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eyelis - Mirai e no Tobira [OsuMania]

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Topic Starter
JamesHappy
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Marirose
from queue

offset=1008

Good luck :)
Topic Starter
JamesHappy
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Marirose wrote:

from queue

offset=1008

Good luck :)
Thanks Marirose :)

I'll update this later
RuberusuScarlet
hi ~

mod and metadate check request from my queue

|1|2|3|4|

mod
[General]
Artist : ( ! ) アイリス → eyelis
Romanised Artist : delete
Title : ok
Romanised Title : ok
tag add : Kami Nomi zo Shiru Sekai Tenri-hen 川崎里実 kawasaki satomi 増田武史 masuda takeshi 前口渉 maeguchi wataru


offset 1008 → 970
[Future]
00:13:942 (13942|3) - delete

00:31:546 - add 3
00:31:636 - ^4
00:31:816 (31816|1) - start to 00:31:726 -

00:32:804 - add 1 or 2

00:54:271 (54271|1) - delete

01:02:445 - add 1
01:08:373 - ^1
01:08:552 (68552|0) - move to 2

01:33:343 - add 1 or 4

01:39:990 (99990|2,99990|3) - end to 01:41:606 -
01:41:606 (101606|3) - move to 2
01:41:786 (101786|1) - ^4

02:03:612 - add 2
02:03:792 - ^2
02:10:708 - ^1
02:21:487 - ^2
02:24:361 - ^4
02:25:978 - ^1
02:36:217 - ^2
02:37:834 - ^2
02:43:582 - ^3
03:00:289 - ^1 or4

03:30:199 (210199|2) - delete

03:36:756 - add 3
03:36:846 - ^2
03:38:912 - ^3
03:46:816 - ^1 and 3
03:54:091 - ^2

03:57:415 (237415|3) - move to 03:57:235 -
good luck >w</
Topic Starter
JamesHappy

RuberusuScarlet wrote:

hi ~

mod and metadate check request from my queue

|1|2|3|4|

mod
[General]
Artist : ( ! ) アイリス → eyelis
Romanised Artist : delete
Title : ok
Romanised Title : ok
tag add : Kami Nomi zo Shiru Sekai Tenri-hen 川崎里実 kawasaki satomi 増田武史 masuda takeshi 前口渉 maeguchi wataru


offset 1008 → 970
[Future]
00:13:942 (13942|3) - delete

00:31:546 - add 3
00:31:636 - ^4
00:31:816 (31816|1) - start to 00:31:726 -

00:32:804 - add 1 or 2

00:54:271 (54271|1) - delete i can still hear some

01:02:445 - add 1
01:08:373 - ^1
01:08:552 (68552|0) - move to 2

01:33:343 - add 1 or 4

01:39:990 (99990|2,99990|3) - end to 01:41:606 -
01:41:606 (101606|3) - move to 2
01:41:786 (101786|1) - ^4

02:03:612 - add 2
02:03:792 - ^2
02:10:708 - ^1
02:21:487 - ^2
02:24:361 - ^4
02:25:978 - ^1
02:36:217 - ^2
02:37:834 - ^2
02:43:582 - ^3
03:00:289 - ^1 or4

03:30:199 (210199|2) - delete i can still hear some

03:36:756 - add 3
03:36:846 - ^2
03:38:912 - ^3
03:46:816 - ^1 and 3
03:54:091 - ^2

03:57:415 (237415|3) - move to 03:57:235 -
rest applied
good luck >w</
thanks for the mod :)

Will check this later
Nanatsu
better to be 神のみぞ知るセカイ_天理篇

bg size is inapproritate plz check ranking rule which is 1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9

320kbps is unrankable. change to 128kbps ~ 192kbps. i highly recommend to change to 192

you can add some tag if you feel necessary and related to song

and check aimod

pattern modding later sory

and offset seems 948
Topic Starter
JamesHappy

_S u w a k o_ wrote:

better to be 神のみぞ知るセカイ_天理篇

bg size is inapproritate plz check ranking rule which is 1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9

320kbps is unrankable. change to 128kbps ~ 192kbps. i highly recommend to change to 192

you can add some tag if you feel necessary and related to song

and check aimod

pattern modding later sory

and offset seems 948
change mp3 now, but for the BG i'm still finding some appropriate so i'll change that later
Ringating
from my queue:

I found the original and cropped it from the top, but that resulted in the halo being cropped off (so I made a new one).
bg

this image is quite efficient in the current lossless png format, so I suggest not changing it to jpg
no kudosu
Topic Starter
JamesHappy

Ringating wrote:

from my queue:

I found the original and cropped it from the top, but that resulted in the halo being cropped off (so I made a new one).
bg

this image is quite efficient in the current lossless png format, so I suggest not changing it to jpg
no kudosu
thanks for this :)
Lokovodo
And this is a mod!~
|1|2|3|4|

Hello from my modding queue~ I am going to mod just the normal since its a pretty long map and it needs a lot more work than Future

[Normal]

00:10:828 (10828|0) - i do not recommend charting this long note to the vocals here.

00:07:415 (7415|2) - move to 4
00:08:133 (8133|2) - move to 2
00:08:492 (8492|1) - move to 3

00:13:163 (13163|1) - move to 1
00:13:343 (13343|0) - move to 3
00:13:702 (13702|2) - move to 4

00:26:456 add note

00:32:205 (32205|1) - change into long note ending at 00:32:564

00:37:594 (37594|3) - move to 2

00:58:792 (58792|3) - move to 3

01:03:462 (63462|3) - move to 2

01:05:439 (65439|3) - turn this note at 4 into a long note ending at where you currently have a note at 01:05:977

01:12:085 (72085|0) - move to 3
01:12:265 (72265|1) - move to 1
01:12:445 (72445|2) - move to 2

01:14:959 (74959|3) - move to 2

01:16:936 (76936|3,77295|2,77474|0,77654|1,77834|3,78013|0,78193|2,78552|3) - this is very difficult for normal i suggest reworking this entirely since 1 long notes on offtick, 2 the layering of regular notes on long notes, 3 continuing long note stair pattern.

