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meii18
To Kagamine Ren : I received the kudos from this map 2months ago so I denied my kudos from my bubble pop post ;w;
btw update yf's diff and let me know (:
Topic Starter
Karen
l?
i have updated it already。
meii18
Ok (:

ReBubbled
-Nya-
Quick recheck

  1. 01:46:043 (1) - In Hard, potentially off-screen slider. Please, just to be safe, move the bump of the slider or the entire slider a bit to the left.
  2. 00:15:653 (1) - In the Insane, I think the clap on the head of this slider might be a mistake, cuz it sounds a bit out of place. If I'm wrong, then just ignore this.

Call me back~
Forum PM me please.
-Nya-
Everything seems fine now.
Have my heart, ren-san~!

Qualified~
Topic Starter
Karen
thank you nya~
Lavender
神麻婆
Len
good
Adol Christin
时隔这么久终于rank了,gj
mingmichael
just noticed that it's already qualified when i'm going to check the ctb........ i think im too late to check the ctb ;___; huft..

anyway congrats! :D
Rakuen
飞!

grats!
meii18
Congrats Kagamine Ren :3 lol rhythm incarnate now
IamKwaN
Greetings, your map has to be taken away from the Qualified section.

Insane

  1. Several wrongly snapped objects in the prelude:
    1. 00:10:394 - this isn't 1/6 snapped, should be http://puu.sh/hzP3I/cbcacb9b03.jpg instead.
    2. 00:16:628 (4) - ^
    3. 00:18:965 (2) - ^
    4. 00:29:095 (2) - ^

Hard

  1. Several wrongly snapped objects in the prelude:
    1. 00:10:394 - this isn't 1/6 snapped, should be http://puu.sh/hzP3I/cbcacb9b03.jpg instead.
    2. 00:16:628 (4) - ^
    3. 00:18:965 (2) - ^
    4. 00:29:095 (2) - ^
  2. 01:59:095 (1) - The way of interpreting the background music for this slider is quite incomprehensible. The snare at 01:59:095 - gives the esthesis of halting instead of ongoing, starting the 1/8 slider at 01:59:679 - makes more sense with the vocal and synthesizer as adjuvant.

Normal

  1. 00:31:043 (4) - Although we understand the intention of normal being harder than the average level, this circle stacking behind of a slider tail is still way too confusing as a novoice difficulty. Most importantly, the high distance snap over objects are solely enough for the spread purpose.
Mods are of course highly appreciated.
Good luck with the requalification.

###C
MirinH
人格惨遭dq
Rakuen

IamKwaN wrote:

Normal

  1. 00:31:043 (4) - Although we understand the intention of normal being harder than the average level, this circle stacking behind of a slider tail is still way too confusing as a novoice difficulty. Most importantly, the high distance snap over objects are solely enough for the spread purpose.
Fixed, thanks for mods!

Update #2: http://puu.sh/hBNWr/88d38c3c82.osu (Increased AR 5 > 5.5)
Topic Starter
Karen
all fixed!
and changed Insane's AR from 8.5 to 9 as some players' request. oh okay still 8.5.
MaKappa
love this song and the map. <3 <3 <3
Koiyuki
  1. Just some complaints.
  2. My personal suggestions.
  3. Highly recommended.
  4. Unrankable, you have to fix it.

Easy
  1. 00:42:147 (5) - nc
Rakuen's Normal
  1. 00:20:329 (1,2,3) - 感觉这里的节奏对新人有点难抓吧,我还是建议换成和前面一样的,或者后面00:23:446 (1,2,3) - 那样的也行
  2. 00:26:563 (1,2,3) - ^
yf's Hard
  1. 00:10:394 (2,3) - 这种梗我不建议放在hard里面,索性就不要去跟比较好
  2. 00:30:069 (5) - 延长一拍?
Insane
  1. 00:43:705 (1,1,1,1) - 这梗我比较喜欢,相比00:37:472 (1,1,1,1) - 这个就我了个草了
  2. 00:51:108 (7,8,1) - 1应该再拉远一点
  3. 01:36:985 (2,3) - stack
  4. 01:53:056 (7,8) - 这俩滑条能长得差不多一点吗
说一下总体感受吧……
normal sv有点大,别的还行
yf的hard单看质量的确不错,但是我个人认为难度有些偏高,有一些对hard来说并不是好读好处理的梗;
insane打起来应该还行,但是看起来排列是有点乱的,另外感觉节奏的空档比较多,打击感不是很好,可以多用一些滑条来补充的,具体可以参照铃爷的千本樱的节奏下法
目前在我看来这图还是不太适合rebubble,抱歉。
Topic Starter
Karen

