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Nardoxyribonucleic

mrdumpling64 wrote:

Hi from mod queue

Kantan

00:42:585 (71) - spin? I would prefer a 8/1 break here for simplicity.
01:29:503 (108,109,110,111,112) - what about dkddk, kdddk or kddkk? d k d k d could follow the background snares in a way better.

Futsuu

00:42:585 (71) - spin? same as Kantan
00:50:480 (80) - any reason why you have d here? I don't think it fits anything. Better to move to 00:52:285 (83) - where there is actually a vocal. fixed

Muzukashi

00:28:149 (64,65,67) - finishers? The beats are not strong enough to use finishes.
00:52:285 (114,115,116) - kdd? I think monochrome triplets would be better for Muzukashii.
01:02:209 (137,138) - ddk for vocal deep? ^

Oni

01:03:788 (205) - unnecessary, suggest remove? Remain unchanged because there is a beat.

I know this mod is short so I starred.

Hopefully it helps, good luck.
Thanks for your mod and star~ :)
Coro
Taiko mod~
All are suggestions unless in red.

[Kantan]
HP -> 3, CS -> 4, AR - > 3
00:31:758 (40) - change to k maybe, so the pitch drop to 00:32:660 (41) is noticable
00:42:585 (54) - change to d, it's the same pitch as 00:40:781 (52)
00:52:510 (60) - change to k, it will be more consistent with the previous one

[Futsuu]
HP -> 4, CS -> 4, AR - > 4
00:03:563 (6) - suggest deleting this, since it sounds more consistent without it, up to you though
00:07:397 - add a d here, the drums coming in here shouldn't be ignored
00:57:360 (93,95) - change these to K, it plays fine and looks aesthetically better~
01:34:916 (166) - delete and start the spinner at 01:34:916, otherwise the spinner is not starting on beat (it'll match Kantan too this way)

[Muzukashii]
CS ->4
00:57:360 (127,129) - change these to K, like in Futsuu
00:58:826 (130,131) - try deleting these two, then use ddd kkk, it'll fits the drums better~ see if you prefer this
01:34:916 (235) - delete and start spinner here, like Futsuu

[Oni]
00:12:585 (41,42,43) - if you wat to strictly follow the melody then here it's dkkk in 1/6 snap
01:34:916 (354) - delete and start spinner here, like above

good luck with rank~
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

Coro wrote:

Taiko mod~
All are suggestions unless in red.

[Kantan]
HP -> 3, CS -> 4, AR - > 3 Concerning circle size and approach rate, as it is a Taiko set, there are no differences in playing. So keeping them as 5 is fine. About the HP drain, since I have made the diff easy, 4 would be okay imo.
00:31:758 (40) - change to k maybe, so the pitch drop to 00:32:660 (41) is noticable Retained for pattern consistency as 00:17:322 (20) -
00:42:585 (54) - change to d, it's the same pitch as 00:40:781 (52) fixed
00:52:510 (60) - change to k, it will be more consistent with the previous one As the pitch of the background sound there is lower than 00:48:901 (57) - , it'd be better to use d.

[Futsuu]
HP -> 4, CS -> 4, AR - > 4 Refer to Kantan. Also, the HP is already 4.
00:03:563 (6) - suggest deleting this, since it sounds more consistent without it, up to you though I followed the music there.
00:07:397 - add a d here, the drums coming in here shouldn't be ignored I prefer a 4/1 break there.
00:57:360 (93,95) - change these to K, it plays fine and looks aesthetically better~ Remain unchanged since the current one is simpler.
01:34:916 (166) - delete and start the spinner at 01:34:916, otherwise the spinner is not starting on beat (it'll match Kantan too this way) The current pattern matches the vocal there. I did it in Kantan because it is easier to play.

