Haruna Luna - Kimiiro Signal-TV size ver.-

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Kamio Misuzu
下不动图啊。只有当时你传的俩难度,还是摸摸两个I得了(其实懒...)

[Insane]
00:07:328 (5,1,2) - 改flow和blanket
00:08:243 (3,4,5,6,7) - 后面的34567依次做了改动,后面不变。供参考
00:39:889 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 玛德这一段怎么这么好听
01:01:109 (1,2) - 差评-。- 虽然是跟了背景,但怀疑是个被黑1分的点,随手断。考虑第二个换成直的slider?拉到这里01:01:474 -

别的没啥了,就是发现一点烤老板的谜之flow,按排列看总觉得都少了一个note的节奏啊...

比如
  1. 01:17:389 (5,6,1) - 5—6,6—1之间总觉得应该在差不多328|64的地方有个note才觉得顺手啊
  2. 01:18:853 (6,7) - 6—7之间,232|296
  3. 01:22:145 (8,1) - 8—1之间,360|304
  4. 01:24:340 (4,5) - 4—5之间,96|328(这个倒是还能接受,上面三个太明显了)
    诸如此类,试着稍微改动一下吧(最后这个个保持也OK)


[Fycho‘s Insane]
00:20:133 (3,4) - 都ctrl+G试试,感觉更舒服
00:29:554 (7) - 删掉?这里的歌词一顿一顿的,三连好像不合适。00:29:462 (6) - 放到264|108
01:10:255 (3) - ctrl+G?

1pc ss,没啥问题

美丽o.o

EDIT:那就补个hard233

[Hard]
00:14:920 (6) - 柑橘多余,你后面也没放类似的啊
01:06:596 (2,3,4,5) - 好像有不少人不擅长这个,而且这里本身就没有三连的音,硬塞一个白线三连也挺蛋疼。试试直接slider带过这种
01:12:633 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 简化,五连+折返还后面有个停顿,hard里可能稍微有点难
01:14:096 (3,4) - 尽量不要红线起手,而且4的折返其实也有点卡。试试这样。
01:15:194 (2) - 压在1上比3上好一点,准备时间上有所不同,和不宜大跳放连打一个道理。(狗屁道理,就是我自己总结的。。)
其实你红线起手,然后后面用折返纠正的地方不少,不过就不提了,都也没啥特别的不舒服。

再次美丽o.o
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头痛的不行 射颗星跑路
Mafumafu
Hi! There is Regraz's mod! :)
There is a few points of my mod:

  1. Thank you for requesting a mod from me! Mod is just a kind of suggestion, so feel free if you dont want to make change.
  2. I am still learning modding skills so I am sorry if I cannot provide much help.
  3. Same issues won’t be repeated unless they are in a GD.

General

  1. Add 2000ms to AudioLeadIn Time.
  2. Uncheck Wide-Screen Support if a storyboard wont be added.
  3. 01:26:627 (1) – Sudden drop of volume is really sudden. Considering making it drop gradually.

Oyatsu’s Easy


  • Rhythm:
  1. 00:10:621 (3,4) – 3/2 repeat? Following the music and downbeat better imo.
    Structure:
  2. Really nice.
    Hitsounds
  3. 00:05:499 (3) – The Clap on the end sounds a little weird.
  4. 00:35:499 (1) – Add something for the end. Same as 00:38:426 (1) – and next sections. Here’s instrument, so maybe it is better to add some hitsounds to emphasize rather than leaving it empty.
    Others:
  5. 01:26:535 (3,1) – Dunno if this is rankable, so close to the spinner.

Normal


  • Rhythm:
  1. Fine, though a little messy.
    Structure:
  2. 00:55:987 (1,2) – Blanket better?
    Hitsounds
  3. 00:08:792 (7) – The whistle sounds a little weird, really. Same as 00:32:206 (5) -
  4. 00:11:170 (5) – Finish is enough, whistle is a little weird, imo.
  5. 00:35:499 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) – 这段感觉Clap有点少啊
  6. 01:12:084 (4) – whistle on end presents a not nice effect, really.
    Others:
  7. 01:25:804 (2,1) - Same comment as Easy.

