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Topic Starter
Marking~
we need some hard 7K ranked!
Will process within a week or so - patience until then please! ;w;
we need some hard 7K ranked!
Will process within a week or so - patience until then please! ;w;
Topic Starter
Okie, thanks for notice my maps, Starry- !Starry- wrote:
Marking~
we need some hard 7K ranked!
Will process within a week or so - patience until then please! ;w;
Woohoo, gogo Remi!
-Kamikaze- wrote:
Woohoo, gogo Remi!
LNP- wrote:
-Kamikaze- wrote:
Woohoo, gogo Remi!
found issues....... ;_;
[LordRaika's Another]
[General]
[LordRaika's Another]
- 01:55:927 - two inherited timing sections. you must remove one.
Ranking Criteria wrote:
No two uninherited or two inherited timing sections should be placed at the same point. An inherited timing section may be placed on an uninherited timing section (but only to change the slider speed). Having two uninherited or two inherited sections on top of each other will cause problems within the beatmap.
each setting is different so it will be an unranklable issue. - 01:13:169 - same as above but same setting
[General]
- LR_Clap Loud L.wav and have few delay. it is less than 5ms so not unrankable but I will be glad if you fix .wav.
http://puu.sh/fJFgh/d9f6153856.zip
try this sound.
Topic Starter
demn it, will fixed when bancho or bss isn't ded. thanks for mention this to usNewRulerNA wrote:
found issues....... ;_;
[LordRaika's Another]
- 01:55:927 - two inherited timing sections. you must remove one.
Ranking Criteria wrote:
No two uninherited or two inherited timing sections should be placed at the same point. An inherited timing section may be placed on an uninherited timing section (but only to change the slider speed). Having two uninherited or two inherited sections on top of each other will cause problems within the beatmap.
each setting is different so it will be an unranklable issue.- 01:13:169 - same as above but same setting
[General]
- LR_Clap Loud L.wav and have few delay. it is less than 5ms so not unrankable but I will be glad if you fix .wav.
http://puu.sh/fJFgh/d9f6153856.zip
try this sound.
Topic Starter
Updated with LordRaika diffs, waiting for re-bubble
Did the updater updated fully? because after check, I think it not yet update Raika's diff, I will have some more irc check before rebubble too
[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: Okay
- AiMod: No Problem
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Okay
- Metadata: Okay
- Folder’s problem: Okay
- Hitsound: Okay
- Timing: Good
Timing is good for now w/
Rebubbled
Someone please qualified this ~
Yay yay! Go! for rankedKuo Kyoka wrote:
xi - Valhalla [Osu!Mania Modding]
[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: Okay
- AiMod: No Problem
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Okay
- Metadata: Okay
- Folder’s problem: Okay
- Hitsound: Okay
- Timing: Good
Timing is good for now w/
Rebubbled
Someone please qualified this ~
Checking tomorrow hopefully.
Topic Starter
Thanks again !
[General]
Timing: ☑
Audio: ☒
Here's a link to a edited rankable hitsound that you can replace it with. (right click -> save as)
BG: ☑
Metadata: ☑
Preview Point: ☑
AiMod: ☑
[ODHP Spread]
So we have
OD7 OD7 OD7 OD7.5 OD9 OD8.
I can vouch for OD7 on the easier diffs, I think Hyper needs OD7.5 though, or maybe even OD8. Compared to how many LNs the next diff, Another has.
HP7 HP7 HP7 HP7.5 HP8 HP8.5
A better spread, but again, Hyper isn't too tricky. It's best to raise this to HP7.5 or maybe HP8. You choose.
Rest seems fine, although I'm thinking HP8.5 may be a tiny bit too strict. Should be okay though.
[]
Untick Widescreen Support in all difficulties. Since this map doesn't use a storyboard.
What I also found is that LordRaika's Another has the most SV's compared to all the difficulties, and I think some are just unneeded, or feel awkward. I'm saying this as a player, too.
You should definitely address this within the next update, unless you want me to specifically point out the ones I believe don't play that well in my next check. I just think if you compare these SV's with ones other diffs, since it's a bit weird for the 4/6th diff to have the most SV.
