-[Koinuri] wrote:

Hi

[General]
You should remove the timing at the beginning since it's just half of the original, and move the 155BPM one to that place. Use .5x sv there instead.
I didn't list any because I didn't want to sound all nazi, but blankets can use some fix

fixed the timing! Feel free to point out blankets/nazi position modding - I'm too blind to notice them sometimes

[Easy]
00:10:509 (1) - The spinner starts at weird place, I prefer the Normal one. The music isn't building up yet so it feels out of place fixed!
00:18:638 - Why empty? It kills the clap pattern and doesn't sound that great in my opinion added a note
00:39:928 (1) - Change the slidertick here for the pause effect you're right
01:24:444 (3) - Remove clap here? Maybe change it to whistle. The music is still in a little break there and clap sounds like it's jumping ahead here ehh, I still prefer the clap here - works with the whistle/clap/whistle pattern imo
01:32:573 (2) - Different rhythm here, the 1/1 rhythm feels better here oh shoot how did I not notice that!

[Normal]
00:02:573 (2) - Notes under slider end is too difficult for Normal. At least that's what I was told for my map hmm, I tried to fix whatever I could easily...I'll see what others say about this too.
00:29:864 (2) - This one is inconsistent from the rest of the section, 00:31:412 (5), 00:36:057 (3), and 00:37:605 (6) for example. Removing the repeat should make it more consistent did something a bit different - made things all similar to the original slider
01:02:960 - Vocal starts here, add a circle here to follow the vocal better, something similar to what you did here 01:05:864 (3,4,1) fixed!
01:32:573 (2) - Same thing as Easy fixed!

[Hard]
I personally think some jumps are too hard for Hard this level. But then I don't know how recent Hards look like, I don't know what's allowed anymore hmm, i'll see what others say about it...i'm not used to anything under insane either rip ><
This is where my mod become super short because I don't know what to mod in harder difficulties, too much freedom
00:21:928 (2,3,4,5) - I find this jump too sudden. There aren't anything in music that suggests the increase either. Was caught off guard when I played it with DT decreased spacing, still slightly higher than its surroundings though
00:27:541 (1,2,3,4,5) - Just a small tip, slider is your friend when you're trying to make pretty maps

I'm probably just too ocd oh that's actually pretty neat - used it to tweak the spacing there!
00:29:864 (3,4,5) - Same as 00:21:928 (2,3,4,5) decreased spacing

[Insane]
00:24:057 (1) - Clap?
00:39:928 (1) - Whistle on the slider start (?) like 00:46:122 (1)
00:42:831 (1) - Whistle on the slider start for consistency
Sorry, I couldn't really find anything to mod in this diff

fixed all hitsounds in this difficulty, must've forgotten to add them and no, this is really helpful

Good luck!

1. You didn't choose nice combo colors. Feel it is quite simple. Try my idea for an example?
   
   Example

   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 148,145,200
   Combo2 : 14,165,10
   Combo3 : 249,123,218

2. Please remove Widescreen Support and Letterbox during breaks because your map didn't have SB and break. So they are useless.
3. The current size of BG isn't rankble. It should be 1366x768 or 1024x768
4. Remove soft-sliderslide5 from your beatmap folder. When you use slidertick, it isn't necessary to use sliderslide, because tick is just tick, no need to silent the moving-slider sound.
5. Add to tags: I wanna say that I'm not your brother right now! as an English source.
6. Add opening to tags, too.
7. For all difficults, the last spin 01:44:864 (1) - should really be ended at 01:47:186 - , current point time is wrong because there isn't sound

1. From 00:01:218 - to 00:12:444 - , you can hear, all we have is just voice. it is really calm, I sugguest discreasing the volumn to 30~40%. Won't be sensible if you used 80%. Also, i want to use whistle default to put this part, that would be nice. Current is quite silent and boring
2. 00:01:993 (2,3,6,7,1) - 1/2 rhythms here make me feel so bad, this is an Insane diff, it need being more difficult. I want to increase the distance among them, stacks aren't beautiful in this case
3. 00:04:315 (1) - Its appearance is so ugle for me. I guess you will like mine:
   
   Example

   
4. 00:11:477 (2) - Move it up and to the right abit will be better flow
5. 00:14:960 (4) - Move to 92/284 will be nicer pattern
6. 00:19:605 (7) - THis slider is quite weird since it overbeated at big tick. Also, 00:19:993 (8) - I really didn't hear any sound which this followed.
   I want to stop stream at 00:19:605 - , then creating a slider starting 00:19:799 - to 00:19:992 -
   
