1. Hard (2.92 stars, 570 notes)
2. Insane (3.8 stars, 764 notes)
3. Normal (1.67 stars, 285 notes)

albatross11 wrote:

from my modding queue....XD(nani?what queue?)


[General]
歌太难听了（不要打窝）"o((>ω< ))o" 。。。
DS一般是前小后大 也可以kira的时候1.5倍小大小这种。。。╮(￣▽￣")╭ 我ds固定1.4 其实我用的很少
排列有点随机，嘛，不过是个人风格，并不一定要改 想学飞球的跳
变距单点跳摆的不好看。。。不过我也不会摆( >﹏<。)～呜呜呜……


[Insane]

01:47:105 和 01:50:855 和 01:54:385 and 03:06:738 和 03:10:267 and 03:58:135 和 04:01:443 同一个旋律用了三种节奏型，最好统一成一个节奏型（我只是来凑行数的这条请千万不要改"o((>ω< ))o" 麻婆怎能给歌手扛锅？） 好像都一样啊
01:59:238 这个地方最好也改一下吧╮(￣▽￣")╭ 。。4换成note 然后接四个滑条。。 感觉tou都差lan不多
04:10:046 这个地方滑条减半 后面再摆三个一样的 可以考虑做个几何梗 感觉现在的好

绿线很棒！滑条变速不错~
祝早rank(*￣︶￣)y ~

kakifly wrote:

为什么我的username在tags ? lol

sodarose wrote:

我照抄了飞球的tag。orz

kakifly wrote:

sodarose wrote:

我照抄了飞球的tag。orz

哦,是我给飞球做了GD所以您可以把我的username从tags remove了xD
gl on your map

1. Uncheck enable countdown
2. Why using 2 BGs ?
3. NC is a bit inconsistent , try NC every big white tick , it works
4. 00:31:444 - finish on this note sound better

1. 00:13:528 (4) - NC for change in spacing ?
2. 00:15:954 (2) - NC this instead of 00:15:513 (1) -
3. 00:18:160 (5) - This sound pretty weird , how about using only 1 circle at red tick since you intend to follow the vocal from here 00:17:057 (4) -
4. 00:23:234 - The beat here can be emphasis more , it not good to use emphasized beat as slider end imo
5. 00:23:013 (6,7) - Try this rhythm ?
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:32:877 (7,8) - Looks a bit weird to spaced like this , how about stacking them ?
7. 00:39:826 (5,1) - This plays better imo
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:09:385 (2,3,4,5,6) - Stack properly here ?
9. 01:13:355 (6) - Ctrl+G ? for better flow
10. 01:16:664 (5) - Ctrl+G ? better flow
11. 01:37:620 (3) - ^
12. 01:42:693 (4,5) - I find spacing here a bit inconsistent
13. 01:50:635 (1,2,3) - Why spaced like this ? I don't see any reason to do something like that
14. 01:57:032 (3,1) - Stack properly
15. 01:57:914 (1,3) - ^
16. 02:14:679 (7,1) - ^
17. 02:53:943 (6,1) - Try rhythm like what I suggested at 00:39:826 (5,1) -
18. 03:01:885 (2) - Ctrl+G ? for better flow
    
    I really feels like you can tidy the jumps pattern a bit here

1. 00:29:631 (3) - Move 1st red anchor point from right up 1 grid for better slider structure
2. 02:03:208 (6,7) - imo not a good overlap you can try changing (7) to straight slider, it looks better imo
3. 02:56:149 (1) - Ctrl+G ? better flow
   
   You can tidy the pattern here a bit ,some kinda looks a bit messy

• Hitsound is inconsistent with Hard and Insane here

1. 00:01:837 (1) - End this slider on red tick kinda sound better , the white tick doesn't really looks important to map it here since the sound there is pretty low
2. 00:03:601 (2) - ^
3. 00:09:336 (1) - ^
4. 00:18:822 (5,6,1) - These stack is a bit too hard for Normal here imo
5. 00:29:631 (3) - Same as 00:01:837 (1) -
6. 01:13:576 (3,5) - Stack?
7. 01:34:973 (3) - Start here 01:34:752 - instead ?
8. 01:50:855 (4,1) - Stack properly
9. 03:17:767 (3,1) - ^
   You can try make rhythm a bit more intresting here