[Muzukashii]
CS ->4 Refer to Kantan.
00:57:360 (127,129) - change these to K, like in Futsuu fixed
00:58:826 (130,131) - try deleting these two, then use ddd kkk, it'll fits the drums better~ see if you prefer this Using single notes could emphasize the vocal in a way better.
01:34:916 (235) - delete and start spinner here, like Futsuu same as Futsuu

[Oni]
00:12:585 (41,42,43) - if you wat to strictly follow the melody then here it's dkkk in 1/6 snap I prefer using no 1/6 notes to maintain its simplicity. Also, it would be a bit weird to use 1/6 notes in only one part.
01:34:916 (354) - delete and start spinner here, like above same as Futsuu

good luck with rank~
Thanks for your mod~ :)
Gemu-
Hi Nardoxyribonucleic :), From Game's Queue

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)

[Kantan]

00:08:300 - Change to k? for the pattern
00:17:322 - ^
00:41:683 - Change to k?
00:52:510 - Change to k because this part and this part 00:48:901 - are equal, the sound of music does not change in those parts
01:22:736 - Add a d? is better and more convenient
01:27:698 - Change to k for follow the pattern

[Futsuu]

00:41:683 - Change to k?
00:47:999 - Change to k for the pattern
00:54:089 - Change to k for this combination kd k dk
01:09:653 - Change to d?, for the pattern
01:24:089 - ^
01:27:698 - Change to k?

[Muzukashii]

00:27:021 - Change to k? for this combination of patterns http://puu.sh/e3VH5/fab5d14122.png
00:41:457 - Change to k? dk kd
01:34:014 - Change to d?

[Oni]

You forgot to remove the Widescreen Support http://puu.sh/e3WgN/f54fe5cf32.jpg

00:46:871 - Change to k for this combination http://puu.sh/e3Wzv/3f0d8de67e.jpg
00:55:217 - Change to k? is better
01:05:931 - ^


Good Beatmap! I hope what my mod has helped you :D Bye Nardoxyribonucleic :D
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

game rock wrote:

Hi Nardoxyribonucleic :), From Game's Queue

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)

[Kantan]

00:08:300 - Change to k? for the pattern d would be better since it has a lower pitch than 00:10:104 (11) -
00:17:322 - ^ d would be fine since it has the same vocal pitch as 00:16:420 (19) -
00:41:683 - Change to k? same as ^
00:52:510 - Change to k because this part and this part 00:48:901 - are equal, the sound of music does not change in those parts The background sound at 00:48:901 (57) - is higher-pitched than 00:52:510 (60) - , so d could fit.
01:22:736 - Add a d? is better and more convenient I placed the break intentionally because of the relatively long pattern at 01:18:675 (94,95,96,97,98) -
01:27:698 - Change to k for follow the pattern Retained since the vocal is low-pitched.

[Futsuu]

00:41:683 - Change to k? same as Kantan
00:47:999 - Change to k for the pattern d could result in a better emphasis of the high-pitched sound at 00:48:901 (77) -
00:54:089 - Change to k for this combination kd k dk same as 00:41:683 -
01:09:653 - Change to d?, for the pattern k would be better since it has the same vocal pitch as 01:08:751 (117) -
01:24:089 - ^ ^
01:27:698 - Change to k? same as Kantan

[Muzukashii]

00:27:021 - Change to k? for this combination of patterns http://puu.sh/e3VH5/fab5d14122.png As it has the same vocal pitch as 00:27:247 (62) - , d d would sound better.
00:41:457 - Change to k? dk kd similar to ^
01:34:014 - Change to d? I mapped the high-pitched background sound with k.

[Oni]

You forgot to remove the Widescreen Support http://puu.sh/e3WgN/f54fe5cf32.jpg fixed

00:46:871 - Change to k for this combination http://puu.sh/e3Wzv/3f0d8de67e.jpg Remain unchanged since it has the same vocal pitch as 00:47:097 (144) -
00:55:217 - Change to k? is better Keeping the note as d could result in a better emphasis of the higher-pitched vocal at 00:56:119 (169) -
01:05:931 - ^ ddd could produce a better contrast to the high-pitched vocal among 01:04:916 (209,210,211) -


Good Beatmap! I hope what my mod has helped you :D Bye Nardoxyribonucleic :D
Thanks for your mod~ :)
- Love1yV1ruS -
QAQ I forgot!!!! And this is my mod...
Sooooo sorry ...

