LordRaika wrote:

please RC XD go qualify with your dif as well........

Rumia- wrote:

i just took a glance on beginner diff , it does need more work
really kinda a lot

[Beginner]
00:24:117 (24117|3) - this beat is hard for new players , remove it please would be more appropriate.
00:24:893 (24893|3) - i dont think this one is necessary either. focus on the violin is ok imo
00:32:651 (32651|4) - unnecessary
00:36:617 (36617|3) - should've ended here 00:36:962 -
00:46:962 (46962|0,47048|1,47220|6,47393|4,47565|2,47651|1) - seriously for beginner ?
01:59:720 (119720|2) - u catch this for what ? it would be more formal if you just catch 01:59:203 (119203|5,119548|4,119893|3) -

pretty much overused LN for beginner diff some part is not even beginner ,

nevermind i just passing by ~

Harbyter wrote:

wtf my acc


btw i thought this was a little more harden lol

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

New diffs?

-Troke- wrote:

gogo RC
here take my stars

23:55 Remillion Cross: i need some advice
23:55 Remillion Cross: and feedback
23:55 Remillion Cross: ._.
23:55 Hellgert: ok
23:55 Hellgert: send me the beatmap
23:55 Hellgert: .
23:56 Remillion Cross: first, do you play 7k ?
23:56 Hellgert: few play
23:57 *Remillion Cross is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/588727 xi - Valhalla]
23:58 Hellgert: ew
23:58 Hellgert: white another
23:58 Remillion Cross: >.>
23:58 Hellgert: black moar btr D:
23:58 Remillion Cross: lol
23:58 Remillion Cross: because usagi is white (?)
23:58 Hellgert: white rabbit(?
23:58 Hellgert: ok
23:59 Hellgert: wut diff you need help
23:59 Remillion Cross: anyway i want some feedback in white another, and lordraika another
23:59 Remillion Cross: perhaps you can give me feedback in luminous too
23:59 Remillion Cross: i tired doing self-mod like 50 times so i need help lol
23:59 Hellgert: luminous,white another and lordraika anothwe
23:59 Hellgert: noted
00:00 Remillion Cross: :o
00:02 Hellgert: start luminous first
00:02 Hellgert: lord and rebbit one tmr
00:03 Hellgert: because they not online @@
00:03 Remillion Cross: ok
00:03 Remillion Cross: actually lordraika is online now
00:03 Hellgert: ayy
00:04 Remillion Cross: ayy
00:04 Hellgert: call him pm me
00:04 *Hellgert is watching [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/646994 xi - Valhalla [LumiNous]] <osu!mania> |7K|
00:06 Hellgert: AImod clean
00:08 Remillion Cross: ok
00:08 Hellgert: 00:11:358 - [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2810501 try this?]
00:11 Remillion Cross: wait
00:12 Hellgert: ok
00:13 Remillion Cross: ok then
00:13 Remillion Cross: continue
00:14 Hellgert: [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2810529 this is my style when i heard a sound like that]
00:15 Remillion Cross: aaw
00:15 Remillion Cross: okk
00:16 Hellgert: 00:22:565 (22565|3,22651|5) - silenced it 00:22:824 (22824|3,22910|1,22996|3) - louder
00:20 Remillion Cross: ok
00:20 Remillion Cross: just point out all of them in here
00:20 Hellgert: ok
00:24 Hellgert: [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2810601 add it,same as 01:07:307 (67307|3,67422|3,67536|3,67651|3) - ]
00:26 Remillion Cross: ok
00:28 Hellgert: 01:13:169 - 01:24:203 - try add more LN stream at there
00:28 Remillion Cross: `but it's already too many o.o
00:29 Hellgert: if you dont want add it is nvm .w.
00:29 Hellgert: Xleonqstyle
00:29 Remillion Cross: well i can make it more but i afraid if that will be unrankable
00:29 Remillion Cross: lol
00:29 Remillion Cross: \o\
00:30 Hellgert: remove the long LN
00:30 Remillion Cross: dafonz
00:30 Hellgert: just put the stream LN and jack
00:30 Remillion Cross: re-construct it
00:30 Remillion Cross: ok
00:32 Hellgert: 01:19:031 (79031|6,104203|0,104203|3,104203|6) - wut is this
00:33 Remillion Cross: for the usual beat
00:40 Hellgert: last one
00:40 Hellgert: 00:48:858 (48858|1,48945|5,49031|1,49117|5,49203|1,49261|2,49318|3,49376|4,49433|5,49490|1,49548|2,49605|3,49663|4,49720|1,49720|3) - 
00:40 Hellgert: oops
00:40 Hellgert: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2810677

