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petit milady - Ma Cherie

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Andrea
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on giovedì 15 gennaio 2015 at 18:18:10

Artist: petit milady
Title: Ma Cherie
Tags: osuplayer111 Aoi Yuuki Ayana Taketatsu Band Duo Universal Music Japan プチミレディア【通常盤】
BPM: 150
Filesize: 10672kb
Play Time: 06:12
Difficulties Available:
  1. Lovers (3,96 stars, 1361 notes)
Download: petit milady - Ma Cherie
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 209th Beatmap.

Special thanks to Vicho for the BG. <3


Mapset:

Lovers - Done.
Asagi
oh yes <3
Gero
First

Ninja
Ashasaki
Third XD Andrea is unstoppable! <3
Suimya
Andrea so fast <3
Nyukai
Momochikun
take a star~ (:3 」∠)
rEdo
IRC log
15:33 Andrea: I heard that rEdo-san will testplay and mod my new approval map
15:33 rEdo: yes
15:34 Andrea: <333333
15:34 rEdo: after I come up with my password
15:34 rEdo: I mean
15:34 rEdo: remind myself a password
15:34 Andrea: xDD
15:34 rEdo: that I need
15:34 *Andrea is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/585605 petit milady - Ma Cherie]
15:34 Andrea: I'll try xD
15:35 rEdo: k i got it
15:35 rEdo: im just testing how BitLocker works
15:35 rEdo: on pendrives
15:35 rEdo: no big deal
15:35 Andrea: oh I see
15:39 rEdo: k downloading
15:39 rEdo: lets see
15:39 Andrea: wait wait
15:39 Andrea: Asagi is playing it =w=b
15:39 Andrea: I wanna spec you too so xD
15:41 rEdo: just one suggestion
15:41 rEdo: that applies to all your maps
15:41 rEdo: make jumps god damnit
15:42 rEdo: this will be so boring on DT
15:43 Andrea: at least it's streamy enough lol
15:43 Andrea: I could try making some jumps larger I guess
15:43 rEdo: not could, should I'd say
15:44 rEdo: I would also say that you might want to use a higher distance snap on regular patterns
15:44 rEdo: but that would like require to remap the whole thing D:
15:45 Andrea: I could just increase some jumps instead
15:45 rEdo: dunno Q_Q
15:45 *rEdo is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/585605 petit milady - Ma Cherie [Sweet]] +DoubleTime
15:45 Andrea: spacing between notes feels enough already
15:45 rEdo: lets see
15:45 *Switched to #spectator.
15:46 rEdo: fucking hair
15:46 rEdo: tickling my eye
15:47 Asagi: cut it
15:47 rEdo: no :(
15:47 Asagi: hahahaha
15:48 Asagi: maybe ar8.8 or something fits better on the bpm lol
15:48 rEdo: nah
15:49 Asagi: ar10.3 practice mep lol
15:49 rEdo: ah fuck
15:50 rEdo: why did i try to play it lmb+x
15:50 Asagi: rip 1/4s
15:50 rEdo: anyway 10.3 is WAY TOO MUCH
15:50 Asagi: yea you just clicked it hahaha
15:50 Andrea: blame mapper
15:50 rEdo: for patterns that are too close to each other
15:50 rEdo: sorry
15:50 rEdo: i'd go with 8.5 or something
15:50 Andrea: hmm yeah I kinda agree
15:50 rEdo: I mean, AR9 > AR8.5
15:50 Asagi: need more a bit jump \:D/
15:50 Andrea: AR9 probably is too much
15:51 Andrea: or that
15:51 Andrea: I'll try to add more jumps
15:51 Andrea: brb changing AR
15:51 *rEdo is playing petit milady - Ma Cherie [Sweet AR8.5] +DoubleTime
15:51 *Switched to query with Andrea.
15:52 Andrea: gonna change AR
15:52 rEdo: ye 8.5
15:52 rEdo: is 21085128 times better
15:54 Andrea: and let's see if I can add some jumps here and there
15:56 rEdo: three main issues that i have in mind
15:56 rEdo: 1. ar too high
15:56 rEdo: 2. hp drain too low
15:56 rEdo: it feels so forgiving bleh
15:57 rEdo: 3. somewhat boring movement, but I guess I'm just used to jumps when playing streamy stuff
15:57 Andrea: okay HP+1 then
15:57 Andrea: and yeah I'm working with jumps
15:58 rEdo: i'll be pointing out stuff via irc since i already launched the editor
15:58 Andrea: alrighty :3
15:59 rEdo: 00:34:060 (6) - I'd go with a triple stack on (6)'s end and an extra note at 00:34:060 (6) -
15:59 rEdo: ergo: add notes at 00:34:060 (6) - and 00:34:060 (6) -
15:59 rEdo: so you could follow the drums properly
16:00 rEdo: 00:54:860 (1) - its beginning and ending arent in the same lane
16:00 rEdo: start is at y:68, ending is at y:64
16:00 rEdo: 01:00:060 (4,5,6,1) - the 4>5 transition makes me think that (6,1) are also just 1/4 later
16:00 rEdo: i would move (6,1) a little bit further
16:02 rEdo: 01:08:860 (1,2,3) - id 180 rotate this and move a little bit higher, plays much more fun like this
16:02 rEdo: 01:26:860 (1,2,3) - weird distance snap increase, but its hard to notice
16:03 rEdo: 01:39:660 (1) - from now on just reread what I pointed out above, since you copypasted the whole thing lul
16:04 rEdo: 02:47:560 (5,6) - arent stacked properly with 02:47:260 (4) - 'send
16:04 rEdo: 02:49:160 (5,6) - as above
16:05 Andrea: I'm gonna fix those after the jump fixes :3
16:06 rEdo: 04:34:460 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - stuff like this is like
16:06 rEdo: crying for higher distance snap
16:06 rEdo: but it might be just me
16:06 Andrea: I'll also see about that
16:06 rEdo: i would generally increase the SV and DS for the last chorus but I'm stupid
16:08 rEdo: if you want to be a dick
16:08 rEdo: go for OD8
16:08 rEdo: this might be fun to try to get a decent accuracy on
16:08 rEdo: generally: this should be MUCH harsher than it currently is
16:10 Andrea: got it b0ss
16:10 Andrea: will do my best b0ss
16:10 Andrea: and okay for OD8
16:10 Andrea: HP6.5
16:10 Andrea: AR8.5
16:11 Andrea: OD8
16:11 Andrea: how about it
16:11 rEdo: ar7
16:11 rEdo: tfu
16:11 rEdo: hp7
16:11 Andrea: okay then
16:12 Andrea: 7-8-8,5
16:12 rEdo: should be good I guess :p
16:12 rEdo: update and I'll play again
16:12 rEdo: I mean, poke me when you do all the stuff
16:13 Andrea: do you think I should make the slow party jumpy too?
16:13 rEdo: no, no
16:13 rEdo: they're good as they are
16:13 Andrea: part*
16:13 Andrea: alright
16:13 rEdo: it's just the choruses that feel somewhat boring
16:13 Andrea: I made them actually jumpy
16:14 Andrea: xD
16:14 Andrea: well, a bit more
16:14 rEdo: we
16:14 rEdo: we'll see :p
16:14 Andrea: otherwise that is the map good enough at least? xD
16:14 rEdo: ye its cool
16:14 Andrea: yay \o/
16:14 rEdo: i like the notes placement
16:15 rEdo: on the timeline, that is
16:15 rEdo: that's why it will be really fun to play on DT
16:15 rEdo: I like doublety-triplety clicky-clacks \o/
16:16 Andrea: I tried to make a custom drum rhythm
16:16 Andrea: that also follow with the song \o/
16:17 rEdo: reminds me of Satellite
16:20 Andrea: need to stream a tournament argh, gotta hate having powers sometimes
16:20 Andrea: I'm at 73% with fixing
16:20 Andrea: I'll finish the rest soon
16:20 Andrea: btw post so I can kd \:D/
16:20 rEdo: sure
Good luck~
Vicho
Andrea so pro <3
Nyukai
Update again or something, BG is not showed in Beatmap Listing >:
Topic Starter
Andrea
Thanks everyone for the support :)