Minakami Yuki wrote:

  1. Just some complaints.
  2. My personal suggestions.
  3. Highly recommended.
  4. Unrankable, you have to fix it.

Easy
  1. 00:42:147 (5) - nc
Insane
  1. 00:43:705 (1,1,1,1) - 这梗我比较喜欢,相比00:37:472 (1,1,1,1) - 这个就我了个草了
  2. 00:51:108 (7,8,1) - 1应该再拉远一点
  3. 01:36:985 (2,3) - stack
  4. 01:53:056 (7,8) - 这俩滑条能长得差不多一点吗
说一下总体感受吧……
normal sv有点大,别的还行
yf的hard单看质量的确不错,但是我个人认为难度有些偏高,有一些对hard来说并不是好读好处理的梗;
insane打起来应该还行,但是看起来排列是有点乱的,另外感觉节奏的空档比较多,打击感不是很好,可以多用一些滑条来补充的,具体可以参照铃爷的千本樱的节奏下法
目前在我看来这图还是不太适合rebubble,抱歉。
那个3/4滑条不知道咋改就算了。
去年捣鼓的图了= =现在大概知道这图要这么改了,但是听了几万遍这歌,耳朵都长茧,啥时候有兴趣了再改吧
q033280876

Kagamine Ren wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年6月2日 at 16:42:30

Artist: Hanatan
Title: Senbonzakura
Tags: hatsune miku 初音ミク yf_bmp rakuen KurousaP Vocaloid 黒うさP 百狐千樂
BPM: 154
Filesize: 6174kb
Play Time: 02:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.53 stars, 172 notes)
  2. Insane (4.31 stars, 524 notes)
  3. Rakuen's Normal (2.43 stars, 275 notes)
  4. yf's Hard (3.53 stars, 405 notes)
Download: Hanatan - Senbonzakura
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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[GB]Rush_FTK
Marked, will post mod no more two days. finished

Mod
[General]

+- Suggestion:
- I still think a normal mapset have a hard icon (since the difficult more than 2.25 stars) is unsuitable. Maybe this problem will become one of the QAT's (again) dis-quality reason.I suggest that make it easier that around 2.3 stars at least.

+- Comment(just some chatting):
- 以后接mod前打死也要先听一下歌,看到人哥做的和花碳唱的头一昏我就接了。这歌声唱的也忒爷们了。

[Easy]

+- Opinion:
- 00:01:628 (1) This slider's former part is ok but the latter part's drum sound seemed not catch correctly. To tell you the truch, i don't know how to solve it, maybe give up catch 00:02:212's downbeat, let this slider's ball change direction at 00:02:163 (1/8 snap division) is a little better?
- 01:05:524 (3) Whether you want catch "na" or "no" words there, this slider's red point is still not correct.let the ball change direction at 01:06:108 is better.
- 01:16:433 (1) I believe that follow voice there is better, because the background music is not obvious. In this part, the singer sings 4 words, respectively in 01:16:433, 01:16:725, 01:17:017 and 01:17:212.so try to use slider's red point to proformance that.
- 02:04:744 (3) The voice's pitch relevancy is simply down here. so i think this slider is a little weird.

[Rakuen's Normal]

+- Suggestion:
- 00:23:446 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) So when i play this part, i think there is in a mess. I really don't know how to play this part.I consider this part should be remap. you may have a clearly defination about what note you should catch and what you shouldn't.

