1. 02:08:905 - volume is really low. I recommend at least turn up 40%

1. 00:35:574 (3,4) - it is really uncomfortable to play. I can't catch what rhythm you followed. couldn't be better if you change this just 1/1 repeated slider one.
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 01:08:240 (5) - HP bar little touched
2. 02:20:571 (3,4) - it doesn't supported by anything. what about this rhythm? look at 3~5
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 04:31:403 (3,4,5,6) - the number of clicks here seems pretty high considering even the kiai doesn't have stuff like this, it would better for more sliders here

• 
  I'm sorry, but I want to say map's SV is quite a bit low compared with traditional insane SV. so I'm afraid to say many things. because, I have scarcely no experience to deal with low SV map. so I'm just gonna tell you things that I catched noticeable.

1. 00:32:574 (4) - it doesn't supported by anything sounds. I recommend following vocals, so how about increasing this to 00:32:824 here?
2. 02:22:238 (1) - a little uncomfortable to play imo. what about Ctrl + G?
3. 02:32:404 (2) - um. don't you think it is really big jump?
4. 02:53:904 (4) - not 3/4, but 1/2. downbeat is already ended to 02:54:071 here

1. 01:05:906 (5,6,7,8) - it has no reason to decrease distance. it is much better to hear and play for you to add decrescendo like this.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:11:073 (8) - every sound of here is turning down, so just a circle is much better to play. after you did like 01:16:406 (8) this.
3. 01:19:740 - Normal sample set is much better than drum
4. 01:26:073 (12,1,2) - its rhythm seems to quite a bit messy. I can't catch that what rhythm you followed. how about changing like this? look at 12,1,2
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:30:240 (1) - I want to esteem your mapping style, but SV changing width is really large. it is really easy to lead 100 or else bad something. how about changing this at least x0.5?
6. 02:46:238 - it seems useless timing. there is same timing that before already existed
7. 02:50:571 (7,8,9,10) - a little uncomfortable to play. what about this?
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 03:19:738 (1) - finish?
9. 04:19:903 - same opinion as 02:46:238
10. 04:27:486 (3) - this one seems to overmapped. I recommend delete this
11. 04:38:903 (1) - how about adding decrescendo like this? now isn't good to finish the song really.
    
    SPOILER

    
    

scanter wrote:

Easy

1. 02:08:905 - volume is really low. I recommend at least turn up 40% uh oh, I forgot that part, lol thanks. increased to 50% since the other diffs are using 50%

Normal

1. 00:35:574 (3,4) - it is really uncomfortable to play. I can't catch what rhythm you followed. couldn't be better if you change this just 1/1 repeated slider one. it was once 1/1 repeat lol, well change it back to it since it is easier

Hard

1. 01:08:240 (5) - HP bar little touched moved
2. 02:20:571 (3,4) - it doesn't supported by anything. what about this rhythm? look at 3~5 changed, nice sound
3. 04:31:403 (3,4,5,6) - the number of clicks here seems pretty high considering even the kiai doesn't have stuff like this, it would better for more sliders here ok, changed (4,5) to slider

Insane

• 
  I'm sorry, but I want to say map's SV is quite a bit low compared with traditional insane SV. so I'm afraid to say many things. because, I have scarcely no experience to deal with low SV map. so I'm just gonna tell you things that I catched noticeable. the reason I use low SV: I can use high DS without trouble, the slider multiplier works better on lower SV too since I really need slow sliders

1. 00:32:574 (4) - it doesn't supported by anything sounds. I recommend following vocals, so how about increasing this to 00:32:824 here? I am following a strong sound 00:32:686 - here
2. 02:22:238 (1) - a little uncomfortable to play imo. what about Ctrl + G? ok
3. 02:32:404 (2) - um. don't you think it is really big jump? imo this is suitable
4. 02:53:904 (4) - not 3/4, but 1/2. downbeat is already ended to 02:54:071 here changed

AllStar12 wrote:

• 
  

  Insane

1. 00:16:129 (2,3,4,5) - Might want to ask more people about this or a BAT. Personally think this can catch people off guard since some of them are on 1/6 tick and there's nothing to indicate that they're on 1/6 ticks. Not saying it's a mistake, just want you to check this just in case. Also see some notes that are also on 1/6 tick further on. if you listen carefully there's note/vocal there so I put it there
2. 01:10:406 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Would say this part sounds bit too loud to be on 70%. Would be suitable to have this part on 50% the reason I put 70% is to differentiate the refrain part
3. 01:31:573 (1) - Could try to make this blanket bit better. fixed
4. 01:35:240 (3,4) - Sounds unnecessary to having the slider end on the blue tick. Better to just have it just a slider end where the circle note is. since there's no sound on 01:35:406 - and to emphasize the sound at 01:35:573 - , I decided to go it with 3/4

