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Kozato Yuzuki - Rainy Beauty -Hard edit- [OsuMania]

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Julie
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Julie
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on February 8, 2015 at 4:52:14 PM

Artist: Kozato Yuzuki
Title: Rainy Beauty -Hard edit-
Source: BMS
Tags: KawaEE beatmania konami
BPM: 132
Filesize: 5322kb
Play Time: 02:41
Difficulties Available:
  1. Another+ - 7Key (4.93 stars, 2491 notes)
  2. Beginner - 7Key (1.16 stars, 382 notes)
  3. Hyper - 7Key (2.9 stars, 1253 notes)
  4. Kawa's Another - 7Key (4.19 stars, 2267 notes)
  5. Normal - 7Key (1.92 stars, 641 notes)
Download: Kozato Yuzuki - Rainy Beauty -Hard edit-
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Another by KawaEE - Done
Last edited by Julie , edited 2 times in total.
Lokovodo
463 posts
Joined December 2012
Lokovodo
Really good song. Great charting have a couple stars.
Remillion Cross
522 posts
Joined October 2012
Remillion Cross
Hello, because you and me are so lucky, i will mod your mapset ^^ (btw i want to clearing my mod req so.. )
Sorry for a little late btw ;-; i was working and glad i can back to home earlier so i have much time for modding.

Note that some suggestion may changing your style a little bit, so you can freely ignore these mods

[General]
Don't put a kiai section/timing in this 00:16:355 - to 00:30:900, it don't really needed/necessary
Everything is okay, BG good, Metadata also good

[Another+]
00:15:900 (15900|2) - move to 1st column, idk i just find it more catchy (also it my be fit with the 1st piano pitch)
00:16:810 (16810|4) - i hate to suggest about this, but move it to 6th column
00:17:037 (17037|0,17037|3) - move to 4th and 7th column, for pitch relevancy
00:17:264 (17264|1,17264|5) - move to 1st and 5th column, same reason ^

00:19:310 - i love the way you map in this section, but it's not really balance so..
00:19:310 (19310|3) - move to 1st column (i strongly suggest you with this)
00:19:650 (19650|3) - move to 2nd column (it's not really recomennded so you can ignore this, but it still follow the pitch as long as it isn't reversed)

00:26:582 (26582|3) - fine i will keep your style, only move this to 3rd column for balance pattern
00:29:082 (29082|2,29082|1,29082|5,29082|3,29082|6) - sorry but i don't heard any hard/big beat sound. Consider to delete one of them (also, the sound keep same as the next pattern)
00:32:719 - i also hate about consistent thingies, but it looks strange when you only put one note in here. add one circle in any column you want.
00:34:423 - add a circle, if you want (i suggest you to put in 5th column, or 4th and move the 00:34:310 (34310|3) - in 5th column)
00:38:173 (38173|5) - i don't find any strong sound here. consider to delete this (actually i just recommend 3 since it don't even have a cymbal/finish sound, but 4 seems okay)

00:39:991 - same in 00:32:719 -
00:40:900 - add a circle in 7th column, looksss better and fit with the next patterns
I don't understand, you put even 5 notes in 00:38:173 - but you just only put 3 in 00:45:446 - that had a cymbal/finish sound. Add one in this, don't worry it won't ruin your pattern
00:44:537 (44537|6,44594|5,44650|4,44764|5,44821|4,44878|3) - change the stream into 1/6 stream
01:13:628 (73628|6,73685|5,73741|4,73855|5,73912|4,73969|3) - ^
00:59:991 - add one note ( you might consider to move the note in a middle to 5th column, and put this to 3rd column)

01:01:810 - add one circle in 3rd column
01:09:082 - add one circle in 7th column
01:14:537 - yes, you need one circle in the 6th column because the pattern really needs at least 4 notes in every finish/cymbal sounds

02:06:810 - i think you might missing one more note. add note at 6th column, looks better
02:08:741 - why you just put one notes at this ? the sound wasn't different with the previous patterns. add one notes in anycolumn you want
02:08:969 - same ^

