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JJburstOwO
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年5月4日 at 11:54:13

Artist: angela
Title: ANGEL
Source: COPPELION
Tags: opening tv size huafenshaonv コッペリオン
BPM: 184
Filesize: 2759kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.7 stars, 124 notes)
  2. huafen's Hard (3.63 stars, 271 notes)
  3. Insane (4.68 stars, 389 notes)
  4. Normal (2.35 stars, 182 notes)
Download: angela - ANGEL
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1st~

Hard by huafenshaonv

Thx for Euphoria's BG

_(:з」∠)_
Narcissu
bg 建议 1366*768 或者1024*768 ……

hard diff 忘記加入視頻了

gder 的名字需要加入tag …… 是 huafenshaonv ?

低難度也建議補上開頭段落保證統一

[easy]

00:04:461 (1) - 轉盤接物件有間隔要求,越低的難度限制越大……通常easy下限一節,normal下限半節……是下線哦,這個會被un的。我建議去掉這個轉盤

01:04:787 (1) - 建議換成一排1/1滑條接兩個圈


00:44:080 (1) - 過量的折返是不建議的


[normal]

00:04:461 (1) - 轉盤接物件……

00:24:841 (1,2) - 分開

00:26:634 (1,2,3,4,1) - 因為在你選的SV和DS下,1/2是有遮擋的,所以避免連續的1/2 物件

00:35:765 (1,2,3) - 分開

00:55:982 (6,3) - 前面那個敲出的300會擋住折返,也是unrank的,雖然已經過去一定的時間但是低難度應該會相應的嚴格一點

01:15:874 (3,4) - 疊……

這個bpm要分開1/2是不可能的……所以為了讀圖和切紙簡單一開始就應該減少它出現的頻率……另外過量的折返(1/4 & 1/2)和超長滑條(2/1 & over)也是不建議的……可以參考同bpm的↓↓↓

https://osu.ppy.sh/b/355257

[hard]

00:35:439 (4) - 這除了難讀還有什麼用……

01:17:178 (3,4,1) - 建議分開……

太多橫平豎直了……

[insane]

可以去找蝙蝠啦
Topic Starter
JJburstOwO

Narcissu wrote:

bg 建议 1366*768 或者1024*768 ……

hard diff 忘記加入視頻了

gder 的名字需要加入tag …… 是 huafenshaonv ?

低難度也建議補上開頭段落保證統一

[easy]

00:04:461 (1) - 轉盤接物件有間隔要求,越低的難度限制越大……通常easy下限一節,normal下限半節……是下線哦,這個會被un的。我建議去掉這個轉盤

01:04:787 (1) - 建議換成一排1/1滑條接兩個圈


00:44:080 (1) - 過量的折返是不建議的-這裡還好吧


[normal]

00:04:461 (1) - 轉盤接物件……

00:24:841 (1,2) - 分開

00:26:634 (1,2,3,4,1) - 因為在你選的SV和DS下,1/2是有遮擋的,所以避免連續的1/2 物件

00:35:765 (1,2,3) - 分開

00:55:982 (6,3) - 前面那個敲出的300會擋住折返,也是unrank的,雖然已經過去一定的時間但是低難度應該會相應的嚴格一點

01:15:874 (3,4) - 疊……

這個bpm要分開1/2是不可能的……所以為了讀圖和切紙簡單一開始就應該減少它出現的頻率……另外過量的折返(1/4 & 1/2)和超長滑條(2/1 & over)也是不建議的……可以參考同bpm的↓↓↓-修改了大部分粘連的部分.. 因為節奏的關係,1/2還是比較多orz

https://osu.ppy.sh/b/355257

[insane]

可以去找蝙蝠啦
沒標明的部分都修改了,謝謝水仙> <
GGFFQQ55
来摸啦w

就摸摸insane好了,其他难度没什么太多好讲的。。。

Insane

00:06:906 (1,2) - 转盘前用大弧度滑条倒是没什么问题,这里的话flow不太舒服也有点难读。。。感觉大弧度还是少用比较好

00:09:678 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 可以试试拆分啊四分之一啥的,这样一条直线的连打已经有点少见了

