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M4M

[Insane]
00:24:294 (6) - 去掉?
01:01:034 (4,1) - 往下放一点点
01:02:172放个note跟01:01:983 (2) - 叠一起
01:13:946 (2) - 叠到01:12:996 (6) - 去

[Hard]
00:24:293 (4) - 去掉
00:47:172 (3,1) - Blanket?现在看起来怪怪的
00:30:464 (2) - 弄♂弯一点
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2555769

开头的soft-clap听起来好怪

[Normal]
kiai开头没对齐时间轴
01:04:262 (1) - 到01:07:870 (2) - 的节奏感觉怪怪的

[Easy]
01:27:806 (3) - 结尾的音量调低点?

神图摸不动
摸图都能被新人爆
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[Insane]
00:24:294 (6) - 去掉? ok
01:01:034 (4,1) - 往下放一点点
01:02:172放个note跟01:01:983 (2) - 叠一起 不了,overmap
01:13:946 (2) - 叠到01:12:996 (6) - 去

[Hard]
00:24:293 (4) - 去掉
00:47:172 (3,1) - Blanket?现在看起来怪怪的 fixed
00:30:464 (2) - 弄♂弯一点 ok
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2555769

开头的soft-clap听起来好怪 还好吧

[Normal]
kiai开头没对齐时间轴 fixed
01:04:262 (1) - 到01:07:870 (2) - 的节奏感觉怪怪的 跟的是鼓音啊

[Easy]
01:27:806 (3) - 结尾的音量调低点?

ken2010123 wrote:

新人第一次mod圖~請多指教

General

  1. 整個地圖做的很不錯,特別Insane難度玩著很舒服。
  2. 建議combo顏色換成這種 我之后会换,不过我再想想怎么配会更好看点,
    [Colours]
    Combo1: 192,68,192
    Combo2: 255,68,68
    Combo3: 255,128,68
    Combo4: 255,255,85
    Combo5: 96,255,68
    Combo6: 0,128,255
  3. 預覽點換成01:03:312 - 如何?fixed 其实是之前换了mp3 offest变了

Easy


  • 01:04:262 (1) - 換成折返滑條並取代01:05:781 (2) -
    01:06:539 (3,1) - 順便把這兩個的位置變動一下

    01:17:933 (1,2) - 這兩個換成一個滑條
    01:19:071 - 加一個圓圈
滑条不要太多,会被叫re的

Normal


  • 00:33:123 (2,3,4) - 三個note同位置容易看錯,變成類似這樣會好點

    00:43:376 (2,3,4) - 這裡同上,不要遮掩
    00:53:629 (2) - 換成二分一拍的滑條 不想在加滑条了..
    01:20:781 (3,4) - 換成彎滑條 不换也行就不改了
    01:27:805 (3) - 這裡換成兩個四分一拍的滑條 ok
1/2遮我觉得还行,看看后面摸怎么说,

Hard


  • 00:15:464 - 這段綠線的音量調到40%
    00:19:261 - 加個圓圈 节奏不想太满
    00:19:261 (2,3,4) - 這裡就改成類似這樣

    00:21:539 - 加個圓圈
    00:30:274 - 同上
    00:39:767 - 這段綠線的音量調到40%
    01:03:122 - 綠線的offset設成01:03:312 - 只是為了和其他難度相同,其實影響也不大 改了
    01:16:793 (2,3) - 換成一個滑條 作为hard我觉得不用也行
    01:17:552 (5,6) - 同上
    01:20:210 (4) - 換成彎滑條 不了

others fixed

Insane


  • 00:08:059 (1) - 滑條弄彎一點
    00:14:039 - 加個圓圈和前後兩個做成三連 overmap
    00:39:957 (1,2) - 換成一個滑條 00:40:337 (2) - 这里跟鼓的

    01:02:553 (4) - 這個遮掩位容易被坑,移到X:216 Y:128會好點 还行 不改丽
    01:05:781 (3) - 滑條再弄彎一點,免得超出屏幕太多 我觉得不档血条的话就行
    01:20:211 (3) - 換成彎滑條 keep
    01:24:389 (4) - 滑條彎曲角度可以大一點
    01:25:528 (1) - 同樣換成彎滑條
updated
thxs mod :)
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[General]
◎ make kiai time to same.
◎ recommend inherited point make same all diffs.
◎ and how about make volume make very low at 01:28:375?