[SV on LordRaika's diff]
8341, to 10755,
This speed up feels quite rough near the end. To be honest, something like this feels a bit smoother to play.
13427,
Feels better if this was more emphasised, and not cutting into the next notes that much. This works well (snapping to 1/4 instead)
23513,
Suggesting the same for this SV. 1.5x, 0.5x, 1.0x.
Makes the pattern snap faster, and the big clap is more emphasised.
28341,
These SV's are nice, but they're not consistent throughout the rest of the map.
Lots of times I hear the same patterns and they aren't being used. So perhaps remove them entirely, or add them all. (Don't particularly suggest adding them all though).
Reference: 122824 this whole kiai section.
48255,
Idk about this, it just feels like lag. Best to remove or try your best to smooth it out.
72824,
Same clap SV I was talking about. Make it 1/4, 3 sections, 1.5x, 0.5x and 1x. (The last section can be placed 1 or 2 more ticks later, since there's a big lead up to the next part in the map).
105927,
Same clap.
115927,
Same clap.
118169,
To be honest, I think you can just make this 0.9x. It better shows the change of pace as the piano is introduced back in.
122565,
I'm thinking you can move this section maybe 1/4 a bit later - it's meant to be a big build up, but it's slower.
02:27:307 (147307|5,147307|1,147307|4,147307|2) - SV this, clap
I must say the use of SV at the end of this difficulty (being 0.70) makes it really hard to hit this:
Maybe just raise it a bit.
Remember these SV's are just examples, and you can adapt to them however you like. Main points are just consistency with the LN SV's in the middle of kiai, smoothing transitions, and emphasis of the clap.
Timing: ☑
Audio: ☒
- Unrankable:
- normal-hitnormal.wav
Under 100ms.
Here's a link to a edited rankable hitsound that you can replace it with. (right click -> save as)
BG: ☑
Metadata: ☑
Preview Point: ☑
AiMod: ☑
[ODHP Spread]
So we have
OD7 OD7 OD7 OD7.5 OD9 OD8.
I can vouch for OD7 on the easier diffs, I think Hyper needs OD7.5 though, or maybe even OD8. Compared to how many LNs the next diff, Another has.
HP7 HP7 HP7 HP7.5 HP8 HP8.5
A better spread, but again, Hyper isn't too tricky. It's best to raise this to HP7.5 or maybe HP8. You choose.
Rest seems fine, although I'm thinking HP8.5 may be a tiny bit too strict. Should be okay though.
[]
Untick Widescreen Support in all difficulties. Since this map doesn't use a storyboard.
What I also found is that LordRaika's Another has the most SV's compared to all the difficulties, and I think some are just unneeded, or feel awkward. I'm saying this as a player, too.
You should definitely address this within the next update, unless you want me to specifically point out the ones I believe don't play that well in my next check. I just think if you compare these SV's with ones other diffs, since it's a bit weird for the 4/6th diff to have the most SV.
[SV on LordRaika's diff]
8341, to 10755,
This speed up feels quite rough near the end. To be honest, something like this feels a bit smoother to play.
13427,
Feels better if this was more emphasised, and not cutting into the next notes that much. This works well (snapping to 1/4 instead)
23513,
Suggesting the same for this SV. 1.5x, 0.5x, 1.0x.
Makes the pattern snap faster, and the big clap is more emphasised.
28341,
These SV's are nice, but they're not consistent throughout the rest of the map.
Lots of times I hear the same patterns and they aren't being used. So perhaps remove them entirely, or add them all. (Don't particularly suggest adding them all though).
Reference: 122824 this whole kiai section.
48255,
Idk about this, it just feels like lag. Best to remove or try your best to smooth it out.
72824,
Same clap SV I was talking about. Make it 1/4, 3 sections, 1.5x, 0.5x and 1x. (The last section can be placed 1 or 2 more ticks later, since there's a big lead up to the next part in the map).
105927,
Same clap.
115927,
Same clap.
118169,
To be honest, I think you can just make this 0.9x. It better shows the change of pace as the piano is introduced back in.
122565,
I'm thinking you can move this section maybe 1/4 a bit later - it's meant to be a big build up, but it's slower.