CelsiusLK wrote:

[General]

1. Uncheck enable countdown √
2. Why using 2 BGs ? √
3. NC is a bit inconsistent , try NC every big white tick , it works
4. 00:31:444 - finish on this note sound better √

[Insane]

1. 00:13:528 (4) - NC for change in spacing ? NO
2. 00:15:954 (2) - NC this instead of 00:15:513 (1) - √
3. 00:18:160 (5) - This sound pretty weird , how about using only 1 circle at red tick since you intend to follow the vocal from here 00:17:057 (4) - Now it is good
4. 00:23:234 - The beat here can be emphasis more , it not good to use emphasized beat as slider end imo
5. 00:23:013 (6,7) - Try this rhythm ? √
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:32:877 (7,8) - Looks a bit weird to spaced like this , how about stacking them ? Now it is good
7. 00:39:826 (5,1) - This plays better imo Now it is good,thx
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:09:385 (2,3,4,5,6) - Stack properly here ?√
9. 01:13:355 (6) - Ctrl+G ? for better flow√
10. 01:16:664 (5) - Ctrl+G ? better flow√
11. 01:37:620 (3) - ^√
12. 01:42:693 (4,5) - I find spacing here a bit inconsistent√
13. 01:50:635 (1,2,3) - Why spaced like this ? I don't see any reason to do something like that√
14. 01:57:032 (3,1) - Stack properly√
15. 01:57:914 (1,3) - ^√
16. 02:14:679 (7,1) - ^√
17. 02:53:943 (6,1) - Try rhythm like what I suggested at 00:39:826 (5,1) -Now it is good,thx
18. 03:01:885 (2) - Ctrl+G ? for better flowNow it is good,thx
    
    I really feels like you can tidy the jumps pattern a bit here

[Hard]

1. 00:29:631 (3) - Move 1st red anchor point from right up 1 grid for better slider structure√
2. 02:03:208 (6,7) - imo not a good overlap you can try changing (7) to straight slider, it looks better imo fixed a bit
3. 02:56:149 (1) - Ctrl+G ? better flowNow it is good,thx
   
   You can tidy the pattern here a bit ,some kinda looks a bit messy

[Normal]

• Hitsound is inconsistent with Hard and Insane here

1. 00:01:837 (1) - End this slider on red tick kinda sound better , the white tick doesn't really looks important to map it here since the sound there is pretty low √
2. 00:03:601 (2) - ^√
3. 00:09:336 (1) - ^√
4. 00:18:822 (5,6,1) - These stack is a bit too hard for Normal here imo Now it is good,thx
5. 00:29:631 (3) - Same as 00:01:837 (1) -√
6. 01:13:576 (3,5) - Stack?√
7. 01:34:973 (3) - Start here 01:34:752 - instead ?√
8. 01:50:855 (4,1) - Stack properly√
9. 03:17:767 (3,1) - ^√
   You can try make rhythm a bit more intresting here

Probably you have to work on this map a bit more imo

Good luck

z1085684963 wrote:

[Insane]
00:16:175 (2,4,5) - blanket
00:24:998 (1) -把两个描点拉到中间，不然太丑了
00:29:631 (6,7) - blanket
00:38:061 (3,4,5,6,1) - 1/8 02:13:355 下1/8又感觉怪怪的
00:43:576 (6) - blanket
00:48:649
00:57:914 (1) - nc
01:00:782 (3) - blanket
01:05:635 (2) - blanket
01:08:502 (1) - blanket滑条尾然后ctrl+g
01:10:046 (4,5,6) - 没叠好
01:14:238 (2) - ^
01:16:664 (5) - ^
01:29:238 (6) - blanket
01:34:532 (4) - ^
01:43:796 (1,2) -^
01:51:738 (5,6,7,8) -
02:15:561 (1) - 没叠好
02:21:296 (7) - ^
02:25:929 (3) - ^
02:29:679 (1) - ^
02:43:796 (1) - blanket
02:49:091 (1) - blanket
02:49:973 (2) - 没叠好
03:22:179 (1) - 把两个描点拉到中间,然后请把它横过来
03:42:032 (1) - blanket
03:46:002 (1) - ^
03:56:591 (2) - 没叠好
03:58:135 (1,2) - 不要note，加个折返
04:20:193 (5,6,7) - 04:21:958 (6,7,8,9) - 04:27:032 (3,4,5,6,7) - 这里也是


