LNP- wrote:

=w=)/
di suruh check sama $1.000.000


Wkwkw sejak kapan nama w jadi cute bgini XD hawawawa~
[LordNyaika's Another]

• 00:15:841 - ada piano sound
OMG, ini bukan ada piano sound, TPI punya ku uda salah snap orz
*ganti

• 00:22:651 - ada hihat
add to 4

• 00:26:531 - O_O apa gk apa apa ini begini ?
AKHIRNYA ada yg mention juga XD
justru itu!!! w males liat komentator org, nnti gk snap pada tempatnya klo w pk full 1/4 , nnti kek nine point eight kena DQ
orz hmm w gnti deh.... jadi ssuatu OWO

• 00:50:582 - satu LN kayaknya udh cukup
hmm gpp ^^ w suka simetri 3 spt ini, plus trlihat bgus ama pattern bgian sini

• 01:45:123 (105123|1) - seharusnya di 01:45:065 -
Sip, human error nih namanya

Good Luck >w<)b

DrawdeX wrote:

[LordRaika's Another]
OD +0.2
added

• 01:09:031 - Add two notes, for the cymbal sound
nope XD sry it was intentional >_< for the pattern sake

Good luck~!

Rayz141 wrote:

[Another-nya Raika]
00:15:755 (15755|6) - ini piano bukan? kalo iya startnya disini 00:15:841 -
that's it
Sip ^^b nice notice, tp uda di mention jg ama LNP-

GL4map yo~

Ichigaki wrote:

Yojimbo's White Another

00:04:203 (4203|4,4893|5,5755|6) - Untuk pitch, aku saranin sih ini digeser satu kolom ke kiri. // keep.. ==a
00:06:789 (6789|3) - Karena ini pitch tertinggi, so taruh di 7 // ==a 4th column as scratch, walopun 6+1k, tapi tetep impact mencet space lebih keras dari 7th column.. keep
00:14:117 - Missing piano // o.o erm.. keep.. (empty for purpose.. orz)
00:16:531 - Tambah satu note untuk pianonya // 00:16:617 (16617|3) - sebelumnya disini kosong.. ==a haduh... keep
00:16:617 (16617|3) - Hapus ini karena suara yang diikuti kurang jelas terdengar // blame previous modders.. done.. :U
00:17:565 - Tambah note untuk piano, kalau bisa di-arrange ulang // ==a keep
00:18:945 (18945|1) - Mungkin kalau di 1 lebih enak // eeh, bukan scratch key.. o.o keep
00:19:203 (19203|5,19203|3,19720|3,19720|5) - Suaranya beda, lebih kecil 00:19:720 (19720|5,19720|3) - , jadi hapus salah satu note disitu // 00:19:720 (19720|3,19720|5,19807|4) - di ctrl + j.. :u
00:19:634 - Missing piano // beatnya kagak enak... keep.. ==a
00:19:807 - Disini harusnya double (tambah satu note untuk piano) // hasil ctrl + J yg atas.. xD
00:21:445 (21445|4) - Ini pitch nggak cocok di 5, mungkin di 2 atau 1 // 2.. owo)b
00:21:660 - Missing piano // o_o serius? keep
00:21:746 - ^ // ==a eeh entah lah, keep
00:24:376 - 00:24:893 - Jelas 1/8, coba cek LumiNous // lol ok.. thanks for the hint.. :3
00:29:893 (29893|3) - Ini lebih pas di 00:29:936 - (1/8), dan kasih soft-hitfinish // ok
00:32:910 - Tambah note untuk piano // ok
00:32:953 - ^ // keep, 1/4 udah cukup
00:34:117 - Ada snare kecil disini, boleh lah ditambah note // ==a beatnya kurang enak, keep
00:35:539 - Tambah note untuk piano? // keep
00:37:048 (37048|5,37048|2) - Ini lebih pas terdengar di 00:37:091 - (1/8) // ==a considering to not change, 1/4 is neat already
00:39:548 (39548|6,39807|1) - Aku kurang mendenger sound yang diikuti, jadi bisa dihapus aja // blame previous mods tho *me slapped
00:41:617 - Ini cukup keras, jadi ditambah satu note mungkin tidak masalah // ok
00:42:479 - 00:42:824 - Disini jarak waktu ini, semua terdengar ada 1/3 // o_O ada cue di 1/6, keep
00:43:600 (43600|2,43686|2) - Ini suaranya jelas berbeda, 00:43:686 (43686|2) - pindah ini ke kolom 5 / 6 // ==a maap, gw gak ngemap secara teknis, lebih kena pendekatan secara fisik..
00:45:151 - Tambah note disini dan kasih soft-hitfinish // ok
00:46:100 - 00:46:445 - Ada piano disetiap 1/4 beat // keep.. o_____O seriusan?
00:46:445 - 00:46:789 - Ada snare kecil di setiap 1/4 // 00:46:703 - hearable snare, added.. =w=)b
00:49:807 - Missed piano // eeeh keep
00:55:927 (55927|5,55927|2) - Aku rasa ini dimulai di 00:55:970 - // ok, applied on same pattern
00:59:031 (59031|1,59031|3,59031|5) - Triple untuk apa? // ==a salah layering, removed one.. :U
01:06:057 - Tambah double untuk pianonya // ok
01:11:272 - Tambah note snare kecil // ok
01:11:531 - 01:11:703 - Harusnya dikasih note tambahan, soalnya disini 01:12:048 (72048|2,72048|5) - double, padahal rhythmnya sama // 01:11:445 (71445|1,71617|1,71789|0) - suara bass (dum dum dum), 01:11:445 (71445|3,71531|4,71617|5,71703|6) - piano.. ==a it's layered properly, so keep
01:14:548 - Tambah note untuk (?) // synth yg tinggi? keep
01:19:720 - 01:19:893 - Tambah note untuk snare // ==a some accepted some not..
01:20:841 (80841|1,80927|5,81100|4,81186|3) - Hapus, kurang terdengar rhythmnya // ==a keep, beatnya jadi janggal
01:25:238 - Missed snare, tapi di 01:25:755 - ada // ok
01:24:548 - 01:40:755 - Kenapa tiba-tiba jadi 1K+6K? // eeeh emang 1+6K.. O_O
01:41:445 - Tambah double untuk piano // keep
01:43:082 (103082|6,103082|4,103082|3,103082|0) - Sama sekali ga ada suara yang sesuai untuk quad notes, double lebih baik // removed 1st note, =w=)v
01:45:582 - 01:45:669 - Punya suara yang sama, jadi usahakan notenya juga sama // ok
01:48:772 (108772|1,108772|4) - Nggak ada suara yang bisa diikutin // nice catch, ok
01:51:531 (111531|5,111703|3) - ^ // ok
01:52:134 - Snarenya kurang, tambah note jadi double aja // keep, rhythmnya jadi agak aneh soalnya gk fokus ke perkusi
01:52:479 - ^ // ^
01:54:634 - Missed piano // keep
01:55:669 - ^ // ;w; keep
01:57:134 - Harusnya snare disini juga dikasih double, masa cuma 01:56:962 - ? // 01:56:962 - removed
02:06:488 (126488|2,126574|1) - Seharusnya nggak ada ini // mainin lagi, teknik bracketing tuh.. :^)
02:10:755 - 02:10:927 - 1/8 // cuma ngedenger 3, jadi keep
02:26:703 - Missed snare //
Kerasa disini banyak ghost note // mention which is the ghost notes plox... ;;

ArcherLove wrote:

:u

mod

collumn 1~7

7K Beginner

00:12:651 ~ 00:13:427 - http://puu.sh/f30pV/de15375c6d.jpg better hand flow ? (menghindari jack di diff beginner ;w;)
00:41:789 (41789|1,41789|5) - pindah di 3-5 ?
01:40:295 (100295|0,100295|6) - move to 2-6 ? 01:40:525 (100525|5,100525|1) - move to 3-5 ?
02:15:496 (135496|0) - pindah ke 2

susah banget kayaknya buat diff easy untuk lagu ini *lirikstardiff emang sih hehe kayak ga tau aja >_<

7K Standard

great

7K Hyper

00:37:048 (37048|6) - move this to another collumn please .. minijack op
00:37:307 (37307|3) - change to LN untill 00:37:651 -

7K LordRaika

00:53:169 - need to adding note here (for piano chord)
00:53:427 - add note piano
01:59:203 - add note for piano chord
01:59:548 - ^

7K YOJIMBOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWW

yojimbok ok

7K Luminous

00:20:238 (20238|1,20324|3,20410|2,20496|4,20582|3,20669|5,20755|4) - Ctrl H ?
00:21:531 ~ 00:22:134 - ini ada suara stairs piano nya ga di add ?
00:34:548 (34548|6,34548|0) - change to LN sampai 00:34:979 - ?

good luck!~

Ichigaki wrote:

Requested via PM

Column setup

| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |

General

1. Song Setup :
   
   1. Metadata : Sepertinya sih ga ada masalah disini, so, Clear
   2. Other : Widescreen Supportnya tolong dihilangkan, sudah tau kan kenapa?
2. Music and background :
   
   1. Music : Clear
   2. Background : Resolusinya harusnya kalau nggak 1024x768 ya 1366x768. Coba di cek nanti
3. Timing :
   
   1. Kiai : Clear
   2. Audio preview point : Ini sih seharusnya disini 01:58:169 - , tapi terserah lah awalnya emang bermaksud buat disitu, itu dibuat lebih awal biar kedengar suara pas di timing yang kamu berikan
   3. BPM and offset : Clear

Warning

This mod mostly contain suggestion, so feel free to reject it with the reason

LumiNous

SPOILER

1. OD+0,5 / HP & OD = 8.7 yes!!!! HP 8,7 OD 8,5
2. 00:10:755 - 00:11:100 - Ini serius 1/6, so harap di re-adjust atau diapain lah biar lebih enak lagi xd udah muter bagian ini dengan playback 25% selama 20 kali dan masih bingung dimana 1/6 nya o_o
3. 00:11:100 (11100|4,11186|2,11272|1,11358|6,11358|0,11445|5) - A bit over. Sebenarnya sih nggak terlalu bermasalah, tapi di samping terlalu maksa, aneh juga. aku ganti semuanya ya owo/
4. 00:11:617 (11617|5,11617|6,11617|0,11617|1) - Salah satu double disini seharusnya jadi LN, dimana synthnya lebih kerasa daripada 00:11:789 (11789|4,11789|2) -
   
   1. 00:11:789 (11789|2,11789|4) - Jadiin normal note
   2. 00:11:962 - Tambah satu note di 4 buat clap
5. 00:12:479 (12479|2,12479|4) - Pindah ke | 2 6 |
   
   1. 00:12:565 (12565|3) - Pindah ke 3 dan tambah note di 5. Ini karena kicknya kedengarangan jelas disini, sama kaya sebelumnya.
6. 00:12:651 (12651|5,12651|0,12651|1,12651|6,12824|0,12824|6,12824|1,12824|5,12996|0,12996|1,12996|6,12996|5,13169|1,13169|5,13169|0,13169|6) - Aku yakin ini sebenarnya suaranya beda, tapi berhubung daripada nyusahin, jadi ga masalah sih udah aku ganti sesuai pitch owo/
7. 00:13:427 (13427|1,13427|5) - Bisa dipanjangin sampai 00:13:686 - ? Jelas loh itu crash baru berhenti disitu
8. 00:14:117 - Tambah single terserah dimana yang pas untuk pitchnya
9. 00:14:548 - Tambah note di 1 buat pianonya yang cukup keras
10. 00:15:841 (15841|2,15841|0,15927|4) - Alangkah baiknya mungkin ini digeser ke kanan satu kolom, ini dikarenakan suara pianonya terdengar jelas berbeda dari 00:15:151 (15151|2,15151|0,15238|4) -
11. 00:16:531 - Double harusnya disini, bukan 00:16:617 - .
    
    1. 00:16:272 (16272|6,16358|4,16445|2,16531|0) - Bagian ini sebenarnya kurang cocok juga disini
12. 00:17:307 - Tambah note di 6 buat pianonya
    
    1. 00:17:565 - Kalau ini di 2
13. 00:18:945 (18945|5,18945|1) - Pendekin sampai 00:19:031 - aja, soalnya emang berhenti disitu berhubung LN nya jadi jelek, lebih baik tak ganti ke circle
    
    1. 00:19:807 (19807|2,19807|4) - Ini juga pendekin jadi 1/4, trus mungkin tambah note di 00:19:979 -
    ^
14. 00:21:617 - dan 00:21:703 - Aku denger ada sesuatu suara disini, tapi aku tau ini on-purpose untuk tidak diisi yah si AL malah suruh isi =w=
15. 00:22:824 (22824|3,22939|1,23054|3,23169|5) - Entah kenapa bagian ini cukup aneh, dimana kick untuk 00:22:996 - dan 00:23:082 - lebih dominan itu untuk 1/3 piano kok o_o
16. 00:23:169 (23169|5,23169|6,23169|4,23169|0,23169|2) - Menurutku sih, ini LN harusnya hanya 3 aja karena suaranya lebih pelan dari 00:22:738 (22738|2,22738|0,22738|6,22738|4) - dan buat 00:23:513 - agar bisa dapet 5 notes.
    
    1. 00:23:513 - Suara disini butuh lebih banyak notes, crashnya cukup keras
17. 00:23:686 (23686|4,23686|6,23686|0,23686|2,23772|6,23772|0,23772|2,23772|4) - Triple enough. Taruh di | 2 4 6 | aja
18. 00:24:203 - Ini kurang satu note untuk snarenya, jadi bisa dijadikan ke | 1 3 5 7 |
19. 00:25:582 - Tambah note untuk 3 dan 7 atau cuma 7 aja, kicknya kelupaan
    
    1. 00:25:841 - Tambah note di 6 untuk kick
20. 00:27:307 - Disini tak ada snare sama sekali, so hapus salah satu note di 00:27:307 (27307|6,27307|5) -
21. 00:36:789 - Missing kick, tambah note di 4
    
    1. 00:37:048 (37048|4,37048|2) - Ini seharusnya dimulai dari 00:37:091 -
    2. 00:38:341 - Missing synth, tambah LN 1/2 di 4
    berhubungan pattern jelek, jadi aku add circle aja :>
22. 00:48:513 (48513|2,48686|4,48772|5) - Disatuin aja jadi 1/1 LN
23. 00:52:048 (52048|4) - Hapus, kurang denger suara yang ditujukan
24. 00:53:341 (53341|5) - Pindah ke 7
25. 00:53:858 - Tambah note untuk pianonya
26. 00:55:927 (55927|4,55927|1) - Pindah ke (1/8) 1/6 00:55:970 - dan tambah note baru di 00:55:927 -
27. 00:58:772 - Missing piano
28. 00:59:720 (59720|1) - Pindah ke 3 untuk pitch
29. 01:05:841 - Tambah note lain
30. 01:07:134 (67134|1,67134|2,67134|0) - Harusnya (1/8), yaitu di 01:07:177 - this is a tricky, but now i use1/12 for the start slider and 1/4 in end slider
31. 01:07:479 (67479|5,67479|6) - Harusnya mulai dari 01:07:422 - (1/6)
32. 01:08:169 - Tambah note lain untuk snare
    
    1. 01:16:962 - ^
33. 01:26:789 (86789|2) - Ga ada suara penopang untuk ini
34. 01:27:048 - Tambah note untuk pianonya
35. 01:32:996 (92996|1) - Pindah ke 4 untuk menghindari jack
    
    1. 01:33:686 (93686|3) - Pindah ke 5 ^
36. 01:35:410 (95410|1) - Pindah ke 3
37. 01:50:927 (110927|2,111013|4) - Ga ada suara yang menopang untuk ini, beda sama 01:51:100 (111100|1,111186|5,111272|0,111358|6,111445|1) -
38. 01:54:548 (114548|0,114548|4,114548|1,114548|6,114548|5) - Kenapa 5? 3 atau 4 aja udah cukup, nggak ada crashnya soalnya
39. 02:07:479 (127479|2,127479|4) - Harusnya berhenti di 02:07:651 -
    
    1. 02:18:513 (138513|0,138513|6) - Harusnya berhenti di 02:18:686 -
40. 02:17:134 - Butuh note lagi untuk crashnya
41. 02:26:445 (146445|4,146445|0,146488|5,146488|1,146531|6,146531|2,146574|1,146574|5,146617|4,146617|0) - Sebenarnya ini lebih dari 1/8, tapi lebih baik cuma dikasih 1/4 biasa untuk kicknya yang dominan

sebenarnya ini lebih dari 1/8, tapi lebih baik 1/8 eh (?)

mod yang ga di reply berarti sudah di fixed, dan ini mod terbaik bagiku di thread ini, makasih atas waktunya owo/

Yojimbo's White Another

SPOILER

1. OD=HP
2. 00:04:203 (4203|4,4893|5,5755|6) - Untuk pitch, aku saranin sih ini digeser satu kolom ke kiri.
   
   1. 00:06:789 (6789|3) - Karena ini pitch tertinggi, so taruh di 7
3. 00:14:117 - Missing piano
4. 00:16:531 - Tambah satu note untuk pianonya
   
   1. 00:16:617 (16617|3) - Hapus ini karena suara yang diikuti kurang jelas terdengar
   2. 00:17:565 - Tambah note untuk piano, kalau bisa di-arrange ulang
5. 00:18:945 (18945|1) - Mungkin kalau di 1 lebih enak
6. 00:19:203 (19203|5,19203|3,19720|3,19720|5) - Suaranya beda, lebih kecil 00:19:720 (19720|5,19720|3) - , jadi hapus salah satu note disitu
7. 00:19:634 - Missing piano
8. 00:19:807 - Disini harusnya double (tambah satu note untuk piano)
9. 00:21:445 (21445|4) - Ini pitch nggak cocok di 5, mungkin di 2 atau 1
10. 00:21:660 - Missing piano
    
