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pishifat

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pishifat 2015-02-17T19:20:02+00:00

Yauxo wrote:
pishi (I think)
■ 00:11:992 (2,3) - more spacing? (to fit in with 00:12:540 (1,2,3) - 's movement) k
■ 00:16:238 (5) - I think ctrl+g has more swag ok
■ 00:19:526 (7) - 472/200 (it even remains the stackthingy) it does
■ 00:26:923 (2,3,4) - can u do dis? Adds more "intense" dropoff to next Slider and pretty much makes it feel more in sync with Slider 2 sss

■ 00:38:841 (5,6,7,8) - you couldve totally done something flowy like this shit flow is best flow™®

■ 00:42:677 (4,5) - let these have the same spacing as 00:42:403 (2,3) - (or the other way around) (because 00:43:772 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ) sasa
■ 00:49:937 (3,4,5) - more spacing because basically any other combo like this has more spacing? okkkkkkkkkk
■ 00:50:622 (2,3) - this? seems just as important as other points why is it blue ._.

■ 01:24:868 (1) - (part) idk if you want to have the NCs on this or if you want to move them, but I think it'd be better to have them on the object that's not directly related to the jumps before (and that has a break in it). Readability thing. seems weird but k. might change it back later if its bugging me too much
■ 01:32:677 (3,4) - that no-spacing-at-all makes it look like there's only 1/4 (or 1/3 1/6th in this case) time space. Also, you did it differently all the other times. scrub 01:43:772 (1,2) - all. i like stack still stacks r hot and htis part of the music is hot so es bien
■ 02:08:430 (1) - ghostnote slider endeded

ac8129464363

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ac8129464363 2015-02-18T00:52:48+00:00

hi i can barely play this at all but you asked me to mod it anyways so yolo

~~02:47:882 (1) - remap from here on~~

pishi:
01:17:745 (2) - this would be cooler higher up imo, like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2791527
01:22:814 (2) - would be cool if you didn't leave this inside the slider tail, it breaks the momentum, something like this would make a cool triangle https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2791533
01:32:677 (3,4) - these would be pretty sick if you blanketed them like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2791534
01:42:540 (2) - same thingy with momentum
01:44:183 (2) - ^ the reason i'm pointing it out is cuz the song is really fast and there's huge spacing all around it, so making the player move a bit more would be cool
02:08:567 (1) - not enough sound to justify a circle here imo, try a 1/6 slider like this for the gong-whatever sound http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2791541 or idk you could just not have a note there

mazzerin:
02:51:310 (1,2) - I'll only point this out once cuz you do it a lot. 1.0x spacing = same movement speed required as the sliders move, so making the spacing between these sliders less than 1.0x creates weird stop and start motion, which is especially odd at a bpm like this. so just space them at least 1.0x apart

02:54:739 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - please increase spacing looks funny right after the big jumps. it'll be far more fun with bigger spacing. this works 02:50:167 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -

03:08:310 (5,1) - 03:12:882 (5,1) - 03:26:596 (5,1) - etc. etc. I don't think these stacks work out so well, they're not fun to read or play and you force the player to stop for no real reason
03:17:596 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - same as before with spacing, pls increase
03:35:882 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^ and there's even slight overlaps too which look really meh
04:00:024 (2) - somewhere around here would be cooler https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2791550
04:10:096 (10,1) - kind of painful at this bpm but up to you i guess
04:24:167 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ok please make this a lot bigger, it's kind of annoying and unfun to play like this with the overlaps. you could also do straight lines
04:47:882 (1) - exaggerate the shape more https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2791556
05:11:667 (3,4,5,1) - I only hear a triple in the music
05:22:096 (4,1) - custom stack 4 and 1 on 2, it's more natural to play https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2791563
05:23:596 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - at this bpm? ;_; please don't

plz rank

Mazzerin

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Mazzerin 2015-02-18T10:45:35+00:00

deetz wrote:
mazzerin:
02:51:310 (1,2) - I'll only point this out once cuz you do it a lot. 1.0x spacing = same movement speed required as the sliders move, so making the spacing between these sliders less than 1.0x creates weird stop and start motion, which is especially odd at a bpm like this. so just space them at least 1.0x apart
uh it doesn't feel bad at all especially when there's low spacing only between 1/4s which are sliders, if more people think it's awful i'll consider changing i guess
02:54:739 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - please increase spacing looks funny right after the big jumps. it'll be far more fun with bigger spacing. this works 02:50:167 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
very true
03:08:310 (5,1) - 03:12:882 (5,1) - 03:26:596 (5,1) - etc. etc. I don't think these stacks work out so well, they're not fun to read or play and you force the player to stop for no real reason
ok moved the notes on top of the 5 note stacks to the sides so you don't have to stop for too long
03:17:596 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - same as before with spacing, pls increase
very true
03:35:882 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^ and there's even slight overlaps too which look really meh
very true
04:00:024 (2) - somewhere around here would be cooler https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2791550
why not
04:10:096 (10,1) - kind of painful at this bpm but up to you i guess
pain is good
04:24:167 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ok please make this a lot bigger, it's kind of annoying and unfun to play like this with the overlaps. you could also do straight lines
very true
04:47:882 (1) - exaggerate the shape more https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2791556
why not
05:11:667 (3,4,5,1) - I only hear a triple in the music
there are snare drums on blue ticks and some guitar things on the other ones
05:22:096 (4,1) - custom stack 4 and 1 on 2, it's more natural to play https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2791563
but theres a snare drum on blue tick and the guitar shred starts on white tick
05:23:596 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - at this bpm? ;_; please don't
oh yes

plz rank
yes

Ciyus Miapah

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Ciyus Miapah 2015-02-18T11:33:16+00:00

you requested M4M in pm in-game

01:02:266 (9,10) - increase this note distance, move to x172y64 can make that pattern easier to read (or do similiar like 01:08:841 (10,11) - )
01:12:540 (1,2) - this notes kinda confusing, but idk
01:42:540 (2,3) - make this pattern similiar to 01:35:964 (2,3) - or 01:48:978 (2,3) -
02:08:567 (1) - why not use finish?