02:27:307 (147307|5,147307|1,147307|4,147307|2) - SV this, clap
I must say the use of SV at the end of this difficulty (being 0.70) makes it really hard to hit this:
Maybe just raise it a bit.
Remember these SV's are just examples, and you can adapt to them however you like. Main points are just consistency with the LN SV's in the middle of kiai, smoothing transitions, and emphasis of the clap.
done, i removed all a very very minor SV OwO
yay, the hype is realllllll
we can feel the day draws near >w<
thx for the check Starry~
yay, the hype is realllllll
we can feel the day draws near >w<
thx for the check Starry~
Topic Starter
Final Update done.
Almost for qualify w/
Topic Starter
i can't wait for it
please RC XD go qualify with your dif as well........
Topic Starter
yeah i want it too but.. seems the condition isn't right now...LordRaika wrote:
please RC XD go qualify with your dif as well........
*STALKING*
Shoot my last kudo! gawd I gotta mods more LOL
GO GO GO RANK RANK RANK XD!!
Shoot my last kudo! gawd I gotta mods more LOL
GO GO GO RANK RANK RANK XD!!
i just took a glance on beginner diff , it does need more work
really kinda a lot
[Beginner]
00:24:117 (24117|3) - this beat is hard for new players , remove it please would be more appropriate.
00:24:893 (24893|3) - i dont think this one is necessary either. focus on the violin is ok imo
00:32:651 (32651|4) - unnecessary
00:36:617 (36617|3) - should've ended here 00:36:962 -
00:46:962 (46962|0,47048|1,47220|6,47393|4,47565|2,47651|1) - seriously for beginner ?
01:59:720 (119720|2) - u catch this for what ? it would be more formal if you just catch 01:59:203 (119203|5,119548|4,119893|3) -
pretty much overused LN for beginner diff some part is not even beginner ,
nevermind i just passing by ~
really kinda a lot
[Beginner]
00:24:117 (24117|3) - this beat is hard for new players , remove it please would be more appropriate.
00:24:893 (24893|3) - i dont think this one is necessary either. focus on the violin is ok imo
00:32:651 (32651|4) - unnecessary
00:36:617 (36617|3) - should've ended here 00:36:962 -
00:46:962 (46962|0,47048|1,47220|6,47393|4,47565|2,47651|1) - seriously for beginner ?
01:59:720 (119720|2) - u catch this for what ? it would be more formal if you just catch 01:59:203 (119203|5,119548|4,119893|3) -
pretty much overused LN for beginner diff some part is not even beginner ,
nevermind i just passing by ~
Topic Starter
wait, i will destroy my Beginner diff dadadadadadadadadada will update, and re-construct at anything not only for Beginner, but ALL of the diffs except GDs
so this isn't complete yet, thanks for notice my map ~
so this isn't complete yet, thanks for notice my map
~
Topic Starter
All fixed.Rumia- wrote:
i just took a glance on beginner diff , it does need more work
really kinda a lot
[Beginner]
00:24:117 (24117|3) - this beat is hard for new players , remove it please would be more appropriate.
00:24:893 (24893|3) - i dont think this one is necessary either. focus on the violin is ok imo
00:32:651 (32651|4) - unnecessary
00:36:617 (36617|3) - should've ended here 00:36:962 -
00:46:962 (46962|0,47048|1,47220|6,47393|4,47565|2,47651|1) - seriously for beginner ?
01:59:720 (119720|2) - u catch this for what ? it would be more formal if you just catch 01:59:203 (119203|5,119548|4,119893|3) -
pretty much overused LN for beginner diff some part is not even beginner ,
nevermind i just passing by ~
Like you said, I had already re-construct and easier the pattern in Beginner, Standard, and Hyper. I also keep like a forever alone, self-mod so many times in LumiNous, and got so many mods from modders and testers. Yeah, that's good advice tho.
Thanks~
wtf my acc
btw i thought this was a little more harden lol
Topic Starter
whoops you're already figured itHarbyter wrote:
wtf my acc
btw i thought this was a little more harden lol
Topic Starter
checking and there is no problems, but still sad about the last diff, call me when the problem's solved!