Updated again and everything should be working fine~
Asagi
Did some little IRC mod thingy

(  ・ω・)
2015-01-06 01:44 Andrea: you can suggest me if you want xD
2015-01-06 01:45 Asagi: maybe haha
2015-01-06 01:45 Asagi: i was planning to mod it anyway
2015-01-06 01:48 Andrea: okay gonna make some more jumps Dx
2015-01-06 01:49 Asagi: maybe i can throw a mod IRC while you fixing some stuffs :3
2015-01-06 01:50 Andrea: sure :3
2015-01-06 01:53 Asagi: i was wondering if you can add spinner here 00:10:060 (1) - like following the violin sound thingy
2015-01-06 01:53 Asagi: it feels the gap between 1 and 2 is kinda long
2015-01-06 01:54 Asagi: 00:11:660 (2) - same here, but it seems the other spinner follows the idk sound is that
2015-01-06 01:54 Andrea: hmm... I kinda don't want double spinner Dx
2015-01-06 01:54 Andrea: if you hear properly
2015-01-06 01:54 Andrea: there's a ffffffffff
2015-01-06 01:55 Andrea: that increases slowly
2015-01-06 01:55 Asagi: yea that sound hahaha
2015-01-06 01:56 Asagi: is it just me, or this map is not symmetrical compare to your other maps lol
2015-01-06 01:57 Asagi: 00:47:860 (8) - dat stack, almost lol
2015-01-06 01:58 Asagi: so here 00:54:860 (1,2,3,4,5) - i was expecting more jumps here because of the vocals is kinda intense
2015-01-06 01:59 Asagi: 00:56:060 (5) - try to make this a 1/2 slider instead? then add note here too 00:56:460 - to emphasize the finish hitsound well
2015-01-06 01:59 Andrea: fixed that stack
2015-01-06 02:00 Andrea: let me see
2015-01-06 02:00 Andrea: nice suggestion fixed o3o
2015-01-06 02:01 Asagi: oh and, maybe slider tick rate fits better on the map
2015-01-06 02:02 Asagi: for example here 00:59:260 (1) - there is an offbeat sound on the red tick which should be follow
2015-01-06 02:02 Asagi: and the slider tick rate 2 fits good imo
2015-01-06 02:03 Andrea: many blue tick sliders though
2015-01-06 02:03 Andrea: it would sound weird on those Q_Q
2015-01-06 02:03 Asagi: how is that weird? ;w;
2015-01-06 02:04 Asagi: 01:00:360 (5) - looks like you missed whistle on the head :3
2015-01-06 02:05 Asagi: 01:02:860 (1) - ^ on the tail?
2015-01-06 02:06 Asagi: 01:08:860 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - oh yea on this part too, add jumps here, well you know
2015-01-06 02:06 Asagi: the vocals high pitch + intense
2015-01-06 02:07 Andrea: damn I should fix these whistles
2015-01-06 02:07 Asagi: oh, so you really missed it? lol
2015-01-06 02:08 Asagi: should i point them out too or something
2015-01-06 02:08 Andrea: no need :3
2015-01-06 02:09 Asagi: okay :3
2015-01-06 02:10 Asagi: dat copy pasta :3
2015-01-06 02:11 Asagi: u lazy huh, hahahahaha
2015-01-06 02:12 Asagi: 02:05:260 (1,2,3,4,5) - this part again as i said earlier
2015-01-06 02:12 Asagi: and the other one, they are the same anyway so you know it probably :3
2015-01-06 02:13 Andrea: yep yep =w=b
2015-01-06 02:13 Andrea: copy-pasted xD
2015-01-06 02:17 Asagi: 03:58:660 (5) - how bout try to put break here? the gap is kinda long, itll drain HP so much
2015-01-06 02:17 Asagi: and to make it more predictable on the next part
2015-01-06 02:20 Asagi: 04:25:260 - how bout put the 1/2 slider here instead? like http://puu.sh/e6YnV.jpg since you are following the vocals on that part
2015-01-06 02:20 Asagi: and its well imo
2015-01-06 02:22 Asagi: looks like the 3rd kiai is more intense huh, putting more jumps there will feel great while playing
2015-01-06 02:25 Andrea: hmm... I prefer to not add a break here though ;w;
2015-01-06 02:26 Andrea: gonna fix that slider though o3o
2015-01-06 02:26 Asagi: :3
2015-01-06 02:26 Asagi: looks like im done, i dont wanna touch the pattern and style
2015-01-06 02:26 Asagi: because its your own style, i dont wanna ruin it :3
2015-01-06 02:26 Andrea: let me update!
2015-01-06 02:27 Asagi: and how bout reducing the OD? ;w;
2015-01-06 02:27 Andrea: I changed a lot of jumps too :D
2015-01-06 02:27 Andrea: rEdo suggested me OD8
2015-01-06 02:27 Andrea: xD
2015-01-06 02:27 Asagi: OD8 is kinda pain since its streamy ;w;
2015-01-06 02:27 Asagi: 7.5 at least ;w;
2015-01-06 02:27 Asagi: mercy hahahaha
2015-01-06 02:27 Andrea: hmm sounds good
2015-01-06 02:27 Asagi: i really hate OD8 lol, then OD7.5 came
2015-01-06 02:27 Asagi: ayayayayay
2015-01-06 02:28 Andrea: updated :D should be 1000 times better owo
2015-01-06 02:29 Andrea: btw post the log so I can kd you :3
2015-01-06 02:29 Asagi: yes yes hahahaha