Hard


  • Rhythm:
  1. 01:05:499 (3,4) – About this, it is better to make the repeat time consistent. Normally they will be regarded the same if there are in the same color. Strongly suggest adjust something here.
    Structure:
  2. 00:00:377 (3,4) – Really obvious blanket problem.
  3. 00:26:718 (1,2) – Such overlap pattern is not recommended.
    Hitsounds
  4. OK, the claps on the Kiai are nice :3
    Others:
  5. Fine, overall a solid diff while the structure can be better.

Fycho’s Insane


  • Rhythm:
  1. OK
    Structure:
  2. 00:19:035 (4,1) – A little anti-flowed.
  3. 00:20:133 (3,4) – Now from 2 to 3 is a little anti-flowed. Try this? http://puu.sh/eDNCf/eddb828278.jpg Considering Ctrl+G them
  4. 00:40:804 (2,3) – The jump feels a little hmm, weird but fine, yeah.
  5. 00:58:731 (6,1) – Consider a jump here?
  6. 00:59:279 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) – Out of the rising pitch here, guess it is better to enlarge the DS between 6,7,8,9? For which can provide more playability and music-fit.
  7. 01:19:035 (7) – Raising the DS up?
    Hitsounds
  8. 00:45:743 (1,4) –whistle to follow the newly appeared instrument in this section.
    Others:
  9. Yeah..

Heroine

  1. 00:52:145 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) – What the flow…
  2. 00:58:913 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) – 爷爷,这flow
  3. 01:04:767 (1,4) – Make them in a circle. http://puu.sh/eDRxX/89e4babc06.jpg
  4. ;w;


Good Luck :3
:)
Oyatsu

Regraz wrote:

Oyatsu’s Easy


  • Rhythm:
  1. 00:10:621 (3,4) – 3/2 repeat? Following the music and downbeat better imo. :arrow: I prefer catching sound at 00:11:353 - and keep current parrtn because it's nice. But you're right, i will consider this
    Structure:
  2. Really nice.
    Hitsounds
  3. 00:05:499 (3) – The Clap on the end sounds a little weird. :arrow:removed
  4. 00:35:499 (1) – Add something for the end. Same as 00:38:426 (1) – and next sections. Here’s instrument, so maybe it is better to add some hitsounds to emphasize rather than leaving it empty. :arrow:added whistle
    Others:
  5. 01:26:535 (3,1) – Dunno if this is rankable, so close to the spinner. :arrow:I'm really not sure. Before, it is normal and you know, slider after circle/note is normal for noob/newbie players to realize, it is different from circle/note after spin. I will take a care if BAT talks about this
Thank you for modding!
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: [Leopard-Raws] Saenai Heroine no Sodatekata - 00 RAW (CX 1280x720 x264 AAC)_1.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 60743
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Kimiiro Signal
TitleUnicode:君色シグナル
Artist:Haruna Luna
ArtistUnicode:春奈るな
Creator:Tsukuyomi
Version:Oyatsu's Easy
Source:冴えない彼女の育てかた
Tags:baldrace opening Fycho Oyatsu
BeatmapID:599175
BeatmapSetID:258165

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.85
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Topic Starter
Kinomi

Kamio Misuzu wrote:

下不动图啊。只有当时你传的俩难度,还是摸摸两个I得了(其实懒...)

[Insane]
00:07:328 (5,1,2) - 改flow和blanket
00:08:243 (3,4,5,6,7) - 后面的34567依次做了改动,后面不变。供参考
我 感觉没必要改啊
00:39:889 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 玛德这一段怎么这么好听
01:01:109 (1,2) - 差评-。- 虽然是跟了背景,但怀疑是个被黑1分的点,随手断。考虑第二个换成直的slider?拉到这里01:01:474 -
拉进了
别的没啥了,就是发现一点烤老板的谜之flow,按排列看总觉得都少了一个note的节奏啊...

