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BlackYooh vs. siromaru - BLACK or WHITE?

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BluOxy
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年4月14日 at 7:47:48

Artist: BlackYooh vs. siromaru
Title: BLACK or WHITE?
Source: SOUND VOLTEX II -infinite infection-
Tags: Yooh BlackY KAC2013 hardcore symphonic speed schranz sdvx konami
BPM: 185
Filesize: 4922kb
Play Time: 01:59
Difficulties Available:
  1. ADVANCED (3.47 stars, 344 notes)
  2. BASIC (1.86 stars, 184 notes)
  3. EXHAUST (4.05 stars, 395 notes)
  4. INFINITE (4.98 stars, 616 notes)
  5. MASTER (5.69 stars, 802 notes)
  6. NOVICE (2.52 stars, 240 notes)


Download: BlackYooh vs. siromaru - BLACK or WHITE?
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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-BASIC-
-NOVICE-
-ADVANCED-
-EXHAUST-
-INFINITE-
-MASTER-
Feerum
Hi! I have see your Mod Request @ #modreq so here we go!

[NOVICE]

you shoult add a Note to 00:02:837 - it feels so Empty for an Novice Diff and for beginner it might be better to Play:)

The part from 00:25:864 - to 00:26:512 - maybe make it with a Slider? It realy sound's good how it is.. but maybe its easyer to Play

Maybe also add Notes to 00:05:431 - and 00:08:026 - beginner realy orientate to the audible rythm

Thats all! The remeaning map sounds realy good, i LOVE SDVX Maps i really hope my Mod helps you and i wish you good luck with the Map!
Topic Starter
BluOxy

Feerum wrote:

Hi! I have see your Mod Request @ #modreq so here we go!

[NOVICE]

you shoult add a Note to 00:02:837 - it feels so Empty for an Novice Diff and for beginner it might be better to Play:)

The part from 00:25:864 - to 00:26:512 - maybe make it with a Slider? It realy sound's good how it is.. but maybe its easyer to Play

Maybe also add Notes to 00:05:431 - and 00:08:026 - beginner realy orientate to the audible rythm

Thats all! The remeaning map sounds realy good, i LOVE SDVX Maps i really hope my Mod helps you and i wish you good luck with the Map!
All fixed!
thanks. (should I give you a star for your modding?)
Beardaru
[General]
Make sure to check AiMod, multiple notes are unsnapped in INFINITE.
[EXHAUST]
00:39:485 (1) - Make this half the length and put a note where the end originally was
00:56:350 (1,2,3,4) - Bump the SV up a bit here?
01:01:539 (1,2) - ^
01:06:404 (1,1,2) - ^
01:15:810 (1) - Make this half the length and put a note where the end originally was
01:17:107 (1) - ^
01:18:404 (1) - ^

This diff was really good, I think I missed a few things though.
[INFINITE]
00:16:458 (1) - Blanket this better
00:17:107 (5) - ^
00:19:215 (4) - Move down so it's pointing to the next slider
00:20:999 (5,6,7,8,1) - Replace this with a 1/8 repeat slider http://puu.sh/e04BV.jpg
00:25:158 - Snap slider end
00:25:215 - ^
00:25:539 - ^
00:25:458 (2,3) - Ctrl + H
00:32:675 (3) - Shorten to the red tick and place a note on the blue tick http://puu.sh/e14Vr.jpg
00:35:107 - Note here
00:35:269 (3) - Shorten to the red tick and place a note on the blue tick
00:42:080 (1) - This stream needs a bit of work. I think you need to emphasise the little sound effect that is present multiple times in the stream, such as 00:44:999 (4) - thisshould be a 1/4 slider. 00:42:729 (1) - 00:43:377 (1) - 00:44:999 (4) - 00:45:972 (1) - 00:45:972 (1) - 00:46:296 (4) - 00:47:594 (5) - 00:48:566 (1) - These are all examples of places that there should be a slider, I probably missed a few but you get the point.
01:11:918 (1) - 1/4 slider here
01:18:404 (1) - Make this half the length and put a note where the end originally was
01:25:539 (3) - This could be 1/8 too
01:26:837 (1) - 1/4 slider here
01:46:458 (8,9,10,11) - Change to singles, like this http://puu.sh/e06Tr.jpg

I'm pretty tired so I'll leave the mod there for now, this map is incredibly fun, good luck on getting it ranked! :D
Feerum