02:09:930 remove note at 1
02:10:109 add note at 1
02:10:109 add long note at 4 ending at 02:10:379
02:11:007 (131007|1) - move to 3
02:11:187 (131187|2) - move to 2
02:11:367 (131367|0) - move to 3
02:12:085 (132085|3) - move to 1

02:14:421 - 02:16:037 again very difficult

02:29:331 add note

02:46:936 (166936|1) - move to 4
02:47:295 (167295|3) - move to 2

03:02:025 - 03:10:289 in this section there are many difficult long notes with overlaying regular notes. i keep mentioning difficulty since this is easiest difficulty on map so you should care about the gap a bit

03:41:726 (221726|1) - move to 3
03:41:906 (221906|2) - move to 2

03:42:085 make a note form here to 03:42:624 on either 1 or 4

04:10:648 add note at 2

04:12:265 add note 3

04:13:522 add note 3

04:15:139 add note 3

04:16:037 add note 1
04:16:217 add note 1

04:18:912 add note 2
04:19:091 add note 4
04:19:271 add note 1
04:19:450 add note 2
Topic Starter
JamesHappy

Lokovodo wrote:

And this is a mod!~
|1|2|3|4|

Hello from my modding queue~ I am going to mod just the normal since its a pretty long map and it needs a lot more work than Future

[Normal]

00:10:828 (10828|0) - i do not recommend charting this long note to the vocals here. keep

00:07:415 (7415|2) - move to 4
00:08:133 (8133|2) - move to 2
00:08:492 (8492|1) - move to 3

00:13:163 (13163|1) - move to 1
00:13:343 (13343|0) - move to 3
00:13:702 (13702|2) - move to 4

00:26:456 add note

00:32:205 (32205|1) - change into long note ending at 00:32:564 nope

00:37:594 (37594|3) - move to 2

00:58:792 (58792|3) - move to 3

01:03:462 (63462|3) - move to 2

01:05:439 (65439|3) - turn this note at 4 into a long note ending at where you currently have a note at 01:05:977

01:12:085 (72085|0) - move to 3
01:12:265 (72265|1) - move to 1
01:12:445 (72445|2) - move to 2

01:14:959 (74959|3) - move to 2

01:16:936 (76936|3,77295|2,77474|0,77654|1,77834|3,78013|0,78193|2,78552|3) - this is very difficult for normal i suggest reworking this entirely since 1 long notes on offtick, 2 the layering of regular notes on long notes, 3 continuing long note stair pattern. no change here

02:09:930 remove note at 1
02:10:109 add note at 1
02:10:109 add long note at 4 ending at 02:10:379
02:11:007 (131007|1) - move to 3
02:11:187 (131187|2) - move to 2
02:11:367 (131367|0) - move to 3 better at 1
02:12:085 (132085|3) - move to 1

02:14:421 - 02:16:037 again very difficult same again

02:29:331 add note

02:46:936 (166936|1) - move to 4
02:47:295 (167295|3) - move to 2

03:02:025 - 03:10:289 in this section there are many difficult long notes with overlaying regular notes. i keep mentioning difficulty since this is easiest difficulty on map so you should care about the gap a bit same again

03:41:726 (221726|1) - move to 3
03:41:906 (221906|2) - move to 2

03:42:085 make a note form here to 03:42:624 on either 1 or 4

04:10:648 add note at 2

04:12:265 add note 3

04:13:522 add note 3

04:15:139 add note 3

04:16:037 add note 1
04:16:217 add note 1

04:18:912 add note 2
04:19:091 add note 4
04:19:271 add note 1
04:19:450 add note 2

Rest Applied
Thanks for the mod :)
Xenophilius
Hi! From _andreamtr & _Xenophilius_'s Modding Queue.

Layout:

4k: |0|1|2|3|

Future
  1. 00:31:486 (31486|2,31576|3) - Ctrl + G
  2. 00:43:343 - Better if same as 00:14:600 -
  3. 01:52:325 - Same ^
  4. 00:57:894 (57894|1) - Move to 2
  5. 01:54:301 - Add note
  6. 02:35:977 - Add note
  7. 02:03:462 (123462|0,123462|3,123552|1,123642|2,123732|1,123822|3,123822|0,123912|1,124001|2,124091|3,124181|2,124271|1,124361|0,124450|1,124540|2,124540|3) - Is better if you Ctrl + H all those notes because the final ones represent bass notes in the song.
  8. 03:01:666 - Suggest to add a note here in 0
  9. 03:22:684 (202684|2) - Move in 1
  10. 04:17:834 - Add a note in 1 and Ctrl + H those 04:18:013 (258013|1,258013|3,258373|2,258373|0) -
Topic Starter
JamesHappy

_Xenophilius_ wrote:

Hi! From _andreamtr & _Xenophilius_'s Modding Queue.

Layout:

4k: |0|1|2|3|

Future
  1. 00:31:486 (31486|2,31576|3) - Ctrl + G
  2. 00:43:343 - Better if same as 00:14:600 -
  3. 01:52:325 - Same ^
  4. 00:57:894 (57894|1) - Move to 2
  5. 01:54:301 - Add note
  6. 02:35:977 - Add note
  7. 02:03:462 (123462|0,123462|3,123552|1,123642|2,123732|1,123822|3,123822|0,123912|1,124001|2,124091|3,124181|2,124271|1,124361|0,124450|1,124540|2,124540|3) - Is better if you Ctrl + H all those notes because the final ones represent bass notes in the song. Rearranged
  8. 03:01:666 - Suggest to add a note here in 0
  9. 03:22:684 (202684|2) - Move in 1
  10. 04:17:834 - Add a note in 1 and Ctrl + H those 04:18:013 (258013|1,258013|3,258373|2,258373|0) -
    Rest Applied
Thanks for the mod :)
Aste-
Hiya ^.^

Mod from my Queue

Whoa.. Dat Mp3
Whoa.. Dat BG
Whoa.. Dat Source
Whoa.. Dat wait.. let me check this one

[General]

Widescreen Support = Off if you don't use SB

[MOD]