00:10:330 (9,10,11) - 间距可以试着统一一下,10可以向上摆一点

00:16:200 (1,2) - 爷爷这读不出来啊。。。直接把1换成折返应该会好点

00:22:069 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 这里的overmap。。。(没听错的话应该是overmap)感觉要rank的话有点麻烦

00:33:156 (1) - flow不太舒服,应该还是大弧度滑条的问题,平缓一点也可以啊

01:14:895 (1,2,3,4,5) - 全程似乎就这么一个大间距五连。。。有点突兀,建议统一和其他三五连的间距

01:17:015 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这里的排列有点太。。。枯燥了;这里的节奏还蛮有意思的啊可以稍微下点功夫

01:22:721 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这里要我就摆重复的三角跳梗了。。。参见蓝翅膀的roze或者完全感觉dreamer,比较合曲

01:26:634 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 1. NC最好加一下 2. 纯连打没劲啊,别偷懒嘛;w;

还有些小的间距问题啥的就不提了orz

good luck!
Topic Starter
JJburstOwO

GGFFQQ55 wrote:

来摸啦w

就摸摸insane好了,其他难度没什么太多好讲的。。。

Insane

00:06:906 (1,2) - 转盘前用大弧度滑条倒是没什么问题,这里的话flow不太舒服也有点难读。。。感觉大弧度还是少用比较好-這裡甩過去應該很爽呀TAT

00:09:678 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 可以试试拆分啊四分之一啥的,这样一条直线的连打已经有点少见了

00:10:330 (9,10,11) - 间距可以试着统一一下,10可以向上摆一点

00:16:200 (1,2) - 爷爷这读不出来啊。。。直接把1换成折返应该会好点

00:22:069 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 这里的overmap。。。(没听错的话应该是overmap)感觉要rank的话有点麻烦-這邊是有音的

00:33:156 (1) - flow不太舒服,应该还是大弧度滑条的问题,平缓一点也可以啊-小節開頭感覺還行啦

01:14:895 (1,2,3,4,5) - 全程似乎就这么一个大间距五连。。。有点突兀,建议统一和其他三五连的间距-迎合後面的大跳吧,可能是角度不對,我換一下

01:17:015 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这里的排列有点太。。。枯燥了;这里的节奏还蛮有意思的啊可以稍微下点功夫

01:22:721 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这里要我就摆重复的三角跳梗了。。。参见蓝翅膀的roze或者完全感觉dreamer,比较合曲

01:26:634 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 1. NC最好加一下 2. 纯连打没劲啊,别偷懒嘛;w;

还有些小的间距问题啥的就不提了orz

good luck!
沒標的都修改了,感謝 :)
Karen
路过一下
[Hard]
  1. 00:21:580 - 为何这里不跟,这么明显的音
  2. 00:22:884 - ^
  3. 00:24:189 - ^
  4. 00:36:254 - 加个圈,空的太多了
  5. 00:40:819 - 这里背景有个非常明显的音,别漏了,而且建议用滑条跟,也就是后面的滑条拆开换一下
  6. 00:45:547 (5,6,7,8) - 前面是原地单点突然变成这样排可能会造成误解,hard不该有这样坑人的东西
  7. 01:15:384 - 加个圈
    你空的拍太多了,我列出来的是我感觉比较重要的不需要漏掉的,其他的你也可以看看,空这么多打起来一点都不连贯,断断续续的很难受
[Normal]
  1. 00:07:721 (3) - 低难度不能用超过一次的折返滑条,只能折返一次
  2. 01:01:852 (1,2) - 这个东西放的太多了,可以适当用滑条代替
[Easy]
  1. 00:10:656 (4,1) - Easy不要放遮挡的东西
  2. 01:13:591 (3,4,5,6) - ^
Insane懒得看了.-.看了一下感觉做的很好 :)
Topic Starter
JJburstOwO

Kagamine Ren wrote:

路过一下

[Normal]
  1. 00:07:721 (3) - 低难度不能用超过一次的折返滑条,只能折返一次
  2. 01:01:852 (1,2) - 这个东西放的太多了,可以适当用滑条代替
[Easy]
  1. 00:10:656 (4,1) - Easy不要放遮挡的东西
  2. 01:13:591 (3,4,5,6) - ^
Insane懒得看了.-.看了一下感觉做的很好 :)
all fixed,谢谢你:>
Hollow Wings
from baidu

