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David Wise - Aquatic Ambience

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fabriciorby
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fabriciorby
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on sexta-feira, 28 de janeiro de 2011 at 22:16:42

Artist: David Wise
Title: Aquatic Ambience
Source: Donkey Kong Country
Tags: SNES BD Blue Dragon
BPM: 150
Filesize: 3571kb
Play Time: 02:00
Difficulties Available:
  1. BD's Easy (0,48 stars, 62 notes)
  2. Hard (4,31 stars, 167 notes)
  3. Normal (2,24 stars, 102 notes)
Download: David Wise - Aquatic Ambience
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Ranked ~

The Insane diff was removed, it can be downloaded here -> http://puu.sh/Dc4
Last edited by fabriciorby , edited 67 times in total.
Frajolex
9 posts
Joined August 2009
Frajolex
One break is too short, but this map that's good :D
Waiting one Mod. -n
Cheedar
95 posts
Joined December 2008
Cheedar
[Tudo]
USE DISTANCE SNAP.
[Easy]
Faz mais longa.
[Hard]
Bem, toma cuidado quando os combos passara, de 7~8. Sempre use new combo quando chegar no 7/8/9

Star *-*
Crimmi
1,947 posts
Joined June 2009
Crimmi
Modding, CrimmiStyle!

[General]
Add "Donkey Kong Country" As The Source.
Add A Background To It As Well.
And Set a Preview Point. (May I Suggest 01:24:000 Should Suffice?)


[Easy]
00:11:900 to 00:14:900 Whoa..You Have A Bunch Of Unused Bookmarks There, Remove Them If You're Not Using Them.
I See You Havent Finished It Yet.... orz..... But I'll Mod What I Can.
00:22:400 Are You Using This Bookmark? (If Not Remove It.)
00:22:433 (6) New Combo.

[Hard]
Oh My God, Lower That Overall Difficulty & HP Drain Please!!
I Know It's A Hard Diff But Don't Make It Too Hard..... O.O
Lower The OD & HP Drain By 2 Please.
00:22:400 same as Easy
00:11:900 to 00:14:900 ^
00:22:755 (13) New Combo and Some Sliders Don't Go So Long So I Suggest You Shorten It Add Some Notes.
00:34:825 (12) New Combo.
00:52:000 (1) What The Hell... Fix That Slider Anybody Can Get A Slider Break Here With One Little Mistake. =[
01:06:448 (1) Fix That Slider.
01:11:769 (1) New Combo?
01:13:748 (1) ^
01:15:068 (1) ^
01:24:000 to 01:47:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) Phew.... *Pant* Fix The Spacing There, Make Some Patterns Please =]
01:28:400 (9) New Combo
01:41:050 (9) ^
01:54:800 (4) Fix That Slider And End It On The white Tick.
Ok. Not Bad For Your First Map =] Finish Up So I Can Mod The Rest.

*Star*
Tadaki_Laka
29 posts
Joined January 2009
Tadaki_Laka
Okay, star 8D
Nelsonjd
34 posts
Joined March 2009
Nelsonjd
Star~ *¬*
Bne-chan
23 posts
Joined April 2009
Bne-chan
DK eh infancia, atoron.
Star *-*
PedroGabriel
32 posts
Joined August 2009
PedroGabriel
star u_u
Crimmi
1,947 posts
Joined June 2009
Crimmi
Take "David Wise & Donkey Kong Country" off the tags since it's in the source.
fabriciorby
2,211 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
fabriciorby
Ok, I made it. (:
Utena
90 posts
Joined June 2008
Utena
Música chata xD

Mas o mapa ta bem feitinho.
fabriciorby
2,211 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
fabriciorby
I'm making a Insane Diff :D
Tomboy_old_1
33 posts
Joined April 2010
Tomboy_old_1
Jogava DKC no meu Snes :D

Star
troni_old
17 posts
Joined June 2008
troni_old
Good Map
TheVileOne
osu! Alumni
8,431 posts
Joined March 2010
TheVileOne
Your maps are nice and relaxing like the music. Making the notes move with the music is what few maps can accomplish. Really good job.



