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~Normal~
  1. I would increase HP Drain by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.


~theramdans' Hard~
  1. 01:13:477 (3,4) - I know that there is a small gap to recover here, but I would move (3) a bit more down instead of placing it so high, for having a better distance between the objects, don't forget this is a Hard difficulty after all.
  2. 01:14:594 (2) - CTRL+G on this slider would flow better imo.


~Light Insane~
  1. 00:16:030 (1) - This new combo here feels randomly placed, it would be better if you add it on the next slider instead, since you have a small jump there.
  2. 01:27:280 (2,3) - These circles could be stacked better.


~Insane~
  1. Using OD8 would make more sense imo.
  1. 00:23:850 (5) - Weird overlap with the previous circle, would be better if you stack it with instead.
  2. 01:19:222 (1) - A finish would be better at the beginning of this slider instead of a clap.


~Irreversible's Extra~
  1. OD9,5 is too much for this song imo, 9 is more than enough.


~Absolute Duo~
  1. Using OD9 would be nice like the other Extra difficulty, you're using 8 on Insane already, so don't do it twice.
  1. 00:11:881 (1,1) - Remove these new combos, they're not necessary.
  2. 00:15:233 (6) - Pretty weird slider shape, I would simply make it curve instead.
  3. 00:34:860 (1,2) - Spacing here is way too close, move (2) somewhere else.
  4. 00:38:371 (3,1) - Same as above.
  5. 01:23:689 (2,3,4) - The whole kiai is really jumpy and then these aren't that much jumpy, it feels a bit weird, make the spacing bigger.
  6. 01:25:605 (8,1) - Even though there's a new combo here, people might get confused and click (1) too fast, I'd suggest to move the whole pattern a bit more to the right, that would be better.


Good luck :3
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DahplA wrote:

M4M

theramdans' Hard
01:02:626 (1) - Read above in "Insane" (also it applies less, as the sliderend represents another vocal so it makes a bit more sense) - I dont emphasize this slider to the vocal, instead I did it to the music (the sound you can hear after the vocal stops there, idk what to name it). Plus, the blanket is pretty there, wont change it

Andrea wrote:

~theramdans' Hard~

01:13:477 (3,4) - I know that there is a small gap to recover here, but I would move (3) a bit more down instead of placing it so high, for having a better distance between the objects, don't forget this is a Hard difficulty after all. Agree,fixed
01:14:594 (2) - CTRL+G on this slider would flow better imo.It was like this back then, but it still flows good, changed
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Andrea wrote:

~Normal~
  1. I would increase HP Drain by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings. Increased to hp4


~Light Insane~
  1. 00:16:030 (1) - This new combo here feels randomly placed, it would be better if you add it on the next slider instead, since you have a small jump there. Done
  2. 01:27:280 (2,3) - These circles could be stacked better. Fixed I love automatic stacking


~Insane~
  1. Using OD8 would make more sense imo. Changed to od8
  1. 00:23:850 (5) - Weird overlap with the previous circle, would be better if you stack it with instead. Changed to half stack
  2. 01:19:222 (1) - A finish would be better at the beginning of this slider instead of a clap. Fixed and applied to all my diffs


~Absolute Duo~
  1. Using OD9 would be nice like the other Extra difficulty, you're using 8 on Insane already, so don't do it twice. Done
  1. 00:11:881 (1,1) - Remove these new combos, they're not necessary. Done
  2. 00:15:233 (6) - Pretty weird slider shape, I would simply make it curve instead. Done
  3. 00:34:860 (1,2) - Spacing here is way too close, move (2) somewhere else. Done
  4. 00:38:371 (3,1) - Same as above. Done
  5. 01:23:689 (2,3,4) - The whole kiai is really jumpy and then these aren't that much jumpy, it feels a bit weird, make the spacing bigger. Done
  6. 01:25:605 (8,1) - Even though there's a new combo here, people might get confused and click (1) too fast, I'd suggest to move the whole pattern a bit more to the right, that would be better. Done


Good luck :3
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Hi Owntrolf. I'm just going to focus on the difficulties that actually needs improvement/polishing in order to save time. There's just too many difficulties lol.

Oh and stop highlighting random BN/QAT members in-game orz \>.</


[General]
  1. Optional, but you could probably make Normal difficulty a bit harder to match the N-H spread a bit more o3o. The note density on Hard is much higher than on normal difficulty (not to mention the huge AR difference as well).


[Easy]
  1. 00:00:233 (1,2,3) - To make this part easier for novices, I would personally re-arrange the rhythm like this:
  2. 00:49:701 (3) - Oddly shaped slider you got there. How about something like this? o3o
    396,248,49701,2,0,B|376:288|340:304|340:304|276:256|276:256|240:272|200:256,1,240,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  3. 01:03:903 (1,2) - Try re-shaping these sliders like this:

    480,320,63903,6,0,B|360:320,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    296,272,64701,2,0,P|282:234|292:196,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  4. 01:12:839 (4) - This slider can be polished too. Try this o3o:

    396,164,72839,2,0,B|340:180|340:180|332:224|332:224|276:240,1,160,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
  5. 01:23:052 (5) - I'll probably add a new combo here due to new vocal section and remove combo at 01:24:647 (1).


[Normal]
  1. 00:00:233 (1,2,3) - Quites similar to Easy difficulty. Try making this pattern easier to read by re-arranging the rhythm like this (here are two examples):

  2. 00:05:020 (5) - Add a normal sampleset here. I think you missed it o3o.
  3. 00:26:403 (2,3) - Try replacing these notes with 1/1 sliders. It will follow the vocals better imo. Give it try :3
  4. 00:34:701 (2,3) - I would delete the note at 2 since it doesn't follow the vocals (which is most prominent at this part) and revamp this rhythm to something like this:
  5. 00:36:137 (4,5) - In addition, I would do the same at this part as well starting at 00:36:137. If done correctly to both, 00:34:860 (2,3,4,5) should look like this afterwards:
  6. 00:43:637 (1) - I re-polished this slider since it was a bit off blanket:
    100,192,43637,6,0,B|100:236|100:236|92:364|268:364|260:236|260:236|260:192|260:192|316:192|360:148|360:80,1,540,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  7. 00:47:147 (2,3) - More nazi polishing. I know it's very minor, but hey you need it:
    126,344,47147,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    234,344,47467,2,0,B|324:344|324:344|324:255,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  8. 01:06:456 (4) - I can hear a cymbal crash at the start of this slider. How about adding a soft-finish there.
  9. 01:19:222 (1,2) - Weird flow here. Try making 2 a linear slider:


[theramdans' Hard]
  1. Nothing to really point out, but the slider at 00:43:637 (1) is probably the only oddly shaped slider on this map lol.


[Light Insane]
  1. 00:03:105 (2,4) - I really don't like these short length angular sliders, it just looks weird imo. I would just remove the red anchor point and let it breathe. If fixed, I suggest fixing the rest with the sliders that looks like these lol.
  2. 00:11:562 (5,7) - Not perfectly stacked.
  3. 00:24:807 (3,4,5) - Very weird flow here. Maybe space these patterns out a litlle bit o3o.
  4. 00:26:403 (4) - You might as well reverse select this note lol.
  5. 00:49:701 (4) - Another odd-shaped slider lol. Try to make a nicer shape like this:
  6. 00:52:493 (2,3,4,5) - Ghost 1/4 notes lol
  7. 01:06:456 (1) - Add finish at the start of this slider? o.o
  8. 01:22:413 (2) - Remove finish at the start of this slider. I don't hear any strong sounds here.