Insane

  1. 00:22:069 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - highly recommend you merge these notes into a repeating slider. here some of those notes are just additional stuff while others following tracks.
  2. nice, 2 stars.

huafen's Hard

  1. 00:09:678 (5,6,7) - here are 1/4 streams, snap correct rhythm please.
  2. 00:20:602 (2,3) - not necessary to set large jump here, highly recommend you reduce this.
    the patterns' too diffcult in hard level like 00:20:602 (2,3,4) - with ds shifting. same to 00:23:211 (2,3,4) - and 00:45:547 (5,6,7,8) - if you wanna my bubble, you should change all of these patterns.
  3. the whole diff's ds controlling is not hard level as well, check them by yourself and mention what i've said really seriously. some patterns like 00:52:558 (7,1) - and 00:52:721 (1,2) - really need to redo or change to another pattern.

Normal

  1. good.

Easy

  1. 01:07:721 (2,3) - avoid this stack, same to 01:09:026 (5,6) -
本来想给你射个大星的,然后你没到12sp噗。。。顺便,我才想起来你叫密卡,我们似乎已经认识很久了233

ask 3 mods more and poke me later, i'll do a recheck.
Topic Starter
JJburstOwO

Hollow Wings wrote:

from baidu

Insane

  1. 00:22:069 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - highly recommend you merge these notes into a repeating slider. here some of those notes are just additional stuff while others following tracks.
  2. nice, 2 stars.

Normal

  1. good.

Easy

  1. 01:07:721 (2,3) - avoid this stack, same to 01:09:026 (5,6) -
本来想给你射个大星的,然后你没到12sp噗。。。顺便,我才想起来你叫密卡,我们似乎已经认识很久了233

ask 3 mods more and poke me later, i'll do a recheck.
QwQ 有点忙 好久没有留意,都改了,謝謝HW
[Hijiri Byakuren]
[general]
突突突突突的音效 我觉得再轻点比较好。。
[Easy]
00:09:352 (3) - 应该00:09:189红线起 我一发读错。。。
01:17:015 (4) - NC?
01:18:319 (2) - 不是应该是01:18:482起手的1/2条子吗?
00:28:591 (2) - 00:31:200 (2) - 00:33:808 (2) - 我觉得是1/2条子的话比较好
[Normal]
00:06:254 额不这里起手是因为spinner吗?
01:15:874 (3) - 删了感觉更好
01:18:319 (5) - 不建议留
[Insane]
00:28:102 (2) - 其实我一开始没反应过来。。。
Topic Starter
JJburstOwO

[Hijiri Byakuren] wrote:

[general]
突突突突突的音效 我觉得再轻点比较好。。
[Easy]
00:09:352 (3) - 应该00:09:189红线起 我一发读错。。。
01:17:015 (4) - NC?
01:18:319 (2) - 不是应该是01:18:482起手的1/2条子吗?
00:28:591 (2) - 00:31:200 (2) - 00:33:808 (2) - 我觉得是1/2条子的话比较好
[Normal]
00:06:254 额不这里起手是因为spinner吗?-dui
01:15:874 (3) - 删了感觉更好-这里鼓声挺大的
01:18:319 (5) - 不建议留-这个和前面保持一致
[Insane]
00:28:102 (2) - 其实我一开始没反应过来。。。
感谢-L- 没标注的地方都修改了
z1085684963
[Insane]
00:00:548 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 太丑了,滑条两note滑条两note滑条两note
00:10:330 (9) - nc
00:24:026 (1) - 跟上面的一起下行
00:26:634 (1,2) - ctrl+g
00:38:700 (3) - sv1.5
00:41:308 (5) - ^
00:49:134 (5) - ^
00:51:743 (5) - ^
01:08:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 梗都摆好了怎么不顺着梗来
01:25:330 (4) - blanket
[hard]
00:09:026 (3) - 和1平行
00:29:243 (1) - no nc
00:32:504 (1) - no nc
00:33:156 (5) - nc
00:35:765 (10) - nc
00:37:069 (1) - no nc
00:38:047 (9) - nc
00:40:982 (1) - no nc
00:41:634 (2) - nc
00:47:504 (1) - no nc
00:50:113 (1) - no nc
00:52:721 (1) - no nc
00:54:026 (3) - nc
00:55:330 (1) - no nc
00:57:939 (1) - no nc
01:00:547 (1) - no nc
01:03:156 (1) - no nc
01:24:678 (1) - no nc
01:25:330 (11) - nc
Topic Starter
JJburstOwO

z1085684963 wrote:

[Insane]
00:00:548 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 太丑了,滑条两note滑条两note滑条两note
00:10:330 (9) - nc
00:24:026 (1) - 跟上面的一起下行-现在这样也挺好看呀
00:26:634 (1,2) - ctrl+g
00:38:700 (3) - sv1.5-这几个在连打后面不想动
00:41:308 (5) - ^
00:49:134 (5) - ^
00:51:743 (5) - ^
01:08:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 梗都摆好了怎么不顺着梗来-这不是很顺吗-A-
01:25:330 (4) - blanket
没标记的都修改了,谢谢你 :)
Frey
来救火

[Easy]

· 00:12:287 (3,4) - Blanket可以做的更好

· 00:27:939 (1) - 添加finish

· 01:08:047 (3) - 统一前后DS

[Normal]

· 00:14:895 (2) - 添加whistle

· 00:15:221 (3) - 添加clap

· 00:17:504 (1) - 添加finish

· 00:19:297 (6) - 这个滑条音效加反了..00:19:461 才是clap

· 00:27:939 (1) - 添加finish

· 00:36:254 (2) - 取消whistle,并在00:36:091 添加Clap

· 00:56:634 (1,2) - 我建议统一前后DS

[huafen's Hard]

· 不好置评,但是老前辈的图的浮动DS基本上让我觉得这已经是他的风格了。
所以我不觉得有什么可修改可言。

[Insane]

· 01:06:417 (1,1) - 有一点点歪,不知道你看到没有。稍微挪动一下滑条。



我觉得在未来,大哥一定会被公认为神麻婆的(现在不就是吗!) 祝好运。
Topic Starter
JJburstOwO

Frey wrote:

来救火

[Easy]

· 00:12:287 (3,4) - Blanket可以做的更好

· 00:27:939 (1) - 添加finish

· 01:08:047 (3) - 统一前后DS

[Normal]

· 00:14:895 (2) - 添加whistle

· 00:15:221 (3) - 添加clap

· 00:17:504 (1) - 添加finish

· 00:19:297 (6) - 这个滑条音效加反了..00:19:461 才是clap

· 00:27:939 (1) - 添加finish

· 00:36:254 (2) - 取消whistle,并在00:36:091 添加Clap

· 00:56:634 (1,2) - 我建议统一前后DS

[huafen's Hard]

· 不好置评,但是老前辈的图的浮动DS基本上让我觉得这已经是他的风格了。
所以我不觉得有什么可修改可言。-其实我自己偷偷改了不少.-.

[Insane]

· 01:06:417 (1,1) - 有一点点歪,不知道你看到没有。稍微挪动一下滑条。



我觉得在未来,大哥一定会被公认为神麻婆的(现在不就是吗!) 祝好运。
谢谢,全部都改啦 :)
Hollow Wings
bubbled.

做的很好,不那么懒就完美了。
Topic Starter
JJburstOwO

Hollow Wings wrote:

bubbled.

做的很好,不那么懒就完美了。
Thank you HW~ :3
ZZHBOY
[General]
unused sound file: normal-hitfinish.wav
00:00:548 - 绿线去了改红线音量
00:17:015 - 00:27:939 - 00:38:455 - 00:59:243 - 低难度里有没用的绿线把去了
你要不要考虑把easy名字换成Normal Normal换成hard?
[Easy]
01:13:591 (3,4,5,6) - 低难度最好别stack 移开吧
[Normal]
也是stack的问题 你看00:00:548 (1,2) - 00:06:580 (1,2) - 00:17:504 (1,2) - 又有2拍又有1拍又有1/2拍间隔我觉得这样也不太好你看看能不能把不是1/2的移开 让这个难度里的stack间隔只有一种 而且我觉得开头的每第二个圈可以移开换成1/1滑条?
00:44:080 (3) - 往下一点 我这里看碰血条了
[huafen]
里面有几个超过三个的连打我觉得hard里别放那个呗或者改名叫light insane
[Insane]
01:06:417 (1) - 感觉有点奇怪啊
其他都还好 call me back
Topic Starter
JJburstOwO

