Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Good luck on it! I was feels a bit sad when saw your message but ... cant change anythings for it!

Good luck with the map! I will rebubble soon

ExUsagi wrote:

don't give up yet remi, raika!

[Beginner]
00:20:238 (20238|6) - move to 00:20:410 -, to catch same instrument as 00:19:203 (19203|0,19979|4) - this one
00:21:531 (21531|6) - you can remove this, and 00:20:755 (20755|0,21013|2,21272|4) - move to 2 4 6

along 1st kiai, the soft-hitclap.wav:70 doesn't really have a nice rhythm, lots of missing clap, yet filling the hitsound with the clap won't works as well.. removing the clap will helps

01:07:651 (67651|0) - finish
01:09:031 (69031|6) - ^
01:10:410 (70410|6) - ^

01:24:548 (84548|0) - along this part until 01:40:755 (100755|6) - , why don't you layer the sexophone / synth with simple LN? it's gonna be catchy, because 01:31:100 (91100|3,91789|4,92479|5,93858|2) - you layer it here..
also, better to layer 1 note per 1 percussion only in easiest diff..
if you layer 2 percussion at the same time, the feel of the 'Beginner' level itself is kinda gone

simply like that..

2nd roll

View > Show Sample Name
easier to see the sample name on each notes

View > Volume

hear the hitsound more careful, some hitsounds still missing / having pattern-less hitsound

00:11:100 (11100|5,11617|1,12134|5,12651|1,12824|5,12996|2,13169|4) - finish
00:13:686 (13686|3) - ^
01:35:238 (95238|0,95238|2) - kick & finish
01:46:272 (106272|0) - kick

01:49:376 (109376|3,109807|5,109807|1) - don't use double hitsound on double note, you'll notice the hitsound volume is doubled at 01:49:807 (109807|1,109807|5) -

=3= if you can self-mod the hitsound it could be more helpful

02:05:582 (125582|3,126100|1,126445|5) - doesn't feels like beginner diff, le fingers will confused to read this

02:19:893 (139893|2) - misplaced, to 02:19:807 - instead
02:26:445 (146445|2) - remove? the rhythm sounds more fitting

[Standard]
00:25:582 (25582|3,25927|0,26100|1) - sounds like 3/4 beat?
00:33:686 (33686|3,33686|6,33686|2) - avoid advanced level layering on normal diff, you can reduce the tense here
01:07:651 (67651|6) - le finish.. .-. guh you need to self-mod the hitsound as well in this diff..
01:25:238 (85238|2,85238|0) - i thought the snare at 01:25:410 - ? o_o? if you don't layer the snare, better to not add snare hitsound

01:35:238 (95238|0,95238|2) - add kick bass
01:38:686 (98686|6) - ea cymbal
01:37:996 (97996|6) - ^
01:39:376 (99376|0) - ^
==a lots of missing kicks.. im so dizzy.. @~@
01:55:927 (115927|3) - claaap~
02:25:123 (145123|4) - eeh? remove finish..

well, i will point out same thing in another diff, hitsound hitsound blahblah..
kudos is optional, but i won't forgive you guys (raika & remi) if you give up on valhalla..

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

what the? im even doesnt get the kuds and its get denied?

Ichigaki wrote:

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

what the? im even doesnt get the kuds and its get denied?

p/3838999 ?

Harbyter wrote:

Hypee

Harbyter wrote:

Hypee

Remillion Cross wrote:

why you...

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

...not going to qualify this and hypee after it get qualified, lol, jk

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Harbyter wrote:

Hypee

Remillion Cross wrote:

why you...

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

...not going to qualify this and hypee after it get qualified, lol, jk

Remillion Cross wrote:

Harbyter wrote:

Hypee

it's not even popular, why you should hype ?

Harbyter wrote:

cause i like hard song xD



hypeee

Harbyter wrote:

cause i like hard song xD



hypeee

Remillion Cross wrote:

Harbyter wrote:

cause i like hard song xD



hypeee

then help me qualify this thing pls jk

Julie wrote:

^ GO GO GO XD *shoot more stars =w=...cuz why not...