[Easy]

CS-1? just suggestion

◎ 00:33:882 (1) - i think finish isn't need that. i recommend remove finish.
◎ 01:01:984 (2,3) - it`s too hard for beginner. how about make just one slider? example
◎ 01:04:261 (4) - expand slider at 01:05:210.

[Normal]

◎ 00:11:097 (3,4) - make blanket this.
◎ 00:49:072 (1) - remove finish at front.
◎ 01:30:000 - that inherited point keep to no purpose. move to 01:28:375

[Hard]

◎ 00:04:641 (4) - why that suddenly use normal clap? change hitsound plz~
◎ 00:07:679 (5) - ^
◎ 00:10:907 (7) - remove clap.
◎ 00:13:755 (5) - ^^

[Insane]

◎ 00:20:021 (1,2,3) - make same distance. it`s look not good.
◎ 00:24:199 (5,6,7) - ^
◎ 00:28:946 (5) - move to x:76 y:196. than looking good this.
◎ 01:20:781 (1,2,3) - ^^

Good luck for the Rank~ ;)
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Updated

[Ranger] wrote:



> <
[General]
◎ make kiai time to same.
◎ recommend inherited point make same all diffs.
◎ and how about make volume make very low at 01:28:375?
ALL FIXED so thxs!
[Easy]

CS-1? just suggestion 2 is so big ,i thnk cs become to 2.5 better ;)

◎ 00:33:882 (1) - i think finish isn't need that. i recommend remove finish. ok
◎ 01:01:984 (2,3) - it`s too hard for beginner. how about make just one slider? ok example
◎ 01:04:261 (4) - expand slider at 01:05:210. uh, wanna to keep rhythm and DS

[Normal]

◎ 00:11:097 (3,4) - make blanket this.
◎ 00:49:072 (1) - remove finish at front.
◎ 01:30:000 - that inherited point keep to no purpose. move to 01:28:375
ALL FIXED
[Hard]

◎ 00:04:641 (4) - why that suddenly use normal clap? change hitsound plz~
◎ 00:07:679 (5) - ^
wanna flow different drumbeat
◎ 00:10:907 (7) - remove clap.
◎ 00:13:755 (5) - ^^
why? there have a drum
[Insane]

◎ 00:20:021 (1,2,3) - make same distance. it`s look not good.
◎ 00:24:199 (5,6,7) - ^
◎ 00:28:946 (5) - move to x:76 y:196. than looking good this.
◎ 01:20:781 (1,2,3) - ^^
ALL FIXED
Good luck for the Rank~ ;)
thanks mod! :)
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来晚了点orz

General

一如既往的中(没)规(啥)中(问)矩(题),有些间距没一致

combo color可以试着搞搞好ww

Insane

开头加个转盘如何?

od可以试试+1或者0.5,现在的acc太容易打了orz

00:06:351 (4,1,2,3) - 这里看不出明确的梗,间距也不统一。。。建议23 ctrl+G一下,摆个跳梗就会好很多

00:11:857 (3,4,5) - 这里5可以往下一点,统一间距嘛

00:12:616 (1,2,3) - 前面既然有折返跳,这里也正好摆一个呗w

00:13:946 (5,1,2,3) - 三角跳没对齐是我的错觉么。。。以及突然双倍间距有点坑啊

00:30:085 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - 这里是不是梗呢。。。是梗的话感觉很奇怪,不是的话间距又不统一。。。思考

01:02:363 (3,4) - 第一次打断在这里,有点突然就是了orz

kiai我倒觉得没啥问题,最后:

01:28:375 (6) - 为啥不摆在01:27:806 (3) - 的位置呢

Hard

妈的啥也摸不出来,全程ds+blanket无可指摘,其实可以大胆些的

Normal

00:03:502 (1,2,3) - flow不太舒服。。。而且不好看orz

00:06:539 (1,2,3) - 还是flow的问题。。。我觉得normal可能比ins更需要flow吧

00:23:249 (1,2,3) - 这个flow...真心感觉不好

基本都是flow的问题,不多书了w

Easy

感觉低难度的flow有点小问题比如这里

00:30:844 (1,2,3) -

00:36:920 (1,2,3) -

基本类似这样的。。。问题不大啦不过果然还是flow爽点比较好



整体挺好啊,快rank了吧11111

不过榻榻米啊。。。有机会可以试试有意思一点的作图方式嘛www
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GGFFQQ55 wrote:

