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HiverK
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年2月22日 at 上午 03:48:03

Artist: Shiiba Tsumugi
Title: Sweet Sweet Arisu
Source: サノバウィッチ
Tags: yuzu soft sothewitch sanoba witch sabbat of the witch character vol3 黒咲そら kurosaki sora
BPM: 178
Filesize: 2198kb
Play Time: 01:44
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.58 stars, 127 notes)
  2. Hard (3.3 stars, 252 notes)
  3. Insane (4.52 stars, 379 notes)
  4. Normal (2.08 stars, 181 notes)
Download: Shiiba Tsumugi - Sweet Sweet Arisu
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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サノバウィッチ キャラソン Vol.3 - 椎葉 紬 (CV.黒咲そら)

Easy - 100% by me
Normal - 100 % by me
Hard - 100% by me
Insane - 100% by me

Thanks those modders
  1. Feerum
  2. MiaoFUuU
  3. FaiVillager
  4. nikachyan
  5. Xelasto
  6. ts8zs
  7. bigfrog
  8. LucyS
  9. VINXIS
  10. batwoman3
  11. -[ Asuna ]-
  12. Yuii-
  13. CloudSplash16
  14. Rokkea

star shooters
  1. nikachyan
  2. -Nanaka-
Feerum
Hello! Have see your Mod request @ #modreq so here we go!

[Easy]

First 00:15:951 (1) - move this slider beginning to 00:15:783 - and let the slider End at 00:16:963 -
Remove 00:31:288 - this Note, it's for an easy diff better to Play
Move this slider beginning 00:40:727 (3) - to 00:40:895 - and End to 00:41:401 - again it's better to play
This slider 00:58:760 - move beginn to 00:58:929 - and end to 00:59:434 -
Maybe add a Note here 01:09:041 (2) - ? It sounds a little bit better without it feeld so empty
01:11:738 (2) - ^ Same thing
The remaining song looks fine

[Normal]

Add Note at 00:05:839 - sounds way better
Add Note at 00:08:536 - ^ Same thing
Maybe add one here 00:38:536 - ? OR! whats maybe better make a slider from 00:38:199 - to 00:38:536 -
Move 00:51:513 - the slider to 00:51:682 - and let him end at 00:52:187 - add a note at 00:51:513 -
Move this slider 01:25:727 - to 01:25:895 - and let him end at 01:26:401 -
the remaining looks fine

[Hard]

Remove this note 00:13:760 - it feels so.. how should i say.. needless :o
Remove this 00:17:805 - and add it 00:17:890 (2) - here, sounds better
Add here a Note 01:19:085 - when you hear this part with 25 speed you hear that one note is missing
Okay This 01:23:536 (4) - and this 01:23:873 (5) - slider Remove and Add Notes at 01:23:536 - 01:23:704 - 01:23:873 -
Remove the Note at 01:24:378 (7) - and make a Slider from 01:24:041 (7) - to 01:24:378 -
Maybe remove this one 01:36:008 - ? i think it's needless but.. hm.. try it out :D

[Insane]

Maybe Add a Note here 01:24:210 - ?
And this 01:33:311 (3) - 01:33:564 (6) - maybe remove? Don't sure :/

Thats all! Can't find more.

Wish you good luck with your map! :)
Topic Starter
HiverK

Feerum wrote:

Hello! Have see your Mod request @ #modreq so here we go!

[Easy]

First 00:15:951 (1) - move this slider beginning to 00:15:783 - and let the slider End at 00:16:963 - >fixed
Remove 00:31:288 - this Note, it's for an easy diff better to Play >fixed
Move this slider beginning 00:40:727 (3) - to 00:40:895 - and End to 00:41:401 - again it's better to play >fixed
This slider 00:58:760 - move beginn to 00:58:929 - and end to 00:59:434 - >fixed
Maybe add a Note here 01:09:041 (2) - ? It sounds a little bit better without it feeld so empty >fixed
01:11:738 (2) - ^ Same thing >fixed
The remaining song looks fine

[Normal]

Add Note at 00:05:839 - sounds way better >fixed
Add Note at 00:08:536 - ^ Same thing >fixed
Maybe add one here 00:38:536 - ? OR! whats maybe better make a slider from 00:38:199 - to 00:38:536 - >fixed, I made a slider
Move 00:51:513 - the slider to 00:51:682 - and let him end at 00:52:187 - add a note at 00:51:513 - >fixed
Move this slider 01:25:727 - to 01:25:895 - and let him end at 01:26:401 - >fixed
the remaining looks fine

[Hard]

Remove this note 00:13:760 - it feels so.. how should i say.. needless :o >After removing this note, I feel weird
Remove this 00:17:805 - and add it 00:17:890 (2) - here, sounds better >fixed
Add here a Note 01:19:085 - when you hear this part with 25 speed you hear that one note is missing >fixed
Okay This 01:23:536 (4) - and this 01:23:873 (5) - slider Remove and Add Notes at 01:23:536 - 01:23:704 - 01:23:873 - >fixed
Remove the Note at 01:24:378 (7) - and make a Slider from 01:24:041 (7) - to 01:24:378 - >fixed
Maybe remove this one 01:36:008 - ? i think it's needless but.. hm.. try it out :D >fixed

[Insane]

Maybe Add a Note here 01:24:210 - ? >fixed
And this 01:33:311 (3) - 01:33:564 (6) - maybe remove? Don't sure :/ >This part I maped with the sound of high frequency. I will remap if there is a problem

Thats all! Can't find more.

Wish you good luck with your map! :)
Thanks for your modding!
MiaoFUuU
【Easy】

首先滑条这个时间不太对 00:10:558 - ,把他尾部时间放在00:10:390 - 这里比较好
00:16:963 - 这个滑条尾部放在 00:16:625 - ,在00:16:963 - 加个圈圈
00:22:524 - 这个滑条的尾部放在 00:22:356 -
00:25:727 - 这个位置改成这样节奏感好点 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2451477
00:31:288 - 这里按人声放两个小滑条节奏感好点 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2451511
00:34:828 - 把这个滑条删了,只放一个圈在这个位置
00:46:288 - 这个滑条的尾部放这个位置 然后在00:46:625 - 这里放个圈圈
00:48:311 - 这个位置可以做成这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2451575
00:58:255 - 尾巴放这个位置 01:00:951 - 这个也是
01:16:963 - 这里改成这样你看怎么样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2451613
01:25:895 - 滑条尾巴!!
01:28:592 - 滑条开头放这里 尾巴放这里01:30:109 - 这里的尾巴放这里01:31:288 -
01:33:816 - 这里这样摆怎样(看上边的谱)http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2451647
01:36:409 - 这里这样摆 (看上边的谱)http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2451659

就这些了 ;) 加油~
FaiVillager
队列里边的第二张图~
[easy]
总体上来说感觉节奏有点奇怪,有可能是因为按歌词的节奏但是又没有把每个音都做出来
虽然我不太擅长简单图,但是我推荐尽量再简单图里边去契合背景音乐比较好
00:04:996 (2,2) - 这两个滑条曲率一样会比较好看,00:04:996 (2,1) - 这两个最好在一条弧线上
00:09:210 (1) - 拐点尽量取在有节拍的地方(比如滑条长1/2的地方),并且和后边几个一样拐的太厉害了有点不好看
00:11:906 (3,4) - 考虑缩短3的长度,在4前边放一个单点,后边类似梗同样建议
00:18:479 (3) - unflow了,方向在简单难度里尽量不要做这种折返
00:24:547 (2) - 因为4是个直线拐弯的滑条,2的方向以及做成弧线并不好看, 这样比较好
00:29:940 (2) - 拉直点,堆得太紧新手不好判断速度
00:33:479 (1,2,3) - 全部改成弧线,3换成单点,比如
00:44:940 (2) - 在红点之间适当添加白点来使滑条更美观
00:51:008 (3) - 在第三个白先结束。这个结束的太晚了
00:53:704 (3) - 直的会比较好看
00:57:749 (2,3) - 节奏不对 缩短2
01:00:446 (1,2) - 同上 以及推荐同样的梗连用的话,combo数一样会比较整齐
01:06:345 (1) - 前边缺音(其实这个问题前边也有,就是因为你去契合歌词的原因吧。所以说我建议低难度先按音乐来)
01:08:536 (1,2) - 额,长音用点短音用滑条吗 倒过来吧
01:09:378 (3) - 因为ds的问题离得太近也会造成读图失误了 我不确定是否能增大ds先看看别的大触们怎么说
01:11:232 (1,2) - 中间缺东西
01:20:670 (3,4) - 节奏不对 3出现晚了
01:23:367 (3,4) - 同上
01:24:715 (1) - 提前1/2结束
01:26:738 (2,3,4) - 考虑结合成一个滑条或者转盘,在2结束的地方开始 前边的节拍用短滑条代替
01:30:783 (6) - 有二连打的地方这么放会点乱的,并且提前1/2结束。最后的第二个红点换成白的会圆滑些
01:33:816 (4,5,1) - 一条直线
01:39:715 (1) - 大白线开始,取消音效

normal和hard看了下,和easy一样节拍的选取上感觉有点问题所以先参考easy和insane改吧
以及在流畅性的工作做得不太好 多注意弯滑条的方向和曲率有助于你提升水平

[insane]
开头的部分可以按歌词来,在音乐有街拍的时候额外加note
00:06:513 (4) - 根据你的风格建议换成点
00:09:210 (5) - y60
00:09:210 (5,6,7) - 节奏有点怪 推荐把6换成和5一样长的滑条 再根据节拍确定7的位置
个人推荐

当然形状我没太改大概意思是这样
00:11:906 (2,3,4) - 太慢了 和歌曲难度对不上
00:16:625 (9,10) - 弯的太厉害了拉直点
00:17:890 (2,3,4) - 3,4换成slider然后和2分开
00:19:154 (8,9) - 换成跟上边一样的梗
00:19:996 (1) - 换个方向,别和上边的9,10顺边
00:21:008 (6,7,1,2) - 推荐7换成滑条并增大这几个点的ds
00:26:738 (1,2,3) - 不好看 做呈弧线或者变速
00:30:783 (1) - 和5衔接的流畅性不太好
00:31:457 (3) - 2加clap的话3的开头也加上
00:36:008 (4,1) - 换三连打
00:38:873 (1,2,3) - 这个地方处理得不错,别的地方可以借鉴下
00:40:390 (4,5,1,2) - 1,2是歌词的话4,5建议换成滑条
00:43:929 (7) - 加三连打
00:44:772 (2) - 放到后边的蓝线上,位置不推荐遮盖
00:45:614 (1,2,3,4,5) - 仔细点吧,至少别一眼能看出来不正 后边那个五角星同
00:52:861 (7) - 取消clap
00:53:030 (8) - 拉直点
00:57:412 (3,1) - 连打
00:59:772 (1) - 改成这样:

注意后边有个note
01:03:142 (1,2,3) - 流畅不好 修改方法比如把2的开头放在1的延长线上
01:04:491 (1,2,3,4) - 不好看 如果想要类似的话把1,2和3,4分别弄成曲率一样的或者做成这样:

01:05:839 (1) - 变速不合适
01:06:345 (3,4,5) - 节奏不好 找找节拍或者歌词
01:08:199 (6) - 连打
01:10:558 (1) - 变速不合适
01:11:232 (2,3,4) - 这样的话推荐2,4围成一个圆形把3夹在中间
01:13:929 (2,3) - 做成一样的形式
01:15:951 (3,4) - 这两个曲率一样而不是4,5
01:19:322 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 这部分我推荐按歌词来决定点还是滑条可以学学 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/191524 的二连单点
01:23:536 (2,3,4,5) - 这个五角星不合适,因为他在歌词之后结束
01:25:727 (5,6) - 缺连打
01:28:592 (7,8,9) - 去掉8
01:30:109 (9,1,2) - 考虑9换成滑条
01:30:446 (2,3,4,5,6) - 参考你开头部分怎么做的 这种地方不推荐差别太大
01:36:008 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 连打完了这部分显得有点混乱

完了。总的来说问题还是不少 嘛,毕竟第三张(?)
加油吧~~
Topic Starter
HiverK

MiaoFUuU wrote:

【Easy】

首先滑条这个时间不太对 00:10:558 - ,把他尾部时间放在00:10:390 - 这里比较好 >Fixed
00:16:963 - 这个滑条尾部放在 00:16:625 - ,在00:16:963 - 加个圈圈 >Fixed
00:22:524 - 这个滑条的尾部放在 00:22:356 - >Fixed
00:25:727 - 这个位置改成这样节奏感好点 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2451477 >Fixed
00:31:288 - 这里按人声放两个小滑条节奏感好点 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2451511 >Fixed
00:34:828 - 把这个滑条删了,只放一个圈在这个位置 >Fixed
00:46:288 - 这个滑条的尾部放这个位置 然后在00:46:625 - 这里放个圈圈 >Fixed
00:48:311 - 这个位置可以做成这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2451575 >Fixed
00:58:255 - 尾巴放这个位置 01:00:951 - 这个也是 >Fixed
01:16:963 - 这里改成这样你看怎么样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2451613 >硬塞個spinner感覺不是很好
01:25:895 - 滑条尾巴!! >Fixed
01:28:592 - 滑条开头放这里 尾巴放这里01:30:109 - 这里的尾巴放这里01:31:288 - >改spinner
01:33:816 - 这里这样摆怎样(看上边的谱)http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2451647 >Fixed
01:36:409 - 这里这样摆 (看上边的谱)http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2451659 >Fixed

就这些了 ;) 加油~

FaiVillager wrote:

队列里边的第二张图~
[easy]
总体上来说感觉节奏有点奇怪,有可能是因为按歌词的节奏但是又没有把每个音都做出来
虽然我不太擅长简单图,但是我推荐尽量再简单图里边去契合背景音乐比较好
00:04:996 (2,2) - 这两个滑条曲率一样会比较好看,00:04:996 (2,1) - 这两个最好在一条弧线上 >Fixed
00:09:210 (1) - 拐点尽量取在有节拍的地方(比如滑条长1/2的地方),并且和后边几个一样拐的太厉害了有点不好看 >Fixed
00:11:906 (3,4) - 考虑缩短3的长度,在4前边放一个单点,后边类似梗同样建议 >Fixed
00:18:479 (3) - unflow了,方向在简单难度里尽量不要做这种折返 >重新排列
00:24:547 (2) - 因为4是个直线拐弯的滑条,2的方向以及做成弧线并不好看, 这样比较好 >Fixed
00:29:940 (2) - 拉直点,堆得太紧新手不好判断速度 >Fixed
00:33:479 (1,2,3) - 全部改成弧线,3换成单点,比如 >Fixed
00:44:940 (2) - 在红点之间适当添加白点来使滑条更美观 >Fixed
00:51:008 (3) - 在第三个白先结束。这个结束的太晚了 >Fixed
00:53:704 (3) - 直的会比较好看 >Fixed
00:57:749 (2,3) - 节奏不对 缩短2 >Fixed
01:00:446 (1,2) - 同上 以及推荐同样的梗连用的话,combo数一样会比较整齐 >Fixed
01:06:345 (1) - 前边缺音(其实这个问题前边也有,就是因为你去契合歌词的原因吧。所以说我建议低难度先按音乐来) >重排
01:08:536 (1,2) - 额,长音用点短音用滑条吗 倒过来吧 >Fixed
01:09:378 (3) - 因为ds的问题离得太近也会造成读图失误了 我不确定是否能增大ds先看看别的大触们怎么说 >重排,看起來更密集了 :o ,再看看吧
01:11:232 (1,2) - 中间缺东西 >Fixed
01:20:670 (3,4) - 节奏不对 3出现晚了 >Fixed
01:23:367 (3,4) - 同上 >Fixed
01:24:715 (1) - 提前1/2结束 >Fixed
01:26:738 (2,3,4) - 考虑结合成一个滑条或者转盘,在2结束的地方开始 前边的节拍用短滑条代替 >Fixed
01:30:783 (6) - 有二连打的地方这么放会点乱的,并且提前1/2结束。最后的第二个红点换成白的会圆滑些 >重排
01:33:816 (4,5,1) - 一条直线 >Fixed
01:39:715 (1) - 大白线开始,取消音效 >Fixed

normal和hard看了下,和easy一样节拍的选取上感觉有点问题所以先参考easy和insane改吧
以及在流畅性的工作做得不太好 多注意弯滑条的方向和曲率有助于你提升水平

[insane]
开头的部分可以按歌词来,在音乐有街拍的时候额外加note
00:06:513 (4) - 根据你的风格建议换成点 >Fixed
00:09:210 (5) - y60 >Fixed
00:09:210 (5,6,7) - 节奏有点怪 推荐把6换成和5一样长的滑条 再根据节拍确定7的位置
个人推荐

当然形状我没太改大概意思是这样 >Fixed
00:11:906 (2,3,4) - 太慢了 和歌曲难度对不上 >Fixed
00:16:625 (9,10) - 弯的太厉害了拉直点 >Fixed
00:17:890 (2,3,4) - 3,4换成slider然后和2分开 >Fixed
00:19:154 (8,9) - 换成跟上边一样的梗 >這邊感覺不太一樣,補個漏音
00:19:996 (1) - 换个方向,别和上边的9,10顺边 >Fixed
00:21:008 (6,7,1,2) - 推荐7换成滑条并增大这几个点的ds >(7)→slider
00:26:738 (1,2,3) - 不好看 做呈弧线或者变速 >Fixed
00:30:783 (1) - 和5衔接的流畅性不太好 >還...可以吧
00:31:457 (3) - 2加clap的话3的开头也加上 >Fixed
00:36:008 (4,1) - 换三连打 >Fixed
00:38:873 (1,2,3) - 这个地方处理得不错,别的地方可以借鉴下 >好
00:40:390 (4,5,1,2) - 1,2是歌词的话4,5建议换成滑条 >Fixed
00:43:929 (7) - 加三连打 >Fixed
00:44:772 (2) - 放到后边的蓝线上,位置不推荐遮盖 >這邊沒問題啊
00:45:614 (1,2,3,4,5) - 仔细点吧,至少别一眼能看出来不正 后边那个五角星同 >我看還好
00:52:861 (7) - 取消clap >Fixed
00:53:030 (8) - 拉直点 >沒差
00:57:412 (3,1) - 连打 >Fixed
00:59:772 (1) - 改成这样:

注意后边有个note >Fixed (3)維持原樣
01:03:142 (1,2,3) - 流畅不好 修改方法比如把2的开头放在1的延长线上 >Fixed
01:04:491 (1,2,3,4) - 不好看 如果想要类似的话把1,2和3,4分别弄成曲率一样的或者做成这样:
>Fixed
01:05:839 (1) - 变速不合适 >Fixed
01:06:345 (3,4,5) - 节奏不好 找找节拍或者歌词 >先保留
01:08:199 (6) - 连打 >Fixed
01:10:558 (1) - 变速不合适 >Fixed
01:11:232 (2,3,4) - 这样的话推荐2,4围成一个圆形把3夹在中间 >Fixed
01:13:929 (2,3) - 做成一样的形式 >Fixed
01:15:951 (3,4) - 这两个曲率一样而不是4,5 >Fixed
01:19:322 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 这部分我推荐按歌词来决定点还是滑条可以学学 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/191524 的二连单点 >這邊不太清楚,先改(5)-(1)這部分
01:23:536 (2,3,4,5) - 这个五角星不合适,因为他在歌词之后结束 >雖是這麼說,暫時不知道怎麼改
01:25:727 (5,6) - 缺连打 >Fixed
01:28:592 (7,8,9) - 去掉8 >Fixed
01:30:109 (9,1,2) - 考虑9换成滑条 >Fixed
01:30:446 (2,3,4,5,6) - 参考你开头部分怎么做的 这种地方不推荐差别太大 >Fixed
01:36:008 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 连打完了这部分显得有点混乱 >感覺還好

完了。总的来说问题还是不少 嘛,毕竟第三张(?)
加油吧~~
謝謝Mod! :)
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nika mika
from my queue ;w;
希望不会太迟……

[Easy]
没什么问题。
提点建议:
有些1/2拍的节奏会不会太密了?挤在一起也不好看,还是酌情考虑改一点吧。
01:11:232 (1,2,3,4) –这里的节奏可以抄上一乐句的,有协调感
00:28:086 (1) –在这之前的flow全在绕圈圈……而且最右边几乎很少用上,排版可以再多下点功夫

[Normal]
0.9的ds太挤了……更何况你的SV并不是太高,推荐换成1.0到1.2之间
00:28:086 (1) –有点莫名其妙,直接用circle不是挺好……
00:40:052 (2) –在这里00:40:390 –停就好
00:46:288 –漏音
00:51:008 (1) –向右上拉打起来会顺一些
01:15:951 (2) –flow不顺,ctrl+g试试?

