H-boy wrote:

First of all
need make a easy diff? wait for that

Normal
reduce volume? No

Hard
reduce volume? No
00:45:565(3) - add a note? Ok

Insane
00:05:987~00:23:336 reduce volume? No ._.

star~

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi hi!!

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- I really think you need an Easy. Normal is 4.00 stars so it will appear as Hard :/ Wait for the easy
- The spinnercircle needs to be 666x666. Also it doesn't look nice being totally transparent >.< spinnercircle deleted
- Delete the .osb file :3 ok

~Normal~
- Decrease HP Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty a bit? ok

00:26:589 (5) - New Combo. Try to not make combos of 9-10 circles for easiest diffs. yup
00:32:733 (7) - ^ ^
00:38:155 (7) - ^ ^
00:46:468 (1) - Delete New Combo? yes :3
01:05:264 (3) - The reverse arrow of the slider is almost hidden here, invert the slider to fix it :3 ok
01:09:601 (8,1) - New Combo on (8) and delete New Combo on (1). ok
01:22:613 (1) - Delete New Combo. yup :3

~Hard~
00:10:324 (7) - New Combo. ok
00:15:023 (8) - ^ ^
00:37:974 (7) - ^? ^
00:46:468 (1) - Delete New Combo. ok
01:04:902 (2) - Fix spacing here. fixed
01:14:661 (8) - New Combo. ok

~Kytoxid's Insane~
00:21:529 (9,10) - Fix spacing. Compare this with (4,5) spacing fixed
00:24:782 (7) - New Combo. ok
00:41:589 (7) - ^ ^
00:53:697 (9) - ^ ^

Nice map and song, good luck!! *star* thank you!

xierbaliti wrote:

Wow I love this song me too *-*
Very good map. :3 So just some suggestions:

-Normal-
HP-1 or HP-2 fixed
01:21:167 (1) - add whistle at this slider's end yup
01:22:613 (1) - ^ ^
01:24:059 (1) - add whistle at this slider's start&end ^
01:25:505 (3) - ^ ^


-Hard-
00:15:746 (11) - move it 1 grid up ok
01:08:697 (1) - I don't like this jump.a bit hard to read for me. ok
01:09:240 - add a circle here? like this: ok

SPOILER

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-Kytoxid-
00:46:468 (1) - add finish? ok
01:03:276 (1,2) - use soft-finish? Soft-finish is seems better than normal's. ok
01:15:384 (1) - remove clap ok
01:15:746 (2) - add clap ok
01:16:107 (3) - remove clap ok
01:16:468 (4) - add clap ok

*star* thank you!!

Sallad4ever wrote:

Halo Vicho kun

Here's my gift for you
The hitsound by all means are suggestion only

Normal
I'm afraid there will be any MAT/BAT complain about the 4 star rating
Maybe decrease OD and HP by 3 or can I make an easy diff for you? fixed and... no, thanks ^^U
01:21:167 (1,1) - use finish on goth the slider end ok


Hard
00:20:806 (8) - new combo ok
00:29:480 (1,2,3) - nice one I got careless and hit 3 first xD
00:43:035 (3) - new combo ok
01:00:203 (6,7) - whistle ? ok
01:11:770 (4) - ^ ^


Kytoxyd's insane
00:13:215 (1,2,3,4) - my favorite pattern
00:31:830 (1) - remove new combo ? ok
00:32:733 (13) - new combo ok


00:57:312 this part of the song cant leave my head
What ? Muranai ?? Soko da, MARANAI! >.<

Very catchy song, you have my STAR thank you >.<

DJPop wrote:

01:08:517 (4,1) - NO D:

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- Remove the countdown on all difficulties (Dan's Easy doesn't have the countdown enabled and it sounds better).
-- The colors don't contrast very well.

Hard:

01:08:517 (4,1) - Jump is weird, doesn't play very well.

Kytoxid's Insane:

-- Lots of triples ~

00:13:938 (3) - Slider end is covered but it's kinda intuitive I guess.
00:15:746 (6) - Note is completely hidden. New combo makes it more visible though it would be better to reposition imo.
00:37:252 (7) - New combo.
00:39:962 (1) - Remove new combo. (Seems kinda pointless)
00:43:035 (7) - New combo.
00:43:577 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:03:276 (1) - ^

Good overall.
~ Star

Agent Spin Here wrote:

Shouldn't that be (TV Size), not (Short Ver.)? is (Short Ver.) because online broadcast: Nico Nico Douga, not TV
Use offset 5,973 ok

Easy Dan
Fine

Normal
Is there any need for that massive break? Map it! Mapped

Hard
Fine

Kytoxid's Insane
00:15:746 (1) - This new combo seems pointless... remove it ok

1. Timing looks good