[Insane]
  1. Good enough. Just remove the usused green timing section at 00:00:233.


To be honest, I think theramdans' Hard, Insane, and Irreversible's Extra are good to go imo. I think your Light Insane needs the most polishing out of all of the difficulties in this mapset. Call me back for a re-check once you are ready~

Moving this mapset back to a star icon, since this mapset was popped 9 months ago~
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lol wut stars have meanings?
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BeatofIke wrote:

Hi Owntrolf. I'm just going to focus on the difficulties that actually needs improvement/polishing in order to save time. There's just too many difficulties lol.

Oh and stop highlighting random BN/QAT members in-game orz \>.</


[General]
  • Optional, but you could probably make Normal difficulty a bit harder to match the N-H spread a bit more o3o. The note density on Hard is much higher than on normal difficulty (not to mention the huge AR difference as well).


[Easy]
  • 00:00:233 (1,2,3) - To make this part easier for novices, I would personally re-arrange the rhythm like this: Done

    00:49:701 (3) - Oddly shaped slider you got there. How about something like this? o3o Done
    396,248,49701,2,0,B|376:288|340:304|340:304|276:256|276:256|240:272|200:256,1,240,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

    01:03:903 (1,2) - Try re-shaping these sliders like this: Done

    480,320,63903,6,0,B|360:320,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    296,272,64701,2,0,P|282:234|292:196,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

    01:12:839 (4) - This slider can be polished too. Try this o3o: Done

    396,164,72839,2,0,B|340:180|340:180|332:224|332:224|276:240,1,160,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:

    01:23:052 (5) - I'll probably add a new combo here due to new vocal section and remove combo at 01:24:647 (1). Done


[Normal]
  • 00:00:233 (1,2,3) - Quites similar to Easy difficulty. Try making this pattern easier to read by re-arranging the rhythm like this (here are two examples): Done


    00:05:020 (5) - Add a normal sampleset here. I think you missed it o3o. Fixed
    00:26:403 (2,3) - Try replacing these notes with 1/1 sliders. It will follow the vocals better imo. Give it try :3 Im shit
    00:34:701 (2,3) - I would delete the note at 2 since it doesn't follow the vocals (which is most prominent at this part) and revamp this rhythm to something like this:

    00:36:137 (4,5) - In addition, I would do the same at this part as well starting at 00:36:137. If done correctly to both, 00:34:860 (2,3,4,5) should look like this afterwards:

    00:43:637 (1) - I re-polished this slider since it was a bit off blanket: Done
    100,192,43637,6,0,B|100:236|100:236|92:364|268:364|260:236|260:236|260:192|260:192|316:192|360:148|360:80,1,540,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

    00:47:147 (2,3) - More nazi polishing. I know it's very minor, but hey you need it: Done
    126,344,47147,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    234,344,47467,2,0,B|324:344|324:344|324:255,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

    01:06:456 (4) - I can hear a cymbal crash at the start of this slider. How about adding a soft-finish there. Done
    01:19:222 (1,2) - Weird flow here. Try making 2 a linear slider: Done


[Light Insane]
  • 00:03:105 (2,4) - I really don't like these short length angular sliders, it just looks weird imo. I would just remove the red anchor point and let it breathe. If fixed, I suggest fixing the rest with the sliders that looks like these lol. Fixed for some of them
    00:11:562 (5,7) - Not perfectly stacked. Fixed
    00:24:807 (3,4,5) - Very weird flow here. Maybe space these patterns out a litlle bit o3o. S p a c e d o u t s o m e m o r e
    00:26:403 (4) - You might as well reverse select this note lol.
    00:49:701 (4) - Another odd-shaped slider lol. Try to make a nicer shape like this: Done

    00:52:493 (2,3,4,5) - Ghost 1/4 notes lol I forgot I removed the stream in Absolute Duo kek
    01:06:456 (1) - Add finish at the start of this slider? o.o Done
    01:22:413 (2) - Remove finish at the start of this slider. I don't hear any strong sounds here. Done


[Insane]
  • Good enough. Just remove the usused green timing section at 00:00:233. Done


To be honest, I think theramdans' Hard, Insane, and Irreversible's Extra are good to go imo. I think your Light Insane needs the most polishing out of all of the difficulties in this mapset. Call me back for a re-check once you are ready~

