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Tsuji Ayano - Become the Wind

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vivicat
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年7月15日 星期四 at 20:10:51

Artist: Tsuji Ayano
Title: Become the Wind
Source: The Cat Returns
Tags: Miyazaki Hayao Studio Ghibli
BPM: 130
Filesize: 5023kb
Play Time: 03:34
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.21 stars, 179 notes)
  2. Hard (4.44 stars, 367 notes)
Download: Tsuji Ayano - Become the Wind
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It's my first beatmap.
Befor made it,I never know how enjoyable is making a beatmap.
I love this song very much!
And hope you like it too.Enjoy!

Thanks for:
2010.4.6 - Sallad4ever's mod
2010.4.7 - xxheroxx's mod
2010.4.8 - Real1's mod
2010.4.10 - wmfchris'mod , Sekuyi'mod , Shulin's mod
2010.4.11 - xierbaliti's mod
2010.4.21 - Selee 's mod
2010.4.15 - H-boy's mod
2010.4.16 - Senbon's mod
2010.4.28 - Eirene's mod , DJPop's mod
2010.5.8 - Leorda's mod
2010.5.17 - Garven's mod , strager's mod
2010.5.20 - [DBF]'s mod
2010.5.28 - chibi-lucky's mod
2010.6.9 - kino77's mod
2010.6.19 - death_the_kid's mod
2010.6.25 - aesopl19193's mod
2010.6.26 - roflninja's mod
2010.6.29 - AngelHoney's mod
2010.6.30 - banvi's mod
2010.7.1 - Mystearica's mod
2010.7.4 - Alace's mod
2010.7.10 - Shinxyn's mod
Sallad4ever
Yes A Very good song indeed :)

Let me help you :D
First you don't need the timing section in 00:24:253, delete that .
Then BPM & Offset
BPM : 130
Offset : 4161

After you change them don't forget to re-snap all of the note on the timing tab
For the Normal diff, slider velocity of 2 is too high decrease it to maybe 1.4 or 1.5 it's up to you

That's all for now I'll take a look later and then mod it
Good Luck ;)
Topic Starter
vivicat

Sallad4ever wrote:

Yes A Very good song indeed :)

Let me help you :D
First you don't need the timing section in 00:24:253, delete that .
Then BPM & Offset
BPM : 130
Offset : 4161

After you change them don't forget to re-snap all of the note on the timing tab
For the Normal diff, slider velocity of 2 is too high decrease it to maybe 1.4 or 1.5 it's up to you

That's all for now I'll take a look later and then mod it
Good Luck ;)
Thanks for you help very much!>_<
About th slider velocity,i need it's rhythm in 01:26:545.So i did'nt change it
I've corrected all you said already,please check again.
Sallad4ever
First off use this bg it's a lot better :D


General
There's a lot repetitive pattern on both diff I guess it's fine in easy, but try making more variation in normal
For example 00:07:853 (1,2,3,4,5) - you use this pattern for 9 times :o
You can try mixing slider in this combo set, for example you can change 2 & 3 or 4 & 5 to a slider then go back to using circle in the next combo set.
You can user your own variation of course, just don't use same pattern for more than 3 times in a straight

Easy
your kiai time still in a mess :o
Start the kiai time here 00:53:545 and end it here 01:21:699
00:27:237 (5) - new combo
00:30:930 (5) - ^
00:34:622 (5) - ^
00:35:545 (2) - ^
01:03:237 (4) - ^
01:10:622 (4) - ^
Hmmm...Try using more hitsound like in normal

Normal
Set your beat snap divisor to 1/4 and also set the preview time on this diff same with easy diff
Start the first kiai time here 00:53:545 and end it here 01:23:545
Start the second kiai time here 02:09:468 and end it here 02:39:007

that's all I can help you for now try posting your map on of the thread's here viewforum.php?f=60
Don't forget to read their rules. I'm sure they will help you :)

I really like the song so hang in there and get this ranked :D
Good luck vivicat :)
Topic Starter
vivicat
ok,and thanks again for your helps and star >_<
i'll do my best to fix it,until it be ranked :)
Diasios
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Blue: You should fix this.