03:04:167 (3,4,5) - why not stacking this notes?
02:56:739 (4) - NC this, keep some consistency from your previous NCs
03:00:739 (2) - why no use 3/4 slider? that one looks funny i think lol (then you can remove NC here 03:01:024 (1) - )
03:05:382 (10,11,12,13) - this stream have low sound, its like overmap (i suggest you end your stream in 03:05:310 - , then add 5s in 03:05:596 - )
03:05:310 (9) - NC here (because of some strong sound in there)
03:23:596 (2,2) - pffft, again? its okay if you think that will be good :3
03:37:810 (2,3,4) - delete 3, move slider 4 to 03:37:882 -, after that add reverse slider on that slider
03:40:524 (2) - better do circle stream than like this (or add circle in 03:40:524 - and move slider to 03:40:596 - , then remove 1 reverse arrow in your slider)
03:46:739 (1,2,3) - make this pattern same like 03:37:596 (1,2,3) -
03:51:882 - oh god, this streams can hurt people hands, incredible

04:10:024 (9,10,1) - triplet kinda weird spacing
04:14:167 (1,2,3,4) - better no whistle sound
05:08:167 (1,2,3,4) - you need to make this notes volume loud, its kinda inaudible little bit
05:08:453 - not sure about this part, but why this song have strong beats landed on blue ticks? its kinda weird things (have you try mapping and testplaying this landed on red and white ticks?), but i dont know that part sounds like 05:25:596 -
05:39:310 - oh god, this stream so cool lol

i think that's my tell, why pishifat's mapping part so good?

good luck!

Mazzerin

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Mazzerin 2015-02-18T12:58:26+00:00

Fort wrote:
you requested M4M in pm in-game

03:04:167 (3,4,5) - why not stacking this notes?
CAUSE IT LOOKS COOL and makes no difference in playing
02:56:739 (4) - NC this, keep some consistency from your previous NCs
but it's the same measure with 4 of those symphonic sound things just that i mapped drums instead of the 4th sound thing
03:00:739 (2) - why no use 3/4 slider? that one looks funny i think lol (then you can remove NC here 03:01:024 (1) - )
very true, i'll stick to them being consistently 3/4
03:05:382 (10,11,12,13) - this stream have low sound, its like overmap (i suggest you end your stream in 03:05:310 - , then add 5s in 03:05:596 - )
but it is clearly audible o.O
03:05:310 (9) - NC here (because of some strong sound in there)
why not
03:23:596 (2,2) - pffft, again? its okay if you think that will be good :3
very true
03:37:810 (2,3,4) - delete 3, move slider 4 to 03:37:882 -, after that add reverse slider on that slider
ok
03:40:524 (2) - better do circle stream than like this (or add circle in 03:40:524 - and move slider to 03:40:596 - , then remove 1 reverse arrow in your slider)
ok changed to the 2nd suggestion
03:46:739 (1,2,3) - make this pattern same like 03:37:596 (1,2,3) -
it already is like that one now but shorter reverse slider and 3/4 slider before the burst because there's no extra note on the blue tick on this burst
03:51:882 - oh god, this streams can hurt people hands, incredible
yes
04:10:024 (9,10,1) - triplet kinda weird spacing
yes because 3rd note is stronk
04:14:167 (1,2,3,4) - better no whistle sound
very true
05:08:167 (1,2,3,4) - you need to make this notes volume loud, its kinda inaudible little bit
changed from 45% to 80% should be good now
05:08:453 - not sure about this part, but why this song have strong beats landed on blue ticks? its kinda weird things (have you try mapping and testplaying this landed on red and white ticks?), but i dont know that part sounds like 05:25:596 -
the problem is that in the 05:08:453 section the snare drums/blast beats whatever are on blue ticks instead of red/white ticks, that's why i focused on them
05:39:310 - oh god, this stream so cool lol
yes

i think that's my tell, why pishifat's mapping part so good?
he is cat

good luck!
thx

pishifat

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pishifat 2015-02-19T19:16:44+00:00

ditz

deetz wrote:
~~02:47:882 (1) - remap from here on~~ hopefully

pishi:
01:17:745 (2) - this would be cooler higher up imo, like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2791527 kkkkkkkkkkk
01:22:814 (2) - would be cool if you didn't leave this inside the slider tail, it breaks the momentum, something like this would make a cool triangle https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2791533 cool
01:32:677 (3,4) - these would be pretty sick if you blanketed them like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2791534 sick
01:42:540 (2) - same thingy with momentum i actually think this one is k
01:44:183 (2) - ^ the reason i'm pointing it out is cuz the song is really fast and there's huge spacing all around it, so making the player move a bit more would be cool sssssasa
02:08:567 (1) - not enough sound to justify a circle here imo, try a 1/6 slider like this for the gong-whatever sound http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2791541 or idk you could just not have a note there starting a break with a slider end ew