Moving this mapset back to a star icon, since this mapset was popped 9 months ago~
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I luv you senpai please get ranked I believe
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AT LEAST I TRIED
09:57 *Anxient is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/593647 Suzuki Konomi - Absolute Soul [Absolute Duo]]
09:57 Side: xD
09:57 Anxient: fuck this
09:57 Owntrolf: absolute soul
09:57 HappyRocket88: who's absolute soul?
09:57 Xenans: im back wee
09:58 Anxient: guys im gonna do a mod. anyone wants to join me?
09:58 HappyRocket88: a new guy?
09:58 Side: just in time
09:58 Xenans: ill joins
09:58 Side: test a thing
09:58 Anxient: ook
09:58 Anxient: do the absolute soul diff
09:58 Xenans: testing a thing works too
09:58 Owntrolf: absolute soul
09:58 Xenans: all of them ok
09:58 Anxient: duo or smh
09:58 Anxient: idk
09:58 Log Off Now: RIP
09:59 Anxient: rrip who
09:59 HappyRocket88: PIR
09:59 Owntrolf: absolute soul
09:59 Anxient: peeRAAANHUUH
09:59 Anxient: 00:02:626 - why no SV increase aa
09:59 MikasaSerket: I just
09:59 BeatofIke: I'll bubble if you stop spamming "absolute soul" for at least 24 hours + if you improve your Light insane 8-)
09:59 Anxient: where is the song intensity asdf
09:59 MikasaSerket: Crashed
09:59 Anxient: OH MY GOD THE STALEMATE
09:59 Owntrolf: lol
10:00 Owntrolf: ho toe improve light insaen
10:00 Anxient: 00:32:786 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - i dont understand what this is supposed to be
10:00 Bluekrait: maybe i should start spamming manic now
10:00 Anxient: http://puu.sh/lICpB/50191ea9d4.jpg
10:00 Anxient: owntrolf you MIGHT need to remap light insane
10:01 Owntrolf: fuckyou
10:01 *Owntrolf runs
10:01 Xenans: k time to start mod
10:01 Anxient: im serious here
10:01 *Owntrolf is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/172473 Sasaki Sayaka - Reason why XXX]
10:01 Anxient: reason?
10:01 Owntrolf: also screw cloudsplash for this map
10:01 *Owntrolf is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/443806 Sasaki Sayaka - Sorahana]
10:01 Anxient: WHERE IS THE CONStENcU
10:01 Owntrolf: i remember modding their map when I started modding
10:01 Side: wait what are we modding
10:01 *Anxient is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/593647 Suzuki Konomi - Absolute Soul [Absolute Duo]]
10:01 Anxient: this
10:02 Xenans: hue
10:02 Side: oh shit we're actually doing this? xSD
10:02 *Owntrolf is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/24428 Savage Garden - I Want You [Ridiculous]]
10:02 Xenans: am i nazi modding or just an actual mod
10:02 Anxient: coz the light insane diff MUST be remapped
10:02 MikasaSerket: Anxient
10:02 Anxient: fuck this
10:02 Anxient: Xenans go buck wild
10:02 MikasaSerket: Do you mind if you testplay?
10:02 Anxient: mm
10:02 Anxient: after i rake this map
10:02 Anxient: coz this set is literally puushing ALLL my buttons
10:02 MikasaSerket: please <3
10:02 MikasaSerket: Its only one thing...
10:02 Anxient: its always one thing Kappa
10:02 MikasaSerket: Only 27 seconds...
10:02 Xenans: 00:12:998 (1,4) - oi wtf these notes don't make a triangle properly
10:02 Anxient: its probably CetipedAzer'
10:02 MikasaSerket: Please.......
10:03 MikasaSerket: Nope
10:03 MikasaSerket: http://puu.sh/lICuG/fd5dcb853f.osu
10:03 MikasaSerket: It's mikapeed
10:03 Anxient: 00:02:626 - this part to 00:11:483 - use higher SV
10:03 Anxient: Mika pm to me
10:03 Anxient: itll get lost here
10:03 Anxient: 00:07:733 (1,3) - why are these sliders so slanted
10:03 Anxient: asdf
10:03 Xenans: idk if i can even mod this because i hate tv size maps and i hate the song
10:04 Anxient: 00:08:530 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - i dont understand the flow
10:04 Anxient: I JUST DONT
10:04 Xenans: 00:28:796 (4) - eh move under other note, draw parallels
10:04 Xenans: ill start over
10:04 MikasaSerket: Whose map are we shitting on now?
10:04 Xenans: owntrolf's
10:04 MikasaSerket: Okay then
10:04 Anxient: 00:10:764 (3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/lICEh/6582aa78e2.jpg maybe do this
10:04 MikasaSerket: Don't rank absolute soul
10:04 Fake: who wants to shit on mine? :D
10:05 Anxient: i wonder if owntrolf is even looking at this LAWL
10:05 MikasaSerket: Nah
10:05 Fake: ok .-.
10:05 MikasaSerket: Fake, I will if you testplay my map
10:05 MikasaSerket: Only 30 seconds
10:05 *MikasaSerket runs
10:05 Anxient: well if he doesnt look at it ill just post the channel log
10:05 Fake: ok so test play means to just play the map? o:
10:05 MikasaSerket: Yup
10:05 MikasaSerket: http://puu.sh/lICuG/fd5dcb853f.osu
10:06 MikasaSerket: Just testplay
10:06 Xenans: 00:12:998 (1) - in a really bad spot
10:06 Anxient: 00:12:998 - why is SV higher when song intensity is lower asdfaghsj
10:06 Anxient: 00:14:913 (4,5,6) - a normal slider would do just fine aa
10:06 Anxient: 00:16:190 (5,1) - better sliderblanket
10:06 Xenans: 00:16:190 (5) - make blanket look nicer
10:07 Xenans: oh lol
10:07 Anxient: 00:17:147 (3,5,1) - ????????
10:07 Fake: mikasa this link doesnt...
10:07 MikasaSerket: Anxient and Xenans should be the modding duo
10:07 MikasaSerket: Fake
10:07 MikasaSerket: Just
10:07 MikasaSerket: do it
10:07 Anxient: Mikasa
10:07 Xenans: 00:16:190 (5,1,3) - could make better pattern
10:07 Anxient: give him the osz aa
10:07 MikasaSerket: Shit
10:07 MikasaSerket: Sorry xd
10:07 Xenans: 00:18:264 (1) - blanket properly
10:07 Anxient: 00:16:988 (2,5) - ??
10:07 Xenans: 00:18:584 (2) - make triangle with 00:17:626 (5,7) -
10:07 Anxient: 00:20:020 (1) - ctrl g for aa
10:08 Anxient: 00:21:296 (9,10,11,1) - put some crisscross jumps
10:08 Anxient: to emphasize increasing song intensity
10:08 Owntrolf: you do realize
10:08 Xenans: 00:21:775 (1,2,3,4) - i feel that these should not be mapped in this pattern, but rather a pattern that constantly flows in one direction
10:08 Owntrolf: i cant read chat mods
10:08 MikasaSerket: Fake: http://puu.sh/lICPw/e1a910bd33.osz
10:08 Xenans: post logs, whatever
10:08 MikasaSerket: Owntrolf: Why not?
10:08 Owntrolf: because it looks like shit
10:08 Anxient: owntrolf IRC mod looks like shit
10:08 Owntrolf: no shit'
10:08 Anxient: well then
10:09 Anxient: Xenans now what ._.
10:09 Xenans: we make a shitforum collab mod