Column
1-2-3-4

Normal+
00:03:822 (3822|0) - delete since you're not using double on the previous pattern

00:05:439 - add note

00:10:109 - ^

00:18:193 (18193|3) - Delete ( you don't use doubke note on the next pattern)

00:17:654 (17654|1) - end @ white line above
00:20:528 (20528|1) - ^

00:25:558 - Add Note

00:30:768 (30768|1,30947|0) - LN on 2, note on 1


00:59:870 (59870|2,60229|3,60229|1) - move 1 column to left
01:00:588 (60588|0) - Move to 2
01:00:947 (60947|1) - ^ 1

01:05:259 (65259|1,65439|3,65618|1,65977|0,65977|2) - i'm confuse.. what are you following? vocal or drum?
if vocal 01:05:618 (65618|1) - Delete
if Drum 01:04:361 - add note and then 01:05:618 (65618|1) - Move to red line above (delete both LN)

01:15:858 - again.. are you following vocal or drum? add note if drum

^for pattern similiar like this ^ i suggest don't vocal mapping please ^.^

The rest seems Fine to me

Future
only 2 diff 0_0 ?


Already Perfect.... nothing to MOD

i suggest for Normal+ use this Diff as reference and don't vocal mapping (last time i did that.. i get scolded veeery hard)

Can i GD? >.<

i wish i have star so i can shot a star TT_TT

GL. ~
Topic Starter
JamesHappy

Pharos21 wrote:

Hiya ^.^

Mod from my Queue

Whoa.. Dat Mp3
Whoa.. Dat BG
Whoa.. Dat Source
Whoa.. Dat wait.. let me check this one

[General]

Widescreen Support = Off if you don't use SB

[MOD]

Column
1-2-3-4

Normal+
00:03:822 (3822|0) - delete since you're not using double on the previous pattern nope

00:05:439 - add note

00:10:109 - ^

00:18:193 (18193|3) - Delete ( you don't use doubke note on the next pattern) nope

00:17:654 (17654|1) - end @ white line above nope, it ends in red line
00:20:528 (20528|1) - ^ ^

00:25:558 - Add Note

00:30:768 (30768|1,30947|0) - LN on 2, note on 1 keep


00:59:870 (59870|2,60229|3,60229|1) - move 1 column to left nope
01:00:588 (60588|0) - Move to 2 nope
01:00:947 (60947|1) - ^ 1 nope

01:05:259 (65259|1,65439|3,65618|1,65977|0,65977|2) - i'm confuse.. what are you following? vocal or drum? remaped
if vocal 01:05:618 (65618|1) - Delete nope
if Drum 01:04:361 - add note and then 01:05:618 (65618|1) - Move to red line above (delete both LN) only add notes

01:15:858 - again.. are you following vocal or drum? add note if drum I'm following both, so added

^for pattern similiar like this ^ i suggest don't vocal mapping please ^.^

The rest seems Fine to me

Rest applied

Future
only 2 diff 0_0 ?


Already Perfect.... nothing to MOD nice

i suggest for Normal+ use this Diff as reference and don't vocal mapping (last time i did that.. i get scolded veeery hard)

Can i GD? >.< sorry, intended to have only 2 diffs

i wish i have star so i can shot a star TT_TT It's okay :)

GL. ~
thanks :)
[ A v a l o n ]
Hello JamesHappy :)

first, WTF 4 minutes of song T_T
okay then i will give full mod ;)
Remember this mod is only suggestion, you can reject with a reason ;)

1 2 3 4 <(^o^<)

Normal+
00:00:948 (948|3) - consider to delete this one for smooth intro :)

00:03:283 (3283|1) - i don' understand what kind music you follow to . . or maybe it just your improvisation ? and if you follow the piano, you should add note here 00:03:642 - , and if you follow vocal you should remove that red tick "pattern works for song"

00:04:001 (4001|2) - delete this, if you follow the vocal

00:09:391 (9391|1) - ^

00:09:750 - and 00:10:468 - if you follow piano, you have to put a note here XD

00:15:678 (15678|3,16397|3,17115|2,17834|3,18552|1,19271|1) - hey . . this is 2 note here, and 00:16:037 (16037|1,16756|1,17474|2,18193|0,19630|0) - sholud be 1 note, swap that note placement . . . :? try to follow start from this 00:21:067 - (correct place)

00:22:864 (22864|1) - move to 1, then if applied . . . 00:23:223 (23223|2) - move to 2

00:23:223 (23223|2) - you missing a note here, try to be consistent XD

00:24:480 (24480|1) - move to 3, then if applied . . . 00:25:199 (25199|3) - move to 1

00:27:894 - try this, will be better and friendly to play

00:30:768 - add note here try to be consistent with 00:27:894 - same sound right ?

00:31:666 (31666|0) - delete this, and i think the LN have an issues . . try this http://puu.sh/fTA8h/72bf448f89.jpg, cuz the second LN is contain faded out music, so just only need 1 LN

start from this 00:32:564 - try to be more creative (follow vocal right ?), i can suggest you with this image http://puu.sh/fTAuD/430c96fc0b.jpg

00:49:810 - suggest to try this http://puu.sh/fTAO9/9bf4fa8bec.jpg, for better pitch ;)

00:53:762 (53762|1,54480|2) - change to single note only, too epic for Normal diff

00:57:714 - try this, more rythimically http://puu.sh/fTB7l/257cd30bb1.jpg

00:59:870 (59870|2) - move to 2, pitch

01:05:618 (65618|1) - delete this one

01:08:133 (68133|3) - LN starts here 01:08:492 - listen carefully

01:09:750 (69750|0) - move to 4, then if applied 01:10:289 (70289|2) - move to 1

01:16:397 (76397|3,77115|0,77834|3) - delete, not too strong here, remember . . . i know you put 2 note for drum . . like in there 01:18:912 (78912|0,78912|1) - (nah, it's correct place) try to follow them

