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puxtu wrote:

o3o
I can't remember the last time a modded a map, but here we go
[general]
why no kiai time and i found this

[Intermediate "Saucy Meatball"]
gw bakal terus terang ya.. pattern lu je, menurut gw udah bagus bgt, gw hati2 bgt mau mod ini. tapi...pas gw testplay ada bbrapa part yg keknya "a lil bit too hard" untuk diff HD. bntar gw tunjukin satu satu
00:04:069 (4069|3,4069|2) - suara cymbal kek gini enaknya di pisah (e.g 1 3 or 1 4 or 2 4) // boleh
00:06:469 - sengaja dikosongin? // yep
00:05:955 (5955|1,6298|3) - pasangannya mana? kok yg ini ada? 00:04:069 (4069|2,4069|3) - // kgk ada cymbal, cuma fokus ke synth
00:14:183 (14183|2) - doesn't feels right :/ mungkin ini seharusnya di red line yg di bawahnya terus add note di blue line // lel sorry

=w= continue later


00:14:698 (14698|1,14783|0,14869|1,14955|2,15040|3,15040|0,15212|2,15212|1,15383|1,15469|3,15555|1,15726|2,15726|0,15898|0,15898|2,16069|1,16155|0,16240|2,16412|2,16412|1) - gw contoh org yg lemah bgt di tangan kiri, ini 12 note banding 8 note masih agak berat sebelah. mungkin ctrl+h semuanya atau terserah // ok a bit balanced now
00:16:412 (16412|1,16412|2) - pisahin, jgn kasi nempel // hue ok
00:20:269 - you really need to add note here // keep dulu
00:20:698 (20698|0,20698|3,20869|3,20955|2,21040|0,21126|2,21212|0,21298|1) - :C
00:27:040 (27040|3,27126|2,27212|1,27298|0,27383|1) - ctrl+h atau re-arrange
00:29:440 (29440|0) - hammer di tangan kiri is a big no from me, sorry // lol 1/2 jack bro..
00:33:640 (33640|1,33726|0,33812|1,33898|2,33983|3) - try this 1 2 4 3 1 // ==a keep
00:35:783 (35783|0,35783|3,35955|2,35955|3,36126|1,36212|2,36298|3,36298|0,36469|0,36469|1,36555|3,36640|0,36726|3,36812|0) - :C // git gud son
00:47:869 (47869|2) - sengaja dikosongin? // transisi
00:55:669 - optional http://puu.sh/eDjEd/a54b614b9e.png
01:01:155 (61155|0,61326|3,61498|0) - make this into a perfect stair pls.. 1 2 3 or 2 3 4 will works // lel for PR sake, keep
01:01:840 - dari sini gw serasa main blue army // nerfed down
......
nice pattern

[Normal "Asian Stir-Fried Seafood"]
00:03:555 (3555|3) - change to 1/1 ln, karna ngga ngikutin suara yg bgitu kontras kyknya agak aneh // ok
00:05:955 (5955|1,6298|3) - same case sama diff lo yg di atas // =w= keep
oo i like this pattern, konsisten sama 1 suara
00:11:269 - kalo gw jadi lo gw bakal bikin kek gini http://puu.sh/eDl11/964627dcb3.jpg // repattern
01:39:040 - ^ // repattern
00:20:269 - add 1 note disini ngga bakal naikin star rating kok je ;) // 1/6 tuh, kalo jadi 1/4, jatohnya salah
01:34:412 (94412|3) - hapus nih, ln apaan buat suara kek gini ngga cucok bgt degh :C // :U
01:45:555 (105555|1,106069|0) - hmmm :C // :U

[Easy "Egg-roll"]
00:03:040 (3040|1,3555|2,4069|1) - pisahin dr pasangannya // oy easier judgement laah.. keep
00:05:955 (5955|1,6298|3) - same case sama diff lo yg di atas // ==a keep
00:09:383 (9383|0) - ke 4
00:11:269 - tangan gw ng-hold sendiri disiini, nyari ln tp ngga ada
....
I've never seen ez pattern like this // cek lagi lost one no goukoku punya gw
....
00:50:183 (50183|0) - ngga kepanjangan nih? // keep
00:56:355 (56355|3,56355|0) - nah gini dong // :U

00:56:698 (56698|1) - ke 3
00:58:069 (58069|2) - ke 1
00:59:440 (59440|1) - ke 4
// nyaaah dah di rearrange semua.. >:T

01:00:469 (60469|0,60812|3) - ctrl+j much better like this
01:01:840 - sampe sini 01:11:440 - gw bingung lo ikutin suara apaan, ada bbrapa white line yg lo kosongin ngga tau itu sengaja atau ngga trus malah ada note di red line yg ngga ada sama sekali suaranya :C // lol ok then
01:28:240 (88240|1,88583|2,88926|3) - doesn't flow with the music, jauh beda sama yg ini 01:30:983 (90983|0,91326|2,91669|0) - // kden
01:34:412 - woah ntah sengaja atau ngga but you just missed a loud sound here // ==a karena lu yg bilang, gw add
01:39:040 - ln nya mana :C // takut out beat, keep

segini aja dulu, diff lain nyusul

yay thanks pe
puxtu
no kds
[Hard "Grilled Chicken"]
00:00:812 (812|3) - end here? 00:00:983 -
00:04:385 - idk why but it feels empty here
00:05:783 (5783|0,5955|1,6126|2,6298|3) - gw ngga yakin ini harus di layer dgn LN
00:08:526 (8526|0) - it shouldn't here, remove
00:14:183 (14183|2) - same case like intermediate
00:15:383 (15383|1,15469|3) - move to 4 3
00:20:240 (20240|3,20298|2,20355|1) - ctrl + h and then move 1 column to right
00:21:469 - a missing note, make it full burst
00:21:983 - ^
00:25:326 (25326|3) - gw heran, long sound kek gini malah ngga lu kasi LN je.. suara drum malah lo pakein LN :/
00:33:298 (33298|2,33383|1) - ctrl+j
00:37:326 (37326|1) - entah knp lo mulai dr sini
00:38:869 (38869|3) - double note
00:42:469 (42469|2) - LN?
00:50:526 (50526|3) - note biasa? trus keknya enak tambahin sv disini
00:55:498 (55498|0) - ^
00:55:669 (55669|3,55840|2,56012|1,56183|0) - why? :/
01:10:069 (70069|2) - to 4
01:17:355 (77355|0,77440|1,77526|2) - ctrl+h.. you know why
01:21:298 (81298|2,81298|0) - je bisa jelasin gk ini knp ada 2?
01:25:669 (85669|3,85840|3) - to 2 or somewhere else
01:29:440 (89440|3) - to 2
01:34:326 (94326|0,94412|1) - ctrl+j, much better like this
01:43:498 (103498|2) - to 01:43:669 - karena gw liat lo make 2 note bwt cymbal
01:44:183 - add note, same reason
01:46:069 - add at 3, strong beat
01:46:412 -at 4, same reason
01:46:412 (106412|0) - ngga kepanjangan je? oiya gw lupa lo suka yg panjang panjang.. sorry >3<
[Burst!ng Fried Rice]
mother of hammers....
00:05:955 (5955|1,6298|3) - jadiin double notes
00:07:155 (7155|1,7240|0,7326|3,7326|1) - ctrl+h
00:08:526 (8526|1,8526|0) - mungkin gw yg salah denger tp kyknya ini 1/8 deh
00:11:440 (11440|0,11783|1) - bukannya ini yg harusnya di double?
00:12:126 (12126|1) - to 1
00:13:840 (13840|3) - kok kosong? :C
00:20:183 (20183|2,20240|3) - ctrl+j
00:22:069 (22069|2,22155|3) - remove. no sound
00:27:898 (27898|2) - double note
00:28:412 (28412|3,28412|2) - triplet boleh nih
00:30:298 (30298|0) - dn
00:36:812 (36812|2) - ^
00:37:326 (37326|1) - keknya bukan dr sini mulainya je :/
00:38:869 (38869|2,38955|3) - ctrl+j
01:01:498 (61498|0,61540|1,61583|2,61626|3,61669|0,61712|1,61755|2,61798|3,61840|0) - ctrl+h? karena mnurut gw lebih enak burst yg 4321 4321,tp lain ceritanya kalo org yg main kidal :v
01:01:840 - dr sini gw serasa main candy galy
01:10:069 - halequinn
01:36:126 - jgn di kosongin :/
01:36:126 (96126|0) - double notes
[Noodles of Insanity]
OD 8
00:06:640 - add one more note, strong beat
00:11:098 - missing note (e.g 00:30:298 (30298|3,30298|2) - )
00:15:212 - add pls, cymbal sound
00:47:098 - knp yg ini kosong? :/
00:47:440 - ^
01:09:469 (69469|2) - ini note ngapain disini coba
01:11:440 (71440|2,71440|1,71440|0,71698|1,71698|3,71698|2) - change to LNs
01:35:098 - add note
01:35:440 - ^
01:38:869 - ^
01:41:612 - ^
01:42:298 - ^
01:44:183 (104183|2) - move to 4
01:46:069 (106069|1,106412|3) - double notes
....
sorry je gw alergi sama mie wkwkwk

overall: map lo bikin gw laper.. I mean really nice map >3<)b
i wish i could shot a star :C
good luck!
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

puxtu wrote:

no kds
[Hard "Grilled Chicken"]
00:00:812 (812|3) - end here? 00:00:983 - // hue ok
00:04:385 - idk why but it feels empty here // dafuk indeed
00:05:783 (5783|0,5955|1,6126|2,6298|3) - gw ngga yakin ini harus di layer dgn LN // ==a same aje tanpa LN juga
00:08:526 (8526|0) - it shouldn't here, remove // lel ok
00:14:183 (14183|2) - same case like intermediate // represent 1/6 stairs, keep
00:15:383 (15383|1,15469|3) - move to 4 3 // 34 plox
00:20:240 (20240|3,20298|2,20355|1) - ctrl + h and then move 1 column to right // ==a for easier execution (but harder looks), keep
00:21:469 - a missing note, make it full burst // ghost note? D:
00:21:983 - ^ // ^ keep
00:25:326 (25326|3) - gw heran, long sound kek gini malah ngga lu kasi LN je.. suara drum malah lo pakein LN :/ // awkwkwk thanks for noticing.. ok fixed
00:33:298 (33298|2,33383|1) - ctrl+j // pr wise, keep
00:37:326 (37326|1) - entah knp lo mulai dr sini // ==a emang dari situ
00:38:869 (38869|3) - double note // keep, layer cuma ke synth
00:42:469 (42469|2) - LN? // 00:42:469 (42469|2,42469|0,42640|0,42640|2) - considering this execution, keep
00:50:526 (50526|3) - note biasa? trus keknya enak tambahin sv disini // hmm.. sv..... pada akhirnya gw apus juga SV gw.. orz..
00:55:498 (55498|0) - ^ // hue ok dah
00:55:669 (55669|3,55840|2,56012|1,56183|0) - why? :/ // ==a why not
01:10:069 (70069|2) - to 4 // ok
01:17:355 (77355|0,77440|1,77526|2) - ctrl+h.. you know why // ok
01:21:298 (81298|2,81298|0) - je bisa jelasin gk ini knp ada 2? // own-made rhythm, asalkan konstan, ngasih 1 note tambahan gk akan nyusahin & overmap.. =w=)b
01:25:669 (85669|3,85840|3) - to 2 or somewhere else // ;; ok
01:29:440 (89440|3) - to 2 // keep
01:34:326 (94326|0,94412|1) - ctrl+j, much better like this // 01:33:983 (93983|1,94069|2,94069|3) - udah ada disini.. :C
01:43:498 (103498|2) - to 01:43:669 - karena gw liat lo make 2 note bwt cymbal // ==a keep aja
01:44:183 - add note, same reason // ^
01:46:069 - add at 3, strong beat // rearranged & added
01:46:412 -at 4, same reason // ^
01:46:412 (106412|0) - ngga kepanjangan je? oiya gw lupa lo suka yg panjang panjang.. sorry >3< // shorten in all diff.. thanks
[Burst!ng Fried Rice]
mother of hammers....
00:05:955 (5955|1,6298|3) - jadiin double notes // rearranged, but still 1 note.. =w=
00:07:155 (7155|1,7240|0,7326|3,7326|1) - ctrl+h // ==a ok
00:08:526 (8526|1,8526|0) - mungkin gw yg salah denger tp kyknya ini 1/8 deh // 1/4
00:11:440 (11440|0,11783|1) - bukannya ini yg harusnya di double? // cek lagi oboro insanity
00:12:126 (12126|1) - to 1 // keep
00:13:840 (13840|3) - kok kosong? :C // o_o ada ah
00:20:183 (20183|2,20240|3) - ctrl+j // keep, legit
00:22:069 (22069|2,22155|3) - remove. no sound // ==a listen again, and it's better because the beat kinda better
00:27:898 (27898|2) - double note // kk
00:28:412 (28412|3,28412|2) - triplet boleh nih // kk
00:30:298 (30298|0) - dn
00:36:812 (36812|2) - ^
00:37:326 (37326|1) - keknya bukan dr sini mulainya je :/ // listen again.. '-')a mulai dari situ
00:38:869 (38869|2,38955|3) - ctrl+j // =w= keep, pr wise
01:01:498 (61498|0,61540|1,61583|2,61626|3,61669|0,61712|1,61755|2,61798|3,61840|0) - ctrl+h? karena mnurut gw lebih enak burst yg 4321 4321,tp lain ceritanya kalo org yg main kidal :v // :U ok
01:01:840 - dr sini gw serasa main candy galy // added more candy galy.. :^)
01:10:069 - halequinn // added more haelequin.. :^)
01:36:126 - jgn di kosongin :/ // beatnya kurang enak.. :C
01:36:126 (96126|0) - double notes // o.o?
[Noodles of Insanity]
OD 8 // liat lagi oboro
00:06:640 - add one more note, strong beat // gile lu.. o_o double LN juga dah kuat
00:11:098 - missing note (e.g 00:30:298 (30298|3,30298|2) - ) // gk ngelayer perkusi.. =w=)a
00:15:212 - add pls, cymbal sound // added in some other spots..
00:47:098 - knp yg ini kosong? :/ // aa lupa.. thanks
00:47:440 - ^
01:09:469 (69469|2) - ini note ngapain disini coba // :U
01:11:440 (71440|2,71440|1,71440|0,71698|1,71698|3,71698|2) - change to LNs // heh
01:35:098 - add note
01:35:440 - ^
01:38:869 - ^
01:41:612 - ^
01:42:298 - ^
01:44:183 (104183|2) - move to 4 // lel 01:44:183 (104183|2,104183|1,104698|1,104698|2,105040|1,105040|2) -
01:46:069 (106069|1,106412|3) - double notes // keep
....
sorry je gw alergi sama mie wkwkwk // :C