• 
  

  Hard

  
  Do find it strange for this to have higher speed than Insane :S well this part doesn't have high DS so I put SV higher than Insane, I did explain this matter on previous mod

1. 01:51:572 (1,2,3) - Would say these would be more fitting for an insane than in Hard. Maybe find a better alternative solution for this part? this part is more confusing than what I have right now, I'll preserve this for a while
2. 03:04:904 (1) - Could make this bit better by making it symmetrical using either the vertical or horizontal line. If you want to make it symmetrical and need help with it, message me about it.I'll change to something abstract rather than make it symmetrical lol

• 
  

  Normal

1. 01:04:073 (2) - Would say to smooth out the curve on 3rd point a bit. The path seems too curve so would feel weird for players in that level. shape changed

Fort wrote:

hi o/

wendao's Extra:
00:28:408 (6,7,8) - asli ane gk bisa ngebedain pattern 1/2 sama 1/3 di stack ini, menurut ane unstack aja note ini
00:31:908 (2) - coba pindahkan ke 00:31:797 - soalnya pattern selanjutnya itu berlangsung 1/3 beat pattern kept
00:54:907 (1) - ctrl+g itu lebih enak (biar sebanding gitu dgn jump slider sebelumnya) ga doyan ganti pattern 00:54:240 (1,2,3,4) - biar flow lebih enak
1st kiai lumayan bagus ini
01:20:656 (6,6) - menurut ane ini sebaiknya unstack, soalnya susah beat disini (dan kesannya itu keliatan seperti 1/2 karena note selanjutnya) no
01:25:740 (2,3) - sebenarnya ada 2 pilihan disini, 1. 01:25:740 (2) - diusahakan slider arrow gk nempel di slider 3, 2. pindahkan 01:25:906 (3) - ke x336y96 atau apa lah yg penting enggak overlap gitu well... tetep di 2.0x aja deh
01:26:573 (5,6,7) - distance inconsistency (ini asli ngebingungin soalnya keliatan kaya 1/2 pattern, sama kaya pattern selanjutnya) kept, beware of trap (keinspirasi dari map sebelah juga sih)
01:48:462 (7,8,9,10) - ugh, diusahakan note ini gk overlap, atau samakan kaya pattern ini 01:50:906 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - lagi dipikirin
02:11:155 (2,1,2,3,4) - suer ane bisa pass ini strim wkwkwkwkwkwk, Keep this pls :3 I usually use that pattern... but it's a random pattern... ``
02:23:238 - sepertinya timeline ini harus disini clickable object (slider selanjutnya itu follow vocal) mencoba yang baru
02:35:571 (1) - HR it, it''ll be "W" , "W" is Wendao :3 well itu ga sengaja ``
02:51:238 (11,1) - wow (pantesan di testplay dpt 100 mulu) melepas bosan dengan menambah slider 1/16
03:08:016 (2,3,4,2,3,4,2,3,4) - menurut ane ini, pattern ini lebih pas kalau pakai 1/2 pattern (tapi mungkin itu cuma perasaan ane aja ya) no
03:41:903 (3) - yay overlap, geli liatnya yaelah dikit doang .-. || fixed
04:30:903 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ane masih bingung sama pattern ini, kok sudden 1/6 strim pattern, kan sebelumnya kau pakai 1/4 triplet, jadi menurut ane usahain NC 04:31:570 (6,6) - sama kaya 04:34:236 (1) - ok

oke clear, Good luck!