10:09 MikasaSerket: I keep misclicking everything because I changed my language to Korean
10:09 Anxient: yeah lets do that
10:09 Anxient: uh what
10:09 MikasaSerket: Can I join?
10:09 Anxient: suuuure? igess
10:09 Anxient: idek
10:09 Xenans: how do we even organize this at this point
10:10 Anxient: uhgh
10:10 Anxient: save log
10:10 MikasaSerket: We don't.
10:10 Xenans: lets just all pm anxient our mods and let him organize it hue
10:10 Anxient: barf at the forum
10:10 Anxient: NO WHAT
10:10 MikasaSerket: You guys need to do the Jenny
10:10 MikasaSerket: Type everything on one line
10:10 Anxient: Wwell
10:10 Xenans: ugh i hate this map
10:10 Anxient: all aboard the rape train
10:10 Owntrolf: it feels like nothing is going to change
10:10 Anxient: this train has no brakes
10:10 Xenans: we need more acute angles not these weird shape long flows
10:10 Anxient: Owntrolf if you do that this mod will get NOWHERE.
10:11 Fake: which difficulty mikasaserket
10:11 Anxient: argh
10:11 MikasaSerket: The bank one
10:11 VectorBatesta: I don't know what to do! I have found the right offset and BPM but I still have the notes on those points! http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4068915
10:11 Anxient: this map...
10:11 Xenans: move the notes
10:11 Anxient: m-m-m-m-m-m-move dem notes
10:11 Anxient: AND DONT USE 1/12 adsfagsk
10:11 Xenans: also stop using 1/12 beat snape
10:12 Xenans: lol
10:12 VectorBatesta: you didnt understand
10:12 Xenans: why would you torture yourself like that
10:12 Anxient: 00:28:318 (1,3,1) - amazed xenans didnt attack this
10:12 Log Off Now: professor beat snape
10:12 MikasaSerket: LMAO
10:12 Xenans: i was considering that actually
10:12 Xenans: i let it slip
10:12 Anxient: 00:30:233 (4,5) - i dont understand
10:12 Anxient: whY
10:12 MikasaSerket: Vector don't use 1/12 xd
10:12 Xenans: ill just say remap and call it a day
10:12 MikasaSerket: I think I crashed Fake
10:12 MikasaSerket: Uh.
10:12 Xenans: vocal mapping is best mapping
10:12 Anxient: 00:24:328 (1) - ctrl g for flow break
10:12 Anxient: its good
10:12 Anxient: but yeah
10:12 VectorBatesta: without using 1/12 the notes get into wrong instants!
10:12 Epsile: lmao
10:12 Anxient: remap or remove
10:13 Anxient: your two open choices right now owntrolf
10:13 Xenans: how are you going back and forth on the timeline with your mod lol
10:13 MikasaSerket: Vector that means you timed it wrong
10:13 VectorBatesta: No I didn't
10:13 Xenans: i just don't like owntrolf's mapping style
10:13 MikasaSerket: Vector or just use 1/3 or 1/6
10:13 Xenans: vector, send us the map and we can help
10:13 Anxient: 00:32:786 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - coz i STILL dont understand this
10:13 VectorBatesta: ok
10:13 Anxient: get rid of the cancerous clap hitsound pls
10:14 MikasaSerket: You guys are so cruel to Owntrolf
10:14 MikasaSerket: Atleast give him some candy
10:14 Xenans: just make a forum mod already
10:14 Anxient: argh
10:14 Owntrolf: #modhelp sure is helpful
10:14 Xenans: i don't like the mapping style because it goes around the map too much and is extremely similar to how i mapped when i first started :/
10:14 Owntrolf: i might as well fill chat with absolute soul right now
10:14 Xenans: rank absolute soul
10:14 MikasaSerket: Owntrolf I believe in you
10:15 Anxient: if you manage to rank absolute soul
10:15 MikasaSerket: I'll lick you
10:15 VectorBatesta: uploading it Xenans
10:15 Xenans: alright
10:15 Anxient: .-.
10:15 VectorBatesta: 10%, it's one long music
10:15 MikasaSerket: war
10:15 Xenans: 00:52:254 (5,1,2,3,4,1) - its like a pentagon but shitty
10:15 VectorBatesta: uáe
10:16 Anxient: 00:52:254 (5,1,2,3,4,1) - use polygon shapes to make this star
10:16 HappyRocket88: but shitty?
10:16 HappyRocket88: please find another word.
10:16 MikasaSerket: I agree!
10:16 Side: not shitty
10:16 Anxient: 00:55:126 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - well this looks..
10:16 Side: maybe poopy
10:16 Side: :v
10:16 MikasaSerket: poop hi
10:16 Xenans: its like a pentagram but it is not perfect so you can't worship satan properly :/
10:16 HappyRocket88: XDD
10:16 Anxient: terribad is a good word
10:16 HappyRocket88: Nais.
10:16 Anxient: Xenans 10/10
10:17 Xenans: satan is the only way this is getting ranked, btw
10:17 Anxient: 01:01:669 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - this i slovely
10:17 Xenans: 01:05:179 (1,2,3,4,5) - triangle is off
10:17 Anxient: unless you hack yourself a rank icon
10:17 Anxient: and manange to keep l**tav away for a whole week
10:17 Xenans: 01:06:296 (7,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - triangles are off
10:17 Anxient: eh
10:17 Poop: why did i just get tagged
10:17 Anxient: talk about all of QAT for a whole week
10:18 Anxient: 01:03:584 - map pls
10:18 Xenans: why do you have #modhelp open lol
10:18 Anxient: 01:05:179 (1,2,3) - yay for overmap
10:18 Side: wait wtf?
10:18 Xenans: the triangle is off btw
10:18 Side: LOL
10:18 Anxient: 01:09:009 (1) - might as well ctrl g this
10:19 Xenans: 01:12:839 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - can't tell what emphasis is on this
10:19 Anxient: ppy this is why we need group chat ;w; aa
10:19 Anxient: 01:12:839 (6,7,1) - yay for overmap!
10:19 Xenans: clans are coming soon tm
10:19 Owntrolf: it feels more like a shitmod
10:19 Xenans: it is a shitmod
10:19 Anxient: coz this is a shit map
10:19 Xenans: shitmod for a shitmap
10:19 Xenans: aw you stole my line
10:19 Anxient: nah
10:19 Anxient: i said shit map not shitmap
10:20 Xenans: right
10:20 Anxient: different
10:20 Anxient: but same same
10:20 Anxient: but DIFFEREEENNNT
10:20 MikasaSerket: You are
10:20 Owntrolf: brb closing #modhelp so i dont see shit
10:20 MikasaSerket: The mod duo
10:20 Xenans: well this is a shit mod and not exactly a shitmod because its not all nazi
10:20 Owntrolf: you should continue it in #modreqs
10:20 MikasaSerket: LMAO
10:20 VectorBatesta: Xenans: here's the link
10:20 Xenans: alright ill help you out vector
10:20 Anxient: 01:19:222 (1) - woah what
10:20 Anxient: well we'll just savelog and put in the thread
10:21 Anxient: 01:21:775 (1,2) - pls slider blanket
10:21 Anxient: 01:23:689 (2,3,4) - xenans is this okay
10:21 Anxient: im done.
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Anxient wrote:

AT LEAST I TRIED
09:57 *Anxient is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/593647 Suzuki Konomi - Absolute Soul [Absolute Duo]]
09:57 Side: xD
09:57 Anxient: fuck this
09:57 Owntrolf: absolute soul
09:57 HappyRocket88: who's absolute soul?
09:57 Xenans: im back wee
09:58 Anxient: guys im gonna do a mod. anyone wants to join me?
09:58 HappyRocket88: a new guy?
09:58 Side: just in time
09:58 Xenans: ill joins
09:58 Side: test a thing
09:58 Anxient: ook
09:58 Anxient: do the absolute soul diff
09:58 Xenans: testing a thing works too
09:58 Owntrolf: absolute soul
09:58 Xenans: all of them ok
09:58 Anxient: duo or smh
09:58 Anxient: idk
09:58 Log Off Now: RIP
09:59 Anxient: rrip who
09:59 HappyRocket88: PIR
09:59 Owntrolf: absolute soul
09:59 Anxient: peeRAAANHUUH
09:59 Anxient: 00:02:626 - why no SV increase aa
09:59 MikasaSerket: I just
09:59 BeatofIke: I'll bubble if you stop spamming "absolute soul" for at least 24 hours + if you improve your Light insane 8-)
09:59 Anxient: where is the song intensity asdf
09:59 MikasaSerket: Crashed
09:59 Anxient: OH MY GOD THE STALEMATE
09:59 Owntrolf: lol
10:00 Owntrolf: ho toe improve light insaen
10:00 Anxient: 00:32:786 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - i dont understand what this is supposed to be
10:00 Bluekrait: maybe i should start spamming manic now
10:00 Anxient: http://puu.sh/lICpB/50191ea9d4.jpg
10:00 Anxient: owntrolf you MIGHT need to remap light insane
10:01 Owntrolf: fuckyou
10:01 *Owntrolf runs
10:01 Xenans: k time to start mod
10:01 Anxient: im serious here
10:01 *Owntrolf is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/172473 Sasaki Sayaka - Reason why XXX]
10:01 Anxient: reason?
10:01 Owntrolf: also screw cloudsplash for this map
10:01 *Owntrolf is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/443806 Sasaki Sayaka - Sorahana]
10:01 Anxient: WHERE IS THE CONStENcU
10:01 Owntrolf: i remember modding their map when I started modding
10:01 Side: wait what are we modding
10:01 *Anxient is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/593647 Suzuki Konomi - Absolute Soul [Absolute Duo]]
10:01 Anxient: this
10:02 Xenans: hue
10:02 Side: oh shit we're actually doing this? xSD
10:02 *Owntrolf is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/24428 Savage Garden - I Want You [Ridiculous]]
10:02 Xenans: am i nazi modding or just an actual mod
10:02 Anxient: coz the light insane diff MUST be remapped
10:02 MikasaSerket: Anxient
10:02 Anxient: fuck this
10:02 Anxient: Xenans go buck wild
10:02 MikasaSerket: Do you mind if you testplay?
10:02 Anxient: mm
10:02 Anxient: after i rake this map
10:02 Anxient: coz this set is literally puushing ALLL my buttons
10:02 MikasaSerket: please <3
10:02 MikasaSerket: Its only one thing...
10:02 Anxient: its always one thing Kappa
10:02 MikasaSerket: Only 27 seconds...
10:02 Xenans: 00:12:998 (1,4) - oi wtf these notes don't make a triangle properly
10:02 Anxient: its probably CetipedAzer'
10:02 MikasaSerket: Please.......
10:03 MikasaSerket: Nope
10:03 MikasaSerket: http://puu.sh/lICuG/fd5dcb853f.osu
10:03 MikasaSerket: It's mikapeed
10:03 Anxient: 00:02:626 - this part to 00:11:483 - use higher SV
10:03 Anxient: Mika pm to me
10:03 Anxient: itll get lost here
10:03 Anxient: 00:07:733 (1,3) - why are these sliders so slanted
10:03 Anxient: asdf
10:03 Xenans: idk if i can even mod this because i hate tv size maps and i hate the song
10:04 Anxient: 00:08:530 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - i dont understand the flow
10:04 Anxient: I JUST DONT
10:04 Xenans: 00:28:796 (4) - eh move under other note, draw parallels
10:04 Xenans: ill start over
10:04 MikasaSerket: Whose map are we shitting on now?
10:04 Xenans: owntrolf's
10:04 MikasaSerket: Okay then
10:04 Anxient: 00:10:764 (3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/lICEh/6582aa78e2.jpg maybe do this
10:04 MikasaSerket: Don't rank absolute soul
10:04 Fake: who wants to shit on mine? :D
10:05 Anxient: i wonder if owntrolf is even looking at this LAWL
10:05 MikasaSerket: Nah
10:05 Fake: ok .-.
10:05 MikasaSerket: Fake, I will if you testplay my map
10:05 MikasaSerket: Only 30 seconds
10:05 *MikasaSerket runs
10:05 Anxient: well if he doesnt look at it ill just post the channel log
10:05 Fake: ok so test play means to just play the map? o:
10:05 MikasaSerket: Yup
10:05 MikasaSerket: http://puu.sh/lICuG/fd5dcb853f.osu
10:06 MikasaSerket: Just testplay
10:06 Xenans: 00:12:998 (1) - in a really bad spot
10:06 Anxient: 00:12:998 - why is SV higher when song intensity is lower asdfaghsj
10:06 Anxient: 00:14:913 (4,5,6) - a normal slider would do just fine aa
10:06 Anxient: 00:16:190 (5,1) - better sliderblanket
10:06 Xenans: 00:16:190 (5) - make blanket look nicer
10:07 Xenans: oh lol
10:07 Anxient: 00:17:147 (3,5,1) - ????????
10:07 Fake: mikasa this link doesnt...
10:07 MikasaSerket: Anxient and Xenans should be the modding duo
10:07 MikasaSerket: Fake
10:07 MikasaSerket: Just
10:07 MikasaSerket: do it
10:07 Anxient: Mikasa
10:07 Xenans: 00:16:190 (5,1,3) - could make better pattern
10:07 Anxient: give him the osz aa
10:07 MikasaSerket: Shit
10:07 MikasaSerket: Sorry xd
10:07 Xenans: 00:18:264 (1) - blanket properly
10:07 Anxient: 00:16:988 (2,5) - ??
10:07 Xenans: 00:18:584 (2) - make triangle with 00:17:626 (5,7) -
10:07 Anxient: 00:20:020 (1) - ctrl g for aa
10:08 Anxient: 00:21:296 (9,10,11,1) - put some crisscross jumps
10:08 Anxient: to emphasize increasing song intensity
10:08 Owntrolf: you do realize
10:08 Xenans: 00:21:775 (1,2,3,4) - i feel that these should not be mapped in this pattern, but rather a pattern that constantly flows in one direction
10:08 Owntrolf: i cant read chat mods
10:08 MikasaSerket: Fake: http://puu.sh/lICPw/e1a910bd33.osz
10:08 Xenans: post logs, whatever
10:08 MikasaSerket: Owntrolf: Why not?
10:08 Owntrolf: because it looks like shit
10:08 Anxient: owntrolf IRC mod looks like shit
10:08 Owntrolf: no shit'
10:08 Anxient: well then
10:09 Anxient: Xenans now what ._.
10:09 Xenans: we make a shitforum collab mod
10:09 MikasaSerket: I keep misclicking everything because I changed my language to Korean
10:09 Anxient: yeah lets do that
10:09 Anxient: uh what
10:09 MikasaSerket: Can I join?
10:09 Anxient: suuuure? igess
10:09 Anxient: idek
10:09 Xenans: how do we even organize this at this point
10:10 Anxient: uhgh
10:10 Anxient: save log
10:10 MikasaSerket: We don't.
10:10 Xenans: lets just all pm anxient our mods and let him organize it hue
10:10 Anxient: barf at the forum
10:10 Anxient: NO WHAT
10:10 MikasaSerket: You guys need to do the Jenny
10:10 MikasaSerket: Type everything on one line
10:10 Anxient: Wwell
10:10 Xenans: ugh i hate this map
10:10 Anxient: all aboard the rape train
10:10 Owntrolf: it feels like nothing is going to change
10:10 Anxient: this train has no brakes
10:10 Xenans: we need more acute angles not these weird shape long flows
10:10 Anxient: Owntrolf if you do that this mod will get NOWHERE.
10:11 Fake: which difficulty mikasaserket
10:11 Anxient: argh
10:11 MikasaSerket: The bank one
10:11 VectorBatesta: I don't know what to do! I have found the right offset and BPM but I still have the notes on those points! http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4068915
10:11 Anxient: this map...
10:11 Xenans: move the notes
10:11 Anxient: m-m-m-m-m-m-move dem notes
10:11 Anxient: AND DONT USE 1/12 adsfagsk
10:11 Xenans: also stop using 1/12 beat snape
10:12 Xenans: lol
10:12 VectorBatesta: you didnt understand
10:12 Xenans: why would you torture yourself like that
10:12 Anxient: 00:28:318 (1,3,1) - amazed xenans didnt attack this
10:12 Log Off Now: professor beat snape
10:12 MikasaSerket: LMAO
10:12 Xenans: i was considering that actually
10:12 Xenans: i let it slip
10:12 Anxient: 00:30:233 (4,5) - i dont understand
10:12 Anxient: whY
10:12 MikasaSerket: Vector don't use 1/12 xd
10:12 Xenans: ill just say remap and call it a day
10:12 MikasaSerket: I think I crashed Fake
10:12 MikasaSerket: Uh.
10:12 Xenans: vocal mapping is best mapping
10:12 Anxient: 00:24:328 (1) - ctrl g for flow break
10:12 Anxient: its good
10:12 Anxient: but yeah
10:12 VectorBatesta: without using 1/12 the notes get into wrong instants!
10:12 Epsile: lmao
10:12 Anxient: remap or remove
10:13 Anxient: your two open choices right now owntrolf
10:13 Xenans: how are you going back and forth on the timeline with your mod lol
10:13 MikasaSerket: Vector that means you timed it wrong
10:13 VectorBatesta: No I didn't
10:13 Xenans: i just don't like owntrolf's mapping style
10:13 MikasaSerket: Vector or just use 1/3 or 1/6
10:13 Xenans: vector, send us the map and we can help
10:13 Anxient: 00:32:786 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - coz i STILL dont understand this
10:13 VectorBatesta: ok
10:13 Anxient: get rid of the cancerous clap hitsound pls
10:14 MikasaSerket: You guys are so cruel to Owntrolf
10:14 MikasaSerket: Atleast give him some candy
10:14 Xenans: just make a forum mod already
10:14 Anxient: argh
10:14 Owntrolf: #modhelp sure is helpful
10:14 Xenans: i don't like the mapping style because it goes around the map too much and is extremely similar to how i mapped when i first started :/
10:14 Owntrolf: i might as well fill chat with absolute soul right now
10:14 Xenans: rank absolute soul
10:14 MikasaSerket: Owntrolf I believe in you
10:15 Anxient: if you manage to rank absolute soul
10:15 MikasaSerket: I'll lick you
10:15 VectorBatesta: uploading it Xenans
10:15 Xenans: alright
10:15 Anxient: .-.
10:15 VectorBatesta: 10%, it's one long music
10:15 MikasaSerket: war
10:15 Xenans: 00:52:254 (5,1,2,3,4,1) - its like a pentagon but shitty
10:15 VectorBatesta: uáe
10:16 Anxient: 00:52:254 (5,1,2,3,4,1) - use polygon shapes to make this star
10:16 HappyRocket88: but shitty?
10:16 HappyRocket88: please find another word.
10:16 MikasaSerket: I agree!
10:16 Side: not shitty
10:16 Anxient: 00:55:126 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - well this looks..
10:16 Side: maybe poopy
10:16 Side: :v
10:16 MikasaSerket: poop hi
10:16 Xenans: its like a pentagram but it is not perfect so you can't worship satan properly :/
10:16 HappyRocket88: XDD
10:16 Anxient: terribad is a good word
10:16 HappyRocket88: Nais.
10:16 Anxient: Xenans 10/10
10:17 Xenans: satan is the only way this is getting ranked, btw
10:17 Anxient: 01:01:669 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - this i slovely
10:17 Xenans: 01:05:179 (1,2,3,4,5) - triangle is off
10:17 Anxient: unless you hack yourself a rank icon
10:17 Anxient: and manange to keep l**tav away for a whole week
10:17 Xenans: 01:06:296 (7,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - triangles are off
10:17 Anxient: eh
10:17 Poop: why did i just get tagged
10:17 Anxient: talk about all of QAT for a whole week
10:18 Anxient: 01:03:584 - map pls
10:18 Xenans: why do you have #modhelp open lol
10:18 Anxient: 01:05:179 (1,2,3) - yay for overmap
10:18 Side: wait wtf?
10:18 Xenans: the triangle is off btw
10:18 Side: LOL
10:18 Anxient: 01:09:009 (1) - might as well ctrl g this
10:19 Xenans: 01:12:839 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - can't tell what emphasis is on this
10:19 Anxient: ppy this is why we need group chat ;w; aa
10:19 Anxient: 01:12:839 (6,7,1) - yay for overmap!
10:19 Xenans: clans are coming soon tm
10:19 Owntrolf: it feels more like a shitmod
10:19 Xenans: it is a shitmod
10:19 Anxient: coz this is a shit map
10:19 Xenans: shitmod for a shitmap
10:19 Xenans: aw you stole my line
10:19 Anxient: nah
10:19 Anxient: i said shit map not shitmap
10:20 Xenans: right
10:20 Anxient: different
10:20 Anxient: but same same
10:20 Anxient: but DIFFEREEENNNT
10:20 MikasaSerket: You are
10:20 Owntrolf: brb closing #modhelp so i dont see shit
10:20 MikasaSerket: The mod duo
10:20 Xenans: well this is a shit mod and not exactly a shitmod because its not all nazi
10:20 Owntrolf: you should continue it in #modreqs
10:20 MikasaSerket: LMAO
10:20 VectorBatesta: Xenans: here's the link
10:20 Xenans: alright ill help you out vector
10:20 Anxient: 01:19:222 (1) - woah what
10:20 Anxient: well we'll just savelog and put in the thread
10:21 Anxient: 01:21:775 (1,2) - pls slider blanket
10:21 Anxient: 01:23:689 (2,3,4) - xenans is this okay
10:21 Anxient: im done.
Absolute soul :^)
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Light Insane mod because it's the only shitty one

