Static Noise Bird wrote:

from my q eya

[Beginner]
00:39:676 (2) - Could be curved slightly more for a better blanket. Fixed
01:33:673 (1) - The end has a strong sound which I suggest to be clicked instead of slider-end. Divide this slider into 2 circles or experiment with other stuff no i don't think that i have to emphasize the strong sound by a clickable note.
02:01:006 (3) - Adjust the blanket.Fixed

[Standard]
00:38:343 (1) - Could use a clickable object at the current end. same as above
00:50:009 (4) - The new section should not start with slider-end, therefore same stuff as above. Divide into two circles. Slider-end with a strong start like this really doesn't work.^
00:55:509 (1,4) - Swap the New Combo (remove from current (1), add to current (4)).Fixed
01:14:341 (5) - Divide into a circle and a 1/1 slider. The repeat at the bar start is really unfitting. it can be heard differently for each player imo
01:23:507 (2) - Shorten by 1/2 and put a circle in the current end to have the piano sound as a clickable object. Fixed
01:26:174 (2) - ^
01:28:840 (2,3) - The current rhythm here doesn't work, really. Here's a suggestion.sorry i can't understand that times ;w;
01:29:507 (3) - Shorten by 1/2 and put a circle in the current end to have the piano sound as a clickable object, you know.I know but..lol..
01:33:673 (1) - The strong sound at the current slider-end should be clicked.^
01:34:173 (2) - ^
01:36:840 (2) - ^
01:39:506 (2,3) - Same as with 01:28:840 (2,3) Fixed
01:50:173 (2) - Should be 1/2 shorter and have a circle at the end to match the synth like previously in the same section.Fixed
02:08:006 (4) - The finish should be clickable. Just divide this into two circles. Fixed

[Hyper]
00:02:678 (1) - Follow the same line with (2), move the slider-end to x163 y41 and middle point to x202 y43.Fixed
00:25:344 (4,1) - You could make this flow properly, you know. The sharp turn after a reverse jump is quite clumsy IMO.hmm.. it plays well tho
02:03:673 (3) - Move the slider-end to x233 y191 to follow the line with the previous (1). Fixed

Just quick single-time checks to the other diffs below because I'm lazy and want to move on other urgent projects. Whoops tbh I didn't even fully check Extra and Extreme.

[Light Another]
00:18:677 (1,2,3,4) - Uglee overlaps. Also the jump from (1) to (2) feels quite unnatural due to the curve - it should go upwards, or the (1) should be curved upwards.Fixed
00:21:344 (3,6) - Blanket the (4,5) in the middle.Fixed
00:28:676 (8,1) - Swap New Combo.Fixed
01:31:006 (4) - Divide into a 1/2 (or 3/4) slider and a circle. no!

[Another]
00:13:011 (4) - Just use a normal stream. no change

[Extra]
01:33:673 (1) - The slider-end should be clickable like in every other harder diff. Shorten by 1/4 and add a circle to the current end. same as beginner

Chaoslitz wrote:

[Beginner]

1. 00:02:678 (1,2) - Fix the blanket :3 Sure
2. 00:20:677 (4) - You can try to put this upward to have a better flow with 00:19:677 (3), then curve 00:21:677 (5) tail down to edit spacingFixed
3. 00:27:677 (1,2) - May be you can have a blanket here?Fixed
4. 00:37:676 (5,6) - Try this flow no i like current flow
5. 00:52:342 (2) - Move this higherFixed
6. 01:38:673 (2) - Move for the flowFixed
   
7. 02:07:673 (2) - I suggest to use a slider & note here instead for a reverse slider, the last sound is strong for a note will be more suitable imo
   i agree, so changed at standart diff. i want to keep this diff easier than standard diff.

[Standard]

1. 01:18:008 (2,3,4) - Try a flow like this Fixed
2. 01:31:006 (1) - Place this lowerFixed
3. 02:07:673 (3,4) - Exchange in timeline Fixed

[Hyper]

1. 01:28:340 (5) - Curve this lowerFixed

[Light Another]

1. 00:15:677 (1,2) - Move this two lower, since spacing in 00:15:344 (5,1) is smallFixed

Nice map ;D

Gray Veyron wrote:

Hello, M4M from my queue!