BluOxy wrote:

thanks. (should I give you a star for your modding?)
Okay! Than i give you more modding! :D

[ADVANCED]

Add Note here 00:51:323 -
Make this reverse shorter 00:51:485 (2) - and longer for 1/2 Beat (Hard to explain it with my bad englisch so heres a screen :3
Than add a note here 00:51:972 - maybe on the reverse? than its not so hard to play
Hm.. maybe from here 01:49:539 - to 01:51:972 - here make every revers a 1/2 beat longer sounds better and better to play :)
Ok thats all for the Adv diff

[INFINITE]

Okay, first time modding a very Hard map but i try it! Lets go!
This slider 00:09:810 (1) - Maybe you should make him a 1/4 beat longer and remove this one 00:09:972 (2) -
Then put the End of the slider to the beginning of the Stream

More i cant find :c Hope it helps a little bit
Topic Starter
BluOxy

Beardaru wrote:

[General]
Make sure to check AiMod, multiple notes are unsnapped in INFINITE. fixed
[EXHAUST]
00:39:485 (1) - Make this half the length and put a note where the end originally was fixed
00:56:350 (1,2,3,4) - Bump the SV up a bit here?
01:01:539 (1,2) - ^
01:06:404 (1,1,2) - ^ fixed I changed SV to 1.1.
01:15:810 (1) - Make this half the length and put a note where the end originally was
01:17:107 (1) - ^
01:18:404 (1) - ^ uhm I couldn't think half the length is better.

This diff was really good, I think I missed a few things though.thanks X)
[INFINITE]
00:16:458 (1) - Blanket this better fixed
00:17:107 (5) - ^ fixed
00:19:215 (4) - Move down so it's pointing to the next slider fixed but I moved up 5 instead of 4.
00:20:999 (5,6,7,8,1) - Replace this with a 1/8 repeat slider http://puu.sh/e04BV.jpg fixed and I made extended streams. Thanks :]
00:25:158 - Snap slider end fixed
00:25:215 - ^ fixed
00:25:539 - ^ fixed
00:25:458 (2,3) - Ctrl + H not fixed i felt weird. uhm(need other opinion)
00:32:675 (3) - Shorten to the red tick and place a note on the blue tick http://puu.sh/e14Vr.jpg fixed but i don't put a note on the blue tick
00:35:107 - Note here not fixed
00:35:269 (3) - Shorten to the red tick and place a note on the blue tick fixed same,just the red tick.
00:42:080 (1) - This stream needs a bit of work. I think you need to emphasise the little sound effect that is present multiple times in the stream, such as 00:44:999 (4) - thisshould be a 1/4 slider. 00:42:729 (1) - 00:43:377 (1) - 00:44:999 (4) - 00:45:972 (1) - 00:45:972 (1) - 00:46:296 (4) - 00:47:594 (5) - 00:48:566 (1) - These are all examples of places that there should be a slider, I probably missed a few but you get the point. uhm, it might be good but I'm aware of flow of stream. so I don't change ;_;
01:11:918 (1) - 1/4 slider here not fixed
01:18:404 (1) - Make this half the length and put a note where the end originally was not fixed
01:25:539 (3) - This could be 1/8 too fixed
01:26:837 (1) - 1/4 slider here not fixed
01:46:458 (8,9,10,11) - Change to singles, like this http://puu.sh/e06Tr.jpg fixed

I'm pretty tired so I'll leave the mod there for now, this map is incredibly fun, good luck on getting it ranked! :D
yeahh! Thank you for modding <3

Feerum wrote:

BluOxy wrote:

thanks. (should I give you a star for your modding?)
Okay! Than i give you more modding! :D

[ADVANCED]

Add Note here 00:51:323 - fixed
Make this reverse shorter 00:51:485 (2) - and longer for 1/2 Beat (Hard to explain it with my bad englisch so heres a screen :3
not fixed I could understand :] but I don't want to make 1/4 slider if I use it as kick slider.
Than add a note here 00:51:972 - maybe on the reverse? than its not so hard to play not fixed it'll be hard.
Hm.. maybe from here 01:49:539 - to 01:51:972 - here make every revers a 1/2 beat longer sounds better and better to play :)not fixed does these need to make 1/2 beat longer? uhm,i have no idea but i can understand it'll be hard a bit. :]
Ok thats all for the Adv diff

[INFINITE]

