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rustbell
Easy Hard Insane
3/4 beats

Insane
01:16:038 (1) - end spinner here
01:24:945 (7) - add finish and remove the green lines?
01:51:288 (4,5,6) - 1/4 rear
02:03:195 (1) - finish?
02:50:445 - volume too low :O
03:30:195 (2) - 3/4 :O?
03:50:445 (4) - ^
03:56:445 (2) - 1 tiny grid up

nice song and map :D
Topic Starter
Vergence

Sprosive wrote:

Easy Hard Insane
3/4 beats

Insane
01:16:038 (1) - end spinner here
01:24:945 (7) - add finish and remove the green lines?
01:51:288 (4,5,6) - 1/4 rear
02:03:195 (1) - finish?
02:50:445 - volume too low :O
03:30:195 (2) - 3/4 :O?
03:50:445 (4) - ^
03:56:445 (2) - 1 tiny grid up

nice song and map :D
thanks for the quick mod :D
Niko
star :з
Dottedline
Star :3
marksman666
star :3
Wait...

Nevermind, just annoying osb file but deleted :3
jericho2442
Error Mod

NoHItter eats pancake XD.jpg is 960x768. we advise 4:3 ratio for osu backgrounds, maybe fix this like 800x600 and 1024x768

average 128 mp3, its ok i guess but not great sounding >_>

Easy
00:32:070 (1,2,3) - spacing, these note all have the same timing so they should have the same spacing, please give them all the same spacing

only thing i would say about this diff is there is a LOT of ugly sliders

TraceTheKriken's Normal
Hard has lower HP drain than this Normal LOL lower it

ok this map has problems, tooo much focus on trying to get red timing rhythms over what suits the song

00:39:945 (1,2,3) - (2) in this combo feels very bad to play, either move (2) to 00:42:945 or put notes at 00:42:570 and 00:42:945
01:02:820 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 2 spacings in this combo. why?
01:56:445 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - broken spacing,make sure all the note in this combo have the same spacing not loads of different ones
02:12:945 (5,6,7,8,9) - same here
02:56:445 (5,6) - same
03:33:570 (4) - end it at 03:34:695 then add a note at 03:34:882
03:40:320 (6) - new combo
03:56:070 (1,2) - space these out more to follow the rest of the combo

this map needs work, :/

Hard
00:26:445 (8,9) - this jump dont really suit, give it normal spacing
00:35:445 (9) - add finish hitsound?
00:58:320 (1,2,3,4) - same as the normal, mostly every note in the combo has a different spacing, please give it one since theres no need for so many spacings
01:17:632 (6) - move closer to (5)
01:54:195 (3) - new combo, breaking your pattern
01:55:695 (1) - remove new combo, above change makes this pointless
02:41:445 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this part feels out of time to the music, i think what your following dont follow the overall tempo, thus this sounds totally weird when playing, it felt intime to me when i used a 1/8 tick, so yea :/
02:55:320 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - bad idea to give this the same spacing as the combo's before what was 1/2 when these are 1/1. i advise to widen the spacing abit here
02:59:070 (1) - put this notes spacing perfectly in the middle of the note before and after it, plays better
03:23:163 (1) - this spinner feels horrid to play since its "barely" rankable
03:24:945 - add a note here

Insane
Maybe think of lowering the HP drain 1, your choice though ;)

01:09:945 (1,2,3) - timing wise this dont play good at all, like this is better


01:40:695 (4) - new combo
01:51:288 (4,5,6) - out of time, move these forward to start at 01:51:382

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lotta work left to do on these maps, but good luck :)
Topic Starter
Vergence
thanks jericho :D:D:D:D:D
Omega
IRC mod; I tested insane. Things to remember:
Consider reducing health drain.
See if reducing the approach rate would fit, I think it's a bit too fast for the mood of the song.
Combo colors don't exactly make sense to me. But okay.
Some of the stacks sound just like bursts. I can't hear anything from the song to validate them.
Try to find an MP3 file with a higher volume.
And if not, at least reduce comboburst volume, and hitsound volume.

All in all, I like the song, map, and background :D Have a star.
zaru-d
hoshi
NikolasWinter
Good insane=)
Shinespark
nice song and well mapped star ^^
yongtw123
Overall:
Offset seems wrong, but I can't get a good one.
Consult pro timing help.

[Easy]
00:47:820 (4) - down 1 grid
01:11:445 (5) - this is a bit noisy :/
01:16:320 (2,3) - up 1 grid, and right 1 grid
01:38:070 (4,5) - hmmm, not wrong, but I'd like to suggest this:
02:07:695 (2,4) - compare the spacing here. Fix them.
02:23:445 (4) - a bit noisy :

[TraceTheKriken's Normal]
00:59:632 (6) - though indeed following the vocal, it just sounds weird to end here. I'd put two more notes here 00:59:820 and 01:00:195. (if you decide to fix these, do so to other similar ones in this diff)
01:55:695 (3) - too close from (2)
02:56:820 (6) - a bit far from next note
03:57:945 (4) - a bit far from previous note

[Hard]
Spacing fluctuations all over the place. Please use distance snap and reposition all notes.
I won't list spacing errors below.