Good Luck o3o~
Suimya
Did some IRC Modding...


Sweet Andrea (ღ˘⌣˘ღ)
21:44 Andrea: nice let's go xD
21:44 Sekai-nyan: but i can give some suggestion
21:44 Sekai-nyan: if it's ok for you xD
21:44 Andrea: of course I'm always open
21:44 Sekai-nyan: 00:17:860 (12,1) - how about switching the nc here
21:45 Sekai-nyan: it'll make more sense if it was on 12 not 1
21:45 Sekai-nyan: o.o
21:45 Andrea: fixed
21:46 Sekai-nyan: 00:19:460 (11) - i think you should fix every nc with something like this
21:46 Sekai-nyan: since the triple kinda looking weird
21:46 Andrea: nooo I won't on sliders
21:46 Andrea: they look sexy
21:46 Andrea: xD
21:46 Sekai-nyan: =3=
21:47 Sekai-nyan: but it's weird for 300 to be on triple imo
21:47 Andrea: if someone else will complain I'll see u.u
21:48 Sekai-nyan: hmm
21:48 Sekai-nyan: i'm just saying =w=
21:48 Sekai-nyan: baka www
21:48 Andrea: yes yes =w=
21:49 Sekai-nyan: 00:26:060 (1) - baka you should add finish on start of this
21:49 Sekai-nyan: it'll fit
21:50 Sekai-nyan: 00:32:060 (1) - I think it'll be more fun, if you space this little more
21:50 Sekai-nyan: it's too close right now
21:51 Sekai-nyan: 00:34:060 (6) - nc for new vocal here as well, it'll make more sense o3o
21:51 Andrea: fixed the NC o3o
21:52 Andrea: the finish doesn't fit on that part imo and I wanna keep spacing equal on that part =3=
21:52 Andrea: btw I'm fixing the same stuff on other part as well
21:52 Andrea: so you don't need to mention them again :3
21:52 Sekai-nyan: =w=
21:52 Sekai-nyan: 00:44:860 (1) - about this
21:52 Sekai-nyan: I don't know why you added the repeat on strong beat
21:53 Sekai-nyan: it looked kinda weird
21:53 Andrea: yeah it does, but I prefer having a repeat rather than empty part xD
21:53 Sekai-nyan: lol
21:53 Sekai-nyan: baka
21:53 Andrea: I hate empty parts :<
21:54 Sekai-nyan: baka
21:54 Sekai-nyan: this fits http://puu.sh/e73br/a4ca7cea98.jpg
21:54 Andrea: <3
21:54 Sekai-nyan: you should try it =w=
21:54 Sekai-nyan: or you can make double 1/2 sliders too
21:55 Andrea: let me see
21:55 Sekai-nyan: it's upto you owo
21:55 Sekai-nyan: i'm just giving you some suggestion ww
21:57 Sekai-nyan: 00:51:660 (1) - since you added a finish here, how about spacing it little bit more
21:57 Andrea: I somehow managed to make something cute owo
21:57 Sekai-nyan: great ww
21:59 Sekai-nyan: 01:12:560 (2,3) - baka how about moving this 1 grid down
21:59 Sekai-nyan: somehow it's too close to the slider orz
22:01 Andrea: ok done owo
22:01 Sekai-nyan: your frist kiai is just perfect xD
22:02 Andrea: yay xD
22:03 Sekai-nyan: 02:01:660 (10) - how about moving this to x:452 y:344
22:03 Sekai-nyan: it'll give some jump to the next slider
22:03 Sekai-nyan: and ofc you want that =w=
22:04 Andrea: it's the same of other part though :3
22:04 Andrea: let me see
22:04 Sekai-nyan: i know xD
22:04 Sekai-nyan: somehow i didn't notice it there
22:04 Andrea: probably it's too low @.@
22:05 Sekai-nyan: 02:17:160 (8,9) - you better stick this note probbley =3=
22:05 Sekai-nyan: baka
22:05 Sekai-nyan: i know xD
22:05 Andrea: but but... they're stacked ;w;
22:05 Sekai-nyan: lol
22:06 Sekai-nyan: 0.03?
22:06 Sekai-nyan: better make zeros xD
22:06 Sekai-nyan: orz i hate nazing xD
22:08 Sekai-nyan: 02:49:660 (1) - did you fix this?
22:09 Sekai-nyan: since, i was gonna give you same suggestion tho o3o
22:09 Andrea: like? o.o
22:09 Andrea: you think I should make them more curved?
22:09 Sekai-nyan: it has the same beat as before so, maybe double 1/2 sliders and note
22:09 Sekai-nyan: nono
22:10 Andrea: oh I see
22:11 Sekai-nyan: 02:54:460 (5) - I don't think this repeat slider really fits
22:11 Andrea: don't wanna be too repetitive though xD
22:11 Sekai-nyan: it's kinda has weird flow to it orz
22:12 Sekai-nyan: =3=
22:12 Sekai-nyan: it's upto you baka o3o
22:12 Andrea: yeah that's true
22:12 Andrea: I'll fix that
22:12 Andrea: 02:54 ^
22:12 Sekai-nyan: =w=
22:12 Sekai-nyan: good then
22:13 Sekai-nyan: 03:02:260 (7) - don't you think this slider kinda placed weird lol
22:13 Sekai-nyan: http://puu.sh/e760v/153c5956c1.jpg
22:13 Sekai-nyan: i think you should fix that xD
22:14 Sekai-nyan: 03:05:460 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - how about making some this stream a 1/4 sliders
22:14 Sekai-nyan: it'll also fits imo
22:15 Andrea: let's see
22:15 Sekai-nyan: since it's kinda boring, all triple stacks xD
22:15 Sekai-nyan: lol
22:17 Sekai-nyan: 03:56:260 (3) - how about ctrl+g for this o3o
22:17 Sekai-nyan: it'll give better flow to it =w=
22:17 Andrea: hmm okay v.v
22:17 Sekai-nyan: and ofc it's sexy <3
22:17 Sekai-nyan: www
22:18 Sekai-nyan: baka don't be mad xDE
22:18 Sekai-nyan: xD*
22:18 Sekai-nyan: i'm just giving some suggestions orz'
22:19 Sekai-nyan: 04:26:460 (4) - maybe another ctrl+g here as well o.o
22:19 Andrea: no I'm not mad =w=
22:20 Andrea: yes nice!
22:20 Andrea: didn't though of that lol
22:20 Sekai-nyan: lol
22:20 Sekai-nyan: baka
22:21 Sekai-nyan: 04:40:260 (5) - you did much more spacing on other kiai
22:21 Sekai-nyan: why this has small spacing xD
22:22 Andrea: to overlap with next slider :P
22:22 Sekai-nyan: oh
22:22 Sekai-nyan: didn't notice =w=
22:23 Sekai-nyan: 04:58:060 (1) - how about sticking this note with this 04:56:460 (3) -
22:23 Sekai-nyan: o3o
22:24 Sekai-nyan: 05:23:260 (8) - this would be better with ctrl+g and you ofc know why lol
22:25 Andrea: okay fixed it =w=
22:25 Andrea: hmm but then it would flow bad on next slider ><
22:25 Sekai-nyan: well
22:25 Sekai-nyan: you can space it more or something o.o
22:25 Sekai-nyan: it's app map so it's understandable xD
22:26 Sekai-nyan: btw 05:46:260 (2) - don't you think this repeat flows weird
22:26 Sekai-nyan: I kinda don't how to fix this tbh xD
22:27 Andrea: blame the guitar
22:27 Andrea: can't fix that xD
22:27 Sekai-nyan: orz
22:28 Sekai-nyan: you should've just stoped when the vocals were done xD
22:28 Sekai-nyan: ok that's all ww
22:28 Andrea: the guitar part is epic
22:29 Andrea: I wouldn't skip :3
22:29 Sekai-nyan: but still
22:29 Sekai-nyan: seems hard to map orz
22:29 Andrea: but I did! :D
22:29 Sekai-nyan: prodrea ww
22:29 Andrea: okay fixed :3
Topic Starter
Andrea
Thanks for the nice and helpful mods rEdo, Asagi and Sekai-nyan!

