updated

xxdeathxx called me to check it, so I am here..

~General~

1. Title: あの森で待ってる（TVサイズ）/ Romanised Title: Ano Mori de Matteru (TV Size)
   According to the official website:http://www.yurikuma.jp/products_cd.html,
2. General bpm is 88, please don’t double bpm. And the timing at the end is quite doubtful, 01:20:460 –and 01:23:187 –01:25:914 - and some other beats are off in your timing. Maybe need a timing expert to confirm it.
   
3. why not put a video in it? it seems it’s a op map from an anime.

~Easy~

1. 00:27:960 (1,3) –make them bilaterall symmetrical? The head and the tail's spacing of the two sliders are not equal which seems bad view.

~Normal~

1. 01:13:983 (3,4,5,6,7) –This pattern is too hard for a normal diff, try changing (3,4) to a 1/2 slider.

~Hard~

1. 00:48:414 (1) –you followed the vocal but ignored 00:48:755 –which seems too forced, the vocal actually starts at00:48:074 –..I suggest:

~Insane~

1. 00:13:812 –add a note with clap for consistency with your hitsounds?
2. 00:48:414 (1) –weird rhythm, I think 00:48:755 –this beat shouldn’t be omitted
   . You can try triplet at 00:48:585 –or change 00:48:414 (1) –to 3/4 slider then add a circle at 00:48:755 –and 00:48:926 –

Mark

mochi fixed his diff by forums pm, all diffs updated

翻遍p站最终还是选了这张么。。。2333

EASY

00:19:778 - move this down to about x:408 y:96
00:21:629 - also move this circle down a bit, i'd say to about x:264 y:64
00:38:187 - it doesn't really feel good, i think having a straighter slider that is pointing to the bottom left corner would fit better
00:41:596 - this one can be a circle instaed of a short slider i think
00:44:324 - i think replace this by a circle and also put a circle on 00:44:664
I'd say every pattern of 2 really short sliders before 01:01:051 could be replaced with a circle and slider really to make it build up a bit to the end of the song
01:26:937 - i recommend to extend the spinner a bit longer because this is a easy difficulty

Mochi's NORMAL

00:05:460 - i dislike things that are stacked straight on top of eachother, move the circle over a little bit so you can see the slider beginning as well
00:07:335 - stacked staight on top, move it over :3
00:10:062 - again stacked straight on top
00:11:596 , 00:12:117 , 00:12:960 , 00:18:244 , 00:22:335 , 00:27:960 , GEEZ WHAT IS IT WITH THE STACKING STRAIGHT ON TOP OF OTHER OBJECTS?!
00:30:346 - this is a bit too close to the bottom of the screen for my liking
00:31:880 - NOT AGAIN?
00:4!:255 - Don't go this far down
00:52:505 - you didn't
00:55:744 - seriously?
01:02:562 - i'm going to throw a fit
01:17:051 - replace this with a short slider and a circle, i feel that that would suit the rhythm better

HARD

00:05:460 - MOVE HIM OVER A BIT, JUST A BIT D::::::
00:09:039 - yes him too
00:17:051 -> 00:17:392 - this jump is a bit too big, move the circle up a bit
00:28:983 - NOOOOOOO
00:31:710 - FML
00:37:423 -> 00:38:869 - make the ending of the previous slider be the beginning of the next one
01:12:789 - not straight on top...

INSANE

Just a quick notice, i think AR 7.5 for hard, and 8.3 for Insane would be better since it makes the song feel right, now insane feels too quick really.

thanks for modding, but kept all stuffs to my diffs.. let's see how about the guest
edit: mochi want to keep the current stuffs too

Hello there :3
You timing is a bit unsync at the end so I've fixed that for you
new mp3 - http://puu.sh/eGwqT/9eecdad741.mp3

Timing points

1346,681.818181818182,4,2,1,40,1,0
6119,681.818181818182,4,2,1,40,1,0
40210,681.818181818182,4,2,1,40,1,0

2nd and 3rd line is just for metronome fix

fixed

Fycho wrote:

why not put a video in it? it seems it’s a op map from an anime.

Looking at the opening video, it's a bit..nsfw >///<

BeatofIke wrote:

Fycho wrote:

why not put a video in it? it seems it’s a op map from an anime.

Looking at the opening video, it's a bit..nsfw >///<

yep.. that's the only thing I'm worry about orz

Bubbled.

to next one: please check snap and green lines carefully.

here we go :3

我得了个法克儿.........恭喜○|￣|_！

Don't post NSFW material, wcx.

Garven wrote:

Don't post NSFW material, wcx.

alright..

Congratz~

btw I want the video

dis song

Garven wrote:

Don't post NSFW material, wcx.

As this forum is visited by minors, no 18+ subject matter is allowed. As such, you are not to embed content that is not safe for work. All mature subject matter must be linked from an off-site source, must be clearly identified as "NSFW" (Not Safe For Work), and must have some value in being posted. Do not link inappropriate content for the sake of linking inappropriate content.

Didn't he link the video off-site with a clear NSFW warning surrounding the link? And being the video component of this anime opening should be meaningful enough to be posted.

恭喜rank

i feel terrible, i became so lazy in modding that when i wanted to mod,
it is already ranked :p
I'm sorry i couldn't help but... congratz with your map anyways!