00:02:626 - SV before this point should be decreased
00:12:041 - blanket?
00:26:881 (1,3) - maybe ctrl-g these individually
00:42:998 (1,2,3) - feels like overly smooth flow for this section
00:46:190 (1,2) - would be better as a repeat slider or just extend 1 a beat maybe. cause slider end and 2 are soft notes compared to slider head and 3's slider head.
00:53:211 - why not fill this section up with circles?
01:13:477 - the pentagon pattern doesn't really stress the 4. also consider stacking the next 1 on the 4 for a stop, or using a slider from 4 to the blue tick before 1.


uhh... i tried.

;_;

and as always, good luck with rank...
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BeatofIke wrote:

Call me back for a re-check once you are ready~
Then again, getting more feedback wouldn't hurt :3
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Here to do whatever I can to help you out. I shalt not neglect thy beauty ever againz. Don't take this mod too seriously if you don't agree with things. I would love to know the reason as to why you will decline most of them. I want to learn more about the way you think. I'll pick out that brain of yours :)

[Absolute Duo]
OD 9 seems very dramatic for how this map is structured as. I request to tone this down a little but instead make CS smaller to compensate for the difficulty of the map - Possibly 4.5
This difficulty has a lot of anti-flow in it on some areas that aren't really necessary, but the rest should be standard and fine enough to the point where it can receive a bubble, sure it can use some work but if you're willing to rank this at this stage, then it's fine here on out if you were consulting to the requirements to ranking in the future
  1. 00:01:350 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern is strange, doesn't really emphasize anything, but rather just makes movement go left to right - My solution would to make slider (3) something different and create a structure around it. The reason it doesn't work here is because of how you had this slider. Example - Not like this but you get my idea http://puu.sh/lMdQD/95c329c658.jpg
  2. 00:12:201 (3) - This slider is very counter intuitive - It's completely straight when the guitar is representing something different. Should try to incorporate that in somehow. And especially with how these sliders work 00:11:562 (1,2) - it's best to make a rotation to make flow feel used
  3. 00:14:913 (4) - Kind of weird but your idea
  4. 00:18:264 (1,3,5,7) - Again structure doesn't quite feel right, it goes back and forth too often and is quite an anti-flow pattern
  5. 00:34:860 (1,2) - Idk why but Ctrl+G feels better here
  6. 00:43:637 (1,1) - This doesn't lead into thetransition well enough because of the amount of time it takes to hit the first note after slider - Remove the note and extend the slider, that would be the best option to transition into the slow parts
  7. 00:49:701 (1) - Tail hitsound doesn't quite fit here, try addition drum-finish it works best
  8. 00:51:296 (3,4) - This rotation would've been perfect ctrl+g (4) trust me man it feels sooo much nicer, something like this http://puu.sh/lMeLH/73bc2a403f.jpg It feels fantastic
  9. 01:23:689 (2) - NC can be here for the main reason of having it show on red vocal ticks so it doesn't confuse people since the distance is pretty close
    TBH it just feels like you haven't completely feel what it's like to map a hard difficulty because everything else feels damn nice

