impossiblexu wrote:

Easy完成!!! ：

（没有BG Combo Color同Normal 另外如果不喜欢00:34:617(4)的slider可以换掉）

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO

Aha, a carnival song

[General]
Delete "Spice" "&" and "Wolf", since that word in source

Spice & Wolf TV animation OST Music of Wolf and Travel That's the album name.

[Impossibexu's Easy]
00:34:617 (4) - This slider is weird, and difficult for beginner player, make it curve or parallel
01:19:900 (4) - I think this slider is too difficlt for beginner player, don't let the starpoint overlap the endpoint

done.

[Normal]
Hm..... I think the Circle Size is bigger for normal diff, IMO. Increase the Circle Size only one tick? done.
00:04:617 (5) - Really, I don't this object is stack with 4 at the end fo slider exchanged 4 and 5
02:28:957 (8) - Make symetric? no.

[Hard]
01:28:815 (6) - New combo?
01:33:202 (6) - ^
done.
02:05:183 (9) - ^
02:09:994 (8) - ^
no.

[Insane]
I think the bg is not fit for diff, maybe? orz.
00:39:004 (8) - I think overlap doesn't looks right done.
01:22:589 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - OMG!!!! IT"S CONFUSING!!!!!!!! I'm crazy XD
02:10:843 (1) - Unrankable Spinner LOL (AutoPlay must have a bonus at least 2000, current is 1000)not difficult for a 300.

Good song
STAR

Garven wrote:

[General]
I love the hit sounds you found for this.
There are no spinners in Normal and Hard, and one really short one in Insane. Maybe try to find a spot to put one in so there will be at least one point where there can be some score variance.

I tried but failed.

[Impossiblexu's Easy]
00:34:617 (4) - Neat. done.
02:38:013 (1) - I feel the new combos at the end here are unnecessary, but I can see what you were going for. :3

[Normal]
02:39:145 (1) - Maybe instead of a slider for the last three notes, use three normal beats? It would feel a bit better of a finish to the song. done. x1.5 jumps then.

[Hard]
Mostly nazi for this difficulty, but:
00:14:523 (2) - Turn off grid snap and move this beat between the 1 and 3 more evenly. Be wary of 00:15:655 (4)'s position if you do this. done. I copied 2 for 4 XD
00:47:353 (6,7) - Same thing with these two. done.
00:49:900 (1) - The low OD make this pattern a little difficult to read. ye, but fine.
02:02:919 (4) - Maybe point the end of this slider more towards 5? done.

[Insane]
The bg almost felt like it didn't belong with the other three. I don't know why... maybe it's the gradient background color with it? changed to a new one.
The sudden changes in slider speed were really confusing the first time through. :3
00:40:277 (4,1) - This felt kind like too much of a jump right after a slow slider with such a small amount of time between beats. get shorter.
01:22:589 (3) - Man, that killed me fast, haha. XD
01:31:504 (3,4) - This felt unnatural. Maybe flip the position of 3 and 4? Unless this is what you were going for... yep.
02:10:843 (1) - This spinner feels really short. I'm sure people will call it out on being so, though I had no problem with it. everyone modded this map pointed this out. but it's not difficult to get a 300.
02:39:145 (1,2) - As with Normal, this felt kind of anti-climactic. done. another back jump :3

Good stuff!

Kecco wrote:

Really handsome song~

•Overall•
Offset : 653 done.

•Insane•
01:26:549 (6) - Wrong spacing. Please fix it, maybe moving it a bit further. done. placed it based on x0.8.
01:35:181 (8) - Make it finish on 01:35:606 that's the drum.
01:49:757 (5,6) - Fix the spacing, please. It can confuse the player. done.
02:09:709 (1) - ^ I think it's fine, well, fixed.
02:10:841 (1) - LoL, It's really quick. Try to fix it in another way. I'd like to keep it :3

That's all.
I really love this song and this map, Good Job! ♫

Star~ ♪

• • Delete the osb file, then "Full Submission"

• •

xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
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[General]

• • Delete the osb file, then "Full Submission"

[Hard]
......

1. Yeah, the .osb is still there. Have you tried deleting that yet? or did you delete it, and then it came back?
2. Offset: 651 (not very different to yours. Thats just what I got. That was pretty hard to time actually.)
3. "Wolf" is in the tags twice. You only have to have it in their once, So I'd delete one of them.

Doomsday93 wrote:

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these

1. Yeah, the .osb is still there. Have you tried deleting that yet? or did you delete it, and then it came back?
   I just deleted this file for 3 times. I checked my folder before I fully submitted last time (after xxheroxx's mod), now I still don't have it. Maybe that's all for the use of SB sound.
   