Topic Starter
Thanks, and sorry for all of this..
New diffs?
Lol no......
Check those dif of mine , to compare my dif....
I said 1/4 inverse is easier.... Rather than 1/2
^^
Also its easier to test inverse on those new dif
Check those dif of mine , to compare my dif....
I said 1/4 inverse is easier.... Rather than 1/2
^^
Also its easier to test inverse on those new dif
Topic Starter
it's just a testing about the LN wall part in LordRaika's Another, with a different inverseKuo Kyoka wrote:
New diffs?
Thanks for the support ; _ ;-Troke- wrote:
gogo RC
here take my stars
IRC mod
please refer the mod for your mapset [Luminous] and [LordRaika's Another] IRC mod
please refer the mod for your mapset [Luminous] and [LordRaika's Another] IRC mod
23:55 Remillion Cross: i need some advice
23:55 Remillion Cross: and feedback
23:55 Remillion Cross: ._.
23:55 Hellgert: ok
23:55 Hellgert: send me the beatmap
23:55 Hellgert: .
23:56 Remillion Cross: first, do you play 7k ?
23:56 Hellgert: few play
23:57 *Remillion Cross is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/588727 xi - Valhalla]
23:58 Hellgert: ew
23:58 Hellgert: white another
23:58 Remillion Cross: >.>
23:58 Hellgert: black moar btr D:
23:58 Remillion Cross: lol
23:58 Remillion Cross: because usagi is white (?)
23:58 Hellgert: white rabbit(?
23:58 Hellgert: ok
23:59 Hellgert: wut diff you need help
23:59 Remillion Cross: anyway i want some feedback in white another, and lordraika another
23:59 Remillion Cross: perhaps you can give me feedback in luminous too
23:59 Remillion Cross: i tired doing self-mod like 50 times so i need help lol
23:59 Hellgert: luminous,white another and lordraika anothwe
23:59 Hellgert: noted
00:00 Remillion Cross: :o
00:02 Hellgert: start luminous first
00:02 Hellgert: lord and rebbit one tmr
00:03 Hellgert: because they not online @@
00:03 Remillion Cross: ok
00:03 Remillion Cross: actually lordraika is online now
00:03 Hellgert: ayy
00:04 Remillion Cross: ayy
00:04 Hellgert: call him pm me
00:04 *Hellgert is watching [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/646994 xi - Valhalla [LumiNous]] <osu!mania> |7K|
00:06 Hellgert: AImod clean
00:08 Remillion Cross: ok
00:08 Hellgert: 00:11:358 - [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2810501 try this?]
00:11 Remillion Cross: wait
00:12 Hellgert: ok
00:13 Remillion Cross: ok then
00:13 Remillion Cross: continue
00:14 Hellgert: [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2810529 this is my style when i heard a sound like that]
00:15 Remillion Cross: aaw
00:15 Remillion Cross: okk
00:16 Hellgert: 00:22:565 (22565|3,22651|5) - silenced it 00:22:824 (22824|3,22910|1,22996|3) - louder
00:20 Remillion Cross: ok
00:20 Remillion Cross: just point out all of them in here
00:20 Hellgert: ok
00:24 Hellgert: [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2810601 add it,same as 01:07:307 (67307|3,67422|3,67536|3,67651|3) - ]
00:26 Remillion Cross: ok
00:28 Hellgert: 01:13:169 - 01:24:203 - try add more LN stream at there
00:28 Remillion Cross: `but it's already too many o.o
00:29 Hellgert: if you dont want add it is nvm .w.
00:29 Hellgert: Xleonqstyle
00:29 Remillion Cross: well i can make it more but i afraid if that will be unrankable
00:29 Remillion Cross: lol
00:29 Remillion Cross: \o\
00:30 Hellgert: remove the long LN
00:30 Remillion Cross: dafonz
00:30 Hellgert: just put the stream LN and jack
00:30 Remillion Cross: re-construct it
00:30 Remillion Cross: ok
00:32 Hellgert: 01:19:031 (79031|6,104203|0,104203|3,104203|6) - wut is this
00:33 Remillion Cross: for the usual beat
00:40 Hellgert: last one
00:40 Hellgert: 00:48:858 (48858|1,48945|5,49031|1,49117|5,49203|1,49261|2,49318|3,49376|4,49433|5,49490|1,49548|2,49605|3,49663|4,49720|1,49720|3) -
00:40 Hellgert: oops
00:40 Hellgert: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2810677
00:06 Hellgert: yo
00:06 LordRaika: :D/
00:07 LordRaika: RC said
00:07 LordRaika: u wnt to talk bout valhalla?