overall: map lo bikin gw laper.. I mean really nice map >3<)b
i wish i could shot a star :C
good luck!
no reply means <3
yay thanks for the full mod pe! it's hard to reject your mods, even 1 of them... because simply it's reasonable.. sorry ^^;
Remillion Cross
give me some noodles, and i will give you back some stars.
Ciyus Miapah
SO HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!!!!!
Zan-
marked

from my queue

| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
note that im modding at 0% sample volume


random picking dif, just burst thing

mod
[burst]
00:00:983 (983|1,1069|0) - move to right by 1 col. | pls pain. even though 00:01:069 (1069|0,1155|0) - is in different sound

00:01:669 (1669|1,1755|2,1755|0,1840|1) - different with 00:02:183 (2183|1,2183|3,2269|2,2355|1,2355|3) - ? well it has same sound
---evenmore 00:03:212 (3212|1,3298|3,3383|0) -

00:03:040 - add note | loud cymbal, just like these 00:01:498 - 00:02:012 - 00:02:526 -
00:04:069 - ^

00:05:869 (5869|2,6040|0,6212|2) - delete?

00:05:955 - add note
00:06:298 - ^
00:08:355 - ^
00:08:698 - ^
00:10:583 - ^
00:11:098 - ^
00:11:440 - ^

00:17:526 (17526|3) - move to 1 | pain. but im sure you doesnt want to change this, i know.

00:17:612 - i think double is enough here not like in 00:17:783 - which has loud cymbal

00:20:526 (20526|3) - move to 3

00:22:069 (22069|2,22155|3,22240|1,22326|2) - ctrl + H

00:25:283 (25283|0) - delete | idk idk idk idk why on there

00:30:469 (30469|1,30555|0) - suddenly no jack

00:39:383 - add note
00:44:869 - ^
00:55:755 - ^
01:00:212 - ^
01:00:640 - ^
01:01:840 - ^
01:09:812 - ^

01:10:069 - haelequin, but.... i cant catch 1/8 instruments there

01:12:983 (72983|2,73069|2) - pls different pitch
01:13:498 (73498|1,73583|1) - ^
01:14:012 - suddenly double orz previous are just singles

01:15:726 (75726|0,75812|0) - different
01:16:240 (76240|3,76326|3) - ^

01:17:783 (77783|3) - move to 3
01:23:012 (83012|0) - ^ to 4

01:25:069 - double? here is single 01:24:040 - 01:24:555 -

01:27:726 - again eventhough pitch is decreasing here

01:28:840 (88840|1,89098|2) - delete double is enough

01:32:698 (92698|2,92783|3) - ctrl + H but i know you wont change this

01:34:583 (94583|0) - delete

01:38:355 - add note
01:38:869 - ^

gl~
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

Zan - wrote:

marked

from my queue

| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
note that im modding at 0% sample volume


random picking dif, just burst thing

mod
[burst]
00:00:983 (983|1,1069|0) - move to right by 1 col. | pls pain. even though 00:01:069 (1069|0,1155|0) - is in different sound // 00:01:069 (1069|0) - moved to 2.. :^)

00:01:669 (1669|1,1755|2,1755|0,1840|1) - different with 00:02:183 (2183|1,2183|3,2269|2,2355|1,2355|3) - ? well it has same sound
---evenmore 00:03:212 (3212|1,3298|3,3383|0) - // naah, alternating different notes amount to represent different synthesizer, because this map doesn't have LN... considering it's more physical mapping instead technical one, i'll consider to change this later

00:03:040 - add note | loud cymbal, just like these 00:01:498 - 00:02:012 - 00:02:526 - // yuss
00:04:069 - ^ // okkie

00:05:869 (5869|2,6040|0,6212|2) - delete? // there's some sort of sound there, keep

00:05:955 - add note // ^ keep
00:06:298 - ^ // ^ ;w;
00:08:355 - ^ // focusing to the synthesizers only, and avoid to layer percussion to make the flow doesn't broken
00:08:698 - ^ // ^ keep, check oboro, there's a lot of similar things.. :^)
00:10:583 - ^ // ^ synth only.. still want to keep myo2 style without ln here... ;w;
00:11:098 - ^ // ^ keep
00:11:440 - ^ // ^ keep

00:17:526 (17526|3) - move to 1 | pain. but im sure you doesnt want to change this, i know. // :U as you wish, no change.. *runs

00:17:612 - i think double is enough here not like in 00:17:783 - which has loud cymbal // naah.. ==a i feel the beat is fine here.. for rhythm purpose though

00:20:526 (20526|3) - move to 3 // <3

00:22:069 (22069|2,22155|3,22240|1,22326|2) - ctrl + H // rearranged instead

00:25:283 (25283|0) - delete | idk idk idk idk why on there // synthesizer sounds lol.. if you had a time, check hekireki, ahuehueehue.. :U

00:30:469 (30469|1,30555|0) - suddenly no jack // i was about to make 2 beat with mini jack only, since the 3rd will conflict with 00:31:212 (31212|2,31269|1) - .. will consider to change later

00:39:383 - add note // keep, ghost notes no more please.. ;w;
00:44:869 - ^ // i layer this phase with percussion, so yea, keep
00:55:755 - ^ // nice catch.. added
01:00:212 - ^ // blame old mp3.. :u added
01:00:640 - ^ // ok
01:01:840 - ^ // ok
01:09:812 - ^ // uhh... ok then.. (kinda doubt because there's no cue sound, but it has better beat indeed..)

01:10:069 - haelequin, but.... i cant catch 1/8 instruments there // there is a lots of 1/8 snare.. it's biased with the synthesizer but its still hearable... keep

01:12:983 (72983|2,73069|2) - pls different pitch
01:13:498 (73498|1,73583|1) - ^ // keep both, i don't rely with PR too much, mapping too technical will reduce the game factor on it
01:14:012 - suddenly double orz previous are just singles // 3rd beat, ^ i don't rely the PR, as long as it has nice beat..

01:15:726 (75726|0,75812|0) - different
01:16:240 (76240|3,76326|3) - ^ // aa thanks for noticing this, i forgot to add notes between 01:16:755 (76755|0,76840|3) - .. U

01:17:783 (77783|3) - move to 3 // ;; keep, for laser beam sound
01:23:012 (83012|0) - ^ to 4 // re-arranged, but the jack still there.. moved to another beat, thanks for noticing this

01:25:069 - double? here is single 01:24:040 - 01:24:555 - // 3rd beat.. don't you see the problem is repeated at same beat? it's on purpose.. :3

01:27:726 - again eventhough pitch is decreasing here // ==a i know, but i don't rely pr, as long as the beat feels better.. so keep

01:28:840 (88840|1,89098|2) - delete double is enough // to represent the laser beam sound.. ==a considering to keep because this is the hardest diff

01:32:698 (92698|2,92783|3) - ctrl + H but i know you wont change this // 01:32:269 (92269|0,92355|0) - yep, keep

01:34:583 (94583|0) - delete // ok

01:38:355 - add note // focusing to the synthesizer, keep
01:38:869 - ^ // ;w; keep

gl~
;w; padahal gw butuh bangget mod di diff yg Basic 'Bao'... but well, thanks!
Aste-
Heya..

Sorry for delay :P (busy with GD-ing)

Ok ini pertama kalinya Nge-mod BM sambil ngiler (Grilled Chicken nya satu ya bang >.<)

OK back to business

[General]

Uncheck Widescreen Support (ngga ada SB kan?)

[The MOD]

Column 1.2.3.4

Bak Pao
00:20:526 (20526|3) - Pindah ke 3 (sejajarin sama 00:21:040 (21040|2) - biar enak mainnya)

00:25:840 (25840|2,26012|3) - Ctrl G
00:27:212 (27212|1,27383|0) - Pindah ke 3 sama 4
^Ngurangin Jump^

00:56:698 (56698|1,57040|2,57383|3) - Ctrl H
00:57:726 (57726|0) - Pindah ke 2 ato 4

01:12:812 (72812|0) - Move ke 2
01:13:155 (73155|1,73326|3,73669|1,73840|3) - Geser ke kiri 1 Colom

01:24:126 (84126|2,84298|3) - Geser 1 kolom ke kiri

01:26:869 (86869|1,87040|0) - ^ kanan

Egg-roll "Sosis Solo"
00:09:726 (9726|1) - Move ke 1 ( pitch )

00:25:155 (25155|0) - Move ke 2

00:42:298 (42298|0) - move ke 3
00:42:469 (42469|2) - Move ke 2

00:47:955 (47955|0) - Move ke 3 (Pitch)

01:09:383 (69383|1) - Move ke 1 ( Pattern)

Asian Stir-Fried Seafood
Check AI MOD

OD = 7 ?

pattern Clear

ak dah check yang lain ( kecuali Insane ke atas ) dan semuanya clear

GL ^.^

Aduhh Laper Lagi
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

Pharos21 wrote:

Heya..

Sorry for delay :P (busy with GD-ing)

Ok ini pertama kalinya Nge-mod BM sambil ngiler (Grilled Chicken nya satu ya bang >.<) // siaaap.. =w=)7

OK back to business

[General]

Uncheck Widescreen Support (ngga ada SB kan?) // hue, gk tau dah, gw jarang ngecek song setup... ok

[The MOD]

Column 1.2.3.4

Bak Pao
00:20:526 (20526|3) - Pindah ke 3 (sejajarin sama 00:21:040 (21040|2) - biar enak mainnya) // ==a bisa aja... hmm.. 00:20:355 (20355|0) - ke 2 aja deh..

00:25:840 (25840|2,26012|3) - Ctrl G // ok
00:27:212 (27212|1,27383|0) - Pindah ke 3 sama 4 // hmm.. keep
^Ngurangin Jump^

00:56:698 (56698|1,57040|2,57383|3) - Ctrl H // ;w; keep
00:57:726 (57726|0) - Pindah ke 2 ato 4 // ^ keep.. gk ngikutin PR

01:12:812 (72812|0) - Move ke 2 // wedew.. keep
01:13:155 (73155|1,73326|3,73669|1,73840|3) - Geser ke kiri 1 Colom // keep ^

01:24:126 (84126|2,84298|3) - Geser 1 kolom ke kiri // ok

01:26:869 (86869|1,87040|0) - ^ kanan // ==a keep

Egg-roll "Sosis Solo"
00:09:726 (9726|1) - Move ke 1 ( pitch ) // boleh

00:25:155 (25155|0) - Move ke 2 // ;w; keep

00:42:298 (42298|0) - move ke 3
00:42:469 (42469|2) - Move ke 2 // eeh keep

00:47:955 (47955|0) - Move ke 3 (Pitch) // rearranged everything

01:09:383 (69383|1) - Move ke 1 ( Pattern)

Asian Stir-Fried Seafood
Check AI MOD // oh, keep, gk ada yg bisa di perbaiki... ==a

OD = 7 ? // HP nya jadi 6.5, ok

pattern Clear

ak dah check yang lain ( kecuali Insane ke atas ) dan semuanya clear

GL ^.^

Aduhh Laper Lagi

yay thanks!
Aste-
Grilled Chicken nya 1.. nih bang . kembaliannya ambil aja
RuberusuScarlet
hi ~

mod request"Beat Savior's Modder Team" MANIA Queue

|1|2|3|4|

mod
[Burst!ng Fried Rice]
HD 9.5 ?