来晚了点orz 没事啦
General

一如既往的中(没)规(啥)中(问)矩(题),有些间距没一致 ;w;

combo color可以试着搞搞好ww 恩我还在想怎么配比较好

Insane

开头加个转盘如何? 不了,红线已经定了而且也不怎么想加

od可以试试+1或者0.5,现在的acc太容易打了orz +0.5

00:06:351 (4,1,2,3) - 这里看不出明确的梗,间距也不统一。。。建议23 ctrl+G一下,摆个跳梗就会好很多 ok

00:11:857 (3,4,5) - 这里5可以往下一点,统一间距嘛 ok

00:12:616 (1,2,3) - 前面既然有折返跳,这里也正好摆一个呗w ok

00:13:946 (5,1,2,3) - 三角跳没对齐是我的错觉么。。。以及突然双倍间距有点坑啊 还行

00:30:085 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - 这里是不是梗呢。。。是梗的话感觉很奇怪,不是的话间距又不统一。。。思考 是啊,配合voca摆的,打着也挺爽就不改丽w

01:02:363 (3,4) - 第一次打断在这里,有点突然就是了orz changed

kiai我倒觉得没啥问题,最后:

01:28:375 (6) - 为啥不摆在01:27:806 (3) - 的位置呢 changed

Hard

妈的啥也摸不出来,全程ds+blanket无可指摘,其实可以大胆些的 orz

Normal

00:03:502 (1,2,3) - flow不太舒服。。。而且不好看orz

00:06:539 (1,2,3) - 还是flow的问题。。。我觉得normal可能比ins更需要flow吧

00:23:249 (1,2,3) - 这个flow...真心感觉不好

基本都是flow的问题,不多书了w

Easy

感觉低难度的flow有点小问题比如这里

00:30:844 (1,2,3) -

00:36:920 (1,2,3) -

基本类似这样的。。。问题不大啦不过果然还是flow爽点比较好


NM EZ 改了些,毛病不大我先不改了DS变改超麻烦呀 ;w;


整体挺好啊,快rank了吧11111 www

不过榻榻米啊。。。有机会可以试试有意思一点的作图方式嘛www

再看吧,我觉得把基础打扎实点在浪才不会被人喷
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Updated
posted
Omg TT MOUSE!!!!!!




General
  1. about kiai start time, it's should be 01:04:261 - here
  2. if haven't any BG then disabled in Normal, Hard, Insane diffs
  3. BG must be at a maximum of 1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9. seem 1366x683 check this
  4. didn't set combo colours, how about add combo colours for match with BG? go to check them



Easy
  1. how about HP-1,becuz Easy diff has same HP with Normal diff also for some balance
  2. 00:06:539 (1) - add newcombo here, for consistency
  3. 01:16:413 (4,1) - how about swap newcombo here? and if you have that then add newcombo here 01:19:452 (4) - it would be easier catch to newbar's rhythm

    about hitsound, why didn't add soft additions clap on D:C1 part easy diff? like Insane. i think 00:31:603 - 00:33:122 - there are is clap place anyway it's up to you



Normal
  1. nothing to say



Hard
  1. even here



Insane
  1. 01:05:781 (3) - i think this slider end is offscreen, you must check this. if you can avoid touch HP bar
  2. 01:03:502 (5) - how about add newcombo here? there is have some velocity and it would be easier to read some 5/4 gap here 01:02:932 -
  3. 01:27:616 (1,3) - swap newcombo here, if you put newcombo fit as pattern then http://puu.sh/f5MxR/d03ed8d9f7.jpg it's right


sorry poor mod orz, i don't want break mapper's style and seem your map is good :D
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mod thxs! penguin san > <
ALL FIXED ,Updated
posted

