Hi Hibiki o/, mod requested (personally) on the modding queue:
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[General]
This is only a suggestion, but maybe change the diff names to "Child's Book", "Short Story" and "Novel". It's easily distinguishable between one another, and wouldn't require the diff clasification in the name (EZ, NM and HD). Nothing wrong with the current names tho, just giving an idea
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Add Kiai Time from 01:17:700 - up to 01:36:300 -
[EZ]
00:09:900 (9900|2,9900|0) - Why a double here, there's no strong sound to emphasize, so delete one of the notes
00:18:300 (18300|3) - Move to column 1, no need to repeat note in the same column (also beacause column 1 is too empty in that section)
00:23:100 (23100|1) - Move to column 3, column is too empty
00:25:500 (25500|0) - Move to column 2, ^same reason
00:30:900 (30900|3) - Move to column 3, ^same reason
00:36:900 (36900|2) - Move to column 4, ^same reason
00:42:900 (42900|0) - This LN should start on 00:42:600 -, end in same place (that is if you are following the rising sound on that part, if not, then oops)
01:03:300 (63300|0) - Move to column 2
01:07:500 (67500|2,68100|1) - Move this one column to the left
[NM]
The SV on 01:36:300 - is too slow, make it at least 0.65-0.75 (increase the speed at least, too slow). Tho my reccomendation would be to leave SVs only for the HD diff, but if you want to leave the SV, increase the speed.
00:07:200 (7200|0,7200|2) - Delete this double, there's no sound here, meaning that it's a ghost note
00:15:300 (15300|3,15300|2) - Add note, you later use chords to represent this sound, so this should be a chord too
00:12:900 (12900|0,12900|1) - ^^^
Avoid this type of things, suggest you change the note placement to avoid that
01:17:100 (77100|0,77100|1,77100|2,77100|3) - Delete one note, a 3-note chord should be better
[HD]
00:09:900 (9900|1,9900|0,9900|3) - Delete one LN, the other 2 LNs should end on 00:10:200 - and add a double where the LNs end, there's a beat there.
Not much I can point out here without going too in-depth, just that you ignore a clear sound through most part of the song (The sound you represent with this pattern 00:54:600 (54600|3,54600|0,54750|1,54750|2,54900|3,54900|0,55050|1,55050|2,55200|0,55200|3) -). Is a pretty clear and hearable sound, which makes it uncomfortable when you hear such clear sound, and don't follow it while playing.
Map is good (song is hilarious XD), but be careful about mapping both vocals and instruments, it can get sort of confusing and make map quality worse (not saying map is like that). Ask me anytime for any help you need, and I'll see what I can do
Just don't interrupt me while I'm reading a book!Good Luck with your beatmap