Hi! From my forum NM/M4M taiko queue.
I am pretty thorough, so don't be annoyed if I point out a lot of issues. A lot of times they are just my opinions, so feel free to object to them. :3
I look at mainly composing: how you map the music. Not just the drums; the vocals, background synth, the symphonic backing, the pauses; everything. But especially vocals.
I also look at pattern repetition and consistency, and how you fit in your 1/4 runs.
d = don
k = katsu
D = big don
K = big katsu
[General]
Oh no, it's nardo. Welp this is gonna be hard to mod, I'm going to try my best XD
[Muzukashii]
00:22:569 - the song has entered its quiet section, I believe the note intensity should die down a bit here. You might want to turn some of those quintuplets into triplets.
00:29:282 (83) - I prefer this as d, yes there is a cymbal splash in the music, but it is in the middle of the singer's phrase and the song is still pretty quiet.
00:41:450 - This break here feels weird to me. Adding a k here might emphasize the previous 2 d's just as well, which denoted the singer's phrase ending. And it would match snares.
00:58:653 (176,177,178,179,180,181) - change to ddd kkk? The toms does go from high to low pitch, but the guitar(? not sure what instrument) goes from low to high pitch, and having the k triplet second would emphasize the D at 00:59:492
01:08:723 - This gap feels weird again. I know you're just mapping vocals here, but it's still weird to me when playing, the song's quite intense here.
01:23:268 (257,258) - as far as I can hear, those aren't triplets. Move 01:23:268 (257) to 01:23:198 , and 01:23:548 (258) to 01:23:513
[Oni]
00:07:464 - just a comment, not a suggestion: I wouldn't mind if this segment was entirely d's. ^.^
00:16:485 (47,48,49,50,51) - I like kkkdd here more, would match the guitar pitch bend better like the other 5plets in this section
00:38:198 (160,161) - change to dk? vocals sound at 00:38:303
00:44:597 (199,200) - change to kd would match 00:42:918 (189,190)
01:12:394 (362,363,364,365) - I would prefer kddk, k in this measure would then be all vocals, and this would also lead in to 01:12:918 (366) better.
01:23:268 (434,435) - see muzukashii
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And also, after looking through my mod, would you mind taking the time to check out
my taiko set? <3
There you go! Hope you find this mod helpful, and good luck beatmapping!