    1. 00:21:746 - ^
11. 00:24:376 - 00:24:893 - Jelas 1/8, coba cek LumiNous
12. 00:29:893 (29893|3) - Ini lebih pas di 00:29:936 - (1/8), dan kasih soft-hitfinish
13. 00:32:910 - Tambah note untuk piano
    
    1. 00:32:953 - ^
14. 00:34:117 - Ada snare kecil disini, boleh lah ditambah note
15. 00:35:539 - Tambah note untuk piano?
16. 00:37:048 (37048|5,37048|2) - Ini lebih pas terdengar di 00:37:091 - (1/8)
17. 00:39:548 (39548|6,39807|1) - Aku kurang mendenger sound yang diikuti, jadi bisa dihapus aja
18. 00:41:617 - Ini cukup keras, jadi ditambah satu note mungkin tidak masalah
19. 00:42:479 - 00:42:824 - Disini jarak waktu ini, semua terdengar ada 1/3
20. 00:43:600 (43600|2,43686|2) - Ini suaranya jelas berbeda, 00:43:686 (43686|2) - pindah ini ke kolom 5 / 6
21. 00:45:151 - Tambah note disini dan kasih soft-hitfinish
22. 00:46:100 - 00:46:445 - Ada piano disetiap 1/4 beat
    
    1. 00:46:445 - 00:46:789 - Ada snare kecil di setiap 1/4
23. 00:49:807 - Missed piano
24. 00:55:927 (55927|5,55927|2) - Aku rasa ini dimulai di 00:55:970 -
25. 00:59:031 (59031|1,59031|3,59031|5) - Triple untuk apa?
26. 01:06:057 - Tambah double untuk pianonya
    
    1. 01:11:272 - Tambah note snare kecil
    2. 01:11:531 - 01:11:703 - Harusnya dikasih note tambahan, soalnya disini 01:12:048 (72048|2,72048|5) - double, padahal rhythmnya sama
    3. 01:14:548 - Tambah note untuk (?)
    4. 01:19:720 - 01:19:893 - Tambah note untuk snare
27. 01:20:841 (80841|1,80927|5,81100|4,81186|3) - Hapus, kurang terdengar rhythmnya
28. 01:25:238 - Missed snare, tapi di 01:25:755 - ada
29. 01:24:548 - 01:40:755 - Kenapa tiba-tiba jadi 1K+6K?
30. 01:41:445 - Tambah double untuk piano
31. 01:43:082 (103082|6,103082|4,103082|3,103082|0) - Sama sekali ga ada suara yang sesuai untuk quad notes, double lebih baik
32. 01:45:582 - 01:45:669 - Punya suara yang sama, jadi usahakan notenya juga sama
33. 01:48:772 (108772|1,108772|4) - Nggak ada suara yang bisa diikutin
    
    1. 01:51:531 (111531|5,111703|3) - ^
34. 01:52:134 - Snarenya kurang, tambah note jadi double aja
    
    1. 01:52:479 - ^
35. 01:54:634 - Missed piano
    
    1. 01:55:669 - ^
36. 01:57:134 - Harusnya snare disini juga dikasih double, masa cuma 01:56:962 - ?
37. 02:06:488 (126488|2,126574|1) - Seharusnya nggak ada ini
38. 02:10:755 - 02:10:927 - 1/8
39. 02:26:703 - Missed snare
    Kerasa disini banyak ghost note

LordRaika's Another

SPOILER

1. 00:24:117 (24117|5,24117|2,24117|0,24203|6,24203|4,24203|1) - Ctrl + H, karena suaranya beda-beda, jadi lebih baik dikasih variasi
2. 00:24:376 (24376|6,24462|5,24548|4,24634|3,24720|2,24807|1) - Sebenarnya terlalu aneh bagi 1/8 kalau dikasih LN seperti ini, jadi alangkah baiknya cuma dikasih 1/8 note biasa
3. 00:25:927 - Crashnya diabaikan?
   
   1. 00:26:100 (26100|2,26100|4,26186|1,26186|5) - Padahal di sini ga ada suara apapun, yang ada malah di 00:26:143 -
4. 00:26:272 - Tambah note untuk crashnya
5. 00:27:048 (27048|2,27048|0) - Nggak ada note disini seharusnya, meskipun pakai hitsound. 00:27:134 - Disini seharusnya dikasih note tambahan karena keras suaranya.
6. 00:29:289 - Dikasih single aja, jangan double
7. 00:33:169 - 00:33:513 - Setiap 1/4 beat ada piano
8. 00:35:065 (35065|0) - Pendekin jadi 1/2 LN aja, karena emang berhenti disitu
9. 00:36:100 (36100|1,36143|2,36186|3,36229|4,36272|5) - Cuma 1/4 sebenarnya
10. 00:37:134 (37134|1) - Dihapus aja, karena nggak ada yang bisa diikutin
11. 00:42:048 - Missing piano
    
    1. 00:45:582 - Tambah note untuk pianonya
12. 00:46:100 (46100|1,46100|5) - Ini berhenti di 00:46:272 -
13. 00:48:858 (48858|4,48945|2,49031|4,49117|2,49203|4,49289|2,49376|4,49462|2,49548|4,49634|2) - Suaranya beda-beda, nggak full 1/4, coba cek Yojimbo
14. 01:22:307 - Tambah double untuk pianonya
15. 01:24:031 (84031|1,84031|5) - Ini seharusnya berhenti di 01:24:203 -
16. 01:40:755 - 01:45:927 - Kenapa nggak pakai permainan LN kaya sebelumnya?
17. 01:52:565 - Ini harusnya triple, karena pianonya itu
    
    1. 01:52:824 (112824|5,112824|3,112824|6,112824|1) - Ini kenapa quad notes?
18. 01:56:789 - 01:57:307 - Harusnya juga 1/8
19. 02:03:901 - Tambah 1/2 LN disini untuk synth, mungkin, karena optional
20. 02:07:479 (127479|6,127479|2) - Ini seharusnya berhenti di 02:07:651 -
21. 02:08:427 (128427|6,128470|5,128513|4,128557|3,128600|2,128643|1,128686|0) - 1/8? Disini cuma 1/4 biasa
22. 02:08:772 - Missing piano
23. 02:09:462 (129462|5,129462|1) - Ini sebenarnya ada di 02:09:505 -
24. 02:11:100 (131100|3,131186|5,131272|2,131358|4,131445|1,131531|3) - Nggak murni 1/4 semua
25. 02:13:169 (133169|5,133427|4) - Jadikan LN saja
26. 02:14:376 - Missing piano
    
    1. 02:14:462 - ^
27. 02:18:686 (138686|1,138686|5) - Nggak ada suara disini
28. 02:20:238 - Missing snare, tambah triple mungkin
29. 02:26:100 (146100|2,146100|4,146100|0,146100|5,146100|6,146100|1) - Ini bukan crash, nggak ada suara yang loud, tapi 6-notes. Triple bahkan sudah cukup untuk ini, quad juga nggak masalah sih
30. 02:26:617 - 02:26:962 - Cuma diisi 1/4 beat saja, nggak ada 1/8
31. 02:30:065 - 02:30:410 - Kosong, dan kurang enak. Coba diatur ulang

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Okay, xi. Thanks udah ngemap lagu ini. Dari tiga diff 'Another' disini, sebenarnya semua bervariasi dan kreatif, tapi terkadang ada masih banyak ghost note, Trus, terkadang suara seperti ini dapet triple dan suara yang sama lainnya dapet 2 / 1. Memang sih nggak masalah, tapi masa gitu? Di ketiga diff ini aku cukup sering lihat ada note yang kurang sinkron dengan musiknya. Coba kalian lakukan cek ulang dengan playback 25%-50%. Aku tau kalian sudah menggunakan playback segitu untuk ngemap, tapi aku harap kalian bisa membuat diff kalian lebih perfect dari sebelumnya, karena kalian bisa. Good luck guys~

ArcherLove wrote:

7K LordRaika

00:53:169 - need to adding note here (for piano chord)
added >w<

00:53:427 - add note piano
Nope, there is LN for that , 1 note for percussion

01:59:203 - add note for piano chord
01:59:548 - ^
ok >w<

7K Column:
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |

Blocko wrote:

[Yojimbo's Another]
unagi // bloco

00:04:203 (4203|4,4893|5,5755|6) - Move 1 column to the left, then 00:06:789 (6789|3) - move to 7 to correctly highlight the pitch here // asfg i forgot i modified this abit earlier.. ok fixed
00:10:755 (10755|2,10812|3,10870|4) - Move 1 column to the left for hand balance // ==a but... hue.. ok then
00:13:686 - Add a note here, preferably on 4, to emphasize the big impact here // ok
00:17:996 (17996|6) - Hmm.. Move this note to 4 to differentiate the hi-hat and the piano here? // keep, same impact imo =w=
00:18:255 (18255|5) - Move to 1 for the piano // ==a rearranged instead
00:19:548 - Missed a piano note here. // i don't really like to layer not-really-loud cue sound.. but added.. i hear 2 cue sound
00:19:634 - Here, too // ^
00:26:272 - Add a note or 2 notes here for bigger impact with the crash, and to fix chord inconsistency based on intensity. // ok
00:36:100 (36100|3,36143|2,36186|1) - Move 1 column to the left for hand balance. // i haven't told you, this is 6+1K.. ==a keep
00:37:824 to 00:39:031 - This particular section has 3-chords, but this section (00:26:789 to 00:27:479) have 4-chords on them. Try fixing the chord inconsistency here by adding notes, or removing some on the previous section. // ==a ok, actually i tries to make even an odd by making different chords amount.. but since you mentioned this.. ok then
00:41:574 (41574|2,41617|3) - Ctrl + J for a full-left hand chord here. // ==a keep
00:47:134 (47134|6) - No actual sound at that part. Move it down to 00:47:048 - so the whole chord is intense, and makes the rest of this section easier to do. // dafonz it's moved from it's place.. ;; ok thanks for noticing
00:47:220 (47220|5) - What's this note for? // ==a idk.. removed
00:47:565 (47565|5,47651|6) - Ctrl + J for pitch // ==a ok
00:47:910 - Add a note here to emphasize the strength of the instruments // ok
00:48:169 - Same suggestion as above // ok
00:50:410 (50410|5,50467|2) - Move these notes to 7 and 6, respectively, for a complete piano keyboard sweep. // eeh ok.. O.o
01:01:789 to 01:02:134 - How about this pattern? It has easier readability and playability while keeping its intensity intact. // heheh, got something more simpler.. rearranged
01:02:824 (62824|5,62824|2,63082|1,63082|4) - Ctrl + H for pitch relevancy // ;w; ok
01:04:548 (64548|5,64634|4,64720|3,64807|2) - Should be in 1/3 beat with the piano // ok
01:18:513 to 01:19:031 - I recommend this pattern for this part. It's better to read and play, and looks nice. // ==a but hue.. ok then (rearranged by my own)
01:20:410 (80410|5,80496|3,80582|4,80669|2) - You could do an ascending double stream here since the instrument is strong in this one. // ok
01:24:548 - Add a note at 7 to complete the symmetrical chord // added on 4 instead
01:24:548 to 01:46:272 - This section felt like it's 6K + 1 instead of the usual 7K because the 1st column is rarely used for this part. Try rearranging the notes here so the 1st column is used more // it is 6+1K.. =_= keep
01:45:927 (105927|6,105927|3) - Move to 1 and 5, respectively, to prevent minijack to chord. // ^ 6+1K sake, and its ez to execute.. :^)
01:48:858 (108858|5,108945|6) - Move 1 column to the left to prevent minijack // i prefer mini jacks instead brackets... keep
01:54:203 (114203|0) - I don't think this note should be a big clap hitsound for the moment. // my bad, fixed.. =w=
01:55:238 (115238|5,115238|3) - Move 1 column to the left to prevent minijack, then 01:55:410 (115410|2) - move to 2 for better playability // ==a nerfed a bit, mostly keep
02:08:341 (128341|6) - Move to 4 to prevent minijack // ok
02:16:703 (136703|1) - Move to 3 for comfortability // ok
02:26:445 (146445|5,146488|3,146531|1,146574|5,146617|6) - Try this pattern to make this part easier to read and play. // mash (246)(246) twice, and you got the result.. :^)

Blocko wrote:

[LordRaika's Another]
oh hey raika wassup
^^/ yo blocko, seems fine and busy T^T

00:19:634 (19634|1,19720|0) - Ctrl + J, then move 00:19:807 (19807|1) - to 4 for the piano pitch.
00:20:238 (20238|1,20324|3,20410|5) - Ctrl + J for piano pitch. Doing that would make a < pattern, which would give out a better feedback for the player.
00:21:531 (21531|3,21617|4,21703|5,21789|6) - Ctrl + J for pitch?
00:41:617 (41617|1,41789|5) - Ctrl + J so it puts in a little alternating full hand trill. Also to remove an almost-minijack on the 2nd column
00:42:134 (42134|1,42134|5,42393|2,42393|6) - Ctrl + J for pitch
01:02:134 (62134|3) - Maybe add a cymbal hitsound here to accent the crash in the song

sure... all of that

00:28:341 to 00:30:410 - Somehow the patterns and LNs here felt like they're reversed in pitch compared to the song itself. Rearrange the patterns here so the LNs should match with the instrument pitch at this part for better feedback.

nooo, its pattern based variant that fits the play, not pitch based >w<

01:24:548 to 01:40:755 - Those LN walls. You don't see that much in here. I like how they add a feeling of uniqueness to the difficulty and the mapset, which is very nice!

Thanks >w<b i like this style too

01:43:341 (103341|5,103801|4,104261|3) - I don't get why these notes aren't snapped to the blue line, since on those lines, the notes in the song are executed at those lines. Snap these notes to the blue line with 1/4 beat snap divisor.

Actually 2 of them , hmm yes blue line, the first one is red 1/2 thou, fixed anyway

02:27:134 - Add a note here to increase the buildup for the ending.

errr no XD it seems already fits it like this >w<

Blocko wrote:

Here's the long-awaited mod from someone that forgot about this how the

[General]
OK! No problems here!

7K Column:
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |

[Beginner]
- I think OD6 is alright for this one. OD5 might be a bit too easy for this almost 2-star beginner map
- You might need to double-check for pitch relevancy here. Some patterns are mapped in a descending way while it's ascending in pitch based on the song, and vice versa.

00:11:100 (11100|1,11100|4,11617|1,11617|4,12134|5,12134|2) - Since there's no actual change in pitch, how about hammering these notes? It'll give better playability for the player since this is easy to read.
00:14:893 (14893|4,15151|1) - Ctrl + J for pitch relevancy
00:17:307 (17307|6,17565|5,17824|4) - Move 1 column to the left for better pattern flow
00:19:203 (19203|0) - End this LN at 00:19:807 - for better readability.
00:25:582 (25582|3,25841|2) - I think it'd be better to combine these two notes into one single LN to express the saxophone better.
00:29:720 (29720|4,29720|2,29979|1,29979|3,30238|0,30238|2) - Ctrl + J for pitch relevancy
00:32:048 (32048|2,32307|4,32651|2) - Ctrl + H for the pitch
00:37:824 (37824|0,38169|1,38513|2) - Ctrl + J, same reason as above
00:39:376 (39376|0,39376|3,39634|1,39634|4,39893|5,39893|2) - Ctrl + H for pitch
00:40:755 (40755|6,40755|4,41013|3,41013|1,41272|0,41272|2) - Ctrl + H, same reason
00:41:617 (41617|5,41617|1,41789|4,41789|2) - Ctrl + J, same reason
00:45:065 (45065|4,45410|2) - Ctrl + H, same reason
00:47:220 (47220|2,47393|4,47565|6) - Ctrl + J, same reason. It also puts a little grace note for the left hand for more variety.
01:06:962 (66962|3,66962|6) - Move 2 columns to the left for the pitch
01:17:134 (77134|5,77134|2,77307|1,77307|4,77651|4,77651|1) - Ctrl + H, pitch relevancy
01:31:789 (91789|0,92048|1,92307|2) - Ctrl + J, then move 01:32:479 (92479|0) - to 3 for pitch
01:37:307 (97307|6,97565|5,97824|0) - This should be in 1/3 beat since the kicks in the song are in 1/3.
01:38:945 - Add a note here to accent the prominent instrument
01:53:169 (113169|0,113169|2,113427|6,113427|4,113686|0,113686|2) - Ctrl + H, pitch relevancy
02:04:203 (124203|5,124462|3,124720|5) - Switch these notes around by column for pitch and to remove a little right-hand bias
02:05:841 - Add a note here for the kick emm.. no because this is the easiest so i don't want to make a little complicated pattern
02:14:031 (134031|6,134031|0,134203|5,134203|1) - Ctrl + J for pitch relevancy
02:16:876 - Add a note here for kick same as above