+- Opinion:
- 00:01:628 (1,2,3) I will point out the problem in the first slider as a example. Firstly, i think the drum sound in 00:01:920 is as same important the before one and the later one,since you have picked them up.no reason not to pick this one. Secondly, the slider shaped with a line looks too simple, maybe reshape it slinky to let the beatmap looks more clearly and beautiful is a good choice, or you can let the slider turn back at 00:01:920.
- 00:04:744 (1,2) The latter one's truck is understandable, but the former one let me confused. I don't know what sound is your red point following.
- 00:09:225 you have followed this kind of sound in 00:08:446 (2,5), It's strange that now following this sound. (or delete note in 00:08:446 (2,5)), 00:15:495 have the same problem.
- 00:13:121 (5,6,7) I don't know if it's a little hard for just a normal diff...(00:16:238 (5,6,7) is same)
- 00:17:796 (2,3) The slider in 00:17:212 (1) begin in a downbeat so it's ok, but the slider in 00:17:991 (3) begin in a normal sound (relative to 00:17:796 (2)) semmed a little weird. You can replace them to a long slider.
- 00:21:108 (3,4) When test playing, i feel strange about gap between these two note,add a circle in 00:21:303 to follow main piano sound is better i think.
- 00:37:472 (4,5) So the voice's PR in 00:37:472 (4) is nearly same; 00:38:251 (5) 's "ko","ka" is divided clearly. Yet you can keep 00:37:472 (4)'s slider but reshape to a curve shape. 00:38:251 (5) must be divided to two circle.
- 00:45:069 (7) I think give up this note is better so you can emphasize "I","C","B","M".keep it as it was is also fine.
- 00:56:173 (5,6) this cover is a little hard...? It require a higher skills to read map, maybe it's too hard for just beginner player?
- 00:59:290 (5,6) Change direation like that is better. (screenshot). the voice's pitch relevancy change is become higher and higher in 00:59:290 (5), lower and lower in 00:59:679 (6).
- 01:03:186 (7) It's easily to know that the sound in 01:03:186 have end up at 01:03:381, and the durm sound not only have a more closely related to 01:03:965 (1) this part not former part, but also same as 01:03:770. so in order to keep balance,I have a idea:(screenshot) (02:17:991 (7) is similar.)
- 01:22:861 (1) a weird Spinner that i totally don't know what it's following, and why it's end up suddenly.
- 02:03:186 (1,2,3) When test playing i notice that there maybe a little hard for beginner player, but i don't know how to solve it. ;w;

[yf's Hard]

+- Opinion:
- 00:30:361 leave there in a gap on purpose? I perfer add a circle in (272,100) to following this stream piano sound.
- 00:38:640 (3) like normal diff, i think these two sound have no logical combination. break them to two circle here.
- 00:52:861 (4) delete this note in more suit for voice's rhythm.
- 00:56:757 (1) have a slider when no sound in 00:56:952 ~ 00:57:342 is strange. I perfer not blanket there,turn to use a circle in (407,352) at 00:56:757 (to keep balance with 00:56:563 (7)) and a slider in 00:57:342 ~ 00:57:634 is better.
- 01:06:303 (7) break it to two circle at (prv.) start location and end location is better. It seemed that 01:06:887 (8) is same as sound in 01:06:629, and they are all start part of next sentence. Moreover,the voice in 01:06:303 is stop at 01:06:498 very clearly. so break can proformance the part division more clearly.
- 01:37:472 (5,6,7,8) Keep it as it was is fine enough but i believe you can arrange them better.(a ideascreenshot)
- 01:53:056 (9) NC here? To show this part is a gap filling part.

[Insane]

+- Opinion:
- OD can increasing to 8 or higher since it's already top diff.
- 00:03:965 (1,1) I think these two sound are same (at least they are all downbeat). so keep same SV plz.
- 00:05:037 (2,3) Umm.. I think you can swap these two note's location there. keep it as it was is also fine. (00:05:816 (2,3) are same)
- 00:13:316 (5,6,7,8,9,10) rearrangement a little to let it more suit for pitch relevancy change. screenshot
- 00:14:485 (2,3,4,5,2,3,4,5) a little weird that just let mouse move by a straight line. reshape it's to a fold line or curve line is better?
- 00:18:186 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) There's pitch relevancy is change in a regular range. so i have a idea to reshape like this (screenshot) or this (screenshot)
- 00:22:666 (6) NC here since this is new part's begin.
- 00:23:835 (2,3,4,5) reshape to a curve since you use a curve truck in the same rhythm(00:24:615 (2,3,4,5)).
- 01:15:848 (4,5,6,7,8,9) This part's background sound is too slightly. especially 01:15:946 (5,7,9), these sound a coverd by just a soft hit sound. so it isn't necessary to follow these sound. Followed voice in this part is better.If you still want to follow background music,delete 01:15:946 (5,7,9) at least, they are really too slightly that i can't even heard in 25% playback rate.
- 01:35:718 (3) I think you can ignore this hi-hit sound to make sure the whole beatmap proformance main rhythm perfectly.(Delete this note)
- 01:47:017 (4) Only follow voice there is better, because the voice is much more obvious than background music.(Delete this note)
- 01:54:615 (2) Reverse(Ctrl + G)? the pitch relevancy is lower there.(but that cause the mouse truck weird...i'm not sure)

osu need more Hanatan ~>.<~
Hope your ranked soon. but semmed still need a long way to go.
Good Luck and thanks to bring so classical music to osuer :)
Xinely
Easy :
00:49:939 (3) - 加finish吧,音乐声音是cymbal
01:52:277 (3) - 同上
01:53:835 (1) - 漏掉了finish