The map is way better now <3
CSLM
Andrea, oldest mapper active in osu o/
take a star~
BeatofIke
Star~ owo
Xiaolin

BeatofIke wrote:

Star~ owo
Lally
da baka mod o3o
18:04 Lally: da IRC mod o3o
18:05 Lally: audio lead in pls +2000
18:06 Andrea: okay
18:07 Lally: 00:16:060 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - secondo me potresti dare delle forme a questi stream invece di essere lazy e farli dritti o3o
18:08 Lally: 00:18:660 (6,7,8,9,10) -
18:09 Lally: 00:38:460 (1) - un paio di grind up per fare una cosa carina tipo http://puu.sh/e9Jxp/ae0d81fe1f.jpg
18:12 Lally: e poi http://puu.sh/e9JLP/cb2549c694.jpg per 01:00:060 (4,5) - falli curvi
18:14 Lally: 01:00:760 (6,1) - allora per questo slider lo puoi fare blanket con 01:00:360 (5) - per poi fare una cosa del genere
18:15 Lally: http://puu.sh/e9Kb1/ee5633ccef.jpg
18:15 Lally: http://puu.sh/e9Kcj/45bf8cdb63.jpg
18:15 Lally: 01:00:860 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
18:15 Lally: non mi piaceva la pattern in se =w=
18:15 Lally: se vuoi ti do in code
18:16 Lally: 01:01:460 (3,4) -
18:16 Lally: 01:05:860 (5) - new combo
18:17 Lally: 01:11:260 (2) - questo è un po meh non flowa bene ma non mi viene in mente come fixarlo
18:18 Lally: 01:15:660 (1,2,3,4) - odio
18:19 Lally: 01:36:860 (2,3,4,5,6) - qui hai tutto lo spazio per modellare lo stream
18:19 Lally: 01:35:460 (3,4,5,6,7) -
18:19 Andrea: 01:27:460 (3,4,5,6,7) -
18:21 Lally: 02:16:260 (5) - nc
18:23 Lally: qui 02:22:360 (1,2) - tipo una cosa del genere http://puu.sh/e9Lkb/033e00a572.jpg facendo ctrl+ghj e bla bla
18:24 Lally: 02:41:860 (1,2,3,4,5) - rimuovi il 2 e il 4 sembra overmappato il ritmo qui
18:25 Lally: 03:18:860 (11) - new combo ?
18:26 Lally: 03:51:660 - add
18:27 Andrea: 03:38:660 (7) -
18:28 Lally: 704:14:060 (6) -
18:28 Lally: vocal
18:28 Lally: 04:14:060 (6) -
18:28 Lally: 04:14:460 - finish
18:28 Lally: 04:20:860 -
18:30 Lally: 04:47:760 (7) - finire e fare uno square per un flow migliore?
18:30 Lally: 04:40:260 (5) - non farlo toccare sul prossimo slider
18:31 Lally: qui tipo http://puu.sh/e9MvZ/2c630507c3.jpg 04:50:060 (1) -
18:32 Lally: 04:57:060 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1) - ♥
18:32 Lally: 05:08:060 (2,3,4,5,6) -
18:32 Lally: per lo shape dello stream
18:34 Lally: http://puu.sh/e9MT5/9d0caa646e.jpg 05:22:860 (7,8) -
18:34 Lally: è piu' carino
18:35 Andrea: ora controllo il resto a breve
18:35 Lally: 05:31:460 (5) - dinuovo non farlo toccare con il prossimo slider
18:35 Andrea: =w=
18:37 Lally: 06:05:260 - dici troppo stupido mettere qui alla fine una fontana kiai? o3o
18:37 Lally: comunque nient'altro =w=

staru for u o3o
Musty
"Ma Chérie" in japanese seems weird lmao
Gero
Perfect map as always ♥