Smoothie World wrote:

Hai, M4M

You said to do 1 but I did 2 diffs so enjoy? xD

[wendao's Extra]
This map is already near perfect so excuse me if I don't help a WHOLE lot. This is just very nitpicky stuff :p
00:34:241 (1,2,3) - This gap at 00:34:797 feels really awkward. Consider changing the rhythm of this part up a bit. somehow I can't change this pattern... so kept for now
01:13:240 (3,6) - Not sure if this is intentional or not but this stack is off if you meant for this to stack. I love manual stack
02:22:571 (2) - End of this slider looks pretty sloppy in my eyes. It doesn't change gameplay and doesn't fit in well with the rest of the sliders. Maybe attempt to neaten it up a bit / change it? it was just experimental slider lol fixed
02:31:404 (1,2) - Not sure if this is intentional or not but this stack is off if you meant for this to stack. it's better to have manual stack here, so kept
02:45:821 (6,7,8,9,10) - Neaten this stream a bit. Notes are too clumped on top of each other. moved
02:51:238 (11,1) - Please don't make these this close together q_q. Just bring it back to the purple tick. 04:25:070 (1,1) is a good example. :( 1-2 more mod and I will change
02:54:737 (2) - Move this left a bit or stack it under 02:54:238 (1) kept
03:04:321 (2) - I'd recommend moving this directly under the stream as opposed to to the left a bit but this is very minor.
By the way I fking love the stream part!
03:19:571 (10) - NC? still part of 03:18:904 (7,8,9) - so no
03:48:403 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is so much fun thanks!
04:14:236 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Neaten this stream a bit. Notes are too clumped on top of each other. umm... I don't know if I can change this or not kept
04:31:570 (6,7,8,9) - Neaten huh? I think it's neat as is
04:37:570 (1,2,3,4,5) - Round this a bit? Again really minor. nope

Smoothie World wrote:

[Insane]
00:45:907 (3,4,5) - Clean this up a bit. Keep the flow going. The notes kinda just go straight instead of curving (well they curve a bit but not a good amount) fixed
01:20:906 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Blanket fixed
01:22:240 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Something about this feels wonky. Consider http://puu.sh/fx92J/1d9dfbe123.png I prefer to preserve mine
01:24:740 (6,1) - Bad flow this is on purpose though, it is forward to the next combo
01:25:906 (5,6,1) - Inconsistent distance snapping here doesn't feel good since 5-6 are with the previous DS pattern, and DS changes afterwards, I NC it. so imo its ok
01:33:906 (7,8,1) - Wonky spacing fixed
01:49:684 (3,4) - Swap these two. Make the reverse slider come after the regular slider ok
02:12:238 (3) - Make this a 'fancy' slider. Feels out of place with sliders like 02:10:905 (5) (5) was following the electric guitar tho, so (3) doesn't need that wavy
02:36:071 (3) - ctrl+g for better flow. Adds a cool little jump there as well well, ok then
02:48:238 (5,6,1) - The song here suggests a break in flow but you have the exact opposite. Would feel more natural if you broke the flow a little bit here. ctrl+G the (6)
03:15:571 (1,2) - Eh make the second slider the same as the first but mirrored on a vertical axis. actually the (2)'s tail was stacked to 03:17:904 (6) - , so I'll change the slider, but preserve the spot
03:19:571 (8) - Curve slider beginning to the right instead to keep a good flow. uuh, I was doing this so it won't overlap though
03:18:238 (7) - NC ok
04:10:070 (2,6) - Blanket off VERY slightly. fixed
04:20:904 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Bad rhythm here. Doesn't really go with the music in terms of slider and circle placement. well, I tried to fill up kiai as much as I can and also the position for me is neat imo so, I'll preserve this for a while
04:23:904 (4,1) - Blanket better (1 into 4) fixed

You are a really gooooood slider maker!! I like those curvy sliders you made XDD

PS: If you can use red font to reply me that I will feel really good to read XD thx!

Extra

1. 00:20:241 (4) - NC
2. 02:35:571 (1) - hmmm...
3. overall it's really good except there're some overmapping at the beginning..

Insane

1. 00:35:241 (2,3) - not really fit the rhythm，I suggest to change to a short slider.
2. 00:52:907 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think if you can make those pair parallel but not in a strait line will be better. I made a example
3. 01:16:240 (2,3) - try make this distance become obviously longer than 3-4
4. 02:15:405 (4) - because there is a pause before so I think ctrl+G will be better
5. 02:56:904 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - toooooo many XD I think if you can change 6 to 8 of them to short flying slider will be better feeling XD.
6. 04:38:653 (1) - try to tilt it instead of just place them like 180 or 90 degrees. for example you can spin it
   
   for like 30-70 degrees.
7. Generally this diff seems have some parts much more difficult than other parts but the music doesn't goes that way...
8. Good sliders shapes XD.