00:06 Hellgert: yo
00:06 LordRaika: :D/
00:07 LordRaika: RC said
00:07 LordRaika: u wnt to talk bout valhalla?
00:07 *Hellgert is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/646994 xi - Valhalla [LumiNous]]
00:08 LordRaika: oh
00:08 LordRaika: ok ok and?
00:08 Hellgert: i start luminous first
00:08 Hellgert: ltr your's
00:09 LordRaika: ok :D
00:09 LordRaika: btw
00:09 LordRaika: call me again later
00:09 LordRaika: for my another >w<
00:09 Hellgert: ok
00:09 Hellgert: when you off?
00:09 Hellgert: :D
00:09 LordRaika: oh
00:09 LordRaika: nothing
00:09 Hellgert: wuty
00:09 LordRaika: im jst doing another things XD
00:09 LordRaika: hahahaa
00:09 Hellgert: pfft
00:09 LordRaika: beatfapping .w<
00:09 LordRaika: >w<
00:09 Hellgert: will call you after finish
00:09 LordRaika: i mean meatbapping
00:09 Hellgert: wtf
00:10 LordRaika: dont get the wrong idea okay?
00:10 LordRaika: b-b-bakaaaa
00:10 Hellgert: that meat
00:10 LordRaika: h-hmph da
00:10 LordRaika: allrite .... >w< i beatmapping :D/
00:10 Hellgert: lordraika tsundere comfirmed
00:10 LordRaika: BEATMAPPING
00:10 LordRaika: i even caps it XD
00:10 LordRaika: wahaha
00:10 LordRaika: hawawawa >_< im not tsundere
00:10 Hellgert: raika pls
00:11 LordRaika: T^T im nott
00:11 LordRaika: hhhmph da
00:11 Hellgert: you spoiled it
00:12 LordRaika: ko tidak tidur? :D
00:12 LordRaika: wahahaha
00:12 Hellgert: wahaha
00:12 Hellgert: tk nk tidur la
00:12 LordRaika: spoil wat ? T^T
00:12 Hellgert: your tsun tsun aura
00:12 LordRaika: haha.... i try to speak malaysian T^T but... im not good, just learn it from my fren :D
00:12 LordRaika: hehehehe
00:13 Hellgert: sme jhe
00:13 LordRaika: ok ok i got it btw
00:13 LordRaika: anddddddd
00:13 LordRaika: im not tsun T^T
00:13 LordRaika: huehue
00:13 Hellgert: je*
00:42 Hellgert: roadraika
00:42 LordRaika: jst Raika is fine T^T
00:42 Hellgert: ok
00:42 Hellgert: lightka
00:44 LordRaika: O_O
00:44 Hellgert: fuck it
00:44 *Hellgert is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/591839 xi - Valhalla [LordRaika's Another]]
00:47 LordRaika: ok ok
00:47 LordRaika: and?
00:47 Hellgert: 00:10:755 (10755|0,10812|1,10870|2,10927|3,10985|4,11042|5) - idk how to explain it,it more like too sudden when a 1/6 are fucking stacking at top of LN,so rearranged?
00:50 LordRaika: nope nope XD
00:50 Hellgert: kk
00:50 LordRaika: its easy enough
00:51 LordRaika: but if someone mention its hard again
00:51 LordRaika: i will rearranged
00:51 Hellgert: ok
00:52 Hellgert: [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2810740 lel this part] [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2810529 this is my style]
00:53 LordRaika: XD
00:53 LordRaika: but i like the use of LN there
00:53 LordRaika: hammer is too easy
00:53 LordRaika: and simple
00:53 Hellgert: i know
00:54 Hellgert: but i hate it somehow when the sound are nearly same but someone still map like the sound is moved or diffirent XD
00:55 Hellgert: [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2810760 i think this is more comfort]
00:57 LordRaika: ok
00:58 Hellgert: 00:45:755 (45755|2,45841|4,45927|2) - the powaaaar of low sound,hitsound it
00:58 LordRaika: double click the note
00:58 LordRaika: its already hitsounded
00:59 Hellgert: [http://puu.sh/g80Sn/143d756655.png oh]
00:59 LordRaika: ???
00:59 Hellgert: same
00:59 LordRaika: what u want me to do?
00:59 LordRaika: with it
00:59 Hellgert: my ear are not gud anyway
00:59 Hellgert: so cant bearly heard the hitysound
01:00 LordRaika: want me increase the volume?
01:01 Hellgert: if you want it
01:03 Hellgert: 01:13:341 (73341|1) - remove it(i know it has a sound there,but i put this as a pattern not for music)
01:04 LordRaika: ok, jst tell me all the mod, i got tired of waiting T^T, i continue on mapping other :D
01:05 LordRaika: i will back to check the chat
01:05 Hellgert: ok
01:05 Hellgert: 02:02:824 (122824|6,122824|4,122824|2,122824|0) - idk how to say about this,it more like it already off
01:06 Hellgert: note:i will try investigate this
01:06 Hellgert: either the hitsound is too loud or really is sync problem
01:07 Hellgert: ok done
01:08 LordRaika: whoa
01:08 Hellgert: be wait the mod at website
01:09 LordRaika: ehm
01:09 LordRaika: its a bit off
01:09 LordRaika: but
01:09 LordRaika: there no way
01:09 LordRaika: we change the snap into 1/16
01:09 LordRaika: X_X
01:09 Hellgert: X_X
01:09 Hellgert: ok there for now
01:09 LordRaika: ok
01:09 LordRaika: i done remove it :D
01:10 Hellgert: i will take some more time to watch this map
01:10 LordRaika: if u have more , jst let us knw
01:10 LordRaika: thx for the check
01:10 Hellgert: be wait the mod

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Good luck on it! I was feels a bit sad when saw your message but ... cant change anythings for it!