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[General]

  • • Sample Volume: 5
    • You should make another diff

    • Delete the osb file, then "Full submission"
    • Remove countdown

[Easy]


  • • 00:54:007 (1) - End this slider here 00:54:930 (white tick) and move this circle 00:54:930 (2) here 00:55:391 (white tick)
    • 00:55:853 (3) - End this slider here 00:56:776 (white tick) and move this circle 00:56:776 (4) here 00:57:237 (white tick)
[Normal]

  • • 01:10:161 (3,1) - Spacing (keep "Distance Snap" active and fix it)
    • 02:19:391 (5) - This slider is hidden; make it visible
    • 02:20:084 (6) - The end-slider is hidden; make it visible
    • 02:34:160 (5) - This slider is hidden; make it visible
    • 02:34:853 (6) - The end-slider is hidden; make it visible
Derfas13
I love this song ^_^
-star-
Real1
[General]
  1. Remove countdown! It really doesn't fit this song.
    View -> Song Setup -> Storyboarding ->Disable countdown by unchecking the box.
  2. Disable Letterbox during breaks as it covers that girl. You do that on the same page as you disable countdown!
[Easy]
  1. Too repetetive, expecially in the beginnning with the repeating slow sliders. Try to spice it up a bit. Also, try to avoid stacks as much as possible in Easy because it's hard for noobs to read.
  2. The spinners are too short for Easy. People who play easy often have problems with spinners, maybe you should replace the spinners with notes and stuff, at least some of them!
[Normal]
  1. No complaints here. A bit repetetive maybe, but it's alright.
A star for you. Nice job!
Topic Starter
vivicat
thanks for above all ∩_∩
fixed already
wmfchris
[easy]
0:09:699 (1) Maybe this jump is too far for beginners?
good.

[normal]
*distance between slider and the next note varies in this map, need re-snapping
0:13:853 (2) spacing
1:16:853 (2) maybe up/right 1 grid to parallel with the slider (1)?
2:01:622 (4) spacing
2:27:237 (x) seems strange if there's nothing here...
3:07:391 (2,3,1) spacing

nice song, but try to loud it up by sounding software like Audacity?

star~
Topic Starter
vivicat
thanks!Fixed already.
Sekuyi
[Normal]
- 03:23:545 Slider (3) is under the end of (2). Thats too close for the beat distance - suggest to use distance snap here
- 03:30:930 same here

Have a star~ ^^
Shulin
General:

-- Preview point is different on both difficulties, make them the same. "Timing" --> "Set Current Position as Preview Point" --> Choose a part in the song you think is best ^_^
-- Add "Studio Ghibli" to tags.
-- Add a silent slider slide?
-- Try and find a 800 x 600 or 1024 x 768 BG, it will look better.
-- Maybe add another difficulty?

Easy:

00:15:237 (4,5,1) - Move left 1 square.
00:54:007 (1) - Start kiai here?
00:57:699 (1) - Up one square.
01:19:861 (1) - Add finish?

Normal:

-- You might want to consider increasing the distance snap a little to reduce clustered notes. (Hold in alt + scroll)

02:09:468 -- "Normal" hitsounds don't fit the song imo, make this soft? If you keep normal, then reduce the volume to make it sound better.
02:09:699 (1) - Start kiai here.
02:18:237 (3,4,5,6) - Try and reduce overlap here it's a little confusing.
02:18:930 (4) - New combo?
02:22:737 (1) - Move this back to the white tick (02:22:622), end in the same place.
02:31:853 (1) - Hidden by kiai, make this more visible.
02:33:006 (3,4,5,6) - Again try and reduce overlap here.
02:33:699 (4) - New combo?
02:37:507 (1) - Move this back to the white tick (02:37:391) , end in the same place.
03:03:237 (1) - The end is covered by the hit300, maybe start the slider in a different direction?
03:14:314 (1) - "Normal" hitsounds don't suit the song imo.