Hard

1. 01:04:740 (3) - less curvy will looks better I think.
2. It's a good map.. But I think is too easy to be Hard. It's more like a Normal+.. and I have seen some triplet in others' Hards.. I think you can add some because it's way too easy to make me feel it's a Hard QAQ.. and I suggest you to use CS:4 in this diff..

Normal

1. 00:22:908 (6) - blanket
2. 00:28:908 (1) - ^
3. 00:39:908 (2) - ^
4. 02:48:238 (5) - ^
5. 02:53:404 (3) - ^
   really good diff XD

EASY

1. Nothing to say XD good map also!

Good luck XD

Remilia_CO wrote:

M4M request for p/3855299#p3855299 XD

You are a really gooooood slider maker!! I like those curvy sliders you made XDD :3

PS: If you can use red font to reply me that I will feel really good to read XD thx! why, imo red color are too bright for the eyes lol

Insane

1. 00:35:241 (2,3) - not really fit the rhythm，I suggest to change to a short slider. 00:35:352 - a strong note here so I prefer HC there
2. 00:52:907 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think if you can make those pair parallel but not in a strait line will be better. I made a example I still prefer mine, but that's a nice suggestion though
3. 01:16:240 (2,3) - try make this distance become obviously longer than 3-4 isn't that gap is huge enough? lol I'll preserve this for a while
4. 02:15:405 (4) - because there is a pause before so I think ctrl+G will be better but the flow broke orz
5. 02:56:904 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - toooooo many XD I think if you can change 6 to 8 of them to short flying slider will be better feeling XD. uh that will be hard
6. 04:38:653 (1) - try to tilt it instead of just place them like 180 or 90 degrees. for example you can spin it I prefer mine
   
   for like 30-70 degrees.
7. Generally this diff seems have some parts much more difficult than other parts but the music doesn't goes that way...
8. Good sliders shapes XD.

Hard

1. 01:04:740 (3) - less curvy will looks better I think. fixed
2. It's a good map.. But I think is too easy to be Hard. It's more like a Normal+.. and I have seen some triplet in others' Hards.. I think you can add some because it's way too easy to make me feel it's a Hard QAQ.. and I suggest you to use CS:4 in this diff.. I'll think for another triplets, for the mean time I'll preserve this. about CS I prefer 3.5 though

Normal

1. 00:22:908 (6) - blanket fixed
2. 00:28:908 (1) - ^ ^
3. 00:39:908 (2) - ^ ^
4. 02:48:238 (5) - ^ ^
5. 02:53:404 (3) - ^ ^
   really good diff XD

EASY

1. Nothing to say XD good map also!

Good luck XD

RzHr wrote:

Extra

1. 01:14:073 (1,3) - blanket ? http://puu.sh/fXakt/3cb669ea6d.jpg k
2. 01:13:240 (3,6) - stack ? intentional (manual stack)
3. 02:08:239 (2,1) - blanket ? http://puu.sh/fXamt/56ea61dc5e.jpg organized pattern... ``

yaldo_27 wrote:

Hey M4M

General

- I think you should consider your diff spread. Hard -> Insane has a difference almost 2 stars
- Teach me how2slider


Insane

- 00:02:909 (2) - Change to reverse slider maybe? prefer a long pressuring slow slider instead halving it, the feel is in the middle
- 00:39:241 (2) - Move to 00:39:408 - ? And change this circle 00:38:908 (1) - into slider till 00:39:241 - ? the instrumental doesn't suit with the sliders if I move it there. there's a faint sound that suit reverse here 00:39:408 -
- 02:56:904 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Just too many and somewhat boring maybe change some of it? nerf the diff a bit
- 03:03:071 (11,12,13,14,15) - How about changing it into 1/4 reverse sliders and remove 03:03:488 (16) - ? Deathstream is just too much ^
- 03:04:404 (11,12,13,14,15) - This too and remove 03:04:821 (16) - ? ^
- 03:18:238 (1) - This could be better. Bring 03:17:238 (4) - Closer and you'll se fix blanket
- 03:19:571 (2) - <3
- 04:16:070 (6) - and 04:18:570 (6) - Blanket a bit off, but barely noticeable fixed both


Hard

- 02:15:738 (4,5) - Strange to see this on Hard diff why? imo this one is ok
- 02:23:238 (3) - Move to 02:23:404 - And add notes on 02:23:238 - sure, nice idea
- 03:19:571 (1) - <3
- 03:47:570 (5,3) - This bothers me a little ok, stack
- 04:30:903 (1,6) - This too ^
- 04:31:069 (2) - Move this to x:240 y:188 might be better still prefer mine