Really impressive mapset

Remillion Cross wrote:

don't waste your kudosu, it is already enough for me lolol

-Kamikaze- wrote:

Remillion Cross wrote:

don't waste your kudosu, it is already enough for me lolol

nobody's gonna tell me what to do, fuck the police #yolo

Remillion Cross wrote:

god.. this is the most kudosu stars i ever had

Reikosaka wrote:

mudah-mudahan bisa balik lagi ke state yang seharusnya /o/ , semangat *star*

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

Harbyter is demon

Remillion Cross wrote:

Expectation : BN came here for qualify my map.

Reality : BN came here for do some random stuff.

Remillion Cross wrote:

Expectation : BN came here for qualify my map.

Reality : BN came here for do some random stuff.

Harbyter wrote:

[Usagi's White Another]

00:17:996 (17996|5) - suggest to remove cause untill here you only followed the piano // done

00:21:445 (21445|1) - remove??Same reason as before // done

00:21:832 (21832|5) - nothing // @w@ but it's something... i guess it's because echoes.. done

00:28:513 (28513|4,28772|4,28945|4) - suggest to remove ,no need to put a note for those sound // b-but.. this is the flavor of this chart.. :C keep

00:29:289 (29289|4) - nothing ,remove // done

00:30:151 (30151|2) - suggest to remove,no need to put a note for this sound // done i guess

00:32:939 - add a note here for the violin // done

00:40:238 (40238|3) - nothing here, but in 1/3 00:40:180 - 00:40:295 - // removed, done

00:42:536 (42536|4,42594|5,42709|4,42766|5) - nothing in 1/6 here ,those sound that you can hear are in 1/8 ,i suggest a simple 1/4 snap here // 1/4 will works

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00:55:970 (55970|5) - here 00:55:985 -

00:56:143 (56143|4) - here 00:56:157 -

00:56:401 (56401|4) - here 00:56:387 -

those bell sounds are in 1/3 see this example

// i blame ichi for this.. :U all done

also you missed two of them here 00:56:272 - and 00:56:502 - and the double for the piano should be here 00:55:985 - not here 00:55:927 (55927|2) -

@PS: suggest to remove ,too awkward lololol // i guess the 3/4 beat like this is catchy enough with those grace notes..

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00:57:134 (57134|4) - nothing here snap in 1/3 00:57:077 - 00:57:192 - // removed, done

01:06:057 (66057|3,66057|4) - should be here in 1/6 01:06:042 - // done

01:07:220 (67220|6,67220|4,67220|1) - should be here in 1/6 01:07:192 - // done

01:08:082 (68082|4,68255|2,68427|6) - nothing in 1/4 piano are in 1/6 // done, thanks

01:08:600 (68600|1) - remove snare is in 1/6 with the piano 01:08:571 - // keep, disagree since i use BMS alike layering, so its should be fine (plus i put this occasionally)

01:09:462 (69462|4,69634|6) - nothing here remove // i layered the piano stream all over this phase.. and actually i don't know whether these ghost notes really 'disallowed' since i use it for build a better beat.. not trying to say i want to keep because playability or style reason lol..

01:10:151 (70151|2) - nothing here // keep for better beat..

01:10:324 (70324|5) - sound are in 1/6 here 01:10:295 - 01:10:353 - // ughuuu nice catch.. ok

01:13:082 (73082|1) - nothing ,sound are in 1/6 01:13:054 - 01:13:111 - // piano, keep

01:30:281 (90281|4,90367|5) - i'm not sure about those // lol echoes.. done

01:45:238 (105238|1,105496|3) - no sound ,remove // bassline, keep

01:56:847 (116847|5,116904|4,117019|2,117077|5,117192|3,117249|2) - fix this stair ,1/8 reference 00:24:376 -

02:06:488 (126488|2,126574|1) - nothing in 1/8 // done

02:08:470 (128470|5) - nothing // done

02:26:488 (146488|3,146531|5,146574|1) - wrong 1/6 02:26:502 - 02:26:559 -

02:26:832 (146832|5,146919|3) - nothing in 1/8 // done


02:30:065 - snap is wrong ,with fullerene help this is almost the most correct snap here but is really awkward lol // this.. x___x fixed..


@NOTICE: maybe we have to change the mp3 file