2. Offset: 651 (not very different to yours. Thats just what I got. That was pretty hard to time actually.)
   Yep, very hard to find a 100% correct offset, I got 655 and you got 651, then let it be 653 :3
   
3. "Wolf" is in the tags twice. You only have to have it in their once, So I'd delete one of them.
   Spice & Wolf TV animation OST Music of Wolf and Travel
   this is the title of the music album name, the colored part can't be seperated. or I have to delete all the words.

[IMPOSSIBLEXU'S EASY]

Awesome

[NORMAL]

Looks good

[HARD]

Resnap all notes

Apart from that. Very good

[INSANE]

00:07:304 (8,1) - Having jumps like this on the end of streams is very frustrating to play for most people. I'd delete this jump.
00:11:832 (10,1) - ^

done.

01:22:587 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This can be awkward to read and play because of all of the overlapping. prhaps you could put these into a different pattern, so its more clear and looks better?

did some change to new combo. the hit rule is easier now.

Nice map. Insane is a little overmapped for my tastes, but overall, its nicely made.

Starred

Arusha Shuna wrote:

Request Accepted

Impossiblexu's Easy
fine
Normal
Also fine
Hard
01:08:011 (1,2,3) - minor spacing issue done.
Insane
00:18:624 (3,4) - right 1 grid done.
01:24:568 (4) - up 1 grid? done.
01:51:596 (5) - new combo no.
02:10:841 (1) - unrankable spinner, at least auto mod must get bonus of 2000 to make it rankable no. no more explain...

nice, but some of the streams in Insane diff are hard to read
Or I should change the diff name to [CoLazy Hou] orz

STAR anyways

1. [Impossiblexu's Easy]难度的Stack Leniency是0.5,其他3个难度是0.6，我没记错的话这个应该要统一的
2. Spice Wolf TV animation OST Music of Wolf and这些没必要加到tag里吧,都包含太广没有特指性啊,Spice Wolf这些在source里有的更不用加进去了

1. 我注意到这个难度好像没用到自定义音效,跟其他难度听起不太一样,为什么不用呢?

1. 01:34:615 (1) - slider开头和结尾换下位置感觉好些,test的时候总会觉得现在的结尾处那才是开始o.o

1. 01:19:049 (7-11) - 哎哟,有点乱 *_*不太看得清
2. 01:22:587 (1-10) - ^
3. 02:10:841 (S) - 这个spinner是unrankable的,太短了
4. 02:21:030 (4) - New combo? 因为这里开始jump
5. 02:39:426 (2,3) - New combo? 不规则spacing ._.

Colin Hou wrote:

Arusha Shuna wrote:

02:10:841 (1) - unrankable spinner, at least auto mod must get bonus of 2000 to make it rankable no. no more explain...[/notice]

Breeze wrote:

[General]

1. [Impossiblexu's Easy]难度的Stack Leniency是0.5,其他3个难度是0.6，我没记错的话这个应该要统一的
   done 貌似某天在群里误人了 Orz
2. Spice Wolf TV animation OST Music of Wolf and这些没必要加到tag里吧,都包含太广没有特指性啊,Spice Wolf这些在source里有的更不用加进去了
   其实我也不想加,具体看这个帖子的第一个回复 Orz 现在就保留OST好了

[Normal]

1. 我注意到这个难度好像没用到自定义音效,跟其他难度听起不太一样,为什么不用呢? 这个原因和xxheroxx的红线Mod一样, 改offset弄出来的...o_0``

[Hard]

1. 01:34:615 (1) - slider开头和结尾换下位置感觉好些,test的时候总会觉得现在的结尾处那才是开始o.o OD很低 这个骗retry的地方还是留着吧 :3否则太送分了

[Insane]

1. 01:19:049 (7-11) - 哎哟,有点乱 *_*不太看得清
2. 01:22:587 (1-10) - ^
   newcombo做了下变动 应该会好读点 :)
   
3. 02:10:841 (S) - 这个spinner是unrankable的,太短了 我还是改掉好了 233 （群众纷纷表示...）
4. 02:21:030 (4) - New combo? 因为这里开始jump
5. 02:39:426 (2,3) - New combo? 不规则spacing ._.
   改掉了~

nice map
star

Arusha Shuna wrote:

02:10:841 (1) - unrankable spinner, at least auto mod must get bonus of 2000 to make it rankable no. no more explain...[/notice]

you sure about this? It's crucial for ranking you know, one "unrankable" spinner can make the whole map unrankable (also some BATs may rant about this :/)

ok, i don't have the rights to change your mind. this is your map, not mine. good luck though ;)

P.S. : do NOT kudosu this post, thank you very much

mtmcl wrote:

Bub

Mafiamaster wrote:

Lol, sounds like video game town music~

Ranked!