Okay, first time modding a very Hard map but i try it! Lets go!
This slider 00:09:810 (1) - Maybe you should make him a 1/4 beat longer and remove this one 00:09:972 (2) -
Then put the End of the slider to the beginning of the Stream not fixed I want to push (2) circle for sound :]

More i cant find :c Hope it helps a little bit
i think you did your best :D thank you for modding!
Monstrata


Hi BluOxy! This was a fun map to play, my mod on your easier difficulties are very short because they are very well done! Good luck~

[INFINITE]

00:07:215 (2) - This slider seems out of place, it doesn't fit the music well imo :P
00:07:864 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Streams are spaced so far they don't even overlap xP I think this might be an issue, consider spacing them slightly closer together at least. I understand you're spacing them apart for effect but this is pushing it imo :P.
00:32:999 (1,1,1,1,1) - Reduce NC's here.
00:35:269 (3,1,1,1,1,1) - ^ There really isn't much reason for so many NC's :P
00:38:188 (1,1,1) - ^
00:40:783 (1,1,1) - ^
00:53:756 (1,2,3) - Doesn't flow well here. Try rotating 2, 3 a bit, counter-clockwise, so the angle that the cursor has to move after finishing the slider at 1 isn't as sharp.
01:02:837 (1,2,3) - ^ Same idea.
01:10:945 - 01:11:107 - 01:11:269 - Please map something here. You map over these strong beats with that long repeat slider and compared to the rest of this intense difficulty, is a missed opportunity and undermapped imo :P.
01:43:621 (8,1) - These notes touch the health bar on my screen :P. Just lower the whole pattern a bit.
01:54:404 (2) - Ctrl+G

[EXHAUST]

00:15:810 (8) - Ctrl+G gives it better flow imo.
00:27:810 (1,2,3,4) - Make these more evenly spaced.
00:40:458 (4) - Ctrl+G.
01:10:621 (1) - Same concern as INFINITE about not mapping the 3 beats here.

[ADVANCED+]

01:00:729 (4) - Consider making this two circles instead of a slider.
01:43:702 (3,4) - 4 begins on a blue tick? Doesn't really fit the rhythm here.

[ADVANCED]

00:22:945 (2) - Make this a circle.
00:25:864 (3,1) - Consider making 3 one repeat longer and just taking out 1. Switching from 1/3 to 1/4 after a repeat seems a bit difficult compared to the rest of the map.
01:07:377 (2) - This sounds off when I listen at 50% playback rate... I feel like the circle should be moved to 01:08:350 (2) -

[NOVICE]

00:16:458 (1,2,3,4,5) - The gaps here are kind of awkward since beat remains constant throughout this section. I understand this is equivalent to an "Easy/Normal" difficulty so you can afford not to map every beat, but consider remapping this part for consistency?
Topic Starter
BluOxy

monstrata wrote:



Hi BluOxy! This was a fun map to play, my mod on your easier difficulties are very short because they are very well done! Good luck~

[INFINITE]

00:07:215 (2) - This slider seems out of place, it doesn't fit the music well imo :Puhm i feel it fits. need other opinion ;)
00:07:864 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Streams are spaced so far they don't even overlap xP I think this might be an issue, consider spacing them slightly closer together at least. I understand you're spacing them apart for effect but this is pushing it imo :P. Indeed, I see. I care about it but I don't change this time. Thanks!
00:32:999 (1,1,1,1,1) - Reduce NC's here. I wanted to emphasize the sound of piano. well...fixed
00:35:269 (3,1,1,1,1,1) - ^ There really isn't much reason for so many NC's :P
00:38:188 (1,1,1) - ^
00:40:783 (1,1,1) - ^
00:53:756 (1,2,3) - Doesn't flow well here. Try rotating 2, 3 a bit, counter-clockwise, so the angle that the cursor has to move after finishing the slider at 1 isn't as sharp. fixed I moved 2,3 a bit. thanks :]
01:02:837 (1,2,3) - ^ Same idea.
01:10:945 - 01:11:107 - 01:11:269 - Please map something here. You map over these strong beats with that long repeat slider and compared to the rest of this intense difficulty, is a missed opportunity and undermapped imo :P.I have no ideaaaaaa!!!!AAAAA!!
01:43:621 (8,1) - These notes touch the health bar on my screen :P. Just lower the whole pattern a bit. fixed
01:54:404 (2) - Ctrl+G not fixed if i changed so, it'll be fluffy.

