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Haruna Luna - Kimiiro Signal-TV size ver.-

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Kibbleru
osu! Alumni
5,844 posts
Joined August 2013
Kibbleru
o/

this song to kawaii
Kinomi
1,221 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Kinomi

Kibbleru wrote:

o/

this song to kawaii
actually i have no special feeling of this song. Just like the light noval.
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Autumn
烤肉老板 说完了我觉得好饿啊

Oyatsu's Easy

  1. 00:39:889 (2,3) - The same rhythm as 00:45:743 (2,3,4) - seems better for newbie players imo :)

Normal

  1. 00:39:889 (4) - 弄个NC？后面到7了感觉有点多..这边正好是个重音
  2. 00:51:596 (5) - ^
  3. 01:06:962 (6) - ^

Hard

  1. 00:28:913 (3,4,5,6) - AR7.5这一坨有点难读
  2. 00:53:883 - 没重音弄个折返感觉怪怪的，不如和00:54:523 (1,2) - 统一
  3. 00:56:718 (3) - 这个貌似不是竖直的
其他难度没看出什么来，别打我啊！
AIR
1,577 posts
Joined November 2012
AIR
烤肉老板 说完了我觉得好饿啊


[Oyatsu's Easy]
  1. 00:23:060 (3,1) - bllanket
    SPOILER
    http://puu.sh/f6ai9/eba46f0e1a.png
[Normal]
  1. 00:00:377 (1) - 头部finish
[Hard]
  1. 00:30:194 (2) - 叠3头上吧
  2. 00:58:913 (1) - 转盘减一个线，这个难度会不会被挑刺?o.o
[Fycho's Insane]
  1. 00:36:962 (1) - 左右转下，顺便和上一个折返对称
[Heroine]
  1. 00:05:682 (4,5) - flow不太顺，随意
  2. 00:32:206 (5,6) - 5和6听起来一样，也改条吧
  3. 01:00:011 (5,6) - 可以跟着音乐再转一下，竖着摆

看不出什么问题只能滚去睡觉了
gl
Lavender
886 posts
Joined January 2014
Lavender
烤肉老板 说完了我觉得好饿啊
先马，拿回电脑了再摸
Awaken
858 posts
Joined February 2012
Awaken
mark.
Lavender
886 posts
Joined January 2014
Lavender
Red -> Unrank Issues
Blue -> highly recommended to fix
Black -> Personal Comments


[General]

  1. S:C4 的clap建议小一点音量，并且这里01:15:011 (1,2,3,4,5) - 是一样的节奏，为什么不用S:C4呢
[Oyatsu's Easy]

  • 01:26:627 (1) - Consider fade-out？
Fine.

[Normal]

  1. 01:00:377 (5) - 建议改成两个circle来体现乐曲的高潮
  2. 01:06:596 (5) - 去whistle，这里完全被clap压下去了，并没听出与后面两个S:C4 clap有什么区别
[Hard]
  1. 00:47:755 (2,1) - stack
  2. 01:06:596 (5) - 这里同normal，后面不提了
  3. 01:06:962 (3) - 这里是不是circle要好一点
orz排版没得挑

[Fycho's Insane]
  1. 00:11:353 (2,3) - Ctrl+G感觉好一点
  2. 00:24:340 (3,4) - stack
  3. 00:32:298 (6) - 这里没有音啊，为什么在这里放滑条...建议直接去掉
  4. 00:34:859 (5) - ^
  5. 01:21:596 (3,4,5) - 这里这个也有点不对的感觉
[Heroine]
  1. 00:15:377 (2,4) - 没对齐
  2. 00:24:340 (3,4) - 加音量，现在这样只能听到一点点
  3. 00:32:206 (5) - 这个normal whistle很违和，建议去掉
  4. 00:34:401 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 很容易断，个人比较不喜欢，建议3和4放近一点
  5. 00:54:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这一段1/4spam感觉不太合曲，这里并没有1/4音 不过毕竟烤老板
  6. 01:01:109 (1,2) - 还是合并成一个slider感觉好一点
  7. 01:21:596 (5,6) - 太远了，和前面01:20:133 (6,7) - 差太多了，很容易断的
orz
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Rizia
[Heroine]
  1. 00:07:694 (1) - 這個停在00:07:877 - 之後00:07:968 - 加個note
  2. 00:24:340 (3) - 換成circle 現在的打上去有點不舒服
  3. 00:27:816 (5) - ctrl+g
  4. 01:01:292 (2,3) - 有點遠
  5. 01:24:798 - 為何要ignore這裡的vocal呀
[Fycho's Insane]
  1. 00:05:865 (3,4) - 整個梗挺好不過這兩個有點卡手
  2. 00:32:298 (6) - 這個有點怪 跟vocal比較好
  3. 01:26:170 (3) - 頭finish
[Hard]
  1. 00:30:194 (2) - stack在00:30:377 (3) - 頭感覺好點
[Normal]
  1. 00:16:474 (5) - nc吧 畢竟這段單點有點長
  2. 01:00:377 (5) - 也nc
  3. 01:24:523 (6,7) - 小建議
    SPOILER
[Oyatsu's Easy]
  • 01:19:401 (1) - finish at the head
    01:26:170 (2) - finish
其他還好
圖不錯
Oyatsu
1,909 posts
Joined December 2012
Oyatsu
No fix anything. Sorry and thank you guys for mods!
Fycho
Global Moderator
2,479 posts
Joined August 2012
Fycho
@wkyik, 一三改了，1 ctrl+g了下；第二点我不想跟人声二连这样挺好。
Also checked other mods, thanks very much.
SPOILER
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Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 47755
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Kimiiro Signal-TV size ver.-
TitleUnicode:君色シグナル-TV size ver.-
Artist:Haruna Luna
ArtistUnicode:春奈るな
Creator:Tsukuyomi
Version:Fycho's Insane
Source:冴えない彼女の育てかた
Tags:Saekano How to Raise a Boring Girlfriend Saenai Heroine no Sodatekata baldrace opening Fycho Oyatsu
BeatmapID:592123
BeatmapSetID:258165

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OverallDifficulty:7
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405,160,63121,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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253,99,64218,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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179,44,64584,1,2,0:0:0:0:
179,44,64676,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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90,342,65682,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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29,198,66139,1,0,0:0:0:0:
29,198,66231,5,0,0:0:0:0:
108,123,66413,1,2,0:0:0:0:
291,157,66596,1,0,1:0:0:0:
188,74,66779,1,2,0:0:0:0:
189,224,66962,2,0,P|192:288|185:326,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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291,157,67511,1,2,0:0:0:0:
291,157,67603,1,0,0:0:0:0:
291,157,67694,6,0,P|386:129|463:146,1,160,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
477,225,68243,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,345,68426,2,0,P|392:274|400:250,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,58,68792,6,0,P|379:97|372:136,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
291,206,69157,2,0,P|229:199|195:204,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
70,343,69523,1,0,1:0:0:0:
118,251,69706,1,0,0:0:0:0:
35,191,69889,5,2,0:0:0:0:
118,251,70072,1,0,0:0:0:0:
186,88,70255,2,0,P|196:127|193:167,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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335,207,71170,1,2,0:0:0:0:
403,131,71353,2,0,P|408:112|411:93,2,40,0|0|2,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,120,71718,1,0,1:0:0:0:
226,249,71901,1,2,0:0:0:0:
403,132,72084,6,0,P|438:198|408:291,1,160,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
225,354,72633,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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17,97,73913,1,0,1:0:0:0:
0,247,74096,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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419,313,76292,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Kinomi
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Topic Starter
Kinomi
Autumn

Autumn wrote:

烤肉老板 说完了我觉得好饿啊


[*]00:39:889 (2,3) - The same rhythm as 00:45:743 (2,3,4) - seems better for newbie players imo :)[/list][/notice]

Normal

  1. 00:39:889 (4) - 弄个NC？后面到7了感觉有点多..这边正好是个重音
  2. 00:51:596 (5) - ^
  3. 01:06:962 (6) - ^
加了点

Hard

  1. 00:28:913 (3,4,5,6) - AR7.5这一坨有点难读 难吗，DT就不难了
  2. 00:53:883 - 没重音弄个折返感觉怪怪的，不如和00:54:523 (1,2) - 统一 我感觉不用改
  3. 00:56:718 (3) - 这个貌似不是竖直的 直的！
其他难度没看出什么来，别打我啊！

AIR

AIR wrote:

烤肉老板 说完了我觉得好饿啊
[Normal]
  1. 00:00:377 (1) - 头部finish 好
[Hard]
  1. 00:30:194 (2) - 叠3头上吧 不好啊，这边vocal
  2. 00:58:913 (1) - 转盘减一个线，这个难度会不会被挑刺?o.o 好
[Heroine]
  1. 00:05:682 (4,5) - flow不太顺，随意
  2. 00:32:206 (5,6) - 5和6听起来一样，也改条吧
  3. 01:00:011 (5,6) - 可以跟着音乐再转一下，竖着摆
    没改，感觉没必要

看不出什么问题只能滚去睡觉了
gl

[box=[Teichan:1337]]

[Teichan] wrote:

Red -> Unrank Issues
Blue -> highly recommended to fix
Black -> Personal Comments


[General]

01:26:627 (1) - Consider fade-out？
[/list]
Fine.

