don't give up yet remi, raika!
[Beginner]
00:20:238 (20238|6) - move to 00:20:410 -, to catch same instrument as 00:19:203 (19203|0,19979|4) - this one
00:21:531 (21531|6) - you can remove this, and 00:20:755 (20755|0,21013|2,21272|4) - move to 2 4 6
along 1st kiai, the soft-hitclap.wav:70 doesn't really have a nice rhythm, lots of missing clap, yet filling the hitsound with the clap won't works as well.. removing the clap will helps
01:07:651 (67651|0) - finish
01:09:031 (69031|6) - ^
01:10:410 (70410|6) - ^
01:24:548 (84548|0) - along this part until 01:40:755 (100755|6) - , why don't you layer the sexophone / synth with simple LN? it's gonna be catchy, because 01:31:100 (91100|3,91789|4,92479|5,93858|2) - you layer it here..
also, better to layer 1 note per 1 percussion only in easiest diff..
if you layer 2 percussion at the same time, the feel of the 'Beginner' level itself is kinda gone
simply like that..
2nd roll
View > Show Sample Name
easier to see the sample name on each notes
View > Volume
hear the hitsound more careful, some hitsounds still missing / having pattern-less hitsound
00:11:100 (11100|5,11617|1,12134|5,12651|1,12824|5,12996|2,13169|4) - finish
00:13:686 (13686|3) - ^
01:35:238 (95238|0,95238|2) - kick & finish
01:46:272 (106272|0) - kick
01:49:376 (109376|3,109807|5,109807|1) - don't use double hitsound on double note, you'll notice the hitsound volume is doubled at 01:49:807 (109807|1,109807|5) -
=3= if you can self-mod the hitsound it could be more helpful
02:05:582 (125582|3,126100|1,126445|5) - doesn't feels like beginner diff, le fingers will confused to read this
02:19:893 (139893|2) - misplaced, to 02:19:807 - instead
02:26:445 (146445|2) - remove? the rhythm sounds more fitting
[Standard]
00:25:582 (25582|3,25927|0,26100|1) - sounds like 3/4 beat?
00:33:686 (33686|3,33686|6,33686|2) - avoid advanced level layering on normal diff, you can reduce the tense here
01:07:651 (67651|6) - le finish.. .-. guh you need to self-mod the hitsound as well in this diff..
01:25:238 (85238|2,85238|0) - i thought the snare at 01:25:410 - ? o_o? if you don't layer the snare, better to not add snare hitsound
01:35:238 (95238|0,95238|2) - add kick bass
01:38:686 (98686|6) - ea cymbal
01:37:996 (97996|6) - ^
01:39:376 (99376|0) - ^
==a lots of missing kicks.. im so dizzy.. @~@
01:55:927 (115927|3) - claaap~
02:25:123 (145123|4) - eeh? remove finish..
well, i will point out same thing in another diff, hitsound hitsound blahblah..
kudos is optional, but i won't forgive you guys (raika & remi) if you give up on valhalla..