hard是Insane节奏，Insane像hard节奏，醉了

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

[General]
BG似乎被横向压缩了
建议slider静音 you can use this one：http://puu.sh/fh35d/09327734f8.wav
and named it “soft-sliderslide”

[Insane]

text play

00:09:998 (4) - snap？
00:44:679 (3) - ↑
00:48:649 (6) - 分解如图

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01:40:267 (1,2) - 改为原地单点错开一些（跟后面那个一样
01:55:929 (8) - 建议跳开 不要叠
03:52:399 (3) - 移动到X176 Y132
04:31:554 (1) - 到04:34:973就可以结束了
nice map

[Hard]
00:57:252 (4,5,6) - 会不会过难了 其实放一串连打都比这个简单
02:39:164 (4) - 加个锚点blanket一下

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04:31:554 (1) - 同insane

美丽 NM不摸了=w=

ken2010123 wrote:

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General

1. 感覺BG圖畫質有點差，換個高清點的？
   時間長度加起來4:31，結尾部分還有30秒不做完嗎（懶的話那就算了XD，不過建議把音樂剪短一點
   音效還沒弄好吧？不過我也不太會弄音效，這裡就主要mod排版和節奏了

Normal

1. normal漏音比較嚴重，好多地方都是滑條尾拉多了節奏，修改的地方比較多（或者的確有需要remap一下？
   下面主要是改節奏配搭，排版方面要自己修改一下了
   
   
2. 00:05:366 (3) - 滑條尾提前2/4拍
   00:06:028 - 加一個圓圈
   00:11:101 (2) - 移到00:10:881 -
   00:11:542 (3) - 移到00:11:101 -
   00:19:042 (6) - 移到00:19:704 -
   00:19:263 (1) - 移到00:19:042 -
   00:23:013 (2) - 移到00:23:234 - 然後滑條尾提前2/4拍
   00:23:013 - 加一個圓圈
   00:40:708 (5) - 移到00:40:929 - 然後滑條尾提前2/4拍
   00:44:238 (5) - 移到00:44:458 - 然後滑條尾提前2/4拍
   00:51:517 (4) - 滑條尾提前2/4拍
   00:55:267 (3) - 滑條尾提前2/4拍
   01:10:046 (3) - 滑條尾提前4/4拍
   01:11:370 (4) - 移到01:10:929 - 然後滑條尾拉後2/4拍
   
   01:12:914 (2) - 移到01:12:693 -
   01:13:576 (3) - 滑條尾提前2/4拍
   01:14:679 (4) - 移到01:14:458 -
   01:15:341 - 加一個圓圈
   01:19:973 (2) - 移到01:19:752 -
   01:24:164 (3) - 滑條尾提前2/4拍
   01:24:826 - 加一個圓圈
   01:26:149 (1) - 滑條尾提前2/4拍
   01:27:032 (2) - 移到01:26:811 -
   01:28:355 (4) - 滑條尾提前2/4拍
   01:28:796 - 加一個2/4拍的滑條
   01:34:091 (2) - 滑條尾提前2/4拍
   01:34:973 (3) - 移到01:34:752 -
   01:36:738 (1) - 滑條尾提前4/4拍
   01:37:399 - 加一個圓圈
   01:43:796 (4) - 滑條尾提前4/4拍
   01:44:458 - 加一個2/4拍的滑條
   01:45:120 (5) - 移到01:44:899 -
   01:46:443 (2,3,4) - 移到01:46:223 -
   01:48:208 - 加一個4/4拍的滑條，然後01:48:649 (5) - 刪掉
   01:49:973 (2,3,4,5) - 這幾個和上面同樣改法
   01:53:502 (2,3,4,5) - 同上（雖然顯得有點單調，不過自己再微微修改一下就差不多了
   01:59:238 (5) - 換成一個2/4拍滑條
   01:59:679 (1,2,3,4) - 全部提前2/4拍
   