Nice work on your first map, keep at it :D
~ Star.
kodomonoyume
Nice song :)
Star~
Topic Starter
vivicat
Thanks for all above :)
fixed already~
IceBeam
nice map :)

star~
xierbaliti
-General-
图本身没什么毛病 如果能再用心点弄下排列就好了 ._.
Soft-clap不适合这个歌 最好是不要用 ,用whistle足够了。

-Easy-
01:23:545 - Kiai time 结束在这里

-Normal-
作为normal,7的HP有些高了 5以内比较
01:21:699 (1) - 结束在01:23:084好一些 同时让kiai time在这里结束
01:50:545 (4,5) - 这个jump出现得很突然 前面相同的地方全都是一样的间距 到这里突然出现jump了 有一些难读
02:38:776 - 这段kiai结束在这里

*star*
Topic Starter
vivicat
感谢>_<
排列的话 有空我重新弄一下好了。。。
其他的fixed already
Senbon
Feel free to take or leave any suggestions. :D

[General]

Delete .osb and full submit

[Easy]

00:35:545 (1) - Remove slider whistle noise?
00:57:699 (1) - Finish?
01:10:622 (1) - ^

[Normal]

01:18:699 (2) - Stack more directly under.
02:17:084 (1) - Replace with whistle?

Good map. :)
Topic Starter
vivicat
thanks :)
fixed already.
acethical
star
TTTTTTTTTTTT
Easy
nice..

Normal
00:06:007~00:09:237 这些circle建议重排下~
00:09:699(1) - clap
00:13:391(1) - ^
00:15:237(1) - finish
00:17:084(1) - clap
00:20:776(1) - ^
00:28:161(1) - finish
00:31:853(1) - ^
01:25:391(1) - clap
01:32:776(1) - finish
01:36:468(1) - clap
01:40:161(1) - finish
01:47:545(1) - ^
03:18:007(1) - 加finish在开始处

Starrr~
Kurai
Hi~
[Easy]
Fine.

[Normal]
Fine.

Hu... I love lthat ♥ Double Star~
Selee
咳 可以用中文么...
:D
[General] 音效可以考虑下么...尤其是easy 感觉好乱..

另外为什么不考虑做做看演唱部分..感觉光打节伴奏有些无聊...
非搬走的话..例子: [normal]
2:59:314 黄5往前挪1/2拍
3:00:500 补个note
3:01:161 ^
3:02:314 ^
这样子 会不会好打一些..
Topic Starter
vivicat
thanks for above all :)
Eirene
first, you may set custom colors, it's a bit bright

[Normal] :
03:01:161 (9) - whistle sounds odd

[Easy] :
00:55:853 (1) - finish, not clap

it's hard to find mistakes with such a calm timeline :3
STAR
DJPop
~Easy~
00:35:545 (1) - remove new combo (optional)

~Normal~
01:13:391 (1) - remove new combo (optional)
01:20:776 (1) - ^
01:27:699 (4) - new combo
01:35:084 (4) - ^
01:42:468 (4) - ^
01:46:160 (4) - ^
01:52:160 (1) - remove new combo (optional)
02:36:468 (1) - ^
02:59:314 (5) - new combo
03:10:622 (5) - ^
03:28:391 (1,2,3,1) - move closer (optional)
03:29:776 (2) - stack on the end of sliders
03:31:622 (4) - ^


+Star
Topic Starter
vivicat
fixed already,thanks. :)
i use a new picture as the background.
Sakura
Umm i dont know if my osu! is being weird or what, but everytime i download there's an update availaible that kills the BG :<

[General]
Why isnt Easy completely mapped?