[Standard]
00:13:686 (13686|3) - This note could use 1 or 2 more notes to express a better impact
00:14:893 (14893|5,15151|1) - Ctrl + H for pitch
00:28:858 (28858|6,29031|4,29376|6) - Switch these around by column. It'll make a 'switch' from a symmetrical pattern to an alternating pattern
00:33:513 (33513|1) - If this note's the kick, I think you misplaced it. Move it down to 00:33:427 - for correct placement.
00:34:031 (34031|6) - Move to 5 for better playability
00:37:307 - Add a note here for better impact with the crash
00:40:755 (40755|6,40755|4,41013|5,41013|3) - Ctrl + H for pitch
00:46:962 - I think you missed a note here. no i don't wanna make this harder
00:47:565 - Here, too. well.. re-arrange the pattern, so i applied those mods now.
00:53:686 (53686|5,53858|3) - Ctrl + J for piano pitch relevancy
01:15:238 (75238|6,75755|4) - Switch these around by column for pitch
01:22:651 (82651|0) - Move to 6 for pitch
01:22:824 (82824|6,82824|1,83082|0,83082|4,83341|2,83341|6,83600|0,83600|5,83858|6,83858|3) - Ctrl + H. The patterns here should be in ascending pitch so it matches the pitch of the song.
01:31:789 (91789|0,92048|1,92307|2) - Ctrl + J, then move 01:32:479 (92479|0) - to 3 for pitch relevancy
01:34:376 - Add a note here for the kick and a better buildup
01:37:307 (97307|0,97565|1,97824|2) - Should be in 1/3 beat since kicks are in 1/3.
01:43:801 (103801|4,104318|5,105123|5) - Not sure why these notes aren't snapped to the blue line with 1/4 beat snap divisor. Resnap?
01:48:686 (108686|6) - Move to 5 for better playability
02:02:996 (122996|5,122996|1,123169|4,123169|2) - Ctrl + J for the pitch
02:05:927 (125927|3) - Misplaced note? If so, move that note down here 02:05:841 - for correct placement.
02:14:031 (134031|6,134031|0,134203|2,134203|4) - Ctrl + J, pitch relevancy
02:16:962 (136962|4) - Is this a misplaced note here?

[Hyper]
00:14:462 (14462|4) - There's no actual sound here to express this note. Either remove it, or move it to 00:14:548 - to emphasize the piano chord.
00:16:272 (16272|1,16358|5,16445|2,16531|4) - Ctrl + H so the highest pitch starts on the right hand
00:20:755 (20755|6,21272|4) - Ctrl + J for the pitch
00:26:617 (26617|4) - Move to 4 for a better pattern flow
00:27:996 (27996|6) - Move to 5, same reason as above
00:29:634 (29634|6,29720|5) - Ctrl + J for comfortability
00:35:065 (35065|6) - Move to 6, same reason as above
00:43:686 (43686|6) - Same suggestion as above
00:44:634 - Add a note at 6 for the sax
00:45:065 (45065|3) - Move to 3 for comfortability
00:54:778 (54778|3) - Move to 6 for the pitch
00:55:238 - Add a note at 5 to highlight the piano chord better
01:03:858 (63858|1,63858|3,64031|6,64031|4,64203|0,64289|2,64376|4,64462|6,64548|0,64548|2,64720|4) - Ctrl + H to accent the piano pitch along with the others
01:35:238 - Add a note here for bigger impact with the crash
01:37:307 (97307|0,97565|1,97824|2) - Should be in 1/3 beat, kicks are in 1/3.
01:43:513 (103513|6) - Move to 4. Though it breaks pitch relevancy, it'll be more comfortable and better to read and play. re-arrange the pattern for both comfortable and pitch
01:43:801 (103801|5,105123|5) - Not sure why these aren't snapped to the blue line with 1/4 beat snap. Resnap?
01:53:427 (113427|1,113427|5,113686|2,113686|4) - Ctrl + J for the pitch
01:58:686 - Add a note at 6 to accent the piano chord.
02:00:238 (120238|5,120324|4) - Ctrl + H for pitch
02:12:479 (132479|0) - Move to 2 for comfortability
02:17:134 (137134|2) - Same suggestion as above
02:17:134 (137134|4,137220|6,137307|3,137393|5) - It'd be better if these LNs were to be combined to one single LN. There're no notes that can accent these notes apart from the saxophone, which can be empasized correctly with just one LN. Actually i just started to confused with this options, but maybe you're right. Need to re-arrange the pattern after changed those LNs to single one.

[LordRaika's Another]
oh hey raika wassup

00:19:634 (19634|1,19720|0) - Ctrl + J, then move 00:19:807 (19807|1) - to 4 for the piano pitch.
00:20:238 (20238|1,20324|3,20410|5) - Ctrl + J for piano pitch. Doing that would make a < pattern, which would give out a better feedback for the player.
00:21:531 (21531|3,21617|4,21703|5,21789|6) - Ctrl + J for pitch?
00:28:341 to 00:30:410 - Somehow the patterns and LNs here felt like they're reversed in pitch compared to the song itself. Rearrange the patterns here so the LNs should match with the instrument pitch at this part for better feedback.
00:41:617 (41617|1,41789|5) - Ctrl + J so it puts in a little alternating full hand trill. Also to remove an almost-minijack on the 2nd column
00:42:134 (42134|1,42134|5,42393|2,42393|6) - Ctrl + J for pitch
01:02:134 (62134|3) - Maybe add a cymbal hitsound here to accent the crash in the song
01:24:548 to 01:40:755 - Those LN walls. You don't see that much in here. I like how they add a feeling of uniqueness to the difficulty and the mapset, which is very nice!
01:43:341 (103341|5,103801|4,104261|3) - I don't get why these notes aren't snapped to the blue line, since on those lines, the notes in the song are executed at those lines. Snap these notes to the blue line with 1/4 beat snap divisor.
02:27:134 - Add a note here to increase the buildup for the ending.

[Yojimbo's Another]
unagi

00:04:203 (4203|4,4893|5,5755|6) - Move 1 column to the left, then 00:06:789 (6789|3) - move to 7 to correctly highlight the pitch here
00:10:755 (10755|2,10812|3,10870|4) - Move 1 column to the left for hand balance
00:13:686 - Add a note here, preferably on 4, to emphasize the big impact here
00:17:996 (17996|6) - Hmm.. Move this note to 4 to differentiate the hi-hat and the piano here?
00:18:255 (18255|5) - Move to 1 for the piano
00:19:548 - Missed a piano note here.
00:19:634 - Here, too
00:26:272 - Add a note or 2 notes here for bigger impact with the crash, and to fix chord inconsistency based on intensity.
00:36:100 (36100|3,36143|2,36186|1) - Move 1 column to the left for hand balance.
00:37:824 to 00:39:031 - This particular section has 3-chords, but this section (00:26:789 to 00:27:479) have 4-chords on them. Try fixing the chord inconsistency here by adding notes, or removing some on the previous section.
00:41:574 (41574|2,41617|3) - Ctrl + J for a full-left hand chord here.
00:47:134 (47134|6) - No actual sound at that part. Move it down to 00:47:048 - so the whole chord is intense, and makes the rest of this section easier to do.
00:47:220 (47220|5) - What's this note for?
00:47:565 (47565|5,47651|6) - Ctrl + J for pitch
00:47:910 - Add a note here to emphasize the strength of the instruments
00:48:169 - Same suggestion as above
00:50:410 (50410|5,50467|2) - Move these notes to 7 and 6, respectively, for a complete piano keyboard sweep.
01:01:789 to 01:02:134 - How about this pattern? It has easier readability and playability while keeping its intensity intact.
01:02:824 (62824|5,62824|2,63082|1,63082|4) - Ctrl + H for pitch relevancy
01:04:548 (64548|5,64634|4,64720|3,64807|2) - Should be in 1/3 beat with the piano
01:18:513 to 01:19:031 - I recommend this pattern for this part. It's better to read and play, and looks nice.
01:20:410 (80410|5,80496|3,80582|4,80669|2) - You could do an ascending double stream here since the instrument is strong in this one.
01:24:548 - Add a note at 7 to complete the symmetrical chord.
01:24:548 to 01:46:272 - This section felt like it's 6K + 1 instead of the usual 7K because the 1st column is rarely used for this part. Try rearranging the notes here so the 1st column is used more
01:45:927 (105927|6,105927|3) - Move to 1 and 5, respectively, to prevent minijack to chord.
01:48:858 (108858|5,108945|6) - Move 1 column to the left to prevent minijack
01:54:203 (114203|0) - I don't think this note should be a big clap hitsound for the moment.
01:55:238 (115238|5,115238|3) - Move 1 column to the left to prevent minijack, then 01:55:410 (115410|2) - move to 2 for better playability
02:08:341 (128341|6) - Move to 4 to prevent minijack
02:16:703 (136703|1) - Move to 3 for comfortability
02:26:445 (146445|5,146488|3,146531|1,146574|5,146617|6) - Try this pattern to make this part easier to read and play.