Short mod, because amazing map
I don't mod other diff because I didn't find anything wrong with it
Good Luck with this map, hope ranked soon

RzHr wrote:

M4M :>

• General

1. size BGnya ga kegedean ? .-. mungkin pake ini ? :> lol I just realized that the image size is 1mb, ok changed
2. N,H,I widescreen support ? :> nope, it should be the opposite, since I don't use SB I should disable all the widescreen support
   
   Easy
   sebagian besar rasanya di suara, mungkin cuma telingaku :>
3. 00:13:309 (3) - ganti spinner, di diff lain aja spinner semua soalnya :> recovery problem, that's why this is not a spinner
4. 00:14:509 - IP yang ini pindahin ke ujung slider (3), trus vol.nya diganti sekitar 5-20% ? :> ok
5. 01:02:240 (3) - mulainya di 01:02:573 - ? ok
6. 01:06:906 (2,3) - di (3) ga ada suara apa2, giniin ? changed tapi beda dikit
7. 01:16:240 (4,1) - mungkin bisa dibuat blanket ? sebenernya dulu itu blanket, karena ganti length slider jadi lupa benerin :>
8. 02:17:571 (2,3) - kayaknya lebih bagus kalo ngikutin vokal ? prefer mine
9. 02:22:905 (2,1) - ok
10. 02:26:904 (1,2,1) - suara gitar(?) mulainya di 02:27:404 - mungkin diginiin ? kebanyakan polarity changes, ini beatnya ga se 'ketara' yang lain. jadi ga ganti dulu. star ratenya mefet2 N (I nerf-ed some HCs too after these changes)
11. 02:33:904 (2,3) - di (3) ga ada suara apa2 sementara aku biarin dulu
12. 02:44:904 (2) - ini ngikutin suara gitar ? .-. mulainya dari 02:45:238 - aja ? :> dan 02:44:904 - dikosongin aja.... ato dikasi HC ? sengaja ngikutin back vocalnya
13. 03:04:904 (3,1) - yang (3) ujungnya di 03:07:071 - aja, jadi yang (1) bisa ngikutin suara gitar(?)nya (IPnya juga dipindahin ke (1)? di SS ga dipindahin :>) no, prefer mine
14. 03:45:570 (3) - ujungnya di 03:47:070 - buat ngikutin suara drumnya ato di 03:46:737 - buat ngikutin vokalnya polarity stuffs with star rate
15. 03:40:237 (1) - ganti jadi spinner aja, soalnya di diff N,H,I aja spinner same reason about spinner
16. 03:54:237 (2,1) - ok
17. 03:58:236 (1,2,3,4) - (2,3) ga ada suara... imo, ikutin vokalnya lebih bagus kayanya.. preserve dulu sementara
18. 04:15:903 (1,2) - (2) ga ngikutin apa2... ini mau ngikutin yang suara kaya "haaaa" kah ? .-. "namida" or idk what that word is
19. 04:19:570 (1,2,3) - (2) ga ada suara.. changed to something
20. 04:38:903 (1) - mmm... mungkin spinnernya disamain kaya extra ? kepanjangan
    
    Normal
21. 01:42:240 (1) - mungkin diganti posisinya ? entah dimanapun itu why, this is parallel blanket with 01:40:906 (3) -
22. 00:14:509 - IP volnya mungkin dikecilin lagi sekitar 5-20% ? :> ok
23. 01:26:240 (1) - buatku ga masalah sih... imo, tapi mungkin ini bisa bikin panik karena bentuk slidernya... soalnya pas bagian belokan itu kesannya pelan, tiba2 kenceng... from my point of view, justru awalnya itu kesannya lebih kenceng lol, I'll preserve this because my slider is epic
24. 04:38:903 (1) - sama kaya sebelumnya same reason
    
    Hard
25. 03:40:237 (6) - hapus ? spinnernya dimulai dari sini... D: no, ada beat strong disitu
26. 04:39:070 (1) - sama kaya sebelumnya. trus, ng... spinnernya mungkin mulainya dari 04:38:903 - ? :> I prefer this
    