   Example

   
7. 00:21:928 (2) - I really didn't hear any drum-sound at head. Remove it pls, so bad
8. 00:25:993 (1) - Add finish will be more sensible instead
9. 00:29:089 (1) - ^ finish default
10. 00:30:444 (1) - Move the middle point to 68/204 to fit better
11. 00:31:993 (1) - Move the middle point to 308/108
12. 00:33:541 (1) - The appearance is ugly imo, let you try mine for it:
    
    Example

    
13. 00:37:218 (2,3) - The current flow isn't good for, pattern is too. I sugguest moving 00:37:218 (2) - to 148/112, then move 00:37:605 (3) - to 76/152
14. 00:40:509 (1) - No need NC, i sugguest removing it
15. 00:41:379 - There is drum-sound here, why do u ignore it? Put it a circle pls
16. 00:46:702 (2) - Remove clap from its head, so noisy though the instrument of song doesn't have it
17. 00:50:766 (1) - Add finish at head, u can hearm right?
18. 00:55:799 (2) - Opposite slider - I mean Ctrl+G will be more interesting flow and pattern for me
19. 00:57:541 (2) - Move the middle point to 396/92, it looks more blanket
20. 00:57:928 (3) - Remove whistle and clap from head, again, don't make what the song didn't show you
21. 01:00:057 (1) - same issue as 00:04:315 (1) -
    
    Example

    
22. 01:06:153 - Add circle since I could hear there is a sound here.
23. 01:12:347 - ^
24. 01:15:541 (1) - Remove finish from head, I didn't hear it.
25. 01:17:670 (1) - Really, this neednt NC
26. 01:18:444 (3) - Remove clap
27. 01:23:283 (5) - NC
28. 01:32:767 (2) - Move to the right abit (184/192) to anti-stack with 01:32:186 (4) -
29. 01:34:896 (4) - Move the middle point to 188/44 will looks more blanket
30. 01:35:283 (5) - ^
31. 01:36:734 - Add circle pls
32. 01:39:540 - This sound is so loud and strong, ignore it isn't a nice way. I sugguest adding circle
33. 01:43:993 (1,2) - Pls anti-overlap this, I thought they are 1/4 rhythm.

1. From 00:01:218 - to 00:12:444 - same problem as Insane
2. 00:02:573 (3) - THis slider ends at 00:03:544 - is quite weird for me since no have any sound at there. Voice at 00:03:347 -00:03:734 - 00:04:121 - is good and louder than other sounds, why not catch this sound? Try my rhythm
   
   Example

   
3. 00:14:186 (2) - Move to 164/260 will be nicer flow
4. 00:15:735 (2) - Move the middle point to 388/280 to be blanket
5. 00:19:412 (6) - Move the middle point to 236/132 to ^
6. 00:17:669 - I don't understand why you empty at 00:17:669 - and 00:18:057 - . They have sounds, too unatural and weird to empty when playing
7. 00:18:251 (3) - Move the middle point to 284/136
8. 00:22:896 (1) - Add finish default at head, i can hear it and so do you
9. 00:25:993 (1) - ^
10. 00:27:540 (1) - ^
11. 00:28:509 (5) - Pls remove clap from its tail, so strong although the song is calm
12. 00:31:412 (4) - I want it to be an opposite slider, i mean Ctrl+J it. So, the flow to 00:31:993 (1) and pattern will be great
13. 00:33:541 (5) - Move the middle point to 352/328 and tail to 436/300. It will look more blanket
14. 00:34:122 (6) - Move to 400/168 to be blanket
15. 00:36:638 (1) - Add whistle at head
16. 00:44:380 (1) - The appearance is ugly, see my example:
    
    Example

    
17. 00:48:831 (3) - Move the middle point abit up (176/160) to be blanket
18. 00:52:896 (2) - Add finish default at head
19. 01:01:605 (1) - Pls fit the distance with previous note and note after
20. 01:06:251 (1) - Move the tail to 340/324
21. 01:29:283 (4) - Move the middle point to 188/244
22. 01:36:057 (2) - Its tail is too near with 01:35:670 (1) - . Move to 464/136 to fit
23. 01:36:734 - There is drum sound here, I sugguest putting a circle
24. 01:39:541 (1) - No need NC

1. From 00:01:218 - to 00:12:444 - same problem as Insane
2. 00:10:509 (1) - Overlap here isn't good, since this diff is for noob players, you can't know this is 2/1 rhythm. I sugguest anti-overlapping here
3. 00:12:251 (1) - Add finish hitsound
4. 00:22:896 (1) - ^ at head
5. 00:25:993 (1,2) - Pls, don't overlap. I highly recommend, let map 1/2 distance as normally.
6. 00:27:541 (1,2) - same problem as above
7. 00:38:186 (1) - Move the middle point to 28/276 to fit the slider better, then fix the distance for next note
8. 00:39:928 (1) - Add finish at head
9. 00:43:025 (3,4) - Anti-overlap
10. 00:47:670 (1) - Add finish at head
11. 01:03:154 (1) - ^
12. 01:10:896 (3,4) - I sugguest changing into 1/2 slider, it will works better than 2 single circles
13. 01:36:637 - Add a circle here since the song shows me the drum-sound.
14. 01:38:766 - Add finish
15. 01:39:541 (2) - Add finish at head
16. 01:43:993 (1,2) - Anti-overlap pls
17. 01:00:638 (2) - Move the 4th point (from right to left) to 264/88 will look nicer