02:11:128 - missing note here ?
02:12:719 - i recommend you to add one notes in 5th column

Eh.. you make me remember someone when looking your style mapping /w\

[Kawaii's Another]
00:45:162 (45162|2) - considering to a pitch, move this note to 5th column
00:57:946 (57946|2) - the end of slider, should be at 00:58:173 - you might be ruined your style because this

01:13:628 (73628|0,73703|1,73779|2,73855|0,73931|1,74006|2) - Ctrl+J for a right pitch
You might be move this 01:14:082 (74082|0) - to 3rd column

01:43:173 (103173|3,103173|0,103249|1,103249|4,103325|5,103325|2) - Ctri+J for a right pitch
Move 01:43:400 (103400|3) - to any column you want

01:47:150 - add a note at 6th column. it really needs here since you do the same thing in 01:46:923 (106923|5,106923|6) -
01:50:560 - same here. add in 1st column
01:50:787 - same here. add in 3rd column
01:54:423 - same here. add in 6th column

01:58:173 - since you add 3 in every beat or kick, you might be add one more note in here, for cymbal/finish.
02:10:900 (130900|3) - it don't really neccesary since it's same as 02:11:128 - and the next pattern. delete it

02:27:719 - dont just leave them only two, since it's really high beat and also had a cymbal sound. add two notes in 1st and 3rd column

You might be check for you consistency in every 1/1 beat. Use the 2 for usual beat, and 3 for a kick beat

[Hyper]
OD change to 7 or 7.5

00:19:991 (19991|3) - move to 5th column
00:27:264 (27264|3) - move to 5th column
00:44:537 (44537|6,44594|5,44650|4,44764|0,44821|1,44878|2) - use 1/6 stream in here, not 1/8
00:59:991 - you really need to add one circle in 4th column (actually i prefer 4 notes for finish since you using BMS style, but well.. 3 seems okay)
01:13:628 (73628|0,73685|1,73741|2,73855|6,73912|5,73969|4) - use 1/6 stream in here, not 1/8
01:14:196 (74196|1,74253|2) - move them one or two column to the right for a litlle better readability

01:14:537 - add one notes for represent cymbal, i suggest you to add in 3rd or 7th column
01:47:264 (107264|1) - delete this for consistency
02:34:537 - put one more circle at 1st column (since there is not beat sound, 2 is permitted for cymbal pattern)
02:41:582 (161582|0,161658|1,161734|2) - wrong pitch, ctrl+J

[Normal]
00:37:264 (37264|6) - looks strange and i didn't get it, push it to 00:37:378 - at the same column.
00:38:060 - add one circle in 3rd column, it looks fit with the song, rather and leave it empty
00:41:128 (41128|0) - move to 2nd or 3rd column since the pitch is not same as 00:39:537 (39537|0) -
00:59:991 - sorry but i disagree with your choice for leaving this pattern empty. At least 1 or two notes are very strongly needed in this time

01:06:355 (66355|6) - same as the above, move to 01:06:469 -
01:07:150 - add one circle in 3rd column
01:10:219 (70219|6) - move to 3rd column, and move 01:10:446 (70446|0) - to 7th column
01:13:628 - missing note ? add one circle at 5th column, i strongly recommended about this

01:54:196 (114196|2) - move to 2nd column

I love the climax that you made in this diff <3

[Beginner]
00:06:355 (6355|5,6810|5,7264|2,7719|2) - wrong pitch, Ctrl+J
00:09:082 (9082|5,9537|5,9991|1,10446|1) - wrong pitch, Ctrl+J
00:10:900 (10900|0,11355|0) - move both of them to 4th or 5th column
00:11:810 (11810|6,12037|1,12264|5) - Ctrl + H, and move 00:12:491 (12491|0) - to 5th column

01:15:446 (75446|2) - you should move this to 6th column based on a piano pitch relevancy
01:15:900 (75900|5) - move to 5th column, same reason too
01:19:537 (79537|0,79991|5) - ctrl+H
01:25:900 (85900|1,86355|5) - move to 1st and 3rd colum respectively, plus move 01:26:810 (86810|0) - to 5th column, for PR

01:47:264 (107264|4) - move to 3rd column for PR
01:50:900 (110900|5) - move to 2nd column for PR
01:54:537 (114537|4) - move to 3rd column for PR

01:59:991 - you should add note to make the newbies doesn't confuse with your pattern. add in 4th column
02:09:991 (129991|0) - based on pitch relevancy, move this to 7th column
02:27:037 - i recommend you to add a note in this section, but don't use jacks here.