[LumiNous]
so much noodles

00:20:755 (20755|6,20755|0,21013|1,21013|5,21272|2,21272|4) - How about reversing the order of LNs here to match the pitch? It'd play better if the LNs were to go farther away from the center column than closer to it.
00:28:169 (28169|6,28212|5) - Move 1 column to the left for better readability
00:49:893 to 00:51:100 - I recommend using 1/6 beats in this part instead of 1/4 since the piano notes are in 1/6. Use a descending pitch here, too, for the best effect.
01:24:203 to 01:24:548 - Add more notes to this section to remove the empty feel in this part.
01:31:617 (91617|2) - Move to 2 for better pattern flow
01:36:186 (96186|3) - There's no actual pitch change to emphasize this note. Delete? changed to circle instead
01:37:307 (97307|2,97565|1,97565|0,97565|6,97824|6,97824|0,97824|2) - Should be in 1/3 beat
01:39:088 (99088|2) - Snap to 1/3
01:58:686 - Add 1 or 2 notes here for the piano chord
01:59:548 (119548|4,119548|2,119720|3,119720|5,119893|4,119893|6) - Ctrl + H for piano pitch relevancy
02:00:238 (120238|5,120238|3,120410|0,120410|2) - Ctrl + J for pitch
02:02:651 - You could add an LN at 4 ending at 02:02:824 - to represent as a drum roll to the kiai
02:13:945 (133945|3,133988|4) - Move 1 column to the left for a connected burst

That actually took awhile. I'm sorry that I forgot about posting this right after you applied the other mods.
As always, good luck on rank!

Rayz141 wrote:

just wanna be sure..

mapset 5 diff 7K n 1 diff 6+1K rankable?

ndak ada maksud apa-apa ._.b

Paulmrm wrote:

[LordRaika's Another]
00:22:393 - Add a note here for the drums. (in case you're mapping the piano here with these notes, ignore)
00:23:513 - This pattern is more comfortable to play and read imo: bzzzt
00:37:220 (37220|1) - Move this to 6. I don't know why i'm making this suggestion to be honest, but I really feel like this note should be there while test playing :p

sure, some of them i rearrange them

00:49:634 (49634|2) - Should be an LN. I understand you want to express the end of the long hold note here, but it feels weird considering this is still expressing the same sound.

no, ^^ comfortable to be play is my priority...

00:58:686 - Really suggest you to turn this into a grace note.
00:59:893 - Add a note here for the drums.
01:01:272 - ^
01:01:617 - ^

Sure

01:01:789 - I suggest you to change this pattern to something more linear. For the skill level this diff is going for, this might be pretty confusing to hit accurately at a sightread.

nope, this burst is still easy , stairs is too common so nooo

01:24:548 - I both love and hate you for this part. Love you because we need more maps that do that, hate you because i'm absolutely terrible at playing it qq

hahahaha XD thanks..... dont worry .... actually you will get used to it since its quite easy to be play ^^ ( err maybe because i made it, so i kind a memorize it and know what to do bout it )


01:47:479 - Should be on 35 for pitch. Or at least be on a different column than the last chord. You'll probably need to rearrange things a bit to apply this pattern.
01:50:238 - ^
01:52:996 - ^

Sure, rearrange some pattern there

01:48:945 - Add a note here.

Nope

01:56:789 - Tricky to play, would be a combo breaker to many. I recommend using a lower snap or making it an actual stair/broken stair.

errr XD actually i make it like that because its still easy OwO
again, stairs is too common things XD this one is like skipping stairs but still stairs type which is easy

02:17:824 - Make these LNs
Sure

Paulmrm wrote:

[Yojimbo's Racist Another]
Buzzagi don't use clever names to hide yourself. // asdf how2hide
00:21:272 - I'd rearrange to this: bzzut // ==a what?
00:33:341 (33341|6) - Move to 5 // ok
00:30:927 - Not sure if you want to give emphasis to the drums or the instruments, but you should use 1/6 here if it's the second. // ok then
00:58:686 - Kinda mad you're doing grace notes in this section but didn't at the start. Go add some grace notes at the start in case it wasn't intentional boiy. // intentional, and keep
01:41:445 - Missing note here // if i could add LN.. :^) keep
01:43:513 - The fact you're just mapping drums is not an excuse to leave this place empty usaguu~~!!! // o_O it's ok to focus percussion, since the synthesizer beat is not really enjoyable.. keep
01:47:220 - Not the same pitch here. Shouldn't jack. // keep
01:49:979 - ^ // ;w; keep
01:52:738 - ^ // keep, trying to even something odd..
01:49:203 - Missing note here // added
02:04:031 (124031|0,124031|2,124031|6) - This chord should be the same as 02:03:513 - // :I ok
02:07:996 - grace notes!111!!1!11! // !!11!!oneoneone!
02:20:755 - nice jack theory // you are lookin nice tho.. :u

Paulmrm wrote:

Yo paul here o/
Time to mod some stuff

1|2|3|4|5|6|7

[Beginner]
00:22:134 (22134|4,22738|3,23169|2) - Ctrl+H for pitch revelancy.
00:23:513 - Rhythm is a bit weird here. I think this would express things better: [urlhttp://puu.sh/fi1pv/73f258cf24.png]boop[/url]
00:33:513 - I think placing the note on 00:33:427 - would be better considering the song has both a kick, a note in piano, and the highest pitch in that section of the main melody here. It's also easier to follow, considering it's right in the middle of both chords.
00:47:048 - It feels weird to play this considering you didn't add a note here, but did on 00:47:565 - . Add a note here or delete on of the notes in 00:47:565 - for consistency
00:53:169 (53169|4) - Move to 6 or 7 for pitch. Shouldn't jack with the last note.
00:59:376 (59376|3,59720|5,60065|2,60410|4,60755|1,61100|3,61445|0) - Ctrl+H for pitch.
01:20:065 (80065|6,80065|3,80238|5,80238|2) - Same pitch. Use the same columns for these chords.
01:23:341 (83341|2,83600|4) - Move to 2 and 6.
01:47:910 (107910|6,107910|0) - Move to 3 and 5 so they don't jack with the last chord. (different pitches)
01:56:100 (116100|2) - Move to 01:56:186 - for the same reason as 00:23:513 -
02:27:479 - Add a note to 5 for emphasis. Just a suggestion.

almost fixed all. some mods may be already fixed by previous modder, or maybe you accidentally put a wrong timing

[Standard]
00:12:996 (12996|1,12996|5,13169|2,13169|4) - You could just move these to 1 and 7 considering it's the same pitch. It'll be harder to play but easier to read.
00:44:548 (44548|4) - Same as Beginner.
00:47:393 - You forgot a note here. where ? o_O
00:47:910 (47910|2,48169|2) - Move to 5
00:48:513 (48513|4) - Move to 4 in case you do the suggestion above.
01:28:169 - Add a note here so you have something other than the LN end to express the melody.
01:29:548 - ^
01:47:910 (107910|5,107910|0) - Move to 2 and 7
01:50:669 (110669|6,110669|0) - Move to 2 and 6
01:58:427 (118427|0,118513|4) - Move these to 5 and 7. Expresses pitch better.
02:02:134 (122134|4,122393|1,122651|5) - Descending melody here. Express it in another way like 5 4 3 or 6 4 2
02:03:513 (123513|4,123513|0,123772|1,123772|5,124031|6,124031|2) - Ctrl+H for pitch.
02:04:203 (124203|4,124462|3,124720|2) - ^ I recommend you move the jacks in column 1 to 7 so it doesn't jack with the previous melody.
02:07:824 (127824|0,127824|4) - Move to 2 and 4 or 2 and 6. As long as it doesn't jack with the other columns it should be ok.
02:09:031 (129031|2) - Lower pitch. Move to 2.

some mods may be already fixed by previous modder, but all of your mods here was fixed

[Hyper]
00:13:169 (13169|0,13169|6) - Move these to 2 and 6, same pitch as the other chords.
00:16:962 (16962|5) - Move to 7
00:31:100 (31100|1,31358|3,31617|5) - It's actually descending pitch. Rearrange this section.
00:41:789 (41789|0,41789|2) - Move to 2 and 4
00:56:186 (56186|1) - Move to 5 or 4.
00:58:686 (58686|3,58686|5) - You should make a grace note with this chord here. Adds expressiveness to the map.
01:06:617 (66617|4,66617|6) - Move to 1 and 3. Same pitch
01:06:789 (66789|1,66876|2,66962|3) - Ctrl+H for hand balance in case you do the suggestion above.
01:23:772 - You should add a note here for consistency. Yes, it'll make this section harder, but it feels weird to not have this note there, it breaks the rhythm and flow of the map.
01:43:743 (103743|5) - Move to 4
01:50:669 (110669|6,110669|0) - Move to 3 and 5.
02:03:169 (123169|0,123169|6) - ^
02:14:203 (134203|6,134203|4) - move to 4 and 6
02:16:013 - suggestion to add an LN here

almost all in this diff fixed. i also re-arrange some patterns to more feel better play