    Insane
    Mungkin starnya bisa diturunin ? hard sama insane jauh banget soalnya nerf-ed on previous mod
27. 01:46:240 (1,2,3,4) - dibuat blanket ? :> itu blanket uda orz, your skin, fix blanket nazi sekalian deh `-`
28. 02:38:238 (1,2) - blanket ? fix
29. 04:39:070 (1) - sama kaya sebelumnya same

GL :> semoga membantu ;_;

NewIpas wrote:

Hello! \o/
M4M from your queue

Easy:

1. 00:57:240 (2) - Make this slider body follows the next slider properly for good flow I fix the other slider instead of this one
2. 01:38:240 (1) - nazi, i think this slider is bad X_X what's bad with this one, oh well I'll add curve in between
3. 01:58:906 (3) - Can you move the last tick of this slider to x:32 y:184 ? I think it's more better nope, this is on purpose, I don't make it to be straight line
4. 02:26:904 (1) - Make this slider's end at 02:27:071 and put the next slider at 02:27:404 and of course make this slider longer no more polarity changes, I had enough. I want to reduce my star rate, not increasing it. also strong beat here 02:27:238 -
5. 03:01:071 (4) - Because the next note is at right, make this slider curve into right side I am following the flow on previous objects, it is NC-ed so its ok
6. 03:45:570 (3) - Put the end of this slider at 03:46:737 same reason, will not change polarity

Normal:

1. 00:24:908 (4,1) - Make this slider have same direction. Move the end of slider (4) to x:204 y:36 I am paralleling 00:23:574 (1,4) - , not 00:26:241 (1,2) -
2. 00:40:907 (1) - Move the middle tick to x:344 y:192 looks ugly
3. 01:54:906 (3) - Move the middle tick to x:396 y:100 fixed
4. 02:04:905 (1) - Make this slider body follows the previous slider for better flow this is on purpose
5. 02:47:571 (3,1) - Don't overlap this for better pattern if I rotate / move this, the flow will be too sharp, and not blanketing 02:47:238 (2) -
6. 03:12:904 (1,2) - Better blanket 03:12:904 (1,3) - mirror slider, so nope
7. 03:54:237 (2,3) - This sound is weird. If you want you can make these part like this; Circle at 03:54:237 , circle at 03:54:570 , and slider starts at 03:54:736 wait a sec, your pasted the wrong time

Hard:

1. 02:44:904 (1,2) - How about blanket? no, on purpose
2. 02:58:238 (5) - Curve it into the right side will shaped weird, this epic on purpose
3. 03:44:070 (3) - nazi, this slider is bad what's bad with this? commenting this slider like the one in Easy, imo this is cool. I changed the Easy's slider because it is long enough to have the curve in. this one is short. so nope

lehmakari wrote:

Easy :
00:38:908 - Reverse it like this DS inconsistency
04:24:903 - Whislte no, I only use claps here
04:38:903 - ADD FINISH whislte clap that will be too loud

theramdans wrote:

take muh star

BeatofIke wrote:

Are you sure that these notes are 1/3 and 1/6? Sounds like 1/2 and 1/4 to me.
I only hear 1/3 beats from 00:31:574 to 00:36:908 and from 01:47:573 to 01:52:906.

Momochikun wrote:

hi

[Insane]
01:32:573 (3) - should be 1/3, extend to 01:32:795 - agree
01:35:240 (3) - ^, if you listen properly there're 1/3 drum that played from 01:35:240 - to 01:35:462 - agree
01:52:462 (8) - this slider was offbeat, ditch this into 01:52:684 - to catch th drum agree

I'm not sure with the guitar stream part if that's fully 1/4, may ask Qat's or timing experts for confirmation most of it should be fine since it's usually backed up by 1/4 in the drum

[Extra]
00:19:574 (3) - should be 1/6 , extend to 00:20:130 - disagree, vocal starts on the red tick, just feels a bit delayed because of her pronunciation
01:38:073 (4) - offbeat.. should be 1/3 to catch the vocal, move to 01:38:129 - agree
01:40:740 (4) - ^ , move to 01:40:795 - agree

@Ike : yes i'm sure, there're beat and vocal played at 1/3 there.

wendao wrote:

apa kabar

Litharrale wrote:

Well I'm coming in to mod after a couple of BNs and greens. So...I'll try my best. From your M4M queue btw.

[Extra]
Just a note, it's not an actual problem but I feel like this map has a really odd difficulty spread. It seems as though most of the difficulty stems from the streams and quarter jumps, everything else is fairly simple mostly in terms of spacing. Is this bad? Of course not, it's a super subjective opinion anyway. Just wanted to let you know.