00:06:298 - add 1

00:24:298 (24298|0) - move to 4

00:34:412 - add 3
01:18:040 - ^2 and 3 ?
01:46:069 - ^4 ?
01:46:412 - ^1 ?

[Noodles of Insanity]
nice LN
00:53:183 (53183|0) - or 00:53:183 (53183|1) - move to 00:53:098 -

01:46:069 - add 4 ?
01:46:412 - ^ 1 ?

00:37:155 - to 00:38:355 -
1/4 LN start to 00:36:983 - end to 00:38:355 - ?


[Hard Grilled Chicken]
00:19:498 (19498|1,19669|1) - move to 1
and… 00:19:669 (19669|1) - end to 00:19:840 -

01:01:326 (61326|3) - move to 3

01:01:498 - add LN 4 , end to 01:01:840 - (main sound and 1/16sound)

[Intermediate "Saucy Meatball"]
00:11:098 - add 3 ?
00:20:183 (20183|1,20355|2,20526|2) - Ctrl + H ?

00:52:840 (52840|2) - delete
00:53:183 - add 4 ?
00:55:926 - ^2

01:23:098 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2607111 ? (Like Hard Grilled Chicken)

01:46:412 - add 4
good luck >w</
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

RuberusuScarlet wrote:

hi ~

mod request"Beat Savior's Modder Team" MANIA Queue

|1|2|3|4|

mod
[Burst!ng Fried Rice]
HD 9.5 ? // ==a doesn't really affect the hp drain bar.. keep

00:06:298 - add 1 // hmm.. consider to add this later

00:24:298 (24298|0) - move to 4 // xD nice, ok

00:34:412 - add 3 // ok
01:18:040 - ^2 and 3 ? // ^^; added.. thanks for noticing this
01:46:069 - ^4 ? // keep, it's calm part..
01:46:412 - ^1 ? // keep..

[Noodles of Insanity]
nice LN
00:53:183 (53183|0) - or 00:53:183 (53183|1) - move to 00:53:098 - // lel i see.. will consider to move this

01:46:069 - add 4 ?
01:46:412 - ^ 1 ?

00:37:155 - to 00:38:355 -
1/4 LN start to 00:36:983 - end to 00:38:355 - ?
// yep, there's a cue sound, but it's wise to not layer such low sound.. keep

[Hard Grilled Chicken]
00:19:498 (19498|1,19669|1) - move to 1
and… 00:19:669 (19669|1) - end to 00:19:840 - // rearranged whole thing,

01:01:326 (61326|3) - move to 3 // keep

01:01:498 - add LN 4 , end to 01:01:840 - (main sound and 1/16sound) // oooo.... nice idea.. 01:01:326 (61326|3) - make this longer until 01:01:840 (61840|2) -

[Intermediate "Saucy Meatball"]
00:11:098 - add 3 ? // ==a not layering the percussion, else the flow will be broken
00:20:183 (20183|1,20355|2,20526|2) - Ctrl + H ? // ok..

00:52:840 (52840|2) - delete // ;-; it has nice beat.. hue keep
00:53:183 - add 4 ? // ==a i see.. previously i put a note here, but removed.. heheh.. ^^; keep
00:55:926 - ^2 // keep

01:23:098 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2607111 ? (Like Hard Grilled Chicken) // ay, finally someone noticed this.. ok changed..=w=)b

01:46:412 - add 4 // keep, to make the ending more calm..
good luck >w</


aaa thanks.. xD
Rido
mod by rabbit's request
column: 1 2 3 4

wat
Burst!ng Fried Rice
- 00:05:869 (5869|2) - move to 00:05:955 - at 4
- 00:06:040 (6040|0) - move to 00:06:126 - at 1
- 00:08:526 (8526|1) - use 1/8 snap and move to yellow line after
- 00:10:369 - add one note at 4
- 00:10:583 - ^ at 2/3
- 00:21:898 (21898|2) - move to 2 and then 00:21:983 - add one note at 3. just suggestion
- 00:22:755 - add one note at 4
- 00:37:498 - ^ at 1
- 00:37:840 - ^ at 4
- 00:44:869 - add one note at 2? I think its have hi-hat sound
- 00:49:498 - ^ at 3, the reason is same :v :v :v
- 00:50:869 - add one note at 2 for cymbal
- 00:55:583 (55583|2) - move to 4, it's nice to put jack there imo
- 00:55:926 - add one note at 4
- 01:26:698 (86698|0) - move to 3? like as you did after 01:27:212 (87212|2,87298|1,87298|3,87383|0,87383|2) -
- 01:46:412 - add one note at 1

Noodles of Insanity
- 00:04:412 - add one note at 3
- 00:04:755 - ^
- 00:10:926 (10926|2) - move to the other place bcs it's have different pitch with the note before
- 00:35:612 (35612|3,35698|2,35698|0,35783|3) - change the pattern like as you did after 00:36:126 (36126|0,36126|2,36212|3,36298|2,36298|0) - and then ctrl + h
- 01:34:240 - add note at 3
- 01:38:698 (98698|1) - move to three due the pitch relevancy
- 01:38:698 (98698|1) - add note at 1

Hard "Grilled Chicken"
the LN at this diff seems to be insane imo :l
- 00:04:240 - add note at 2 (hi-hat sound)
- 00:06:298 - ^ at 1/2
- 00:14:183 (14183|2) - remove and then 00:14:269 - add note at 3/4
- 00:24:640 (24640|2,24640|1) - ctrl +h and then 00:24:983 (24983|3) - move to 1 and then 00:25:155 (25155|0) - move to 2
- 00:31:155 (31155|2) - change to 1/6 notes. you know what to do next :^)
- 01:25:069 (85069|3) - move to 2 and then 01:25:155 (85155|1) - move to 4 (to avoid shield 01:24:812 (84812|3,85069|3) - )

Intermediate "Saucy Meatball"
- 00:11:783 (11783|3) - remove, it's too hard for intermediate imo
- 00:15:383 (15383|0,15555|0) - move to 3
- 00:17:612 (17612|0) - move to 3
- 00:34:755 (34755|2,35269|3,35783|3,36298|3,36812|1) - remove to better pattern just suggestion
- 00:46:412 - y u didn't add note at this timing like you did before? add one note at 3/4
- 01:21:383 (81383|2) - move to 4?
- 01:21:555 (81555|3) - ^ to 3?
- 01:34:326 (94326|0) - remove, just suggestion

Normal "Asian Stir-Fried Seafood"
- 00:42:126 (42126|3,42298|2,42469|3,42469|1,42640|2) - it's too damn hard for normal, rearrange these pls, pattern is up to you
- 00:47:612 (47612|2,47783|1,47955|0,47955|3,48126|2,48126|0) - ^ these tho
- 00:55:498 (55498|0) - change to LN and then 00:55:669 (55669|2) - change to normal note
- 01:14:012 - add one note at 2
- 01:16:755 - ^ at 2 too
- 01:19:498 - ^ at 4
- 01:45:555 (105555|1) - this should end at this place 01:46:069 -
- 01:47:612 - add note at 2

Easy "Egg-roll"
- 00:43:669 (43669|3) - change to normal note imo
- 00:48:469 (48469|3,48640|2,49155|3) - ^
- 01:08:698 (68698|3) - remove
- 01:11:440 - add one note at 2
- 01:24:983 (84983|0) - remove like as you did before
- 01:27:726 (87726|1) - ^
- 01:30:469 (90469|3) - ^

Basic 'Bao'
I hadn't seen any serious problem in this diff
- 01:01:155 (61155|0,61498|0) - move to 3

hope these are helpfullll~ I'm tired to modding so many diff -,-
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

bakabakemono wrote:

mod by rabbit's request
column: 1 2 3 4

Burst!ng Fried Rice
- 00:05:869 (5869|2) - move to 00:05:955 - at 4 // eeh there's some sort of streamy sound this part.. keep
- 00:06:040 (6040|0) - move to 00:06:126 - at 1 // ^
- 00:08:526 (8526|1) - use 1/8 snap and move to yellow line after
- 00:10:369 - add one note at 4 // ==a no exact cue sound.. keep
- 00:10:583 - ^ at 2/3 // keep, for odd rhythm sake
- 00:21:898 (21898|2) - move to 2 and then 00:21:983 - add one note at 3. just suggestion // okkie.. keep
- 00:22:755 - add one note at 4 // keep, layering the synth only
- 00:37:498 - ^ at 1 // ;; ^ keep
- 00:37:840 - ^ at 4 // ;; ^ keep
- 00:44:869 - add one note at 2? I think its have hi-hat sound // ;w; keep, for odd rhythm sake
- 00:49:498 - ^ at 3, the reason is same :v :v :v // ^
- 00:50:869 - add one note at 2 for cymbal // ok
- 00:55:583 (55583|2) - move to 4, it's nice to put jack there imo // nice catch m8, thanks
- 00:55:926 - add one note at 4 // 1 sounds more accurate.. o.o
- 01:26:698 (86698|0) - move to 3? like as you did after 01:27:212 (87212|2,87298|1,87298|3,87383|0,87383|2) - // keep, alternating another fingers on same pattern (doesn't rely at PR at all)
- 01:46:412 - add one note at 1 // asdfg it's calm part, but well.. ==a everyone will point out this as endless problem if i still keep this.. :u

Noodles of Insanity
- 00:04:412 - add one note at 3
- 00:04:755 - ^ // added both
- 00:10:926 (10926|2) - move to the other place bcs it's have different pitch with the note before // doesn't rely to PR. it's on purpose.. keep
- 00:35:612 (35612|3,35698|2,35698|0,35783|3) - change the pattern like as you did after 00:36:126 (36126|0,36126|2,36212|3,36298|2,36298|0) - and then ctrl + h // ==a no change
- 01:34:240 - add note at 3 // keep
- 01:38:698 (98698|1) - move to three due the pitch relevancy // doesn't rely to PR. it's on purpose.. keep (2)
- 01:38:698 (98698|1) - add note at 1 // ==a keep

Hard "Grilled Chicken"
the LN at this diff seems to be insane imo :l // that's why i made Intermediate diff
- 00:04:240 - add note at 2 (hi-hat sound) // ==a i only layer the synth.. keep
- 00:06:298 - ^ at 1/2 // eeh keep ^
- 00:14:183 (14183|2) - remove and then 00:14:269 - add note at 3/4 // o.o doesn't really accurate (1/6 bsd), keep
- 00:24:640 (24640|2,24640|1) - ctrl +h and then 00:24:983 (24983|3) - move to 1 and then 00:25:155 (25155|0) - move to 2 // no changes.. ==a on purpose..
- 00:31:155 (31155|2) - change to 1/6 notes. you know what to do next :^) // asdfgh too many LNs to put 1/6.. keep
- 01:25:069 (85069|3) - move to 2 and then 01:25:155 (85155|1) - move to 4 (to avoid shield 01:24:812 (84812|3,85069|3) - ) // eeeh forgot to add another shield at 01:27:812 - ... *runs

Intermediate "Saucy Meatball"
- 00:11:783 (11783|3) - remove, it's too hard for intermediate imo
- 00:15:383 (15383|0,15555|0) - move to 3 // asem same hand.. D: keep
- 00:17:612 (17612|0) - move to 3 // keep
- 00:34:755 (34755|2,35269|3,35783|3,36298|3,36812|1) - remove to better pattern just suggestion // oookiie keep
- 00:46:412 - y u didn't add note at this timing like you did before? add one note at 3/4 // different phase yo, keep
- 01:21:383 (81383|2) - move to 4? // ok
- 01:21:555 (81555|3) - ^ to 3? // ==a keep? removed 1st note
- 01:34:326 (94326|0) - remove, just suggestion // supposed on 4th, keep

Normal "Asian Stir-Fried Seafood"
- 00:42:126 (42126|3,42298|2,42469|3,42469|1,42640|2) - it's too damn hard for normal, rearrange these pls, pattern is up to you
- 00:47:612 (47612|2,47783|1,47955|0,47955|3,48126|2,48126|0) - ^ these tho // ;w; keep both, im not diao thinking new pattern
- 00:55:498 (55498|0) - change to LN and then 00:55:669 (55669|2) - change to normal note // o_o you mean, LN? keep
- 01:14:012 - add one note at 2 // ==a keep, to make it different with 2nd chorus
- 01:16:755 - ^ at 2 too // keep ^
- 01:19:498 - ^ at 4 // keep ^
- 01:45:555 (105555|1) - this should end at this place 01:46:069 - // ok
- 01:47:612 - add note at 2 // ok

Easy "Egg-roll"
- 00:43:669 (43669|3) - change to normal note imo // ok
- 00:48:469 (48469|3,48640|2,49155|3) - ^ //ok
- 01:08:698 (68698|3) - remove // keep, strong beat
- 01:11:440 - add one note at 2 // o.o keep, only layer the percussion
- 01:24:983 (84983|0) - remove like as you did before // ok
- 01:27:726 (87726|1) - ^ // ok
- 01:30:469 (90469|3) - ^ // ok