Anyway, thanks for introducing me to this song, it's really nice and joyful. You also mapped it quite well~
good luck~!
schwarzvgrune
1,214 posts
Joined April 2014
schwarzvgrune
request from t/265133&start=0

general
decrease SFX to 10 - 30% you don't use custom hitsound so better to not use it at all except for some parts.
the cymbal sound is disturbing when you mix it with the piano sound at the beginning for example, and also at other parts


Normal
SPOILER
00:07:491 (7491|4,7946|4) - drag to right place at 6 follow the pitch better, or dont need to change if you're actually following the left hand of the piano (the bass). but if that's the case there is inconsistency with your pattern because you're combining both, but omitting one or the other on some parts.

so i don't know which one do you want to decide? same issues here
00:07:491 (7491|4,7946|4) -
00:09:310 (9310|6,9764|6) -
00:11:128 (11128|4,11582|4) -
00:14:764 (14764|4,15219|4) -

00:45:446 - until 00:57:946 -

you can add the beat pattern just to make it more difficult on that part, thus making the overall difficulty more balanced (whole normal rather than NM with some 'easy' part.
example
http://puu.sh/fDucT/8524cbc465.jpg

00:47:037 (47037|4) - move to 2, you're following the flute, it has the same pitch with the next LN
00:47:946 (47946|3) - to 1, same reason as ^^^
00:50:673 (50673|4) - to 2 ^
00:51:582 (51582|3) - ^ (placement after this you can adjust accordingly based on my suggestion above, you understand what i mean)
00:54:310 (54310|5,55219|3) -

01:57:719 - why 3? the sound is soft, no reason to use 3. use 2 instead



01:59:764 (119764|4,120673|4) - same reason as 00:47:037 (see description above^^^^)
02:03:400 (123400|4,124310|4) - ^

02:06:128 (126128|2) - flute is still sustained why a note here？
drag the LN
http://puu.sh/fDuBd/5166af4658.jpg

02:07:037 (127037|6,127946|2) - same reason as 00:47:037 (see description above^^^^)


02:41:355 - i can understand that its 3 because its the very end eventhough its still soft. and you have the same pattern with earlier one that i commented upon. so you can use 2 for that preceeding one and still use 3 for this


this is all for now
Cherry Blossom
3,185 posts
Joined October 2011
Cherry Blossom
Hello Julie.
Metadata is wrong, Artist must be : kozato
Kozato Yuzuki is his blog/soundcloud etc name.
And, this version was reworked, it's not the original one. So, you should remove BMS from source and add it into tags. You can also add "BOF2009" in tags.

The orginal version from BOF2009 is :

I'm just referring to this link : http://manbow.nothing.sh/event/event.cg ... 9&event=60
Danielslz9
222 posts
Joined April 2014
Danielslz9
Column Format
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

[Beginner]
SPOILER
In the beginning The column 4 is empty
00:09:991 Move 4
00:10:446 The same
00:32:719 (32719|4) - Move to 7
01:01:355 (61355|4) - Move to 5
01:01:810 (61810|2) - Move to 2
01:01:810 (61810|2) - Move to 2
01:09:082 (69082|2) - Move to 5

[Hyper]
SPOILER
I am a little concerned about the density in this diff

00:03:628 (3628|2,4082|2) - Move to 2
00:15:673 http://puu.sh/fFot1/0d4cc85076.jpg
00:22:719 http://puu.sh/fFpfN/af9a651ec5.jpg
01:16:355 http://puu.sh/fFqIR/3004a124c7.jpg
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01:46:355 Change this part
It's harder that Kawa's Another
http://puu.sh/fFrld/b152587cb3.jpg
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