比如
  1. 01:17:389 (5,6,1) - 5—6,6—1之间总觉得应该在差不多328|64的地方有个note才觉得顺手啊
  2. 01:18:853 (6,7) - 6—7之间,232|296
  3. 01:22:145 (8,1) - 8—1之间,360|304
  4. 01:24:340 (4,5) - 4—5之间,96|328(这个倒是还能接受,上面三个太明显了)
    诸如此类,试着稍微改动一下吧(最后这个个保持也OK)


[Hard]
00:14:920 (6) - 柑橘多余,你后面也没放类似的啊 这边三连特别明显
01:06:596 (2,3,4,5) - 好像有不少人不擅长这个,而且这里本身就没有三连的音,硬塞一个白线三连也挺蛋疼。试试直接slider带过这种
这里有三连啊。。我换个pattern.
01:12:633 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 简化,五连+折返还后面有个停顿,hard里可能稍微有点难
先放着看看,懒改
01:14:096 (3,4) - 尽量不要红线起手,而且4的折返其实也有点卡。试试这样。
卡吗。。 没压clap大概没事,这也是无奈,vocal在红线
01:15:194 (2) - 压在1上比3上好一点,准备时间上有所不同,和不宜大跳放连打一个道理。(狗屁道理,就是我自己总结的。。)
其实这边是跟那两声呱呱
其实你红线起手,然后后面用折返纠正的地方不少,不过就不提了,都也没啥特别的不舒服。

object的选择我还是比较用心的,红线起滑条啊,图我自己都会试百把遍,尾巴压重音之类的我要用那肯定会搞的打起来不别扭。

Regraz wrote:



General

  1. Add 2000ms to AudioLeadIn Time.
  2. Uncheck Wide-Screen Support if a storyboard wont be added.
  3. 01:26:627 (1) – Sudden drop of volume is really sudden. Considering making it drop gradually.改了改

Normal


  • Rhythm:
  1. Fine, though a little messy.
    Structure:
  2. 00:55:987 (1,2) – Blanket better?
    Hitsounds
  3. 00:08:792 (7) – The whistle sounds a little weird, really. Same as 00:32:206 (5) - 复制的,改了
  4. 00:11:170 (5) – Finish is enough, whistle is a little weird, imo.
  5. 00:35:499 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) – 这段感觉Clap有点少啊 照着背景下的,没有不加
  6. 01:12:084 (4) – whistle on end presents a not nice effect, really. 换了个
    Others:
  7. 01:25:804 (2,1) - Same comment as Easy.

Hard


  • Rhythm:
  1. 01:05:499 (3,4) – About this, it is better to make the repeat time consistent. Normally they will be regarded the same if there are in the same color. Strongly suggest adjust something here. 有道理,不过先放着看看
    Structure:
  2. 00:00:377 (3,4) – Really obvious blanket problem.
  3. 00:26:718 (1,2) – Such overlap pattern is not recommended. 这没关系把
    Hitsounds
  4. OK, the claps on the Kiai are nice :3
    Others:
  5. Fine, overall a solid diff while the structure can be better.

Heroine

  1. 00:52:145 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) – What the flow…
  2. 00:58:913 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) – 爷爷,这flow
  3. 01:04:767 (1,4) – Make them in a circle. http://puu.sh/eDRxX/89e4babc06.jpg
    改了前面就不好看了啊
  4. ;w;


[size=150]Good Luck :3
:)

wocao,热瓜子水摸,fuel
update oyatsu's diff
Kibbleru
o/

this song to kawaii
Topic Starter
Kinomi

Kibbleru wrote:

o/

this song to kawaii
actually i have no special feeling of this song. Just like the light noval.
Autumn
烤肉老板 说完了我觉得好饿啊

Oyatsu's Easy

  1. 00:39:889 (2,3) - The same rhythm as 00:45:743 (2,3,4) - seems better for newbie players imo :)

Normal

  1. 00:39:889 (4) - 弄个NC?后面到7了感觉有点多..这边正好是个重音
  2. 00:51:596 (5) - ^
  3. 01:06:962 (6) - ^