[General]
00:03:502 - 这绿线去了 没用...
Soft clap 感觉并不适合这个歌啊..
[Easy]
00:46:034 (4) - 这个滑条好丑而且没啥意义...建议就用普通的三点滑条好了 毕竟easy弄整洁点也好
01:26:667 (2,3) - 感觉不如换成一个转盘正好你ez里也没转盘 放一堆滑条在这里看的也有点挤..
不是很美观另外感觉这个diff也不是很有必要 把N换成cs3就可以了啊..
[Normal]
作为normal还是建议cs4..
00:15:653 (1,2,3) - 这里和后面节奏都相似但是为什么只有这里空了 我觉得最好后面也一起空不然把这里节奏也map满一些我觉得好点
00:20:211 (4,1) - 交换nc
00:33:123 (2,3,4) - 按你这个set的话我建议normal副歌部分外还是别用1/2的节奏...不然感觉不太好 可能有点难..实在要这样摆的话建议移开 低难度还是别stack
00:35:401 (1,2) - 也是建议移开
00:43:376 (2,3,4) - ^
00:52:109 - 这里那声finish好吵 感觉没必要 建议去了
01:14:895 (1,2) - 没blanket好 调一下
[Hard]
00:24:008 (2,3,4) - 感觉这里移开比较好 不要stack..
00:09:388 (1,2) - hard用1/4三连问题并不大关键这里好像没1/4的音你这个有点overmap我感觉不太好 感觉用1/2的节奏可以了...
00:26:856 (2,3,4) - 日文版这里没vocal了哦...感觉也有点overmap
00:48:691 (2,1) - 有点太近了 移开点呗
00:57:995 - 这里不加个圈跟一下音乐嘛
01:04:071 - ^
01:17:932 (1,3) - 好像没stack好
[Insane]
00:07:110 (4,5,6) - 这里的三连打着有点违和 建议还是去了
00:46:793 - 这里感觉也没理由空啊...

哎 感觉我们对节奏想法差别比较大 所以没写多少主观的东西了...还是祝早日飞
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ZZHBOY wrote:


[General]
00:03:502 - 这绿线去了 没用... ok
Soft clap 感觉并不适合这个歌啊.. 还行啊
[Easy]
00:46:034 (4) - 这个滑条好丑而且没啥意义...建议就用普通的三点滑条好了 毕竟easy弄整洁点也好 ok
01:26:667 (2,3) - 感觉不如换成一个转盘正好你ez里也没转盘 放一堆滑条在这里看的也有点挤.. 这样前面的slider也得去要不然跟转盘离太近unrankable
不是很美观另外感觉这个diff也不是很有必要 把N换成cs3就可以了啊.. 三个diff不好看 ╭(╯^╰)╮
[Normal]
作为normal还是建议cs4.. 感觉太小...
00:15:653 (1,2,3) - 这里和后面节奏都相似但是为什么只有这里空了 我觉得最好后面也一起空不然把这里节奏也map满一些我觉得好点 补上了
00:20:211 (4,1) - 交换nc ok
00:33:123 (2,3,4) - 按你这个set的话我建议normal副歌部分外还是别用1/2的节奏...不然感觉不太好 可能有点难..实在要这样摆的话建议移开 低难度还是别stack
00:35:401 (1,2) - 也是建议移开
00:43:376 (2,3,4) - ^
00:52:109 - 这里那声finish好吵 感觉没必要 建议去了
01:14:895 (1,2) - 没blanket好 调一下
ok all fixed ↑
[Hard]
00:24:008 (2,3,4) - 感觉这里移开比较好 不要stack..
00:09:388 (1,2) - hard用1/4三连问题并不大关键这里好像没1/4的音你这个有点overmap我感觉不太好 感觉用1/2的节奏可以了... 我听了10几遍都觉得有音啊111
00:26:856 (2,3,4) - 日文版这里没vocal了哦...感觉也有点overmap
00:48:691 (2,1) - 有点太近了 移开点呗
00:57:995 - 这里不加个圈跟一下音乐嘛
01:04:071 - ^
01:17:932 (1,3) - 好像没stack好
other fixed
[Insane]
00:07:110 (4,5,6) - 这里的三连打着有点违和 建议还是去了 有音先保留不去了
00:46:793 - 这里感觉也没理由空啊... 试了下还是觉得原来好,因为每个note都加了w,跟前面一样嘛balabal111