Basic 'Bao'
I hadn't seen any serious problem in this diff
- 01:01:155 (61155|0,61498|0) - move to 3 // same hand is too hard.. keep[/box]

hope these are helpfullll~ I'm tired to modding so many diff -,-
omg sorry for making you checking too many diffs.. ><
thanks a lot BBM, no reply means <3
Rido
ah byk yg direject ._. perlu ningkatin kualitas modding nih ._.
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

bakabakemono wrote:

ah byk yg direject ._. perlu ningkatin kualitas modding nih ._.
mod yg di reject bukan berarti modnya jelek, gw kudu mikir berkali kali dulu, dan berat kalo ngereject setiap baris mod, apalagi semuanya beralesan.... ^^;
makasih banyak x3
Rido
kk got it unagi :3
Remillion Cross
Hai~~ <3
ini mod rada2 pointless jadi sorry kalau ga terlalu membantu xd

[Burst!ing Fried Rice]
*00:06:383 - disini masih ada lanjutan stream dari yang sebelumnya, tambah note di 3rd
(kalau mau patternnya dibagusin, 00:06:469 (6469|1) - tinggal tarik ke 1st karena kurang pas kalau jack disitu, dan pitchnya juga ga kedengaran sama antara itu sama yang diatasnya)
*00:08:612 (8612|3) - salah taruh note ya ? coba di 00:08:698 - soalnya di 00:14:355 - juga kayak gitu musik dan patternnya
*00:13:326 (13326|0) - taruh di 4th column, kayaknya lebih cocok akan ngikut sama aliran pitch dari pattern setelahnya
*00:29:098 - tambah satu note di sini (terserah column di mana)
*01:20:012 - tambah satu note di 3rd untuk beat
*01:31:755 (91755|0) - delete, karena notenya kurang mendukung
*01:36:469 - tambah satu note di 1st untuk beat
*01:23:440 - karena beatnya lebih deras (crash), tambah satu note di 1st
*01:45:555 (105555|0) - menurut aku lebih enak pas mainnya kalau ini taruh ke 3rd column

Suggestion
*00:03:212 (3212|1,3298|3,3383|0) - coba deh ikutin tatanan pattern kayak di 00:02:183 (2183|1,2183|3,2269|2,2355|1,2355|3) - bukan ikuti bentuk patternnya, cuma ikuti peletakannya seperti 1-2-1 atau 2-1-2.
(soalnya sama beat dan suaranya dengan yang itu)
*01:25:326 - http://puu.sh/f7WNT/0e40c155ee.jpg

[Noodles of Insanity]
*01:00:640 - tambah slider kecil di 2nd column
bzzz..

[Hard 'Grilled Chicken']
*00:21:126 (21126|2) - kusaranin delete aja ini note, kalau mau 00:21:040 (21040|0) - kamu bisa atur ini ke tempat/kolom lain biar dibuat jadi slider
*01:07:155 - tambah slider di 3rd, sampai di 01:07:326 - biar ga susah kecilkan aja slider 01:06:983 (66983|1) - sampai ke 01:07:155 -
*01:27:812 (87812|2) - pindahkan ini ke 4th column, lebih bagus
*01:23:440 - tambah 1 note di 4th column untuk crash/beat yang besar
*01:33:298 (93298|2) - menurutku ini kurang mendukung sama suara musiknya, jadi delete

[Intermediate 'Saucy Meatball']
*00:01:840 (1840|1,2012|2,2012|3) - ctrl+H, dan geser semua 1 column ke kanan
*00:02:355 (2355|2) - pindah ke 1st column

[Normal 'Asian Stir-Fried Seafood']
*00:17:269 (17269|2,17269|3) - kalau mau ngikutin pitch, geser 2 kolom ke kiri
*Dari 00:41:440 - ke 00:42:640 - cukup challenging sekaleh untuk normal diff o.o
*00:42:640 (42640|2) - pindah ke 4th column, biar ga rumit patternnya

[Easy 'Egg-roll']
*01:38:698 (98698|0) - slidernya harusnya berakhir di 01:39:555 -
*01:39:898 - habis itu, kamu tambah 1 atau 2 note di sini

[Basic 'Bao']
*00:36:983 (36983|2) - slider harusnya berakhir di 00:38:183 -
*01:17:612 - sampai 01:18:126 - kenapa ga buat kayak gini ? http://puu.sh/f81Ur/4008db8346.png biar patternnya ga monoton
*01:28:583 - sama kayak di atas

Good luck usageh ~!
Bakal banyak di reject semua nih wkwkw
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

Remillion Cross wrote:

Hai~~ <3
ini mod rada2 pointless jadi sorry kalau ga terlalu membantu xd

[Burst!ing Fried Rice]
*00:06:383 - disini masih ada lanjutan stream dari yang sebelumnya, tambah note di 3rd // keep, spacingnya enak.. :C
(kalau mau patternnya dibagusin, 00:06:469 (6469|1) - tinggal tarik ke 1st karena kurang pas kalau jack disitu, dan pitchnya juga ga kedengaran sama antara itu sama yang diatasnya) // sengaja di bikin spacing buat persiapan jack.. :C
*00:08:612 (8612|3) - salah taruh note ya ? coba di 00:08:698 - soalnya di 00:14:355 - juga kayak gitu musik dan patternnya // keep, sengaja nge emphasize suara synthesizer ketibang suara perkusinya.. try to make even an odd.. :U
*00:13:326 (13326|0) - taruh di 4th column, kayaknya lebih cocok akan ngikut sama aliran pitch dari pattern setelahnya // ok
*00:29:098 - tambah satu note di sini (terserah column di mana) // asdfgh lupa thanks!
*01:20:012 - tambah satu note di 3rd untuk beat // tadinya sih, cuma mau nge emphasize synthnya doang.. tapi yap, added
*01:31:755 (91755|0) - delete, karena notenya kurang mendukung // O.o ada suara disitu.. ;w; keep
*01:36:469 - tambah satu note di 1st untuk beat // keep.. try to make even an odd.. :U
*01:23:440 - karena beatnya lebih deras (crash), tambah satu note di 1st // ok.. :^)
*01:45:555 (105555|0) - menurut aku lebih enak pas mainnya kalau ini taruh ke 3rd column // keep, 01:45:383 (105383|0,105555|0) - same column to represent stronger sound..

Suggestion
*00:03:212 (3212|1,3298|3,3383|0) - coba deh ikutin tatanan pattern kayak di 00:02:183 (2183|1,2183|3,2269|2,2355|1,2355|3) - bukan ikuti bentuk patternnya, cuma ikuti peletakannya seperti 1-2-1 atau 2-1-2. // ok
(soalnya sama beat dan suaranya dengan yang itu)
*01:25:326 - http://puu.sh/f7WNT/0e40c155ee.jpg // ok

[Noodles of Insanity]
*01:00:640 - tambah slider kecil di 2nd column // ok.. :U
bzzz..

[Hard 'Grilled Chicken']
*00:21:126 (21126|2) - kusaranin delete aja ini note, kalau mau 00:21:040 (21040|0) - kamu bisa atur ini ke tempat/kolom lain biar dibuat jadi slider // removed, tanpa slider
*01:07:155 - tambah slider di 3rd, sampai di 01:07:326 - biar ga susah kecilkan aja slider 01:06:983 (66983|1) - sampai ke 01:07:155 - // keep, sengaja biar ada spacingnya
*01:27:812 (87812|2) - pindahkan ini ke 4th column, lebih bagus // keep, 01:25:069 (85069|3) - sengaja di samain sama ini.. :3
*01:23:440 - tambah 1 note di 4th column untuk crash/beat yang besar // ok
*01:33:298 (93298|2) - menurutku ini kurang mendukung sama suara musiknya, jadi delete // ok

[Intermediate 'Saucy Meatball']
*00:01:840 (1840|1,2012|2,2012|3) - ctrl+H, dan geser semua 1 column ke kanan
*00:02:355 (2355|2) - pindah ke 1st column // all done

[Normal 'Asian Stir-Fried Seafood']
*00:17:269 (17269|2,17269|3) - kalau mau ngikutin pitch, geser 2 kolom ke kiri // =w= keep, malah jadi reversed.. :U
*Dari 00:41:440 - ke 00:42:640 - cukup challenging sekaleh untuk normal diff o.o // ==a banyak yg bilang gitu.. keep
*00:42:640 (42640|2) - pindah ke 4th column, biar ga rumit patternnya // ;w; ok

[Easy 'Egg-roll']
*01:38:698 (98698|0) - slidernya harusnya berakhir di 01:39:555 - // ok
*01:39:898 - habis itu, kamu tambah 1 atau 2 note di sini // ok
// 00:10:926 (10926|1) - applied on this part too

[Basic 'Bao']
*00:36:983 (36983|2) - slider harusnya berakhir di 00:38:183 - // same thought.. ok
*01:17:612 - sampai 01:18:126 - kenapa ga buat kayak gini ? http://puu.sh/f81Ur/4008db8346.png biar patternnya ga monoton // basicnya ilang.. ;w; ok done
*01:28:583 - sama kayak di atas // all done

Good luck usageh ~!
Bakal banyak di reject semua nih wkwkw

:U cek lagi, yg di reject cuma gk seberapa.. *me slaps remi..

thanks buat full modsnya ya! diffnya nambah cantik :D
Gravey-
Hi MOD here as requested in Osu!mania PH Modding Team!~ >w<)/
[MOD]

Check AiMOD for:
-OD problem
-Snapped problems
Put kiai from 01:12:812 to 01:34:069
|1|2|3|4|
[Basic 'Bao']
00:05:955 (5955|2,6298|3) - Ctrl + G for better pattern and hand balance/relaxation. To avoid boring pattern?

00:16:926 (16926|1,17269|2) - Ctrl + G for better pattern and hand balance/relaxation. ^

00:23:269 (23269|1) - Move to |1| couz' of pattern as what you did in here 00:20:526 (20526|3,20698|0,21040|2,21383|0) - Notice it~

[Easy "Egg-roll"]
00:06:983 Add note to |4| for drumbeat - Hit-hat and for pattern + Impact

00:12:469 Add note to |3| ^

01:00:469 (60469|0,60469|2,60812|3,60812|1) - Ctrl + H for better pattern and hand balance

01:24:126 (84126|1) - Move to |1| then 01:24:469 (84469|0,84640|1) - Move to |2| - |3| couz' of your pattern just like the other from previous and for consistency

[Normal "Asian Stir-Fried Seafood"]
00:25:326 (25326|3) - Move to |3| since their sounds/instruments fits to be a ladder

01:02:183 (62183|1,62355|3,62355|0,62698|2,62869|3,62869|0) - Ctrl + H for better pattern

01:22:069 (82069|3,82240|1) - Make this only 1 LN in |4| because of your pattern just like from previous for example..... 01:15:898 (75898|3,76069|0,76240|1,76412|3,76583|2,76926|0) - At first 2 LN then the next is only 1 LN the others have the same so make this into one too

[Intermediate "Saucy Meatball"]
Nein!

[Hard "Grilled Chicken"]
00:03:298 (3298|0) - Move to |4| for pattern as you did in your pattern here 00:01:669 (1669|2,1755|3,1840|1) - and this.... 00:02:183 (2183|1,2269|2,2355|0) - If you notice they have the same pattern it just like it's been move so in here 00:02:698 (2698|0,2783|2,2869|1) - do this pattern for this too for consistency

00:48:640 (48640|2,48812|1) - Move to |4| - |3| for better pattern and hand relaxation

Nice map!~ LOL i suddenly feel hungry *Q*) Yum yum
Good luck!~ =w=)b
Vulkin
this for ranked inmediately :D
amazing map
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

[GraveChaos] wrote:

Hi MOD here as requested in Osu!mania PH Modding Team!~ >w<)/
[MOD]

Check AiMOD for:
-OD problem // ==a will keep as it is..
-Snapped problems // will check.. =w=)b
Put kiai from 01:12:812 to 01:34:069 // no kiai.. >:T

|1|2|3|4|

[Basic 'Bao']
00:05:955 (5955|2,6298|3) - Ctrl + G for better pattern and hand balance/relaxation. To avoid boring pattern? // ==a keep, hence, the opening part will be always boring in easier diff

00:16:926 (16926|1,17269|2) - Ctrl + G for better pattern and hand balance/relaxation. ^ // keep

00:23:269 (23269|1) - Move to |1| couz' of pattern as what you did in here 00:20:526 (20526|3,20698|0,21040|2,21383|0) - Notice it~ // o_o ok then

[Easy "Egg-roll"]
00:06:983 Add note to |4| for drumbeat - Hit-hat and for pattern + Impact // ==a, ok then

00:12:469 Add note to |3| ^ // ok, but i feel the easy diff become abit more harsh with those double notes.. i might revert this in one day

01:00:469 (60469|0,60469|2,60812|3,60812|1) - Ctrl + H for better pattern and hand balance // 2 to 3 and 3 to 2, ok