[Normal]

  1. 01:00:377 (5) - 建议改成两个circle来体现乐曲的高潮
  2. 01:06:596 (5) - 去whistle，这里完全被clap压下去了，并没听出与后面两个S:C4 clap有什么区别 这边clap是drum的
    [/color]
[Hard]
  1. 00:47:755 (2,1) - stack 应该弄好了
  2. 01:06:596 (5) - 这里同normal，后面不提了
  3. 01:06:962 (3) - 这里是不是circle要好一点 再说
orz排版没得挑

[Heroine]
  1. 00:15:377 (2,4) - 没对齐 好
  2. 00:24:340 (3,4) - 加音量，现在这样只能听到一点点
  3. 00:32:206 (5) - 这个normal whistle很违和，建议去掉
  4. 00:34:401 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 很容易断，个人比较不喜欢，建议3和4放近一点
  5. 00:54:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这一段1/4spam感觉不太合曲，这里并没有1/4音 不过毕竟烤老板
  6. 01:01:109 (1,2) - 还是合并成一个slider感觉好一点
  7. 01:21:596 (5,6) - 太远了，和前面01:20:133 (6,7) - 差太多了，很容易断的
    后面都没改，那段1/4必须有。。不然我是不会这么下的
orz

Kawaiwkyik

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

[Heroine]
  1. 00:07:694 (1) - 這個停在00:07:877 - 之後00:07:968 - 加個note 这更难啊
  2. 00:24:340 (3) - 換成circle 現在的打上去有點不舒服 改了下
  3. 00:27:816 (5) - ctrl+g 有个clap，抄兴业
  4. 01:01:292 (2,3) - 有點遠 近了点
  5. 01:24:798 - 為何要ignore這裡的vocal呀 听差了


[Hard]
  1. 00:30:194 (2) - stack在00:30:377 (3) - 頭感覺好點 vocal啊，感觉还是分开好
[Normal]
  1. 00:16:474 (5) - nc吧 畢竟這段單點有點長 这里还好。不难读
  2. 01:00:377 (5) - 也nc 好
  3. 01:24:523 (6,7) - 小建議
    好


其他還好
圖不錯
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Rizia
everything was looking fine

Bubbled
xxdeathx
2,661 posts
Joined July 2013
xxdeathx
At your request. Everybody loves this anime

[General]
  1. soft-hitclap4.wav has a couple ms delay, please use this one: http://puu.sh/fSX5N/476bd39545.wav
  2. Hentai Yomi, you're using a video with a brief bath scene. The other episodes' videos changed that part though, so you can change the video. Make sure to get the offset right.
    SPOILER
  3. Give every diff at least 1500 ms audio lead in
[Easy]
  1. 00:03:304 (1) - You should really follow the music better here.
  2. 01:17:938 (3) - Too high, overlaps HP bar.
[Normal]
  1. 01:26:718 (1) - Might as well begin at 01:26:627 for consistency with all other diffs (even Easy).
[Insane]
  1. 00:21:962 (4,1) - It would be neater to fix this blanket
[Heroine]
  1. 00:34:401 (2,3) - It would make more sense to delete (3) and extend (2) since the music doesn't need a key press at 00:34:584. That would give more emphasis to the vocal starting at the stream 00:34:767 (4) -
See you after https://osu.ppy.sh/s/262343
Kinomi
1,221 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Kinomi
all fix
Shad0w1and
1,588 posts
Joined April 2011
Shad0w1and
好像都很喜欢这番的样子。。（要是早知道我去压1080P的RAW丢nyaa上绝对能抢到下载量）都没人压<.<
xxdeathx
2,661 posts
Joined July 2013
xxdeathx
Checked everything, looks good to go.

Qualified!

Lavender
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Lavender
gratz
Oyatsu
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Joined December 2012
Oyatsu
Wow gratz!
toara_fict
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toara_fict
Gratz \:3/
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sb shiro
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