Hardwell & Joey Dale feat. Luciana - Arcadia

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http://puu.sh/h94Z4/97480cb396.txt

Fixed the NC

About the spread.. I made the rhythms density in the kiai a bit less.. idk which jumps to reduce, because if I reduce one, I need to reduce all, and then I could just basically remap it, and I don't want that.
Topic Starter
Avena
fixed everything for Shadren because his userpage allows me to I guess.
updated

edit: working on a new Insane.
Irreversible
[Prikazuya]

00:01:202 (2,3) - Why ignoring the downbeats here? It somehow works but it the inconsistency between 00:01:202 (2,3) - and 00:02:843 (2,3) - bothers me.
00:03:312 (3,6) - The distance between those doesn't look properly made imo. Would go for a blanketish pattern.
00:14:327 (2) - Ignored downbeat, this one doesn't work good. Would shift so slider starts is on white.
00:23:702 (2,3,4) - Big jump for no real reason, would reduce. After all, it is bigger than the jump 00:24:405 (4,1) - here, which isn't right imo. 00:24:874 (1) - Should be emphasized.
00:30:265 (4,5,1) - Align.
00:36:124 (1,2,3,4,5) - Don't really get the rhythm, nor the spacing here. It doesn't emphasize things that are given, nor does it follow the music very well. But I don't know how you could fix it without remapping this little section.
00:37:999 (1) - If you wanna put jumps, here are the spots for them (as these are beats that should be emphasized)
00:56:163 - It feels weird that this spot is left out.
01:13:624 (1,2,3,4) - cool pattern

01:46:905 (3,4) - Interrupted flow, would move 01:47:374 (4) - more to the left to support the curvy movement.

rest is gud
Topic Starter
Avena
Fixed everything on my parts but the left out spot because minimalism is sweq
updated
Nyukai
Call me when it's rebubbled, unless there's already a BN for it lol
Crimmi
Hello thar sweetie <3~ m4m incoming~

Leyenda:



Red: Unrankable.
Blue: Suggestion
Pink: Personal thoughts.


[Easy]



00:06:124 (3) - Maybe remove this note and bring the spinner back like this? It sounds more sensible to me: (Also there is an unsnapped green line there, check if my eyes aren't correct o3o)
00:30:499 (1) - This object 's slider body is slightly touching the HP bar when I tested it, maybe it could be my monitor but double check and see. (But I don't think it's a big issue, skip it if you feel it's alright.) (See here for photo proof.)
00:43:624 (4) This object's slider start is touching the score bar above, like the previous statement above, you can skip it if you wish.
01:04:483 (1) - Maybe bring this back to the red tick, it sounded more on beat than the blue tick you placed it on. (I know you're listing to the instruments build up for that reason.) You can also extend this to the white tick, but like I said, you can skip this if you're not comfortable on changing it.
02:38:233 (1) - ^ Same as above.

[Shadren's Normal]



02:10:577 (5) - This is touching the Score bar. (Or I might need a better monitor. :| )

Nothing else in this diff is erroneous~ :D

[Pritiphyxia's Hard]

(<--- lol the name sounds like a kind of new medicine.)

00:22:062 (2) - This object is touching the HP bar.
00:37:882 (5) - Maybe remove this note and extend (4)'s slider end in it's place? It felt more in rhythm like that.
00:56:046 (3) - This object is touching the HP bar.
01:05:187 (1) - Maybe extend this to the white tick? :arrow:
01:30:030 (5) - Maybe you could point this down a bit like this? :arrow:
02:04:132 (4) - I feel you should remove this note, it doesn't really fit, it felt a bit forced in that gentle breakdown part.
02:38:937 (2) - Just like 00:37:882 (5).

[Prikazuya's Insane]



01:06:124 (x) - Maybe add a note here?
02:39:874 (x) - ^ Same as above.

Other than that, this diff is fine.

[Geroversible's Insane]



00:22:999 (1,2) - Hmm, I don't think if this is an overlap, but if someone would play this on hidden, this might be a problem.
01:37:530 (3,4) - I suggest shortening the gap a bit, that jump seems to be a bit too quick and distant.

[Paradise]



Clear~

My map /me runs
Irreversible
uh.. dunno how that happened
01:37:765 (4) - move to 364 196 pleae priti
Topic Starter
Avena
fixed everything but adding additional beats since I CAN AND I WANT OK NO BULLY PLOX
updated
Shadren

Crimmi wrote:

Hello thar sweetie <3~ m4m incoming~

Leyenda:



Red: Unrankable.
Blue: Suggestion
Pink: Personal thoughts.


[Shadren's Normal]



02:10:577 (5) - This is touching the Score bar. (Or I might need a better monitor. :| )
It's ok. rly. don't mind :)

Nothing else in this diff is erroneous~ :D


My map /me runs

No changes. Anyway, thank you for the mod c:
Nathan
alright rechecked and rebubbled, we just got rid of an unwarranted stream jump in paradise diff
hehe
7u
Nyukai
Damn, I was late :< Gratz anyway.
Maeglwn
the BG

PRITI

WE TALKED ABOUT THE BG
Topic Starter
Avena

Maeglwn wrote:

the BG

PRITI

WE TALKED ABOUT THE BG
yeh
Secretpipe
Sgord1
I like this song. Congrats :3
Topic Starter
Avena
wait what
where's the dq?
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