01:17:474 - missing drum here, add 1 note

01:24:301 (84301|3) - move to 1 for avoid triple jacks and for balance too

01:30:049 (90049|1) - delete, cuz 3 notes . . . only need 2 is enough

01:32:924 (92924|3) - delete, remember . . . the LN is contain a note too . . so you push 3 note here . . . only need 2 note here . . .
01:35:798 - nah, this is correct, good joob

01:38:672 - try this http://puu.sh/fTC7X/7ba885c414.jpg more friendly to plays :lol:

01:52:684 (112684|3) - delete, the music is break here, do not to add any thing, and then 01:53:043 - add 1 note (if applied)

01:56:636 (116636|3,116816|2,116995|1,116995|0,117355|0,117534|1,117714|3,117714|2,118073|0,118253|3,118433|0,118433|1,118792|3,118792|0) - suggest to remap this, i think the pattern is not follow the rythim properly

01:59:331 (119331|0,119331|3,119510|3,119510|0) - this part does'nt have any same sound here, why you put here ? 01:59:331 (119331|3,119331|0) - move to 2 and 3

01:59:151 - hey, i hear a kick sound here

02:06:876 (126876|0,126876|3) - put them in colomn 2 and 3 , to follow the music properly

02:07:235 - for the reff of music, i think it will be same suggstion as above . . so i'll skip this

02:18:013 (138013|0,138373|0) - move to 3 and 2, then if applied 02:18:732 (138732|1) - move to 1

02:34:181 (154181|0) - move to 2

02:42:085 - add a note you follow the piano right ?

02:43:522 - add note

02:55:019 (175019|0) - move to 2

02:50:528 (170528|3) - LN end at here 02:52:684 -

03:10:648 (190648|3) - delete, and 2 note should be there 03:11:007 - add at 1, then if applied 03:11:187 (191 :( 187|0,191546|0) - move to 3 and 2

03:24:840 (204840|2) - suggest to delete, need only 1 LN here . . if not . . you can delete this 03:24:840 (204840|1) - 3 notes here XD i'm so dead

03:27:714 (207714|3) - delete

03:33:642 (213642|0) - move to 2

03:35:977 (215977|3) - move to 1

04:00:229 - start this, don't be a boring note . . XD

04:08:133 (248133|0,248133|3) - make to be LN, then 04:08:672 (248672|0,248672|3,249031|3,249031|1) - convert to be single note, example


04:16:037 (256037|0) - move to 3

Future
00:01:666 (1666|3,2385|0,3103|0) - delete this, cuz you don't put the double note start from there 00:03:822 -

00:13:702 - add note on 4

00:14:780 (14780|1) - move to 3

00:19:989 (19989|2) - move to 4

00:20:349 (20349|0) - move to 3

00:21:427 (21427|0) - move to 4

00:27:175 (27175|2,27175|1) - superb jack :v , suggest move to 1 and 4

00:30:049 (30049|0,30049|3) - move to 2 and 3

00:58:971 (58971|2) - delete this, better to plays, and if applied add 1 note on 00:59:151 -

01:04:001 (64001|1,64001|3) - if you use this. . . then suggest to remove 01:04:181 (64181|0) - for better play

01:05:618 (65618|1) - delete to . . . (have some break, because after guitar impact)

01:08:492 (68492|1) - same reason ^

01:10:289 - for the rest , the suggestion is same as above . . hope you understand this, LOL

01:52:325 (112325|2) - move to 2

01:52:774 (112774|3,112953|1) - Hey . . delete this, no need to stairs here XD

02:42:804 - missing piano here, add 1 note

02:51:247 (171247|1,171965|1) - delete this, if you follow the piano

02:54:121 (174121|2) - same reason ^

03:06:157 (186157|3) - consider to move it, the pattern is not follow any rythim sound if you put jack in there

03:27:714 (207714|1,207714|2,207714|3,207714|0) - why 4 notes here XD ? delete the single note in 1 and 4 ... then after deleted, move the slider to 1
and 4, then if all of them applied . . 03:29:870 (209870|0) - move to 3

03:35:798 (215798|3) - should be there 03:35:618 -

04:17:115 (257115|2,257115|1) - move to 1 and 4

04:17:474 (257474|1,257474|2) - move to 1 and 4

04:20:169 (260169|0,260169|3) - move to 2 and 3

dafak I'm so dead XD . . long mod does'nt mean the beatmap is bad . . still need an improve . . .
Good luck for your beatmap :)
Topic Starter
JamesHappy

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Hello JamesHappy :)

first, WTF 4 minutes of song T_T
okay then i will give full mod ;)
Remember this mod is only suggestion, you can reject with a reason ;)

1 2 3 4 <(^o^<)

Normal+
00:00:948 (948|3) - consider to delete this one for smooth intro :)

00:03:283 (3283|1) - i don' understand what kind music you follow to . . or maybe it just your improvisation ? and if you follow the piano, you should add note here 00:03:642 - , and if you follow vocal you should remove that red tick "pattern works for song" try hear this on 25% pls

00:04:001 (4001|2) - delete this, if you follow the vocal Nope

00:09:391 (9391|1) - ^ Nope

00:09:750 - and 00:10:468 - if you follow piano, you have to put a note here XD

00:15:678 (15678|3,16397|3,17115|2,17834|3,18552|1,19271|1) - hey . . this is 2 note here, and 00:16:037 (16037|1,16756|1,17474|2,18193|0,19630|0) - sholud be 1 note, swap that note placement . . . :? try to follow start from this 00:21:067 - (correct place)

00:22:864 (22864|1) - move to 1, then if applied . . . 00:23:223 (23223|2) - move to 2 Nope

00:23:223 (23223|2) - you missing a note here, try to be consistent XD ????

00:24:480 (24480|1) - move to 3, then if applied . . . 00:25:199 (25199|3) - move to 1 Nope

00:27:894 - try this, will be better and friendly to play I prefered mine, so no change

00:30:768 - add note here try to be consistent with 00:27:894 - same sound right ?