[Normal]
00:13:853 (2,3,4) - Are theese intentionally misaligned?
00:15:699 (2) - ^
00:18:237 (4) - ^

Ok that's all i could find, unfortunately i was told to not Star maps with half mapped difficulties so, sorry :< no star
Leorda
NI HAO

[Skin]
The scorebar-kidanger, and scorebar-kidanger2 is missing

[File]
Your bg (BG.jpg) need to resize to 1024x768 (current 960x767)

[Easy]
00:13:391 (2) - New combo??
00:20:776 (2) - ^
00:51:237 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo??
00:56:776 (2) - This object is not stack perfectly with 1 at the end of slider, please stack it
01:03:237 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:10:622 (1) - ^
01:18:007 (1) - ^
03:05:084 (1) - ^
03:06:930 (3) - New combo??
03:18:007 (5) - ^
03:34:737 (1) - Move backward to white tick and extend??

[Normal]
01:21:699 (1) - Move backward to red tick and extend?
03:22:391 (2) - Stack with 1 at the end of slider is not perfectly, stack it?
03:24:237 (4) - Stack with 3 at the end of slider is not perfectly, stack it?

Good song
STAR
Garven
[General]
Delete .osb file in folder, then full submit (unless you plan on making a Story Board for this song). Make sure you check the folder each time you update your map, otherwise it will sneak back in there. It's annoying to keep track of. :( Geh, nevermind my ramblings.

[Easy]
00:17:084 (1) - On this slider, take out the red anchor in the middle. When you have the slider selected, right click on the control point. This will make it so it doesn't have that sharp angle that makes it stick out from the other sliders.
00:35:545 (6) - Same with this one - also as a general rule, I wouldn't use a red control point on the end of a slider.
01:05:084 (1,2) - Remove the whistle from the slider slides. They just sound bad.
01:06:930 (2) - Make this a bezier slider. Sharp angled sliders wouldn't really fit well with this song.
02:21:237 (2) - Remove red anchor on this slider.
No real issues with the difficulty - it's just nice to see some smooth sliders for this type of song.

[Normal]
The hit sounds feel a little too loud - especially in comparison to Easy's volume levels. Set Normal's to the same levels that Easy has. The claps stick out really bad, otherwise.
Same thing about the sliders in this difficulty - make them smooth. :D
03:21:699 (1,2,3,4) - I'd remove the claps from the ends of all these sliders. Too many claps otherwise.

Some nice and relaxing difficulties for a great song. Great job!
anonymous_old
General
The song is variable-BPM, or at least variable-offset. Please have someone good at timing time this map. Ask awp or Rolled, for example.

Easy
00:54:007 (1,2) - Too hard for an Easy. Remove the 1/2.
00:55:853 (1,2) - ^

I don't like any of the stacks like 02:18:468 (3,4). Just harms readability.

Normal
Rename to Hard.
I don't like the spinners for the most part. Too many of them. =X

01:23:545 - Break, please.

Otherwise, pretty nice.
[DBF]
[Easy]

00:09:699 (1) - add finish in end.
00:17:084 (1) - ^
00:30:930 (4) - ^
01:53:084 (6) - ^
02:07:853 (3,4) - spacing.
02:35:545 (1) - add finish.
03:34:622 (1) - ^

[Hard]

01:00:693 (3,4) - add whistles.
01:06:231 (5,6) - ^
01:06:924 (1) - ^
01:15:462 (4,5) - ^
02:37:385 (1) - finish.
03:08:078 (3) - whistle.
03:24:924 (6) - ^
03:32:770 (1) - finish.

Star~
dvorak_old
Ghibli yeahhhh

can't find any variable-bpm or wrong offset.
chibi-lucky
Positive Feedback- Yay! You did something I liked.
Suggestions- You can fix em or leave em.
Map Error: FIX THIS NOW!

Overall:
You have a beautiful beatmap here! I'm looking forward to it's approval so I can play it again. :)

Easy:
01:25:391 - 02:35:084 - I can see that your AI Mod tells you otherwise, but all up in here, it's veeeeeeerrrryyyyy smooshed feeling. Noobs can't read notes this close together, keep in mind. ... Just saying.
00:38:314 - Add a hit circle right in the middle of the board here.
Other than these, I couldn't find anything at all wrong with it! Good job!

Hard:
Awww, This one was so GREAT!
I tried so hard to find something wrong with it for you too... T_T
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