - Orange (Anime Ver.)

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好想做个I
为啥不把最高难度命名成insane啊,这样自由度还高一点
FreeSongs

Frobe wrote:

[FreeSong's Hard]
  1. 00:32:389 (4,5,6,7) - i think have better to little changing this pattern. applied.
  2. 00:41:284 (7) - i think that is better to if you add the whistle on the tail of the slider. ^
  3. 00:48:958 (4) - what do you think about the slider end to add a whistle? ^
  4. 00:49:830 (5,6,7) - what do you think of my opinion for this pattern? uhmmm. I don't quiet like the flow, but I made some changes to improve it
  5. 01:22:621 (1) - if you want this slider to have a better shape, how about moving x:452 y:232 I prefer mine because 01:22:621 (1,2) - form a perfect blanket

Thanks for your mod :)

Xinchii wrote:

[FreeSong's Hard]
  1. 00:05:179 (1) - Add whistle at slider start吧 , 00:07:970 (1) - 這邊都有加
  2. 00:22:621 (2) - 雖然前面很多變速的NC了 , 不過這邊重音應該也繼續NC吧 , 順便強調這顆萌萌心<3 <3
  3. 00:56:807 (2) - miss a clap at start ? fixed
  4. 01:03:086 (3) - 這個還是放在(1)的尾巴吧 ? 感覺這首歌高潮的部分還是不太適合疊在尾巴 , 給一點移動感覺比較好 虽然感觉读图可能会有障碍 不过还是改了
  5. 01:05:354 (3) - 試試看放在x:84|y:124左右的地方 ? 有一點角度感覺也好玩 , 跟(1)的頭還有(2)的尾巴作一個三角感覺也整齊
  6. 01:06:226 (6) - 這個可以像01:05:005 (2) - 一樣做成彎的 , 感覺比較好看 赞!;w;

谢谢你的mod;w;
osu file format v14

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Title:Orange
TitleUnicode:オレンジ
Artist:7!!
ArtistUnicode:7!!
Creator:Mei
Version:FreeSong's Hard
Source:四月は君の嘘
Tags:shigatsu wa kimi no uso your lie in april ending Melt JJburstOwO Freesongs
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Topic Starter
Mei
fixed all, thank you Frobe and Xinchii, and thank you for metadata help alacat san >.<

Euphoria wrote:

好想做个I
为啥不把最高难度命名成insane啊,这样自由度还高一点
因为他是个hard啊
JJburstOwO

monstrata wrote:

hihi~ from PM request :). Good luck, Mei & friends ^^

[JJBurst's Normal]

Please check AIMod... There are some spacing issues that should not be present in a Normal.

00:13:900 (3) - Why not have the note at 00:13:551 - to keep with the 1/1 rhythm?
00:40:063 (2,3) - You should just mimic the slider at 00:40:761 (4) - . This part is unnecessarily overmapped imo. You could simplify it. Unlike below, these 1/4 sliders don't exactly reflect the melody very well.
00:43:551 (3,4) - This makes more sense because it reflects the vocals. ^
00:47:737 (1,2) - Check blankets.
00:53:668 (2,1) - Pretty big jump for a Normal... Plus this breaks flow because of the 180 degree motion the player has to make after jumping from 2, to the slider.
01:19:133 (3) - Why is there SV increase by 1.25x on a Normal :S
all fixed~

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TitleUnicode:オレンジ(アニメVer.)
Artist:7!!
ArtistUnicode:7!!
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hehe
hi there, beautiful song.

General

FreeSongs' Hard

  1. 00:20:877 (1,1) - NCs are not necessary for 'reading' since you can't really tell their lengths from a glance, consider removing.
  2. 00:20:877 (1) - uhm what's with the shape? use a redpoint https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2826177
  3. 00:22:621 (1,2) - improve so that both sliderhead and start end at same place? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2826184
  4. 00:25:412 (4) - hmm the sound is not on the timeline... not sure how you gonna fix this.
  5. 00:57:854 - suggest having a note here instead of sliderend
  6. 01:13:551 (3,5) - don't like the shape.. its very half-half. i think you should make it do that the elbow is more obvious

Hard

  1. 01:18:435 - maybe add note and spinner after?