01:24:126 (84126|1) - Move to |1| then 01:24:469 (84469|0,84640|1) - Move to |2| - |3| couz' of your pattern just like the other from previous and for consistency // keep, instead, i repattern another thing to make it more consistent.. :3

[Normal "Asian Stir-Fried Seafood"]
00:25:326 (25326|3) - Move to |3| since their sounds/instruments fits to be a ladder // ok, become ladder

01:02:183 (62183|1,62355|3,62355|0,62698|2,62869|3,62869|0) - Ctrl + H for better pattern // =w=)b

01:22:069 (82069|3,82240|1) - Make this only 1 LN in |4| because of your pattern just like from previous for example..... 01:15:898 (75898|3,76069|0,76240|1,76412|3,76583|2,76926|0) - At first 2 LN then the next is only 1 LN the others have the same so make this into one too // disagree, too much relying consistency could leading with boring pattern.. keep

[Intermediate "Saucy Meatball"]
Nein! // nien

// continue later


[Hard "Grilled Chicken"]
00:03:298 (3298|0) - Move to |4| for pattern as you did in your pattern here 00:01:669 (1669|2,1755|3,1840|1) - and this.... 00:02:183 (2183|1,2269|2,2355|0) - If you notice they have the same pattern it just like it's been move so in here 00:02:698 (2698|0,2783|2,2869|1) - do this pattern for this too for consistency // ==a thanks for noticing this, everything more consistent now

00:48:640 (48640|2,48812|1) - Move to |4| - |3| for better pattern and hand relaxation // keep

Nice map!~ LOL i suddenly feel hungry *Q*) Yum yum
Good luck!~ =w=)b

replied.. =w=)b thanks GC

guitarlol wrote:

this for ranked inmediately :D
amazing map
^^; let's just hope so.. thanks guitar.. <3
REDYUMiKA

From StaR's HQ Modding Team


[General]
1. Timing Check :

2. Metadata Check :
  1. The diffs name hasn't been unified as an appropriate settings. ---> "" ,or '' ,or whatever
3. BG's data Check :
  1. There is no reason to restrict such a tasty food. :P
4. HP/OD FIX Check :
  1. Noodles of Insanity's HP 9.0 ---> 8.5
  2. Burst!ng Fried Rice's HP 10.0 ---> 9.0
5. Audio FIX Check :
  1. wav files : & mp3 file :
  2. soft-hitclap.wav has an ineffectual space over 1 second, please exchange it for this one.
  3. Why does your package have two audio files...?
[Basic "Bao"]
00:05:955 (5955|2,6298|3) - Ctrl+J for the strings pitch.

00:26:183 (26183|0) - move to 2 for the next mod.

00:26:526 (26526|1,26869|2) - extend the strings pitch width for the latter notes.
  1. 00:26:526 (26526|1) - move to 4, take a maximum width for the sound of 00:26:869 -
  2. 00:26:869 (26869|2) - move to 1, add a sound relevance to 00:27:383 (27383|0) - as the lower's pitch.
00:28:412 (28412|2) - move to 4 to take a hand balance for the next part which has a shape of "112233" notes.

00:50:355 - add a note to 2 so that you make this pattern have a shape of soft-jack as the same of kick sounds.

01:22:412 (82412|1) - move to 3, take a relevance to 01:22:926 (82926|2) - just focus on the drum accent.

01:25:498 (85498|1,85840|0,86183|1) - I'm not sure whether the note placement of "212" is best for the string rolls.
How is the rearrangement of note placement to make them have a simple stair for that sounds?
  1. 01:25:498 (85498|1) - move to 1
  2. 01:25:840 (85840|0) - move to 2
  3. 01:26:183 (86183|1) - move to 3
[Easy "Egg-roll"]
*I think the pattern of having a stair is preferable rather than setting notes on the same column.
00:32:355 (32355|2) - move to 2

00:33:726 (33726|1) - move to 3 for the same reason as the above.

00:38:355 (38355|0) - being a weak for the drum accent, and have a bit weird pitch.
So if taking the below mods, I think it will be really good for the afterpart of 00:38:698 -
  1. 00:38:183 - add a note to 1 for the accent.
  2. 00:38:355 (38355|0) - move to 3, take a relevance of drum to 00:36:983 (36983|2) -
[Normal "Asian Stir-Fried Seafood"]
It's almost good for me.

00:01:498 - add a note to 1 for this kick sound.

00:06:298 (6298|3) - I don't think to good for 00:06:640 (6640|3) - is set to the same column.
  1. How is this rearrangement? ---> (e.g.1)
00:26:183 (26183|1) - move to 1, take a same balance to the part of 00:20:698 -

00:49:326 (49326|1) - move to 3, please avoid to have a pattern of closer to soft-jack.

01:06:640 - add a note to 2 as double-notes for the heavy drum + the snares.

[Intermediate "Saucy Meatball"]
00:17:526 (17526|1) - move to 3, recommend to fix the existing hand balance.

00:44:783 (44783|1,44955|2) - being stair is a bit complex for that obscure beats.
  1. 00:44:783 (44783|1) - move to 00:44:698 -
  2. 00:44:955 (44955|2) - move to 00:44:869 -
*furthermore, I also suggest you rearrange about next part. ---> (e.g.2)

00:47:783 (47783|2) - I guess you intended to add a snare's accent, but looks.. just isolated one for me.
I would focus on the strings sound also have an impact for the latter part if I were you, so..
  1. 00:47:869 - add a note to 1
01:13:583 (73583|3,73840|2,74012|1) - The pitch width for each note is too extended, move them to one left side. ・・・(*1)

01:16:326 - add a note to 2 for a relevance of strings sound.

01:26:783 (86783|0) - move to 2 for the same reason of (*1)

[Hard "Grilled Chicken"]
00:13:240 (13240|2) - This note doesn't smell "sounds tasty", so not good for a connection with the next LN.
just change to the hold note which have the end point to 00:13:326 - How's this way?

00:31:240 - add a note to 4, it would be suitable to push them in this rhythm.

00:44:183 - ~ 00:45:383 - please, just the same point as your meatball.

Something the balance among the Hard ~ Insanity is too far especially main part combined with several LNs, SD is just nothing more than the value which is generated from the system automatically, so have to consider the real balance. (e.g.3) - Just was set to the strings rhythm but I think these indicated objects and some LNs closer to them aren't realistic to be a proper chart for all the practicing players, so recommended to change them to normal notes.

01:19:840 - ~ 01:20:698 - a little weird rhythm for me, how's it? ---> (e.g.4)

["Noodles" of Insanity]
00:03:383 (3383|3) - shorten it to the point of 00:03:469 - will go into the quiet section.

00:06:298 (6298|2,6298|3) - exchange the place of them for the hand balance.

00:08:012 (8012|1,8183|1) - highly recommended to take a strings pitch. ---> (e.g.5)

00:14:526 (14526|0,14955|0) - The note balance which is assigned to some LNs for the strings is just gone. ---> (e.g.6)

00:33:040 (33040|3) - Please keeping a rhythm of the latter strings, extend to the point of 00:33:383 -
furthermore I recommend you change 00:32:869 (32869|1,32955|2) - to normal notes if thinking as good stuff.

00:44:698 - ~ 00:45:040 - I don't agree to set them by 1/4 in the case of comparing with 00:45:040 ~ ---> (e.g.7)

01:00:126 (60126|2,60212|0) - make no sense being it, or rather maybe good thing to move either one to 01:00:298 -
moreover I feel so 01:00:469 (60469|3,60812|1) - have been assigned a different meaning for each sound. ---> (e.g.8)

01:13:155 (73155|3,73669|1) - not realistic for the sounds, also I could say about the other part have a similar placement.
  1. 01:13:155 (73155|3) - shorten to 01:13:240 -
  2. 01:13:669 (73669|1) - shorten to 01:13:755 -
01:31:326 (91326|3) - remove it, Let's focus on only this strings stream.

[Burst!ng "Fried Rice"]
00:11:269 - ~ 00:12:126 - Your expression is really good, but wanna add more accent on that additionally. (*2) ---> (e.g.9)

00:17:526 (17526|3,17612|3) - Is jack-hammer really suitable for this part? How's the moving 00:17:526 (17526|3) - to column 1

00:21:555 (21555|0,21640|2,21726|1) - Just being a weak sound to beat them.
  1. 00:21:640 (21640|2) - move to 2
  2. 00:21:726 (21726|1) - move to 3 & 00:21:726 - add a note to 4
00:22:069 (22069|1,22155|0) - remove them if you just consider about the above mod's content.

01:17:783 (77783|3,77869|3) - & 01:18:040 (78040|0,78126|0) - To make it have a double-stair maybe good thing for this part.
  1. 01:17:783 (77783|3) - move to 3
  2. 01:18:040 (78040|0) - move to 2
01:33:383 (93383|3,93383|1,93469|0) - remove so that they don't interfere with the good accent of 01:33:212 -

01:39:555 - the same part as (*2)

All done, Good Luck. ;)

《DOUBLED》

*Mods Quality Feedback*

Overview
Since the start of the activity I have mostly received a comment to own mod though, I feel sometimes feedback is a little insufficient between the mapper and modder when I think one's comment over again. mod should be the stuff that is always recognized as a simple reference, or a just suggestion toward the mapper, no matter what it hurt you with kinda aggressive phrase. however we have to know one's honest thoughts about the processed mods for example what did you get, or how did you receive.
Don't hold me back. I'm not gonna get a false evaluation. Strict opinion will make me more strong.
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★☆☆☆☆3. was I able to satisfy you with the existing contents?
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Topic Starter
Arzenvald

REDYUMiKA wrote:

From StaR's HQ Modding Team


[General]
1. Timing Check :

2. Metadata Check :
  1. The diffs name hasn't been unified as an appropriate settings. ---> "" ,or '' ,or whatever
    // asdf ok changed.. ;w; sorry yumi.. hue
3. BG's data Check :
  1. There is no reason to restrict such a tasty food. :P
4. HP/OD FIX Check :
  1. Noodles of Insanity's HP 9.0 ---> 8.5
  2. Burst!ng Fried Rice's HP 10.0 ---> 9.0
    // no change, the spread is 7 diffs, and i think it's fair to put hp 10.. :^)
5. Audio FIX Check :
  1. wav files : & mp3 file :
  2. soft-hitclap.wav has an ineffectual space over 1 second, please exchange it for this one.
  3. Why does your package have two audio files...?

    // thanks for the clap, and about the audio, i forgot to remove.. orz.. thanks for noticing this
[Basic "Bao"]
00:05:955 (5955|2,6298|3) - Ctrl+J for the strings pitch. // o_o reversed one? keep

00:26:183 (26183|0) - move to 2 for the next mod.

00:26:526 (26526|1,26869|2) - extend the strings pitch width for the latter notes.
  1. 00:26:526 (26526|1) - move to 4, take a maximum width for the sound of 00:26:869 -
  2. 00:26:869 (26869|2) - move to 1, add a sound relevance to 00:27:383 (27383|0) - as the lower's pitch.
// ok

00:28:412 (28412|2) - move to 4 to take a hand balance for the next part which has a shape of "112233" notes. // ok

00:50:355 - add a note to 2 so that you make this pattern have a shape of soft-jack as the same of kick sounds. // ==a not friendly for basic, but reasonable.. added on 1

01:22:412 (82412|1) - move to 3, take a relevance to 01:22:926 (82926|2) - just focus on the drum accent. // ==a idk, i prefer to keep

01:25:498 (85498|1,85840|0,86183|1) - I'm not sure whether the note placement of "212" is best for the string rolls.
How is the rearrangement of note placement to make them have a simple stair for that sounds?
  1. 01:25:498 (85498|1) - move to 1
  2. 01:25:840 (85840|0) - move to 2
  3. 01:26:183 (86183|1) - move to 3
// got another idea, i make it 4 2 4 2.. =w=)b

[Easy "Egg-roll"]
*I think the pattern of having a stair is preferable rather than setting notes on the same column. // gotta consider this..
00:32:355 (32355|2) - move to 2

00:33:726 (33726|1) - move to 3 for the same reason as the above. // keep both

00:38:355 (38355|0) - being a weak for the drum accent, and have a bit weird pitch.
So if taking the below mods, I think it will be really good for the afterpart of 00:38:698 -
  1. 00:38:183 - add a note to 1 for the accent.
  2. 00:38:355 (38355|0) - move to 3, take a relevance of drum to 00:36:983 (36983|2) -
// ^^; added 00:38:183 - on 3rd

[Normal "Asian Stir-Fried Seafood"]
It's almost good for me.