00:31:666 (31666|0) - delete this, and i think the LN have an issues . . try this http://puu.sh/fTA8h/72bf448f89.jpg, cuz the second LN is contain faded out music, so just only need 1 LN Sorry, Rejected

start from this 00:32:564 - try to be more creative (follow vocal right ?), i can suggest you with this image http://puu.sh/fTAuD/430c96fc0b.jpg I'm not following vocal here, I'm following the drum beats so Rejected

00:49:810 - suggest to try this http://puu.sh/fTAO9/9bf4fa8bec.jpg, for better pitch ;) Nope

00:53:762 (53762|1,54480|2) - change to single note only, too epic for Normal diff Nope

00:57:714 - try this, more rythimically http://puu.sh/fTB7l/257cd30bb1.jpg

00:59:870 (59870|2) - move to 2, pitch Nope

01:05:618 (65618|1) - delete this one

01:08:133 (68133|3) - LN starts here 01:08:492 - listen carefully

01:09:750 (69750|0) - move to 4, then if applied 01:10:289 (70289|2) - move to 1 Nope

01:16:397 (76397|3,77115|0,77834|3) - delete, not too strong here, remember . . . i know you put 2 note for drum . . like in there 01:18:912 (78912|0,78912|1) - (nah, it's correct place) try to follow them

01:17:474 - missing drum here, add 1 note

01:24:301 (84301|3) - move to 1 for avoid triple jacks and for balance too

01:30:049 (90049|1) - delete, cuz 3 notes . . . only need 2 is enough

01:32:924 (92924|3) - delete, remember . . . the LN is contain a note too . . so you push 3 note here . . . only need 2 note here . . .
01:35:798 - nah, this is correct, good joob

01:38:672 - try this http://puu.sh/fTC7X/7ba885c414.jpg more friendly to plays :lol: Rejected

01:52:684 (112684|3) - delete, the music is break here, do not to add any thing, and then 01:53:043 - add 1 note (if applied) That one is for the piano. Intended that part

01:56:636 (116636|3,116816|2,116995|1,116995|0,117355|0,117534|1,117714|3,117714|2,118073|0,118253|3,118433|0,118433|1,118792|3,118792|0) - suggest to remap this, i think the pattern is not follow the rythim properly I prefer this way so reject

01:59:331 (119331|0,119331|3,119510|3,119510|0) - this part does'nt have any same sound here, why you put here ? 01:59:331 (119331|3,119331|0) - move to 2 and 3

01:59:151 - hey, i hear a kick sound here

02:06:876 (126876|0,126876|3) - put them in colomn 2 and 3 , to follow the music properly This time, Nope

02:07:235 - for the reff of music, i think it will be same suggstion as above . . so i'll skip this

02:18:013 (138013|0,138373|0) - move to 3 and 2, then if applied 02:18:732 (138732|1) - move to 1

02:34:181 (154181|0) - move to 2 Nope

02:42:085 - add a note you follow the piano right ?

02:43:522 - add note No Sound Here

02:55:019 (175019|0) - move to 2 Nope

02:50:528 (170528|3) - LN end at here 02:52:684 - No Change

03:10:648 (190648|3) - delete, and 2 note should be there 03:11:007 - add at 1, then if applied 03:11:187 (191 :( 187|0,191546|0) - move to 3 and 2 No Change

03:24:840 (204840|2) - suggest to delete, need only 1 LN here . . if not . . you can delete this 03:24:840 (204840|1) - 3 notes here XD i'm so dead This time, Nope

03:27:714 (207714|3) - delete ^

03:33:642 (213642|0) - move to 2 ^

03:35:977 (215977|3) - move to 1 ^

04:00:229 - start this, don't be a boring note . . XD ^

04:08:133 (248133|0,248133|3) - make to be LN, then 04:08:672 (248672|0,248672|3,249031|3,249031|1) - convert to be single note, example
No Change

04:16:037 (256037|0) - move to 3

Rest of the mods applied and fixed


Future
00:01:666 (1666|3,2385|0,3103|0) - delete this, cuz you don't put the double note start from there 00:03:822 -

00:13:702 - add note on 4

00:14:780 (14780|1) - move to 3 Nope

00:19:989 (19989|2) - move to 4 Nope

00:20:349 (20349|0) - move to 3 Nope

00:21:427 (21427|0) - move to 4 Nope

00:27:175 (27175|2,27175|1) - superb jack :v , suggest move to 1 and 4 Nope

00:30:049 (30049|0,30049|3) - move to 2 and 3 Nope

00:58:971 (58971|2) - delete this, better to plays, and if applied add 1 note on 00:59:151 -

01:04:001 (64001|1,64001|3) - if you use this. . . then suggest to remove 01:04:181 (64181|0) - for better play

01:05:618 (65618|1) - delete to . . . (have some break, because after guitar impact)

01:08:492 (68492|1) - same reason ^

01:10:289 - for the rest , the suggestion is same as above . . hope you understand this, LOL

01:52:325 (112325|2) - move to 2 Nope

01:52:774 (112774|3,112953|1) - Hey . . delete this, no need to stairs here XD i changed my mind, deleted anyway. Blame me for this one ;w;
02:42:804 - missing piano here, add 1 note No sound here

02:51:247 (171247|1,171965|1) - delete this, if you follow the piano

02:54:121 (174121|2) - same reason ^

03:06:157 (186157|3) - consider to move it, the pattern is not follow any rythim sound if you put jack in there

03:27:714 (207714|1,207714|2,207714|3,207714|0) - why 4 notes here XD ? delete the single note in 1 and 4 ... then after deleted, move the slider to 1
and 4, then if all of them applied . . 03:29:870 (209870|0) - move to 3 Nope

03:35:798 (215798|3) - should be there 03:35:618 -

04:17:115 (257115|2,257115|1) - move to 1 and 4 Nope

04:17:474 (257474|1,257474|2) - move to 1 and 4 Nope

04:20:169 (260169|0,260169|3) - move to 2 and 3 Nope

Rest of the mods applied and fixed


dafak I'm so dead XD . . long mod does'nt mean the beatmap is bad . . still need an improve . . .
Good luck for your beatmap :)
Thanks :)

EDIT: Done checking
Marirose
Hey JamesHappy o/
from my queue


Normal mod


i chose Future diff
here's the mod :)


Above all,mp3 okay,bg okay,mapset okay
no hitsound :)

still WIP status :)

[Normal Mod]

Cloumn=1,2,3,4

Future
when started,accordin to ur idea, the heavy piano"main"sound should be double but
look at 00:05:977 - ,00:06:696 - ,00:08:133 - ,00:08:852 - ,i think you miss them D:

00:10:289 - theres no sound here,overmapped,remove
00:11:007 - same,remove
00:13:163 (13163|2) - remove
etc..

check the pattern and overmap problem this part,you can do it :)



00:30:947 (30947|0,30947|1) - and 00:31:666 (31666|0,31666|1) - not the same sound,so i recommand donno make them same column

00:37:953 - it should be double right?