Hard

  1. 00:28:913 (3,4,5,6) - AR7.5这一坨有点难读
  2. 00:53:883 - 没重音弄个折返感觉怪怪的,不如和00:54:523 (1,2) - 统一
  3. 00:56:718 (3) - 这个貌似不是竖直的
其他难度没看出什么来,别打我啊!
AIR
烤肉老板 说完了我觉得好饿啊


[Oyatsu's Easy]
  1. 00:23:060 (3,1) - bllanket
    http://puu.sh/f6ai9/eba46f0e1a.png

[Normal]
  1. 00:00:377 (1) - 头部finish

[Hard]
  1. 00:30:194 (2) - 叠3头上吧
  2. 00:58:913 (1) - 转盘减一个线,这个难度会不会被挑刺?o.o

[Fycho's Insane]
  1. 00:36:962 (1) - 左右转下,顺便和上一个折返对称

[Heroine]
  1. 00:05:682 (4,5) - flow不太顺,随意
  2. 00:32:206 (5,6) - 5和6听起来一样,也改条吧
  3. 01:00:011 (5,6) - 可以跟着音乐再转一下,竖着摆



看不出什么问题只能滚去睡觉了
gl
Lavender
烤肉老板 说完了我觉得好饿啊
先马,拿回电脑了再摸
Awaken
mark.
Lavender
Red -> Unrank Issues
Blue -> highly recommended to fix
Black -> Personal Comments


[General]

  1. S:C4 的clap建议小一点音量,并且这里01:15:011 (1,2,3,4,5) - 是一样的节奏,为什么不用S:C4呢

[Oyatsu's Easy]

  • 01:26:627 (1) - Consider fade-out?

Fine.

[Normal]

  1. 01:00:377 (5) - 建议改成两个circle来体现乐曲的高潮
  2. 01:06:596 (5) - 去whistle,这里完全被clap压下去了,并没听出与后面两个S:C4 clap有什么区别


[Hard]
  1. 00:47:755 (2,1) - stack
  2. 01:06:596 (5) - 这里同normal,后面不提了
  3. 01:06:962 (3) - 这里是不是circle要好一点

orz排版没得挑

[Fycho's Insane]
  1. 00:11:353 (2,3) - Ctrl+G感觉好一点
  2. 00:24:340 (3,4) - stack
  3. 00:32:298 (6) - 这里没有音啊,为什么在这里放滑条...建议直接去掉
  4. 00:34:859 (5) - ^
  5. 01:21:596 (3,4,5) - 这里这个也有点不对的感觉


[Heroine]
  1. 00:15:377 (2,4) - 没对齐
  2. 00:24:340 (3,4) - 加音量,现在这样只能听到一点点
  3. 00:32:206 (5) - 这个normal whistle很违和,建议去掉
  4. 00:34:401 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 很容易断,个人比较不喜欢,建议3和4放近一点
  5. 00:54:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这一段1/4spam感觉不太合曲,这里并没有1/4音 不过毕竟烤老板
  6. 01:01:109 (1,2) - 还是合并成一个slider感觉好一点
  7. 01:21:596 (5,6) - 太远了,和前面01:20:133 (6,7) - 差太多了,很容易断的
orz
Rizia
[Heroine]
  1. 00:07:694 (1) - 這個停在00:07:877 - 之後00:07:968 - 加個note
  2. 00:24:340 (3) - 換成circle 現在的打上去有點不舒服
  3. 00:27:816 (5) - ctrl+g
  4. 01:01:292 (2,3) - 有點遠
  5. 01:24:798 - 為何要ignore這裡的vocal呀


[Fycho's Insane]
  1. 00:05:865 (3,4) - 整個梗挺好不過這兩個有點卡手
  2. 00:32:298 (6) - 這個有點怪 跟vocal比較好
  3. 01:26:170 (3) - 頭finish