哎 感觉我们对节奏想法差别比较大 所以没写多少主观的东西了...还是祝早日飞 :P:P
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[General]
  1. Pls add a video for this map


[Easy]
  1. 01:03:502 (3,1) - 其实这个我觉得会出现误导情况。毕竟Easy。要不然把 01:03:502 (3) - 这个滑条改成一个note
  2. 01:10:338 (1,2,3) - 我对简单的难度也不是很了解,这种摆法我只在normal见过。


[Normal]
  1. 00:11:097 (3,4) - 这种其实何必强制Blanket,DS都跳了.1不知道行不行
  2. 00:14:135 (3) - 这里也是其实有必要降低DS吗,我觉得前面的也是跳不知道会不会太大,1.0就够了 orz
  3. 00:18:692 (1,2) - 前面的几组和接下来的几组都是 2大白线才换次NC,这里怎么变成一组一个了?00:20:211 (1) - 把这个NC了吧
  4. 00:23:249 (1,3) - 这2个swap NC
  5. 00:26:667 (1,3) - 换下NC?
  6. 00:24:767 (3,1) - 这个和前面提到的一样,不知道这样跳下会不会有问题,如果是变速的话倒是知道ovo
  7. 00:27:047 (2,1) - 这一小段 DS 突然变1.1 跟音乐变能理解,可为啥 到 00:32:363 (1) - 这里又变成1.0了
  8. 00:34:642 (5,1) - 这种也是,提了DS然后 没blanket,可以得话还是blanket下好
  9. 00:36:920 (4,5) - 例如这种就没Blanket好 >_> Naziiii
  10. 00:38:059 (5,1) - ^
  11. 00:38:439 (1) - 听着这个Finish 比 Clap 好听
  12. 00:43:376 (2,3) - 换成滑条,3连不会太难吗
  13. 00:48:691 (5,1) - Nazi Blanket desu
  14. 01:13:946 (2,1) - 这个也是,跳1.4了

    其实我觉得Kiai段保持1.1 ~ 1.2就好了


[Hard]
  1. 把物件头 尾 note 全弄好了再叫我回来摸


[Insane]
  1. 00:11:857 (3,4) - 其实这个可以考虑下Ctrl+G
  2. 00:14:895 (4,1) - Nazi Blanket
  3. 屌!


End
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  • [General]
  1. Title : SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:mizuki - & Z (TV size)
    - Change to : SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:mizuki - &Z (TV size)
  2. add tags : Slaine Troyard アルドノア・ゼロ Season 2 Op Opening rock 2015
    also : ADLNOAH.ZERO must change to - Aldnoah.Zero

  • [ Easy]
  1. 00:03:502 (1) - Ctrl+G?
  2. 00:20:211 (1,2) - blanked ?
  3. 01:03:502 (3) - remove clap on the tail
  4. 01:11:856 (3,1) - blanked?
  • [ Normal]
  1. 00:18:692 (1) - move a bit?
  2. 00:22:870 (2,1) - blanked
  3. 00:26:667 (1,2) - ^
  4. 00:29:324 (1) - Ctrl+H and put same place as before
  5. 00:34:642 (5,1) - blanked
  6. 00:50:211 (2,3) - check DS
  7. 00:54:389 (3,1) - blanked
  8. 01:01:224 (1,2) - ^
  • [ Hard]
  1. 00:21:160 (2,3) - make same as 00:22:679 (2,3)

    ----- >
  2. 00:39:577 (2,1) - blanked
  3. 01:15:084 (2,3) - ^
  4. 01:28:375 (4) - remove clap .. add inherit line (green) change the audio to 20% same as normal
  • [ Insane]
  1. 00:03:882 (2) - add whistle ( head )
  2. 00:30:275 (6,7) - Ctrl+G
  3. 00:40:527 - add not
  4. 00:42:426 - ^
  5. 00:59:704 (1) - improve the slider?
  6. Change to 20% same as Normal



OK! That's all i can mod for now ;)
GL!TT Mouse :D
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Sky Trias wrote:

Hi! From -[Trias's STD Modding Queue]-

  • [General]
  1. Title : SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:mizuki - & Z (TV size)
    - Change to : SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:mizuki - &Z (TV size)
  2. add tags : Slaine Troyard アルドノア・ゼロ Season 2 Op Opening rock 2015
    also : ADLNOAH.ZERO must change to - Aldnoah.Zero


thxs,add somethings in tag
  • [ Easy]
  1. 00:03:502 (1) - Ctrl+G?
  2. 00:20:211 (1,2) - blanked ?
  3. 01:03:502 (3) - remove clap on the tail
  4. 01:11:856 (3,1) - blanked?

no change sorry :o
  • [ Normal]
  1. 00:18:692 (1) - move a bit?
  2. 00:22:870 (2,1) - blanked
  3. 00:26:667 (1,2) - ^
  4. 00:29:324 (1) - Ctrl+H and put same place as before
  5. 00:34:642 (5,1) - blanked
  6. 00:50:211 (2,3) - check DS
  7. 00:54:389 (3,1) - blanked
  8. 01:01:224 (1,2) - ^

fixed blanket and ds
  • [ Hard]
  1. 00:21:160 (2,3) - make same as 00:22:679 (2,3)

    ----- >
  2. 00:39:577 (2,1) - blanked
  3. 01:15:084 (2,3) - ^
  4. 01:28:375 (4) - remove clap .. add inherit line (green) change the audio to 20% same as normal

fixed
  • [ Insane]
  1. 00:03:882 (2) - add whistle ( head ) nope,
  2. 00:30:275 (6,7) - Ctrl+G keep
  3. 00:40:527 - add not ?
  4. 00:42:426 - ^ ?
  5. 00:59:704 (1) - improve the slider? fixed
  6. Change to 20% same as Normal ok



OK! That's all i can mod for now ;)
GL!TT Mouse :D

SoGa wrote:

[General]
  1. Pls add a video for this map


[Easy]
  1. 01:03:502 (3,1) - 其实这个我觉得会出现误导情况。毕竟Easy。要不然把 01:03:502 (3) - 这个滑条改成一个note fixed
  2. 01:10:338 (1,2,3) - 我对简单的难度也不是很了解,这种摆法我只在normal见过。 我觉得还行吧


[Normal]
  1. 00:11:097 (3,4) - 这种其实何必强制Blanket,DS都跳了.1不知道行不行
  2. 00:14:135 (3) - 这里也是其实有必要降低DS吗,我觉得前面的也是跳不知道会不会太大,1.0就够了 orz
  3. 00:18:692 (1,2) - 前面的几组和接下来的几组都是 2大白线才换次NC,这里怎么变成一组一个了?00:20:211 (1) - 把这个NC了吧
  4. 00:23:249 (1,3) - 这2个swap NC
  5. 00:26:667 (1,3) - 换下NC?
  6. 00:24:767 (3,1) - 这个和前面提到的一样,不知道这样跳下会不会有问题,如果是变速的话倒是知道ovo
  7. 00:27:047 (2,1) - 这一小段 DS 突然变1.1 跟音乐变能理解,可为啥 到 00:32:363 (1) - 这里又变成1.0了
  8. 00:34:642 (5,1) - 这种也是,提了DS然后 没blanket,可以得话还是blanket下好
  9. 00:36:920 (4,5) - 例如这种就没Blanket好 >_> Naziiii
  10. 00:38:059 (5,1) - ^
  11. 00:38:439 (1) - 听着这个Finish 比 Clap 好听
  12. 00:43:376 (2,3) - 换成滑条,3连不会太难吗
  13. 00:48:691 (5,1) - Nazi Blanket desu
  14. 01:13:946 (2,1) - 这个也是,跳1.4了

    其实我觉得Kiai段保持1.1 ~ 1.2就好了
    blanket and ds 都修了修


[Hard]
  1. 把物件头 尾 note 全弄好了再叫我回来摸


[Insane]
  1. 00:11:857 (3,4) - 其实这个可以考虑下Ctrl+G 那就不好玩丽
  2. 00:14:895 (4,1) - Nazi Blanket ok
  3. 屌!


End
thxs mod soga and sky trias :)

updated and added video
posted
[Insane]


00:12:996 (3) - ctrl+G?别的这样的节奏差不多的地方似乎都没有这样摆过反方向的flow

00:36:919 (1) - 这个滑条的话似乎不算太好看,与后面的2和3的距离不相等,而且中间的有个地方不太光滑,但是根据当时的vocal 来看的话是不太需要这样子的弯折的,感觉要放的话这个玩着最好也能放的彻底一点,或者就做一个比较光滑的S形状的

01:03:502 (1,2) - 这两个滑条的话感觉后面可以消音?