00:07 *Hellgert is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/646994 xi - Valhalla [LumiNous]]
00:08 LordRaika: oh
00:08 LordRaika: ok ok and?
00:08 Hellgert: i start luminous first
00:08 Hellgert: ltr your's
00:09 LordRaika: ok :D
00:09 LordRaika: btw
00:09 LordRaika: call me again later
00:09 LordRaika: for my another >w<
00:09 Hellgert: ok
00:09 Hellgert: when you off?
00:09 Hellgert: :D
00:09 LordRaika: oh
00:09 LordRaika: nothing
00:09 Hellgert: wuty
00:09 LordRaika: im jst doing another things XD
00:09 LordRaika: hahahaa
00:09 Hellgert: pfft
00:09 LordRaika: beatfapping .w<
00:09 LordRaika: >w<
00:09 Hellgert: will call you after finish
00:09 LordRaika: i mean meatbapping
00:09 Hellgert: wtf
00:10 LordRaika: dont get the wrong idea okay?
00:10 LordRaika: b-b-bakaaaa
00:10 Hellgert: that meat
00:10 LordRaika: h-hmph da
00:10 LordRaika: allrite .... >w< i beatmapping :D/
00:10 Hellgert: lordraika tsundere comfirmed
00:10 LordRaika: BEATMAPPING
00:10 LordRaika: i even caps it XD
00:10 LordRaika: wahaha
00:10 LordRaika: hawawawa >_< im not tsundere
00:10 Hellgert: raika pls
00:11 LordRaika: T^T im nott
00:11 LordRaika: hhhmph da
00:11 Hellgert: you spoiled it
00:12 LordRaika: ko tidak tidur? :D
00:12 LordRaika: wahahaha
00:12 Hellgert: wahaha
00:12 Hellgert: tk nk tidur la
00:12 LordRaika: spoil wat ? T^T
00:12 Hellgert: your tsun tsun aura
00:12 LordRaika: haha.... i try to speak malaysian T^T but... im not good, just learn it from my fren :D
00:12 LordRaika: hehehehe
00:13 Hellgert: sme jhe
00:13 LordRaika: ok ok i got it btw
00:13 LordRaika: anddddddd
00:13 LordRaika: im not tsun T^T
00:13 LordRaika: huehue
00:13 Hellgert: je*
00:42 Hellgert: roadraika
00:42 LordRaika: jst Raika is fine T^T
00:42 Hellgert: ok
00:42 Hellgert: lightka
00:44 LordRaika: O_O
00:44 Hellgert: fuck it
00:44 *Hellgert is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/591839 xi - Valhalla [LordRaika's Another]]
00:47 LordRaika: ok ok
00:47 LordRaika: and?
00:47 Hellgert: 00:10:755 (10755|0,10812|1,10870|2,10927|3,10985|4,11042|5) - idk how to explain it,it more like too sudden when a 1/6 are fucking stacking at top of LN,so rearranged?
00:50 LordRaika: nope nope XD
00:50 Hellgert: kk
00:50 LordRaika: its easy enough
00:51 LordRaika: but if someone mention its hard again
00:51 LordRaika: i will rearranged
00:51 Hellgert: ok
00:52 Hellgert: [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2810740 lel this part] [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2810529 this is my style]
00:53 LordRaika: XD
00:53 LordRaika: but i like the use of LN there
00:53 LordRaika: hammer is too easy
00:53 LordRaika: and simple
00:53 Hellgert: i know
00:54 Hellgert: but i hate it somehow when the sound are nearly same but someone still map like the sound is moved or diffirent XD
00:55 Hellgert: [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2810760 i think this is more comfort]
00:57 LordRaika: ok
00:58 Hellgert: 00:45:755 (45755|2,45841|4,45927|2) - the powaaaar of low sound,hitsound it
00:58 LordRaika: double click the note
00:58 LordRaika: its already hitsounded
00:59 Hellgert: [http://puu.sh/g80Sn/143d756655.png oh]
00:59 LordRaika: ???