[Irreversible's Extra]
  • Such nasty work, I approve - Motha Fukin MVP

[Insane]
  1. 00:39:488 (5,5) - Both of these the sounds on the head of these sliders are very strong, yet no hitsounds are used on them. I would check this. Even though it does sound nice what you did here, It is better to put hitsounds on them, otherwise it seems like offset is messed up lol - Sort of like what you did with your single notes
  2. 00:44:594 (2) - Wow this feels better here than what it was in Absolute Duo, strange...
    wew

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  1. 00:11:403 (3,4,5) - Kind of strange flow, it's angled you can fix
  2. 00:23:052 (5,1) - Very weird rhythm - try this http://puu.sh/lMfZP/8b7f889c15.jpg it compesates for the missing beat the rest you can do like this 00:26:403 (2,3,4) -
  3. 00:37:892 (2,1) - Skips the important downbeat, feels like it plays completely offbeat, can somehow change something here
  4. 00:48:743 (1,2) - Transitions are awkward
  5. 00:56:403 (1,2,3,4,1) - Something like this feels nicer - slider (3) was weird considering how sharp hard it might be for beginners to hit such a sharp note sequence after http://puu.sh/lMgeJ/fea8db2aa0.jpg
  6. 01:01:669 (2) - Definitely better as a repeat
  7. 01:06:456 (4,1) - These sliders skip very important beats, this makes kiai easier because the other portion of this map covers these types of beats, could be mapped out to feel good
  8. 01:10:764 (5,1) - Same as above
  9. 01:12:201 (3,4) - Looks better http://puu.sh/lMgpZ/2899b0c821.jpg
  10. 01:13:956 (5,1,2,3) - Example something like this could be better http://puu.sh/lMgtZ/8946d53a73.jpg Slider (2) you had before was in a very awkward position
  11. 01:23:052 (1) - Slightly pointed to note (2) is better http://puu.sh/lMgxD/99dad45589.jpg

[Easy]
  • Passable
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Irreversible the true mvp
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Kocari wrote:

Here to do whatever I can to help you out. I shalt not neglect thy beauty ever againz. Don't take this mod too seriously if you don't agree with things. I would love to know the reason as to why you will decline most of them. I want to learn more about the way you think. I'll pick out that brain of yours :)

[Absolute Duo]
OD 9 seems very dramatic for how this map is structured as. I request to tone this down a little but instead make CS smaller to compensate for the difficulty of the map - Possibly 4.5
This difficulty has a lot of anti-flow in it on some areas that aren't really necessary, but the rest should be standard and fine enough to the point where it can receive a bubble, sure it can use some work but if you're willing to rank this at this stage, then it's fine here on out if you were consulting to the requirements to ranking in the future
  1. 00:01:350 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern is strange, doesn't really emphasize anything, but rather just makes movement go left to right - My solution would to make slider (3) something different and create a structure around it. The reason it doesn't work here is because of how you had this slider. Example - Not like this but you get my idea http://puu.sh/lMdQD/95c329c658.jpg
  2. 00:12:201 (3) - This slider is very counter intuitive - It's completely straight when the guitar is representing something different. Should try to incorporate that in somehow. And especially with how these sliders work 00:11:562 (1,2) - it's best to make a rotation to make flow feel used PRobably fixed
  3. 00:14:913 (4) - Kind of weird but your idea Changed to 3 point slider
  4. 00:18:264 (1,3,5,7) - Again structure doesn't quite feel right, it goes back and forth too often and is quite an anti-flow pattern Removed antis
  5. 00:34:860 (1,2) - Idk why but Ctrl+G feels better here Wat
  6. 00:43:637 (1,1) - This doesn't lead into thetransition well enough because of the amount of time it takes to hit the first note after slider - Remove the note and extend the slider, that would be the best option to transition into the slow parts Changed to 4/1 slider
  7. 00:49:701 (1) - Tail hitsound doesn't quite fit here, try addition drum-finish it works best Done
  8. 00:51:296 (3,4) - This rotation would've been perfect ctrl+g (4) trust me man it feels sooo much nicer, something like this http://puu.sh/lMeLH/73bc2a403f.jpg It feels fantastic Did something Similar
  9. 01:23:689 (2) - NC can be here for the main reason of having it show on red vocal ticks so it doesn't confuse people since the distance is pretty close Done
    TBH it just feels like you haven't completely feel what it's like to map a hard difficulty because everything else feels damn nice

[Insane]
  1. 00:39:488 (5,5) - Both of these the sounds on the head of these sliders are very strong, yet no hitsounds are used on them. I would check this. Even though it does sound nice what you did here, It is better to put hitsounds on them, otherwise it seems like offset is messed up lol - Sort of like what you did with your single notes Added Whistles
  2. 00:44:594 (2) - Wow this feels better here than what it was in Absolute Duo, strange...
    wew

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  1. 00:11:403 (3,4,5) - Kind of strange flow, it's angled you can fix Fixed
  2. 00:23:052 (5,1) - Very weird rhythm - try this http://puu.sh/lMfZP/8b7f889c15.jpg it compesates for the missing beat the rest you can do like this 00:26:403 (2,3,4) - Changed rhythm by removing 00:23:052 -
  3. 00:37:892 (2,1) - Skips the important downbeat, feels like it plays completely offbeat, can somehow change something here I think its fine right now its mostly following vocals
  4. 00:48:743 (1,2) - Transitions are awkward Done
  5. 00:56:403 (1,2,3,4,1) - Something like this feels nicer - slider (3) was weird considering how sharp hard it might be for beginners to hit such a sharp note sequence after Changed to something similar http://puu.sh/lMgeJ/fea8db2aa0.jpg
  6. 01:01:669 (2) - Definitely better as a repeat Done
  7. 01:06:456 (4,1) - These sliders skip very important beats, this makes kiai easier because the other portion of this map covers these types of beats, could be mapped out to feel good Done
  8. 01:10:764 (5,1) - Same as above Done
  9. 01:12:201 (3,4) - Looks better http://puu.sh/lMgpZ/2899b0c821.jpg I changed it from a mod
  10. 01:13:956 (5,1,2,3) - Example something like this could be better http://puu.sh/lMgtZ/8946d53a73.jpg Slider (2) you had before was in a very awkward position Done
  11. 01:23:052 (1) - Slightly pointed to note (2) is better Done http://puu.sh/lMgxD/99dad45589.jpg

gracefu wrote:

Light Insane mod because it's the only shitty one

00:02:626 - SV before this point should be decreased The speed feels the same
00:12:041 - blanket? Done
00:26:881 (1,3) - maybe ctrl-g these individually It would make 3 to 5 a huge jump
00:42:998 (1,2,3) - feels like overly smooth flow for this section Its probablyu fine as is
00:46:190 (1,2) - would be better as a repeat slider or just extend 1 a beat maybe. cause slider end and 2 are soft notes compared to slider head and 3's slider head.
00:53:211 - why not fill this section up with circles? Done and applied to AD
01:13:477 - the pentagon pattern doesn't really stress the 4. also consider stacking the next 1 on the 4 for a stop, or using a slider from 4 to the blue tick before 1. Changed to triangles

uhh... i tried.

