1. last break in diffs is nonsense for me... 13sec of waiting and you get only couple of objects to click. what if remove them and make map shorter? that end of kiai looks like a good end point...
2. kiai in diffs sound *can't get a correct word* ...insipid? i mean in kiais you use claps and finishes somewhere, i'd like to hear default soft whistles, it would make map more colorful. just my personal taste.

1. 01:00:674 - i recommend to add something like that here: http://puu.sh/egkWd/d1298efdd2.jpg
   why? firstly it fits to the music. secondary, because your (1) follows to vocal and vocal starts before strong beats and after quite long time of rest. it's hard to catch (especially with hidden), additonal slider will help to keep the rhythm.
2. 02:02:114 - here we can see same pattern, but you don't need to add something:
   no actual sound there, we had experience with that vocal minute ago and now we know what is waiting us here.

1. fiiiine

1. 00:19:634 (1) - no, end of spinner comes from nowhere, just no. spinner should be longer like in other diffs or shouldn't exist. Also, why 5%? actually there is a sound, you can add *as example* default soft whistle with 20-25% volume and it will fit. same question about 5% goes for all diffs btw.
   anyway, making spinner longer will cut the gap between mentioned spinner and next slider. gap will be 1sec, it's on border, yeah. the easiest way is to turn spinner into another long slider. don't know what else to suggest here...

1. We wszystkich diffach 00:59:244 (4) - Może gwizdek? *runs*
2. Skarbie ty moje, obawiam się że drugi i czwarty kolory komba są zbyt identiko. W tym drugim daj może jaskrawość Na 146 żeby
   
   był większy kontrast pomiędzy kolorkami.

1. Sądzę że AR3,5 nie będzie dostatecznie zabójcze prędkością, a polepszy czytelność. Jeśli jesteś na tak, to poproszę tę zmianę.
2. 01:32:364 (1) - Zróbmy Let's Play z 'Zerżnijmy tę mapę stylem Andrea4Ewa' i sprawmy aby slider był 100% symetryczny. XD Ostatni
   
   punkt slidera daj na X=162, a środkowy (czerowny) na Y=39. Niezapomniane doznania Andreastyczności zapewnione! *3*

1. 00:23:244 (1) - To samo co wyżej. W tym wypadku radzę tak: drugi czerwony punkt przestawiamy na X=172 i to samo robimy z
   
   punktem poniżej obecnego.
2. 01:38:124 (3) - Weż ustaw na (X=163 | Y=289) dla perfekt blanketa. TAK, WIEM, ALE BARDZIEJ SIĘ CZEPIĆ NIE POTRAFIĘ.
3. 02:15:564 (2) - Chyba brakuje klapsa na końcu slidera.

1. 01:53:004 (4) - Weź ustaw na Y=262 żeby tak ładnie overlapiło z tym sliderem, tak tyci tyci jesio troszku w dół.
2. 03:01:164 (2) - MOŻE CTRL + G. Ale tylko jak ci się spodoba.

1. AIBat v3.1 wrote:

   Combo Colours
   Inconsistency in combo colours:
   
   - [Average] :
   Combo1 : 244,162,164
   Combo2 : 180,210,145
   Combo3 : 171,176,216
   Combo4 : 241,199,120
   Combo5 : 196,165,211
   SliderBorder : 63,63,63
   - [Soft] :
   Combo1 : 244,162,164
   Combo2 : 180,210,145
   Combo3 : 119,126,191
   Combo4 : 241,199,120
   Combo5 : 196,165,211
   SliderBorder : 63,63,63
   - [Tough] :
   Combo1 : 244,162,164
   Combo2 : 180,210,145
   Combo3 : 171,176,216
   Combo4 : 241,199,120
   Combo5 : 196,165,211
   SliderBorder : 63,63,63

2. I noticed like the offset was a bit off, but just for some ms. Try to use offset 213, I think it fits more perfectly.

1. lol the AR is almost near of Normal's, actually the current one is a bit high for an Easy, consider reducing it to 2 or 3.
2. OD +0,5 to balance it with the HP.
3. 00:27:084 (2) - NC for the consistency since you added it each two stanzas.
4. 01:53:964 (4) - Missing clap?
5. 01:57:324 (1) - Unnecessary NC, I feel an inconsistency here.
6. 02:00:684 (2) - Whistle at the end? It fits good and you added it in the previous kiai.
7. 02:15:564 (2) - Missing clap at the end.
8. 02:16:524 (1) - Unnecessary NC, same reason as above.