00:59 Hellgert: same
00:59 LordRaika: what u want me to do?
00:59 LordRaika: with it
00:59 Hellgert: my ear are not gud anyway
00:59 Hellgert: so cant bearly heard the hitysound
01:00 LordRaika: want me increase the volume?
01:01 Hellgert: if you want it
01:03 Hellgert: 01:13:341 (73341|1) - remove it(i know it has a sound there,but i put this as a pattern not for music)
01:04 LordRaika: ok, jst tell me all the mod, i got tired of waiting T^T, i continue on mapping other :D
01:05 LordRaika: i will back to check the chat
01:05 Hellgert: ok
01:05 Hellgert: 02:02:824 (122824|6,122824|4,122824|2,122824|0) - idk how to say about this,it more like it already off
01:06 Hellgert: note:i will try investigate this
01:06 Hellgert: either the hitsound is too loud or really is sync problem
01:07 Hellgert: ok done
01:08 LordRaika: whoa
01:08 Hellgert: be wait the mod at website
01:09 LordRaika: ehm
01:09 LordRaika: its a bit off
01:09 LordRaika: but
01:09 LordRaika: there no way
01:09 LordRaika: we change the snap into 1/16
01:09 LordRaika: X_X
01:09 Hellgert: X_X
01:09 Hellgert: ok there for now
01:09 LordRaika: ok
01:09 LordRaika: i done remove it :D
01:10 Hellgert: i will take some more time to watch this map
01:10 LordRaika: if u have more , jst let us knw
01:10 LordRaika: thx for the check
01:10 Hellgert: be wait the mod
Topic Starter
mfw no one check this map
don't give up yet remi, raika!
[Beginner]
00:20:238 (20238|6) - move to 00:20:410 -, to catch same instrument as 00:19:203 (19203|0,19979|4) - this one
00:21:531 (21531|6) - you can remove this, and 00:20:755 (20755|0,21013|2,21272|4) - move to 2 4 6
along 1st kiai, the soft-hitclap.wav:70 doesn't really have a nice rhythm, lots of missing clap, yet filling the hitsound with the clap won't works as well.. removing the clap will helps
01:07:651 (67651|0) - finish
01:09:031 (69031|6) - ^
01:10:410 (70410|6) - ^
01:24:548 (84548|0) - along this part until 01:40:755 (100755|6) - , why don't you layer the sexophone / synth with simple LN? it's gonna be catchy, because 01:31:100 (91100|3,91789|4,92479|5,93858|2) - you layer it here..
also, better to layer 1 note per 1 percussion only in easiest diff..
if you layer 2 percussion at the same time, the feel of the 'Beginner' level itself is kinda gone
simply like that..
2nd roll
View > Show Sample Name
easier to see the sample name on each notes
View > Volume
hear the hitsound more careful, some hitsounds still missing / having pattern-less hitsound
00:11:100 (11100|5,11617|1,12134|5,12651|1,12824|5,12996|2,13169|4) - finish
00:13:686 (13686|3) - ^
01:35:238 (95238|0,95238|2) - kick & finish
01:46:272 (106272|0) - kick
01:49:376 (109376|3,109807|5,109807|1) - don't use double hitsound on double note, you'll notice the hitsound volume is doubled at 01:49:807 (109807|1,109807|5) -
=3= if you can self-mod the hitsound it could be more helpful
02:05:582 (125582|3,126100|1,126445|5) - doesn't feels like beginner diff, le fingers will confused to read this
02:19:893 (139893|2) - misplaced, to 02:19:807 - instead
02:26:445 (146445|2) - remove? the rhythm sounds more fitting
[Standard]
00:25:582 (25582|3,25927|0,26100|1) - sounds like 3/4 beat?