00:59:820 (x) - I'd add a note here (if you decide to fix this, do so to other similar spots)
01:07:132 (8,9) - I think these are a little overmapped.
01:36:195 (1,2,3,4) - not a perfect diamond
02:18:945 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - - The rhythm don't fit the music, IMO
02:42:945 (9) - a bit repeating too much?
03:10:695 (x) - maybe a note here?
03:13:882 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - use perfect geometry
03:17:632 (2) - I don't think this is necessary
03:26:257 (x) - add a note here (following the drumming)?
03:28:695 (x) - ^
03:30:945 (x) - ^
03:32:820 (x) - ^
03:33:195 (x) - ^
03:44:257 (x) - ^
03:46:882 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - cramped! Maybe not stack these?

[Insane]
[Hard], in my opinion, has already maxed out the rhythm possible on this song.
Adding anymore beats will make the diff overmapped.
And that's the case of [Insane].
I find a lot of rhythm that is unnecessary or awkward.
Sorry I can't really mod this diff... :(

And due to that reason, I withhold my star.
But still, good luck!
Astom
Rdy

-EDIT-

Download: SB Insane V2.rar
theMikeAG
Easy: 00:46:695 (1,2,3,4) - You have a clap on the 3rd note when it needs to be on the 1st and 2nd to follow the rhythm.
00:48:945 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Try removing the Clap on the tail end of (2) and placing new claps on (4) and (6).
01:19:320 (3,4,5) - I personally think that putting Claps on these three notes would sound really cool. That's just me though.
01:20:445 (1) - You might want to place a Cymbal at the end of this spinner. Might make the map sound even more epic. :)
01:54:945 (4) - A clap on the first rebound would sound nice.

TraceTheKriken's Normal: I'm not going to go into detail on this difficulty. I'm too tired from modding Normal and Hard. ;)

Hard: 00:29:820 (4,5) - These repeaters sound off. You might want to change them to something more like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/41251
01:07:695 (10) - A finish really doesn't sound appropriate here.
01:36:195 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern is not symetrical!! :o
01:55:695 (1) - Remove new combo?
02:11:820 (3,1) - Maybe move Beat (1) to the left one space?
02:18:945 (1,2,3,4) - There isn't anything wrong with this pattern. I just want to say that it is really cool! :D
02:56:820 (2,3,4) - This isn't symetrical either! :o
02:59:070 (1,1) - Remove new combos?
03:51:007 (1) - Timing Section Shenanigans in this spinner?

Insane: I don't even want to know. Hard was already outragously difficult. :o

Don't let this lengthy mod post get you down. I modded this map in such detail, because it was already awesome. ;)
Starred.
Topic Starter
Vergence
Thanks yongtw123 and theMikeAG ^^
:D:D:D
[Dango]
yeah~!
GJ! >▽<
star~!!
taNa
nice map~
Beuchi
Quick recheck by request, this still needs a lot of improvement though >:

~Easy~
- Map until the end?

00:24:195 (3,4,5) - Inconsistent spacing.
00:26:445 (5) - I'd end this slider at 00:27:570, it sounds a lot better.
00:30:570 (3,4) - Inconsistent spacing.
01:18:570 (1) - Don't put jumps on easy diffs!! Fix spacing please.
01:33:945 (5) - Stack under (3)'s startpoint.
02:05:820 (1) - This slider is too close to the end of the spinner for an Easy, let the newbies recover from spinners!! Maybe finish the spinner 1/1 note earlier (white tick)?
02:26:070 (1) - Fix spacing here.

~TraceTheKriken's Normal~
- The slider velocity is still 2.00 halved during the entire map using inherited sections, which is nonsense >: Use something around 1.20 or 1.30 >:

03:06:757 (1,2) - Make this a whole slider, it's a lot more readable.

~Hard~
- Tags didn't change here from the last mod.
- The general spacing is still too harsh imo (I think you didn't touch it though xD), Normal has a very little spacing and Insane has even a smaller spacing than Hard D:

01:10:320 (5) - Don't make spacing changes on the same combo!! Fix spacing here.
01:42:570 (9) - Move a bit up to fix the spacing.
02:09:945 (6) - This jump is too harsh D:
02:15:570 (1,2,3) - Same as above.
02:18:945 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Uh, decrease spacing here? >:
02:56:820 (2) - Move away, it's too close from the slider.
03:23:070 (1) - This spinner is too short >.<
04:09:195 (1) - Finish the spinner at 04:12:476?

~Insane~
- No breaks? In a 4 minute song? D:! (Yes, saying this again, I don't think it's fair but it's totally up to you oxo)
- I would really leave the beginning unmapped, it's just making a rythm that doesn't exist on the song actually, so just start at the same point as the other diffs >: (Saying this again too, it really doesn't follow anything on the song :/)

01:59:820 (1) - Missing warning =x
03:41:257 (1) - Too short spinner.
04:01:320 (3) - Warning here too?

The main problem I see on insane is the mix of looong and fast jumps with some places when the spacing goes suddenly so small. In my honest opinion the map would be insane enough with just the speedups, but probably other people don't think it's that bad... xD

Good luck again~ (don't kudosu this, btw)
Masana
star :) good luck!
Kurai
star
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