ZZHBOY wrote:

[General]
unused sound file: normal-hitfinish.wav
00:00:548 - 绿线去了改红线音量
00:17:015 - 00:27:939 - 00:38:455 - 00:59:243 - 低难度里有没用的绿线把去了
你要不要考虑把easy名字换成Normal Normal换成hard?-现在的分布还是挺好的啊-.-
[Easy]
01:13:591 (3,4,5,6) - 低难度最好别stack 移开吧
[Normal]
也是stack的问题 你看00:00:548 (1,2) - 00:06:580 (1,2) - 00:17:504 (1,2) - 又有2拍又有1拍又有1/2拍间隔我觉得这样也不太好你看看能不能把不是1/2的移开 让这个难度里的stack间隔只有一种 而且我觉得开头的每第二个圈可以移开换成1/1滑条?
00:44:080 (3) - 往下一点 我这里看碰血条了
[huafen]
里面有几个超过三个的连打我觉得hard里别放那个呗或者改名叫light insane
[Insane]
01:06:417 (1) - 感觉有点奇怪啊
其他都还好 call me back
谢谢zzb
ZZHBOY
go
Kurano
This beatmap is quite interesting,not like other common insane diff,it's creative :D
Nice hit sound and fun sliers(It reminds me of some HW's map 进来一看还真有HW的mod
Congrats!OSU! need more beatmaps like this
09kami
prpr
TicClick
Hello,

I have to disqualify this due to the following:

  1. Easy is too complicated and has some breakcore-like rhythms. The fact that half of the sliders start on offbeat (red) ticks makes it way less playable for beginners, because you also switch the accent from downbeat (white) to offbeat every few hit objects. Simplify it, please. Just remember you don't have to map *everything*, make it readable and easy to catch instead.

    For example, you could turn 00:08:374 (1,2,3) - to http://puu.sh/gUjQV/306ea06f21.jpg, and change 00:17:504 (1,2,3,4,5) - to a waaaaay less complex pattern like http://puu.sh/gUkc8/b2044c2255.jpg, which still gets all the beats right and plays well, and so on, and so forth.

  2. 01:07:069 (1) on Hard — this is pretty soon after a spinner. 1 beat would be more appropriate for the difficulty level, so you need to shorten spinner by 1/2
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Additionally,

[Hard]
  1. 00:37:558 (7,8,9) - This part is confusing, because the 1/4s come in early, then a long slider that misses many key rhythms just throws a player off
Topic Starter
JJburstOwO

TicClick wrote:

Hello,

I have to disqualify this due to the following:

  1. Easy is too complicated and has some breakcore-like rhythms. The fact that half of the sliders start on offbeat (red) ticks makes it way less playable for beginners, because you also switch the accent from downbeat (white) to offbeat every few hit objects. Simplify it, please. Just remember you don't have to map *everything*, make it readable and easy to catch instead.

    For example, you could turn 00:08:374 (1,2,3) - to http://puu.sh/gUjQV/306ea06f21.jpg, and change 00:17:504 (1,2,3,4,5) - to a waaaaay less complex pattern like http://puu.sh/gUkc8/b2044c2255.jpg, which still gets all the beats right and plays well, and so on, and so forth.

  2. 01:07:069 (1) on Hard — this is pretty soon after a spinner. 1 beat would be more appropriate for the difficulty level, so you need to shorten spinner by 1/2
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Additionally,

[Hard]
  1. 00:37:558 (7,8,9) - This part is confusing, because the 1/4s come in early, then a long slider that misses many key rhythms just throws a player off
:o
Thank you TicClick
I fixed most of the rhythm on redline
Narcissu
少女你不會懶找泡了吧……
Frey
大哥请快点找泡啊,看着着急,这么神的图
Topic Starter
JJburstOwO

Narcissu wrote:

少女你不會懶找泡了吧……

Frey wrote:

大哥请快点找泡啊,看着着急,这么神的图
QAQ 你们快上狗拯救我
sodarose
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Mei
looks fine for me
Topic Starter
JJburstOwO

Mei wrote:

looks fine for me
moe mei marry me
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