00:33:686 (33686|3,33686|6,33686|2) - avoid advanced level layering on normal diff, you can reduce the tense here
01:07:651 (67651|6) - le finish.. .-. guh you need to self-mod the hitsound as well in this diff..
01:25:238 (85238|2,85238|0) - i thought the snare at 01:25:410 - ? o_o? if you don't layer the snare, better to not add snare hitsound
01:35:238 (95238|0,95238|2) - add kick bass
01:38:686 (98686|6) - ea cymbal
01:37:996 (97996|6) - ^
01:39:376 (99376|0) - ^
==a lots of missing kicks.. im so dizzy.. @~@
01:55:927 (115927|3) - claaap~
02:25:123 (145123|4) - eeh? remove finish..
well, i will point out same thing in another diff, hitsound hitsound blahblah..
kudos is optional, but i won't forgive you guys (raika & remi) if you give up on valhalla..
[Beginner]
00:20:238 (20238|6) - move to 00:20:410 -, to catch same instrument as 00:19:203 (19203|0,19979|4) - this one
00:21:531 (21531|6) - you can remove this, and 00:20:755 (20755|0,21013|2,21272|4) - move to 2 4 6
along 1st kiai, the soft-hitclap.wav:70 doesn't really have a nice rhythm, lots of missing clap, yet filling the hitsound with the clap won't works as well.. removing the clap will helps
01:07:651 (67651|0) - finish
01:09:031 (69031|6) - ^
01:10:410 (70410|6) - ^
01:24:548 (84548|0) - along this part until 01:40:755 (100755|6) - , why don't you layer the sexophone / synth with simple LN? it's gonna be catchy, because 01:31:100 (91100|3,91789|4,92479|5,93858|2) - you layer it here..
also, better to layer 1 note per 1 percussion only in easiest diff..
if you layer 2 percussion at the same time, the feel of the 'Beginner' level itself is kinda gone
simply like that..
2nd roll
View > Show Sample Name
easier to see the sample name on each notes
View > Volume
hear the hitsound more careful, some hitsounds still missing / having pattern-less hitsound
00:11:100 (11100|5,11617|1,12134|5,12651|1,12824|5,12996|2,13169|4) - finish
00:13:686 (13686|3) - ^
01:35:238 (95238|0,95238|2) - kick & finish
01:46:272 (106272|0) - kick
01:49:376 (109376|3,109807|5,109807|1) - don't use double hitsound on double note, you'll notice the hitsound volume is doubled at 01:49:807 (109807|1,109807|5) -
=3= if you can self-mod the hitsound it could be more helpful
02:05:582 (125582|3,126100|1,126445|5) - doesn't feels like beginner diff, le fingers will confused to read this
02:19:893 (139893|2) - misplaced, to 02:19:807 - instead
02:26:445 (146445|2) - remove? the rhythm sounds more fitting
[Standard]
00:25:582 (25582|3,25927|0,26100|1) - sounds like 3/4 beat?
00:33:686 (33686|3,33686|6,33686|2) - avoid advanced level layering on normal diff, you can reduce the tense here
01:07:651 (67651|6) - le finish.. .-. guh you need to self-mod the hitsound as well in this diff..
01:25:238 (85238|2,85238|0) - i thought the snare at 01:25:410 - ? o_o? if you don't layer the snare, better to not add snare hitsound
01:35:238 (95238|0,95238|2) - add kick bass
01:38:686 (98686|6) - ea cymbal
01:37:996 (97996|6) - ^
01:39:376 (99376|0) - ^
==a lots of missing kicks.. im so dizzy.. @~@
01:55:927 (115927|3) - claaap~
02:25:123 (145123|4) - eeh? remove finish..
well, i will point out same thing in another diff, hitsound hitsound blahblah..
kudos is optional, but i won't forgive you guys (raika & remi) if you give up on valhalla..
Topic Starter
wait, still in work
Good luck on it! I was feels a bit sad when saw your message but ... cant change anythings for it!
Good luck with the map! I will rebubble soon
Good luck with the map! I will rebubble soon
Topic Starter
Thank you very much :3Kuo Kyoka wrote:
Good luck on it! I was feels a bit sad when saw your message but ... cant change anythings for it!
Good luck with the map! I will rebubble soon