Yep, there are too many difficulties. I've chose the diffs that i can possibly mod. sure i said so!
[notice][> General <]

1. - There are a few unsnapped notes in your Beginner difficulty. checked
2. - The spread between Beginner and Standard is quite big. I guess you'll need to increase Standard's Circle Size by +0.5 or +1, don't worry, it won't hurt your spacings. Fixed
3. - Timing Check: They're fine, but as i've heard the music, the Time Signature is normally 4/4. It's up to you wanting to change or not.
4. - Checked much inside the mapset, everything is fine for now.

[> Beginner <]

1. 00:17:677 (1) - Pretty nazi, but the slider's point is out of grid (x: -2). Try moving it in.Fixed
2. 00:37:676 (5) - Move this circle to x:80|y:248 or x:64|y:256. To keep the flow a bit smoother, and avoid overlap with 00:35:676 (2) - Fixed
3. 00:56:675 (1) - Almost the same reason as 00:17:677 (1) -Fixed
4. 01:28:007 (4,2) - Not sure if this overlap is pretty much needed-to-fix, but i prefer doing this way (It still overlaps, but more visible) > http://puu.sh/epUb9/48a69bc4ab.png no i don't think these are overlapped whie playing. they don't appear at same time
5. 01:41:006 (6,1) - Try to equal their position but curving them a little bit more. It'll be the same flow, so it's not that important.Fixed
6. 01:49:673 (1,1) - You should keep this slider's borders clear than overlapping like this one.Fixed
7. 01:57:673 (1) - Y:5... i guess you'll need to move the circle's placement down to not closely touch the healthbar.Fixed
8. - The diff is okay and great, nothing much to say.

[> Hyper <]

1. 00:07:677 (5) - Try to avoid this, touching healthbar might be dangerous with the criteria > http://puu.sh/epXut/c27ed04f8b.jpgFixed
2. 00:10:677 (4,1) - Swap NC, new track.Fixed
3. 00:23:177 (2,3) - Recorrect this blanket.Fixed
4. 00:28:843 (1) - Remove NC, kinda off-beat from tracks.Fixed
5. 00:31:343 (1,3) - Swap NC if you did above. Fixed
6. 00:32:676 (5) - I think this extended slider doesn't fit like the others you've did on some parts. Might want to shorten it's length as 1/2 beat, or remove slider (6) and stretch the length to 1/1 and add a circle next to it. the song has this rythm as i heard
7. 00:36:010 (7,1) - Swap NC.Fixed
8. 00:42:676 (4,5) - This looks confusing, but nicely done.haha
9. 00:46:675 (1,2) - ^, also, you should mind moving slider (2) downgrid to avoid touching the healthbar closely.Fixed
10. 00:57:675 (5,6,7) - Triangle-Cycle flows okay here, just to say this nazi issue, recorrect some blankets.Fixed
11. 01:10:674 (1,2,3) - Fine, but confuses some players and might let them think it's 200ms away like the previous note and get a small miss. So it's better you split or stack a bit with giving the notes some spaces. no fixed yet. but i'm considering
12. 01:27:007 (6,1) - Swap NC.Fixed
13. 01:29:673 (8,1) - ^Fixed
14. 01:48:506 (4) - Slider's point is lightly out of grid, bring in.it doesn't go out from play field..
15. 01:51:840 (1,3) - Swap NC, wth a jump like that also much needs an NC Fixed
16. - I like some of the jumps you've made in this diff. Some NC inconsistencies needs to be checked.

[> Another <]

1. 00:13:677 (1) - Out of grid.Fixed
2. 00:31:676 (7) - Ctrl + G for better playstyle.Fixed
3. 01:00:341 (4,5,1,2,3) - This flow is kinda straight. Try to curve, or make circle (1), (2), and (3) a formation like a Triangle. It plays well imo
4. 01:16:841 (7) - Tail point out of grid. Fixed
5. 01:47:006 (5,7) - If this overlap isn't intentional, then move it upgrid to avoid this. Fixed
6. - Likely perfect!

I guess i'm done here. Great mapping!
Good Luck!