00:58:253 (58253|1) - umm if you followed the instrument,it should end at 01:00:409 - ,if vocal,i recommand you can replace 00:58:792 (58792|0,59151|0) - to LN for the vocal to contact this

01:09:750 (69750|2,70289|3,70648|3) - you know what to do:)

01:16:936 (76936|3) - if vocal,try replace 01:17:295 (77295|0,77654|0,78013|1) - as vocal LN

01:18:552 (78552|3,78732|2) - i think jackhammer fits here,01:18:732 (78732|2) - let this one at col4

01:23:403 - you didnt double for the vocal before this,so it should be single note

01:27:175 (87175|3,87175|0,87355|2,87355|1) - thats okay cuz the heavy drum beat
but01:27:714 - why only 1 note? lol and 01:27:894 - why 2 notes?? >< a bit problem

01:28:612 - 1 note is enough
etc...


check the sound,"soft"or"heavy"?



01:50:169 - bass and drum,its okay for double but 01:50:349 - only 1 note is enough(double for the bass 01:50:169 - here is enough,neednt double at this line

01:52:145 - add for the chord

01:52:774 (112774|3,112953|1) - no sound,overmap,remove and dont forget to make this 01:52:864 (112864|2) - at col2 will better

01:59:151 - hithat sound,add one

02:04:720 - you miss a drum here

02:07:774 (127774|2,128133|2) - cuz the vocal LN 02:07:235 (127235|0) - ,i recommand you can try replace them as vocal LN to contact


02:09:930 - for the drum hit,why not double><

02:11:007 (131007|1) - move this to col3,make it jackhammer to fits the guitar and this patter is "col1,2",the same as 02:10:648 - but different sound,so make them different

02:15:678 - double here,not 02:15:858 - here

02:16:037 - double

02:19:630 (139630|0,139810|2) - jackhammer is okay


check the sound carefully this part






now the piano and violin part


02:43:343 (163343|1) - you follow the piano,theres no piano sound!remove
02:50:528 (170528|3) - i think this chord end at 02:53:403 - will better


then 02:56:636 (176636|3) - soft chord,ignore the sound like this
03:00:588 (180588|3) - and this..

etc...


03:02:385 (182385|2) - this guitar sound slap should started 03:02:564 -

03:11:007 - double

03:23:942 - and 03:24:121 - has clearly sound,try to catch


03:33:642 (213642|0,213642|3,213822|3,213822|0,214001|3,214001|0) - all soft drum before 03:34:181 - ,make them 1 note each line

03:36:696 (216696|2,216786|1) - overmap,remove

the last kiai part,notice: follow the different drum before and make sure if the piano note overmapped :)



mod end

Good Luck
Topic Starter
JamesHappy

Marirose wrote:

Hey JamesHappy o/
from my queue


Normal mod


i chose Future diff
here's the mod :)


Above all,mp3 okay,bg okay,mapset okay
no hitsound :)

still WIP status :)

[Normal Mod]

Cloumn=1,2,3,4

Future
when started,accordin to ur idea, the heavy piano"main"sound should be double but
look at 00:05:977 - ,00:06:696 - ,00:08:133 - ,00:08:852 - ,i think you miss them D: added except the first one

00:10:289 - theres no sound here,overmapped,remove
00:11:007 - same,remove
00:13:163 (13163|2) - remove
etc..

check the pattern and overmap problem this part,you can do it :)



00:30:947 (30947|0,30947|1) - and 00:31:666 (31666|0,31666|1) - not the same sound,so i recommand donno make them same column

00:37:953 - it should be double right?

00:58:253 (58253|1) - umm if you followed the instrument,it should end at 01:00:409 - ,if vocal,i recommand you can replace 00:58:792 (58792|0,59151|0) - to LN for the vocal to contact this followed the instrument so applied

01:09:750 (69750|2,70289|3,70648|3) - you know what to do:) same as above

01:16:936 (76936|3) - if vocal,try replace 01:17:295 (77295|0,77654|0,78013|1) - as vocal LN delete instead

01:18:552 (78552|3,78732|2) - i think jackhammer fits here,01:18:732 (78732|2) - let this one at col4

01:23:403 - you didnt double for the vocal before this,so it should be single note

01:27:175 (87175|3,87175|0,87355|2,87355|1) - thats okay cuz the heavy drum beat
but01:27:714 - why only 1 note? lol and 01:27:894 - why 2 notes?? >< a bit problem yeah i forgot that one /me slapped myself

01:28:612 - 1 note is enough
etc...


check the sound,"soft"or"heavy"?




01:50:169 - bass and drum,its okay for double but 01:50:349 - only 1 note is enough(double for the bass 01:50:169 - here is enough,neednt double at this line

01:52:145 - add for the chord

01:52:774 (112774|3,112953|1) - no sound,overmap,remove and dont forget to make this 01:52:864 (112864|2) - at col2 will better

01:59:151 - hithat sound,add one

02:04:720 - you miss a drum here

02:07:774 (127774|2,128133|2) - cuz the vocal LN 02:07:235 (127235|0) - ,i recommand you can try replace them as vocal LN to contact
replaced with a note instead

02:09:930 - for the drum hit,why not double><

02:11:007 (131007|1) - move this to col3,make it jackhammer to fits the guitar and this patter is "col1,2",the same as 02:10:648 - but different sound,so make them different

02:15:678 - double here,not 02:15:858 - here

02:16:037 - double

02:19:630 (139630|0,139810|2) - jackhammer is okay


check the sound carefully this part






now the piano and violin part


02:43:343 (163343|1) - you follow the piano,theres no piano sound!remove
02:50:528 (170528|3) - i think this chord end at 02:53:403 - will better


then 02:56:636 (176636|3) - soft chord,ignore the sound like this
03:00:588 (180588|3) - and this..

etc...