1. 00:11:724 (1) - Unnecessary NC if you are adding them each two stanzas as well.
2. 00:12:564 (1,1) - This is unrankeable because there is no recovery time enough for a Normal, try something different.
3. 00:19:404 (1,1) - Same as above, also this spinner is like a bit out of place here.
4. 00:55:884 (3) - Ctrl+J for a better flow with the following notes? Fix DS if it's necessary.
5. 00:59:724 (3) - Whistle? Like you did in Easy.
6. 02:01:164 (5) - Whistle too.
7. 02:37:644 (1,2) - Blanket maybe? If it was already your intention, improve it~

1. OD -1 to balance it with the HP; although this is the hardest diff, OD fits better due the kind of diff and bpm.
2. 00:19:524 (1) - I think this spinner doesn't fit here, consider mapping this part.
3. 00:25:164 (1,1) - NC spam is unnecessary, remove the first one at least.
4. 00:43:164 (2) - Move this to x:308 y:108 for a better flow.
5. 00:47:724 (4) - Ctrl+J to improve the flow.
6. 01:01:404 (1,2) - Swap NC due the stanza and kiai start.
7. 02:02:844 (1,2) - Same as above.

1. Metadata is weird since the (rare) official sources differ. I'll talk to Lanturn to find a solution, but the Artist probably has to change since I didn't see "&" anywhere..
2. What the others already mentioned about Spread. I gave some suggestions in Average that should fix the problem.
3. I can't see the girl without Widescreen enabled ;w; Nothing you can do about it though, it's just a little bit weird to have this view: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2592525
4. Consider to add 1800 of AudioLeadIn to all difficulties, since the map starts right at the beginning of the mp3 (at ~200 ms, to be exact).

1. 00:15:573 (1,2) - Weird overlap. Since you will reuse 00:15:573 (1) - 2 times afterwards anyway, what about replacing it with a different slidershape that doesn't overlap with (2)?
2. 00:20:373 (2) - Add NC (since you usually NC every 2 measures) or remove the one at 00:27:093 (1) - (so you have NC every 4 measures in slow sections)
3. 01:51:573 (1) - The sliderpath makes me cry tears of pain (No, this is not a real issue)
4. 02:33:813 (2,1) - Switch NCs
5. 02:37:653 (2) - NC if you NC'd at 00:20:373
6. 02:45:333 (1) - Remove NC if you removed the NC at 00:27:093 - (I hope you get the sense of this stuff lel)
7. Wew except the NC stuff

1. What needs to be done to improve the spread is increasing the number of circles (and overall density) a little bit in this diff >w< I'll give you some suggestions / advices below.
   
   1. 00:00:213 to 00:15:573 - Rhythm is same as in Easy here. What about replacing the reversed sliders 00:00:213 (1,2) - and 00:07:893 (1,2) - like that: http://puu.sh/eURel/ce853bdce0.jpg
   2. Try adding some circles between 1/1-sliders in the verses. Some examples where it would fit placement and rhythm are 00:31:653 - or 00:48:933 - or 00:54:693 - and so on..
   3. 00:38:613 (1,2,3) - Try some more density - This is too close to Easy and too far from Hard.
   4. 01:40:053 (1,2,3) - Same.
2. 00:14:613 (3,1) - The pause between these notes is not big enough to allow such a placement. (1)'s overlap with 00:13:653 (2) - is clearly noticable ingame and even without it, (3) and (1)'s spacing is much too low for a Normal diff. I can't really think of a nice way to fix it to be honest. I would rotate 00:15:573 (1,2,3) - 90° clockwise maybe but vertical symmetry doesn't seem to be what you were looking for here so I dunno.. You'll find a solution.
3. 02:31:893 (1,2,3) - I don't really understand why those objects already have the lower SV. They clearly belong to the previous section rather than the following, so they should have the old SV. If you don't like the drastical SV change, you could use 0.9x here or something.
4. Wew except the spread stuff

1. 00:15:573 (1,2) - Hmm... Having the 4/1-gap and afterwards the slider feels weird to be honest. You'd expect to have either two gaps or two slides, if you understand what I mean, since it's the same music just on a different pitch in each measure >w< What about deleting the circle and having the slider repeated? http://puu.sh/eUUQD/1d12532dd0.jpg
2. Completely wew'd this time

Desperate-kun wrote:

Bubbled (ﾉ 'ω')ﾉ

Gonzvlo wrote:

I find this map so relaxing and smooth, the only thing that seemed a little weird was this slider 00:15:573 (1) - not sure if using a slider there was the right choice. Anyway, cool map bro, keep it up! I'll keep it in mind about that slider! o3o

Btw, for future reference, Krisom sort-of-made the circles, lovhin456 made the numbers and I edited the arrow and followpoints. oh, edited op post a bit D: