Hey Asphyxia!
General
- Untick Widescreen Support through all the difficulties, since there's no storyboard.
Easy
- 00:21:626 (1) - The distance between this to the previous slider is inconsistent from the others.
- 00:32:913 to 00:33:507 - You missed some pretty good beats. So you could move the short slider (3) to 00:32:913 -, and optionally, you can add a circle on 00:32:616 with a whistle because the beat makes a little trigger.
- 00:42:121 (2) - Remove the middle node so the flow to the next slider would be a little improved?
- 01:29:942 (4) - This sounds really weird, and you should add something clickable on the big downbeat. You can make a rhythm like this.
- 01:27:269 to 01:44:794 - I'm lost with the new combo in that part. Add the new combos on the objects that have a finish. Here's a list of there you should add and remove it:SPOILER
- 01:28:160 (2) - Add a new combo, but it'll leave 01:27:269 (1) a single combo.
- If you have applied the previous suggestion, the slider that lands on 01:30:537 should have a new combo.
- What to remove:
- 01:31:725 (1) -
- 01:34:101 (1) -
- 01:36:477 (1) -
- 01:39:150 (1) -
- 01:41:230 (1) -
- 01:43:606 (1) -
- What to add:
- 01:32:913 (2) -
- 01:35:289 (4) -
- 01:38:259 (2) -
- 01:40:041 (3) -
- 01:42:418 (2) -
- 02:06:180 - I'd start something here due to the beats, so maybe edit that part by a rhythm like this would go.
- 02:17:467 (3) - Similar to the previous suggestion, because of the strong beat on the downbeat, where the repeat is. You can try this rhythm.
- 02:20:438 - The pause seems very weird to hear, since you let a tail end on where another measure in the music will begin. So you make another rhythm from 02:19:249 to 02:21:923 . You can get something based on the rhythm suggested, but that rhythm sounds off.
- 02:43:012 (2) - Extending the slider a beat would fit with rhythm, but there's a change in the timing, so keep the way it is.
Normal
- 00:35:289 (4) - Shift this back by 1/2 a beat (00:35:140 - ) and extend the slider by 1/2 beat again. This would only follow a single instrument, which is the guitar (?).
- 01:07:220 (2) - The body of 01:06:774 (1) is kind of overlapping that slider's head, and the head is a tiny hidden. This isn't major, but I would alter the pattern a bit.
- 01:30:388 (4) - Placing a circle on the red tick seems a little unexpected. I don't see other rhythm with that kind of thing, so why placing it on the white tick before.
- 02:03:210 (3) - Make it straight, so it could avoid that bounce effect? I don't really like that effect because the flow isn't going well.
- 02:43:012 (2) - Same thing in Easy, but it's still due to the timing change. So just skip it.
Advanced
- 00:10:339 (2,3,4,5) - Use the polygon creation tool to make a perfect square. It should looks nice when it's perfect.
- 00:21:032 (6) - This slider sounds pretty weird to me when it ends. There's a sudden pause after, which I think it's awkward. You should extend the slider to where the next circle is, then remove that circle.
- 00:22:814 (4) - How about a straight slider? The way the pattern 00:22:220 (3,4) is made is ugly, to be honest. With the straight slider, the pattern will look nice.
- 00:51:774 (6,7) - Due to the rhythm 00:51:180 (4,5,6) that's on the red tick. It would possibly make a little confusion for the players. And the circle plus slider seems to sound weird to me, because you started to follow the drums now. I think this rhythm will fit.
- 01:55:190 (3,4) - Changing the rhythm by this rhythm will result a better following in the vocals, if you were following the vocals.
- 02:47:468 (3) - Rotate this by 15° with selection centre? This would make a tiny improve to the flow of the curve. Or else, you just move the next three sliders more upper-left, like x:175 y:266.
Leader's Hard
Hey Leader!- You have a different preview point compared to the rest.
- 00:13:606 - Add something that will fill that tick? You missed a guitar beat, which is awkward to hear if you skip it.
- 00:21:032 (5) - This slider sounds really weird to me. It still skip a good beat. You can either extend the slider by 1/2 a beat, or make another rhythm.
- 00:30:834 (1) - Nazi, but the stack is imperfect.
- 00:34:695 - The distance of the 1/4 stream is too big, like 00:35:066 (2,3) - in my opinion. And this a hard difficulty, so it's a little too much. I like the patterns, but maybe you should change something.
- 00:53:111 (3) - I don't think the long distance to 00:52:814 (2,3,4) doesn't fit with the music, because the beats aren't very strong, compared to 00:53:705 . So you should bring this more to the previous and next sliders. And you can make a jump to 00:53:408 (4,5) due to the beat.
- 00:53:408 (4,5) - Move this a tiny bit away from 01:13:012 (7) to not be too near the tail?
- 01:13:012 (7) - What about moving this to x:72 y:174, so the previous slider's tail would be on the middle of 01:15:388 (5) ? It would look nice.
- 01:27:269 (1) - I dislike the pattern because it's ugly to my preference. I would just stack with the next slider's head.
- 01:43:457 (3,4) - Switching the places on the timeline (the long slider first then the short after) may follow better the vocals.
- 01:50:289 (4,1) - The distance between them is really high. I suggest you move them more closer to each other. Since it's a hard difficulty, a high jump seems too much.
- 02:22:888 (1) - The spinner should end on the blue tick. The beat starts there, but not on the red tick.
- 02:35:438 (4,5) - The flow doesn't go very well. Try a pattern like this?
alacat's Insane
Hey alacat!- 00:16:725 (1) - Remove this from the next slider's head to avoid confusion? It didn't go for me, but I don't know for the others.
- 00:58:903 (6,7,8) - I think the flow would go better if the stacked circles are where the circle (6), and the circle (6) would be where the stacked circles are.
- 01:10:190 (8) - To be honest, the shape isn't pretty, but I don't know what to suggest.
- 02:23:111 (3,4,5) - It could be me, but listening to them with a slower speed seems to be weird by hearing it. You should see something that can help with the timing, because I don't think they land on the right time.
- 02:24:150 (1) - This slider should land on 02:24:101 (with 1/6).
- 02:51:352 (2) - The circle is unsnapped.
Kyshiro's Extra
Hey Kyshiro!- 00:42:863 (1) - Move this further from the previous slider? It feels like it's on the blue tick.
- 00:54:893 (1,2,3) - Do the same thing you did to 02:13:309 (1,2,3) and 02:18:061 (1,2,3) so you could keep the same rhythm? Or you can do the opposite: transform the 4/4 sliders into 1/2 sliders.
- 02:23:111 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I don't think the circles are placed on the right time.
- 02:23:853 (13) - Remove this circle. The stream ends on 02:23:779 .
CRN's Extra
Hey caren_sk!- 00:21:626 (1) - Move this further from the previous circle? The movement seems a bit odd to me. Plus, the vocal seems to go high, so a jump would be the opportunity.
- 00:53:408 (3,4) - I think the short distance will make an awkward movement. I was thinking of stacking it with the next circle, but it seems more weird.
- 00:56:081 (4,5,6) - I would add more distance between them so it doesn't make the cursor flow weirdly. This also go to 02:19:249 (4,5,6) .
- 02:05:586 (7) - 02:05:883 (8) - Switch the head and tail on those two sliders? I think it would be funner and would avoid the short distance between 02:05:883 (8,1) . If you apply this, move 02:05:438 (6) somewhere like X:308 y:171.
- 02:22:814 - The stream sounds weird to me, because it doesn't really land at the right time. There might a change in the BPM though, but I don't know.
- 02:25:190 (1) - Move the tail to x:244 y:103 for a better blanket.
Extra
- 01:56:675 (1) - Considering lowering this because it touches the bar.
- 02:05:586 (1,2) - A bit too extreme?
- 02:23:111 - Like in the other high difficulties, this part seems to bother me a little. I don't think the slider lands on the right time. But it should be me. Else, it should be inspected.
This should be it! I really want to see this mapset ranked, so here's two stars for a little boost! The difficulties, especially the extreme ones are awesome! Good luck on qualifying this! If you have questions, don't hesitate on asking them!