03:02:385 (182385|2) - this guitar sound slap should started 03:02:564 -

03:11:007 - double

03:23:942 - and 03:24:121 - has clearly sound,try to catch I didn't heard very well, even on 25%


03:33:642 (213642|0,213642|3,213822|3,213822|0,214001|3,214001|0) - all soft drum before 03:34:181 - ,make them 1 note each line

03:36:696 (216696|2,216786|1) - overmap,remove nope

the last kiai part,notice: follow the different drum before and make sure if the piano note overmapped :)


Rest of the mods applied and fixed
mod end

Good Luck
Thanks Marirose :)
Kruzon



Hi, sorry for late modding ORZ
As usual, my 4k modding format will be: 1 l 2 l 3 l 4
Oh, and I'll only give a thorough mod on Normal+, sorry I'm the very definition of laziness itself

Normal+

First and foremost, won't you name it a Normal instead of Normal+?

00:07:415 (7415|3,7774|3) - feels odd to me, don' think jack placed well here, perhaps 00:07:774 (7774|3) - move to 1
00:08:133 (8133|1,8492|2) - might as well press Ctrl +H, better flow

seriously, i think this is a lot better if: (you may need to apply them all first before thinking of rejecting them,)
00:08:852 (8852|0) - move to 3
00:09:211 (9211|2,9391|1,9570|3,9570|0,9750|2,9930|0,10109|1,10289|2,10468|0) - Ctrl + H
00:10:648 (10648|1) - move to 3
00:10:828 (10828|0,11007|2,11367|3,11726|1,12085|3,12445|1) - Ctrl + H
00:11:007 (11007|1) - move to 1
00:11:367 (11367|0,12085|0) - move them to 3
00:11:726 (11726|2,12445|2) - move them to 1
---------------------------------------------------------------

00:17:474 (17474|3,17474|2) - 2 notes here seem to break the surrounding notes' consistency, consider deleting 1 of them (I suggest delete 4)
00:17:654 (17654|1,17834|3) - hmm.. quite hard to press for a normal+ owo- perhaps make the long note into a single note instead
00:20:528 (20528|1,20708|3) - same case as above
00:24:480 (24480|1,24840|2) - rather than deploying these noodles, how about 2-notes jack on this area?

00:30:947 (30947|2,30947|0,31666|3,31666|0) - why did you cut off the long notes? actually wait i understand you're following the violin but honestly, this is
a bad move. I don't know about those ET out there, but normal people would get confuse since they follow drum starting here 00:26:816 (26816|1,26816|0) - It's not wrong, but it definitely feels off, it's as if you're switching to vocal suddenly from layer of instrument- My suggestion:

00:30:947 (30947|2,31666|0) - delete them
00:30:947 (30947|0) - increase its length to here 00:31:666 (31666|0) - or recommended here 00:32:564 (32564|0) -
umm, if you somehow agree to these suggestion, then you may apply these:
00:30:947 (30947|0) - move to 3
00:32:564 (32564|2) - move to 1

00:44:061 (44061|3,44061|0,44421|1) - hmm wrong consistency, I think it should be 1 & 2 & 1 & 2 notes density instead, not 2 & 1 & 2 (did you understand this? lol) (Also, im aware 00:44:061 (44061|3,44061|0) - has louder impact and deserve more notes, but think again how odd will this become 00:44:421 (44421|1) - )

00:45:678 (45678|2) - not necessarily to be added, especially on this difficulty, perhaps delete it
00:47:115 (47115|2) - same reason as above
00:48:552 (48552|2) - same reason as above

01:08:492 (68492|0) - oops?
01:33:283 (93283|0) - deserve 1 more note to be added
01:46:037 (106037|1) - no cue sound, delete
01:47:474 (107474|2) - same reason
01:47:295 (107295|3,107654|1,107654|0) - perhaps Ctrl + H them
01:48:013 (108013|1,108193|2,108373|0,108373|3) - follow this 01:46:576 (106576|0,106756|1,106936|2,106936|3) -, i think more better flow
01:48:732 (108732|2) - you may move it to 2
01:48:912 (108912|1) - no cue sound (umm well you can add this ghost notes on harder diff, but i dont see the reason to map ghost notes on normal)
01:50:349 (110349|1) - same reason
01:54:660 (114660|0) - same
01:56:097 (116097|1) - same (ok i realized at this point i may destroy your pattern with my suggestion, therefore.. i will pay no heed on consistency for now.)

Starting here, it will be mostly on notes displacement*

honestly, i think this is rather awkward to press, on this difficulty, 02:14:780 (134780|2,134959|0,135139|1) - seems like you're mapping 2 layers of sound here oooo

hmm.. how about, 02:34:181 (154181|2) - move to 4 and 02:34:540 (154540|0) - move to 3, afterward 02:35:079 (155079|1,155439|2) - shift them 1 time to the left, and finally 02:35:798 (155798|1) - move to 3

02:38:313 (158313|0,158672|1,159031|2) - pitch-wise, it's better to Ctrl+H them
02:49:810 (169810|0,169989|1,170169|2) - why not connect them to 02:49:271 (169271|0,169450|1,169630|2) - ? resuming the zig-zag kinda fitting at this point

03:45:858 (225858|2,226397|1,226397|0,226936|1,227654|1) - note presentation looks funny, perhaps 03:46:936 (226936|1) - move to 4 and
03:47:295 (227295|3) - move to 3

04:08:672 (248672|3,248672|0,249031|1,249031|3,249391|2,249391|3,249930|1,249930|0) - at this point, the sound seem to decrease/descends its tension, but this pattern of yours suggest it to get more powerful, it contradicts- therefore, press Ctrl + H