Rakuen :
00:10:783 (7) - i dont hear a strong drum 00:10:004 - like here so i can suggest to remove this circle
00:13:316 - add whistle? piano sounds strong, also can add clap for 00:13:511 - because the drum
00:25:783 (6) - same as above
first, im thinking that this diff has a huge spread from Easy because much of 1/2 notes + big spacing, i would suggest to remove more 1/2 that can be removed example 00:59:095 (4) - 01:17:796 (4) - 01:41:173 (6) - etc, im sure you can find it by yourself because im worrying to touch your style

yf :
00:38:640 (3) - dont map cymbal with slider's tail,we know already it mostly makes DQ so you can change with 1/2 slider and circle to replace it
00:50:718 (9) - literally same as above, can remove repeat and then add 2 circles
01:22:472 (2) - same as above
01:00:459 (8) - drum clap at repeat sounds no really good for me because the music is weak so no need strong hitsound for that. i would say remove clap and let it sounds with sampleset drum
02:02:796 (9) - 02:15:264 (9) - same as above
01:09:809 (2) - NC for anti jump pls
01:40:978 (3) - same as 00:38:640 (3) -
01:59:679 (1) - a bit worrying with this snap since the music is so ambiguous to follow, what i hear starts from 01:59:777 - , well i think if we want safer way, just make slider like Karen did in his Insane
02:18:478 (2,4) - hard to hear musics sound in here. i almost think these are overmap, i would say to remove or make triplet. to keep spread with Karen as well

Insane :
00:07:472 - just think transtition from 40% to 80% sounds a bit loud for me. i think use 50% better here
00:31:238 (1) - 漏掉了finish
00:36:887 (4,5,6) - 我觉得flow不太好滑,请试试这个https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3602937
01:06:692 (1) - 去掉NC,没什么作用
01:11:757 (1,1) - 这里为什么用SV changes?我个人感觉不太好,没什么强的声音
01:14:874 (1) - overlap看到不好,可以动到 384,152
01:49:939 (6) - 为了anti jump NC
01:57:731 - 为什么用绿线 0,80x? 00:55:394 (4) - 用 1,0x的,跟 00:55:394 (4) -不一样
yf_bmp
all fixed

