BlackYooh vs. siromaru - BLACK or WHITE?

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BluOxy

Priti wrote:

oh my god this set is beautiful

14:10 Priti: irc mod?
14:11 BluOxy: ah,does that mean... will you do irc mod for me?
14:11 Priti: yes
14:11 *Priti is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/635679 BlackYooh vs. siromaru - BLACK or WHITE? [MASTER]]
14:12 Priti: 00:00:567 (1,2,3,4) - Change these into 1/4 sliders, starting a map with a stream (or a circle in general) is never a good idea.
14:12 Priti: since it's hard to time it
14:12 Priti: especially with HD
14:12 Priti: 00:09:810 (1) - Drum on head, soft on tail.
14:12 Priti: 00:16:134 (1) - whistle on body :3
14:14 Priti: 00:56:350 (1,1,1,1) - In my opinion, these should be more exaggerated jumps.
14:15 Priti: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2950451 more like this
14:15 Priti: 01:05:431 (1) - sliderwhistle
14:15 Priti: pls don't forget to respond to me :3
14:15 BluOxy: I see, now I fixed hit sound!
14:16 BluOxy: I'll consdier about placement... Hm
14:16 Priti: 01:50:350 (1) - Should be two 1/8 sliders and a circle
14:17 Priti: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2950455
14:17 Priti: 01:50:675 (1) - same
14:17 Priti: 01:51:648 (1,1) - and these
14:17 BluOxy: Ahh is that okay?.. sure I'll fix.
14:17 Priti: that's lovely :3
14:18 BluOxy: hehe yeah that might be lovely :D I'll try to make better!
14:18 Priti: I'm done with MASTER
14:18 Priti: tell me when you're done and we'll move to INFINITE
14:19 BluOxy: sure!
14:19 Priti: 01:55:134 (1) - make the end of this 5% volume instead
14:19 Priti: (this is for all diffs)
14:20 BluOxy: ah okay I also fix that
14:24 Priti: btw I won't bubble this yet
14:24 Priti: I need confirmation about the spread
14:25 BluOxy: I see, it's okay
14:25 Priti: r u done with MASTER?
14:25 *Priti is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/637477 BlackYooh vs. siromaru - BLACK or WHITE? [INFINITE]]
14:26 Priti: 00:00:567 (1,2,3,4) - Again, don't start a diff with a circle like that.
14:26 Priti: 00:09:323 (1,2) - switch NCs
14:26 BluOxy: (okay I'll fix the modding of MASTER later
14:27 BluOxy: sure I'll fix the first part
14:28 Priti: 01:51:972 (1,3,4,5) - bad overlap
14:28 Priti: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2950480 this will be good.
14:29 BluOxy: Ah it's nice one. I fixed like the screen shot
14:29 Priti: :3
14:29 *Priti is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/578163 BlackYooh vs. siromaru - BLACK or WHITE? [EXHAUST]]
14:29 Priti: 00:24:080 (2,4) - I really dislike the way these skip the cymbals
14:30 BluOxy: Aha,I'll fix
14:30 Priti: 01:02:512 (1,1) - colorhax messup
14:32 Priti: 01:23:756 (2,3) - pls stack these properly so players won't mistake it for a double.
14:32 Priti: 01:34:621 (2,1) - bad overlap
14:32 Priti: 01:41:107 (5,1) - ^
14:34 *Priti is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/581185 BlackYooh vs. siromaru - BLACK or WHITE? [ADVANCED]]
14:34 Priti: 01:18:404 (1) - Colorhax mistake
14:35 BluOxy: ah i didn't notice this error! (01:23
14:35 Priti: 01:43:702 (3,4,1) - these don't unstack well ingame, please manually space these
14:38 *Priti is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/581583 BlackYooh vs. siromaru - BLACK or WHITE? [BASIC]]
14:38 Priti: 00:09:972 (1,1) - Spacing error

I'm still not sure about the gap between NOVICE and ADVANCED, it seems a bit big imo.
Thanks priti!
Kuo Kyoka
I think source should be: SOUND VOLTEX II -infinite infection-

https://remywiki.com/BLACK_or_WHITE%3F
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/200552

I dont think there is a game named SOUND VOLTEX only
Have: SOUND VOLTEX BOOTH
SOUND VOLTEX II -infinite infection-
SOUND VOLTEX III GRAVITY WARS

anyway, good luck :3
Topic Starter
BluOxy

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

I think source should be: SOUND VOLTEX II -infinite infection-

https://remywiki.com/BLACK_or_WHITE%3F
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/200552

I dont think there is a game named SOUND VOLTEX only
Have: SOUND VOLTEX BOOTH
SOUND VOLTEX II -infinite infection-
SOUND VOLTEX III GRAVITY WARS

anyway, good luck :3
Aww it's right! thanks, I changed ;)
Niko-nyan
gogo BluOxy~
Avena
BLACK or WHITE?
lol I choose pink

Bubbled!

Topic Starter
BluOxy
Thank you for bubble! I choose blue :D
Avena
rebub
Kuo Kyoka
please remove siromaru from tags, already on artist's name
Topic Starter
BluOxy

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

please remove siromaru from tags, already on artist's name
I see, I removed siromaru from tags and I added "symphonic speed schranz sdvx konami".

edit:Sorry to break bubble again Priti. This time I updated without asking you ;v;
Kay-
Take my kudoss!!!!!!
Lirai
Go Go Go ... >w<
Avena
didn't u think of PMing me so I rebub?

edit: oh god tags are inconsistent.. fix them on MASTER..
Avena
aight let's hope this is the FINAL FUCKING TIME
Topic Starter
BluOxy

Priti wrote:

aight let's hope this is the FINAL FUCKING TIME
I also hope so! thanks again
Nathan
Hm I'll take a look at this...

Just some nazi/suggestions

[General]
  1. Add "kac2013オリジナル楽曲コンテスト" and "original song contest" to tags? Taken from https://osu.ppy.sh/s/200552
  2. Disable widescreen support and epilepsy warning? There's no SB


[BASIC]
  1. 00:14:837 (3,1) - Stack is off
  2. 00:17:431 (2,3,4) - Try a different placement here. For new players this arrangement might be confused with a linear pattern like this as if they all had 1/1 gaps.
  3. 00:51:161 (3) - I recommend just using a 1/1 slider instead, keep the polarity simple and easy for new players + avoid the overlap.
  4. 00:52:458 (1,2,3) - Same thing mentioned before
  5. 01:06:729 (3) - Consider just using a circle on the downbeat instead, I think the rhythm may be a bit confusing with the repeat being on the blue tick, but since it's only a repeat it might be fine. Up to you, don't forget you can avoid an overlap here too if you apply my suggestion.
  6. 01:34:621 (1,2,3) - Might wanna use circles here too, same reason above. Also isn't this kind of difficult to read?
  7. 01:41:756 (1,2,4) - ^


[NOVICE]
AR 5 might be a bit more balanced between BASIC and ADVANCED
  1. 00:40:783 (4,6) - Stack is off
  2. 01:46:296 (3,4,5,6,1) - 5 1/2 circles seems a bit much, use a 1/2 slider or repeat maybe.
  3. 01:53:431 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^


[MASTER]
  1. 01:54:404 (2) - Ctrl+G this? I don't see any point in the harsh flow change.


The spread for NOVICE->ADVANCED looks fine to me. Both difficulties already have a good use of 1/2, ADVANCED just introduces some slightly complex rhythms, some small jumps and a more dense rhythm in general. ADVANCED does have a fair amount of 1/4 but most are in the form of repeats which don't really count.

Let me know~
meii18
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Topic Starter
BluOxy

sukiNathan wrote:

Hm I'll take a look at this...

Just some nazi/suggestions

[General]
  1. Add "kac2013オリジナル楽曲コンテスト" and "original song contest" to tags? Taken from https://osu.ppy.sh/s/200552 fixed at least オリジナル楽曲コンテスト means original song contest, I just added "original song contest" and kac2013 that is already added.
  2. Disable widescreen support and epilepsy warning? There's no SB fixed


[BASIC]
  1. 00:14:837 (3,1) - Stack is off fixed
  2. 00:17:431 (2,3,4) - Try a different placement here. For new players this arrangement might be confused with a linear pattern like this as if they all had 1/1 gaps. fixed
  3. 00:51:161 (3) - I recommend just using a 1/1 slider instead, keep the polarity simple and easy for new players + avoid the overlap. fixed
  4. 00:52:458 (1,2,3) - Same thing mentioned before fixed
  5. 01:06:729 (3) - Consider just using a circle on the downbeat instead, I think the rhythm may be a bit confusing with the repeat being on the blue tick, but since it's only a repeat it might be fine. Up to you, don't forget you can avoid an overlap here too if you apply my suggestion. fixed
  6. 01:34:621 (1,2,3) - Might wanna use circles here too, same reason above. Also isn't this kind of difficult to read? Ahh, yes putting 3/4 reverse slider in a continuous is not good for beginners. I fixed "3/4 reverse slider, 3/4 reverse slider, 3/4 reverse slider, 2/1 slider" to "3/4 reverse slider, 1/1 slider, 3/4 reverse slider, two notes". well check it! when I updated (I must ask priti about fixing the map)
  7. 01:41:756 (1,2,4) - ^ almost same as before. check it!


[NOVICE]
AR 5 might be a bit more balanced between BASIC and ADVANCED
  1. 00:40:783 (4,6) - Stack is off fixed
  2. 01:46:296 (3,4,5,6,1) - 5 1/2 circles seems a bit much, use a 1/2 slider or repeat maybe. fixed
  3. 01:53:431 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^ fixed


[MASTER]
  1. 01:54:404 (2) - Ctrl+G this? I don't see any point in the harsh flow change.
I feel a good flow than the opinion

The spread for NOVICE->ADVANCED looks fine to me. Both difficulties already have a good use of 1/2, ADVANCED just introduces some slightly complex rhythms, some small jumps and a more dense rhythm in general. ADVANCED does have a fair amount of 1/4 but most are in the form of repeats which don't really count.

Let me know~
thank you for modding! And I changed
01:44:594 (2,3) - i deleted a red repeat point of this slider to straight.
00:57:323 (1) - i just changed the slider of form more artistic.

I don't.. shouldn't upload mapset right now because the bubbles will be broken. I'll ask BN again
meii18
You can update don't worry
Nathan
Yeah it's fine BluOxy, go ahead and update it. I even asked a couple other BNs!

Edit: After doing a random file check, I found out one of the hitsounds has a slight delay of 3.5 ms


Here's a file with the delay cut off! -> normal-hitwhistle.wav

the first few ms of normal-hitclap2 were also silent so -> normal-hitclap2.wav
Topic Starter
BluOxy

sukiNathan wrote:

Here's a file with the delay cut off! -> normal-hitwhistle.wav

the first few ms of normal-hitclap2 were also silent so -> normal-hitclap2.wav
Oh, thanks! I updated!!
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