04:19:271 (259271|1,259450|1,259630|0) - hmmm... i suggest 04:19:271 (259271|1) - move to 1 and 04:19:630 (259630|0) - move to 4,
resuming the stairs

- mod ends -

Overall, it's a nice song. Though, you gotta pay attention to the notes consistency, the rest is fine C:
Good luck with your map
Topic Starter
JamesHappy

Kruzon wrote:




Hi, sorry for late modding ORZ
As usual, my 4k modding format will be: 1 l 2 l 3 l 4
Oh, and I'll only give a thorough mod on Normal+, sorry I'm the very definition of laziness itself yeah 2lazy4me

Normal+

First and foremost, won't you name it a Normal instead of Normal+? No change

00:07:415 (7415|3,7774|3) - feels odd to me, don' think jack placed well here, perhaps 00:07:774 (7774|3) - move to 1 re-arranged
00:08:133 (8133|1,8492|2) - might as well press Ctrl +H, better flow

seriously, i think this is a lot better if: (you may need to apply them all first before thinking of rejecting them,)
00:08:852 (8852|0) - move to 3
00:09:211 (9211|2,9391|1,9570|3,9570|0,9750|2,9930|0,10109|1,10289|2,10468|0) - Ctrl + H
00:10:648 (10648|1) - move to 3
00:10:828 (10828|0,11007|2,11367|3,11726|1,12085|3,12445|1) - Ctrl + H
00:11:007 (11007|1) - move to 1
00:11:367 (11367|0,12085|0) - move them to 3
00:11:726 (11726|2,12445|2) - move them to 1
---------------------------------------------------------------

00:17:474 (17474|3,17474|2) - 2 notes here seem to break the surrounding notes' consistency, consider deleting 1 of them (I suggest delete 4)
00:17:654 (17654|1,17834|3) - hmm.. quite hard to press for a normal+ owo- perhaps make the long note into a single note instead
00:20:528 (20528|1,20708|3) - same case as above
00:24:480 (24480|1,24840|2) - rather than deploying these noodles, how about 2-notes jack on this area? No thanks

00:30:947 (30947|2,30947|0,31666|3,31666|0) - why did you cut off the long notes? actually wait i understand you're following the violin but honestly, this is
a bad move. I don't know about those ET out there, but normal people would get confuse since they follow drum starting here 00:26:816 (26816|1,26816|0) - It's not wrong, but it definitely feels off, it's as if you're switching to vocal suddenly from layer of instrument- My suggestion:

00:30:947 (30947|2,31666|0) - delete them Nope
00:30:947 (30947|0) - increase its length to here 00:31:666 (31666|0) - or recommended here 00:32:564 (32564|0) -
umm, if you somehow agree to these suggestion, then you may apply these: I prefer this way so nope
00:30:947 (30947|0) - move to 3
00:32:564 (32564|2) - move to 1


00:44:061 (44061|3,44061|0,44421|1) - hmm wrong consistency, I think it should be 1 & 2 & 1 & 2 notes density instead, not 2 & 1 & 2 (did you understand this? lol) (Also, im aware 00:44:061 (44061|3,44061|0) - has louder impact and deserve more notes, but think again how odd will this become 00:44:421 (44421|1) - ) added on the 1-note part instead

00:45:678 (45678|2) - not necessarily to be added, especially on this difficulty, perhaps delete it
00:47:115 (47115|2) - same reason as above
00:48:552 (48552|2) - same reason as above

01:08:492 (68492|0) - oops?
01:33:283 (93283|0) - deserve 1 more note to be added
01:46:037 (106037|1) - no cue sound, delete
01:47:474 (107474|2) - same reason
01:47:295 (107295|3,107654|1,107654|0) - perhaps Ctrl + H them No thanks
01:48:013 (108013|1,108193|2,108373|0,108373|3) - follow this 01:46:576 (106576|0,106756|1,106936|2,106936|3) -, i think more better flow No thanks
01:48:732 (108732|2) - you may move it to 2 ^
01:48:912 (108912|1) - no cue sound (umm well you can add this ghost notes on harder diff, but i dont see the reason to map ghost notes on normal)
01:50:349 (110349|1) - same reason
01:54:660 (114660|0) - same
01:56:097 (116097|1) - same (ok i realized at this point i may destroy your pattern with my suggestion, therefore.. i will pay no heed on consistency for now.)

Starting here, it will be mostly on notes displacement*

honestly, i think this is rather awkward to press, on this difficulty, 02:14:780 (134780|2,134959|0,135139|1) - seems like you're mapping 2 layers of sound here oooo nerf it

hmm.. how about, 02:34:181 (154181|2) - move to 4 and 02:34:540 (154540|0) - move to 3, afterward 02:35:079 (155079|1,155439|2) - shift them 1 time to the left, and finally 02:35:798 (155798|1) - move to 3 No thanks

02:38:313 (158313|0,158672|1,159031|2) - pitch-wise, it's better to Ctrl+H them
02:49:810 (169810|0,169989|1,170169|2) - why not connect them to 02:49:271 (169271|0,169450|1,169630|2) - ? resuming the zig-zag kinda fitting at this point

03:45:858 (225858|2,226397|1,226397|0,226936|1,227654|1) - note presentation looks funny, perhaps 03:46:936 (226936|1) - move to 4 and
03:47:295 (227295|3) - move to 3

04:08:672 (248672|3,248672|0,249031|1,249031|3,249391|2,249391|3,249930|1,249930|0) - at this point, the sound seem to decrease/descends its tension, but this pattern of yours suggest it to get more powerful, it contradicts- therefore, press Ctrl + H

04:19:271 (259271|1,259450|1,259630|0) - hmmm... i suggest 04:19:271 (259271|1) - move to 1 and 04:19:630 (259630|0) - move to 4,
resuming the stairs

Rest of the mods applied and fixed
- mod ends -

Overall, it's a nice song. Though, you gotta pay attention to the notes consistency, the rest is fine C:
Good luck with your map
Thanks :)
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