Good luck with the map! I will rebubble soon

ExUsagi wrote:

don't give up yet remi, raika!

[Beginner]
00:20:238 (20238|6) - move to 00:20:410 -, to catch same instrument as 00:19:203 (19203|0,19979|4) - this one
00:21:531 (21531|6) - you can remove this, and 00:20:755 (20755|0,21013|2,21272|4) - move to 2 4 6

along 1st kiai, the soft-hitclap.wav:70 doesn't really have a nice rhythm, lots of missing clap, yet filling the hitsound with the clap won't works as well.. removing the clap will helps

01:07:651 (67651|0) - finish
01:09:031 (69031|6) - ^
01:10:410 (70410|6) - ^

01:24:548 (84548|0) - along this part until 01:40:755 (100755|6) - , why don't you layer the sexophone / synth with simple LN? it's gonna be catchy, because 01:31:100 (91100|3,91789|4,92479|5,93858|2) - you layer it here..
also, better to layer 1 note per 1 percussion only in easiest diff..
if you layer 2 percussion at the same time, the feel of the 'Beginner' level itself is kinda gone

simply like that..

2nd roll

View > Show Sample Name
easier to see the sample name on each notes

View > Volume

hear the hitsound more careful, some hitsounds still missing / having pattern-less hitsound

00:11:100 (11100|5,11617|1,12134|5,12651|1,12824|5,12996|2,13169|4) - finish
00:13:686 (13686|3) - ^
01:35:238 (95238|0,95238|2) - kick & finish
01:46:272 (106272|0) - kick

01:49:376 (109376|3,109807|5,109807|1) - don't use double hitsound on double note, you'll notice the hitsound volume is doubled at 01:49:807 (109807|1,109807|5) -

=3= if you can self-mod the hitsound it could be more helpful

02:05:582 (125582|3,126100|1,126445|5) - doesn't feels like beginner diff, le fingers will confused to read this

02:19:893 (139893|2) - misplaced, to 02:19:807 - instead
02:26:445 (146445|2) - remove? the rhythm sounds more fitting

[Standard]
00:25:582 (25582|3,25927|0,26100|1) - sounds like 3/4 beat?
00:33:686 (33686|3,33686|6,33686|2) - avoid advanced level layering on normal diff, you can reduce the tense here
01:07:651 (67651|6) - le finish.. .-. guh you need to self-mod the hitsound as well in this diff..
01:25:238 (85238|2,85238|0) - i thought the snare at 01:25:410 - ? o_o? if you don't layer the snare, better to not add snare hitsound

01:35:238 (95238|0,95238|2) - add kick bass
01:38:686 (98686|6) - ea cymbal
01:37:996 (97996|6) - ^
01:39:376 (99376|0) - ^
==a lots of missing kicks.. im so dizzy.. @~@
01:55:927 (115927|3) - claaap~
02:25:123 (145123|4) - eeh? remove finish..

well, i will point out same thing in another diff, hitsound hitsound blahblah..
kudos is optional, but i won't forgive you guys (raika & remi) if you give up on valhalla..

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

what the? im even doesnt get the kuds and its get denied?

Ichigaki wrote:

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

what the? im even doesnt get the kuds and its get denied?

p/3838999 ?

Harbyter wrote:

Hypee

Harbyter wrote:

Hypee

Remillion Cross wrote:

why you...

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

...not going to qualify this and hypee after it get qualified, lol, jk

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Harbyter wrote:

Hypee

Remillion Cross wrote:

why you...

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

...not going to qualify this and hypee after it get qualified, lol, jk

Remillion Cross wrote:

Harbyter wrote:

Hypee

it's not even popular, why you should hype ?

Harbyter wrote:

cause i like hard song xD



hypeee

Harbyter wrote:

cause i like hard song xD



hypeee

Remillion Cross wrote:

Harbyter wrote:

cause i like hard song xD



hypeee

then help me qualify this thing pls jk

Julie wrote:

^ GO GO GO XD *shoot more stars =w=...cuz why not...

Really impressive mapset

Remillion Cross wrote:

don't waste your kudosu, it is already enough for me lolol

-Kamikaze- wrote:

Remillion Cross wrote:

don't waste your kudosu, it is already enough for me lolol

nobody's gonna tell me what to do, fuck the police #yolo

Remillion Cross wrote:

god.. this is the most kudosu stars i ever had