[LumiNous]
Mill pls your noodles are already hard enough. OD8,5 feels really tough for it. Change to 8. ok, i also feel the same like you too
00:16:531 - You might want to give more emphasis here since it's where the chord happens in the music. 00:16:617 - just has a really weak drum noise. Listen to it in 25% actually Ichigaki already mentioned it, but because a bad pattern so i made it like the first i mapped it. Okay, i had a ide a to keep this pattern better, re-arrange
00:39:376 - Oh come one. At least makes the chords a bit different from each other here, since they are of different pitch. Not only that but that's also a bit too easy for what you've done so far in this diff xp i think the difficulties in the one that you mentioned was a same hard as the other patterns. But well.. re-arrange according the pitch relevancy
01:44:031 (104031|2) - Should be a higher pitch than the earlier LN. I recommend rearranging things here. oh sorry, i didn't mention it. fixed included the next pattern
02:06:013 - Missing note for the melody here. Add LN ok
02:11:531 - You should really consider rearranging or removing some notes here to make space for you to continue the melody. Suddenly stopping to map a certain layer feels weird when playing. done. delete some circles that may be the one you mentioned
nice /o/

That'll be it. Good stuff!

git this thing ranked soon mill~~

pporse wrote:

Hi RC :3

xi is GOD xD !!

i love this map ;w; go to ranked !!

this map almost does not have issue :3
so i'll focus on 'suited of pattern' & 'comfort of hands'

column set
1 2 3 4 5 6 7

Go!

[Beginner]
01:55:927 - add note on 6th or 7th column
there has loud sound

01:58:427 (118427|0) - move to 5th column
01:58:513 (118513|4) - move to 6th column
too spread.. this pattern can be difficult for beginners
they're yet dizzy when find key line @.@
so as possible it is better that don't spread notes in Beginner Diff i don't think so, just let it be as a challenging diff (?)

01:59:720 - add note on 3rd column
i recommend that add note in there :3


[Standard]
00:12:996 (12996|1,13169|2) - move to 1st column
00:12:996 (12996|5,13169|4) - move th 7th column
umm..actually they're same sound with 00:12:651 (12651|0,12651|6,12824|6,12824|0) -
so i think it is better to set same key line :3 (if it was ur intention, plz ignore this xD) already changed in previous mods

00:36:186 (36186|0) - move to 4th or 5th column and change to 3/4 LN
this spot needs to 3/4 LN

00:44:548 (44548|4) - move to 00:44:462 -
actually when i play this diff, this note was awkward.
i want that you use drumbass sound at 00:44:462 - :3 already changed in previous mods

00:45:410 (45410|2) - move to 6th column
00:45:582 (45582|0,45582|6) - Ctrl+H
for pitch

02:18:513 (138513|6) - change to normal note or 1/2 LN
02:19:031 - add 1/1 LN on 6th column
02:19:203 (139203|2) - move to 7th column
i think that 02:18:513 (138513|6) is too long compared to the sound ww changed to circles
and it needs LN in there at 02:19:031

02:19:376 (139376|0) - move to 3rd column
02:19:462 (139462|5) - move to 4th column
for hand balance move to 5th column

02:19:634 (139634|1) - move to 3rd column
02:19:462 (139462|5) - move to 02:19:807 - misplaced?
02:19:979 (139979|6) - move to 3rd column
they're same sound. so set same key line

02:24:893 (144893|1,145008|2,145123|3,145353|0,145467|1,145582|2,145841|2) -
to be honest when i played this diff, this section was really awkward T^T
stair pattern is not suited in there.
how about this?
i know it's a great, but i don't wanna put jacks in here, it's too hard even just 1/3 jacks T_T


[Hyper]
02:19:807 (139807|1,139807|4) - move one block to the right
02:19:979 (139979|0) - move to 3rd column

02:24:893 ~ 02:25:582 - same opinion with Standard diff
stair pattern is not suited in there. T^T
how about this?


02:27:479 (147479|2) - move to 5th column
this line is same with 02:27:307 (147307|6,147307|0,147307|2) -
but i think.. It need to be different with that :3

all unreplied mods means fixed all. Mostly mods in a beginner may be already modded and changed by previous modder

diff is so manyyyy lol

next time, i'll mod rest

and take my star xD

pporse wrote:

sry im late ;w;

no kudosu :3

column set
1 2 3 4 5 6 7

[Yojimbo's White Another]
00:32:910 (32910|5) - delete
00:32:881 - add note on 6th column (1/6 snap)
00:32:939 - add note on 5th column (1/6 snap)
sounds are located in 1/6 snap // there's only 1/4 sexophone here.. keep

00:43:858 (43858|4) - move to 7th column
00:43:945 (43945|6) - delete
00:43:916 - add note on 6th column (1/6 snap)
00:43:973 - add note on 5th column (1/6 snap)
sounds are located in 1/6 snap // ==a i believe it's 1/4.. keep

00:45:410 - add notes on 2nd, 6th column
i think...need more notes in there // oh sure. >:^)

00:49:893 (49893|6,49979|3,50065|5,50151|4,50238|2,50324|1) - misplaced?
00:49:893 (49893|6) - move to 00:49:950 - (1/6 snap)
00:49:979 (49979|3) - move to 00:50:008 - (1/6 snap)
00:50:151 (50151|4) - move to 00:50:180 - (1/6 snap)
00:50:295 - add note
00:50:324 (50324|1) - move to 00:50:353 - (1/6 snap) // some of them was 1/4.. i will ask another modder about the snapping.. thanks for noticing..

00:52:479 - add note on 1st column
00:53:169 - add note on 2nd column
i think need note in there // added

00:55:927 (55927|4,55970|5,56143|4,56186|3,56401|4,56445|5) - umm..i'm not sure it's suited in this part. // confirmed by ichigaki, yes
if u want to use this pattern,
00:55:970 (55970|2) - move to 00:55:927
need note in there // ok

01:10:065 - add note on 2nd column
there has drumbass sound. // only layer & emphasize the piano, keep

01:16:100 (76100|6,76143|2,76186|5,76229|1) - how about this?
// ok, flipped though

01:24:031 (84031|1) - delete
01:24:031 (84031|6) - move to 5th column
this line has 5 chord to same with 01:23:858 but sound accent is different.
i think need to reduce note in there :3 // ==a ok

02:24:893 (144893|4,144893|1) - move to right one block // nice, ok
02:24:893 (144893|1,144893|4,145008|4,145008|1,145123|1,145123|4) - it seems to 3 jack. but in fact, sound is just 2 jack.
so to avoid confusion, it need to move :3 // ok


good luck xD

pporse wrote:

sry im late ;w;

no kudosu :3

column set
1 2 3 4 5 6 7

Go!

[LordRaika's Another]
i found some issues :3

01:44:893 (104893|4) - misplaced
move to 01:44:807

02:20:927 (140927|3,141186|5) - umm....misplaced?
but i cannot find exact place... ;w;

that's all :3

i love this diff's LN pattern <3


[Yojimbo's White Another]
00:32:910 (32910|5) - delete
00:32:881 - add note on 6th column (1/6 snap)
00:32:939 - add note on 5th column (1/6 snap)
sounds are located in 1/6 snap

00:43:858 (43858|4) - move to 7th column
00:43:945 (43945|6) - delete
00:43:916 - add note on 6th column (1/6 snap)
00:43:973 - add note on 5th column (1/6 snap)
sounds are located in 1/6 snap

00:45:410 - add notes on 2nd, 6th column
i think...need more notes in there

00:49:893 (49893|6,49979|3,50065|5,50151|4,50238|2,50324|1) - misplaced?
00:49:893 (49893|6) - move to 00:49:950 - (1/6 snap)
00:49:979 (49979|3) - move to 00:50:008 - (1/6 snap)
00:50:151 (50151|4) - move to 00:50:180 - (1/6 snap)
00:50:295 - add note
00:50:324 (50324|1) - move to 00:50:353 - (1/6 snap)

00:52:479 - add note on 1st column
00:53:169 - add note on 2nd column
i think need note in there

00:55:927 (55927|4,55970|5,56143|4,56186|3,56401|4,56445|5) - umm..i'm not sure it's suited in this part.
if u want to use this pattern,
00:55:970 (55970|2) - move to 00:55:927
need note in there

01:10:065 - add note on 2nd column
there has drumbass sound.

01:16:100 (76100|6,76143|2,76186|5,76229|1) - how about this?


01:24:031 (84031|1) - delete
01:24:031 (84031|6) - move to 5th column
this line has 5 chord to same with 01:23:858 but sound accent is different.
i think need to reduce note in there :3

02:24:893 (144893|4,144893|1) - move to right one block
02:24:893 (144893|1,144893|4,145008|4,145008|1,145123|1,145123|4) - it seems to 3 jack. but in fact, sound is just 2 jack.
so to avoid confusion, it need to move :3


[LumiNous]
00:21:617 - add note on 5th column
00:21:703 - add note on 4th column

00:37:091 (37091|4,37091|2) - misplaced? i think the notes have to be located in 1/3 snap

00:49:893 (49893|6) - delete. there has no sound

00:55:985 (55985|1,55985|4) - umm....i recommend to delete them

00:58:729 - add note on 2nd column (1/8 snap)

01:04:634 (64634|6,64807|4) - they have to be located in 1/3 snap

01:18:513 - i think.. 1/8 drum roll is started in there.