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Title:Senbonzakura
TitleUnicode:千本桜
Artist:Hanatan
ArtistUnicode:花たん
Creator:Karen
Version:yf's Hard
Source:
Tags:hatsune miku 初音ミク yf_bmp rakuen KurousaP Vocaloid 黒うさP 百狐千樂
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388,82,106043,6,0,B|420:54|460:58|484:98|484:98|440:138,2,160,0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
303,58,107017,2,0,L|259:50,2,40,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,136,107407,1,4,0:0:0:0:
240,144,107504,1,4,0:0:0:0:
220,152,107602,5,4,1:0:0:0:
48,108,107991,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,232,108381,1,2,0:0:0:0:
98,280,108770,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,288,108965,1,0,0:3:0:0:
192,289,109160,2,0,P|177:325|183:364,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,320,109550,2,0,P|303:282|287:245,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,172,109939,2,0,L|48:180,2,160,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,128,111108,5,8,0:0:0:0:
164,252,111498,1,2,0:0:0:0:
334,300,111887,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,308,112082,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,308,112179,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,308,112277,2,0,P|256:345|250:384,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,340,112666,2,0,P|118:302|134:265,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,252,112959,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,252,113056,2,0,B|184:180|141:165|164:95,1,160,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,56,113640,1,4,0:3:0:0:
84,56,113835,5,4,1:0:0:0:
248,136,114225,1,8,0:0:0:0:
88,212,114615,1,10,0:0:0:0:
260,224,115004,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,236,115199,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,152,115394,2,0,P|156:108|176:70,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,48,115783,2,0,P|292:60|335:54,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,89,116173,2,0,P|390:128|396:186,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,204,116563,1,8,0:0:0:0:
508,108,116757,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,12,116952,5,8,0:0:0:0:
408,12,117147,1,12,0:0:0:0:
356,276,117537,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,192,117731,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,12,118121,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,184,118511,2,0,B|112:192|112:192|64:172,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,240,118900,1,8,0:0:0:0:
19,325,119095,6,0,B|143:317|95:385|223:377|223:377|276:345|271:301|228:265|207:301,1,360,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,300,120069,6,0,B|196:264|196:264|215:185,1,120,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,164,120459,2,0,L|228:80,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,24,120848,2,0,P|319:82|345:154,1,160,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
345,154,121433,1,2,0:0:0:0:
412,256,121628,2,0,P|451:265|493:298,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,304,122017,2,0,P|339:342|332:395,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,304,122407,2,0,P|180:340|123:340,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,328,122796,2,0,L|84:288,2,40,0|0|4,1:0|3:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
116,208,123186,6,0,B|195:189|195:189|231:201,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,224,123576,2,0,L|232:308,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,375,123965,2,0,P|319:317|345:245,1,160,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
345,244,124550,1,2,0:0:0:0:
412,144,124744,2,0,P|451:134|493:101,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,96,125134,2,0,P|339:57|332:4,1,80,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,95,125524,2,0,P|176:60|80:88,1,160,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
152,156,126108,1,0,1:0:0:0:
152,156,126205,1,0,1:0:0:0:
152,156,126303,6,0,B|168:236|168:236|155:272,1,120,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,288,126692,2,0,L|124:376,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,336,127082,2,0,P|282:295|356:320,1,160,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
432,364,127666,1,0,0:0:0:0:
504,248,127861,2,0,L|420:260,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,164,128251,2,0,L|396:176,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,96,128640,2,0,B|444:68|444:68|356:84,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,72,129030,1,0,1:0:0:0:
312,164,129225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
235,104,129420,6,0,P|178:114|127:85,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,60,129809,2,0,P|118:117|89:168,1,120,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,188,130199,2,0,P|121:177|172:206,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,232,130589,2,0,P|181:174|210:123,1,120,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,104,130978,5,4,0:0:0:0:
108,60,131173,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,188,131368,1,0,1:0:0:0:
192,232,131563,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,148,131757,5,2,0:0:0:0:
304,96,132147,1,0,1:0:0:0:
304,96,132342,1,0,1:0:0:0:
304,96,132537,6,0,B|316:132|316:132|297:211,1,120,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,228,132926,2,0,L|288:312,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,376,133316,2,0,P|193:318|167:246,1,160,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
166,245,133900,1,2,0:0:0:0:
71,159,134095,2,0,P|39:137|0:133,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,100,134485,2,0,P|167:60|151:24,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,96,134874,2,0,P|348:92|389:60,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,72,135264,2,0,L|428:112,2,40,0|0|4,1:0|3:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
396,192,135653,6,0,B|317:211|317:211|281:199,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,176,136043,2,0,L|280:92,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,25,136433,2,0,P|193:83|167:155,1,160,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
166,155,137017,1,2,0:0:0:0:
71,224,137212,2,0,P|39:246|0:250,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,284,137602,2,0,P|167:323|151:359,1,80,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,348,137991,2,0,P|368:336|448:380,1,160,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
352,252,138576,1,0,1:0:0:0:
352,252,138673,1,0,1:0:0:0:
352,252,138770,6,0,B|340:204|370:168|370:168|365:137,1,120,4|0,1:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
352,116,139160,2,0,L|344:32,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,88,139550,2,0,B|189:133|189:133|201:173|245:185|276:159,1,160,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
344,37,140134,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,160,140329,2,0,L|272:256,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,248,140718,2,0,L|420:152,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
345,300,141108,2,0,B|404:352|404:352|325:376,1,160,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
235,279,141692,1,0,0:0:0:0:
235,279,141887,6,0,P|178:269|127:298,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,324,142277,2,0,P|118:266|89:215,1,120,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,196,142666,2,0,P|121:206|172:177,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,152,143056,2,0,P|181:209|210:260,1,120,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,280,143446,5,4,0:0:0:0:
108,324,143640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,196,143835,1,0,1:0:0:0:
192,152,144030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,236,144225,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,144420,12,2,148121,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Karen

Rush_FTK wrote:

[Easy]