Easy

01:45:400 (2) – Touch this slider up a bit. It looks strange. (Particularly because of the flat end)

01:54:798 (4) – Make this slider look more spiral like.

Hard

00:32:000 (1,2,3) – I don’t like where these are placed. You should like them up to the end point of the previous combo and remap all the notes after it.

01:45:400 (6) – Still looks a bit odd.(Flatend)


Insane

So far fine.
xHugoxD
1 post
Joined March 2010
xHugoxD
ohai wut a gudi mépi
Bittersweet
2,031 posts
Joined February 2010
Bittersweet
bla bla bla whiskas sachê :o

titia falou com ele pelo irc e. pra constar: termine esse insano <3
Hamuko
4,713 posts
Joined April 2009
Hamuko
legalzin champz, q
Bianco
54 posts
Joined July 2008
Bianco
legalzin
Fabricio4p
17 posts
Joined July 2008
Fabricio4p
I loved the jumps in Insane diff
Nice one,
star'd
Xgor
Elite Mapper
2,534 posts
Joined April 2009
Xgor
[General]
Cut/Fade the mp3 a large part of it is unmapped.

There is no hitsounds at all, I guess is because it's a WIP but you need it for getting it ranked and it's plays/feels better with them. (If done right)


[Easy]
This feels far more like a Normal imo.

Can you please use the background for the other difficulites, it fits the song much better.

Lower the overall difficulity and HP drain please.

01:29:200 (7) - New combo.
01:32:800 (9) - ^
01:42:000 (8) - ^
01:49:200 (3) - ^
01:54:800 (4) - Please move this 1/1 foward on the timeline and place a circle where you started the slider before.

[Hard]
00:22:600 (1) - 2 seconds of repeats is very boring (In general short repeating sliders are very boring)
00:33:600 (5) - New combo.
00:35:200 (9) - ^
00:36:000 (1) - Remove new combo
00:36:800 (2) - New combo
00:40:000 (2) - ^
00:41:600 (5) - ^
00:43:200 (8) - ^
01:16:600 (9) - Maybe start the break here instead?
01:32:800 (5) - New combo
01:44:800 (5) - ^
01:54:800 (4) - Same thing as in Easy/Normal

[Insane]
I'm not gonna mod this due to it's not finish but it felt a bit too fast for this song :/

Well that's it, I kinda wished you or somebody else made a real easy but there is no must.
I'm not gonna star it right now as you got tons of newbie friends starring it.
I will do though it after this is finished and I feels that this is ready though.
Zeugziumy
327 posts
Joined June 2010
Zeugziumy
1:24:653

Overlap sliders are not cool, try retire that "?" slider, and remake another one...

I will give you an star because the map is great...
fabriciorby
2,211 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
fabriciorby
Andrea revived the beatmap for me, thank you Andrea :D
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nimi
978 posts
Joined April 2010
nimi
concordo com a utena XD de qualquer forma, star
Guerra
351 posts
Joined February 2010
Guerra
boa Fabricio ^^
Dragvon
osu! Alumni
2,269 posts
Joined June 2009
Dragvon
Seol pooto

Info
Suggestões! Se não quiser mudar, não precisa.
Problemas! De uma olhada nesses. Talvez seja melhor corrigi-los.
Erros! Arrume essas merdas -q

<Geral>
• Tudo ok.

<Timing>
• Algumas timing sections como essas do exemplo tem um volume parecido e o mesmo tipo de som (soft) tente reduzir esse mar de barrinhas verdes.
• Se você só for mapear até os 2 minutos mesmo, use essa mp3: David Wise (Jogue a mp3 na pasta antes de abrir o osu!, e depois dê full submit)

<Normal>
• 00:44:800 (1) - Tire esse combo :3 (Se quiser mova pro lado do 3 tbm)
• 01:28:600 (6) - Não é muito bom esconder notas na dificuldade mais fácil do mapa :3! Mova essa.
• 01:32:800 (1) - Você não acha que este slider não está estranho não? Preste atenção na música D:!
• 01:39:600 (1,2,3) - Slider está escondendo as notas...
• 01:44:800 (1) - E de novo escondido xD!
• 01:55:200 (5) - Coloque uma repetição neste slider, uma timing section no novo fim dela, aumente o volume e ponha um Whistle(ou finish) na última nota :D!