Melt's Hard

  1. 00:08:493 (4) - do circle+1/1 slider like1 the rest?
  2. 00:28:202 - duplicate green line
  3. 00:33:086 - you missed a sound here~
  4. 00:43:551 (3,4,1) - DS is the same, but the rhythm spacing is different. 1/4 to 1/2. i suggest shift 00:44:423 (1) - 1/4 forward and extend it.
  5. 00:56:284 - why no kiai... :(
  6. 01:19:133 (1) - symmetry?

thats all, good luck
FreeSongs

handsome wrote:

FreeSongs' Hard

  1. 00:20:877 (1,1) - NCs are not necessary for 'reading' since you can't really tell their lengths from a glance, consider removing. removed
  2. 00:20:877 (1) - uhm what's with the shape? use a redpoint https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2826177 uhmm... yours is almost as same as mine
  3. 00:22:621 (1,2) - improve so that both sliderhead and start end at same place? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2826184 fixed
  4. 00:25:412 (4) - hmm the sound is not on the timeline... not sure how you gonna fix this. not sure about this. shouldnt be a big issue since the note is only a little bit off
  5. 00:57:854 - suggest having a note here instead of sliderend sorry, i think it doesn't fit here...
  6. 01:13:551 (3,5) - don't like the shape.. its very half-half. i think you should make it do that the elbow is more obvious changed
Thanks for your mod!
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: hey.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 54714
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.9

[Metadata]
Title:Orange(Anime Ver.)
TitleUnicode:オレンジ(アニメVer.)
Artist:7!!
ArtistUnicode:7!!
Creator:Mei
Version:FreeSong's Hard
Source:四月は君の嘘
Tags:shigatsu wa kimi no uso your lie in april ending Melt JJburstOwO Freesongs
BeatmapID:644989
BeatmapSetID:260797

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7.5
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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Topic Starter
Mei

handsome wrote:

Hard

  1. 01:18:435 - maybe add note and spinner after?well i dont think thats really necessary

Melt's Hard

  1. 00:08:493 (4) - do circle+1/1 slider like1 the rest?
  2. 00:28:202 - duplicate green linefixed
  3. 00:33:086 - you missed a sound here~followed vocal
  4. 00:43:551 (3,4,1) - DS is the same, but the rhythm spacing is different. 1/4 to 1/2. i suggest shift 00:44:423 (1) - 1/4 forward and extend it.made some change here
  5. 00:56:284 - why no kiai... :(already have a spring at 00:56:109
  6. 01:19:133 (1) - symmetry?
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thats all, good luck
thank you for modding ><
hehe
hi

check again. no kds, i love this song.

  1. JJ's Normal has different combo colours, keep consistent as the rest.
  2. here's MP3 i made to fix 00:25:492 - late sound, offset 376
  3. maybe spinner end consistentcy? i think its nicer to end at 01:26:807 -
  4. doublechecking metadata would be good too

    FreeSong's Hard
  5. maybe change to FreeSongs' Hard? follow the name owo
  6. AR to 8.5~ maximum, increase a bit because of patterns like 00:40:761 (4,5,6) - which are actually 190bpm jumps, a higher AR would be necessary.
  7. 00:08:668 (2,3,1) - nazi but you can follow the straight line pattern
  8. 01:22:621 (1) - you can just make this nicer, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2845042 2 points for good curve. also remove NC if you like :p

    Hard
  9. 01:23:319 (3) - really think that you should just use a 3/4, 2/3 or 1/2 slider here. the reverse doesn't sound too good when the vocals is not very loud and prominent. strongly suggest.