Changes/Fixes

  1. Fixed some rhythmical patterns.
  2. Added some claps to keep the consistency.
  3. Fixed some patterns to increase the aesthetics and to improve the flow.
Log
2015-01-09 09:31 Andrea: btw you should check this again since I reworked it a bit :3
2015-01-09 09:31 Andrea: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/585605 petit milady - Ma Cherie [Lovers]]
2015-01-09 09:31 Gero: omg yes
2015-01-09 09:31 Andrea: I'll spec you o3o
2015-01-09 09:31 Gero: let me redownload it , wait <3
2015-01-09 09:31 Andrea: yup :3
2015-01-09 09:32 Gero: updated
2015-01-09 09:32 Gero: o3o
2015-01-09 09:32 Andrea: yay :D
2015-01-09 09:33 Gero: nice custom name
2015-01-09 09:33 Gero: it fits with me xD
2015-01-09 09:33 Gero: okno
2015-01-09 09:33 Andrea: haha <3
2015-01-09 09:37 Gero: too moe for my eyes
2015-01-09 09:37 Andrea: >w<
2015-01-09 09:39 Andrea: this song is too awesome <3
2015-01-09 09:40 Gero: let me check
2015-01-09 09:41 Andrea: it's a lot streamy, weird from me ;A;
2015-01-09 09:41 Gero: isn't weird o3o I like it a lot
2015-01-09 09:42 Andrea: I'm glad you like it <3
2015-01-09 09:42 Gero: sb pls
2015-01-09 09:44 Andrea: it's 6 mins long though xD
2015-01-09 09:44 Gero: like tamame map? xD
2015-01-09 09:44 Gero: 04:53:560 (1) - ugly slider remap pls
2015-01-09 09:44 Gero: kudos pls
2015-01-09 09:45 Gero: jk
2015-01-09 09:45 Andrea: omg
2015-01-09 09:45 Andrea: how did I miss that
2015-01-09 09:45 Gero: cause you're baka
2015-01-09 09:46 Gero: 05:24:860 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - isn't symmetrical, that makes me sad </3
2015-01-09 09:46 Andrea: fixed it orz x.x
2015-01-09 09:47 Andrea: I should make that jump better
2015-01-09 09:47 Andrea: let me fix xD
2015-01-09 09:51 Andrea: okay done o3o
2015-01-09 09:52 Gero: 00:29:260 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Just a nazi thing but what do you think to make a better jump at this part 00:29:660 - since that blanket seems quite awful at the least for me anyways if you fix this you should remake the next pattern. (Example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2486167)
2015-01-09 09:52 Gero: you're a free to ignore that since is a nazi thing =3=
2015-01-09 09:52 Andrea: let me see what can I do :3
2015-01-09 09:57 Gero: 00:44:860 (9,1,2) - maybe it's just me but the flow here is a bit forcing what about to try something different here instead? maybe this (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2486199 // http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2486209)
2015-01-09 09:58 Gero: links orz ( http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2486199 // http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2486209 )
2015-01-09 09:58 Gero: QAQ
2015-01-09 09:59 Andrea: hmm yeah I agree
2015-01-09 09:59 Gero: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2486199 here
2015-01-09 10:00 Gero: it's just a example yeah =3=
2015-01-09 10:00 Andrea: that's amazing yes <3
2015-01-09 10:00 Gero: yay <3
2015-01-09 10:01 Gero: 00:56:460 (6,1) - can you stack both circles properly?
2015-01-09 10:03 Andrea: fixed :3
2015-01-09 10:03 Andrea: I'm doing the same on next parts as well for everything btw
2015-01-09 10:03 Gero: sure
2015-01-09 10:04 Gero: 01:11:460 (3,4,5,1) - sorry for being annoying about the flow but here is like nope, I think it would flow better by this way https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2486263
2015-01-09 10:05 Andrea: not annoying, I was unsure about that pattern as well xD
2015-01-09 10:05 Gero: 01:14:760 (5,6) - fix that blanket TwT
2015-01-09 10:05 Gero: 01:24:860 (5,1) - ^
2015-01-09 10:08 Andrea: kinda hard to fix 2nd one xD
2015-01-09 10:08 Andrea: let me try
2015-01-09 10:08 Gero: 02:52:760 (5,7,9) - claps? sounds better imo
2015-01-09 10:08 Andrea: nvm I could
2015-01-09 10:08 Gero: keep it if you want xD
2015-01-09 10:11 Gero: 03:08:660 (5,6,7) - I didn't notice it when I test that but the spacing here is a bit inconsistent and to be honest a jump here is random since there aren't any change at the music.
2015-01-09 10:11 Gero: ah nvm you did the same thing 03:10:460 (8,9,10,1) - here xD
2015-01-09 10:12 Andrea: yeah every new stack I gave emphasis with the whistles :3
2015-01-09 10:12 Andrea: fixed the rest though o3o
2015-01-09 10:15 Gero: 03:56:260 (3) - Ctrl + G maybe? you did the same thing here 03:58:260 (4) - or this is intentional? o3o
2015-01-09 10:16 Andrea: yeah I wanted to make them different somehow xD
2015-01-09 10:18 Gero: 04:31:060 (2) - yeah overmapped, the sound is from here 04:30:960 - and 04:31:160 - here imo so a quick solution would be moving 2 to the previous tick and stack it on 1, I guess
2015-01-09 10:19 Gero: http://puu.sh/ehHBP/ffae25d8d1.jpg like this =3=
2015-01-09 10:22 Gero: 05:14:461 (4,5) - blanket pls
2015-01-09 10:22 Gero: that's all for me o3o
2015-01-09 10:23 Andrea: almost finished fixing <3
2015-01-09 10:25 Andrea: that was really really helpful =w=
2015-01-09 10:25 Gero: not really ;w;
2015-01-09 10:33 Andrea: updated btw, recheck it if I did everything properly when you can please xD
2015-01-09 10:34 Andrea: post so I can kd you <3
Topic Starter
Andrea
Thanks a lot Lally and Gero for the helpful mods, love you. <3

And also thanks to everyone for supporting and starring as well. ><
Gero
I'm totally agree with this, good luck.
~ Bubbled #1 ~
Nyukai
I'll take care of this soon.
riffy
Poke me after applying Inyus' suggestions.
Nyukai
IRC modded :3

Not much to point out, this is really well done. We've did some flow improvements, fixed minor things... And also some spacing.