;_;

and as always, good luck with rank...
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Irre
  1. 00:05:179 (1) - out of playfield
  2. 00:34:062 (1,2) - 00:35:339 (1,2) - these are doubles but 00:36:615 (1) - 00:37:254 (1) - 00:37:892 (1) - 00:39:169 (1) - 00:40:445 (1) - etc aren't?
  3. 00:20:179 (1) - could change this to 2 1/2 sliders and a circle
  4. 01:01:828 (3,4) - these are very very strong ticks of the song but why did you choose to use sliders for these? I think circles would fit way better. I hope this isn't for the sake of star difficulties because Owntrolf's highest diff is really low (in terms of value). If anything, he needs to buff it up instead of you nerfing this.
  5. 01:09:009 (1) - if the purpose of this is to blanket 01:08:371 (3) - then it's not perfectly done *nazi*
  6. 01:12:839 (4) - finish on slider head? sounds better imo
  7. 01:21:775 (1) - out of playfield
  8. 01:22:492 (4,6) - uwot/overmapped
  9. 01:26:403 (1,1,1,1) - unnecessary abuse of NCs here.
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Baka Owntrolf. Stop spamming "absolute soul" in chat/forums lol
Anyways, we are going to go deeper into your Light Insane difficulty.


[Light Insane]
  1. I would recommend if you use mostly 1.4~1.6x spacing at the beginning part of the song from 00:02:626 to 00:12:679. You tend to use random spacing all the time and it's just don't look good imo. I understand that this is light insane difficulty, but spacing is just as important when designing patterns/flow. Personally, i would suggest to only break spacing/use jumps, when you feel that the music calls for it. This will become easier as you gain more experience/knowledge about mapping. Since you are a new mapper, you most likely don't have a developed mapping style yet, so for now, just keep learning and don't give up. :D
  2. 00:03:105 (2,4) - Maybe make 2 the same as slider 4 but horizontally flipped (and maybe stack 00:03:584 (3) with 00:02:148 (1,2). Something like this:
    220,96,3105,2,0,B|184:88|152:100,2,70,0|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    240,192,3584,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    260,288,3743,2,0,B|296:296|328:284,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  3. 00:04:062 (1,2,3) - As for these sliders, I would avoid using generic horizontal sliders. My only solution I could think of is to blanket them:
    404,220,4062,6,0,P|422:249|428:284,2,70,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
    260,288,4541,2,0,P|265:322|284:351,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    240,192,4860,2,0,P|208:204|180:232,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  4. 00:05:179 (1) - For this slider, I would suggest you to remove the reverse and just use a 1/1 slider, since this slider is prominently following the long guitar sounds. You did the same thing at 00:02:626 (1), so why not here? o3o
  5. 00:07:573 (5) - Preferably, I would stack this note with 00:06:775 (2) and adjust spacing with the next notes somehow.
  6. 00:07:733 (1,2,3) - Why the huge jump lol? There's nothing intensive in the music that would emphasize this jump. I suggest to just stick with 1.4~1.6x spacing lol
  7. 00:11:243 (3) - Maybe stack this note with the end of 00:10:286 (1). It flows better imo.
  8. 00:12:998 (1,2,3,4) - Here's a blanket gimmick you can try: Use 1 to blanket 00:11:881 (2) and then adjust spacing with the rest of the notes accordingly. Here's a suggested pattern:
    168,140,12998,6,0,P|180:108|208:84,2,70,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    208,236,13477,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    312,232,13637,2,0,P|335:206|347:173,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    308,80,13956,1,2,0:0:0:0:
  9. 00:14:115 (1,2,3,4,5) - Current pattern is generic and has weird flow. Here's a better pattern I think that might fit here:
    408,92,14115,6,0,P|433:119|445:151,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    448,256,14435,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    348,289,14594,2,0,P|324:263|311:231,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    208,236,14913,2,0,B|136:248,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    2,179,15233,2,0,B|72:168,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  10. 00:16:190 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern could be better too. Try this:
    240,88,16190,6,0,P|224:120|220:156,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    280,220,16509,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    367,201,16669,2,0,P|383:170|388:136,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    328,68,16988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    416,48,17147,2,0,P|448:64|468:92,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    388,135,17467,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    328,68,17626,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    240,88,17786,2,0,P|224:120|220:156,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    280,220,18105,1,2,0:0:0:0:
  11. 00:25:126 (4,5) - Hmm...maybe just make these sliders linear lol. Flow is key.
  12. 00:26:403 (4) - I mentioned this in my last mod post, but I still suggest that you reverse select this slider o3o.
  13. 00:27:360 (3) - You could probably just stack the slider end of this slider with the slider end of 00:27:839 (5).
  14. 00:32:786 (2,3) - How about like this?
  15. 00:34:062 (2,3,4) - Try moving this whole pattern at 100|52. That should look better.
  16. 00:37:094 (4) - I would suggest replacing this 1/4 slider with a single hit circle. I didn't hear any 1/4 at this slider end.
  17. How about like this (you can easily re-adjust 00:47:147 (1,2,3) afterwards)?
    249,222,45552,2,0,P|292:188|306:135,1,112,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    218,137,46190,2,0,P|221:107|280:52,1,112,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    332,52,46669,2,0,P|377:83|391:136,1,112,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  18. 00:48:743 (1,2) - Ah come on, I know that you can do a better pattern/flow than this. I'll let you figure that out on your own :P
  19. 00:50:977 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Current pattern could be improved. I would suggest making the sliders at 00:51:296 (3,5) linear and the rest of the patterns all the way to 00:53:690 more polished. Here's an example of what you could do:

    228,112,50977,5,2,0:0:0:0:
    212,216,51137,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    212,216,51296,2,0,L|142:224,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    228,112,51615,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    228,112,51775,2,0,L|300:103,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    396,88,52094,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    480,136,52254,6,0,P|460:165|400:178,1,70,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    391,243,52573,2,0,P|388:277|404:309,2,70,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    352,176,53052,1,4,0:0:0:0:
    352,176,53211,2,0,P|323:156|289:153,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    232,204,53530,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    232,204,53690,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  20. 01:11:722 (4,1) - How about stack 4 with the start of 01:10:286 (1) and move 01:11:881 (1) at 112|172 + making that slider horizontally linear? I think it works better in terms of flow + polishing :3


Alright. Get busy and then call me back for another re-check. Peace!!
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Literally BeatofIke is being a fucking bro at the moment. Literally putting his gear on and marching into terrain like no one has walked through before. This guy is a legend no joke
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Changed what Ike pointed out
update http://puu.sh/lXNRm/8f022ec082.zip
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