<Hard>
• 00:22:400 (12,1) - Ponha o novo combo no 12.
• 00:44:800 (1) - Vide o normal.
• 01:04:000 (1) - Que tal tirar 2 repetições e mover o slider seguinte pro branco que vai liberar? (Se fizer isso estenda depois o outro)
• 01:12:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Tem como você mover um pouco só para que a coluna da esquerda não fique no mesmo lugar do combo anterior? Como você fez no combo seguinte~
• 01:29:200 (3,4,1) - Ctrl C do normal? Não faça isso ;0;
• 01:42:000 (3,4) - ^ Flip haha
• 01:44:800 (1,2) - Sério, eu tive que remapear a escapist inteira por causa de ctrl C :X
• 01:55:200 (5) - Vide a sugestão no normal xD!

<Insane>
• 00:22:400 (5) - Novo combo?
• 00:24:000 (11) - Aqui tbm? ^
• 00:44:800 (1) - Adivinha -q
• 01:14:400 (5,6) - Um só slider com 2 repetições fica melhor.
• 01:16:000 (5,6) - ^
• 01:20:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25) - VAI SE FODER ;-;

Comentários: Gostei do insane apesar de algumas coisinhas.
Alguns sliders são feio que dói mas tudo bem 8D!
Não gosto muito de notas silenciosas como já disse~

Nada mal pro primeiro beatmap, mas vai ter que arrumar bastante coisas ainda ;-;!

Estrela~
Crimmi
1,947 posts
Joined June 2009
Crimmi
I've Found A Suitable Background For Your Map. =]

Mismagius
9,237 posts
Joined July 2008
Mismagius
Geral
Adicione um Preview Point em todas as dificuldades. Se tu não sabe como fazer isso, é só ir, no editor, para o local EXATO onde você quer que toque a música no menu/website. Então, lááá em cima, na aba Timing (na barra cinza), tem "Set Preview Point" ou algo assim. Clica ali e vai adicionar um preview point na diff. Você tem que fazer isso em todas as dificuldades, e todas devem estar no mesmo lugar.

Normal
00:58:800 (1) - Remove o whistle
01:04:800 (2) - Usa o grid 3 como um macho de verdade e bota isso aqui: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/34257
01:44:800 (1,2) - NÃO, PORRA. tenta fazer uma stack de duas notas em cima do (2) ao invés desse slider confuso

Hard
00:24:800 (8) - Usando grid 3, move isso um quadradinho pra esquerda, vai ficar perfeitamente stackeado com o (3)
00:25:600 (1,2,3,4,5) - Se fizer isso acima, faz algo com esses aí que vão ficar overlapped, eles tão bem feios no distance snap, btw
00:58:800 (1) - Tira o whistle do final do slider
01:02:000 (1) - ^
01:24:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Eu sei que tu pode fazer melhor que esse spacing. Remapeia, sério.
01:36:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^

Insane
00:58:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - SPACING DOS INFERNOS AFASDASDASFSA
01:05:200 (1) - Tira o whistle daqui D:
01:20:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25) - AHAM CLÁUDIA SENTA LÁ AEHUEAHAEUIOHEOIUEHIOUHSI
01:24:600 (2) - slider lindo
01:31:000 (1) - bota um pouco mais longe do centro, ele fica coberto pelo "300!" do spinner
01:49:200 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^U^

Precisa de mais trabalho nesses sliders (e aquela stream no insane), então ianda num vou dar Star D: mas pede lá na queue por uma recheck

EDIT: Minha diff~

Download: David Wise - Aquatic Ambiance (fabriciorby) [BD's Easy].osu
fabriciorby
2,211 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
fabriciorby

CrimmiSkye wrote:

I've Found A Suitable Background For Your Map. =]
CrimmiSkye, thank you :D
XepherX3
625 posts
Joined September 2008
XepherX3
yea..what to say bout this...nice map :o
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