Oni
00:03:788 (11) - k follows the music imo
00:11:006 (33) - ^
00:48:901 (149) - ummm... idk why this note appears here, maybe delete?
00:56:570 (170,171) - i get the idea here, but i think it is unnatural here. may delete and add d here - 00:56:909 to follow 00:57:698 (175,176,177) - and 00:58:600 (179,180,181) - ?
01:02:322 (196) - d
01:27:585 (324) - k ... cuz ddkkkdd is not a good stream imo.
01:03:788 (203) - may delete..
01:13:488 (252,253,254,255,256,257,258) - 'd kkd kkd' quite strange to me. I find a better one: 'kkd kkd d'.

Muzu
00:03:788 (9) - k
00:11:006 (26) - k
00:19:578 (45) - k
00:48:901 (107) - delete
01:03:112 (141,142) - ctrl+g
01:06:269 (150) - delete make this more clear.
01:10:330 (165,166) - ctrl+g
01:11:232 add d and 01:11:683 add d. Cuz vocal here, no reason to leave it blank. (since you dont make 01:18:450 blank)
01:20:706 (197) - delete
01:26:119 - add d would be better
01:31:081 (228) - d and delete 01:31:307 (229) -

Futsuu
00:48:675 (76,77) - make them here: 00:48:450
01:00:630 (98) - 01:15:066 (129) - 01:07:848 (115) - 01:22:285 (146) - try finish?
01:31:081 (161) - d and delete 01:31:307 (162) -

Kantan
01:00:630 (68) - 01:07:848 (79) - 01:15:066 (88) - 01:22:285 (100) - try finish?

Sorry QAQ.... Good luck~! :)
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

- Love1yV1ruS - wrote:

QAQ I forgot!!!! And this is my mod...
Sooooo sorry ...

Oni
00:03:788 (11) - k follows the music imo d could follow the pitch drop in a way better.
00:11:006 (33) - ^ ^
00:48:901 (149) - ummm... idk why this note appears here, maybe delete? This note appears because of the high-pitched background sound.
00:56:570 (170,171) - i get the idea here, but i think it is unnatural here. may delete and add d here - 00:56:909 to follow 00:57:698 (175,176,177) - and 00:58:600 (179,180,181) - ? Retained to follow both the vocal and the snares.
01:02:322 (196) - d The vocal pitch is the same across the triplet, so kkk could fit well imo.
01:27:585 (324) - k ... cuz ddkkkdd is not a good stream imo. d would be better since snare sound is absent.
01:03:788 (203) - may delete.. Remain unchanged to map the beat there.
01:13:488 (252,253,254,255,256,257,258) - 'd kkd kkd' quite strange to me. I find a better one: 'kkd kkd d'. I think the current pattern could result in a better flow.

Muzu
00:03:788 (9) - k Refer to Oni
00:11:006 (26) - k ^
00:19:578 (45) - k d would be fine since the vocal pitch is still low.
00:48:901 (107) - delete Refer to Oni
01:03:112 (141,142) - ctrl+g d k could accompany the increase in vocal pitch there.
01:06:269 (150) - delete make this more clear. Retained for a reasonable complexity.
01:10:330 (165,166) - ctrl+g same as 01:03:112 (141,142) -
01:11:232 add d and 01:11:683 add d. Cuz vocal here, no reason to leave it blank. (since you dont make 01:18:450 blank) added d at 01:11:232 -
01:20:706 (197) - delete same as 01:06:269 (150) -
01:26:119 - add d would be better no change to maintain a better spread from Futsuu to Oni.
01:31:081 (228) - d and delete 01:31:307 (229) - deleted the note.

Futsuu
00:48:675 (76,77) - make them here: 00:48:450 The current note placement could follow the more prominent sounds there.
01:00:630 (98) - 01:15:066 (129) - 01:07:848 (115) - 01:22:285 (146) - try finish? The use of small notes could keep the diff easier.
01:31:081 (161) - d and delete 01:31:307 (162) - deleted the note.