Mei wrote:

heyhey heyhey

why you use greem in your combo color? i think it doesnt fit with your BG. The reason why rlc use green in his KIAI because in maddy's mapset the BG change from blue to green so there is a color change of combo color. But it is necessary for your mapset, i think you can remove the green colors but just remain blue ones i understand. removed green combo colors

[extra]

1. 00:40:676 (1,2) - ctrl+g feels better for me fixed
   
2. 00:59:591 (8) - this is kind overmap, try this? how did you find that. thanks ww
   
   
3. 01:18:008 (3) - i think you can put more notes here, like this no i want current rythm here
   
4. 01:18:674 (1,3) - ^^
   
   
5. 01:18:674 (1,3) - ^ ^
   
   
6. 01:21:674 you should add a notes here to emphasize the beats here,try this i want to, but they says i should not make 3/4 rythm for this reason
   
   
7. 01:34:007 ^ ^
   
   

[another]

1. 01:36:340 (4) - NC? fixed
   
2. 00:22:677 (6) - NC? fixed
   
3. 00:50:675 (1,2,3) - the note hits the hp bar and it is unrankable now fixed
   
4. 00:53:009 (3) - same .-. you need to move it down 1 or 2 grip fixed
   
5. 01:01:175 (2,3) - i still think ctrl+g better noooo ;w;
   
6. 02:08:006 (7) - this finish is strange for me ;w; you mean, it is strange with custom finish sound?

[light another]

1. 00:29:176 (2) - remove this note? no i heard a clear sound here

others are finefor me.
gogogo thanks mei <3

No_Gu wrote:

from my queue Hi

[Beginner]
00:02:678 - 00:10:344 I feel strange about this pattern,maybe add some whistles will work.Fixed
00:38:676 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - is this NC set comfortable? sorry, i could't understand it. you mean i'd better remove at 00:40:676 ?
00:48:342 (3,1) - u know Fixed
00:54:675 (1,2) - why don't you leave a 1/1 as you did before?that will make this more friendly to beginners I wanted to emphasize the silence between 00:55:009 and 00:55:509, because i heard differently with the sounds of 00:53:009 ~ 00:53:509 and before
01:44:340 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^ I thought i don't have a choice but put 3/2 terms here. but i adjusted these notes at where players can hear the large sounds, so beginners might be able to hit these notes correctly.

[Standard]
I feel a gap between this and beginner,it's better to make beginner a little harder or del some 1/2 from this diff. I removed some 1/2terms which don't mess the rythm

[Hyper]
00:55:509 (2) - better to move more farther Fixed

[Light Another]
00:42:842 (2) - I feel this a little unnecessary Fixed
00:47:342 ^ deleted 1/1 slider reverse and remapped
02:04:423 - consider adding a note here? Fixed

[Another]
00:46:675 (1,2) - The music here doesn't give me the sense of 3/4 Fixed
00:57:842 (2,3,4,5,6) - add NC for each to have a strong hint Fixed
01:15:341 (3,4,5,6,7) - make better Fixed
01:50:340 (1,2) - better if you switch this.hmm I mean the main problem is 01:50:173 (4,1) - is too near remapped
02:04:340 (1) - change to 3 circles according to the shape of the slider may be better Fixed and remapped from 01:59:007 cause the flow was quite unnatural

[Extra]
00:18:511 (8,1) - hmm..too near imo Fixed
00:59:591 (8) - this note sound useless,I know there is a hit-hat here.but this note destroyed the powerful inst Fixed
01:21:757 (2) - better to add a NC here Fixed
01:22:341 (6) - I don't hear 1/8 here Fixed


solve the gap between beginner and standard,then
Call me back for the standard icon

TKS wrote:

Edit: btw the artist name should be gmtn. vs. kozato feat. LUZE ?
but i were to say, i would recommend to use 美樹さやか vs. 美樹さやか (fw. 美樹さやか) according to composer's soundcloud and Ranked map.
also romanised artist is Miki Sayaka vs. Miki Sayaka (fw. Miki Sayaka). then, current artist should be moved to tags instead?
and you must be deleted one "of" in the tags since it is duplicate. THE BMS OF FIGHTERS / Intersection of conflict

eg

1. Artist : 美樹さやか vs. 美樹さやか (fw. 美樹さやか)
2. Romanised^ : Miki Sayaka vs. Miki Sayaka (fw. Miki Sayaka)
3. Tags : THE BMS OF FIGHTERS 2011 Intersection conflict bof2011 Mahou Shoujo Magi Madoka Magica RLC TKS kozato yuzuki gmtn LUZE