This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年5月24日 at 22:58:37

Artist: Yellow Zebra
Title: Hana no iro wa ~Flowering Light~
Source: Touhou
Tags: ZUN ucchi Flowering Night sakuya izayoi Escalation
BPM: 111
Filesize: 5298kb
Play Time: 03:38
Difficulties Available:

1. Lunatic (4.96 stars, 547 notes)
2. Normal (2.71 stars, 232 notes)

Download: Yellow Zebra - Hana no iro wa ~Flowering Light~
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my 3rd beatmaps.

pad pad

enjoy it.


'10/03/31 Wed
Artist Name change
TOUHOUE X TOUHOU [fixed]
sorry XD
redownload pleaseXD


'10/04/01 Thurs
background size change [1024x768]
redownload plz

'10/04/02 Fri
Hard change the name New [Insane]

'10/04/04 Sun
[Insane] change the name [Lunatic]
redownload plz

'10/04/06 Mon
Beatmaps Title Name Change
New Title [Sai Hua is ~Flowering Light~]

'10/04/06 Tue
Beatmaps Title Name back
New Title [Hana no iro ha ~Flowering Light~]
sorry. XD

'10/04/26 Mon
Artist Name Changed
dl plz XD

'10/5/03 mond
title name [Hana no iro wa ~Flowering Light~] changed

star~

黒：意見
赤：修正した方が良い

-設定-

　● ヒットカーソルの色が個人的な意見なのですが３－４色のほうが見やすいかも
　● サビの間に使ってるグリーンラインでの１違いの音量の違いが見つけにくいかも
　 なので無くて１つにまとめても問題ないかもですね。これもまたただの個人的意見ですｗ
　● もちろん僕も間違いは良くありますのでおかしいと思う場所があれば流してくださいね。
　


-Normal-

00:13:598 (1,2,3,4,5) - 右に４ Tiny Grid
00:16:841 (6) - 上の１－５と同じ距離に修正
00:21:165 (4) - 右に １ Grid Tiny
00:23:868 (3,4) - 左に2Grid そして４を下に３Grid
00:29:814 (5) - 下に２Grid
00:30:895 (1) - 右に１Grid
00:33:598 (4,5) - ＾
00:34:138 (5) - そして下に１Grid
00:37:382 (5,6) - 距離を１－２と同じくそろえてください
00:39:544 (1) - ２Grid 下へ
00:50:895 (5,6) - ３－４と同じ距離に
00:55:219 (4,5) - １－３と同じ距離に
00:56:841 (6) - 新しいコンボ もしくは上の列と距離を統一
01:39:003 (5) - 上に１Grid
01:40:084 (1,2,3,4,5) - テンポが同じなので距離を修正してください
01:46:571 (5,6,7) - １－２と同じ距離に
01:50:895 (3) - 左へ３Grid
02:00:084 (5,6) - １－４と同じ距離に
02:03:327 (3) - 上１左１Grid
02:04:408 (4,5) - 上と距離を統一
02:06:030 (6) - 新しいコンボ
02:14:138 (6,7,1,2,3) - 右に３Grid
02:16:841 (4,5,6,7) - 右に ２Grid
02:27:652 ここにノート追加
02:44:949 (1) - 上に２Grid
02:46:571 (4,5,6,7,8) - １－３と距離を統一
03:06:029 (6,7,1,2,3) - 右に３Grid
03:08:732 (4,5,6,7) - 右に２Grid
03:20:084 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 右に１Grid
03:23:868 (1,2) - 左に１Grid
03:26:571 (5) - 左に２Grid
03:27:652 (6) - 距離を４－５と統一
03:29:814 (4) - 下に１Grid
03:30:355 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 下に３Grid下げてください
03:32:517 (1,2,3,4,5) - 上のを下げた後ここの配置が狂うので修正でつ


