From LordRaika's Modding Party
[Mythic]
Look at AiMod, the Kiais are unsnapped (Ignore the 15 sec note)
Cs 5 is awful for long maps, please look if you can change into cs4 (or 4.5)
Is this the new Evanescent/Miss You?
00:25:404 (1) - Move to 88:290, for stack
00:25:925 (3) - Move to 164:91
00:26:862 (2) - NC (For SV change)
00:33:946 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Looks kinda ugly, due to overlapping, which makes it uneccessarily hard
00:39:258 (2,2) - NC both for SV change
00:53:529 (4) - Delete whistle, for people who play with slider-whistle, as it doesn't fit.
00:54:779 - Add note
01:06:445 (1) - I don't see any need for this
01:33:008 (3) - NC?
01:50:612 (1) - Move to 01:50:716
01:58:112 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - NC ALL, for Sv change
02:13:946 (1,2) - Having them at the same place feels weird
02:19:154 (2,3,4) - Overlap looks kinda ugly, but it flows and feels nice
02:38:841 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This part is kinda awful. The 'stream' has high distance from the (4) before it, which is also 1/4 away
02:52:175 (1) - Looks a little to curvy, also, there is a sound at the red line. Consider changing it
03:25:612 (1,2,3) - Distance feels weird, due to 1/4 distance, and then the same over 1/2
03:26:654 (1,2,3,4) - Doesn't really follow music, everything needs to be 1/4 earlier
03:40:925 (2,1) - Distance is a little off here,
03:54:258 (2,1) - ^^
03:59:675 (8,1) - Jump might be to big
04:06:341 (2) - Why does this end at 1/8? Also, it doesn't look like a slider at all, but that can be because of the darkish skin + darkish bg
04:19:362 (1,2) - Ctrl G?
04:31:237 (4,1) - Blanket is off (Is this seriously the first bad blanket I found in this map? WTF)
04:35:508 (1) - Delete whistle as it doesn't fit, and it isn't nice for people with slider-whistle
04:49:154 (2) - Little of the grid, move more to the right
04:53:946 (3) - NC
05:33:425 (4,1) - DS might be too high
05:43:946 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Select this, and press shift R
05:44:779 (9) - NC
05:44:987 (1) - Remove NC
05:46:445 (9) - NC
05:46:550 (1) - Remove NC (These 4 are for consistency)
05:57:279 (5) - Add a break after this
06:10:612 (1) - Move to 274:277
I have mixed feelings about this map
It's awesome, but it looks ugly at some parts due to red points, but that makes the map feel better
Also, the hard to read is also really well done
Good jub, and good luck!