00:01:498 - add a note to 1 for this kick sound. // o_o no triple.. keep

00:06:298 (6298|3) - I don't think to good for 00:06:640 (6640|3) - is set to the same column.
  1. How is this rearrangement? ---> (e.g.1)
// to emphasize the strong 'wah' sound, i put them at same column.. trying even an odd.. keep

00:26:183 (26183|1) - move to 1, take a same balance to the part of 00:20:698 - // ok

00:49:326 (49326|1) - move to 3, please avoid to have a pattern of closer to soft-jack. // shield? keep

01:06:640 - add a note to 2 as double-notes for the heavy drum + the snares. // ok

[Intermediate "Saucy Meatball"]
00:17:526 (17526|1) - move to 3, recommend to fix the existing hand balance. // ok

00:44:783 (44783|1,44955|2) - being stair is a bit complex for that obscure beats.
  1. 00:44:783 (44783|1) - move to 00:44:698 -
  2. 00:44:955 (44955|2) - move to 00:44:869 -


// ok

*furthermore, I also suggest you rearrange about next part. ---> (e.g.2)

00:47:783 (47783|2) - I guess you intended to add a snare's accent, but looks.. just isolated one for me.
I would focus on the strings sound also have an impact for the latter part if I were you, so..
  1. 00:47:869 - add a note to 1
// ==a it's for hi-hat sound, well it's isolated indeed, but it has nice rhythm & transition.. so keep

01:13:583 (73583|3,73840|2,74012|1) - The pitch width for each note is too extended, move them to one left side. ・・・(*1) // ==a arranged abit

01:16:326 - add a note to 2 for a relevance of strings sound. // ;w; forgot to add.. thanks for noticing this.. added

01:26:783 (86783|0) - move to 2 for the same reason of (*1) // ok

[Hard "Grilled Chicken"]
00:13:240 (13240|2) - This note doesn't smell "sounds tasty", so not good for a connection with the next LN.
just change to the hold note which have the end point to 00:13:326 - How's this way? // =w=)b ok

00:31:240 - add a note to 4, it would be suitable to push them in this rhythm. // .. i added 1/6 synth instead

00:44:183 - ~ 00:45:383 - please, just the same point as your meatball. // ok

Something the balance among the Hard ~ Insanity is too far especially main part combined with several LNs, SD is just nothing more than the value which is generated from the system automatically, so have to consider the real balance. (e.g.3) - Just was set to the strings rhythm but I think these indicated objects and some LNs closer to them aren't realistic to be a proper chart for all the practicing players, so recommended to change them to normal notes. // ==a i think i already did on Intermediate, and Hard meant to be Hard this time.. so i think i will keep this..

01:19:840 - ~ 01:20:698 - a little weird rhythm for me, how's it? ---> (e.g.4) // referring to 4K insanity, keep

["Noodles" of Insanity]
00:03:383 (3383|3) - shorten it to the point of 00:03:469 - will go into the quiet section. // ok

00:06:298 (6298|2,6298|3) - exchange the place of them for the hand balance. // :^) keep

00:08:012 (8012|1,8183|1) - highly recommended to take a strings pitch. ---> (e.g.5) // keep, even it's rong in technical aspect, it's just ok to play physically.. tl;dr, i trying to even an odd.. ^^;

00:14:526 (14526|0,14955|0) - The note balance which is assigned to some LNs for the strings is just gone. ---> (e.g.6) // ==a rearranged instead

00:33:040 (33040|3) - Please keeping a rhythm of the latter strings, extend to the point of 00:33:383 -
furthermore I recommend you change 00:32:869 (32869|1,32955|2) - to normal notes if thinking as good stuff. // keep ==a to make the LN has same length

00:44:698 - ~ 00:45:040 - I don't agree to set them by 1/4 in the case of comparing with 00:45:040 ~ ---> (e.g.7) // re-arranged

01:00:126 (60126|2,60212|0) - make no sense being it, or rather maybe good thing to move either one to 01:00:298 -
moreover I feel so 01:00:469 (60469|3,60812|1) - have been assigned a different meaning for each sound. ---> (e.g.8) // no changes, i prefer this way..

01:13:155 (73155|3,73669|1) - not realistic for the sounds, also I could say about the other part have a similar placement.
  1. 01:13:155 (73155|3) - shorten to 01:13:240 -
  2. 01:13:669 (73669|1) - shorten to 01:13:755 -
// 01:13:155 (73155|3,73326|2,73669|1,73840|0) - ==a idk whether it's wrong to refer 7K LNs, i just apply the pattern from it.. keep

01:31:326 (91326|3) - remove it, Let's focus on only this strings stream. // ;w; 01:30:983 (90983|0) - consider to remove later

// continue later..


[Burst!ng "Fried Rice"]
00:11:269 - ~ 00:12:126 - Your expression is really good, but wanna add more accent on that additionally. (*2) ---> (e.g.9) // ==a i trying to keep this 00:11:783 (11783|1,11955|1,11955|2,12126|3,12126|1,12126|2) - (1 2 3) pattern.. ^^; keep

00:17:526 (17526|3,17612|3) - Is jack-hammer really suitable for this part? How's the moving 00:17:526 (17526|3) - to column 1 // ==a same snare, keep

00:21:555 (21555|0,21640|2,21726|1) - Just being a weak sound to beat them.
  1. 00:21:640 (21640|2) - move to 2
  2. 00:21:726 (21726|1) - move to 3 & 00:21:726 - add a note to 4
// got the idea, applied


00:22:069 (22069|1,22155|0) - remove them if you just consider about the above mod's content. // ==a there's an exact synth.. :c keep

01:17:783 (77783|3,77869|3) - & 01:18:040 (78040|0,78126|0) - To make it have a double-stair maybe good thing for this part.
  1. 01:17:783 (77783|3) - move to 3
  2. 01:18:040 (78040|0) - move to 2
// ==a the laser beam sound kinda catchy with the jack, so keep

01:33:383 (93383|3,93383|1,93469|0) - remove so that they don't interfere with the good accent of 01:33:212 - // ==a keep, there's an exact synth..

01:39:555 - the same part as (*2) // ^^; keep tho

All done, Good Luck. ;)

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*Mods Quality Feedback*

Overview
Since the start of the activity I have mostly received a comment to own mod though, I feel sometimes feedback is a little insufficient between the mapper and modder when I think one's comment over again. mod should be the stuff that is always recognized as a simple reference, or a just suggestion toward the mapper, no matter what it hurt you with kinda aggressive phrase. however we have to know one's honest thoughts about the processed mods for example what did you get, or how did you receive.
Don't hold me back. I'm not gonna get a false evaluation. Strict opinion will make me more strong.
Note : ★☆☆☆☆ < (Low) < (High) < ★★★★★

1. how many useful tips did you get from my mod?
[list:1337]★★★★★
2. were you able to understand the mod's meaning or intention easily?
★★★☆☆3. was I able to satisfy you with the existing contents?
★★★★★4. what do you have a concern about your chart now?
well.. i feeling glad that most of mods pointing what i should do earlier.. and i feel it's more perfect now ^^;5. do you have a point which need the check further?
erm, it's gonna be handy (for me) if you point out something more 'summarized' per section / phase with huger range instead per spot only, it helps me to re-map whole thing that might be 'not really good' in your pov.... well for me, idk for the other..

i think overall i feel my map is become more prepared for ranking..
・Information
I will change these questions depending on the situation, and surely feedback them for you guys.
~ Since 2014,12,14 ~
omg thanks for the huge mod yumi.. <3
REDYUMiKA

ExUsagi wrote:

REDYUMiKA wrote:

2. Metadata Check :
  1. The diffs name hasn't been unified as an appropriate settings. ---> "" ,or '' ,or whatever
    // https://osu.ppy.sh/s/156937 refers to my previously ranked map, the diff name is ok i think... no change
You have misunderstood about my intention, regarding the diffs name itself I didn't mention.
I mean what they are randomly quoted by a different mark or nothing is just important factor,

as one of example for Basic 'Bao' is obviously bracketed by the mark of apostrophe,
meanwhile Burst!ng Fried Rice has nothing mark which make this name surround by a something.

That's all for me, Good Luck again. :oops:
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

REDYUMiKA wrote:

You have misunderstood about my intention, regarding the diffs name itself I didn't mention.
I mean what they are randomly quoted by a different mark or nothing is just important factor,

as one of example for Basic 'Bao' is obviously bracketed by the mark of apostrophe,
meanwhile Burst!ng Fried Rice has nothing mark which make this name surround by a something.

That's all for me, Good Luck again. :oops:

asddf sorry i don't catch what you are trying to tell to me.. >< im so baka

i will change the diff name, thanks for noticing this.. ><
Topic Starter
Arzenvald
do last update, removing the experimental taiko diff.. xP
Rido
don't forget to change your difficulty names. Noodles of Insanity = "Noodles" of Insanity and Burst!ng Fried Rice = Burst!ng "Fried Rice"
Topic Starter
Arzenvald
rename means > create as new diff > update > forum glitch shows all new diff as EZ > i dead...
will consider to change later.. thanks bbm
Rido
blame peppy /me slapped
Topic Starter
Arzenvald
UPDATEEEED GRRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRGGHH!

next mod please.. :3
schwarzvgrune
i don't know why a BN even requested a mod from my queue but...
sorry if it didn't help


general
suggestions given for
hand balancing - note relevancy.

1 2 3 4

Baozi
SPOILER
00:25:840 (25840|3,26012|2,26183|1) - drag 1x to the left? become 1 2 3

00:46:069 (46069|1,46583|2,47098|2) - ctrl H? and the 1st note move to 4? so the way to press it becomes left hand right hand, left hand right hand, a good way for beginner to learn?
a lot of your pattern follows a streaming line? why not make it more varied?

01:26:526 -


egg roll
SPOILER
no issue found

stir-fried seafood
SPOILER
00:26:869 (26869|2) - move to 2?

00:46:069 (46069|3,46412|2) - exchange them to 3 4? the pitch rise here,



01:01:155 (61155|1,61326|2) - move to 3 and 4? the pitch is medium - high - low (LN is the lowest)

saucy meatball

SPOILER
no issue


fried rice

SPOILER
00:09:898 (9898|1,9983|2,10069|3,10069|0) - you're following that BG sound,
but why not here
00:10:669 (10669|0,10755|3,10755|1) -

00:55:498 (55498|3,55583|3,55669|1,55669|0,55840|3,55840|2,55926|0,56012|1,56012|0) -
the pitch for the beat, is not consistent? why dont you follow the earlier pattern?
if you follow the pitch it should be like (IGNORE THE PLACEMENT) you know where to place if you decide to implement that

you follow that accurately for the rest of the song, here for example
01:00:640 (60640|0,60726|2,60726|0,60812|3,60812|1,60983|2,61069|2,61155|0,61155|1) -

01:19:498 (79498|2,79583|3,79669|1,79669|2) - pitch is different with 01:18:983 (78983|2,79069|3,79155|1,79155|2) -
consider adjusting?

01:12:983 (72983|2,73069|2,73155|1,73155|3,73326|0,73326|2,73498|1,73583|1,73669|0,73669|2) -
pitch is different why do you stack those 2 1/4 SN?
01:15:726 (75726|0,75812|0,75898|1,75898|2,76069|3,76069|0,76240|3,76326|3,76412|1,76412|2) - ^ also the same
ignore this if you follow the beat. its correct if you follow the beat. but its very faint in the background, and
your part here01:19:498 (79498|2,79583|3,79669|1,79669|2) - pitch is different with 01:18:983 (78983|2,79069|3,79155|1,79155|2) -
consider adjusting? << suggest that you're following the melody ?? maybe you can pick one for the rest of the phase just for consistency?

that's all, sorry if it's not helpful

also, if you do the chinese restaurant, why not the china dress >_<
i love china dress from meme... make it pls
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

schwarzvgrune wrote:

i don't know why a BN even requested a mod from my queue but...
sorry if it didn't help // xD don't worry, i appreciate all mods i've got, and btw i still regular mappers & players afterall..


general
suggestions given for
hand balancing - note relevancy.

1 2 3 4

Baozi // hmm.. i will consider to rename to Basic "Baozi"

SPOILER
00:25:840 (25840|3,26012|2,26183|1) - drag 1x to the left? become 1 2 3 // ok

00:46:069 (46069|1,46583|2,47098|2) - ctrl H? and the 1st note move to 4? so the way to press it becomes left hand right hand, left hand right hand, a good way for beginner to learn? // nice catch.. ok
a lot of your pattern follows a streaming line? why not make it more varied? // for Basic sake.. =~=)a

01:26:526 -

// ok, abit flipped but i catch your idea.. :3


egg roll
SPOILER
no issue found

stir-fried seafood
SPOILER
00:26:869 (26869|2) - move to 2? // 00:26:183 (26183|2,26526|2,26869|2,27212|2) - for this, keep

00:46:069 (46069|3,46412|2) - exchange them to 3 4? the pitch rise here,

// ok

01:01:155 (61155|1,61326|2) - move to 3 and 4? the pitch is medium - high - low (LN is the lowest)
// the LN moved to 1.. :3 ok

saucy meatball

SPOILER
no issue


fried rice

SPOILER
00:09:898 (9898|1,9983|2,10069|3,10069|0) - you're following that BG sound,
but why not here
00:10:669 (10669|0,10755|3,10755|1) - // i want to make a variation rhythm, that focused at vary instrument..