[Hard]
00:06:513 (3) –换用circle
00:21:513 (2,3,4) –间距?
00:30:277 (3,4,5,1) –弧度可以仔细调整
00:35:333 (1,2,3,4) -^
01:18:985 (9) –缩圈叠在一起有点乱,推荐NC
01:24:041 (7) –节奏抄上一乐句的就行
Flow也是太顺,一直转圈圈很容易让人视觉疲劳……大概

[Insane]
00:22:356 (5) –blanket可以包好一点
01:23:030 (5) –分开放就是一个梗
还有就是间距,虽说insane的间距可以不用开着ds但是在:
00:12:749 (6,1) –
00:16:120 (1,2) –
00:38:199 (4,5,6,7,8) –
00:43:760 (6,7,8,9,1) –
01:16:625 (5,6,1) –
01:20:839 (2,3,4,5,6) -
01:28:255 (5,6,7,8) –
这些地方要统一间距,否则会比较乱

就这些啦。有些节奏比较有意思,先给颗星
Topic Starter
HiverK

nikachyan wrote:

from my queue ;w;
希望不会太迟……

[Easy]
没什么问题。
提点建议:
有些1/2拍的节奏会不会太密了?挤在一起也不好看,还是酌情考虑改一点吧。 我再檢查看看
01:11:232 (1,2,3,4) –这里的节奏可以抄上一乐句的,有协调感 修正
00:28:086 (1) –在这之前的flow全在绕圈圈……而且最右边几乎很少用上,排版可以再多下点功夫 我感覺沒問題

[Normal]
0.9的ds太挤了……更何况你的SV并不是太高,推荐换成1.0到1.2之间 ds->1.0
00:28:086 (1) –有点莫名其妙,直接用circle不是挺好…… 原本是為了DS才這樣拉的,確實有點莫名其妙 :(
00:40:052 (2) –在这里00:40:390 –停就好 修正
00:46:288 –漏音 修正
00:51:008 (1) –向右上拉打起来会顺一些 修正
01:15:951 (2) –flow不顺,ctrl+g试试? 沒差吧

[Hard]
00:06:513 (3) –换用circle 修正
00:21:513 (2,3,4) –间距? 修正
00:30:277 (3,4,5,1) –弧度可以仔细调整 修正
00:35:333 (1,2,3,4) -^ 修正
01:18:985 (9) –缩圈叠在一起有点乱,推荐NC 修正
01:24:041 (7) –节奏抄上一乐句的就行 修正
Flow也是太顺,一直转圈圈很容易让人视觉疲劳……大概 大概就是我mapping還很渣的關係 :cry:

[Insane]
00:22:356 (5) –blanket可以包好一点 修正
01:23:030 (5) –分开放就是一个梗 修正,雖然不知道什麼梗 :P
还有就是间距,虽说insane的间距可以不用开着ds但是在:
00:12:749 (6,1) – 修正
00:16:120 (1,2) – 修正
00:38:199 (4,5,6,7,8) – 修正
00:43:760 (6,7,8,9,1) – 修正
01:16:625 (5,6,1) – 修正
01:20:839 (2,3,4,5,6) - 修正
01:28:255 (5,6,7,8) – 修正
这些地方要统一间距,否则会比较乱

就这些啦。有些节奏比较有意思,先给颗星
謝謝你的幫助和星星 :D
Xelasto
Hello from my modding queue :D

[Easy]
00:18:479 (2,3) - This is too confusing and bunched up for new players. Consider changing it.
00:22:693 (1) - Put this right in front of the last slider
00:31:288 (3,4) - These sliders are too short and most new players would confuse it for 2 notes.
00:51:008 (3) - This shape doesn't look too good. Fix it up a bit
01:32:805 (1,2) - White tick to red tick is too fast for new players to read.
01:38:199 (1,2,3) - This is MUCH too confusing. Change it too mabye just one repeat slider.
The kiai time keeps on turning on and off, which isn't good. Kiai time should be from 00:57:749 - 01:26:738 - , non stop.
Approach rate and Overall difficulty down by 1
I suggest changing the colors to fit the background.

Overall I think your biggest problem is that you are making the map too confusing and scrunched up by trying to hit every beat. In easy you dont REALLY need to hit every beat, and plenty of maps don't anyway. I suggest you don't use so many small sliders, as it doesn't look good, and is too confusing to read for new players. Remember easy is for new players that can't read notes fast.

[Normal]
00:09:715 (2) - Fix blanket
00:15:783 (5) - Please dont overlap. Normal mode players assume that since it's so close, it's faster than it really is.
00:25:390 (1,2) - Blanket these 2 or at least make them the same shape.
00:30:783 (1,2) - Fix blanket
00:31:457 (2,3,4) - Fix this up a bit. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2496627
00:36:850 (4) - This curves too much.
00:40:727 (3,1,2) - Clean this up a bit. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2496629
00:46:963 (1,2,3) - Blanket these
00:49:659 (1,2) - Make these perfectly parallel
00:57:075 (2,1) - Blanket
01:01:288 (4) - This is an odd slider shape.
01:09:041 (4,5) - These two sliders are unnecessary. Combine them into 1
01:11:738 (3,4) - ^
01:12:412 (5,1) - Fix blanket
01:15:951 (2) - Curve this to blanket 1
01:35:502 (3) - Make this blanket 1 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2496667
The kiai time keeps on turning on and off, which isn't good. Kiai time should be from 00:57:749 - 01:26:738 - , non stop.
I suggest changing the colors to fit the background.

Overall cleanliness if your biggest problem here. Alot of the blankets are sub-par for ranked, and some of the parts look sloppy. However other than looks, this is a good difficulty.

[Hard]
00:04:996 (2) - Fix blanket
00:11:906 (1) - Curve less
00:16:625 (4,1) - Stack perfectly
00:25:390 (1,2) - Blanket these two
00:32:131 (5) - Curve down
00:33:816 (2,1,2,3,4) - Fix up a bit http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2496867
00:36:850 (5) - Curve less for a blanket
00:56:738 (1,1,1) - These are unnecessary
01:38:199 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^
HP drain and Overall difficulty up by 1
Kiai is inconsistent between difficulties

Overall quite good, just fix the blankets and a few other minor problems.

[Overall]

This is quite a good map. The main problem is the cleanliness of the modes. They don't look too good. However aside from bad looks and patterns sometimes, this is pretty good. :) I use overall too much...
Topic Starter
HiverK

Xelasto wrote:

Hello from my modding queue :D

[Easy]
00:18:479 (2,3) - This is too confusing and bunched up for new players. Consider changing it. fixed
00:22:693 (1) - Put this right in front of the last slider fixed, I put this note in the left for DS before.
00:31:288 (3,4) - These sliders are too short and most new players would confuse it for 2 notes. fixed
00:51:008 (3) - This shape doesn't look too good. Fix it up a bit fixed, maybe still be bad. I'm not sure.
01:32:805 (1,2) - White tick to red tick is too fast for new players to read. fixed
01:38:199 (1,2,3) - This is MUCH too confusing. Change it too mabye just one repeat slider. fixed
The kiai time keeps on turning on and off, which isn't good. Kiai time should be from 00:57:749 - 01:26:738 - , non stop. I used it before, but I prefer to the kiai time that I use now.
Approach rate and Overall difficulty down by 1 fixed
I suggest changing the colors to fit the background.

Overall I think your biggest problem is that you are making the map too confusing and scrunched up by trying to hit every beat. In easy you dont REALLY need to hit every beat, and plenty of maps don't anyway. I suggest you don't use so many small sliders, as it doesn't look good, and is too confusing to read for new players. Remember easy is for new players that can't read notes fast.

[Normal]
00:09:715 (2) - Fix blanket fixed
00:15:783 (5) - Please dont overlap. Normal mode players assume that since it's so close, it's faster than it really is. fixed
00:25:390 (1,2) - Blanket these 2 or at least make them the same shape. fixed
00:30:783 (1,2) - Fix blanket fixed
00:31:457 (2,3,4) - Fix this up a bit. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2496627 I like the curve.
00:36:850 (4) - This curves too much. fixed
00:40:727 (3,1,2) - Clean this up a bit. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2496629 fixed
00:46:963 (1,2,3) - Blanket these It's cooool.
00:49:659 (1,2) - Make these perfectly parallel It's good. I think.
00:57:075 (2,1) - Blanket fixed
01:01:288 (4) - This is an odd slider shape. Hmm...
01:09:041 (4,5) - These two sliders are unnecessary. Combine them into 1 fixed
01:11:738 (3,4) - ^ fixed
01:12:412 (5,1) - Fix blanket fixed
01:15:951 (2) - Curve this to blanket 1 fixed
01:35:502 (3) - Make this blanket 1 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2496667 fixed
The kiai time keeps on turning on and off, which isn't good. Kiai time should be from 00:57:749 - 01:26:738 - , non stop.
I suggest changing the colors to fit the background.

Overall cleanliness if your biggest problem here. Alot of the blankets are sub-par for ranked, and some of the parts look sloppy. However other than looks, this is a good difficulty.

[Hard]
00:04:996 (2) - Fix blanket fixed
00:11:906 (1) - Curve less fixed
00:16:625 (4,1) - Stack perfectly Sometimes I fixed, but it changed back after exit editor :?
00:25:390 (1,2) - Blanket these two fixed
00:32:131 (5) - Curve down fixed
00:33:816 (2,1,2,3,4) - Fix up a bit http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2496867 fixed
00:36:850 (5) - Curve less for a blanket fixed
00:56:738 (1,1,1) - These are unnecessary You mean NC? Well, fixed
01:38:199 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^ keep
HP drain and Overall difficulty up by 1 keep
Kiai is inconsistent between difficulties keep

Overall quite good, just fix the blankets and a few other minor problems.

[Overall]

This is quite a good map. The main problem is the cleanliness of the modes. They don't look too good. However aside from bad looks and patterns sometimes, this is pretty good. :) I use overall too much...
Overall thanks for your mod.
About the color, I have no idea so I just use default colors.
ts8zs
[Insane]
00:25:390 (1,2,3) - 用复制和旋转来做这种
00:38:873 (1,2) - ^
00:40:390 (4) - 00:54:378 (3) - 像这种挤成一团的的都降低弯度
01:02:215 (2) - 删除
01:13:255 (1,2,3) - 完全不知道为什么用红点
01:33:564 (6) - 音乐没有
[Hard]
整体感不强,别一条线连到底,挤成一团的的都降低弯度。
[Normal]
滑条长得都很奇怪。挤成一团的的都降低弯度。
[Easy]
滑条有的长得很奇怪。挤成一团的的都降低弯度,别一条线连到底,加点停顿,按照节奏走别按歌声走。

就酱。加油吧。
Topic Starter
HiverK

ts8zs wrote:

[Insane]
00:25:390 (1,2,3) - 用复制和旋转来做这种 fixed
00:38:873 (1,2) - ^ fixed
00:40:390 (4) - 00:54:378 (3) - 像这种挤成一团的的都降低弯度 fixed
01:02:215 (2) - 删除 fixed
01:13:255 (1,2,3) - 完全不知道为什么用红点 當初想說作點直角
01:33:564 (6) - 音乐没有 fixed
[Hard]
整体感不强,别一条线连到底,挤成一团的的都降低弯度。
[Normal]
滑条长得都很奇怪。挤成一团的的都降低弯度。
[Easy]
滑条有的长得很奇怪。挤成一团的的都降低弯度,别一条线连到底,加点停顿,按照节奏走别按歌声走。

感覺easy~hard你說的是同一件事,距離部分當初確實沒想太多,結果就每個都很擠,至於節奏,我真的蠻容易去照歌聲走,導致有些地方打起來怪怪的。確實... :o
就酱。加油吧。
謝謝 :)
bigfrog
hello, 抱歉考試很忙延誤到不少時間 :o

Easy
00:12:918 (4) - 建議換成這樣比較適合 :
00:40:052 (2,1) - 其實這兩個滑條調換一下比較好 :

呃...感覺滑條擺的有點亂, 也許SV可以調高一點然後距離會拉遠比較不容易混淆 :>
然後為什麼normal的音效在easy變成默認的了 囧

Normal
00:13:086 (2,4) - 盡量不要覆蓋到比較好
00:16:963 (6) - 加clap & 00:18:311 (2,3) - 建議(3)都不要加然後(2)加whistle和clap & 00:19:659 (5) - 加clap, 比較有一致性
00:52:693 (2) - 移到204|202打起來比較順

音效放的有點亂, 很多clap都應該放在滑條尾但卻都被擺在滑條開始, 也有些是漏的
你可以試著去抓該放音效的地方 :P

Hard
呃...不太懂除了KIAI以外的部分要一直變速的理由 :o, 不太建議這樣做...
01:18:985 (9) - 去掉NC
01:39:210 (1,2) - 也許可以用成跟01:38:199 (1,2) -平行, 看起來較整齊

Insane
00:30:277 (3,4,5) - 這樣擺的flow會比較好, 剛好配合下一個重音 :
00:40:727 (1) - 去掉NC, 這裡是紅線也不是長白線, 不太適合
00:51:850 (6,1) - 對調NC

大概就這些, 其實整體來講就是easy~hard的問題比較多
然後mod有點少因為大部分都是重覆的所以沒有一個一個標明
是建議可以先看看一些其他人的譜面, 會比較知道作圖的技巧等等...雖然我好像沒資格說(#

Good Luck~~ :)
Topic Starter
HiverK

bigfrog wrote:

hello, 抱歉考試很忙延誤到不少時間 :o

Easy
00:12:918 (4) - 建議換成這樣比較適合 : fixed
00:40:052 (2,1) - 其實這兩個滑條調換一下比較好 : fixed

呃...感覺滑條擺的有點亂, 也許SV可以調高一點然後距離會拉遠比較不容易混淆 :>
然後為什麼normal的音效在easy變成默認的了 囧 fixed, 之前去動到...