    Melt's Hard
  10. drop AR slightly, maybe 7-7.5~ i think its better since you do not use many 1/4.
  11. 00:08:493 (4) - no fix? pls fix :(
  12. 00:31:691 (3) - outside playfield
  13. 01:12:505 (1,2) - swap NC
  14. 01:15:470 (1) - 01:00:121 (5) - maybe circle+slider too, i know its vocal mapping but you can map both.


    JJburst's Normal
  15. delete greenlines http://i.imgur.com/N5am5Bv.png
  16. 00:27:505 (4) - split to 2 circles so 00:28:202 - is mapped? :D
  17. 01:10:063 (1) - i think the flow can be improved here, change the slidershape and following spacing. maybe like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2845081
FreeSongs

handsome wrote:

FreeSong's Hard
  1. maybe change to FreeSongs' Hard? follow the name owo sure owo
  2. AR to 8.5~ maximum, increase a bit because of patterns like 00:40:761 (4,5,6) - which are actually 190bpm jumps, a higher AR would be necessary. Increase to AR8.3
  3. 00:08:668 (2,3,1) - nazi but you can follow the straight line pattern fixed!
  4. 01:22:621 (1) - you can just make this nicer, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2845042 2 points for good curve. also remove NC if you like :p fixed!
Thank you! :)
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Artist:7!!
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Creator:Mei
Version:FreeSong's Hard
Source:四月は君の嘘
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JJburstOwO

handsome wrote:

hi

check again. no kds, i love this song.

  1. JJ's Normal has different combo colours, keep consistent as the rest.

    JJburst's Normal
  2. delete greenlines http://i.imgur.com/N5am5Bv.png
  3. 00:27:505 (4) - split to 2 circles so 00:28:202 - is mapped? :D
  4. 01:10:063 (1) - i think the flow can be improved here, change the slidershape and following spacing. maybe like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2845081
All fixed~ thx

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TitleUnicode:オレンジ(アニメVer.)
Artist:7!!
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Creator:Mei
Version:JJburst's Normal
Source:四月は君の嘘
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Melt
Melt's Hard
drop AR slightly, maybe 7-7.5~ i think its better since you do not use many 1/4. changed to 7.5
00:08:493 (4) - no fix? pls fix :(its fine for me ;w;
00:31:691 (3) - outside playfield fixed
01:12:505 (1,2) - swap NC i add nc in the beginning of each sentences,same as 01:09:714 (1)
01:15:470 (1) - 01:00:121 (5) - maybe circle+slider too, i know its vocal mapping but you can map both. slider is enough for me ;w;

thanks for modding :3

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TimelineZoom: 0.9

[Metadata]
Title:Orange(Anime Ver.)
TitleUnicode:オレンジ(アニメVer.)
Artist:7!!
ArtistUnicode:7!!
Creator:Mei
Version:Melt's Hard
Source:四月は君の嘘
Tags:shigatsu wa kimi no uso your lie in april ending Melt JJburstOwO Freesongs
BeatmapID:602865
BeatmapSetID:260797

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4.6
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7.5
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bgOAO.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Topic Starter
Mei
to handsome:
I fixed the end part and made all spinner consistence now
about offset, i've changed to a better mp3 and reset the offset
about metadata. i am not an expert of such this ;w;w;w;w but i have asked alacat to checked for me and think it should be fine now. If you have any suggestion plz tell me <3

thank you, now update
hehe
wee

Topic Starter
Mei
thank you handsome!! :):):):):)
pishifat
mod coming sooooooooooooooooooooooon

minor things/suggestions
should really change
change or die
popping for everything in purple
[general]
  1. offset -12, then add an 80bpm point on 01:24:190 - and reset your spinner end locations. should look like this. right now your spinners end on nothing. do this after applying the rest of the mod, otherwise timestamps will all be wrong
  2. is there a reason why video isn't included?