00:55:498 (55498|3,55583|3,55669|1,55669|0,55840|3,55840|2,55926|0,56012|1,56012|0) -
the pitch for the beat, is not consistent? why dont you follow the earlier pattern?
if you follow the pitch it should be like (IGNORE THE PLACEMENT) you know where to place if you decide to implement that // ^^; yes, thanks for noticing.. fixed

you follow that accurately for the rest of the song, here for example
01:00:640 (60640|0,60726|2,60726|0,60812|3,60812|1,60983|2,61069|2,61155|0,61155|1) -

01:19:498 (79498|2,79583|3,79669|1,79669|2) - pitch is different with 01:18:983 (78983|2,79069|3,79155|1,79155|2) -
consider adjusting? // ok

01:12:983 (72983|2,73069|2,73155|1,73155|3,73326|0,73326|2,73498|1,73583|1,73669|0,73669|2) -
pitch is different why do you stack those 2 1/4 SN? // considering this is the hardest diff in this mapset, and i don't really follow PR at all (without breaking the feel of the music), i just trying to make even something odd.. :3

01:15:726 (75726|0,75812|0,75898|1,75898|2,76069|3,76069|0,76240|3,76326|3,76412|1,76412|2) - ^ also the same
ignore this if you follow the beat. its correct if you follow the beat. but its very faint in the background, and
your part here01:19:498 (79498|2,79583|3,79669|1,79669|2) - pitch is different with 01:18:983 (78983|2,79069|3,79155|1,79155|2) -
consider adjusting? << suggest that you're following the melody ?? maybe you can pick one for the rest of the phase just for consistency?
// disagree, i using Inverted / Reversed PR.. no changes, but i will consider to change later.. thanks for noticing :3

that's all, sorry if it's not helpful

also, if you do the chinese restaurant, why not the china dress >_<
i love china dress from meme... make it pls
xD geez, thanks for the mod, it's really helpful dude, so next time if you have a time, i might need your help again.. :3
schwarzvgrune

ExUsagi wrote:

schwarzvgrune wrote:

i don't know why a BN even requested a mod from my queue but...
sorry if it didn't help // xD don't worry, i appreciate all mods i've got, and btw i still regular mappers & players afterall..


general
suggestions given for
hand balancing - note relevancy.

1 2 3 4

Baozi // hmm.. i will consider to rename to Basic "Baozi"

for a stand alone word in chinese we rarely use 1 character / syllable. its something minor o.o (linguistically we prefer 2 / 4 or any even numbers of a set of characters)
包 = yes its 'bun' but when we refer to the 'bun' itself we use 包子 instead of 包.



SPOILER
00:25:840 (25840|3,26012|2,26183|1) - drag 1x to the left? become 1 2 3 // ok

00:46:069 (46069|1,46583|2,47098|2) - ctrl H? and the 1st note move to 4? so the way to press it becomes left hand right hand, left hand right hand, a good way for beginner to learn? // nice catch.. ok
a lot of your pattern follows a streaming line? why not make it more varied? // for Basic sake.. =~=)a

01:26:526 -

// ok, abit flipped but i catch your idea.. :3


egg roll
SPOILER
no issue found

stir-fried seafood
SPOILER
00:26:869 (26869|2) - move to 2? // 00:26:183 (26183|2,26526|2,26869|2,27212|2) - for this, keep

00:46:069 (46069|3,46412|2) - exchange them to 3 4? the pitch rise here,

// ok

01:01:155 (61155|1,61326|2) - move to 3 and 4? the pitch is medium - high - low (LN is the lowest)
// the LN moved to 1.. :3 ok

saucy meatball

SPOILER
no issue


fried rice

SPOILER
00:09:898 (9898|1,9983|2,10069|3,10069|0) - you're following that BG sound,
but why not here
00:10:669 (10669|0,10755|3,10755|1) - // i want to make a variation rhythm, that focused at vary instrument..

00:55:498 (55498|3,55583|3,55669|1,55669|0,55840|3,55840|2,55926|0,56012|1,56012|0) -
the pitch for the beat, is not consistent? why dont you follow the earlier pattern?
if you follow the pitch it should be like (IGNORE THE PLACEMENT) you know where to place if you decide to implement that // ^^; yes, thanks for noticing.. fixed

you follow that accurately for the rest of the song, here for example
01:00:640 (60640|0,60726|2,60726|0,60812|3,60812|1,60983|2,61069|2,61155|0,61155|1) -

01:19:498 (79498|2,79583|3,79669|1,79669|2) - pitch is different with 01:18:983 (78983|2,79069|3,79155|1,79155|2) -
consider adjusting? // ok

01:12:983 (72983|2,73069|2,73155|1,73155|3,73326|0,73326|2,73498|1,73583|1,73669|0,73669|2) -
pitch is different why do you stack those 2 1/4 SN? // considering this is the hardest diff in this mapset, and i don't really follow PR at all (without breaking the feel of the music), i just trying to make even something odd.. :3

01:15:726 (75726|0,75812|0,75898|1,75898|2,76069|3,76069|0,76240|3,76326|3,76412|1,76412|2) - ^ also the same
ignore this if you follow the beat. its correct if you follow the beat. but its very faint in the background, and
your part here01:19:498 (79498|2,79583|3,79669|1,79669|2) - pitch is different with 01:18:983 (78983|2,79069|3,79155|1,79155|2) -
consider adjusting? << suggest that you're following the melody ?? maybe you can pick one for the rest of the phase just for consistency?
// disagree, i using Inverted / Reversed PR.. no changes, but i will consider to change later.. thanks for noticing :3

that's all, sorry if it's not helpful

also, if you do the chinese restaurant, why not the china dress >_<
i love china dress from meme... make it pls
xD geez, thanks for the mod, it's really helpful dude, so next time if you have a time, i might need your help again.. :3
OMG a BN implemented even 5% of my mod i'm already happy >_<
yes i'll be waiting for your request.
no rules, no limitations whatsoever for BN to request from my queue (i find it helpful to learn when i'm modding a BN's map for its guaranteed that a BN will always fully reply to my mod)
Gravey-
[MOD Check]

Basic "Bao" and Easy "Egg-roll" OD = 7 while HP DR = 7. Since as stated in AiMOD and as i can see in these diffs..
Normal "Asian Stir-Fried Seafood" OD = 7.5 HP DR = 7
"Noodles" of Insanity OD = 8.5 HP DR = 8
Burst!ng "Fried Rice" OD = 8.5 HP DR = 8.5

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Overall Difficulty should be:
9-10 when using mainly notes and just a few amount of holds
7-8 when using a mix a balanced notes and holds
5-6 when using mostly holds
Check AiMOD for snapped problems in Easy "Egg-roll"
Epilepsy warning in Normal "Asian Stir-Fried Seafood"
As for i MOD the diffs i'll prioritize on patterns
|1|2|3|4|
[Basic "Bao"]
00:05:955 (5955|2,6298|3) - Ctrl + G for better pattern and hand balance/relaxation. In this way of pattern it gives more relaxation to the hand and since this is an easy diff. Newbies will feel more relax. in addition when you hear it's rhythm it sounds like entering/centering .

00:28:926 (28926|0,29269|0,29612|1,29955|1,30298|2,30640|2) - As for my opinion in here this shouldn't be stacked it's because as i hear it closely/clearly their beats isn't the same to be stacked. So just ignore this if not necessary or you've followed something or if necessary change pattern.

00:47:955 (47955|3,48126|2) - Move to |1| - |3| for better pattern. 00:47:440 (47440|3,47955|3) - Notice this first before applying this as you can hear in this 2 notes their sounds/beats/rhythm isn't the same so it's necessary to be like this (The one i suggested). Move it to |1|- |2| makes the pattern balance.

[Easy "Egg-roll"]
01:25:155 (85155|3) - Move to |2| for pattern since this 01:24:812 and 01:25:155 don't have the same sound/beat/rhythm. In addition this makes it consistent notice this column 01:24:126 (84126|1,84640|1) - same pattern as before/previous patterns

[Normal "Asian Stir-Fried Seafood"]
00:02:355 (2355|0) - Move to |2|? or do you actually intended to make that pattern? Couz' it's OP in there //slapped

00:50:355 (50355|3) - Move to |3| it's better in here couz' the sound/beat/rhythm in here is like right left right/outside inside outside rhythmic pattern

01:45:555 (105555|1) - Move to |3| for more balance pattern and hand balance/relaxation pattern. In addition not necessary to be stack with the SN couz' the pitch/rhythm/beat change.

[Intermediate "Saucy Meatball"]
Nein!

[Hard "Grilled Chicken"]
Nein!

["Noodles" of Insanity]
01:03:898 Add SN in |1| this is necessary because of the beat here is louder than 01:04:069 <Remove SNs and as your pattern

[Burst!ng "Fried Rice"]
Nein!

As for the next MODDER or BN who'll check this. Pls give higher priority in "Noodles" of Insanity and Burst!ng "Fried Rice" (Last 2 diffs)
Slap me for i failed as a BN TwT
Nice map!~
Good luck hope i'll get rank soon!~ =w=)b
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

[GraveChaos] wrote:

[MOD Check]

Basic "Bao" and Easy "Egg-roll" OD = 7 while HP DR = 7. Since as stated in AiMOD and as i can see in these diffs..
Normal "Asian Stir-Fried Seafood" OD = 7.5 HP DR = 7
"Noodles" of Insanity OD = 8.5 HP DR = 8
Burst!ng "Fried Rice" OD = 8.5 HP DR = 8.5

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Overall Difficulty should be:
9-10 when using mainly notes and just a few amount of holds
7-8 when using a mix a balanced notes and holds
5-6 when using mostly holds
Check AiMOD for snapped problems in Easy "Egg-roll"
Epilepsy warning in Normal "Asian Stir-Fried Seafood"
As for i MOD the diffs i'll prioritize on patterns

// responding about the OD & HP, I prefer to starts the Basic diff with 6 & 6, since it's targeted for 'Basic' players.. hence, Basic though..
// well, since i made full spread diff with calculated diff curve / gap, i think i set everything 'as it is' (according to the diff name..)
|1|2|3|4|
[Basic "Bao"]
00:05:955 (5955|2,6298|3) - Ctrl + G for better pattern and hand balance/relaxation. In this way of pattern it gives more relaxation to the hand and since this is an easy diff. Newbies will feel more relax. in addition when you hear it's rhythm it sounds like entering/centering . // keep, le PR

00:28:926 (28926|0,29269|0,29612|1,29955|1,30298|2,30640|2) - As for my opinion in here this shouldn't be stacked it's because as i hear it closely/clearly their beats isn't the same to be stacked. So just ignore this if not necessary or you've followed something or if necessary change pattern. // keep, as you see the stacking is only on this phase, as the whole phase aren't stacked.. so it's more like patter vice versa

00:47:955 (47955|3,48126|2) - Move to |1| - |3| for better pattern. 00:47:440 (47440|3,47955|3) - Notice this first before applying this as you can hear in this 2 notes their sounds/beats/rhythm isn't the same so it's necessary to be like this (The one i suggested). Move it to |1|- |2| makes the pattern balance. // okkie.. ==a abit rearranged

[Easy "Egg-roll"]
01:25:155 (85155|3) - Move to |2| for pattern since this 01:24:812 and 01:25:155 don't have the same sound/beat/rhythm. In addition this makes it consistent notice this column 01:24:126 (84126|1,84640|1) - same pattern as before/previous patterns // i don't rely PR this time... ==a well i re-arranged them 'at least' following PR more correctly / no stacking.. ;~;

[Normal "Asian Stir-Fried Seafood"]
00:02:355 (2355|0) - Move to |2|? or do you actually intended to make that pattern? Couz' it's OP in there //slapped // keep

00:50:355 (50355|3) - Move to |3| it's better in here couz' the sound/beat/rhythm in here is like right left right/outside inside outside rhythmic pattern

01:45:555 (105555|1) - Move to |3| for more balance pattern and hand balance/relaxation pattern. In addition not necessary to be stack with the SN couz' the pitch/rhythm/beat change. // ok

[Intermediate "Saucy Meatball"]
Nein!

[Hard "Grilled Chicken"]
Nein!

["Noodles" of Insanity]
01:03:898 Add SN in |1| this is necessary because of the beat here is louder than 01:04:069 <Remove SNs and as your pattern // disagree, i only follow the beat from the heavier synthesizers...

[Burst!ng "Fried Rice"]
Nein!