+- Opinion:
- 00:01:628 (1) This slider's former part is ok but the latter part's drum sound seemed not catch correctly. To tell you the truch, i don't know how to solve it, maybe give up catch 00:02:212's downbeat, let this slider's ball change direction at 00:02:163 (1/8 snap division) is a little better? Slider ball's direction doesnt make much sense...
- 01:05:524 (3) Whether you want catch "na" or "no" words there, this slider's red point is still not correct.let the ball change direction at 01:06:108 is better.^
- 01:16:433 (1) I believe that follow voice there is better, because the background music is not obvious. In this part, the singer sings 4 words, respectively in 01:16:433, 01:16:725, 01:17:017 and 01:17:212.so try to use slider's red point to proformance that. Following vocal here will make the rhythm harder, it's not suitable for an Easy
- 02:04:744 (3) The voice's pitch relevancy is simply down here. so i think this slider is a little weird. im not following vocal here

[Insane]

+- Opinion:
- OD can increasing to 8 or higher since it's already top diff. High OD kills players
- 00:03:965 (1,1) I think these two sound are same (at least they are all downbeat). so keep same SV plz. they are obviously different.
- 00:05:037 (2,3) Umm.. I think you can swap these two note's location there. keep it as it was is also fine. (00:05:816 (2,3) are same) different spacing will make the pattern confusing
- 00:13:316 (5,6,7,8,9,10) rearrangement a little to let it more suit for pitch relevancy change. screenshot your suggestion is not suitable for this diff's difficulty
- 00:14:485 (2,3,4,5,2,3,4,5) a little weird that just let mouse move by a straight line. reshape it's to a fold line or curve line is better? sometimes straight streams are also fun
- 00:18:186 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) There's pitch relevancy is change in a regular range. so i have a idea to reshape like this (screenshot) or this (screenshot) your suggestion is not suitable for this diff's difficulty
- 00:22:666 (6) NC here since this is new part's begin.
- 00:23:835 (2,3,4,5) reshape to a curve since you use a curve truck in the same rhythm(00:24:615 (2,3,4,5)). reworked here when remapping
- 01:15:848 (4,5,6,7,8,9) This part's background sound is too slightly. especially 01:15:946 (5,7,9), these sound a coverd by just a soft hit sound. so it isn't necessary to follow these sound. Followed voice in this part is better.If you still want to follow background music,delete 01:15:946 (5,7,9) at least, they are really too slightly that i can't even heard in 25% playback rate.
- 01:35:718 (3) I think you can ignore this hi-hit sound to make sure the whole beatmap proformance main rhythm perfectly.(Delete this note) i prefer my rhythm.
- 01:47:017 (4) Only follow voice there is better, because the voice is much more obvious than background music.(Delete this note) i want this feeling.(dunno how to explain)
- 01:54:615 (2) Reverse(Ctrl + G)? the pitch relevancy is lower there.(but that cause the mouse truck weird...i'm not sure) not sure what did you mean here, keep [/notice]
no reply=fixed

about normal:(lazy to use english so using chinese instead
00:23:446 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里没发现有什么问题,既然是Normal,节奏不能太满,所以该忽略的音要忽略,这里的处理是可以接受的

00:01:628 (1,2,3) - 即使我知道你什么意思,但是我觉得节奏和排列都没有什么问题,直不直是个人喜好问题。
00:04:744 (1,2) - 没看懂你说什么o.o 红线上不是好好的音么。。
00:09:225 - 都填太挤,都不填太简单,所以取舍了一下
00:16:238 (5,6,7) - 不难,滑条比圈简单很多
00:17:991 - 这里是normal sound?,并不是把
00:21:108 (3,4) - 还是音的取舍的问题
00:37:472 (4,5) - 看不懂你想表达什么,声音不一样就不能用一个形状的话那复制粘贴就没意义了
00:56:173 (5,6) - 这不难,光标都不用动
00:59:290 (5,6) - 这flow挺好的,改动没什么意义
01:03:186 - 这长音适合滑条
02:03:186 (1,2,3) - 不难,很基础的flow


Xinely's mods all fixed, Normal里删掉了很多note

thanks! ><
Xinely
blab
Topic Starter
Karen
waa thanks, i love you! :)
sodarose
I
01:13:316 (1) - 这个滑条的代码是不是有什么不对啊 重新拉过好像没什么问题了
02:12:537 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里不应该是对称的吗
Topic Starter
Karen
all fixed
Xinely
Reblab
HabiHolic
Ranked.
Fushimi Rio

T-Mac wrote:

为啥听起来像个男人?
Flask
= =
Modem
Gratz Karen~!
Misure
好好好
Arppr
May I ask a question about Approach Rate? Why 8.5 and not 9 for Insane? 4.25 stars is right up the AR9 alley.
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