IRC
15:15 Inyuschan: sure, you can irc now then?
15:15 Andrea: sure owo
15:15 Inyuschan: let's see
15:16 Inyuschan: why that diff name?
15:16 Inyuschan: idk what is the song about
15:16 Inyuschan: lel
15:16 Andrea: ma cherie means my darling
15:16 Andrea: it's french :P
15:17 Inyuschan: okay so maybe it fits well
15:17 Inyuschan: xD
15:21 Inyuschan: 00:45:160 - Hm... I might miss a triplet here
15:21 Inyuschan: :x
15:22 Andrea: I don't really hear any sound here @.@
15:22 Andrea: it's the guitar sound maybe, but it won't fit as note imo
15:22 Andrea: 00:38:460 (1) - same here for example
15:23 Inyuschan: 00:38:460 (1) - it's not exactly the same because the red tick is less audible, so is less important clicking it
15:23 Inyuschan: but meh, if you say so
15:23 Inyuschan: is not a problem but it would fit for me xD
15:24 Andrea: mostly because my patterns would be inconsistent if I do that ;w;
15:24 Andrea: since every lyric phrases there's always that kind of guitar sound
15:24 Inyuschan: yeah I can understand
15:24 Inyuschan: okay xD
15:24 Andrea: 00:32:060 (1) - same on this slider repeat
15:26 Inyuschan: 00:56:060 (5,6) - I feel like this stack is a bit uncomfortable if you ask me... Moving it to x:296 y:208 (more or less) would look better and it also makes a triangle pattern with 00:57:260 (1,2) -
15:26 Inyuschan: keeping this stack 00:56:060 (5,1) - is fine though
15:27 Inyuschan: though I doubt it because the different spacing ww idk
15:28 Inyuschan: http://puu.sh/eycsV/f4c19ec3d0.jpg or this
15:28 Inyuschan: just a little suggestion tho =w=
15:28 Andrea: fixed it in a similiar way =3=
15:28 Inyuschan: okay~
15:29 Inyuschan: 01:00:060 (4,5) - uh, this flows a bit weird imo
15:30 Inyuschan: http://puu.sh/eycGf/2f1fa40a21.jpg maybe something like this
15:31 Andrea: seems reasonable, changed~
15:32 Inyuschan: just a comment, 01:00:860 (1,2,3) - you've been using this rhythm sometimes, which I don't agree with at all, because the stanza needs to be clicked for me
15:32 Inyuschan: and looks weird starting NC so early xD I'd consider this for future maps (?
15:32 Andrea: well the kiai is full of doubles, without sliders it would be too empty otherwise orz
15:33 Inyuschan: yeah I can understand x)
15:33 Andrea: aaaand my comboing is weird, already know that :D
15:33 Andrea: I'm always following the new stanzas
15:34 Inyuschan: it's fine
15:34 Inyuschan: 01:11:460 (3,4) - hm, you might did this for the jump, but I don't like how it's flowing; this looks better for me http://puu.sh/eydh9/73d205172d.jpg
15:35 Inyuschan: but if you want to keep the jump, it's ok
15:35 Inyuschan: 01:16:460 (3,5) - what about making them symmetrical xD
15:35 Andrea: yeah I wanted to make a different kind of flow here
15:36 Andrea: huh they aren't? D: I'll try to stack it better
15:36 Inyuschan: wait
15:36 Inyuschan: 01:16:460 (3) - y:108
15:36 Inyuschan: 01:16:860 (5) - y:109
15:36 Inyuschan: lel
15:36 Andrea: should be better
15:36 Andrea: yup fixed lol
15:36 Inyuschan: kinda nazi but I noticed
15:36 Inyuschan: xDDD
15:37 Inyuschan: 01:19:660 (4,5,6,1) - you're obsessed with squares
15:37 Inyuschan: (?)
15:37 Andrea: how did you even notice it lol
15:37 Andrea: squares are awesome :D
15:37 Inyuschan: yeah I know xD idk, but I noticed it but simple view LOL
15:38 Andrea: next part btw is structured really similiar to the other
15:38 Inyuschan: okay, what is coming looks like it's a copypaste of the beginning xD so everything I said should be applied again I think
15:38 Andrea: and I've already applied the same fixes
15:38 Andrea: I readed you faster :P
15:38 Inyuschan: lel
15:38 Inyuschan: don't read my mind
15:39 Andrea: I changed most spacings, just used same kind of patterns yeah
15:39 Andrea: xD
15:39 Inyuschan: okay xD
15:39 Inyuschan: 02:55:060 (6,1) - since you can't add NC in stanza these ones should be swapped o3o
15:40 Andrea: 02:54:460 (5) - actually I should NC this
15:40 Andrea: HOW DID I FAIL
15:40 Andrea: fixed it ;w;
15:40 Inyuschan: it happens sometimes xD
15:41 Andrea: fixed it now :3
15:41 Inyuschan: yeah, I'm still checking o3o
15:41 Inyuschan: go go we're almost finishing (?
15:41 Inyuschan: 03:58:660 (5) - hm, after here, don't you feel like there should be a spinner? o3o
15:42 Inyuschan: finishing here 04:01:660 (with 5% volume at the end)
15:42 Inyuschan: ok my fault lel
15:42 Inyuschan: if you don't consider it necessary there I'll understand
15:43 Andrea: yup I leaved it empty to give the musical "effect"
15:43 Andrea: I'm not sure how to explain it xD
15:43 Andrea: but I guess you got it o3o
15:43 Inyuschan: ah yeah
15:43 Inyuschan: got it
15:43 Inyuschan: np
15:44 Inyuschan: 04:02:060 (1) - I know you have your hitsounds consistency buuuut... basically this part feels empty sometimes without whistles
15:44 Inyuschan: well let's test
15:44 Andrea: I follow piano on this part
15:44 Inyuschan: just in case it would sound bad
15:44 Inyuschan: oh o3o
15:44 Inyuschan: true
15:44 Andrea: if you hear every piano sound there's a whistle
15:44 Inyuschan: yeah yeah
15:44 Inyuschan: sry
15:44 Andrea: 04:30:060 (5) - until here :3
15:45 Andrea: following vocal would've been weird I think xD
15:45 Andrea: since it's really calm
15:45 Andrea: no need to be sorry baka =w=
15:45 Andrea: actually, do you think spacing is too low maybe?
15:45 Inyuschan: yeah maybe, but this hitsounds sound a bit annoying if you don't add nothing xD but are good :>
15:46 Inyuschan: well
15:46 Inyuschan: people that likes to play hard maps
15:46 Inyuschan: would say yes
15:46 Andrea: I'll increase it a bit more
15:46 Andrea: same patterns, just a bit more spacing for that part
15:46 Inyuschan: I don't consider it necessary but up to you :3
15:46 Inyuschan: since it's an Insane (not Extra, like some approval maps), should be fine
15:46 Andrea: just from 1.2x to 1.3x
15:47 Inyuschan: nice o3o
15:48 Inyuschan: 05:08:660 (6) - Ctrl+J here?
15:48 Inyuschan: flows better with the next note
15:48 Inyuschan: (same place ofc)
15:48 Andrea: gonna check once I fixed the spacing :3
15:48 Inyuschan: ah, okay
15:48 Inyuschan: then I'll wait
15:48 Andrea: almost done anyway x)
15:48 Inyuschan: okay :3
15:51 Inyuschan: btw, once you update, mod my map *runs*
15:52 Andrea: yep I will =w=
15:52 Inyuschan: o3o~
15:52 Andrea: fixed that suggestion btw, nice catch
15:53 Inyuschan: okay, can I continue? owo
15:55 Andrea: sure =w=
15:55 Inyuschan: okay
15:56 Inyuschan: 05:50:660 (4) - what about this? http://puu.sh/eyfHV/1ac296d8ca.jpg for a better flow imo o3o
15:58 Andrea: fixed~
15:59 Andrea: 05:47:260 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - blanket master btw :D
15:59 Inyuschan: yeah xD
16:00 Inyuschan: okay
16:00 Inyuschan: that's all for me
16:00 Inyuschan: update please :3

