Haruru wrote:

from in-game req(遅くなってごめんなさい)
[Normal]
01:39:130 (3) - x:244 y:240に動かすとちょっと綺麗になります それっぽくした
[Hard]
00:04:305 (2) - Circle1個にしてもいいかも？
02:59:270 (3) - 02:59:899 (4) をblanketしてもいいかも？yoshi
[Lunatic]
01:22:347 (4) - 01:21:927 (3) をblanketしてもいいかも？ 角度変えた
01:29:060 (6) - 01:28:221 (1) をblanketしてもいいかも？yoshi
02:03:046 (1) - 個人的にはCtrl+Gした方が叩きやすく感じました yoshi

全然書くところ無かった・・・ 最高

Satellite wrote:

Sorry late ;w;
wrong mod for wring w

[General]

1. AR3からAR7って結構差あるしAR4にしとかない？ -> Normal それでいいならそれがいいんだよな

[Normal]

1. 00:15:214 - 00:16:053 - 00:16:892 -
   00:18:570 - 00:19:410 - 00:20:249 -
   こういったwhistleパターンを使ってるのであれば
   00:30:319 (5) - ここにはadd whistleなはず？ ok
2. 01:30:738 (2) - Easyないわけだし、50%以上重ねるのやめよう見づらい hai

[Hard]

1. 00:34:934 (1) - Nc いる？
2. 01:05:144 (3,4) - 2.0以上のジャンプここにいる？？？ 曲が飛んでいる
3. 01:05:983 (1,2,3,4) - スタック云々のせいでDSぐちゃぐちゃだけど意図的？ 秘儀使用

[Lunatic]

1. 00:28:011 - 意図的にあけてるんだろうなあ～～って読み取れるけどadd noteしたほうがやりやすくない？ 休みたがってる
2. 00:50:459 (3,4,5,1) - ここは面倒かもしれないけど 00:48:780 (5,6,7,8,9) - こことパターン統一して５連打のほうが読みやすいしやりやすいと思う 汚くなってしまった
3. 02:28:221 (10) - ここで緑線で*0.85いれてるせいでDS通り配置しても１個だけ浮いてるっていうのわかるかな？どう見ても狭いし、ちゃんとあわせてあげて hai
   
   wrong

   
4. 03:03:466 (1,2,3,4,5) - 挑戦的だね 飛翔感を感じ取れるか

mod sikata wasureta

alacat wrote:

wringratz!!!!!!!!!!!!!

appleeaterx wrote:

Hello wring! Requested by Satellite :3

[General]

1. soft-hitclap2.wav is on the edge of rankability with a delay of 4ms. The maximum is 5ms, but I highly recommend replacing the hitsound with this file http://puu.sh/ixkQb/cc3c0da956.wav.

ok change it

[Easy]

1. 01:24:025 (6) - Skipping downbeat completely is really weird to me, sorry :< - Try something like http://puu.sh/ixigM/81a8ac02ad.jpg? This way you can cover all sounds easily, while giving enough emphasis on downbeat which is quite important. Then, if you do apply this suggestion. Add a NC on 01:24:445 - so the combo wont get too long.
2. 01:27:382 (2) - Hmm.. same here. Since strong vocal is on the red tick, I understand you skip that note. But please follow the downbeat then, something like this is more beginner-friendly and plays better overall. http://puu.sh/ixiq6/6d34e35dbc.jpg
3. 01:05:983 (4,1) - I do not recommend stacking these. There are technically rankable, but it's quite confusing. This is the only stack in this diff, and that gap makes it even more confusing... I recommend to spread it out like 03:06:822 (3,1) - I asked Satellite and he said fine so sorry keep it.
4. 02:38:291 (1,1) - Easy difficulty needs 1 full measure recovery time after spinner. Also, there are no green lines to gradually increase the volume, unlike the other diffs. ok, deleted
5. 02:55:074 (1) - Don't know if you did this on purpose, but flipping the slider creates a more natural flow to me, something like this http://puu.sh/ixiMq/2a80670ef7.jpg? Of course, up to you. ok nice flow
6. 03:28:640 (2) - Are you sure you don't want some green lines here to change the slidertick hitsound considering your hitsound pattern in this section? Similar to what you did at 01:44:584 (1) - Also, sure you don't want to put the NC on (2) instead? Just confirming :pit's the pattern and the NC is focusing 03:31:577 (1,2,3) -
7. 03:31:577 (1,2,3,1) - Lol, just wanted to say that I really like this w<3

And sorry the downbeat note didn't add because this is Easy and I think 4/1 for one set.

[Normal]

1. 03:08:920 (2) - Since the 'no' vocal is the longer one in this combo, I personally prefer the 1/1 here. sorry, I want to keep the melody.http://puu.sh/ixjxv/78862ec576.jpg

[Hard]

1. Change OD to 6? That way you have a nice 3/4 and 6/7 between the diffs. Your decision whether you want to change or not. changed
2. The stack leniency in this difficulty is really low (not unrankable) compared to the other difficulties which have their SL way higher. Shouldn't matter, but just wanted to notify you. hmmm....ok changed to 7 but I worried the playing view.
3. 01:07:661 (1,2,3,4) - Fits the vocal so well =w=b hehehe
4. 01:56:333 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Having multiple triplets combined with single-tapping is a no for me. If you want to keep star pattern, you can change one of the (or both) triplet into a reverse slider to keep star.sorry, I need keep this for the difficult zone http://puu.sh/ixk2f/1ea043f851.jpg

[Lunatic]

1. Minor, but you have an unsnapped line at 01:34:926 - ok
2. 02:18:151 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Aaaaaah, this is so nice /w\ <3
3. 02:54:025 (4,5,6,7) - Not a problem but, it stands out to me that you just used 1/4 here. In an identical part in the song itself you used a 1/8 repeat slider, at 02:00:319 (7) - . Since the 1/8 beats in the song are really clear and obvious, is there a specific reason why you didn't map those out here? the 1/8 sound is here 02:54:235 (5) - , but I want the 1/4 slider jump. If I put 1/8 rhythm, it would be too hard and break this difficulty imo.
4. 02:54:654 (7) - Minor, but if you want to keep consistency with the identical mentioned above, add a new combo here. ><
5. 03:17:312 (3,4,5,6,7) - This stream played okay here, but I can't really hear a noticeable 1/4 beat on (4) here... Sounds more like note + triplet rhythm, but it's more up to you. keep it

Nice mapset, really good job on this :3 uoooo~~
Call me back \o/