-Hard-

00:45:760 (6) - 新しいコンボにあがってください。
00:47:111 (1) - ＾それと00:48:733 (3) - 新コンボ削除 ３と４を右に１Tiny Grid
00:53:328 (6) - から10を右に１Tiny Grid
00:58:192 (1) - 01:00:084 でストップ
01:04:679 (8,9) - 右に１Tiny Grid
01:10:895 (6) - 新しいコンボ
01:37:111 (8,9,10) - 右に１Tiny Grid
01:42:246 (7) - 新しいコンボ
01:46:571 (8) - 新しいコンボ
01:53:598 (3,4,5,6) - 上に１ Tiny Grid
01:54:949 (6) - 新しいコンボ
02:03:598 (6) - ＾
02:05:219 (9) - ＾
02:19:003 (1,2,3,4,5) - 右に１Tiny Grid
02:26:841 (8,9) - 下に１Tiny Grid
02:50:355 (7,8) - 右に１Tiny Grid
02:51:706 (10,11,12,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 右に　１Tiny Grid
02:56:841 (6) - 新しいコンボ
02:59:003 (7,8,9,10,11,1) - 右に１Tiny Grid そして02:59:003 (7,8,9,10,11,1) - を上にGrid
03:02:787 (3) - 左に２Tiny Grid
03:03:328 (4,5,6) - 左に ４ Grid
03:04:409 (7) - 新しいコンボ
03:08:733 (10) - ＾
03:13:057 (9) - ＾
03:18:733 (6,7,8,1,2,4,5) - 上に１Grid
03:21:706 (6) - 新しいコンボ
03:28:192 (5) - ＾
03:28:733 (1) - 新しいコンボ削除
03:30:625 (5) - 新しいコンボ

thx s i r i r u.

fixed.

やっていて面白かったです。
ノーマルの半テンポはチャットで言いましたけど、
ノーマルでもあれはありだと思うので、そのままでいいと思います。
つstar

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.

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[General]

• • You should make another diff
  • Offset: 9285 (resnap all notes)

thanks xxheroxx.

fixed.

[Normal]
- Resnap all note on this diff
00:35:230 (1) - spacing? look too far
00:52:257 (1) - ^
01:44:408 (1) - ^
01:48:733 (1) - ^
02:01:435 (1) - ^
02:49:814 (1) - ^
between new combo don't jump too plz, It's Normal >.<

[Hard]
00:10:366 (6) - spacing?
00:28:744 (10) - new combo?
02:04:960 (1) - remove new combo
02:06:041 (5) - new combo
03:38:474 (5) - add sound finish

<3 song, starrr ~ ^^

楽しいですね?

[quote="orioncomet"][Normal]
- Resnap all note on this diff Fixed
00:35:230 (1) - spacing? look too far Fixed
00:52:257 (1) - ^ Fixed
01:44:408 (1) - ^ Fixed
01:48:733 (1) - ^ Fixed
02:01:435 (1) - ^ Fixed
02:49:814 (1) - ^ Fixed



[Hard]
00:10:366 (6) - spacing? Fixed
00:28:744 (10) - new combo? Fixed
02:04:960 (1) - remove new combo Fixed
02:06:041 (5) - new combo Fixed
03:38:474 (5) - add sound finish Fixed



thanks orioncomet.

星☆

Since you broke a rule in my Queue, I'll only mod one difficulty on each map.

~[Hard]~

00:25:230(x): Delete break.
01:01:176(Timing): Start kiai here instead?

This was actually pretty good.

sorry XD

fixed

thanks emaal.

sorry.

title name change

change the name TOUHOU

redownload plz XD

Star~

hi

thanks star.

Star--

As your request~

[General]
if you don't use SB,delete .osb file and do a full submission
make sure all green lines(timing section)are on ticks

[Normal]
00:38:474(7) - No,this slider is better that return on red tick
01:17:663(T) - useless timing section ,delete it
01:47:663(7) - No,this slider is better that return on red tick


[Hard]
ehh...i heard some place hitsound a lot and some place no hitsound....perhaps needs to recheck adjust hitsound balanced

here's some new combo mainly mods

star for nice song and map~

EDIT:

Normal:

-The spacing on this is rather strange at points (sometimes it's too far, sometimes it's too close, and such, and it doesn't seem intentional). Try going through it with distance snap and fixing up the spacing a bit...
-Almost all your timing sections are on top of existing notes. As such, whenever said timing section has a change in volume, the note it's on top of will either have the first or second volume depending on when you hit the note. Go through it and move these timing sections to 1/4 before the beat they're on top of.

01:01:176 (1) - Start the Kiai here and add a finish
01:11:987 (3) - Align this (and (4)) with (2)
01:17:933 - End the Kiai here
02:01:447 (1) - Align with (6)
02:10:366 (1) - Start the Kiai here and put a finish on this note
02:10:906 (2) - Remove finish
02:27:663 - End the Kiai here
03:19:555 (1) - Start the Kiai here and put a finish on this note
03:20:095 (2) - Remove finish

Hard:

-The spacing on this is also rather strange. Go through it with distance snap and fix the spacing. There are some things such as 02:56:852 (1,2,3,4) and 03:36:852 (1,2,3), though, that I think fit with the song, but make sure the minor spacing differences (the ones throughout almost all of the beatmap) are fixed.
-The max score is 11 million. This map seems easy enough to FC, so you'll probably have to reduce it by a bit.
-Same timing section problem as normal

00:24:420 (9) - Replace this with a spinner, and end the spinner at 00:26:041?
01:01:176 (1) - Add finish
01:01:717 (3) - Remove finish
01:11:852 (6) - As it is, this is almost impossible to see. D:
01:14:149 (1) - Unstack it? It seems odd having it stacked...
02:10:366 (1) - Start kiai here, add finish
02:10:906 (3) - Remove finish
02:23:879 (2,3,4,5,6) - Unstack (5) and (6)
02:27:663 - End the kiai here
03:13:609 (2) - Align with (1)
03:19:555 (1) - Start kiai here, add finish
03:20:095 (3) - Remove finish
03:37:933 (4) - New combo

Nice work so far. *star* Make sure you fix that spacing though!

KONNICHIWA

[File]
Your bg (sakuya.jpg) is almost to 1024x768, you need to resize it to 1024x768

[Normal]
00:12:528 (5,1) - Too far between these two
00:16:852 (6,1) - ^

[Hard]
02:16:582 (10) - Don't stack with 8
02:54:420 (4) - Don't stack with 2

Not bad
SU-TA

samipale pieguy1372 and Leorda
thanks mod.

all fixed.

norma and hard spacing fixed?

hard overalldiff 1up

and background size change redownload plz XD

Leorda>>KONNICHIWA



all thanks star

In red maybe important, In blue suggestions

[General]
-Use same kiai time in Normal and Hard
-both dif have distance problems, run AIMod and fix them
-TOUHOUE ESCALATION - Hana no iro ha ~Flowering Light~ (Frill).osb Erase this file, u don't use it

[hard]
- -1 Overall Diff.(More easy)
-this dif is insane not hard, 4,96 stars, if u don't reduce OD or increase circle size, change the name

I don't like much hard dif, but still StaR

Astom wrote:

In red maybe important, In blue suggestions

[General]
-Use same kiai time in Normal and Hard
-both dif have distance problems, run AIMod and fix them
-TOUHOUE ESCALATION - Hana no iro ha ~Flowering Light~ (Frill).osb Erase this file, u don't use it

[hard]
- -1 Overall Diff.(More easy)
-this dif is insane not hard, 4,96 stars, if u don't reduce OD or increase circle size, change the name

I don't like much hard dif, but still StaR

all fixed.
change the name Insane

thanks mod and star.


me too.

つstar

thx ^^

Normal
00:29:825(5) - add a finish hitsound and ruduce volume
01:39:555(x) - add a note?
02:26:041(5) - move one gird down
02:46:582(4) - move one gird down
03:33:609(2) - move one gird left

Insane
01:57:122(1) - make symmetry

star~

Thanks H-boy.

fixed.

01:39:555(x) - Note was added.

Place timing section before the note.

~Normal~
01:01:176 (1,2,3) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
01:14:420 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - move down 1 grid (Lv3) ?
02:16:852 (4,5,6,7) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
02:44:960 (1,2,3) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
02:51:447 (3,4,5) - move down 1 grid (Lv3)

~Insane~
00:34:149 (2,3) - wrong spacing
00:38:474 (3) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
00:41:717 (1) - make it aligned with 2-3 ?
00:52:257 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
01:58:203 (2) - unrankable, it's completely hidden
02:44:960 (1) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
03:02:798 (3,4,5) - ^
03:03:879 (6) - move up 2 grids (Lv3
03:10:906 (1) - move up & right 1 grid (Lv3)
03:11:176 (2,3) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
03:22:528 (3,4,5) - wrong spacings
03:29:555 (5,6) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)


+Star

[General]
*Offset: 9,274 seems to be better. *Was only getting 1/2ms off after testing Insane twice)

[Normal]
Beautiful~

[Insane]
01:57:112 (1,2) - I like it, but it's unrankable (2 is practically invisible).
03:20:636 - Did you place a second kiai fountain here on purpose or did you just forget to keep kiai on the previous inherited section? Either way, make both difficulties consistent with kiai.

Fix those few things and I'll pubble this.