Normal
00:13:086 (2,4) - 盡量不要覆蓋到比較好 fixed
00:16:963 (6) - 加clap & 00:18:311 (2,3) - 建議(3)都不要加然後(2)加whistle和clap & 00:19:659 (5) - 加clap, 比較有一致性 fixed
00:52:693 (2) - 移到204|202打起來比較順 fixed

音效放的有點亂, 很多clap都應該放在滑條尾但卻都被擺在滑條開始, 也有些是漏的
你可以試著去抓該放音效的地方 :P 音效對我來說也很頭疼...

Hard
呃...不太懂除了KIAI以外的部分要一直變速的理由 :o, 不太建議這樣做...
01:18:985 (9) - 去掉NC fixed
01:39:210 (1,2) - 也許可以用成跟01:38:199 (1,2) -平行, 看起來較整齊 原案

Insane
00:30:277 (3,4,5) - 這樣擺的flow會比較好, 剛好配合下一個重音 : fixed
00:40:727 (1) - 去掉NC, 這裡是紅線也不是長白線, 不太適合 fixed
00:51:850 (6,1) - 對調NC fixed

大概就這些, 其實整體來講就是easy~hard的問題比較多
然後mod有點少因為大部分都是重覆的所以沒有一個一個標明
是建議可以先看看一些其他人的譜面, 會比較知道作圖的技巧等等...雖然我好像沒資格說(#

Good Luck~~ :)
確實我easy~hard部分比起insane功夫下的還不夠
而insane是因為自由度比較大所以相對好做...
謝謝你的建議 ;)
LucyS
Helloo c:
From my Queue

[General]
No Tags?
About the hitsounds, You should add the claps on the upbeats, sounds better. Read this about Backbeat.

[Eazy]
00:11:906 (2,3) - Blanket this: http://puu.sh/eE457/e5913e15dc.jpg
00:13:255 (1) - In a Eazy diff you need to give a full measure break after spinner: t/241019
01:27:412 (1) - ^
00:36:176 (1,2,3) - Make these sliders less curved, looks more beautiful: http://puu.sh/eE6J9/25f9f67e8b.jpg
00:40:895 (1,2) - Switch NC
00:43:255 (4) - I suggest to make this a repeat slider for catch this beat 00:43:592
00:56:738 (1,2) - Switch NC
00:59:772 (1,2) - ^
01:03:816 (2,3) - These sliders too close looks weird >.< Try this: http://puu.sh/eE7oz/8abd19e8a1.jpg
01:09:884 - You're missing the heavy beat here, try add a note. My suggest: 01:08:536 - http://puu.sh/eE88R/353a1e6765.jpg
01:12:581 - Same ^
01:24:715 (1) - Make this slider more symmetric http://puu.sh/eE8LR/6163d55498.jpg
01:26:232 - Inaudible volumes may be unrankeable...
01:33:816 (2) - Increase this slider to 01:34:491


[Normal]
00:40:727 (3) - This rhythm doesn't fit the song, try this http://puu.sh/eEeCp/cf1c77e462.jpg
01:00:446 - Same ^ http://puu.sh/eEeQx/dba9deff5a.jpg
01:06:345 (3) - End this slider here 01:06:682 -

You miss many finishes, add them in Eazy and Normal:
00:17:300 - 00:36:176 - 00:38:873 - 00:41:569 - 00:49:659 - 00:52:356 - 00:55:052 - 00:57:749 - 01:08:536 - 01:13:929 - 01:17:805 - 01:32:805


[Insane]
00:12:918 (1) - Unstack this? Is better to play.
00:16:288 (2) - Same^
00:49:491 (1,3) - Switch NC
00:56:401 (9,1) - ^
01:13:255 (1,2) - ^
01:17:131 (1,3) - ^
01:27:412 (8,1) - ^

Hitsounds
00:38:873 (1) - Add a finish on the head not on the tail.
00:46:625 (6) - Cancel the finish, I can't hear finish here.
00:49:659 - Add finish
00:52:356 - ^
00:55:895 (4) - ^
00:56:401 - ^
01:08:536 - ^
01:10:558 - Cancel finish
01:12:075 - ^
01:17:805 - Add Finish
01:19:322 - ^
01:24:715 - ^
01:28:929 - Cancel finish
01:29:097 (1) - ^
01:32:805 - Add finish

Good Luck! ;D
Topic Starter
HiverK

LucyS wrote:

Helloo c:
From my Queue

[General]
No Tags?
About the hitsounds, You should add the claps on the upbeats, sounds better. Read this about Backbeat. I will try my best.

[Eazy]
00:11:906 (2,3) - Blanket this: http://puu.sh/eE457/e5913e15dc.jpg Fixed
00:13:255 (1) - In a Eazy diff you need to give a full measure break after spinner: t/241019
01:27:412 (1) - ^ I think this break time is enough.
00:36:176 (1,2,3) - Make these sliders less curved, looks more beautiful: http://puu.sh/eE6J9/25f9f67e8b.jpg Fixed
00:40:895 (1,2) - Switch NC Fixed
00:43:255 (4) - I suggest to make this a repeat slider for catch this beat 00:43:592 Fixed
00:56:738 (1,2) - Switch NC Fixed
00:59:772 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
01:03:816 (2,3) - These sliders too close looks weird >.< Try this: http://puu.sh/eE7oz/8abd19e8a1.jpg Fixed
01:09:884 - You're missing the heavy beat here, try add a note. My suggest: 01:08:536 - http://puu.sh/eE88R/353a1e6765.jpg
01:12:581 - Same ^ I think this part is ok.
01:24:715 (1) - Make this slider more symmetric http://puu.sh/eE8LR/6163d55498.jpg I don't want to let it be symmetrical.
01:26:232 - Inaudible volumes may be unrankeable... idk but just try.
01:33:816 (2) - Increase this slider to 01:34:491 Fixed


[Normal]
00:40:727 (3) - This rhythm doesn't fit the song, try this http://puu.sh/eEeCp/cf1c77e462.jpg It's not a good idea, both yours and mine. Fixed.
01:00:446 - Same ^ http://puu.sh/eEeQx/dba9deff5a.jpg It looks fine, but I more like my pattern.
01:06:345 (3) - End this slider here 01:06:682 - Fixed

You miss many finishes, add them in Eazy and Normal:
00:17:300 - 00:36:176 - 00:38:873 - 00:41:569 - 00:49:659 - 00:52:356 - 00:55:052 - 00:57:749 - 01:08:536 - 01:13:929 - 01:17:805 - 01:32:805
k, fixed.

[Insane]
00:12:918 (1) - Unstack this? Is better to play. keep
00:16:288 (2) - Same^ keep
00:49:491 (1,3) - Switch NC Fixed
00:56:401 (9,1) - ^ keep
01:13:255 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
01:17:131 (1,3) - ^ Fixed
01:27:412 (8,1) - ^ Fixed

Hitsounds All fixed
00:38:873 (1) - Add a finish on the head not on the tail. Fixed
00:46:625 (6) - Cancel the finish, I can't hear finish here.
00:49:659 - Add finish
00:52:356 - ^
00:55:895 (4) - ^
00:56:401 - ^
01:08:536 - ^
01:10:558 - Cancel finish
01:12:075 - ^
01:17:805 - Add Finish
01:19:322 - ^
01:24:715 - ^
01:28:929 - Cancel finish
01:29:097 (1) - ^
01:32:805 - Add finish

Good Luck! ;D
Thanks! You help me a lot in hitsounds. It is my big weakness. :)
VINXIS
I'm alive I'm sor ry I have midterms starting this week and so much shit has happened lately fuc k
from my moddin q
general
uncheck letterbox (there's no breaks anyway lmao)
where's the tags lo l
Easy
00:11:232 (1) - remove nc
00:11:906 (2) - nc
00:15:783 (1,1) - make the curviture congruent
00:25:727 (3) - nc
00:31:120 (3) - ^
00:45:614 (1) - curve this more tbh
01:25:895 (2) - change this to a circle
01:34:828 (1) - remove nc
01:35:502 (2) - nc
Normal
00:11:232 (1,2,3) - alright i've heard from somewhere that the ranking criteria has/is going to be changed where u can not put stacks for easy and normals. idk tbh It's fine imo but yea
00:18:311 (3) - nc
00:18:479 (1) - remove nc
00:21:850 (5,1) - blanket better pls (somewhere around like x:56 y:232)
00:40:727 (3) - make this longer by one blue tick
00:40:052 (2,4) - stack/no overlap pls
00:55:558 (2,3,4) - make them different combos?
00:59:772 (1) - remove nc? (It fits imo but yea)
01:15:951 (2) - curve less
01:27:412 (2,3,1) - this'll be hard2read 4 the n00bz
01:31:288 (3) - nc
Hard
00:08:873 - map the snare roll
00:25:221 (5,1) - blanket better pls
00:51:008 (5,1) - stack pls
00:58:255 (2,3) - for all the slider patterns u have in this diff, I suggest Ctrl+G the second slider each time cuz aesthetic and more fun2play tbh
01:00:951 (3,4) - here too
and so on
01:07:524 (1) - remove nc
01:18:311 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - lolpls
01:21:345 (7,8) - are they the same slider, if they aren't then make them the same pls (or curve them less if they are)
01:22:693 (2) - Ctrl+G
01:26:738 (1) - remove nc
01:27:412 (3) - nc
01:28:592 (6,7) - stackpls
01:33:985 (4,5) - ^
01:35:502 (3,4,5) - will be hard 2 read
Insanae
00:06:176 (1) - remove nc
00:08:873 (1) - ^
00:09:715 (1) - ^
00:09:210 (5) - nc
note at 00:17:805 for map consistency pls
00:42:749 (1,2) - I'd make this into a slow slider instead tbh
01:01:963 (4) - nc
01:02:131 (1,1) - remove nc
01:18:985 (1) - ^
01:30:109 (1) - curve less pls

happpy mappin
Topic Starter
HiverK

VINXIS wrote:

I'm alive I'm sor ry I have midterms starting this week and so much shit has happened lately fuc k
from my moddin q
general
uncheck letterbox (there's no breaks anyway lmao) Fixed
where's the tags lo l Added some tags.
Easy
00:11:232 (1) - remove nc Fixed
00:11:906 (2) - nc Fixed
00:15:783 (1,1) - make the curviture congruent Fixed
00:25:727 (3) - nc Fixed
00:31:120 (3) - ^ Fixed
00:45:614 (1) - curve this more tbh Fixed
01:25:895 (2) - change this to a circle Fixed
01:34:828 (1) - remove nc Fixed
01:35:502 (2) - nc Fixed
Normal
00:11:232 (1,2,3) - alright i've heard from somewhere that the ranking criteria has/is going to be changed where u can not put stacks for easy and normals. idk tbh It's fine imo but yea Fixed, one stack.
00:18:311 (3) - nc Fixed
00:18:479 (1) - remove nc Fixed
00:21:850 (5,1) - blanket better pls (somewhere around like x:56 y:232) Fixed
00:40:727 (3) - make this longer by one blue tick Fixed by my way
00:40:052 (2,4) - stack/no overlap pls Fixed
00:55:558 (2,3,4) - make them different combos? Keep
00:59:772 (1) - remove nc? (It fits imo but yea) Fixed
01:15:951 (2) - curve less Fixed
01:27:412 (2,3,1) - this'll be hard2read 4 the n00bz Fixed
01:31:288 (3) - nc Fixed
Hard
00:08:873 - map the snare roll Fixed
00:25:221 (5,1) - blanket better pls Fixed
00:51:008 (5,1) - stack pls Fixed
00:58:255 (2,3) - for all the slider patterns u have in this diff, I suggest Ctrl+G the second slider each time cuz aesthetic and more fun2play tbh keep. If ctrl+g it, i need to adjust many positions of note. I'm so lazy, so... :o
01:00:951 (3,4) - here too ^
and so on
01:07:524 (1) - remove nc Fixed
01:18:311 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - lolpls Fixed DS
01:21:345 (7,8) - are they the same slider, if they aren't then make them the same pls (or curve them less if they are) Fixed
01:22:693 (2) - Ctrl+G :cry:
01:26:738 (1) - remove nc Fixed
01:27:412 (3) - nc Fixed
01:28:592 (6,7) - stackpls keep
01:33:985 (4,5) - ^ keep
01:35:502 (3,4,5) - will be hard 2 read Fixed
Insanae
00:06:176 (1) - remove nc Fixed
00:08:873 (1) - ^ Fixed
00:09:715 (1) - ^ Fixed
00:09:210 (5) - nc Fixed
note at 00:17:805 for map consistency pls Fixed
00:42:749 (1,2) - I'd make this into a slow slider instead tbh I prefer to make 2 notes
01:01:963 (4) - nc Fixed
01:02:131 (1,1) - remove nc Fixed
01:18:985 (1) - ^ Fixed
01:30:109 (1) - curve less pls Fixed

happpy mappin
Thanks your help!
batwoman3
here is my mod (although i am not an expert, but I'll do my best):

easy

01:21:345 (4) - could put a clap (and whistle both if you like)
01:24:041 (4) - slider end better use clap. Next slider start with finish for better effect

hard

00:11:906 - start of slider can be set to finish, end of slider stays as it is
00:25:052 (4) - could all be set to finish note, the song beats seems pretty loud and suit for finish
01:23:199 - can add another note
01:38:199 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - according to me, it is better stacked

the other 2 difficulties seems good to me
Topic Starter
HiverK

batwoman3 wrote:

here is my mod (although i am not an expert, but I'll do my best):

easy

01:21:345 (4) - could put a clap (and whistle both if you like) fixed
01:24:041 (4) - slider end better use clap. Next slider start with finish for better effect fixed, I'm not sure adding finish is better

hard

00:11:906 - start of slider can be set to finish, end of slider stays as it is adding finish is weird
00:25:052 (4) - could all be set to finish note, the song beats seems pretty loud and suit for finish add clap
01:23:199 - can add another note try to fix this part :o
01:38:199 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - according to me, it is better stacked I like

the other 2 difficulties seems good to me
thanks for your help! :)
Arlecchino
Hi There~
from my hueue :3

Easy

Easy

  1. 00:17:300 (1,3) - overlapped, just move 00:18:311 (2,3) - more further also makes 00:19:322 (3) - blanketing *pict
  2. 00:32:131 (1) - remove NC for consistent ?
  3. 00:45:614 (1) - ^
  4. 00:55:052 (1) - Blanket can be improved
  5. 01:02:805 (5,1) - stack isn't good for easy diff
  6. 01:15:277 (1,2,1,2) - - move this more to left at least x264 y164
  7. 01:18:311 (3,4,1) - repair this distance if you applied my mod in above, suggest move (3) into x240 y300,01:18:985 (4) - x392 y236 and repair blanket at 01:19:322 (1) - try like this *pict
  8. 01:15:277 (1) - btw remove this NC
  9. 01:25:895 (2) - i can hear sound at 01:26:232, so change (2) into 1/1 slider or 2 circle instead, it will be fits the song i guess
  10. 01:37:693 - add note? feels empty here, 1/2 slider a bit hard for easy diff i guess, so at least circle
  11. 01:38:199 (3,4,5) - awkward w/o note in the second beat, so maybe change to 1/2 sliders ?
gud~



Normal

Normal

  1. 00:04:491 - since this is normal diff, how about adding note here, this break too long and feels empty
  2. 00:07:187 - ^
  3. 00:22:693 (1) - ^, try 2/1 slider reverses, its work well for repair about distance snap issue i guess
  4. 00:28:086 (1) - ^
  5. 00:32:131 (1) - this flow is too uphill, try this out *pict
  6. 00:34:491 (3) - is this follow vocal? if yes i can hear vocal at 00:34:659 , so maybe change this slider into 1/2 slider reverses ?
  7. 00:39:884 - i know what you think why you didnt add circle here, but there still heard strong beat here as you did at 00:43:086 (1,2,3) - ,a bit looks hard is ok i guess, so add circle ?
  8. 00:41:401 (5) - move it more a bit uphill at least like this?
  9. 00:46:120 (2) - move to x316 y128 for better flow *pict
  10. 00:47:637 (2) - blanket can be improved
  11. 00:54:378 (5) - blanket properly ?
  12. 00:53:704 (3) - btw NC here ?
  13. 01:02:468 (6) - move into x108 y304 for natural flow
  14. 01:05:839 (1) - like in above makes natural flow
  15. 01:13:929 (2) - blanketing ? its looks good if blanketing with 01:14:603 (3) -
  16. 01:27:412 (3) - blanket can be improved
  17. 01:29:434 (3) - ^
  18. 01:31:794 (2) - move more to upside, almost overlapping
  19. 01:34:828 (1) - remove NC here and NC at 01:35:502 (7) - , also remove NC at 01:36:682 (1) -

    gud job~

Hard

Hard

  1. 00:04:491 - 00:07:187 - same as Normal
  2. 00:26:738 (3,4,1) - dont stack for better flow *pict
  3. 00:30:446 (4,5) - move both a bit for better triangle, maybe (4) x312 y152 and (5) x228 y128
  4. 00:30:783 (1,2) - how about blanketing *pict
  5. 00:37:861 (7) - i think its will be better if you ctrl+g this slider, more fun to play :3
  6. 00:42:918 (1) - dunno why, the white tick isn't follow anything,feels wierd tbh maybe add circle in the tail and remove the slider
  7. 00:45:614 (1,2,3) - this should better like this
  8. 00:58:592 (3) - ctrl+g ?
  9. 01:01:288 (4) - ^
  10. 01:38:199 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - i think this is better if (1) and (2) stacking

Insane

Insane

  1. 00:03:816 (1) - 1/1 slider and add 1/1 at 00:04:491, although its insane ? you can follow vocal here, dunno why you keep this empty in all diff
  2. 00:06:513 (1) - ^
  3. 00:09:715 (2) - ctrl+g
  4. 00:14:603 (3,4) - distance between (4) and (3) isn't same with (2) and (1)
  5. 00:16:963 (5) - how about make this like this?
  6. 00:41:569 (1) - blanket can be improved
  7. 00:44:940 (3) - blanketing ?
  8. 01:25:052 (2) - this flow is too dive down, move a bit to left and up
  9. 01:28:676 - add circle ?
  10. 01:31:963 (3) - blanket properly

    im not thats good at modding insane diff

wait.. my illness relapse, lazy and feels so sleepy XD
0:39 AM here =w=
i'll take a sleep, woke up go to school and i'll try to continue this


continued soon~

Finish, and i can do my activity now (Sleep and bodyrolls) :3
hope this helped!~
Good luck with your map~
Topic Starter
HiverK

-[ Asuna ]- wrote:

Hi There~
from my hueue :3

Easy

Easy

  1. 00:17:300 (1,3) - overlapped, just move 00:18:311 (2,3) - more further also makes 00:19:322 (3) - blanketing *pict fixed
  2. 00:32:131 (1) - remove NC for consistent ? keep
  3. 00:45:614 (1) - ^ fixed with 00:51:008 (1) -
  4. 00:55:052 (1) - Blanket can be improved fixed
  5. 01:02:805 (5,1) - stack isn't good for easy diff I think it's ok and only this stack in this diff.
  6. 01:15:277 (1,2,1,2) - - move this more to left at least x264 y164 fixed
  7. 01:18:311 (3,4,1) - repair this distance if you applied my mod in above, suggest move (3) into x240 y300,01:18:985 (4) - x392 y236 and repair blanket at 01:19:322 (1) - try like this *pict I fixed by myself
  8. 01:15:277 (1) - btw remove this NC fixed
  9. 01:25:895 (2) - i can hear sound at 01:26:232, so change (2) into 1/1 slider or 2 circle instead, it will be fits the song i guess keep
  10. 01:37:693 - add note? feels empty here, 1/2 slider a bit hard for easy diff i guess, so at least circle fixed
  11. 01:38:199 (3,4,5) - awkward w/o note in the second beat, so maybe change to 1/2 sliders ? This part I used 1/2 sliders at first but... idk, now keep.
gud~

