Gamu wrote:

[wendao's Advanced]

・01:40:222 (1,2,3) - I feel very strange rhythm. You seem to be taking the main sound, but it ignores the snare sound of 01:40:597. It will lead to to loss of rhythm sense for beginner players in my opinion, so I'd like to recommend that you change the rhythm of the following image. This is better than the current rhythm. Also this will not be boring, it makes a really good rhythm. Well, I leave it to you :3
　1. Change the current 2/3 slider to 1/1 slider.
　2. Remove 01:41:159 (2).
　3. Add 1/1 slider from 01:40:784 to 01:41:159.

Okoratu wrote:

i liked your 2014 version of 03:16:222 - to 03:40:222 - more tbh

primrose wrote:

fuk my asshol i thot u were going to quit

1. Personally, I'd stick to the official metadata unless otherwise was requested by the artist. This is ambiguous and can be discussed, though.

1. 00:38:722 (3) - in comparison with the drums on white ticks, the reverse arrow has newarly nothing to follow resulting in an awkward feeling during gameplay.
   Note: 00:41:722 (3) - same.
2. 01:29:722 (3,4) - instead of 1/1 rhythm here, a slider like you did on 01:28:222 (1) - would make much more sense.01:28:222 (1) - just listen to this.
3. 03:24:753 (6) - sounds way better when finished at 03:25:222 - where a strong drum beat is. Also, this helps to keep 3/4 rhythm working here.

1. 02:35:417 (2,3) - this is touching accuracy-metre, and it doesn't look good.

1. 01:42:659 (6,7,8) - this looked a bit random and unintentional. Can you explain why the DS is changed here?

1. 01:07:222 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I'd go for increasing DS instead of decreasing here.
2. 01:42:659 (6,7,8) - same thing as the one listed in Insane.

Bakari wrote:

Sorry, but I've got a few concerns to mentione before it gets ranked. Stuff in bold is the most important.

[General]

1. Personally, I'd stick to the official metadata unless otherwise was requested by the artist. This is ambiguous and can be discussed, though. I'm not too sure about this either tbh.. But I think either one works because in the end, he is still the same person lol

[Normal]

1. 00:38:722 (3) - in comparison with the drums on white ticks, the reverse arrow has newarly nothing to follow resulting in an awkward feeling during gameplay. changed. completely.
   Note: 00:41:722 (3) - same. 私も
2. 01:29:722 (3,4) - instead of 1/1 rhythm here, a slider like you did on 01:28:222 (1) - would make much more sense.01:28:222 (1) - just listen to this. done.
3. 03:24:753 (6) - sounds way better when finished at 03:25:222 - where a strong drum beat is. Also, this helps to keep 3/4 rhythm working here. hmm... I'd say no to this, because I want to stay consistent with the emphasis in this part since the rhythm is difficult enough at it's own imo.

[Insane]

1. 01:42:659 (6,7,8) - this looked a bit random and unintentional. Can you explain why the DS is changed here? different drum sounds. kick kick snare. since snares sounds more powerful i decided to add an emphasis in this particular spot. i changed it I guess since it's an insane.. so it should play better now.

[Escapism]

1. 01:07:222 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I'd go for increasing DS instead of decreasing here. vocal note is going lower so this makes sense for me. regardless of how it plays, this pattern is logical imo.
2. 01:42:659 (6,7,8) - same thing as the one listed in Insane. kick kick snare. unchanged, however. It is 100% intentional

Megatron wrote:

I've never posted on a map before, but this map is so good it forced me to.

Escapism:
04:08:722 (1,2,1,2) - I think these should be spaced the same as the few before them, since the pitch doesn't change until...
04:09:472 (1,2,1,2) - these. These ones do make sense being closer together though.

Okoratu wrote:

insane
03:34:034 (7) - might be better off with a crtlg, because if you're following sliderpaths throughout this (which this was probably designed for) 6,7 make for some pretty weird movement

_orange wrote:

the twitter, sc, and instagram links for EDEN are wrong...
EDIT:
Twitter: https://twitter.com/iameden
Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/iameden/
Soundcloud: https://soundcloud.com/iameden