Kantan
01:00:630 (68) - 01:07:848 (79) - 01:15:066 (88) - 01:22:285 (100) - try finish? same as Futsuu

Sorry QAQ.... Good luck~! :)
Thanks for your mod~ :)
tasuke912
Hi.
[ General]
  1. consider to set HP to recommended numerical value in current rule.
  2. probably moving BG to (0,120).
[ Kantan]
  1. 01:31:307 (112) - Although this diff seems focusing to the vocals, this note doesn't fit to it well.
    could be moved to 1/2 tick left and changed to d note, 1/2 pattern is not recommended in Kantan, but low bpm song and it has enough break, so it makes sense.
[ Futsuu]
  1. 00:57:360 (93,95) - Consider to add Finish, K-k is harder to read than KK for beginner players. This pattern is allowable in low bpm songs.
  2. 01:08:525 - 01:08:525 - add notes for better consistency with 01:01:081 (99,100,101,102,103) - and better spread.
  3. 01:22:961 - 01:23:638 - ^
  4. 01:27:698 (156) - This 4/1 break seems sudden. Consider adding some notes. It also lead to improve the difficulty spread imo.
[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:05:367 - add k for better spread? Between M and O is little huge.
  2. 00:11:457 - 00:11:683 - add d, 00:12:360 (28) - delete, and 00:12:585 - kkk 1/4 triplet to follow the melody? just suggestion.
  3. 00:23:863 - add kat for better spread?
  4. 00:33:337 - d ^
  5. 00:49:352 (111,112,113) - dkk would more fit to the vocal imo.
[ Oni]
  1. 00:12:585 (41,42,43) - why not 1/6?
  2. 00:32:886 (107) - delete, same as 00:18:450 -.
  3. 00:56:457 (170,171,172,173) - 4-plet seems too sudden. I'd recommend deleting 00:56:683 (172) -, or adding d at 00:56:345 - for avoiding it.
  4. 01:00:630 - 1.1x is not needed to me.
  5. 01:27:585 (326) - delete? kkkdd looks out of place a little.
Call me back when you are done. (¦3[▓▓]
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

tasuke912 wrote:

Hi.
[ General]
  1. consider to set HP to recommended numerical value in current rule. fixed
  2. probably moving BG to (0,120). fixed
[ Kantan]
  1. 01:31:307 (112) - Although this diff seems focusing to the vocals, this note doesn't fit to it well.
    could be moved to 1/2 tick left and changed to d note, 1/2 pattern is not recommended in Kantan, but low bpm song and it has enough break, so it makes sense. Deleted 01:29:954 - instead. Hope it sounds more natural.
[ Futsuu]
  1. 00:57:360 (93,95) - Consider to add Finish, K-k is harder to read than KK for beginner players. This pattern is allowable in low bpm songs. changed 00:57:021 (92,94) - to k k instead.
  2. 01:08:525 - 01:08:525 - add notes for better consistency with 01:01:081 (99,100,101,102,103) - and better spread. fixed
  3. 01:22:961 - 01:23:638 - ^ ^
  4. 01:27:698 (156) - This 4/1 break seems sudden. Consider adding some notes. It also lead to improve the difficulty spread imo. ^
[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:05:367 - add k for better spread? Between M and O is little huge. fixed
  2. 00:11:457 - 00:11:683 - add d, 00:12:360 (28) - delete, and 00:12:585 - kkk 1/4 triplet to follow the melody? just suggestion. Hmm... No change here because I would like to keep the pattern and break similar to 00:04:239 -
  3. 00:23:863 - add kat for better spread? added at 00:24:315 -
  4. 00:33:337 - d ^ Retained for break consistency as 00:18:901 -
  5. 00:49:352 (111,112,113) - dkk would more fit to the vocal imo. Good idea, but I would like to emphasize the instrument at 00:49:803 (112) - as well by ddk.