Bubbled #2~
riffy
So, we did an IRC check.

Changes:
  1. Minor rhythm improvements
  2. A few very minor fixes
  3. A little hitsound change

    Everything looks good to go, and we didn't change much. :)
IRC log
20:05 Andrea: your post was unexpected xD
20:05 Andrea: Inyus is about to give 2nd bubble now o.o/
20:05 Andrea: we can irc if you want :D
20:06 -Bakari-: Oh, cool
20:06 -Bakari-: \w/
20:06 Andrea: my map is irc mod only
20:06 Andrea: lol
20:07 Andrea: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/3718613 hype \w/
20:07 -Bakari-: Okay, cool
20:07 -Bakari-: let me re-dl the map :3
20:08 Andrea: okay >.</
20:09 -Bakari-: let's start with a simple metadata check :3
20:09 Andrea: hopefully it's all good!
20:11 -Bakari-: Yep, it's all good to go
20:11 -Bakari-: [http://petitmilady.com/disco/disco11.html 1] / [http://www.universal-music.co.jp/petit-milady/products/poce-1404/ 2]
20:12 Andrea: awesome! I actually used 2nd site :D
20:13 -Bakari-: I believe there is a tag missing
20:13 -Bakari-: osuplayer111
20:14 Andrea: oh my god you're right
20:14 Andrea: how did I miss that
20:15 Andrea: fixed it :3
20:17 -Bakari-: http://puu.sh/eyi45.png
20:17 -Bakari-: AiBat and AiMod don't mention anything serious either
20:17 Andrea: great \o/
20:17 Andrea: I'm safe from Tic xD
20:18 -Bakari-: No any weird stuff like hitsound-delays
20:18 -Bakari-: So, we are also safe from that point
20:19 Andrea: glad to hear that :D
20:19 -Bakari-: let me do a little testplay :)
20:20 Andrea: sure thing :3
20:23 -Bakari-: either my ears are fooling me, or I hear nothing at 00:17:060 (7,10) -
20:24 Andrea: if you wonder about the whole map structure, I've followed drums
20:24 Andrea: because most of it is like that xD
20:24 Andrea: at least on the intense parts
20:25 -Bakari-: Okay then, I guess we can let it be as it is
20:25 Andrea: hope it's okay!
20:26 -Bakari-: 00:27:660 (1,2,3) - can we make 1/2 a little more distinguishable from 1/4? A little (x1.4-x1.6) jump would make it way more readable
20:26 Andrea: okay gonna fix that
20:27 Andrea: I hope 1.1x could be enough
20:28 -Bakari-: Let's try 1.2x, this will be obvious
20:28 Andrea: alright let's go for 1.2x then
20:29 Andrea: fixed it
20:32 -Bakari-: 00:59:860 (3,4,5) - kinda the same as above
20:33 Andrea: it's already 1.6x though ;w; how much should I make it?
20:34 -Bakari-: 00:59:860 (3,4) - 1,1x here
20:34 -Bakari-: 01:01:460 (3,4) - and here
20:35 -Bakari-: I'm going super-nazi just because I can't really find anything else @.@ hope you don't mind
20:35 Andrea: you want me to space them closed?
20:35 Andrea: if you mean that I'd prefer to not do it, I dislike them being so close orz ;__;
20:35 -Bakari-: http://puu.sh/eykhX.jpg
20:35 Andrea: and no it's all good :3
20:36 Andrea: ohhh I got it now, sorry I'm slow xD
20:36 -Bakari-: 01:01:460 (3,4) - same stuff here [2]
20:37 Andrea: gonna fix them all
20:37 Andrea: got the idea ^^
20:37 -Bakari-: 01:33:960 (3,4,5,6) - and another minor suggestion, take a look at this in the test mode
20:38 -Bakari-: osu! unstacks them automatically and you might be not satisfied with the outcome
20:38 Andrea: I'll move it down a bit
20:40 -Bakari-: I'm a little worried about copypasted things, but they sound the same, so I believe that's gonna be okay
20:40 Andrea: yup I've used the same patterns but changed the spacing, since the song is completely the same until 2nd kiai end
20:40 Andrea: blame my lazyness ;;
20:41 Andrea: rest is different though
20:42 Andrea: fixed the rest you mentioned on the kiais btw
20:43 -Bakari-: 02:05:260 (1) - I hate this kind of stuff, but can we move it a little higher? [http://puu.sh/eyl8x.jpg that's why]
20:44 Andrea: moved 2 grids up
20:44 -Bakari-: 02:37:660 (2,3,4,5,6) - I was a little confused with this, it might be misread as 1/2 @.@
20:45 -Bakari-: Yay, finally. Not a nazi suggestion!
20:45 -Bakari-: 02:43:260 (1,2) - try to Ctrl+G them, so the downbeats and vocals will be stressed
20:45 -Bakari-: [http://puu.sh/eyls9.jpg a picture]
20:47 -Bakari-: 03:08:660 (5,6,7) - dude, you will hate me for these spacing suggestions, sorry @.@
20:48 Andrea: all should be fixed now :3