frt

Fort wrote:
01:02:266 (9,10) - increase this note distance, move to x172y64 can make that pattern easier to read (or do similiar like 01:08:841 (10,11) - ) makes sense
01:12:540 (1,2) - this notes kinda confusing, but idk made it more confusing ty mazz
01:42:540 (2,3) - make this pattern similiar to 01:35:964 (2,3) - or 01:48:978 (2,3) - doesn't really work with the way i've got things arranged :/
02:08:567 (1) - why not use finish? cuz it's like a quiet finish and finish hitsounds are ear destruction so whistle is baby finish

i think that's my tell, why pishifat's mapping part so good? i am cat

robby250

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robby250 2015-02-24T05:09:29+00:00

The chart complements the music very well and it's one of the most epic beatmaps I've played. I'd mod but I've never modded before so idk how.

Cheers for making metal beatmaps though. It's nice to take a break from weeaboo trash once in a while.

Mazzerin

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Mazzerin 2015-02-24T13:30:50+00:00

robby250 wrote:
The chart complements the music very well and it's one of the most epic beatmaps I've played. I'd mod but I've never modded before so idk how.

Cheers for making metal beatmaps though. It's nice to take a break from weeaboo trash once in a while.

yes we need some metal rolling around here
thanks!

hehe

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hehe 2015-02-25T03:58:13+00:00

hello

02:51:596 (2,3,4,1) - apart from what deetz said about these sliders, the movement and flow just feels a bit too out of place. i suggested keeping these regular long sliders. here's why: http://i.imgur.com/N9B8lyd.jpg red dictates sliderball movement and green is the cursor movement of most people. i suggest maybe something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2820500 where there is plenty of cursor movement. alternatively, you can shorten these to 1/2 sliders to better accentuate the sound on the redticks. then you can even convert 02:52:167 (4) - into a stream.
02:55:882 (1,2,3) - same thing here, although more appropriately executed with hold-move-hold.
03:04:167 (3,4) - ?
04:10:024 (9,10) - i know your intention but this just isn't cool on a triple.
04:53:024 (1) - ugly, whenever your slider isn't a regular curve one, use minimum 2 grey points for a nicer curve. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2820523
05:06:739 (6) - split into 2 repeats or nc, you have 2 repeats that repeat a different number of times for the same combo, might get confusing.
05:17:024 (1,2) - doesn't fit
05:22:096 (4,1) - this isnt cool
05:25:024 (1) - i think it'll be better if you kept the stream equal DS from here since it isn't really a gradual change but a sudden one
05:47:739 (11,1) - 05:46:024 (11,1) - its weird how the jumps between your streams vary so much evern tho they're all 1/2

early on, the pattern could be organized much better. gets better later on but i still think there room for improvement. some empty triples here and there. otherwise good map.

pishifat

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pishifat 2015-02-25T04:03:09+00:00

applied nothing wow get good

also bg that doesn't have black bars on sides: https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/643 ... ickaxe.jpg

Chloe

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Chloe 2015-02-25T07:23:26+00:00

hi m4m

00:15:416 (1) - looks bad ;a; try closer a bit http://puu.sh/gbMkP/9a7c9835b9.jpg
00:23:225 (1) - ^
00:24:320 (2) - flows a bit uncomfortable, plz consider http://puu.sh/gbMsB/2bb75813b6.jpg
00:40:896 (4) - you'd better add a nc for more readable
00:47:471 (4) - ^
00:49:800 (2,3,4,5) - can't understand the placement here, for what? why 00:49:937 (3,4,5) - be a whole pattern and 00:49:800 (2) - is so far.... plz consider to make better sence instead of more sence
01:03:772 (5,6,7,8) - ^
01:14:183 (1) - try normal default whistle for volin this part?
04:47:882 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - a lots of normal stream spam here, could be more sence, you can see some patterns in kloyd/tsuka/skystar's maps
05:11:667 (3) - i just don't know why you use the smallest spacing in the most crazy part lol, plz increase and kill players
05:39:310 (1) - should set streams of spacing equal or bigger than fdfd's last part.

gl, nice hs work

ac8129464363

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ac8129464363 2015-02-25T14:09:04+00:00

Chloe wrote:
05:39:310 (1) - should set streams of spacing equal or bigger than fdfd's last part.

I have to disagree, it's way more dramatic like this imo

Mazzerin

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Mazzerin 2015-02-25T15:25:11+00:00

