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Feint - Face Down

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SD CARD
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ItashaS13
I wish this ranked....
VINXIS
kk heres the normal as a puush .osu
http://puu.sh/hsjsx/2038c4bc9f.osu

and the code
le code
osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 36040
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 22076,44019,44362,44705,44876,45219,45734,54126,60476,63219,64591,87905,101276,109754
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 2.499999

[Metadata]
Title:Face Down
TitleUnicode:Face Down
Artist:Feint
ArtistUnicode:Feint
Creator:SD CARD
Version:VINXIS's Normal
Source:
Tags:dnb drum and bass
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"wallhaven-192119.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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add my name in tags n shit 2 btw
Ringating
from my queue:

the image you linked seemed to have some pretty intense upscaling artifacts, so I used it to find the original here. the original is kinda small and not the correct aspect ratio, so I extended it using a generic image of stars and some color adjustments.no kds
felys
So.

[Timing]
I checked the timing and I think 136 would be better than 134 as offset (yeah, it's just two millseconds, but it's something).

[General]
Try to change the colours of the combo, I don't think those fits the background.
I would try with those three colors:
Combo 1 - 150 / 228 / 233
Combo 2 - 91 / 85 / 206
Combo 3 - 232 / 130 / 253

[Insane]
Well well well.
I suggest you to go with OD8, since it's a short map and it's no sense to use all those streams if you can just smash on them :3
00:24:136 (2,3) - this stacking it's kinda ugly, you should change with something else. For being less boring with patterns, try something like this. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3068131
00:27:050 (3,4,5) - You should just let 3 and 5 here, changing the space a bit, because listening to music, there's not a triple here.
00:30:478 (7) - New combo
00:46:250 (1,2,3,4) - That doesn't really flow. Try something like that https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3068136
00:51:736 (8) - new combo
00:51:736 (8) - Listening to music, I feel that pattern it's not that good ;w; try something a bit jumpy like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3068141
00:54:136 (1,2,3,4,5) - uguuuu onii-chan what is this spaceru ;w; The music is kickin' in, so in that part of map give a little more of spacing https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3068147
00:57:736 (7) - new combo
00:58:079 (1) - remove new combo
01:00:478 (7) - new combo
01:01:850 (15) - new combo

Oh, this part full of streams.
Streams should usually follow, for the start and the end of them, the beat of drums, kinda.
01:16:936 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You should remove this, and instead try to do some random pattern that you like. A map full of stream is not that good if it's just that ;w; and most of all, on the music there's kinda anything to do with a stream.

Same for this 01:22:421 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and for this 01:23:621 (2,3,4,5) -

01:25:336 (5) - new combo
01:29:107 (6) - new combo
01:30:478 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - same as before, it doesn't reconnect to the music.
01:31:850 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - same ^
01:38:964 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - too much streams going on. I'm not saying to remove them all.But some of them, like this one, ruin the flowing of the map.
01:43:593 - add a beat?
01:44:536 (1) - http://puu.sh/huRL8/f78ccab785.jpg
01:47:793 (10) - new combo
01:48:478 (2) - new combo

Ok so, hope I made something good ;3; bb :3
Topic Starter
SD CARD

Ludosama wrote:

So.

[Timing]
I checked the timing and I think 136 would be better than 134 as offset (yeah, it's just two millseconds, but it's something). ok
[General]
Try to change the colours of the combo, I don't think those fits the background. totally forgot about combo colors wtf :?
I would try with those three colors:
Combo 1 - 150 / 228 / 233
Combo 2 - 91 / 85 / 206
Combo 3 - 232 / 130 / 253