01:09:958 (6,1) - blanket

01:15:844 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 这一串摆成弧形再加大一点DS会好一些?

01:28:375 (4) - 感觉这里的音量不用削的这么凶,因为01:28:565 - 这里开始才算很明显的变小的,中间有一个小小的过渡,有一个比较快的减弱的过程,一下子20%的话感觉幅度比较大,30%到40%大概会好一点,01:28:375 - 这里可以再放个20%这样子,剩下三个难度应该也可以参考一下这个



[Hard]



00:30:464 (2) - 似乎没必要用这么个音效,而且音量也似乎有些太大,whistle的话感觉用一次就够了,用两次的话我觉得两个分开的note更好,比如在00:33:122 (6,7) - 00:36:539 (2,3) - 这里就是这么下的

00:35:020 (4,5,1) - 这里的blanket不太严格

01:15:843 (4) - 这个的折返点可以考虑往右下的方向移动一下,或者直接顺时针转30赌再放回原来地方,这样的话看起来更舒服而且flow也会好看一点,而且不影响和后面note的关系

[Normal]



AR5OD4?而且我觉得slider tick rate的话1就够用了

00:34:642 (2,3) - blanket似乎会好一点?



[Easy]



没玩过不会
posted

tm1209 wrote:

[Insane]


00:12:996 (3) - ctrl+G?别的这样的节奏差不多的地方似乎都没有这样摆过反方向的flow 还行吧,这种不卡手的话我就先不改了

00:36:919 (1) - 这个滑条的话似乎不算太好看,与后面的2和3的距离不相等,而且中间的有个地方不太光滑,但是根据当时的vocal 来看的话是不太需要这样子的弯折的,感觉要放的话这个玩着最好也能放的彻底一点,或者就做一个比较光滑的S形状的 fixed

01:03:502 (1,2) - 这两个滑条的话感觉后面可以消音? ok

01:09:958 (6,1) - blanket ok

01:15:844 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 这一串摆成弧形再加大一点DS会好一些? change

01:28:375 (4) - 感觉这里的音量不用削的这么凶,因为01:28:565 - 这里开始才算很明显的变小的,中间有一个小小的过渡,有一个比较快的减弱的过程,一下子20%的话感觉幅度比较大,30%到40%大概会好一点,01:28:375 - 这里可以再放个20%这样子,剩下三个难度应该也可以参考一下这个 之前是30改到20,先keep



[Hard]



00:30:464 (2) - 似乎没必要用这么个音效,而且音量也似乎有些太大,whistle的话感觉用一次就够了,用两次的话我觉得两个分开的note更好,比如在00:33:122 (6,7) - 00:36:539 (2,3) - 这里就是这么下的 ok

00:35:020 (4,5,1) - 这里的blanket不太严格 fixed

01:15:843 (4) - 这个的折返点可以考虑往右下的方向移动一下,或者直接顺时针转30赌再放回原来地方,这样的话看起来更舒服而且flow也会好看一点,而且不影响和后面note的关系 change

[Normal]



AR5OD4?而且我觉得slider tick rate的话1就够用了

00:34:642 (2,3) - blanket似乎会好一点?

all fixed

[Easy]



没玩过不会 ;w;
thxs mod ! updated
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Hi! From my Queue :)

[General]
  1. Hitsounds: It appears that normal-hitclap.wav is used for your Hard and Insane. To keep all difficulties consistent, I strongly advise to use them for the lower difficulties, as well.


[Normal]
  1. 00:17:173 (4) - Might want to curve the end of that slider a bit more, by moving that second-last node to x163 | y229 : http://puu.sh/g5jqE/2839464e5d.jpg
  2. 00:12:237 (4) - How about blanket with 00:11:097 (3)? Seems fitting
  3. 00:34:642 (2,3,4,5) - - Since the similar type of beat repeats itself for a number of times, you should continue the rhythm you have in the last measure, just like in 00:31:604 (2,3,4,5,6) - . I'd much rather you don't sway in your rhythm choices if there's nothing significant that gets changed.
  4. 01:01:224 (1) - I think the regular wave slider would be enough to meet your needs here: http://puu.sh/g5j5o/075ad4a0f3.jpg
  5. 00:12:616 (1,2,3) - Adjust these so that they become a blanket? Would fit nicely for aesthetics.