[Hard]
  1. 00:30:194 (2) - stack在00:30:377 (3) - 頭感覺好點


[Normal]
  1. 00:16:474 (5) - nc吧 畢竟這段單點有點長
  2. 01:00:377 (5) - 也nc
  3. 01:24:523 (6,7) - 小建議


[Oyatsu's Easy]
  • 01:19:401 (1) - finish at the head
    01:26:170 (2) - finish


其他還好
圖不錯
Oyatsu
No fix anything. Sorry and thank you guys for mods!
Fycho
@wkyik, 一三改了,1 ctrl+g了下;第二点我不想跟人声二连这样挺好。
Also checked other mods, thanks very much.
osu file format v14

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158,120,34767,1,0,1:0:0:0:
158,120,34859,2,0,P|139:165|140:247,1,120,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
128,345,35316,1,0,1:0:0:0:
128,345,35407,1,0,1:0:0:0:
128,345,35499,6,0,B|172:320|172:320|211:348|277:351|277:351|317:318,2,192,4|0|0,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,180,36779,1,0,0:0:0:0:
43,272,36962,6,0,B|28:232|28:232|72:124|72:124|54:77,1,192,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
282,132,37877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
207,174,38060,2,0,L|123:155,1,64,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,79,38426,6,0,B|233:44|233:44|272:26|346:63|346:63|386:59|406:58,1,192,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
359,269,39340,2,0,L|375:185,1,64
297,142,39706,1,0,0:0:0:0:
230,271,39889,6,0,B|222:310|248:348|248:348|277:353|315:338|315:338|361:349,1,192,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
371,345,40804,1,0,0:0:0:0:
418,158,40987,1,0,1:0:0:0:
329,204,41170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,204,41261,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,204,41353,6,0,B|321:126|344:60|344:60|380:74|380:74|416:62,1,192,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
192,68,42267,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,37,42450,1,0,0:0:0:0:
219,160,42633,1,0,0:0:0:0:
35,159,42816,6,0,B|29:213|29:213|74:254|172:227,1,192,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
325,319,43731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
337,155,43913,2,0,L|330:236,1,64,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,285,44279,6,0,L|463:79,1,192,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
461,93,45194,1,0,0:0:0:0:
337,155,45377,2,0,P|280:166|252:168,1,64
85,85,45743,5,2,0:0:0:0:
39,194,45926,1,0,0:0:0:0:
135,258,46109,2,0,P|126:323|121:342,1,64,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
85,85,46474,1,2,0:0:0:0:
187,140,46657,1,0,1:0:0:0:
187,140,46749,1,0,1:0:0:0:
187,140,46840,2,0,L|264:131,1,64,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
403,73,47206,6,0,P|423:111|408:234,1,143.999995605469,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,196,47755,2,0,P|226:180|140:207,1,143.999995605469,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
127,316,48304,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,245,48487,1,0,0:0:0:0:
127,316,48670,6,0,L|289:291,1,143.999995605469,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,228,49218,2,0,P|372:272|372:369,1,143.999995605469,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
478,150,49767,1,0,1:0:0:0:
488,254,49950,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,168,50133,6,0,B|270:150|232:180|232:180|211:163|231:123,1,143.999995605469,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,34,50682,2,0,P|184:54|123:92,1,143.999995605469,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
127,268,51231,2,0,L|143:183,1,71.9999978027344
19,53,51596,5,0,0:0:0:0:
96,121,51779,1,0,0:0:0:0:
131,21,51962,1,4,1:2:0:0:
68,218,52145,1,0,1:0:0:0:
68,218,52237,1,0,1:0:0:0:
68,218,52328,2,0,L|170:208,1,71.9999978027344,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,196,52694,1,0,1:0:0:0:
298,197,52785,1,0,1:0:0:0:
334,219,52877,1,0,1:0:0:0:
355,256,52968,1,0,1:0:0:0:
358,299,53060,6,0,P|387:188|404:141,1,160,4|0,0:0|1:1,0:0:0:0:
357,60,53609,2,0,L|269:82,1,80
472,31,53974,1,0,0:0:0:0:
426,222,54157,2,0,L|415:126,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,333,54523,6,0,P|386:306|296:325,1,160,0|0,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
158,352,55072,1,0,0:0:0:0:
226,290,55255,2,0,P|225:250|208:215,1,80
134,129,55621,2,0,P|113:163|105:202,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
235,129,55987,6,0,P|214:62|130:25,1,160,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
90,165,56535,1,0,0:0:0:0:
235,130,56718,2,0,L|323:118,1,80
433,161,57084,2,0,P|431:89|432:63,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
362,245,57450,6,0,P|284:267|217:196,1,160,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
121,164,57999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
51,331,58182,1,0,0:0:0:0:
121,249,58365,1,0,0:0:0:0:
207,297,58548,1,0,1:1:0:0:
106,152,58731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
26,230,58913,6,0,P|10:290|20:321,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,297,59279,1,4,1:2:0:0:
242,289,59371,1,0,0:0:0:0:
277,295,59462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
310,308,59554,1,0,0:0:0:0:
342,324,59645,1,0,0:0:0:0:
378,324,59737,1,0,0:0:0:0:
413,318,59828,1,0,0:0:0:0:
445,301,59920,1,0,0:0:0:0:
454,266,60011,2,0,L|460:214,3,40,0|0|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,143,60377,5,0,1:0:0:0:
310,172,60560,1,0,1:0:0:0:
144,202,60743,1,0,1:0:0:0:
144,202,61109,5,0,0:0:0:0:
204,133,61292,2,0,P|214:71|210:35,1,80,4|0,0:3|1:0,0:0:0:0:
310,172,61657,1,0,0:0:0:0:
310,172,61749,1,0,0:0:0:0:
310,172,61840,6,0,P|285:244|274:335,1,160,4|0,0:0|1:1,0:0:0:0:
405,160,62389,1,0,0:0:0:0:
433,333,62572,2,0,P|445:266|440:244,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,292,62938,5,0,1:0:0:0:
405,160,63121,1,0,0:0:0:0:
492,142,63304,2,0,P|453:86|434:74,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,100,63670,2,0,P|292:99|331:88,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
77,72,64035,5,0,0:0:0:0:
253,99,64218,1,2,0:0:0:0:
55,159,64401,1,0,1:0:0:0:
179,44,64584,1,2,0:0:0:0:
179,44,64676,1,0,0:0:0:0:
179,44,64767,6,0,L|160:203,1,160,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
323,268,65316,2,0,P|272:257|235:268,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
90,342,65682,1,2,0:0:0:0:
14,277,65865,2,0,L|29:198,1,80,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
29,198,66139,1,0,0:0:0:0:
29,198,66231,5,0,0:0:0:0:
108,123,66413,1,2,0:0:0:0:
291,157,66596,1,0,1:0:0:0:
188,74,66779,1,2,0:0:0:0:
189,224,66962,2,0,P|192:288|185:326,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,22,67328,1,0,1:0:0:0:
291,157,67511,1,2,0:0:0:0:
291,157,67603,1,0,0:0:0:0:
291,157,67694,6,0,P|386:129|463:146,1,160,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
477,225,68243,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,345,68426,2,0,P|392:274|400:250,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,58,68792,6,0,P|379:97|372:136,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
291,206,69157,2,0,P|229:199|195:204,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
70,343,69523,1,0,1:0:0:0:
118,251,69706,1,0,0:0:0:0:
35,191,69889,5,2,0:0:0:0:
118,251,70072,1,0,0:0:0:0:
186,88,70255,2,0,P|196:127|193:167,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,63,70621,6,0,L|259:47,1,160,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
335,207,71170,1,2,0:0:0:0:
403,131,71353,2,0,P|408:112|411:93,2,40,0|0|2,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,120,71718,1,0,1:0:0:0:
226,249,71901,1,2,0:0:0:0:
403,132,72084,6,0,P|438:198|408:291,1,160,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
225,354,72633,1,0,0:0:0:0:
225,354,72724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
225,354,72816,2,0,L|245:260,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
275,135,73182,1,0,1:0:0:0:
244,145,73273,1,0,0:0:0:0:
211,142,73365,1,2,0:0:0:0:
179,139,73456,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,148,73548,6,0,L|65:170,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
17,97,73913,1,0,1:0:0:0:
0,247,74096,1,2,0:0:0:0:
114,67,74279,2,0,P|119:15|116:-3,2,40,0|0|0,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
133,230,74645,2,0,P|128:282|132:314,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
131,309,74920,1,0,0:0:0:0:
131,309,75011,6,0,L|297:297,1,160,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
451,203,75560,1,2,0:0:0:0:
340,202,75743,2,0,L|296:210,2,40,0|0|0,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,115,76109,1,0,1:0:0:0:
419,313,76292,1,0,0:0:0:0:
302,270,76474,6,0,P|224:269|150:325,1,160,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
163,153,77023,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,187,77206,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,187,77298,2,0,P|54:233|61:269,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,278,77572,2,0,L|69:361,1,80,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
163,153,77938,6,0,L|180:75,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
93,41,78304,1,0,1:0:0:0:
271,129,78487,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,187,78670,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,187,78761,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,187,78853,1,2,0:0:0:0:
178,79,79035,1,0,1:0:0:0:
196,263,79218,1,2,0:0:0:0:
196,263,79310,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,263,79401,6,0,L|194:347,1,80
290,239,79767,1,0,1:0:0:0:
351,310,79950,1,2,0:0:0:0:
426,136,80133,1,0,0:0:0:0:
330,146,80316,1,2,0:0:0:0:
425,252,80499,2,0,P|439:291|433:334,1,80,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
413,365,80773,1,0,0:0:0:0:
413,365,80865,6,0,L|244:358,1,160,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
264,220,81413,1,2,0:0:0:0:
165,254,81596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
165,254,81688,2,0,L|155:340,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
154,361,81962,1,0,1:0:0:0:
53,261,82145,1,2,0:0:0:0:
149,118,82328,6,0,L|159:35,1,80
34,168,82694,1,0,1:0:0:0:
66,66,82877,1,2,0:0:0:0:
232,153,83060,2,0,L|237:111,2,40,0|0|0,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
334,45,83426,1,0,1:0:0:0:
437,126,83609,1,0,1:0:0:0:
446,147,83700,1,0,1:0:0:0:
448,168,83792,6,0,P|441:216|420:265,1,80
263,348,84157,1,0,1:0:0:0:
308,154,84340,1,0,0:0:0:0:
253,262,84523,2,0,P|204:253|166:253,1,80
173,252,84798,1,0,0:0:0:0:
173,252,84889,1,0,1:0:0:0:
41,340,85072,1,0,0:0:0:0:
41,340,85163,1,0,0:0:0:0:
41,340,85255,6,0,P|23:272|37:177,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
262,350,85804,1,4,1:2:0:0:
262,350,86170,2,0,L|351:347,1,80,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
315,94,86535,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
Kinomi