handsome wrote:
hello

02:51:596 (2,3,4,1) - apart from what deetz said about these sliders, the movement and flow just feels a bit too out of place. i suggested keeping these regular long sliders. here's why: http://i.imgur.com/N9B8lyd.jpg red dictates sliderball movement and green is the cursor movement of most people. i suggest maybe something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2820500 where there is plenty of cursor movement. alternatively, you can shorten these to 1/2 sliders to better accentuate the sound on the redticks. then you can even convert 02:52:167 (4) - into a stream.
changed to 3 3/4 sliders with bigger spacing+that stream thing you suggested
02:55:882 (1,2,3) - same thing here, although more appropriately executed with hold-move-hold.
y
03:04:167 (3,4) - ?
whatever changed into stack
04:10:024 (9,10) - i know your intention but this just isn't cool on a triple.
changed it to 03:05:739 (6,7,1) - spacing since no one complained about that
04:53:024 (1) - ugly, whenever your slider isn't a regular curve one, use minimum 2 grey points for a nicer curve. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2820523
oki
05:06:739 (6) - split into 2 repeats or nc, you have 2 repeats that repeat a different number of times for the same combo, might get confusing.
ok ncd
05:17:024 (1,2) - doesn't fit
moved
05:22:096 (4,1) - this isnt cool
IT IS COOL IT IS IT IS I SWEAR IT IS
05:25:024 (1) - i think it'll be better if you kept the stream equal DS from here since it isn't really a gradual change but a sudden one
ok
05:47:739 (11,1) - 05:46:024 (11,1) - its weird how the jumps between your streams vary so much evern tho they're all 1/2
derp literally never thought about the spacing between them made it normal
early on, the pattern could be organized much better. gets better later on but i still think there room for improvement. some empty triples here and there.
yea pishi remap pls nob
otherwise good map.
THANKS

Chloe wrote:
hi m4m

04:47:882 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - a lots of normal stream spam here, could be more sence, you can see some patterns in kloyd/tsuka/skystar's maps
changed the spacing a bit and the curves of the triples dont really know what you mean by sence
05:11:667 (3) - i just don't know why you use the smallest spacing in the most crazy part lol, plz increase and kill players
SURE
05:39:310 (1) - should set streams of spacing equal or bigger than fdfd's last part.
i talked to evilelvis and some other guys about it and they said its fine like it is now i think so too

gl, nice hs work tanks

hehe

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hehe 2015-02-26T03:37:00+00:00

05:52:382 (4) - ?

Mazzerin

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Mazzerin 2015-02-26T13:35:19+00:00

handsome wrote:
05:52:382 (4) - ?

huh that whole stream was with slightly different spacing for some reason, fixed now

pishifat

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pishifat 2015-02-26T20:07:03+00:00

chl

Chloe wrote:
hi m4m

00:15:416 (1) - looks bad ;a; try closer a bit http://puu.sh/gbMkP/9a7c9835b9.jpg they're the same as all the other shit stacks i have ._.
00:23:225 (1) - ^
00:24:320 (2) - flows a bit uncomfortable, plz consider http://puu.sh/gbMsB/2bb75813b6.jpg cool
00:40:896 (4) - you'd better add a nc for more readable seems readable enough as is idk
00:47:471 (4) - ^
00:49:800 (2,3,4,5) - can't understand the placement here, for what? why 00:49:937 (3,4,5) - be a whole pattern and 00:49:800 (2) - is so far.... plz consider to make better sence instead of more sence i dont understand it either i'm kind of bad
01:03:772 (5,6,7,8) - ^ this one actually made sense tho cuz stronger thing on 6. hitsound showed that to
01:14:183 (1) - try normal default whistle for volin this part? mazz does hitsounds
gl, nice hs work

Fatfan Kolek

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Fatfan Kolek 2015-02-26T20:50:12+00:00

01:33:498 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - I don't really like the shape of the stream here. Maybe try something like this? http://puu.sh/goFaM/193b451a06.jpg
01:34:320 (3) - This is pretty damn near to the bottom. It hits the error bar actually. D:
03:05:739 (6,7,1) - I think the flow is better if you set the tripple this way. http://puu.sh/goFjM/645ac5a728.jpg
05:08:167 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Wouldn't it fit more if you increase the spacing of this stream because of the following spacing?
05:23:810 (8) - Is this sightreadable? D:
05:39:382 (2) - 05:52:667 (8) - Considering that all these music parts are pretty epic, wouldn't more spacing emphasize it in a better way? Plus a kiai section maybe?

Not sure if this is Kudosu worthy, you decide. Cool map though, I enjoyed it!

Last edited by Fatfan Kolek 2015-03-06T10:30:36+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

AlexaBM

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AlexaBM 2015-02-28T17:00:36+00:00

very small irc, almost nothing was changed 'cause this is damn awesome

2015-02-28 18:49 AlexaBM: 03:41:596 (2,1) - (1) isn't visible because it's under the slider end. maybe try something like [http://puu.sh/gguLs/bac40d6817.jpg this?] \\ yup
2015-02-28 18:50 Mazzerin: yes
2015-02-28 18:52 AlexaBM: 04:10:239 (1) - end this slider here 04:13:882 - . give players at least some time to recover after the spinner. also, 04:14:167 (1) - begins too far from the center and it may be hard to click it without missing the combo
2015-02-28 18:54 AlexaBM: 04:34:167 (1) - this slider's shape could be better. you may like [http://puu.sh/ggv1L/b2ccd3b2e4.jpg this]
2015-02-28 18:54 Mazzerin: i made it shorter but ill keep it on the same spot cause its short enough now
2015-02-28 18:54 Mazzerin: yes
2015-02-28 18:57 AlexaBM: aaaaand
2015-02-28 18:57 AlexaBM: that's all
2015-02-28 18:57 AlexaBM: that's a great work

Mazzerin

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Mazzerin 2015-03-06T20:34:47+00:00

Fatfan Kolek wrote:
01:33:498 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - I don't really like the shape of the stream here. Maybe try something like this? http://puu.sh/goFaM/193b451a06.jpg
pishi said its ok
01:34:320 (3) - This is pretty damn near to the bottom. It hits the error bar actually. D:
pishi said its ok
03:05:739 (6,7,1) - I think the flow is better if you set the tripple this way. http://puu.sh/goFjM/645ac5a728.jpg
ok
05:08:167 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Wouldn't it fit more if you increase the spacing of this stream because of the following spacing?
ok
05:23:810 (8) - Is this sightreadable? D:
yes
05:39:382 (2) - 05:52:667 (8) - Considering that all these music parts are pretty epic, wouldn't more spacing emphasize it in a better way? Plus a kiai section maybe?
ok for kiai, for spacing already explained why i dont want it

Not sure if this is Kudosu worthy, you decide. Cool map though, I enjoyed it!