[Hard]
  1. 00:24:008 (2) - Spacing is really awkward here, since you're under 1.0x, which makes it difficult to hit this circle. I would suggest stacking it on top of 00:24:198 (3) or place it where it doesn't reach under 1.0x spacing.
    1. 00:26:286 (1) - This, too ^
    2. 00:36:539 (2,3) - :3
  2. 01:08:818 (1) - Remove clap on the head, and use the finish instead for the proper emphasis. The double clap doesn't usually fit well on the large white tick, so if you want to emphasize that, a finish would be perfect.
  3. 01:09:198 (2) - Remove the clap on the head here as well, since the sound you're looking to use the clap on is at 01:09:008, and there isn't anything indicating the need for a clap on this object in question.
  4. 01:10:337 (1,2,3,4) - This section (and the next) sounds a lot different rhythmically instrument wise. In this case, I would do the following to fix the hitsounding:
    1. 01:10:907 (2) - Remove clap
    2. 01:10:337 (1) - Add clap on slider end
    3. 01:11:096 (3) - Remove the clap on the head and add one to the end instead.
    4. 01:11:666 (4) - Remove clap
  5. 01:11:856 (1,2,3) - Same as above, for the same pattern.
  6. 01:27:805 (3) - There's a 1/4 that's very apparent here, and it would be really cool if you reduce the slider to a 1/4 repeat, and then add another one after that, like this: http://puu.sh/g5nX9/4ffe87f7d7.jpg


[Insane]
  1. 00:03:502 (1,2) - I strongly suggest you start the Insane off with circles instead, mainly because these four beats are quite strong and circles allow for better emphasis. (Use 00:06:540 (1,2,3,4) - as an example)
  2. 00:10:337 (6) - You've been using 1/1 for this kind of rhythm except for here. Would suggest that you change it back to 1/1 for consistency. http://puu.sh/g5oMR/49d71d752b.jpg
  3. 00:12:236 (5) - Try something like this? I think it flows a lot nicer this way: http://puu.sh/g5oci/a3489e3a43.jpg
  4. 00:34:261 (2) - I think it would be really neat if you could copy 00:33:882 (1), rotate selection centre by 120-degrees, to make a more symmetrical pattern: http://puu.sh/g5oZs/7913dded7c.jpg
  5. 01:02:363 (3) - Weird spacing with respect to 01:01:984 (2). I would suggest increasing the spacing to avoid making this hard to read.
  6. 01:08:438 (5,6) - Just a suggestion; Why not set this up so that you create something like a linear structure? http://puu.sh/g5pt9/b8d3110bf6.jpg


That's all I have~
Good luck!
posted

Giralda wrote:

Hi! From my Queue :)



[Normal]
00:12:237 (4) - How about blanket with 00:11:097 (3)? Seems fitting Hmm.. i wanna keep it, cuz some modder say blanket it or needn' before you post
[Insane]
00:10:337 (6) - You've been using 1/1 for this kind of rhythm except for here. Would suggest that you change it back to 1/1 for consistency. http://puu.sh/g5oMR/49d71d752b.jpg keep ,fine for me ,sorry;w;

That's all I have~
Good luck!
Other fixed updated
thxs mod
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m4m

NO KD

Insane

  1. 01:27:996 (2,3) - ctrl+g here can be more interesting
  2. most part of this map is fine to me. thou the composing's still immature and has lots of space to improve. also, some hs' volume can be lighter than current ones.

Hard

  1. same with the hs mod as above. other stuff's fine to me.

Normal

  1. 00:57:427 (3) - arrange ds into same ones because this is a normal diff for noobs.

你给我的mod实在是太水了,无论这是能力还是态度导致的,我认为你没有尽力做到最好。

good luck.
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你给我的mod实在是太水了,无论这是能力还是态度导致的,我认为你没有尽力做到最好。
很抱歉 ,我已经补了一些mod,一时心急,总之对不起
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