Fixed. Thank you once again.
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What blanket are you talking about? It's not even that noticeable. // the DS looks fine for me, 0,05 differences are fine. @ohad1881
I've fixed the triangle, but I'd prefer to keep the rest as it matches with my style better @Come[Back]Home
Thank you, guys!
I've fixed the triangle, but I'd prefer to keep the rest as it matches with my style better @Come[Back]Home
Thank you, guys!
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post first just to make sure I won't forget
Hi, M4M
That should be it. I didn't find a lot of individual flaws but there is some general stuff that should be reconsidered.
Good luck!
Wafu's Easy
First, I would like to ask you something, because you're an experienced mapper but your diff looks quite hard for an Easy one. There's a lot of overlapping, complex patterns and such, so why, and is it okay?
The song is quite slow, so using a SV fast enough to not make 1/2 slidders overlap with themselves should be okay imo.
Also, how about using the slider's shape to emphasize the rhythm without having to create too complex pattern for Easy? For example, at 00:12:141 (2,3) - :
That's all I have to say, I can't find any flaws apart from what I said earlier.
The song is quite slow, so using a SV fast enough to not make 1/2 slidders overlap with themselves should be okay imo.
Also, how about using the slider's shape to emphasize the rhythm without having to create too complex pattern for Easy? For example, at 00:12:141 (2,3) - :
That's all I have to say, I can't find any flaws apart from what I said earlier.
Bakari's Normal
Maybe raise OD a little?
DS seems a little uneven at some places, be sure to fix the most obvious ones, like 00:07:641 (1,2,3) -
I feel like 01:55:641 - could be emphasized more so why not putting a circle there with finish followed by the spinner?
That's all I could find.
DS seems a little uneven at some places, be sure to fix the most obvious ones, like 00:07:641 (1,2,3) -
I feel like 01:55:641 - could be emphasized more so why not putting a circle there with finish followed by the spinner?
That's all I could find.
Hard
OD7 seems a little too high for a slow Hard like this, maybe nerf it a little? Plus that's quite a gap from Normal's OD3. Same could be said for the HP tho
00:19:641 (1) - It would flow and look better like this imo:
There's quite a difficulty gap between this and Normal, consider nerfing some stats like OD as I said, and even nerfing some jumps like 00:10:266 (5,1) - 01:22:641 (1,2) - , etc.
00:19:641 (1) - It would flow and look better like this imo:
There's quite a difficulty gap between this and Normal, consider nerfing some stats like OD as I said, and even nerfing some jumps like 00:10:266 (5,1) - 01:22:641 (1,2) - , etc.
That should be it. I didn't find a lot of individual flaws but there is some general stuff that should be reconsidered.
Good luck!
Hi~ M4M request in-game.
That's all, only minor aesthetic fix to do.
Mukyu~
- Wafu's Easy :
- 00:21:516 (4,1) - Blanket pls.
- 00:40:641 (1,2) - ^
- 01:55:828 (1) - Spinner's end is too loud imo, put it at 10% sounds good.
- Bakari's Normal :
- 00:40:641 (4) - I think you should use the same shape than 00:39:891 (3) - looks cuter.
- 01:48:141 (5,6) - ^
- 01:55:641 (1) - Same as Easy for volume put the end at 10%.
- Hard :
- 00:13:641 (1,2) - Blanket pls.
- 01:07:641 (1,3) - ^
- 01:24:891 (4) - Flow could be better if you move it to 392:56.
- 01:46:641 (1,2) - Blanket uhh.
- 01:51:141 (4,5) - ^
- 01:55:828 (1) - Like other diff pls.
That's all, only minor aesthetic fix to do.
Mukyu~
Hi :3 I'm here.
Sorry for the delay. I was too tired yesterday and fell asleep right after I get back home :3!
Let's see what I can find :3
[General]
Good luck on ranking :3!!
Sorry for the delay. I was too tired yesterday and fell asleep right after I get back home :3!
Let's see what I can find :3
[General]
- Nothing :3
- Now I see how repetitive this song is.
- 01:55:828 (1) - Maybe you can add a whistle on this spinner?
- 00:16:641 (5) - NC? cuz 9 combo is relatively long for a Normal
- 00:35:391 (5) - well, I think you can try stack this on the head of 00:31:641 (1) - ? So that you can avoid overlap with 00:33:516 (2) -
- 01:55:641 (1) - the same with easy, try a whistle?
- 00:50:953 (2,1,2) - maybe make these three notes a triangle?
- 01:55:828 (1) - The same as previous diffs, try a whistle?
Good luck on ranking :3!!
Topic Starter
Nozhomi wrote:
Hi~ M4M request in-game.- Hard :
- 00:13:641 (1,2) - Blanket pls. - Fixed.
- 01:07:641 (1,3) - ^ - Fixed.
- 01:24:891 (4) - Flow could be better if you move it to 392:56. - Leaving like it is.
- 01:46:641 (1,2) - Blanket uhh. - Fixed.
- 01:51:141 (4,5) - ^ - Fixed.
- 01:55:828 (1) - Like other diff pls. - Not fixed. Leaving like it is.
That's all, only minor aesthetic fix to do.
Mukyu~ Thankyu~
Megurine Luka wrote:
Hi :3 I'm here.
Sorry for the delay. I was too tired yesterday and fell asleep right after I get back home :3! - It's okay c:
Let's see what I can find :3
[Hard]Pretty nice map :3 Sorry I can't find something useful.
- 00:50:953 (2,1,2) - maybe make these three notes a triangle? - Hmm.. Okay.
- 01:55:828 (1) - The same as previous diffs, try a whistle? - Added.
Good luck on ranking :3!! - Thanks!
The combo is fine as it doesn't go higher than 9. As for the "overlap", it's not even visisble, so I'll let it stay. We've added the whistle, though. @Megurine Luka
thank you for the mod
thank you for the mod
[Easy]
00:30:141 (2,3) - This (and all the similar parts) should have the slider before the circle. Here we have a slider end on the snare, while it starts on the weaker sound, hi hat. Putting slider first would make it end on the weak sound and have a standalone object on the stronger sound, snare.
00:40:641 (1,2) - Could have a blanket here.
Neat diff, could use more variation and original patterns, but there are no big problems to be found.
[Normal]
The settings could be buffed to make the transition from Easy and to Hard neater.
Suggestions:
AR5 - HP4 - OD4 or 4,5.
Other than that, it's actually fine, I have nothing else orz.
[Hard]
Since the song is using a tricky shuffle rhythm, many of the 1/4 circles and sliders need to be moved 1/16 forwards (and sliders will be even more tricky) - you can listen on 25% speed for proof - the drums come 1/16 after the quarter hit.
Sorry but I will check this when it's fixed, in case you need to make big changes.
Poke me when ready.
00:30:141 (2,3) - This (and all the similar parts) should have the slider before the circle. Here we have a slider end on the snare, while it starts on the weaker sound, hi hat. Putting slider first would make it end on the weak sound and have a standalone object on the stronger sound, snare.
00:40:641 (1,2) - Could have a blanket here.
Neat diff, could use more variation and original patterns, but there are no big problems to be found.
[Normal]
The settings could be buffed to make the transition from Easy and to Hard neater.
Suggestions:
AR5 - HP4 - OD4 or 4,5.
Other than that, it's actually fine, I have nothing else orz.
[Hard]
Since the song is using a tricky shuffle rhythm, many of the 1/4 circles and sliders need to be moved 1/16 forwards (and sliders will be even more tricky) - you can listen on 25% speed for proof - the drums come 1/16 after the quarter hit.
Sorry but I will check this when it's fixed, in case you need to make big changes.
Poke me when ready.
Thank you for a mod~ :3Static Noise Bird wrote:
[Easy]
00:30:141 (2,3) - This (and all the similar parts) should have the slider before the circle. Here we have a slider end on the snare, while it starts on the weaker sound, hi hat. Putting slider first would make it end on the weak sound and have a standalone object on the stronger sound, snare. I prefer putting the circle before the slider because it is way easier to play. Player does have to click only the circles accurately, sliders require less accuracy, that means if he clicks the circle, he has some little time to click the slider, if he is delayed or a panics a bit so he clicks it earlier or later, he will be okay and it most likely still will give him 300 or 100 in worse case. However, if I swap it, he would have some little time to play the circle accurately right after the slider, which would be harder, because previously, he had enough time to react on circle and get ready for it, but in this case he would have to react quickly.
00:40:641 (1,2) - Could have a blanket here. I already explained Static Noise Bird that I want to keep high angle of the slider's shape and making it fit exactly in middle of the slider would deny the constant spacing.
Checked the mapset and looks fine also I have a thing to say to you :
Add this at tags (it's up to you (: ) ,revive it and then call me back
- I suggest to add 'blues' at tags since this is the genre of the song
Add this at tags (it's up to you (: ) ,revive it and then call me back
Topic Starter
Done~.ByBy_ChAn wrote:
Checked the mapset and looks fine also I have a thing to say to you :
- I suggest to add 'blues' at tags since this is the genre of the song
Add this at tags (it's up to you (: ) ,revive it and then call me back
Okay take this bubble ~ 
<3
we fixed volume on spinner, slidertick, and something else I don't even remember
Nice song, do more please.
Gratz
Gratz
Topic Starter
I will. ♥MoodyRPG wrote:
Nice song, do more please.
Gratz
And thanks.
Grats!
Mao wrote:
Grats!
Mao wrote:
Grats!
Congratulations Pjecoo c:
oops double post