Makoa

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Makoa 2015-03-13T21:16:40+00:00

HuehaFASDhd

The intro is quite nice. jumps right into the song if you get what i mean
just so you know, the 219 bpm timing section at the begginging is in a 3/4 time signature not 4/4.
This jumps feel a lot like asphyxia. not sure if you like his mapping style but feel free to take this as a compliment or insult.
00:35:553 (1) - this is a bit off the edge of the screen. little more centering could keep the map less cluttered
00:40:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - lol now you've become Lan wings
^personally i love these jumps.
00:59:389 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - you do a really nice job of conveying the intensity of the music with each section.
01:17:471 (1) - coming out of these jumps for some reason i really expected this slider to face the reverse direction.
holy shit this map seems so polished already
02:05:142 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - not bad or anything but a couple tornado triangles would be nice.
02:08:567 (1) - should make this sound a little quieter because i couldn't hear the beat of music i was hitting over the hitsound
03:03:882 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - this whole spamming thing fits very well but it could use a few reverse sliders so that we don't die.
03:51:882 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this whole section is so epic lol
05:52:739 (1) - for some reason this slider made me laugh so hard after the long stream section. I want to see a ton of people slider break on this

This map is really good. because of it I looked up and downloaded a bunch of your other maps. the map as a whole is probably the best thing I could have imagined to reflect the song. I Hope this map gets where you're intending for it to go.

Makoa

55 posts

Joined December 2013

Makoa 2015-03-13T21:20:27+00:00

oh yeah, and have a fucking star faggot

pishifat

osu! Paragon

3,802 posts

Joined August 2013

pishifat 2015-03-13T21:55:19+00:00

makoa

Makoa wrote:
HuehaFASDhd

The intro is quite nice. jumps right into the song if you get what i mean puns
just so you know, the 219 bpm timing section at the begginging is in a 3/4 time signature not 4/4. yesyes
This jumps feel a lot like asphyxia. not sure if you like his mapping style but feel free to take this as a compliment or insult. lol.
00:35:553 (1) - this is a bit off the edge of the screen. little more centering could keep the map less cluttered kyes
00:40:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - lol now you've become Lan wings mmmmmmmm
^personally i love these jumps.
00:59:389 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - you do a really nice job of conveying the intensity of the music with each section. well thanks lmao
01:17:471 (1) - coming out of these jumps for some reason i really expected this slider to face the reverse direction. ctrlg'd
holy shit this map seems so polished already awwyee
02:05:142 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - not bad or anything but a couple tornado triangles would be nice. i suck too much for those
02:08:567 (1) - should make this sound a little quieter because i couldn't hear the beat of music i was hitting over the hitsound yesyes

This map is really good. because of it I looked up and downloaded a bunch of your other maps. the map as a whole is probably the best thing I could have imagined to reflect the song. I Hope this map gets where you're intending for it to go.

Mazzerin

493 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Mazzerin 2015-03-13T22:02:36+00:00

Makoa wrote:
HuehaFASDhd
03:03:882 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - this whole spamming thing fits very well but it could use a few reverse sliders so that we don't die.
die
03:51:882 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this whole section is so epic lol
yes
05:52:739 (1) - for some reason this slider made me laugh so hard after the long stream section. I want to see a ton of people slider break on this
ok

This map is really good. because of it I looked up and downloaded a bunch of your other maps. the map as a whole is probably the best thing I could have imagined to reflect the song. I Hope this map gets where you're intending for it to go.
thx dawg

Intelli

842 posts

Joined July 2014

Intelli 2015-03-21T18:48:27+00:00

This would make the coolest taiko map. I can make one, if you'd like

edit: ok then ranked XD

Last edited by Intelli 2015-03-22T22:06:56+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

hehe

1,959 posts

Joined November 2012

hehe 2015-03-21T19:04:30+00:00

ircd

pishifat

osu! Paragon

3,802 posts

Joined August 2013

pishifat 2015-03-21T19:29:49+00:00

holy shit

ac8129464363

1,560 posts

Joined October 2013

ac8129464363 2015-03-21T20:09:03+00:00

pishifat wrote:
holy shit

Mazzerin

493 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Mazzerin 2015-03-21T20:35:57+00:00

big

2015-03-21 17:26 handsome: i think i can do irc
2015-03-21 17:26 Mazzerin: hmm if you feel like you want to
2015-03-21 17:26 Mazzerin: lol
2015-03-21 17:27 handsome: can u np
2015-03-21 17:27 Mazzerin: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/592113 Bal-Sagoth - The Obsidian Crown Unbound [Onslaught]]
2015-03-21 17:27 handsome: cyul
2015-03-21 17:30 handsome: 02:54:445 (3,4) - too large
2015-03-21 17:30 Mazzerin: pls why
2015-03-21 17:30 Mazzerin:

2015-03-21 17:30 handsome: 1 sec
2015-03-21 17:31 handsome: its like the only large jump
2015-03-21 17:31 handsome: in that general portion
2015-03-21 17:31 Mazzerin: ill reduce to 3x then
2015-03-21 17:31 handsome: on a regular sound
2015-03-21 17:31 handsome: you could do more nice shapes
2015-03-21 17:31 handsome: pattersn
2015-03-21 17:32 Mazzerin: it follows the guitar pitch
2015-03-21 17:33 Mazzerin: which patterns
2015-03-21 17:34 handsome: liek
2015-03-21 17:34 handsome: just in general i guess lol
2015-03-21 17:34 Mazzerin: i do groups of 2 because of drums mostly
2015-03-21 17:35 Mazzerin: no real patterns that i can make they just float around randomly
2015-03-21 17:36 handsome: uhm
2015-03-21 17:36 handsome: like
2015-03-21 17:36 handsome: its entirely possible to make patterns
2015-03-21 17:36 handsome: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/662505 Shounen Radio - neu (Long Version) [Judgment Day]]
2015-03-21 17:36 handsome: 06:03:278 (1) -

2015-03-21 17:36 Mazzerin: i dont know if i have no taste or what but which are wrong
2015-03-21 17:37 handsome: im not saying the patterns are wrong lol
2015-03-21 17:37 handsome: i mean you could have more 'structure' or sense in where each not is placed
2015-03-21 17:37 Mazzerin: which look ugly
2015-03-21 17:38 handsome: other that arbitrary 'pitch'
2015-03-21 17:39 Mazzerin: you mean like
2015-03-21 17:39 Mazzerin: form something nice out of them?
2015-03-21 17:40 Mazzerin: like form this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2915343
2015-03-21 17:40 Mazzerin: into a trapezoid?
2015-03-21 17:40 handsome: anything is possible
2015-03-21 17:40 handsome: but right now they just seem random, ya kno
2015-03-21 17:40 handsome: its just more of a thing to keep in mind when u map more
2015-03-21 17:40 handsome: dont really have to change it here since
2015-03-21 17:40 handsome: there's nothing wrong with it
2015-03-21 17:41 Mazzerin: hmm
2015-03-21 17:46 Mazzerin: ill try to play around
2015-03-21 17:47 handsome: 03:42:731 (1,2) -
2015-03-21 17:47 handsome: quite small
2015-03-21 17:48 Mazzerin: i wonder why i used 0,9 there
2015-03-21 17:48 handsome: idk
2015-03-21 17:51 handsome: 04:19:016 (5,1) - overlap is swag
2015-03-21 17:51 Mazzerin: you mean make the 5 overlap 1?
2015-03-21 17:52 handsome: yeah that would be nice
2015-03-21 17:52 Mazzerin: oki
2015-03-21 17:52 handsome: same for the rest too
2015-03-21 17:52 Mazzerin: i thought you and deetz were talking about those 1.0 spacing things
2015-03-21 17:52 handsome: if you like that
2015-03-21 17:53 Mazzerin: so i was afraid to make it close
2015-03-21 17:53 Mazzerin: LOL
2015-03-21 17:53 handsome: i mean t his is a
2015-03-21 17:53 handsome: hold slider
2015-03-21 17:53 handsome: somewhat
2015-03-21 17:53 handsome: its cool here
2015-03-21 17:54 Mazzerin: that was the part i remapped
2015-03-21 17:54 Mazzerin: looks like pishi right
2015-03-21 17:54 handsome: 04:34:159 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) -
2015-03-21 17:54 handsome: stuff liek this
2015-03-21 17:54 handsome: not rly lolololo
2015-03-21 17:54 Mazzerin: fku
2015-03-21 17:54 handsome: u can do spacing for the slider > circle
2015-03-21 17:54 handsome: ya fewel me
2015-03-21 17:54 handsome: just feels quite unrefined
2015-03-21 17:55 Mazzerin: spacing for slider>circle
2015-03-21 17:55 Mazzerin: 9what
2015-03-21 17:55 handsome: yeah
2015-03-21 17:55 handsome: 03:59:302 (1,2) - in the same vein as 03:59:302 (1,2) -
2015-03-21 17:55 Mazzerin: what does spacing for slider>circle mean ??
2015-03-21 17:56 Mazzerin: that last ctrl+v was the same thing pasted
2015-03-21 17:56 handsome: ii mean
2015-03-21 17:56 handsome: u can follow what i pasted
2015-03-21 17:56 handsome: like slider to circle can have higher spacing
2015-03-21 17:56 Mazzerin: uhhh
2015-03-21 17:57 Mazzerin: can you give me a screenshot of what you mean
2015-03-21 17:58 handsome: http://i.imgur.com/prWkW2V.png
2015-03-21 17:58 Mazzerin: ohhh
2015-03-21 17:58 Mazzerin: make it spaced??
2015-03-21 18:00 handsome: just
2015-03-21 18:00 handsome: icnrease the spacing
2015-03-21 18:00 handsome: big enough to not be uglily connected
2015-03-21 18:00 handsome: small enough to not be confused for 1/2
2015-03-21 18:01 Mazzerin: ok
2015-03-21 18:03 Mazzerin: that was a good idea
2015-03-21 18:05 Mazzerin: all the ugly slider problems can be fixed now
2015-03-21 18:05 Mazzerin: D:
2015-03-21 18:05 handsome: 1yes
2015-03-21 18:05 handsome: all your sliders are ugly
2015-03-21 18:05 Mazzerin: not all come on
2015-03-21 18:05 handsome: 04:56:445 (3) - these are actually fine
2015-03-21 18:05 handsome: tho
2015-03-21 18:05 Mazzerin: ye
2015-03-21 18:05 handsome: bhut the regular 1/2 ones are yuck
2015-03-21 18:05 handsome: lol
2015-03-21 18:05 Mazzerin: i copied them from a skystar map
2015-03-21 18:05 Mazzerin:

DDDDDDDDDD
2015-03-21 18:06 handsome: skystar is gud
2015-03-21 18:06 handsome: mine are skystar-esque too
2015-03-21 18:06 Mazzerin: pishi said theyre better yesterday!
2015-03-21 18:06 Mazzerin: i think the only part which is really ugly is the uh
2015-03-21 18:06 handsome: COOL
2015-03-21 18:06 Mazzerin: the one where you told me to make it spaced
2015-03-21 18:06 Mazzerin: the things after sliders
2015-03-21 18:06 Mazzerin: circles
2015-03-21 18:07 handsome: cool
2015-03-21 18:08 handsome: 05:06:159 (1) - turn this to circles plz
2015-03-21 18:08 Mazzerin: only that one ?
2015-03-21 18:09 Mazzerin: is it because it overlaps like that
2015-03-21 18:09 Mazzerin: if so i will move it somewhere else
2015-03-21 18:09 Mazzerin: cause i wanted to separate the snare drums or whatever those are
2015-03-21 18:09 handsome: uhm
2015-03-21 18:10 handsome: well its just weird to havbe repeat jump to repeat
2015-03-21 18:10 handsome: rip combo
2015-03-21 18:11 Mazzerin: lol ok
2015-03-21 18:11 Mazzerin: what if i move it between
2015-03-21 18:11 Mazzerin: 05:05:588 (9,2) -
2015-03-21 18:11 Mazzerin: these
2015-03-21 18:11 Mazzerin: in that space
2015-03-21 18:11 handsome: plus its liek
2015-03-21 18:11 handsome: asdf
2015-03-21 18:12 Mazzerin: aff w/e circles are good
2015-03-21 18:12 Mazzerin: i make circle
2015-03-21 18:12 handsome: cool then
2015-03-21 18:12 handsome: i was acutally thinking
2015-03-21 18:13 handsome: nmakign a break
2015-03-21 18:13 handsome: like
2015-03-21 18:13 handsome: 05:07:874 (9) -
2015-03-21 18:14 Mazzerin: what break
2015-03-21 18:15 handsome: like uhm 1/1
2015-03-21 18:15 handsome: 05:02:159 - start repeat here
2015-03-21 18:17 Mazzerin: ok sure
2015-03-21 18:18 Mazzerin: what is a break 1/1 though
2015-03-21 18:19 handsome: i think this fits best: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2915527
2015-03-21 18:20 Mazzerin: i just made it like this
2015-03-21 18:20 Mazzerin: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2915534
2015-03-21 18:21 handsome: oh thats cool too i guess
2015-03-21 18:21 handsome: 05:08:088 (1,2,3,4,5) - snapping on this is weird
2015-03-21 18:21 handsome: i think
2015-03-21 18:21 Mazzerin: yea that part is weird
2015-03-21 18:21 Mazzerin: ghost notes
2015-03-21 18:22 Mazzerin: what do
2015-03-21 18:23 handsome: i dunno lol
2015-03-21 18:23 handsome: D:
2015-03-21 18:24 handsome: you could not map it
2015-03-21 18:24 handsome: it works
2015-03-21 18:24 handsome: but you can to do the slider stuff to change polarity
2015-03-21 18:25 handsome: are the streams at the end converts
2015-03-21 18:25 handsome: or manually placed
2015-03-21 18:25 Mazzerin: manual why
2015-03-21 18:25 Mazzerin: LOL
2015-03-21 18:26 handsome: well they're ugly :d
2015-03-21 18:26 handsome: 05:41:874 (2) - this is jutting out
2015-03-21 18:26 handsome: 05:42:945 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - circles pls
2015-03-21 18:26 handsome: 05:52:659 (8,1) - spaacing fix pls
2015-03-21 18:27 Mazzerin: they are circles
2015-03-21 18:27 handsome: u know what imena :c
2015-03-21 18:27 Mazzerin: you mean make it a circle ???
2015-03-21 18:27 Mazzerin: the pattern?
2015-03-21 18:29 Mazzerin: i dont get it
2015-03-21 18:29 Mazzerin: fuck
2015-03-21 18:29 handsome: ya
2015-03-21 18:29 handsome: like a circle
2015-03-21 18:29 handsome:

2015-03-21 18:29 Mazzerin: why
2015-03-21 18:29 Mazzerin:

2015-03-21 18:29 Mazzerin: why is elipse wrong
2015-03-21 18:29 handsome: its just a lame oval thing now lol
2015-03-21 18:30 handsome: its fat and ugly
2015-03-21 18:30 handsome: :-(
2015-03-21 18:30 Mazzerin: wtf
2015-03-21 18:30 Mazzerin: ok ok
2015-03-21 18:30 handsome: 05:46:945 (12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - like this is so nice
2015-03-21 18:30 handsome: cuz circle ya
2015-03-21 18:30 handsome: :d
2015-03-21 18:31 handsome: 05:41:016 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i think to introduce the 1/2 space for the space between streams u can increase ths spaicng a little
2015-03-21 18:31 handsome: u can ctrl+h it
2015-03-21 18:32 Mazzerin: but... but then the blanket is gone
2015-03-21 18:32 Mazzerin: NOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooooo
2015-03-21 18:32 Mazzerin: yeah ok ill do it
2015-03-21 18:33 Mazzerin: no ill actually just move it further away
2015-03-21 18:33 Mazzerin: lol
2015-03-21 18:33 handsome: alright
2015-03-21 18:33 handsome: i keep thinkking its 1/4 ayy lmao
2015-03-21 18:33 handsome: blame angelhoney
2015-03-21 18:33 Mazzerin: i doubt he would do this on this bpm
2015-03-21 18:34 Mazzerin: oh wait he did it on gaussian blur
2015-03-21 18:34 Mazzerin: nvm
2015-03-21 18:34 handsome:

2015-03-21 18:34 Mazzerin: im gonna fix the first stream too
2015-03-21 18:34 Mazzerin: i dont like it for some reason
2015-03-21 18:35 Mazzerin: its so odd
2015-03-21 18:35 handsome: sure
2015-03-21 18:35 handsome: converts
2015-03-21 18:35 handsome: are way to go
2015-03-21 18:35 handsome: i never manuialyl place streams
2015-03-21 18:35 handsome: nEVA
2015-03-21 18:35 Mazzerin: then im manual master
2015-03-21 18:35 Mazzerin: or almost
2015-03-21 18:36 handsome: its not worth it man
2015-03-21 18:36 Mazzerin: im going to eat
2015-03-21 18:36 Mazzerin: brb
2015-03-21 18:37 handsome: shure
2015-03-21 19:49 handsome: i have returned
2015-03-21 19:49 Mazzerin: oh cool
2015-03-21 19:49 Mazzerin: i was lost
2015-03-21 19:49 Mazzerin: when you left
2015-03-21 19:49 Mazzerin: but ye i updated it
2015-03-21 19:49 Mazzerin: with all the fixes
2015-03-21 19:50 Mazzerin: check the part with sliders/circle bursts
2015-03-21 19:50 Mazzerin: the kiais in the beginning
2015-03-21 19:50 Mazzerin: the last kiai
2015-03-21 19:55 handsome: kk
2015-03-21 19:55 handsome: make combo 4 greener
2015-03-21 19:55 handsome: 04:36:731 (4,5,6,7,8) - bad flow
2015-03-21 19:57 Mazzerin: what why
2015-03-21 20:00 handsome: uh
2015-03-21 20:00 handsome: its better to start at like
2015-03-21 20:00 handsome: 5 or 6
2015-03-21 20:00 handsome: better rotation
2015-03-21 20:01 Mazzerin: okay
2015-03-21 20:06 handsome: 04:28:302 (1) -
2015-03-21 20:06 handsome: overlap thigny
2015-03-21 20:06 Mazzerin: where
2015-03-21 20:06 Mazzerin: i mean i formed it so it looks good like this
2015-03-21 20:06 Mazzerin:

2015-03-21 20:07 Mazzerin: i guess i can reshape it so it fits that part
2015-03-21 20:07 handsome: sure
2015-03-21 20:08 Mazzerin: do the patterns look better now
2015-03-21 20:08 Mazzerin: in the beginning
2015-03-21 20:09 handsome: uh
2015-03-21 20:09 handsome: tbh i dont notice a difference
2015-03-21 20:09 handsome: okay i do now
2015-03-21 20:09 handsome: when i take a second look
2015-03-21 20:10 Mazzerin: LOL
2015-03-21 20:10 Mazzerin: that hurt me

2015-03-21 20:11 handsome: i was expecting
2015-03-21 20:11 handsome: some huge changes n stuff
2015-03-21 20:11 handsome: :p
2015-03-21 20:12 Mazzerin: hmm idk how to change it exactly
2015-03-21 20:15 handsome: 00:26:504 (1) - pishi's slidr too much swag
2015-03-21 20:16 Mazzerin: you mean just enough?
2015-03-21 20:16 Mazzerin: there cant be too much
2015-03-21 20:18 handsome: what
2015-03-21 20:18 handsome: its out of the screen
2015-03-21 20:18 Mazzerin: ye thought so
2015-03-21 20:18 Mazzerin: lol
2015-03-21 20:19 Mazzerin: i was talking about the swag
2015-03-21 20:19 handsome: yea
2015-03-21 20:22 handsome: well that should be all and i can throw a yolo bubble
2015-03-21 21:06 handsome: http://i.imgur.com/7BGfVFy.png
2015-03-21 21:07 handsome: u wanna untick that letterbox thing too
2015-03-21 21:07 handsome: u can ignore the break section
2015-03-21 21:08 Mazzerin: k
2015-03-21 21:08 Mazzerin: so ill change the mp3?
2015-03-21 21:08 Mazzerin: to get audio lead in?
2015-03-21 21:08 handsome: nonono
2015-03-21 21:08 handsome: u can edit
2015-03-21 21:08 handsome: .osu file
2015-03-21 21:08 handsome: there's audioleadin: iongieoh
2015-03-21 21:09 Mazzerin: its 0 atm
2015-03-21 21:09 Mazzerin: i change to 2000?
2015-03-21 21:09 Mazzerin: or what
2015-03-21 21:09 handsome: 1800

VINXIS

Featured Artist

3,161 posts

Joined April 2014

VINXIS 2015-03-21T22:26:17+00:00