01:44:893 (104893|1,105151|5,105410|3) - misplaced?
when i listened to this part in 25% playback, it was awkward.
01:44:893 (104893|1) - move to 01:44:807
01:45:151 (105151|5) - move to 01:45:065
01:45:410 (105410|3) - move to 01:45:324

good luck xD

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

xi - Valhalla [Osu!Mania Modding]

===

From Kuo Kyoka's osu!mania Modding Queue

Mod Requested by Remillion Cross

[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: Okay
- AiMod: No Problem
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Okay
- Metadata: Okay
- Folder’s problem: Okay

Column
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |

“Here come of some suggest for your map, I always check fullmap, if I’m too tried I will come back soon, or only check that keys by the request! And remember to reply the mod when you’re accepcted it or not! And dont forget my kud if my suggest is useful ~ Thanks for requested me ~
means I will come back

Hitsound check already finished by LordRaika

[Beginner]

SPOILER

1. 00:17:824 (17824|2) - move to 7th column, I think the pitch is high and should be on the highest column
2. 00:51:617 (51617|5) - idk this is have sound of not, cause to low for hear ;A; I think following the piano's sound is okay now
3. 01:11:272 - I think you should add a note in 1 because if you following two notes like on 01:06:617 - with bass
4. 01:15:496 (75496|2,75755|4) - I think should Ctrl + H this, seems 01:15:496 (75496|2) - is higher pitch than 01:15:755 (75755|4) -
5. 01:29:203 (89203|2) - I think move this longnote to 4, the pattern is better then and for the pitch too? maybe
6. 01:39:376 - change the pattern into this? seems have the high pitch and move to low pitch https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2715733
7. 02:25:123 (145123|3) - this note probably should be on: 02:25:151 - (1/4)
8. 01:05:841 (65841|2) - move to 01:05:812 - , should be on here (1/3)
9. 01:06:962 - to 01:07:651 - should be on 1/3
10. 00:55:927 - to 00:56:617 - is 1/4 beat snap
    
    The rest is fine to me ~ Great
    
    All fixed. Yeah this song is too hard for map that's why no one want to make valhalla for ranked since it's too complicated

[Standard]

SPOILER

1. 00:25:841 (25841|0) - I was think the long note should be on 00:26:013 - perhaps using LN in this section wasn't a good choice. re-arrange.
2. 00:53:858 - add a note in here, seems have the strong sound
3. 01:45:410 (105410|0) - this note is on 1/3? 01:45:123 (105123|5) - or this is on 01:45:151 - ? cause beginner have 01:45:123 (105123|5) - on the 01:45:151 - the second one that you mentioned wasn't right, but i will re-place in the right timing
4. 02:25:123 (145123|4) - this note probably should be on 02:25:151 - (1/4)
5. 01:05:841 (65841|0) - should be on 01:05:812 - (1/3)
6. 01:06:962 - to 01:07:651 - should be on 1/3
7. 00:55:927 - to 00:56:617 - is 1/4 beat snap
   
   the rest of the mods was fixed all! Thanks

[Hyper]

SPOILER

1. 00:43:858 - At this: change patterns to this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2715973 , seems the pitch is going down right
2. 01:07:307 - to 01:07:651 - I dont think players will pass this without 200 points ;A; suggest one is use 1/2 and two is use 1/3 beat snap getting 200 or not, i still have no idea. re-arrange.
3. 01:43:743 (103743|3) - this note should be on: 01:43:772 - (1/4) ok
4. 01:45:123 (105123|5) - should be on 01:45:151 - (1/4), easy diff have the right confirm ok
5. 01:58:226 (118226|1) - this note should be on: 01:58:169 - (1/2), follow the easy diff, and heard by 25% play back rate my bad lol
6. 02:25:123 (145123|1,145123|5) - hear by 25% playback, those notes should be on: 02:25:151 - (1/4)
7. 02:27:479 (147479|6,147479|3,147479|0) - those hold should be have this end: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2716063 (for like the easier's diffs ok
8. 01:05:582 (65582|2,65841|0,65841|4) - those are, should be on 01:05:812 - (after snap, this long note will not snap with the end of 1/4, and also, not snap with begin 1/3 but snap with 1/4 so suggest to remove it, and remove 01:05:582 (65582|2) - too? dem this song too op, well you're right, but i will re-arrange and use the righto snap
9. 01:06:962 - to 01:07:651 - is 1/3 snap
10. 00:37:048 (37048|5) - is 1/3 beatsnap, hear with 25% play back
11. 00:55:927 - to 00:56:617 - is 1/4 beat snap
12. 01:00:582 (60582|1) - is should be in 01:00:525 - (1/3 snap)
13. 02:09:462 (129462|4) - its 1/3 snap on 02:09:490 -
    
    Fixed all the rest of mods!

[LordRaika's Another]

SPOILER

1. 00:55:927 - to 00:56:617 - probably should be 1/3 snap
2. 01:10:180 (70180|5,70180|1) - hold should be begin at 01:10:238 - (1/4)
3. 02:25:123 (145123|5,145123|1,145123|3) - should be on 02:25:151 - (1/4 snap)
4. 01:00:065 - to 01:00:755 - is 1/3 beat snap
5. 02:09:462 (129462|1,129462|5) - its 1/3 snap on 02:09:490 -
   the rest all fine with me w/

[Yojimbo's White Another]

SPOILER

1. 00:47:048 (47048|0,47048|6,47048|2) - those are need a touch of hitsound-senpai w/
2. 00:48:901 (48901|4,48988|2,49074|4) - those are, I think I hear its on 1/4 like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2716143
3. 00:49:893 - on here: the begin seems not snap with the song, I think its on here: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2716151
4. 02:25:123 (145123|4,145123|1,145123|0) - should be on: 02:25:151 - (1/4)
5. 00:37:048 (37048|2,37048|5) - those are is 1/3 beatsnap, hear with 25% play back
6. 01:00:065 - to 01:00:755 - is 1/3 snap
7. 02:09:462 (129462|2,129462|6) - its a 1/3 snap on 02:09:490 -
   Nice diff w/

[LumiNous]

SPOILER

1. 00:22:709 (22709|5) - really should remove this, seems have sound but tooo low ;A; and also hard to take this with 1/4 too not agree, but okay then perhaps you're right
2. 00:22:249 (22249|5,22364|3) - those are, 1/4 note, hear with 25% play back oh yes, finally you mentioned about it
3. 00:22:565 (22565|3) - piano's sound is on: 00:22:565 -
4. 00:22:939 (22939|1) - hithat is on: 00:22:910 - and bass 00:23:054 (23054|3) - is on: 00:22:996 - okay thanks
5. 00:22:651 - also have a hithat sound in here, depend on you in add a note in here ok
6. 00:48:858 (48858|1,48988|3,49074|5) - is 1/4 snap, should be on: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2716215 (also the right charts is of Usagi's but I have call him to fix at 1/4 like you oh yes, this song was too damn hard
7. 00:55:927 - to 00:56:617 - is 1/4 beat snap wheee
8. 02:09:462 (129462|3,129462|5,129462|1) - like the begin, it should be on 1/3 snap: move to on 02:09:490 - ok
9. 02:25:123 (145123|6,145123|3,145123|1) - those are... really is on 1/4 snap: 02:25:151 - ok

[Comment]
Done modding, hard time to mod this map D: but glad im done
This is hard to mod and hard to map because have 1/1 1/2 1/3 1/4 1/5 1/6 1/8 beatsnap ~ but glad you was done it
Anyway, if you have complain about my mod on beatsnapping, try to hear it one more time with 25% playback rate, and then recall me to check that, after you guys done fixing, I will check this map one more time of snapping so ... good luck on it then ~
Here is my star <3

Remillion Cross wrote:

00:47:048 (47048|0,47048|6,47048|2) - those are need a touch of hitsound-senpai w/
00:48:901 (48901|4,48988|2,49074|4) - those are, I think I hear its on 1/4 like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2716143
00:49:893 - on here: the begin seems not snap with the song, I think its on here: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2716151
02:25:123 (145123|4,145123|1,145123|0) - should be on: 02:25:151 - (1/4)
00:37:048 (37048|2,37048|5) - those are is 1/3 beatsnap, hear with 25% play back
01:00:065 - to 01:00:755 - is 1/3 snap
02:09:462 (129462|2,129462|6) - its a 1/3 snap on 02:09:490 -
Nice diff w/

Starry- wrote:

Marking~
we need some hard 7K ranked!

Will process within a week or so - patience until then please! ;w;