Normal

Normal

  1. 00:04:491 - since this is normal diff, how about adding note here, this break too long and feels empty I don't think so.
  2. 00:07:187 - ^ same
  3. 00:22:693 (1) - ^, try 2/1 slider reverses, its work well for repair about distance snap issue i guess ^
  4. 00:28:086 (1) - ^ ^
  5. 00:32:131 (1) - this flow is too uphill, try this out *pict too vertical
  6. 00:34:491 (3) - is this follow vocal? if yes i can hear vocal at 00:34:659 , so maybe change this slider into 1/2 slider reverses ?1/2 too fast. added curve
  7. 00:39:884 - i know what you think why you didnt add circle here, but there still heard strong beat here as you did at 00:43:086 (1,2,3) - ,a bit looks hard is ok i guess, so add circle ? fixed
  8. 00:41:401 (5) - move it more a bit uphill at least like this? fixed
  9. 00:46:120 (2) - move to x316 y128 for better flow *pict fixed
  10. 00:47:637 (2) - blanket can be improved not blanket
  11. 00:54:378 (5) - blanket properly ? fixed
  12. 00:53:704 (3) - btw NC here ? fixed
  13. 01:02:468 (6) - move into x108 y304 for natural flow maybe natural but boring like my hard diff lmao
  14. 01:05:839 (1) - like in above makes natural flow ^
  15. 01:13:929 (2) - blanketing ? its looks good if blanketing with 01:14:603 (3) - fixed
  16. 01:27:412 (3) - blanket can be improved fixed
  17. 01:29:434 (3) - ^ fixed
  18. 01:31:794 (2) - move more to upside, almost overlapping fixed
  19. 01:34:828 (1) - remove NC here and NC at 01:35:502 (7) - , also remove NC at 01:36:682 (1) - fixed

    gud job~

Hard

Hard

  1. 00:04:491 - 00:07:187 - same as Normal
  2. 00:26:738 (3,4,1) - dont stack for better flow *pict fixed
  3. 00:30:446 (4,5) - move both a bit for better triangle, maybe (4) x312 y152 and (5) x228 y128 fixed, but not your positions
  4. 00:30:783 (1,2) - how about blanketing *pict no
  5. 00:37:861 (7) - i think its will be better if you ctrl+g this slider, more fun to play :3 fixed, but the flow is weird. idk..
  6. 00:42:918 (1) - dunno why, the white tick isn't follow anything,feels wierd tbh maybe add circle in the tail and remove the slider fixed
  7. 00:45:614 (1,2,3) - this should better like this fixed
  8. 00:58:592 (3) - ctrl+g ? no..
  9. 01:01:288 (4) - ^ same
  10. 01:38:199 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - i think this is better if (1) and (2) stacking I like. You are the second person said this. If more than one person say stacking, I will do that. Maybe.

Insane

Insane

  1. 00:03:816 (1) - 1/1 slider and add 1/1 at 00:04:491, although its insane ? you can follow vocal here, dunno why you keep this empty in all diff cuz i feel weird if there put something
  2. 00:06:513 (1) - ^
  3. 00:09:715 (2) - ctrl+g fixed
  4. 00:14:603 (3,4) - distance between (4) and (3) isn't same with (2) and (1) fixed
  5. 00:16:963 (5) - how about make this like this? NICE idea, I love this! :)
  6. 00:41:569 (1) - blanket can be improved fixed
  7. 00:44:940 (3) - blanketing ? where?
  8. 01:25:052 (2) - this flow is too dive down, move a bit to left and up fixed
  9. 01:28:676 - add circle ? why? i don't hear anything.
  10. 01:31:963 (3) - blanket properly fixed

    im not thats good at modding insane diff

wait.. my illness relapse, lazy and feels so sleepy XD
0:39 AM here =w=
i'll take a sleep, woke up go to school and i'll try to continue this


continued soon~

Finish, and i can do my activity now (Sleep and bodyrolls) :3
hope this helped!~
Good luck with your map~
Actually, you are more industrious than me. :roll:
Anyway, thank you!
Yuii-

Easy





General: Change OD to "3,0"




  • 00:12:918 (2) - In Easy difficulties, you have to leave some time before adding a spinner. That means you will have to delete that circle.


    00:25:727 (1,2) - Remove the circle, move the slider to 00:25:727 - and let it "return", so it can finish at 00:26:401 - and it will still be okay and easier for this kind of diff.


    00:39:884 - A circle here will be good, but considering it's an Easy diff, I'm still doubting about that. I mean, it sounds even better with it, but that's up to you.


    00:58:592 (2) - This circle here it's so ugly and doesn't follow the rhythm of the vocal at its best. You should consider making 00:57:749 (1) - last longer (maybe up to 00:58:592 - )


    01:01:288 (2) - Same ^


    01:16:625 (1,2,3) - Consider this


    01:32:131 (2) - Clap


    01:33:816 (2) - To be honest, this slider is so bad timmed. First of all, there are 2 beats, that means that 2 notes should be placed to get a clear timming. I can suggest you to place a circle at 01:33:816 - and then the slider from 01:33:985 - to 01:34:491 - but it will be still kinda ugly for an Easy diff.


    01:38:199 (1,2) - Remove Finish.


Hard





General: Change OD to "6,0" / HP to "6,0"




  • 00:10:390 (3) - Add 2 circles before this one at 00:10:221 - and 00:10:305 - that would fit perfectly with the song and the beats.


    00:12:412 - 00:12:749 - There should be a slider here instead of that circle.


    00:35:923 - What do you think of a triplet here? Adding a circle?


    00:43:929 (5) - Replace this for a slider from there to 00:44:097 - that will be excellent for the song and the map itself.


    01:13:255 (1,2) - Whistle?


    01:15:951 (6) - Finish at tail?


Insane





General: Change OD to "8,0"




  • 00:03:985 - 00:04:828 - About this blanket space, I really think you should map something, you could make some jumps and that kind of stuff. Same goes to 00:06:682 - 00:07:524 - try to think of any idea, even if it's something little, I know you can do it.


    00:04:996 (2) - Replace this for a slider from there to 00:05:249 - it will fit better with the rhythm.


    00:08:873 (7,8,9,10) - Replace the Whistle for Clap, it sounds better.


    00:10:474 (1) - Let me say something about this spinner. I will remote it. I would like to see the following: 00:10:390 (4) - make this slider go slower, and finish it at 00:10:895 - then add a circle at 00:11:232 - and triplets at 00:11:569 - to 00:11:738 - that would be amazing, also, you won't have to use a spinner that doesn't fit very good. If you don't like that, you can just replace 00:10:390 (4) - and start a spinner at that point to 00:11:232 - think about it.


    00:21:850 (4) - Whistle?


    00:22:861 - 00:24:378 - As I told you before, I think you should really try some stuff here.


    00:25:727 (2) - Ctrl+G for better flow.


    00:35:418 - 00:35:502 - Add circles for a triplet?


    00:36:008 (4,5) - Clap instead of Finish.


    00:51:176 (2) - Why there's no Whistle here?


    00:51:850 (6) - Finish instead.


    01:03:479 (2) - Ctrl+G?


    01:03:816 (3) - Same ^


    01:07:524 (1,2,3) - Replace Whistle for Clap.


    01:14:434 - What do you think of adding a circle here? I know there's no beat, but it will be okay, and it could increase the difficulty of the map overall.


    01:22:609 - An extra circle here would be perfect.


    01:25:895 (7) - This slider should be finished at 01:26:232 - you have to follow the vocal here, since that's what you were doing.


    01:34:743 (5,6) - Can you consider changing those 2 circles for 1 slider? Fits better ~


    01:38:199 (1) - Finish here doesn't sound very good, it's okay at the 2nd circle, but that's because you are finishing with the beat itself. Just leave Whistle.


    01:38:704 (1) - Same ^


    01:39:210 (1) - Same ^


    01:39:715 (1) - The spinner should start 01:39:547 - the difference is that the place where you placed it, doesn't mean anything in the rhythm at all.
Little
- ❤️ -
Hi, I'm here from my modding queue.
Sorry for the long delay.

[General]
  1. Current background image quality is not good. Here's an image of slightly better quality: http://puu.sh/fuorb/a63b3f8a46.jpg Please use it.
  2. Change the source to: サノバウィッチ
  3. Consider adding to tags: sanoba witch sabbat of the witch
  4. I recommend to make kiai times at:
    00:57:749 to 01:08:451
    01:08:536 to 01:19:238
    01:19:322 to 01:30:109
[Easy]
  1. These inheriting sections don't change anything, so remove them: http://puu.sh/fuqUf/695bae3199.png
  2. 00:09:210 (1) - I think maybe it will look nicer if you add curve to the first half of this slider: http://puu.sh/fusbB/e69af241e3.jpg
  3. 00:13:255 (1) - I think it's better to not use such a short slider in Easy diff, as it can be hard for beginner players to catch, and also recover after. I recommend mapping this part out with circles/sliders: http://puu.sh/fuxZR/deb66ed6d7.jpg
  4. 00:15:783 (1) - Starting here, why did you make your sliders with so many points? You can make simple curved slider with just 3 points, and it will be a more perfect curve. Consider fixing all those sliders to have 3 point: http://puu.sh/fusPn/dd27cb6354.jpg and http://puu.sh/fusV9/39c183d7d8.jpg etc.
  5. 00:27:749 (3) - Add a clap. It fits the song.
  6. 00:37:524 (3) - Add a clap on the end here too.
  7. 00:40:052 (2) - I think head sounds better if you remove clap and add finish since there is cymbal in the music.
  8. 00:40:895 (3) - Flow here feels a bit awkward. Maybe you can change the shape like this: http://puu.sh/futsZ/303bff6892.jpg
  9. 00:40:895 (3) - Add a clap on the end.
  10. 00:42:581 (2) - I think this will be cool, try it: http://puu.sh/futDh/76e5e5fee2.jpg
  11. 00:58:929 (3,1) - This overlap looks bad in my opinion. I recommend to move them like this: http://puu.sh/fuuAl/70a6ba7949.avi
  12. 00:59:772 (4) - Add clap on end.
  13. 01:02:805 (5) - Add clap.
  14. 01:27:412 (1) - This spinner should end at 01:30:109
  15. 01:37:693 (2) - I suggest using a 1/2 slider: http://puu.sh/fuva3/467b841392.jpg It makes the rhythm easier to play because all the beat spacing will be 1/1.
[Normal]
  1. Start with 60% volume to match the other diffs, and remove the three useless green lines: http://puu.sh/fuwff/cf0f3bd9f9.png
  2. 00:03:816 (1) - You are missing a clap.
  3. 00:06:176 (5) - I think you can add drum-hitnormal here. It matches the drum in the music well: http://puu.sh/fuwGp/01460f5536.jpg
  4. 00:06:513 (1) - Add clap.
  5. 00:08:873 (5) - Also drum-hitnormal here.
  6. 00:09:210 (1) - Add clap on head, remove clap from end.
  7. 00:09:715 (2) - Add clap on head.
  8. 00:26:738 (3) - Add clap on repeat.
  9. 00:32:131 (1) - Add clap on repeat or end.. whichever one you prefer.
  10. 00:32:131 (1,2) - The distance is too large.
  11. 00:44:266 (1) - Maybe add a finish?
  12. 01:30:951 (2) - Add clap on end.
  13. 01:31:794 (2) - Add clap on head.
  14. 01:35:165 (6) - Add clap.
  15. 00:18:311 (1) - Remove new combo? It is not needed here.
[Hard]
  1. AR7.5 feels a bit too low for this high bpm. I think AR8 feels much better.
  2. 01:02:468 - Remove useless green line.
  3. 00:06:513 (3,4) - Maybe it's better to put these in the same position (stacked).
  4. 00:11:906 (1) - I think you should add clap on the end here.
  5. 00:12:581 (2) - Add whistle?
  6. 00:13:760 (6,7,8) - It think these are too spaced. Please either stack or put them with smaller spacing.
  7. 00:21:176 (1,2,3,4) - Better to use slightly larger distance, so the player doesn't think it's 1/4.
  8. 00:30:446 (4) - Add a clap here.
  9. 00:37:524 (6) - Whistle on head.
  10. 00:40:052 (3,1,2) - The uneven spacing is a bit confusing. Try to make it the same.
  11. 00:44:266 (1) - Maybe use finish on head.
  12. 00:49:491 (1,2,3) - Make this spacing smaller.
  13. 01:04:491 (3) - Whistle on head.
  14. 01:06:850 (3) - Clap.
  15. 01:09:378 (3) - Clap on end.
  16. 01:18:985 (9,10,11,12) - I don't recommend using such large stacks in Hard. Maybe just use a kick slider.
  17. 01:35:502 (3,4) - Make the distance farther so the player won't hit (4) too early.
  18. 00:24:547 (2) - Add new combo. The follow point appears for too long, and is distracting.
  19. 00:29:940 (2) - Add new combo.
  20. 00:36:176 (4) - Add new combo.
  21. 00:59:772 (1,2) - Swap new combos. It matches with 01:02:468
  22. 01:05:839 (5,1) - Swap new combos.
  23. 01:26:738 (5,1) - Swap new combos?
[Insane]
  1. 01:18:985 - Remove useless green line.
  2. 00:09:210 (1) - Add clap on head?
  3. 00:21:008 (6,1) - It would be nice to put a jump here to emphasize strong beat on (1).
  4. 00:30:783 (1) - Add finish on head.
  5. 00:41:569 (1) - Music has cymbal, so I think you should add finish.
  6. 00:48:311 (4,5,6) - Maybe it will be cool if you have increasing slider velocity, like 0,5, 0.625, 0.75: http://puu.sh/fuCVl/8da446f036.jpg
  7. 00:04:996 (2) - Add new combo.
  8. 00:07:693 (2) - Add new combo.
  9. 00:12:918 (1,2) - Swap new combo.
  10. 00:24:547 (2) - Add new combo.
  11. 00:29:940 (2) - Add new combo.
  12. 01:07:356 (1) - Remove new combo.
Good luck.
Topic Starter
HiverK