As for the next MODDER or BN who'll check this. Pls give higher priority in "Noodles" of Insanity and Burst!ng "Fried Rice" (Last 2 diffs)
Slap me for i failed as a BN TwT
Nice map!~
Good luck hope i'll get rank soon!~ =w=)b
thanks GC! :D
troke
Hello ExUsagi
as requested
i just only suggest move and add a note because im new in modding :D
dont give me kds if my mod didnt help
1|2|3|4
[Normal "Asian Stir-Fried Seafood"]
  1. 00:01:840 (1840|2) - move to 4?
  2. 00:02:012 (2012|1) - move to 3?
  3. 00:02:526 (2526|2) - move to 2?
  4. 00:03:040 (3040|1) - move to 4?
  5. 00:05:440 - add note?
  6. 00:06:640 (6640|3,6983|2,6983|0,7326|1,7669|2,8012|1) - ctrl+h ?
  7. 00:15:898 (15898|2) - move to 4?
  8. 00:20:698 (20698|1) - move to 3?
  9. 00:28:240 (28240|1,28326|0) - delete and move LN start in here?
  10. 00:30:298 (30298|3) - delete?
[Easy "Egg-roll"]
  1. 00:01:498 (1498|2) - delete?
  2. 00:18:469 (18469|2) - move to 2?
  3. 00:18:812 - add note in 3?
  4. 00:18:983 - add note in 2?
  5. 00:19:155 (19155|1) - move to 4?
  6. 00:23:955 (23955|0) - move to 2?
  7. 00:28:240 - 00:28:926 - i prefer change to LN ?
  8. 01:08:355 (68355|3) - move to 3?
  9. 01:34:412 (94412|1,94412|2) - move to 1 and 4
  10. 01:43:498 (103498|1) - move to 1
  11. 01:43:669 (103669|2,103669|0) - geser dikit ke kanan?
cuma segitu om ;w;
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

-Troke- wrote:

Hello ExUsagi
as requested
i just only suggest move and add a note because im new in modding :D
dont give me kds if my mod didnt help // ssshh...
1|2|3|4
[Normal "Asian Stir-Fried Seafood"]
  1. 00:01:840 (1840|2) - move to 4?
  2. 00:02:012 (2012|1) - move to 3?
  3. 00:02:526 (2526|2) - move to 2?
  4. 00:03:040 (3040|1) - move to 4? // keep
  5. 00:05:440 - add note?
  6. 00:06:640 (6640|3,6983|2,6983|0,7326|1,7669|2,8012|1) - ctrl+h ? // not going to reverse the PR.. keep
  7. 00:15:898 (15898|2) - move to 4? // keep
  8. 00:20:698 (20698|1) - move to 3? // 00:20:698 (20698|1,21040|1,21383|1,21726|1) - keep, to make these notes has same column
  9. 00:28:240 (28240|1,28326|0) - delete and move LN start in here? // ooo i guess it's easy enough for normal.. rearranged
  10. 00:30:298 (30298|3) - delete?
[Easy "Egg-roll"]
  1. 00:01:498 (1498|2) - delete? // keep, we already got Basic diff for easier note placement.. :3

    // continue later //

  2. 00:18:469 (18469|2) - move to 2? // keep
  3. 00:18:812 - add note in 3? // ^
  4. 00:18:983 - add note in 2? // ^
  5. 00:19:155 (19155|1) - move to 4? // ^
  6. 00:23:955 (23955|0) - move to 2? // ^
  7. 00:28:240 - 00:28:926 - i prefer change to LN ? // i prefer simplicity for EZ diff.. keep
  8. 01:08:355 (68355|3) - move to 3? // hngg keep... ==a
  9. 01:34:412 (94412|1,94412|2) - move to 1 and 4 // ok
  10. 01:43:498 (103498|1) - move to 1
  11. 01:43:669 (103669|2,103669|0) - geser dikit ke kanan? // done
cuma segitu om ;w;
ay thanks!

updated
YunoFanatic
00:04:926 (4926|1,5098|0) - saucy

fakurebbit gonna repay mi sumtime heheheheheheheheehehehee

[Basic Bao]
00:05:442 (5442|1,5957|2,6300|3) - would suggest to you to ctrl j these, so the pattern itself can connect to 00:04:071 (4071|2,6985|0) -
00:20:357 (20357|1,20528|3) - for easier pattern, you should just make these one a stair instead like 00:25:842 (25842|2,26014|1,26185|0) - or ctrl j. can confuse beginners sometime.
00:50:185 (50185|2) - move 4th column for better pattern : V
00:56:700 (56700|1,57042|2,57385|3,57728|0,58071|2,58414|1,58757|0) - after you did something like 00:50:871 (50871|1,51214|2,51557|1,51900|0,52242|1,52585|2,52928|1,53271|0,53614|2,53957|3,54300|2,54642|1,54985|2,55328|3,55671|2) - WHICH IS REPEATED. your not doing it on 00:59:100 (59100|2) - ? fakkk uuuuuuuuuuuuu bonnnieeeeeee
01:01:842 (61842|1) - would want to put 4th column, much relatable to the patturn.
01:42:985 (102985|0,102985|1,103671|3,103671|2) - what?! after everything you'll do a 2 noted?!!?!? specially appearing at the end? youre joking me right? delete 1 !!!

[EZ Eggroll]
00:04:069 (4069|3,4069|2) - make them move to the middle for consisten pattern.
00:10:755 (10755|2) - would suggest that you stick to your pattern, move to 4th.
00:11:783 (11783|2) - imo this doesnt make sense. delete, 1 weird 2 doesnt need 3 no sound 4 ayy lmao.
00:11:783 (11783|2,15726|2) - lol this isnt needed here the only one that should have a single note is 00:16:412 (16412|1) - because this is where the sound is much outstanding, the one earlier has a very very silent sound which doesnt suited to have a note imo.
00:21:040 (21040|2) - 10/10 would stick to the pattern instead switching everything around. move to 4th.
00:25:840 (25840|1) - whyyyy is thisss in here aaaaaa would suggest you to move this to 3rd instead.
00:29:269 (29269|0,29440|1,29612|2,29955|3,30126|1,30469|3,30640|2,30812|1,30983|0,31155|1,31326|2,31498|3) - in here i definitely follow the sound that has more appealing to the ear which is the electric thingy sound, make this easier follow the sound such as 00:29:269 (29269|0,29612|2,29955|3,30640|2,30983|0,31326|2) - :P
00:29:269 (29269|0,29612|2,29955|3,30640|2,30983|0,31326|2,43326|1,43669|3,43840|2) - overated for ez in my point of view its hard to catch, would delete the single note then.
01:25:155 (85155|0) - would move to 3rd regardless of the overlap tho, stich thee pattern not wuush wuush wuush.

[Normal seafood please name too long aaa]
00:02:869 (2869|2,3040|0,3040|1) - make this like 00:01:840 (1840|3,2012|0,2012|2,2355|0,2526|3,2526|1) - it will really suit well with them + with 00:03:383 (3383|1,3555|2,3555|3) -
00:13:498 (13498|1) - move to 3rd has overlap with the last ln and it weird. cause 3rd is open as a donut.
00:21:898 (21898|0) - why not ln instead :( or atleast move this to 3rd column and move 00:22:412 (22412|2) - to 4th or better patter.
00:29:269 (29269|2) - move to 2nd so it has a flow with 00:29:440 (29440|0,29612|3,29955|2) -
00:42:640 (42640|3) - move to 1st cause why not its open and only has 1 overlap than the current.
00:49:326 (49326|1) - 3rd ^

[Hard chicken]
00:04:926 (4926|1,5098|0) - ctrl j for better flow for 00:05:269 (5269|2,5440|1) -
00:06:298 (6298|3) - loud enough to be doubled.
00:38:183 (38183|0) - ^ add another note to here so the pattern is consistent to with 00:38:355 (38355|0,38355|3) - would suggest to add it on 2
01:32:012 (92012|3) - only a ln here?

[Burst]
00:00:812 (812|0,983|1,1069|0,1155|0,1155|2,1326|0,1326|3,1498|0,1498|3,1498|1,1669|1,1755|0,1755|2,1840|1) - naziiii pattern should re arrange please.
00:11:955 (11955|1,11955|2) - it suits here much more if you move them 1 column left.
00:17:612 (17612|3,17612|1,17612|2) - this only needs 2 noted imo the one that should be highlighted with triple is 00:17:783 (17783|0,17783|1,17783|2) - because it has more appealing sound.
01:07:155 (67155|1,67155|0,67240|2,67240|3,67326|0,67326|3,67326|1) - bonnie y u du dis, the sound in here isnt really loud! like really loud! to be doubled.

sory not modding ur ln henti diff huihaihsiadhioasdhapsifhpasiofhp
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

YunoFanatic wrote:

00:04:926 (4926|1,5098|0) - saucy

fakurebbit gonna repay mi sumtime heheheheheheheheehehehee // will do

[Basic Bao]
00:05:442 (5442|1,5957|2,6300|3) - would suggest to you to ctrl j these, so the pattern itself can connect to 00:04:071 (4071|2,6985|0) -
00:20:357 (20357|1,20528|3) - for easier pattern, you should just make these one a stair instead like 00:25:842 (25842|2,26014|1,26185|0) - or ctrl j. can confuse beginners sometime.
00:50:185 (50185|2) - move 4th column for better pattern : V
00:56:700 (56700|1,57042|2,57385|3,57728|0,58071|2,58414|1,58757|0) - after you did something like 00:50:871 (50871|1,51214|2,51557|1,51900|0,52242|1,52585|2,52928|1,53271|0,53614|2,53957|3,54300|2,54642|1,54985|2,55328|3,55671|2) - WHICH IS REPEATED. your not doing it on 00:59:100 (59100|2) - ? fakkk uuuuuuuuuuuuu bonnnieeeeeee
01:01:842 (61842|1) - would want to put 4th column, much relatable to the patturn.
01:42:985 (102985|0,102985|1,103671|3,103671|2) - what?! after everything you'll do a 2 noted?!!?!? specially appearing at the end? youre joking me right? delete 1 !!!

// almost all done.. i lost the reply orz..

[EZ Eggroll]
00:04:069 (4069|3,4069|2) - make them move to the middle for consisten pattern.
00:10:755 (10755|2) - would suggest that you stick to your pattern, move to 4th.
00:11:783 (11783|2) - imo this doesnt make sense. delete, 1 weird 2 doesnt need 3 no sound 4 ayy lmao.
00:11:783 (11783|2,15726|2) - lol this isnt needed here the only one that should have a single note is 00:16:412 (16412|1) - because this is where the sound is much outstanding, the one earlier has a very very silent sound which doesnt suited to have a note imo.
00:21:040 (21040|2) - 10/10 would stick to the pattern instead switching everything around. move to 4th.
00:25:840 (25840|1) - whyyyy is thisss in here aaaaaa would suggest you to move this to 3rd instead.
00:29:269 (29269|0,29440|1,29612|2,29955|3,30126|1,30469|3,30640|2,30812|1,30983|0,31155|1,31326|2,31498|3) - in here i definitely follow the sound that has more appealing to the ear which is the electric thingy sound, make this easier follow the sound such as 00:29:269 (29269|0,29612|2,29955|3,30640|2,30983|0,31326|2) - :P
00:29:269 (29269|0,29612|2,29955|3,30640|2,30983|0,31326|2,43326|1,43669|3,43840|2) - overated for ez in my point of view its hard to catch, would delete the single note then.
01:25:155 (85155|0) - would move to 3rd regardless of the overlap tho, stich thee pattern not wuush wuush wuush.

// same, all done i guess

[Normal seafood please name too long aaa]
00:02:869 (2869|2,3040|0,3040|1) - make this like 00:01:840 (1840|3,2012|0,2012|2,2355|0,2526|3,2526|1) - it will really suit well with them + with 00:03:383 (3383|1,3555|2,3555|3) -
00:13:498 (13498|1) - move to 3rd has overlap with the last ln and it weird. cause 3rd is open as a donut.
00:21:898 (21898|0) - why not ln instead :( or atleast move this to 3rd column and move 00:22:412 (22412|2) - to 4th or better patter.
00:29:269 (29269|2) - move to 2nd so it has a flow with 00:29:440 (29440|0,29612|3,29955|2) -
00:42:640 (42640|3) - move to 1st cause why not its open and only has 1 overlap than the current.
00:49:326 (49326|1) - 3rd ^

// all done too..


[Hard chicken]
00:04:926 (4926|1,5098|0) - ctrl j for better flow for 00:05:269 (5269|2,5440|1) -
00:06:298 (6298|3) - loud enough to be doubled. // x_x
00:38:183 (38183|0) - ^ add another note to here so the pattern is consistent to with 00:38:355 (38355|0,38355|3) - would suggest to add it on 2 // added
01:32:012 (92012|3) - only a ln here? // x_x

// some rejected

[Burst]
00:00:812 (812|0,983|1,1069|0,1155|0,1155|2,1326|0,1326|3,1498|0,1498|3,1498|1,1669|1,1755|0,1755|2,1840|1) - naziiii pattern should re arrange please. // pls keep
00:11:955 (11955|1,11955|2) - it suits here much more if you move them 1 column left. // ok
00:17:612 (17612|3,17612|1,17612|2) - this only needs 2 noted imo the one that should be highlighted with triple is 00:17:783 (17783|0,17783|1,17783|2) - because it has more appealing sound. // ok
01:07:155 (67155|1,67155|0,67240|2,67240|3,67326|0,67326|3,67326|1) - bonnie y u du dis, the sound in here isnt really loud! like really loud! to be doubled. // ok

sory not modding ur ln henti diff huihaihsiadhioasdhapsifhpasiofhp

no reply means done.. thanks yuno! <3
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