Autumn wrote:

烤肉老板 说完了我觉得好饿啊


[*]00:39:889 (2,3) - The same rhythm as 00:45:743 (2,3,4) - seems better for newbie players imo :)[/list][/notice]

Normal

  1. 00:39:889 (4) - 弄个NC?后面到7了感觉有点多..这边正好是个重音
  2. 00:51:596 (5) - ^
  3. 01:06:962 (6) - ^
加了点

Hard

  1. 00:28:913 (3,4,5,6) - AR7.5这一坨有点难读 难吗,DT就不难了
  2. 00:53:883 - 没重音弄个折返感觉怪怪的,不如和00:54:523 (1,2) - 统一 我感觉不用改
  3. 00:56:718 (3) - 这个貌似不是竖直的 直的!
其他难度没看出什么来,别打我啊!

AIR wrote:

烤肉老板 说完了我觉得好饿啊
[Normal]
  1. 00:00:377 (1) - 头部finish

[Hard]
  1. 00:30:194 (2) - 叠3头上吧 不好啊,这边vocal
  2. 00:58:913 (1) - 转盘减一个线,这个难度会不会被挑刺?o.o


[Heroine]
  1. 00:05:682 (4,5) - flow不太顺,随意
  2. 00:32:206 (5,6) - 5和6听起来一样,也改条吧
  3. 01:00:011 (5,6) - 可以跟着音乐再转一下,竖着摆
    没改,感觉没必要



看不出什么问题只能滚去睡觉了
gl
]

[Teichan] wrote:

Red -> Unrank Issues
Blue -> highly recommended to fix
Black -> Personal Comments


[General]

01:26:627 (1) - Consider fade-out?
[/list]
Fine.

[Normal]

  1. 01:00:377 (5) - 建议改成两个circle来体现乐曲的高潮
  2. 01:06:596 (5) - 去whistle,这里完全被clap压下去了,并没听出与后面两个S:C4 clap有什么区别 这边clap是drum的
    [/color]


[Hard]
  1. 00:47:755 (2,1) - stack 应该弄好了
  2. 01:06:596 (5) - 这里同normal,后面不提了
  3. 01:06:962 (3) - 这里是不是circle要好一点 再说

orz排版没得挑

[Heroine]
  1. 00:15:377 (2,4) - 没对齐
  2. 00:24:340 (3,4) - 加音量,现在这样只能听到一点点
  3. 00:32:206 (5) - 这个normal whistle很违和,建议去掉
  4. 00:34:401 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 很容易断,个人比较不喜欢,建议3和4放近一点
  5. 00:54:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这一段1/4spam感觉不太合曲,这里并没有1/4音 不过毕竟烤老板
  6. 01:01:109 (1,2) - 还是合并成一个slider感觉好一点
  7. 01:21:596 (5,6) - 太远了,和前面01:20:133 (6,7) - 差太多了,很容易断的
    后面都没改,那段1/4必须有。。不然我是不会这么下的
orz

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

[Heroine]
  1. 00:07:694 (1) - 這個停在00:07:877 - 之後00:07:968 - 加個note 这更难啊
  2. 00:24:340 (3) - 換成circle 現在的打上去有點不舒服 改了下
  3. 00:27:816 (5) - ctrl+g 有个clap,抄兴业
  4. 01:01:292 (2,3) - 有點遠 近了点
  5. 01:24:798 - 為何要ignore這裡的vocal呀 听差了




[Hard]
  1. 00:30:194 (2) - stack在00:30:377 (3) - 頭感覺好點 vocal啊,感觉还是分开好


[Normal]
  1. 00:16:474 (5) - nc吧 畢竟這段單點有點長 这里还好。不难读
  2. 01:00:377 (5) - 也nc
  3. 01:24:523 (6,7) - 小建議




其他還好
圖不錯
Rizia
everything was looking fine

Bubbled
xxdeathx
At your request. Everybody loves this anime

[General]
  1. soft-hitclap4.wav has a couple ms delay, please use this one: http://puu.sh/fSX5N/476bd39545.wav
  2. Hentai Yomi, you're using a video with a brief bath scene. The other episodes' videos changed that part though, so you can change the video. Make sure to get the offset right.
  3. Give every diff at least 1500 ms audio lead in


[Easy]
  1. 00:03:304 (1) - You should really follow the music better here.
  2. 01:17:938 (3) - Too high, overlaps HP bar.


[Normal]
  1. 01:26:718 (1) - Might as well begin at 01:26:627 for consistency with all other diffs (even Easy).


[Insane]
  1. 00:21:962 (4,1) - It would be neater to fix this blanket


[Heroine]
  1. 00:34:401 (2,3) - It would make more sense to delete (3) and extend (2) since the music doesn't need a key press at 00:34:584. That would give more emphasis to the vocal starting at the stream 00:34:767 (4) -

See you after https://osu.ppy.sh/s/262343
Topic Starter
Kinomi
all fix
Shad0w1and
好像都很喜欢这番的样子。。(要是早知道我去压1080P的RAW丢nyaa上绝对能抢到下载量)都没人压<.<
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