Now onto the mod!

00:02:109 (1) - Lower the volume, I know it's at 30% but the whistles are really piercing for such a quiet section. a bit
00:21:908 (2,3,4,5) - Spacing pretty inconsistent between the 2 and 3 well it's on purpose
00:36:241 (5,6,7) - Perfect example of what I was talking about in my note before. The spacing between these is tiny and doesn't belong in an extra, these should be spaced much further apart to create tension before the quiet section. there's nothing wrong with it
00:39:908 (4) - NC for new stanza k
01:11:073 (1) - Redundant NC if it's not because of slider multiplier, I won't NC'd this
01:48:240 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - I love this pattern but I'm confused as to why the spacing is inconsistent, especially since just past this you have another spaced stream with constant spacing a, I like this
02:10:905 (1) - Redundant NC again. They don't really add anything apart from free HP. ^
If you're going to stack the 02:24:571 (10,6) - then stack 02:24:793 (1,7) - as well kept
02:27:071 (1) - NC again :/ I get this is a design choice but it really doesn't need to be there. ^
02:29:404 (2,4) - stack manual stacking
03:00:488 (4) - I like this whole section. GJ. ty~
03:06:904 (1,2) - srsly tho hmm?
03:12:238 (1,2,3) - Ok this is an objective NC that you should remove. I don't know why.. but ok
04:01:903 (2) - move one pixel to the left for a better blanket on (1) k
04:19:792 (1) - ._. ^
04:25:070 (1) - By this point you've either agreed with me or disagreed so I'm gonna stop pointing these out ^

That's all from me!

FreeSongs wrote:

[wendao's Extra]
00:54:907 (1) - Ctrl+G? And it should end at 00:55:240 - the whistle ends at 00:55:157 - so keep (remapped a bit)
01:25:906 (3) - In my opinion, to make the flow smoother, this short slider can be away from 01:25:740 (2) - like this: I make it closer to give attention to player that this slider is not 1/4 but 1/6

04:34:403 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
02:32:571 (3) - Maybe remove this circle? Also, place 02:32:404 (2) - around (x:240, y:132) and place 02:32:404 (2) - around(x:100,y:240) like this there's no problem with this circle, kept

02:35:571 (1) - Adjust the slider a little bit so that it turns right on the beats: (the first red slider point:[x:120,y:112], the second red slider point:[x:220,y:208], the third red slider point [x:256,y:76]) fixed, with my own slider
02:37:904 (2) - This circle is unnecessary here. consider to remove it it's necessary.
04:01:903 (2) - Ctrl+G? And also move one grid left to make a better blanket will reconsider

Hope this helps!
Good Luck!!

FreeSongs wrote:

hihi~ M4M from Setsurei's queue

[Easy]
01:57:906 (2,3) - Improve the blanket maybe? It can be fixed by moving the slider tail point of 01:57:906 (2) - to[x:208, y:320]
02:00:905 (1,2) - ^
02:03:905 (4,1) - ^
03:27:238 (2,3) - ^
fixed all above

[Normal]
01:26:240 (1,2,3) - Those slider tails are not on the beat. My suggestion is to shorten all of them by 1/2 beats like this:

04:34:903 (1,2,3) - ^
01:57:906 (2) - It is not completely parallel to 01:58:906 (3) - . It can be fixed by moving the slider tail point to [x:412,y:116]
02:07:905 (2) - Improve the blanket by unbending the slider a little bit
02:08:905 (3) - ^
fixed all above

[Hard]
00:16:130 (2) - Maybe remove this circle? (since you don't have circle here 00:16:797 - )
01:05:573 (5) - Unbend this slider a bit to make a better blanket with 01:05:906 (6) -
01:52:684 - Add a circle here?
02:06:905 (1) - Move it a little bit higher because this slider is touching the score metre(hit error bar).
04:24:236 (6) - I suggest to change the rhythm a little bit by shifting the slider 1/2 beat left and add a circle at 04:24:570 - like this:
fixed all above


[Insane]
00:33:908 (5) - Remove the circle. Also add a circle here 00:34:019 - sounds better imo.
04:10:737 (6) - Unbend this slider a bit to make a better blanket
04:14:904 (1) - The distance between this circle and 04:15:070 (2) - is too far compared to the previous distance. How about placing it around x:144,y:288
fixed all above

Hope this helps!
Good Luck!!