Yuii- wrote:

Easy





General: Change OD to "3,0" fix




  • 00:12:918 (2) - In Easy difficulties, you have to leave some time before adding a spinner. That means you will have to delete that circle. I think 1/1 is enough.


    00:25:727 (1,2) - Remove the circle, move the slider to 00:25:727 - and let it "return", so it can finish at 00:26:401 - and it will still be okay and easier for this kind of diff. skip


    00:39:884 - A circle here will be good, but considering it's an Easy diff, I'm still doubting about that. I mean, it sounds even better with it, but that's up to you. be fast


    00:58:592 (2) - This circle here it's so ugly and doesn't follow the rhythm of the vocal at its best. You should consider making 00:57:749 (1) - last longer (maybe up to 00:58:592 - ) i like it


    01:01:288 (2) - Same ^ Same reason ^


    01:16:625 (1,2,3) - Consider this sound weird


    01:32:131 (2) - Clap skip


    01:33:816 (2) - To be honest, this slider is so bad timmed. First of all, there are 2 beats, that means that 2 notes should be placed to get a clear timming. I can suggest you to place a circle at 01:33:816 - and then the slider from 01:33:985 - to 01:34:491 - but it will be still kinda ugly for an Easy diff. so i only use one slider


    01:38:199 (1,2) - Remove Finish. skip


Hard





General: Change OD to "6,0" / HP to "6,0" OD6, HP5




  • 00:10:390 (3) - Add 2 circles before this one at 00:10:221 - and 00:10:305 - that would fit perfectly with the song and the beats. skip


    00:12:412 - 00:12:749 - There should be a slider here instead of that circle. skip


    00:35:923 - What do you think of a triplet here? Adding a circle? skip


    00:43:929 (5) - Replace this for a slider from there to 00:44:097 - that will be excellent for the song and the map itself. fix


    01:13:255 (1,2) - Whistle? i don't understand


    01:15:951 (6) - Finish at tail? weird


Insane





General: Change OD to "8,0" too high




  • 00:03:985 - 00:04:828 - About this blanket space, I really think you should map something, you could make some jumps and that kind of stuff. Same goes to 00:06:682 - 00:07:524 - try to think of any idea, even if it's something little, I know you can do it. i know the blank is long, but i don't want to follow vocal here. I feel weird.


    00:04:996 (2) - Replace this for a slider from there to 00:05:249 - it will fit better with the rhythm. skip


    00:08:873 (7,8,9,10) - Replace the Whistle for Clap, it sounds better. add Clap


    00:10:474 (1) - Let me say something about this spinner. I will remote it. I would like to see the following: 00:10:390 (4) - make this slider go slower, and finish it at 00:10:895 - then add a circle at 00:11:232 - and triplets at 00:11:569 - to 00:11:738 - that would be amazing, also, you won't have to use a spinner that doesn't fit very good. If you don't like that, you can just replace 00:10:390 (4) - and start a spinner at that point to 00:11:232 - think about it. fix


    00:21:850 (4) - Whistle? skip


    00:22:861 - 00:24:378 - As I told you before, I think you should really try some stuff here. skip


    00:25:727 (2) - Ctrl+G for better flow. fix


    00:35:418 - 00:35:502 - Add circles for a triplet? skip


    00:36:008 (4,5) - Clap instead of Finish. what finish?


    00:51:176 (2) - Why there's no Whistle here? skip


    00:51:850 (6) - Finish instead. skip


    01:03:479 (2) - Ctrl+G? skip


    01:03:816 (3) - Same ^ skip


    01:07:524 (1,2,3) - Replace Whistle for Clap. fix


    01:14:434 - What do you think of adding a circle here? I know there's no beat, but it will be okay, and it could increase the difficulty of the map overall. fix


    01:22:609 - An extra circle here would be perfect. skip


    01:25:895 (7) - This slider should be finished at 01:26:232 - you have to follow the vocal here, since that's what you were doing. fix


    01:34:743 (5,6) - Can you consider changing those 2 circles for 1 slider? Fits better ~ fix


    01:38:199 (1) - Finish here doesn't sound very good, it's okay at the 2nd circle, but that's because you are finishing with the beat itself. Just leave Whistle. fix


    01:38:704 (1) - Same ^ fix


    01:39:210 (1) - Same ^ fix


    01:39:715 (1) - The spinner should start 01:39:547 - the difference is that the place where you placed it, doesn't mean anything in the rhythm at all. fix


Sorry for my late reply.
Although I skip many things. Thank you!
Topic Starter
HiverK

CloudSplash16 wrote:

- ❤️ -
Hi, I'm here from my modding queue.
Sorry for the long delay.

[General]
  1. Current background image quality is not good. Here's an image of slightly better quality: http://puu.sh/fuorb/a63b3f8a46.jpg Please use it. fix, more clear
  2. Change the source to: サノバウィッチ fix
  3. Consider adding to tags: sanoba witch sabbat of the witch fix
  4. I recommend to make kiai times at: I prefer to my set.
    00:57:749 to 01:08:451
    01:08:536 to 01:19:238
    01:19:322 to 01:30:109
[Easy]
  1. These inheriting sections don't change anything, so remove them: http://puu.sh/fuqUf/695bae3199.png fix
  2. 00:09:210 (1) - I think maybe it will look nicer if you add curve to the first half of this slider: http://puu.sh/fusbB/e69af241e3.jpg fix
  3. 00:13:255 (1) - I think it's better to not use such a short slider in Easy diff, as it can be hard for beginner players to catch, and also recover after. I recommend mapping this part out with circles/sliders: http://puu.sh/fuxZR/deb66ed6d7.jpg You mean spinner?
  4. 00:15:783 (1) - Starting here, why did you make your sliders with so many points? You can make simple curved slider with just 3 points, and it will be a more perfect curve. Consider fixing all those sliders to have 3 point: http://puu.sh/fusPn/dd27cb6354.jpg and http://puu.sh/fusV9/39c183d7d8.jpg etc. Sometimes I can't use only 3 points to make shape what I want. Like 00:17:300 (1) - I know it's hard to make a perfect curve with many points, but I'll check it all.
  5. 00:27:749 (3) - Add a clap. It fits the song fix.
  6. 00:37:524 (3) - Add a clap on the end here too. fix
  7. 00:40:052 (2) - I think head sounds better if you remove clap and add finish since there is cymbal in the music. fix
  8. 00:40:895 (3) - Flow here feels a bit awkward. Maybe you can change the shape like this: http://puu.sh/futsZ/303bff6892.jpg fix
  9. 00:40:895 (3) - Add a clap on the end. fix
  10. 00:42:581 (2) - I think this will be cool, try it: http://puu.sh/futDh/76e5e5fee2.jpg fix
  11. 00:58:929 (3,1) - This overlap looks bad in my opinion. I recommend to move them like this: http://puu.sh/fuuAl/70a6ba7949.avi fix
  12. 00:59:772 (4) - Add clap on end. fix
  13. 01:02:805 (5) - Add clap. fix
  14. 01:27:412 (1) - This spinner should end at 01:30:109 fix
  15. 01:37:693 (2) - I suggest using a 1/2 slider: http://puu.sh/fuva3/467b841392.jpg It makes the rhythm easier to play because all the beat spacing will be 1/1. fix
[Normal]
  1. Start with 60% volume to match the other diffs, and remove the three useless green lines: http://puu.sh/fuwff/cf0f3bd9f9.png fix
  2. 00:03:816 (1) - You are missing a clap. fix
  3. 00:06:176 (5) - I think you can add drum-hitnormal here. It matches the drum in the music well: http://puu.sh/fuwGp/01460f5536.jpg fix
  4. 00:06:513 (1) - Add clap. fix
  5. 00:08:873 (5) - Also drum-hitnormal here. fix
  6. 00:09:210 (1) - Add clap on head, remove clap from end. fix
  7. 00:09:715 (2) - Add clap on head. fix
  8. 00:26:738 (3) - Add clap on repeat. fix
  9. 00:32:131 (1) - Add clap on repeat or end.. whichever one you prefer. fix, added on end
  10. 00:32:131 (1,2) - The distance is too large. fix
  11. 00:44:266 (1) - Maybe add a finish? fix
  12. 01:30:951 (2) - Add clap on end. fix
  13. 01:31:794 (2) - Add clap on head. fix
  14. 01:35:165 (6) - Add clap. fix
  15. 00:18:311 (1) - Remove new combo? It is not needed here. fix
[Hard]
  1. AR7.5 feels a bit too low for this high bpm. I think AR8 feels much better. fix
  2. 01:02:468 - Remove useless green line. fix
  3. 00:06:513 (3,4) - Maybe it's better to put these in the same position (stacked). fix
  4. 00:11:906 (1) - I think you should add clap on the end here. fix
  5. 00:12:581 (2) - Add whistle? fix
  6. 00:13:760 (6,7,8) - It think these are too spaced. Please either stack or put them with smaller spacing. fix
  7. 00:21:176 (1,2,3,4) - Better to use slightly larger distance, so the player doesn't think it's 1/4. fix
  8. 00:30:446 (4) - Add a clap here. fix
  9. 00:37:524 (6) - Whistle on head. fix
  10. 00:40:052 (3,1,2) - The uneven spacing is a bit confusing. Try to make it the same. fix
  11. 00:44:266 (1) - Maybe use finish on head. fix
  12. 00:49:491 (1,2,3) - Make this spacing smaller. fix
  13. 01:04:491 (3) - Whistle on head. fix
  14. 01:06:850 (3) - Clap.skip
  15. 01:09:378 (3) - Clap on end. fix
  16. 01:18:985 (9,10,11,12) - I don't recommend using such large stacks in Hard. Maybe just use a kick slider. fix
  17. 01:35:502 (3,4) - Make the distance farther so the player won't hit (4) too early. fix
  18. 00:24:547 (2) - Add new combo. The follow point appears for too long, and is distracting. fix
  19. 00:29:940 (2) - Add new combo. fix
  20. 00:36:176 (4) - Add new combo. fix
  21. 00:59:772 (1,2) - Swap new combos. It matches with 01:02:468 fix
  22. 01:05:839 (5,1) - Swap new combos. fix
  23. 01:26:738 (5,1) - Swap new combos? fix
[Insane]
  1. 01:18:985 - Remove useless green line. fix
  2. 00:09:210 (1) - Add clap on head? fix
  3. 00:21:008 (6,1) - It would be nice to put a jump here to emphasize strong beat on (1). fix
  4. 00:30:783 (1) - Add finish on head. fix
  5. 00:41:569 (1) - Music has cymbal, so I think you should add finish. fix
  6. 00:48:311 (4,5,6) - Maybe it will be cool if you have increasing slider velocity, like 0,5, 0.625, 0.75: http://puu.sh/fuCVl/8da446f036.jpg fix
  7. 00:04:996 (2) - Add new combo. fix
  8. 00:07:693 (2) - Add new combo. fix
  9. 00:12:918 (1,2) - Swap new combo. fix
  10. 00:24:547 (2) - Add new combo. fix
  11. 00:29:940 (2) - Add new combo. fix
  12. 01:07:356 (1) - Remove new combo. fix
Good luck.
Thank you for your mod.
By the way, I like your previous avatar. You use in your ask.fm now.
Feerum
Good to see that you still work on this map :3
GoGo for Rank! It's a great Map! ^_^
sorciere
tryhard modding~