[Insane]
Well well well.
I suggest you to go with OD8, since it's a short map and it's no sense to use all those streams if you can just smash on them :3 Changed
00:24:136 (2,3) - this stacking it's kinda ugly, you should change with something else. For being less boring with patterns, try something like this. okhttps://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3068131
00:27:050 (3,4,5) - You should just let 3 and 5 here, changing the space a bit, because listening to music, there's not a triple here. ok
00:30:478 (7) - New combo ok
00:46:250 (1,2,3,4) - That doesn't really flow. Try something like that https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3068136 ok
00:51:736 (8) - new combo ok
00:51:736 (8) - Listening to music, I feel that pattern it's not that good ;w; try something a bit jumpy like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3068141 ok
00:54:136 (1,2,3,4,5) - uguuuu onii-chan what is this spaceru ;w; The music is kickin' in, so in that part of map give a little more of spacing https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3068147 fixed ;w;
00:57:736 (7) - new combo ok
00:58:079 (1) - remove new combo ok
01:00:478 (7) - new combo ok
01:01:850 (15) - new combo ok

Oh, this part full of streams.
Streams should usually follow, for the start and the end of them, the beat of drums, kinda.
01:16:936 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You should remove this, and instead try to do some random pattern that you like. A map full of stream is not that good if it's just that ;w; and most of all, on the music there's kinda anything to do with a stream. I changed some of the streams but left some. Some of the streams aren't supposed to follow the drums and i don't really want to remove too many streams as it is kind of the main theme of the map ;w;

Same for this 01:22:421 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and for this 01:23:621 (2,3,4,5) -

01:25:336 (5) - new combo ok
01:29:107 (6) - new combo ok
01:30:478 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - same as before, it doesn't reconnect to the music.
01:31:850 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - same ^
01:38:964 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - too much streams going on. I'm not saying to remove them all.But some of them, like this one, ruin the flowing of the map.
01:43:593 - add a beat? ok
01:44:536 (1) - http://puu.sh/huRL8/f78ccab785.jpg ok
01:47:793 (10) - new combo ok
01:48:478 (2) - new combo ok

Ok so, hope I made something good ;3; bb :3
Thank you for the mod, helped me a lot. :)
gosiaq
HI ^^
It's a nice song, rly liked it

now let me see NORMAL:

SPOILER
00:30:307 (1) - make a little bit of space between (1) and (2) like u did it before (here 00:27:564 ) ;)

00:52:250 - maybe instead of spinner put some other elements? its nice beat there
00:55:678 and 00:56:021 - it's too empty for me
00:59:107 (2) -maybe would be better if u move it a little down (closer to (1) )

from 01:30:478 (3) - u have big creen so try move elements wider on it,anyway i feel my claustrophobia ;)

(just sugestion) 01:37:507 (1) - u copied this few times, try to make sth new there :)
Do easy map also or hard if u can, i enjoyed this song :p

Hope your map will be ranked soon
LGV894
Wtf is this mapping style, VINXIS?
h1b1k11


VINXIS's Normal
01:15:221 (3) - Add reverse?
01:25:164 (1) - Wait- Why spinner? I think you should map that time to 01:28:250
01:30:650 (1) - Face this slider the other way

01:38:707 (4,1) - Too many of these at one time, maybe remove 01:38:707 (4)
01:41:621 (1) - Face other way

Insane
00:42:307 (1,2,3,4,5) - Create a star pattern with these instead
00:50:707 (6) - Make this circle around 00:50:536 (5)

01:14:364 (3) - I don't really think this shape is rankable, maybe make it a normal curved slider instead
01:14:707 (4) - Make this slider look more proper

01:18:136 (8) - Make it into this instead

01:24:307 (7,1) - Overlapping, not good. Do this:

01:30:478 (3) - Stream doesn't start until here so remove that circle (Ik, blue tick, but it starts there
01:31:850 (3) - ^^

Combos are going over 8-10 so NC every time 8-10
VINXIS
SD CARD we need a diff under 2 stars and a hard because spread

LGV894 wrote:

Wtf is this mapping style, VINXIS?
wha7

imaikiseta
01:15:221 (3) - Add reverse? no slider ends on big white ticks/new measures r bad dud e
01:25:164 (1) - Wait- Why spinner? I think you should map that time to 01:28:250 added 4 circles
01:30:650 (1) - Face this slider the other way was intentional but w/e
01:38:707 (4,1) - Too many of these at one time, maybe remove 01:38:707 (4) dam
01:41:621 (1) - Face other way dam

gosiaq
00:30:307 (1) - make a little bit of space between (1) and (2) like u did it before (here 00:27:564 ) ;) dam

00:52:250 - maybe instead of spinner put some other elements? its nice beat there "building up" energy tho
00:55:678 and 00:56:021 - it's too empty for me its a normal
00:59:107 (2) -maybe would be better if u move it a little down (closer to (1) ) moved mor down-right (D.S. du d e)

from 01:30:478 (3) - u have big creen so try move elements wider on it,anyway i feel my claustrophobia ;) wha7

(just sugestion) 01:37:507 (1) - u copied this few times, try to make sth new there :) [color=#FF6200consistency[/color]

k

http://puu.sh/ixVLs/65b3c37aca.osu

delete the .osb from the song folder btw sd card
Topic Starter
SD CARD

imaikiseta wrote:



VINXIS's Normal
01:15:221 (3) - Add reverse?
01:25:164 (1) - Wait- Why spinner? I think you should map that time to 01:28:250
01:30:650 (1) - Face this slider the other way

01:38:707 (4,1) - Too many of these at one time, maybe remove 01:38:707 (4)
01:41:621 (1) - Face other way

Insane
00:42:307 (1,2,3,4,5) - Create a star pattern with these instead ok
00:50:707 (6) - Make this circle around 00:50:536 (5) ok

01:14:364 (3) - I don't really think this shape is rankable, maybe make it a normal curved slider instead ok
01:14:707 (4) - Make this slider look more proper ok

01:18:136 (8) - Make it into this instead ok

01:24:307 (7,1) - Overlapping, not good. Do this: yep

01:30:478 (3) - Stream doesn't start until here so remove that circle (Ik, blue tick, but it starts there I cant get it to fit on the blue tick -w- ill try to fix it later
01:31:850 (3) - ^^ ^^


Combos are going over 8-10 so NC every time 8-10 ok
VINXIS yeah, and theres no .osb in there? :D
VINXIS
o ok. then after u update, redownload from the website and delete the .osb and then update cuz it's in the download lma o. Having a .osb when we dont have a storyboard is unrankable u kno
[Nii-san]
Hi form #Modreqs

Map is so cool but i see some problems

INSANE:
00:23:621 (3) - straighten this slider
00:25:164 (2) - Straighyrn this slider
00:27:393 (1) - delete this and replace this two circles
00:49:164 (4) - Again straighten
00:53:450 (5) - Remake this to that https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3293442
00:57:736 (4) - Again straighten
01:20:878 (1) - Can you remake this to that https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3293452
01:49:164 (9) - NC here

NORMAL:
00:33:050 (1) - Remake this to that: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3293460

It's all Good luck And Get ranked!

Ps: Sorry for bad english XD
Topic Starter
SD CARD

NISSAN001 wrote:

Hi form #Modreqs

Map is so cool but i see some problems

INSANE:
00:23:621 (3) - straighten this slider remapped the intro pretty much
00:25:164 (2) - Straighyrn this slider
00:27:393 (1) - delete this and replace this two circles
00:49:164 (4) - Again straighten
00:53:450 (5) - Remake this to that https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3293442 i like the soft shape more <-<
00:57:736 (4) - Again straighten ok
01:20:878 (1) - Can you remake this to that https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3293452 ok
01:49:164 (9) - NC here ok

NORMAL:
00:33:050 (1) - Remake this to that: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3293460

It's all Good luck And Get ranked!

Ps: Sorry for bad english XD
Thank you very much for the mod :D
[Nii-san]
Hi! My little mod :P

Insane
Maybe:
In Timing Point Change sampleset to soft
00:44:021 add Timing section, make sampleset Normal
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