[EXHAUST]

00:15:810 (8) - Ctrl+G gives it better flow imo. fixed
00:27:810 (1,2,3,4) - Make these more evenly spaced.these sliders are conscious of form. like..↓this picture
00:40:458 (4) - Ctrl+G. fixed
01:10:621 (1) - Same concern as INFINITE about not mapping the 3 beats here. really? I have no idea to map on this part nicely. :D

[ADVANCED+]

01:00:729 (4) - Consider making this two circles instead of a slider. hm.Is this part too hard for Advanced+(Hyper)? I don't think this slider is strange.
01:43:702 (3,4) - 4 begins on a blue tick? Doesn't really fit the rhythm here. hmm.. I don't think so. I'll wait other opinion.

[ADVANCED]

00:22:945 (2) - Make this a circle. fixedI made repeat slider instead of circle.
00:25:864 (3,1) - Consider making 3 one repeat longer and just taking out 1. Switching from 1/3 to 1/4 after a repeat seems a bit difficult compared to the rest of the map.fixed
01:07:377 (2) - This sounds off when I listen at 50% playback rate... I feel like the circle should be moved to 01:08:350 (2) -
fixed
[NOVICE]

00:16:458 (1,2,3,4,5) - The gaps here are kind of awkward since beat remains constant throughout this section. I understand this is equivalent to an "Easy/Normal" difficulty so you can afford not to map every beat, but consider remapping this part for consistency?

fixed Indeed it might be awkward for beginners. thanks :)
nice modding<3 thanks!
GamerCL
Sorry I'm late >.<

The storyboard are cool

[Novice]

00:05:756 - You can change the slider? (Try this http://prntscr.com/5q7tn4)
00:28:134 (4) - NC
00:50:512 (2) - Move to X: 472 Y: 16

Nothing else (I can made a GD?)
Topic Starter
BluOxy

GamerCL wrote:

Sorry I'm late >.<

The storyboard are cool

[Novice]

00:05:756 - You can change the slider? (Try this http://prntscr.com/5q7tn4) fixed
00:28:134 (4) - NC I put NC each 4/1 beats.
00:50:512 (2) - Move to X: 472 Y: 16Uhm,i felt this flow is not good.

Nothing else (I can made a GD?)
uhm...sorry. this time I don't want to accept GD on this map. I want to try getting this map ranked by own difficulties.
Please wait until I'll be a good mapper and I make another map for ranked again. ;_;

Thank you for your modding!

a,and I don't know I'll be done SB.
Just for practice so if this map could ready for being ranked and the SB was not good, I might delete. Don't except please :D
wendao
have a star :D
Topic Starter
BluOxy
thanks wendao!!
hehe
more blue maps!
Topic Starter
BluOxy

handsome wrote:

more blue maps!
<3 Thanks handsome I'm very glad :D
Glasses

BluOxy wrote:

monstrata wrote:



01:10:945 - 01:11:107 - 01:11:269 - Please map something here. You map over these strong beats with that long repeat slider and compared to the rest of this intense difficulty, is a missed opportunity and undermapped imo :P.I have no ideaaaaaa!!!!AAAAA!!
I'd replace that repeat slider with a few sliders, like in here:





- the highlighted slider is the repeat slider that follows right after the stream at 01:10:621 - ;it's shorter than before.
- the last hitcircle is supposed be on 01:11:269 -

This is just an idea though; you tried to add something like a break with that repeat slider so making this part too hard is probably not a good idea :D .
Topic Starter
BluOxy
I'd replace that repeat slider with a few sliders, like in here:





- the highlighted slider is the repeat slider that follows right after the stream at 01:10:621 - ;it's shorter than before.
- the last hitcircle is supposed be on 01:11:269 -

This is just an idea though; you tried to add something like a break with that repeat slider so making this part too hard is probably not a good idea :D .
yeah yeah yeahhh!!! I got an idea.

8-)
thanks for your little modding! it helps my map to be good :]

Edit:Uhm,I returned before these sliders are too hard!
Secretpipe
I hope you'll rank your map @BluOxy :D
Topic Starter
BluOxy

Secretpipe wrote:

I hope you'll rank your map @BluOxy :D
Yeah I also hope so;_; Thanks for rooting for me <3
Secretpipe
I may help if you need it !
Topic Starter
BluOxy

Secretpipe wrote:

I may help if you need it !
Thanks Secretpipe!! :D I might show you this map when this map is ready for getting bubble.
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