20:50 -Bakari-: 03:36:460 (1,2,3) - these three feel a little unnatural. The most logical thing is to place a long slider like 03:33:260 (1,5) - since that's what vocals are asking for
20:51 Andrea: I'm following the piano here ><
20:51 Andrea: 03:42:860 (1,2,3,4) - like here
20:51 Andrea: I did 1 part vocal, 1 part piano
20:51 Andrea: repeating all time
20:51 Andrea: to not make it repetitive
20:51 Andrea: same repeats on other parts as well
20:51 Andrea: vocal/piano/vocal/piano
20:51 Andrea: etc.
20:52 -Bakari-: Maybe we can try 40% volume or something like that, then?
20:52 -Bakari-: It just feels like... meh, like it's going off piano
20:52 -Bakari-: so, quiter hitsounds should make this feeling go away
20:53 Andrea: 40% for the whole section or just the piano parts?
20:53 Andrea: alright :3 let me try
20:53 -Bakari-: just the piano
20:54 -Bakari-: 03:47:060 (2,3) - Ctrl+G them. It's better to have sliders begin on white ticks
20:54 -Bakari-: afterwise, you'll have to take care of re-spacing, I guess
20:54 Andrea: 40% feels a bit low, I'll make it 50% instead
20:54 -Bakari-: Okay, sounds cool to me
20:56 Andrea: okay fixed the volume on piano parts :3
20:56 -Bakari-: 03:57:260 (1,2,3,4,5) - the increasing noise and the whole sound feels more like a spinner to me
20:57 -Bakari-: 04:03:260 (1) - the downbeat is unclickable as it is mapped with a slidertail. What if we try to stress it? [http://puu.sh/eymJn.jpg ~]
20:58 -Bakari-: 04:04:860 (1) - ^
21:00 Andrea: all fixed except the last one, I'm not sure how would I fix that because I've used it for the whole time ;w;
21:00 Andrea: I'd prefer to keep that if possible
21:00 -Bakari-: sure, as you wish :)
21:01 -Bakari-: 04:12:460 (5,6) - I believe they will fit better as a slider
21:02 -Bakari-: there is practically nothing at 04:12:660 so a slider will fit better, I think
21:02 Andrea: changed to slider
21:02 -Bakari-: 04:15:560 (5,6,7) - just a reminder to make them more readable :3
21:03 -Bakari-: 04:19:460 (8,1) - probably you'd prefer to have a blanket here
21:04 Andrea: made a blanket :D/
21:04 -Bakari-: 04:34:760 (6,7,8) - this will be more playable with equal DS values. the rhythm switches to the blue ticks, so, a jump may mislead players
21:05 -Bakari-: 04:39:860 (4,5,6) - might be just me, but if you Ctrl+g them they seem to fit better
21:05 -Bakari-: 04:52:660 (4,5,6,1) - ^
21:07 Andrea: let me try
21:09 -Bakari-: 05:22:860 (7,8) - can we make the second reverse more noticeable? [http://puu.sh/eyocr.jpg a simple example]
21:22 Andrea: I made a better pattern though, so you'll see :D
21:23 Andrea: and used 1/3 of course~
21:24 -Bakari-: 05:45:160 (3) - I might be going deaf, but there's also a chance that this circle is overmapped
21:25 Andrea: yeah that one is actually overmapped lol
21:25 Andrea: I made a custom rhythm on that, can't deny xD
21:26 -Bakari-: are you sure you want it here?
21:26 Andrea: let me try to remove it
21:27 Andrea: hmm yeah I'd like to keep it if it's fine for you @.@
21:30 -Bakari-: Well, if you have a reason, it's cool
21:30 -Bakari-: Anyways, is the diffname actually related to the song?
21:30 Andrea: mostly because I feel it breaks the rest of the rhythm if I remove it
21:30 Andrea: Ma Cherie in French means My Darling
21:31 -Bakari-: Yep, refering to a female person
21:31 Andrea: it's a sad love song
21:31 -Bakari-: ^ that's enough
21:31 -Bakari-: I couldn't find a translation, so
21:32 -Bakari-: Okay, that should be it
21:32 -Bakari-: Update, I'll recheck
21:33 Andrea: okay then \o/
21:34 Andrea: updated! btw the mods was pretty helpful and not nazi
21:34 -Bakari-: I actually tried to google-translate [http://j-lyric.net/artist/a05793f/l03148c.html this]
21:34 Andrea: I appreciate any kind of mods
21:34 -Bakari-: As long as it looks helpful for you - I'm happy :)
21:35 -Bakari-: let me delete and re-dl the map
21:35 -Bakari-: just to make sure that there're no BSS issues :)
21:35 Andrea: alright :3

Let the flame burn, Mon Cheri!


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Topic Starter
Andrea
Thank you so much Gero, Inyus and Bakari. <3

You guys are awesome!

Thanks to everyone who supported this map as well, of course. :)
Gero
Congrats dear o/
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