[Easy]
00:21:176 (2) - Have this blanket the slider end of (1).
00:22:356 (3,1) - I think it's hard to time for new players, how about using a slider instead?
00:25:727 (1) - Small thing, move it to (336,176) for slightly better flow.
00:34:154 (2,3) - Rotate the whole thing by 10 degrees and place them at (284,300) for a maybe better pattern.
00:42:581 (2) - Is this straight or curve? If it's straight, remove the middle point. Also place it at (272,140).
00:57:749 (1) - Pull the middle point up by 1 grid for probably the best blanket.
00:58:929 (3) - ^, but downwards instead.
01:00:446 (1) - and 01:01:625 (3) - Same thing as ^ there?
01:07:356 (3) - It's too fast/hard to read for a new player, I think it's better to place a circle at 01:07:524 instead.
01:37:019 (1,2) - Might as well remove the middle points, no difference at all. Maybe consider sharpening the curve at (1) if you want.
[Normal]
00:13:592 (3,4,5) - Really hard to read. I recommend changing the whole pattern, or at least use a slider that lasts from (4) to (5).
00:26:064 (2) - Make it sharper so that the blanket is more obvious.
00:32:131 (1) - Rotate it by -65 degrees for better flow.
01:01:625 (4) - Is that a straight or curved slider idk lol, if it's straight remove the middle point.

*the non-stop use (and abuse) of complicated 1/2 sliders holds at the first 45 seconds will certainly kill the players. I realise you're mapping according to the melody thing, but I feel like making the rhythm simpler will be better. So take note, maybe you'll need to map it again (I hope I'm wrong tho). But the rest of the map is fun, well done.
[Hard]
00:18:479 (4) - Make the slider less curvy (as curvy as (5)?), it might feel better that way.1/2
00:18:479 (4) - make it as curvy as (5) for consistency.
00:19:491 (1,2) - It's awkward to jump from (1) to (2). I suggest changing the pattern completely, or make (2) blanket (1) at (284,340) or something.
00:21:682 (3) - Move it to (252,270) for maybe better flow.
00:29:940 (1) - I think moving it to (504,52) would be better.
00:40:558 (1,2) - Have this dist snap 1.2 too? (that means green line from here onwards)
00:47:637 (2) - ctrl+g for better presentation?
00:55:558 (3,4,5) - Maybe bring all these to (2)? I dunno, I prefer it that way, how do you feel about it?
00:56:738 (1,2,3) - In my opinion it's too far , reducing the dist snap to about 0.7 might help.
01:09:041 (2) - Make it as curvy as (3) for consistency.
01:24:378 (6) - Make it as curvy as (5) for consistency.
[Insane]
*take note of the fact that I can't pass this difficulty.

00:17:300 (1) - Plays awkwardly, I suggest move it to somewhere else, maybe (284,296).
00:29:940 (1) - Feels a little unexpected, you should move it somewhere else, maybe to (428,244)?
00:31:457 (3) - Personally don't like this slider here. Consider changing it, maybe ctrl+g, ctrl+h and ctrl+j then moving it to (252,260).
00:38:199 (4) - Stack it with (5) plssssss, it feels so much better.
00:47:637 (3) - Small thing, but can you ctrl+j this? (my preference, please avoid this if you like your current one)
01:02:805 (6,7) - NeeEEds a change, the pattern is too damn unclear till it's frustrating. Suggestion : Move (6) to (264,160) and (7) to where (4) is.
01:07:861 (1) - This slider kills the flow to the stream so badly... I have no idea how to change that right now argh,
but anyway try to change the whole pattern of 01:07:524 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - till it's more readable.
01:28:592 (8,1) - There should be a 1/1 slider here to follow the voice and the melody thing.
01:29:350 (4) - Move this to (160,200) for maybe better flow.
01:32:468 (5) - Suggestion, maybe this slider can be the same as (3), but inverted.


hmm, the whole map is quite fun but seems really unpolished, which is a good thing as you can fix that.
Good luck!
Topic Starter
HiverK

Rokkea wrote:

SPOILER
tryhard modding~

[Easy]
00:21:176 (2) - Have this blanket the slider end of (1). fix
00:22:356 (3,1) - I think it's hard to time for new players, how about using a slider instead? no
00:25:727 (1) - Small thing, move it to (336,176) for slightly better flow. fix
00:34:154 (2,3) - Rotate the whole thing by 10 degrees and place them at (284,300) for a maybe better pattern. no
00:42:581 (2) - Is this straight or curve? If it's straight, remove the middle point. Also place it at (272,140). fix position
00:57:749 (1) - Pull the middle point up by 1 grid for probably the best blanket. no
00:58:929 (3) - ^, but downwards instead.
01:00:446 (1) - and 01:01:625 (3) - Same thing as ^ there?
01:07:356 (3) - It's too fast/hard to read for a new player, I think it's better to place a circle at 01:07:524 instead. fix
01:37:019 (1,2) - Might as well remove the middle points, no difference at all. Maybe consider sharpening the curve at (1) if you want. no
[Normal]
00:13:592 (3,4,5) - Really hard to read. I recommend changing the whole pattern, or at least use a slider that lasts from (4) to (5). exchange (4) & (5)
00:26:064 (2) - Make it sharper so that the blanket is more obvious. fix
00:32:131 (1) - Rotate it by -65 degrees for better flow. fix
01:01:625 (4) - Is that a straight or curved slider idk lol, if it's straight remove the middle point. straight, fix

*the non-stop use (and abuse) of complicated 1/2 sliders holds at the first 45 seconds will certainly kill the players. I realise you're mapping according to the melody thing, but I feel like making the rhythm simpler will be better. So take note, maybe you'll need to map it again (I hope I'm wrong tho). But the rest of the map is fun, well done. if you say this in easy diff, I agree. For normal diff I think it's ok. You feel hard to play due to the high BPM, i think.
[Hard]
00:18:479 (4) - Make the slider less curvy (as curvy as (5)?), it might feel better that way.1/2 fix
00:18:479 (4) - make it as curvy as (5) for consistency. fix
00:19:491 (1,2) - It's awkward to jump from (1) to (2). I suggest changing the pattern completely, or make (2) blanket (1) at (284,340) or something. fix
00:21:682 (3) - Move it to (252,270) for maybe better flow. fix
00:29:940 (1) - I think moving it to (504,52) would be better. fix
00:40:558 (1,2) - Have this dist snap 1.2 too? (that means green line from here onwards) fix
00:47:637 (2) - ctrl+g for better presentation? no
00:55:558 (3,4,5) - Maybe bring all these to (2)? I dunno, I prefer it that way, how do you feel about it? you mean let (3) stack with (2)? if so, i fix.
00:56:738 (1,2,3) - In my opinion it's too far , reducing the dist snap to about 0.7 might help. no
01:09:041 (2) - Make it as curvy as (3) for consistency. fix
01:24:378 (6) - Make it as curvy as (5) for consistency. fix
[Insane]
*take note of the fact that I can't pass this difficulty.

00:17:300 (1) - Plays awkwardly, I suggest move it to somewhere else, maybe (284,296). where is the difference?
00:29:940 (1) - Feels a little unexpected, you should move it somewhere else, maybe to (428,244)? no
00:31:457 (3) - Personally don't like this slider here. Consider changing it, maybe ctrl+g, ctrl+h and ctrl+j then moving it to (252,260). fix
00:38:199 (4) - Stack it with (5) plssssss, it feels so much better. fix
00:47:637 (3) - Small thing, but can you ctrl+j this? (my preference, please avoid this if you like your current one) fix
01:02:805 (6,7) - NeeEEds a change, the pattern is too damn unclear till it's frustrating. Suggestion : Move (6) to (264,160) and (7) to where (4) is. no
01:07:861 (1) - This slider kills the flow to the stream so badly... I have no idea how to change that right now argh,
but anyway try to change the whole pattern of 01:07:524 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - till it's more readable. i don't feel something weird
01:28:592 (8,1) - There should be a 1/1 slider here to follow the voice and the melody thing. fix
01:29:350 (4) - Move this to (160,200) for maybe better flow. fix
01:32:468 (5) - Suggestion, maybe this slider can be the same as (3), but inverted. no


hmm, the whole map is quite fun but seems really unpolished, which is a good thing as you can fix that.
Good luck!
Thanks! I'm too busy to reply recently cuz CNY. :o
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