   
3. 後面的那幾段基本上按照類似上面的節奏改就可以了（說實話我也是懶得每一處都一個一個改了;w;

Hard

1. hard整體來說節奏都挺好的，排版也不錯，修改的地方不太多，就挑點細小的地方好了QwQ
   
   
2. 00:27:645 (2) - 和前面的圓圈對齊成直線
   00:57:252 (4,5,6) - 感覺這三個短滑條有點難，換成三個圓圈或許好點？
   01:36:296 (7) - 和之後的滑條頭對齊成直線
   01:42:032 (1) - 再彎點
   02:16:664 (4) - 換成彎的然後再放右一點
   02:19:091 (1,2) - 這兩個大概弄成這樣的感覺
   
   02:20:855 (1,2,3) - 大概改成這樣
   
   （另外也建議多用點這類滑條，挺好看的
   02:53:282 (2) - 換成彎的
   02:58:576 (3) - 同上
   03:07:620 (8) - 同上
   03:40:046 (5) - 同上
   03:46:443 (7) - 向上2個像素
   04:08:502 (1) - 滑條尾向上4個像素
   04:28:135 (1,2,3,4) - 這裡也是有點難，建議1,2不要堆疊

Insane

1. 玩了下發現好多切指（誤
   DT後發現切指位被坑死（大誤
   整體來說做得挺好的，節奏配搭沒問題，很多地方排版得非常好，就是有些位置沒對齊好，有點犯強迫症了;w;（我也想學飛球的那種跳啊
   下面主要是修改排版
   
   
2. 00:01:837 (1,2) - 一開頭就感覺這兩個弄成彎的會比較好QwQ
   00:04:704 (4) - 弄彎一點
   00:07:131 (1) - 弄成彎的
   00:09:998 (4) - 不搭在前一個滑條頭嗎（難道是故意的
   00:15:954 (2) - 向下4個像素
   01:01:885 (1) - 向右移6個像素，然後調整斜度和01:02:326 (2,3) - 對齊
   01:04:091 (7,8,9,10,1) - 這裡要弄對齊啊（犯強迫症了……01:03:870 (6,9) - 向下1個像素、01:04:752 (10) - 向右1個像素、01:04:311 (8,1) - 向左1個像素
   01:35:855 (4) - 向右移大概14個像素
   01:42:914 (5) - 移到離前一個note遠一點，並且斜度要對齊啊
   01:43:576 (7) - 放到和01:42:693 (4,5,6) - 呈一條直線的位置，這裡太說的太模糊我還是發張圖好了;w;
   
   01:46:885 (6,4) - 這裡也是要和前面的note斜度對齊
   01:50:966 (2,3) - 被坑了，感覺換個容易讀位置的比較好
   02:00:120 (2) - 順時針90度然後換成彎滑條
   
   02:23:943 (6) - 滑條頭尾互換，然後移到02:22:620 (1) - 的位置
   02:24:826 (1) - 這個就改成……我還是發個圖好了
   
   02:25:929 (3,4) - 這兩個也是要和note斜度對齊
   
   02:41:149 (5) - 微微的向下彎一點
   02:59:238 (5) - 這個還是搭在02:58:796 (3) - 上面好，順便也弄成彎的吧
   03:04:973 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 這裡排版有點密集，有點難讀
   03:47:988 (2,3,4,5,1) - 這裡也比較難讀，不過我猜是故意的吧QwQ
   04:17:326 (1) - 弄成彎的
   04:23:502 (3) - 和04:24:385 (1) - 弄成彎的，04:23:943 (4) - 反而要直的
   04:26:591 (2) - 放下一點，也要弄成彎的

基本上就這樣了，如果新人mod的不好也請見諒啦;w;

TT Mouse wrote:

。。。


[Insane]

开头部分排列可以再整齐些00:01:616-00:10:439，现在这种个人感觉不怎么好看

00:09:336 (3,4) - ？

00:21:910 (2,3) - 分开比较好，因为都是表现钢琴音所以等DS表现会好点

00:27:645 (2,3) - ？

00:37:179 (1) - slider重音在头会好点

00:40:267 大白线有很明显的重音，别忽视它;w;

00:47:767 (2,3,4,5,6) - 梗丑（别打窝

01:16:002 (3,4) - DS太大，歌本身表现不出来就会觉得很唐突 恩.