[jjburst]
  1. 00:00:482 - remove the green line here. contradiction with ranking criteria because it does not modify slider speed
  2. 00:11:644 (1,2,3) - vocals on 1/4 here just make for really awkward reading between these objects. your spacing doesn't indicate anything about the difference between a 1 beat gap at 00:11:644 (1,2) - and a 1.25 beat gap at 00:13:040 (2,3) - . the best solution would be completely removing 00:13:912 (3) - and ignoring the vocals as you had up until this point since it just makes rhythm pointlessly awkward there
  3. 00:16:877 (3,1) - 00:28:737 (1,2) - 00:31:528 (1,2) - 00:55:598 (2,1) - 01:06:761 (4,1) - 01:09:900 (5,1) - you need to space all of these properly. explanation here
  4. 00:24:900 (5,1,2) - all of these need to be using 1.0x ds. going from 0.5x to 1.7x is nonsense
  5. 00:28:388 (4,1) - should swap new combos
  6. 00:41:819 (4,1) - 01:19:309 (3,4,1) - these should be spaced because switching between different lengths of stacking (like 1/4, 1/2, 1/1) and stacking underneath slider ends is not a great idea for the easiest diff on the set. an example of this being an issue would be this disqualification
  7. 00:42:342 (1,2) - 00:47:923 (1,2,3) - assuming you're trying to blanket, using a less sharp angle on (1) looks as lot better. using a picture of a blanket to avoid any possible word confusion what is wrong with me
  8. 00:53:505 (1,2,1) - you can't stack both 1/2 and 1/1 in the same position like this. the best thing to do would be stacking 00:53:505 (1,2) - and spacing 00:53:854 (2,1) - because every other stack on the map is 1/2
  9. 00:54:551 (1,2) - should be 1.2x spacing
  10. 01:05:714 (3) - using a different hitsound on the tail would be more appropriate. you used claps for snare hits up til this point and there isn't a snare hit here. switching the hitnormal to the drum sampleset for the tail sounds fine, as you did with 01:06:761 (4) -
  11. 01:11:295 (2,3,4,1) - should be 1.2x spacing
  12. 01:15:830 (1,2,3) - should be 1.2x spacing
  13. 01:17:923 (3,3) - some sort of placement where these aren't overlapping at all would be best. if you insist on overlapping them, at least make the tails cleaner
  14. 01:19:319 (3) - same suggestion as 01:05:714 (3) -


[melt]
  1. 00:00:482 - is there a reason why you're ignoring the first piano sound here? you could easily map it in the same way as mei's hard with a stackish thing
  2. 00:04:668 (3) - there's no piano/vocal on the head of this. should just map the same ticks as mei's hard at 00:03:272 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
  3. 00:13:912 (6) - remove whistle on sliderbody. assuming this was just a mistake
  4. 00:10:250 (2,3) - what are these whistles following? cuz there are no vocals or piano on either positions (although 3 has some breathing thing if that counts lol). 2 has a piano hit on its head and 3 has a vocal on its tail, so using whistles in those places would be fine
  5. 00:15:830 (4) - same reasoning, tail shouldnt have a whistle
  6. 00:50:714 (1) - the finish on this seems really unfitting since the climax is actually at 00:53:505 (1) - , where you've already got a finish. may be better to just remove this one.
  7. 01:18:621 (2,1) - really should avoid this cross screen jump. moving it somewehre like this would be a lot more acceptable of a jump
  8. 01:19:319 (1) - this uh... doesn't end on the right beat and looks super messy lol. could just steal this one or re-do yours to be less of a blob
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[hard]
  1. just like freesong, everything about this diff makes it seem more like an insane than a hard. renaming it to insane may be better
  2. 00:03:272 (1,2) - shoudl really reduce distance here. the jump at 00:08:854 (1,2) - is fine, so making it the same distance as that would be acceptable
  3. 00:12:342 (3) - should really be snapped 1/4 later. exact same rhythm as 00:15:307 (3) - . hitsounds should also be the same as that position for 00:12:342 (3,4) - with whistles on heads
  4. snapping on this isn't right. probably never will be because the sound isn't actually in time with anything that will work as a repeating slider. best choice would be to just continue with 1/4 there and ignore that instrument