    Additional changes: added some notes at 00:59:954 - , 01:13:939 - , 01:27:021 and 01:33:563 - for a better spread with Oni.
[ Oni]
  1. 00:12:585 (41,42,43) - why not 1/6? This would be a bit awkward as there are no other 1/6 notes in the rest of the difficulty.
  2. 00:32:886 (107) - delete, same as 00:18:450 -. fixed
  3. 00:56:457 (170,171,172,173) - 4-plet seems too sudden. I'd recommend deleting 00:56:683 (172) -, or adding d at 00:56:345 - for avoiding it. Applied the former suggestion.
  4. 01:00:630 - 1.1x is not needed to me. fixed
  5. 01:27:585 (326) - delete? kkkdd looks out of place a little. ^
Call me back when you are done. (¦3[▓▓]
Thanks for the mod tasuke~ :)
JUDYDANNY
I'm Sorry to late and finally I can check.
[Kantan]

  • Only 1 finisher lol.
    00:15:518 - ~ 00:42:585 - , 38combo with 2/1 dense lol.
    But it seems to be better for structure. No problem.
  1. 01:14:164 – add k? or 00:27:247 – remove + 00:29:051 – change to k ? adjustment the breaking. Prefer to former. lol
  2. 00:51:608 (1,2) – change to k? synthesizer pitch being low 00:51:608 (1,2,3) -.
[Futsuu]

  • d( ・∀・)b
[Muzukashii]
  1. 01:31:307 – add d ? Backs sound well and there’re all the on-beat notes on kiai times. I guess, some players feel to weird.
[Oni]
  1. From 01:15:518 (2,3,4) - 01:16:420 (5,6,7) -, 01:18:224 (13,14,15) -, begins 3 times ddk , plays…not the best?
    01:16:645 – change to k? be a consistency with other place, or 01:15:743 –change to k instead for variation?
  2. 01:27:472 – change to d? to focus the drums sounds better. Same as 00:11:683 -.
Set seems good~~  :oops:
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

JUDYDANNY wrote:

I'm Sorry to late and finally I can check.
[Kantan]

  • Only 1 finisher lol.
    00:15:518 - ~ 00:42:585 - , 38combo with 2/1 dense lol.
    But it seems to be better for structure. No problem. Deleted 00:28:600 (35,36) - for a 4/1 break :3
  1. 01:14:164 – add k? or 00:27:247 – remove + 00:29:051 – change to k ? adjustment the breaking. Prefer to former. lol Hmm... The pattern would be a bit long if I add a note at 01:14:164 - ...
  2. 00:51:608 (1,2) – change to k? synthesizer pitch being low 00:51:608 (1,2,3) -. fixed
[Futsuu]

  • d( ・∀・)b
[Muzukashii]
  1. 01:31:307 – add d ? Backs sound well and there’re all the on-beat notes on kiai times. I guess, some players feel to weird. fixed
[Oni]
  1. From 01:15:518 (2,3,4) - 01:16:420 (5,6,7) -, 01:18:224 (13,14,15) -, begins 3 times ddk , plays…not the best
    01:16:645 – change to k? be a consistency with other place, or 01:15:743 –change to k instead for variation? Fixed the former suggestion.
  2. 01:27:472 – change to d? to focus the drums sounds better. Same as 00:11:683 -. I would prefer keeping this for variation and reflecting the vocal.
Set seems good~~  :oops:
Thanks for the mod JuDa~ :)
tasuke912
yeah, Kantan sounds more natural.
Every diffs seem mapped nicely, gogo!

Bubbled!
JUDYDANNY
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Qualifed!
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic
Thanks both of you~ ヾ(๑>◡<)ノ"
Xinely
Grats nardo ><

Aji aji ヾ(๑>◡<)ノ"
[R]
gud mep (y)
Charlotte
gratz :)
BlackHairEND
Congratz!! :) :)
Bara-
Gratz
Oni should have been OD10 though. To follow the ridiculous not-lenient timing window from Love Live! School Idol Festival

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-Sh1n1-
Gratz senpai :3
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