01:16:223 (4,5,1,2) - 这里前半部分跟vocal后面（01:17:767 (2,3) -）怎么突然又跟鼓了

01:54:385 (1,2,3) - overmap

02:06:627 (8) - ^

02:19:973 (2,3,4,5) - DS

02:22:399 (9) - 移到02:21:738 (8) - slider尾这里，鼓跟鼓，琴和琴

02:24:164 换个折返好点，中间红线有音

02:33:208 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这一串怎么我觉得比kiai还难orz √

02:59:679 (1,2,3,4,5) - 摆个五边形，http://puu.sh/fk9Jb/f38ee891c5.png √

...其实还有很多，主要是DS的问题，尤其是跳不整齐，让人感觉很乱，举个例子
http://puu.sh/fkaS7/fae851db0a.png http://puu.sh/fkaVv/2c4fe6019e.png



[hard]
00:05:366 (1,2) - DS

00:19:263 (7,1) - 迷之跟号，要跟后面也跟，要不转换太快

00:42:693 钢琴

00:47:767 (3,4) - 这样摆不好打，感觉就是跟着ds然后突然又不跟了

00:52:620 (1) - 这样放手能被卡死（恩

02:21:738 (3,4,1,2) - same as IN

kiai ds 打的像IN，减小一点比较好

感觉HD比IN做的好..


NM 我晚点po

popner wrote:

提示

来自osu吧。
若非注明，评论针对的是最高难度；
举例说明针对的是评论中的问题，但不表示这个问题只出现在举例处；
整体评价只用于mapper自我定位，不具有mapper间横向比较意义。

概述

排列上并没有严重问题，但是排版比较乱，特别是kiai部分。另外图的排列可以适应同bpm的歌，因此排列并没有突出本首歌的特点。

举例说明

Insane的kiai的第一个section。01:41:811 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -

首先是01:41:811 (1,2,3) - 。单独来看，2是一个finish，前面放1.4x的跳加上flow转折，没问题。3是音高的高点，放一个1.4x的跳可以。音乐中3转折比2更强，但是排列上3的强度却低于2，这就对音乐的表现产生了偏差。再看后面的4，4应该是没转折了，但却放了个比2 3都大的跳。

同理，01:42:914 (5,6,7) -
音乐中，5的开头位置没什么转折，相反5的结尾处有转折（新vocal的起点）。排列上，5的开头是强转折的跳+flow反向。5的结尾却是弱得不能再弱的滑条尾。
6 7的排列是没有问题的。

这段的建议是修改滑条出现点，并重新考虑跳和flow。

整体评价

整体评价：3

评价说明：
这个评价是一张新人图反映的作图经验积累程度。通过更多的remap、做新图、mod图或收到mod、拆图，积累经验后，这个评价可以提升。

详细描述：

1. 1 - play未入门及类似情况。如timing错误、节奏错误、全屏乱跳、充满无意义的note放置。限于打图经验，深入作图会障碍重重。
2. 2 - play入门但作图未入门。timing节奏正确，但排列粗糙。mapper限于作图经验，不论是否理解歌曲都无法正确表达出想法。
3. 3 - 作图入门。大体上可以称做可玩的图，达到rank图质量底线。mapper能够正确表达出想法，但是缺乏对歌曲特点的理解。
4. 4 - 较好，排版工整，flow流畅，mapper对歌曲的特点有一定程度的理解并能完美表现出来，表现出很强的潜力。
5. 5 - 很好，排版工整，flow流畅，图中有想法的点很多，充分表现了对歌曲的理解，让人怀疑是不是小号作图。