[freesongs]
  1. everything about this diff makes it seem more like an insane than a hard. renaming it to insane may be better. star difficulty should be irrelevant
  2. why doesn't the second kiai use S:C2? those claps sound way better than the snap sounds you have with S:C1 :/
  3. 00:25:598 (4,1) - i'm not seeing any reason why this gap is left empty. piano is just as consistent as everything else you mapped right before it, so this should be mapped as well


getting some mods on the normal after jj fixes things up may be a good idea. message me ingame or send a forum pm when you think it's ready
Topic Starter
Mei
;w;
fixed timing first and i will do others later
about video, since the blueray is not put on sale now, I cant get good NCED resource so not putting a video there. but if there is a good quality video i will definetly put it on
JJburstOwO

pishifat wrote:

mod coming sooooooooooooooooooooooon

[jjburst]
  1. 00:00:482 - remove the green line here. contradiction with ranking criteria because it does not modify slider speed
  2. 00:11:644 (1,2,3) - vocals on 1/4 here just make for really awkward reading between these objects. your spacing doesn't indicate anything about the difference between a 1 beat gap at 00:11:644 (1,2) - and a 1.25 beat gap at 00:13:040 (2,3) - . the best solution would be completely removing 00:13:912 (3) - and ignoring the vocals as you had up until this point since it just makes rhythm pointlessly awkward there
  3. 00:16:877 (3,1) - 00:28:737 (1,2) - 00:31:528 (1,2) - 00:55:598 (2,1) - 01:06:761 (4,1) - 01:09:900 (5,1) - you need to space all of these properly. explanation here
  4. 00:24:900 (5,1,2) - all of these need to be using 1.0x ds. going from 0.5x to 1.7x is nonsense
  5. 00:28:388 (4,1) - should swap new combos
  6. 00:41:819 (4,1) - 01:19:309 (3,4,1) - these should be spaced because switching between different lengths of stacking (like 1/4, 1/2, 1/1) and stacking underneath slider ends is not a great idea for the easiest diff on the set. an example of this being an issue would be this disqualification
  7. 00:42:342 (1,2) - 00:47:923 (1,2,3) - assuming you're trying to blanket, using a less sharp angle on (1) looks as lot better. using a picture of a blanket to avoid any possible word confusion what is wrong with me
  8. 00:53:505 (1,2,1) - you can't stack both 1/2 and 1/1 in the same position like this. the best thing to do would be stacking 00:53:505 (1,2) - and spacing 00:53:854 (2,1) - because every other stack on the map is 1/2
  9. 00:54:551 (1,2) - should be 1.2x spacing
  10. 01:05:714 (3) - using a different hitsound on the tail would be more appropriate. you used claps for snare hits up til this point and there isn't a snare hit here. switching the hitnormal to the drum sampleset for the tail sounds fine, as you did with 01:06:761 (4) -
  11. 01:11:295 (2,3,4,1) - should be 1.2x spacing
  12. 01:15:830 (1,2,3) - should be 1.2x spacing
  13. 01:17:923 (3,3) - some sort of placement where these aren't overlapping at all would be best. if you insist on overlapping them, at least make the tails cleaner
  14. 01:19:319 (3) - same suggestion as 01:05:714 (3) -


getting some mods on the normal after jj fixes things up may be a good idea. message me ingame or send a forum pm when you think it's ready
all fixed, thank you pishifat :)

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Topic Starter
Mei

pishifat wrote:

[hard]
  1. just like freesong, everything about this diff makes it seem more like an insane than a hard. renaming it to insane may be betterwell i just feel like it is a hard....it is not that insane right ;w;w;w;w;
  2. 00:03:272 (1,2) - shoudl really reduce distance here. the jump at 00:08:854 (1,2) - is fine, so making it the same distance as that would be acceptable
  3. 00:12:342 (3) - should really be snapped 1/4 later. exact same rhythm as 00:15:307 (3) - . hitsounds should also be the same as that position for 00:12:342 (3,4) - with whistles on heads
  4. snapping on this isn't right. probably never will be because the sound isn't actually in time with anything that will work as a repeating slider. best choice would be to just continue with 1/4 there and ignore that instrument
others fixed thank you pishifat and your awesome mp3!
FreeSongs

pishifat wrote:

[freesongs]
  1. everything about this diff makes it seem more like an insane than a hard. renaming it to insane may be better. star difficulty should be irrelevant
  2. why doesn't the second kiai use S:C2? those claps sound way better than the snap sounds you have with S:C1 :/ changed
  3. 00:25:598 (4,1) - i'm not seeing any reason why this gap is left empty. piano is just as consistent as everything else you mapped right before it, so this should be mapped as well mapped!
Thanks for your mod! :)

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Melt
[melt]
  1. 00:00:482 - is there a reason why you're ignoring the first piano sound here? you could easily map it in the same way as mei's hard with a stackish thing added
  2. 00:04:668 (3) - there's no piano/vocal on the head of this. should just map the same ticks as mei's hard at 00:03:272 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - its fine for me ;w;
  3. 00:13:912 (6) - remove whistle on sliderbody. assuming this was just a mistake fixed
  4. 00:10:250 (2,3) - what are these whistles following? cuz there are no vocals or piano on either positions (although 3 has some breathing thing if that counts lol). 2 has a piano hit on its head and 3 has a vocal on its tail, so using whistles in those places would be fine fixed
  5. 00:15:830 (4) - same reasoning, tail shouldnt have a whistle fixed
  6. 00:50:714 (1) - the finish on this seems really unfitting since the climax is actually at 00:53:505 (1) - , where you've already got a finish. may be better to just remove this one. fixed
  7. 01:18:621 (2,1) - really should avoid this cross screen jump. moving it somewehre like this would be a lot more acceptable of a jump
  8. 01:19:319 (1) - this uh... doesn't end on the right beat and looks super messy lol. could just steal this one or re-do yours to be less of a blob fixed
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thanks for modding

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Title:Orange(Anime Ver.)
TitleUnicode:オレンジ(アニメVer.)
Artist:7!!
ArtistUnicode:7!!
Creator:Mei
Version:Melt's Hard
Source:四月は君の嘘
Tags:shigatsu wa kimi no uso your lie in april ending Melt JJburstOwO Freesongs
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205,360,49307,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,50702,12,4,52795,0:1:0:0:
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153,331,57679,2,0,P|104:272|146:167,1,191.999994140625,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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414,103,60121,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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257,337,61865,2,0,P|157:369|79:315,1,191.999994140625,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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124,152,64481,5,2,0:0:0:0:
62,220,64656,2,0,L|66:317,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
151,347,65179,2,0,L|145:234,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
215,193,65702,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,239,65876,2,0,P|382:297|500:223,1,239.999992675781,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
395,133,67097,1,4,0:1:0:0:
254,100,67446,6,0,L|259:-6,1,95.9999970703126,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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373,191,71632,2,0,P|346:113|402:28,1,191.999994140625,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
495,227,72679,6,0,L|422:229,1,47.9999985351563,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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246,369,74249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
286,283,74423,2,0,L|282:184,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
199,16,75121,2,0,L|202:111,1,95.9999970703126,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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343,156,76865,1,0,0:0:0:0:
382,327,77214,2,0,L|384:231,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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126,236,82097,1,12,0:0:0:0:
253,262,82446,6,0,L|258:311,1,47.9999985351563,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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