1. From 00:01:218 - to 00:12:444 - same problem as Insane
2. 00:10:508 (1) - I sugguest ending the slider at 00:11:476 - , since there is voice-sound here, the current ending time is nothing, it is natural
3. 00:12:057 (1) - Add finish
4. 00:15:154 (1) - Please remove NC, it isn't necessary
5. 00:15:154 (1,2) - I want them to be more blanket and nicer pattern. try my example, they needs being larger curved level
   
   Example

   
6. 00:22:896 (1) - Add finish at head
7. 00:25:992 (1) - ^
8. 00:27:541 (2) - ^
9. 00:29:089 (1) - ^
10. 00:35:283 (1) - Move the middle point to 264/356, then move its tail to 308/268, then fix the distance for next circle. They will look more blanket
11. 00:36:831 (3,4) - same problem as 00:15:154 (1,2) -
12. 00:39:928 (1) - Add finish at head
13. 00:47:670 (1) - ^
14. 00:50:766 (1) - ^
15. 01:00:831 (2) - Move the middle point to 160/356
16. 01:03:154 (1) - Add finish at head.
17. 01:31:025 (1) - ^
18. 01:44:767 (1) - Move to 01:44:767 (1) - , then move 01:44:864 (1) - to 01:44:864 (1) -

1. So it's ok to have diffrent SV now on Easy?
2. 00:12:057 (1) - Add whistle finish on spinner?
3. 00:18:637 (4) - NC? it's like you put NC after two downbeat, so why not on this one too
4. 00:47:282 (4,1) - For an easy I guess it's not recomended to have stack, but if necesary that stack at least must be visible for player, so how about move that and stack it on (1)'s head?
5. 00:50:767 (1) - Add finish on tail?
6. 01:15:154 (4) - Move that to x:256 y:192 for better triangle and stack
7. 01:40:315 (1,1) - Is not that spinner is just too close on the timeline? I guess should be a proper time before and after spinner for an Easy, so maybe you can delete this circle 01:40:315 (1) - and start the spinner on 01:40:315 - instead?
8. 01:44:767 (1,1) - Same as above
9. 01:44:864 (1) - Following the guitar sound that spinner should be stop at 01:47:282 -

1. 00:10:509 (1) - I guess it's better for you to follow the strong vocal on this part 00:11:089 - so how about shorter that slider into this http://puu.sh/dUKpx/e2e9458ec2.jpg instead? then you can start the spinner here 00:12:057 - so it'll also get more time before the spinner
2. 00:10:509 (1) - I think that stack is not really necesary and kinda out of place, how about Ctrl+J that and move around to have something like this http://puu.sh/dUKx1/4bb0ca83fa.jpg
3. 00:12:057 (1) - Add whistle finish on spinner?
4. 00:21:347 (4) - Rotate that -15 degree? to have better blanket with 00:20:573 (3) - something like this http://puu.sh/dUKR3/bf0ca98dde.jpg and re-arrange next notes on DS
5. 00:37:605 (7) - 00:31:412 (5) - Add whistle on tail?
6. 00:47:089 (5) - Add whistle on head? to emphize more the drum sound
7. 01:01:411 (3) - Add whistle on head? it have same same rhythm as 01:01:024 - while slider tick on red tick have that drum sound, well I think it's better sounded like that
8. 01:02:960 (6) - Add whistle, same reason as above
9. 01:14:186 (4) - Change whistle with clap? then you can also swap hitsound between them 01:17:670 (5,6) - to have same sound
10. 01:23:863 - It's a strong vocal there, why not map that one? maybe a rhythm like this sound better http://puu.sh/dUMxv/7060cd5c72.jpg
11. 01:24:444 (5) - Add clap on tail? it's something same as 01:11:864 (1,1) -
12. 01:26:573 (3) - Change whistle into clap on head
13. 01:29:283 (3) - Delete clap on tail? kinda too loud for me
14. 01:44:864 (1) - Following the guitar sound that spinner should be stop at 01:47:282 -
    
    Also if you change some hitsound, make sure to apply on Hard and Insane too, to make it consistent

1. 00:11:477 (4,5,6,7,1) - I'm a bit concern about that one, not sure how to put it but when I play it's like I can't follow up with the SV change especialy when it comes to (1) the fastest one, maybe you can NC every single of them
2. 00:19:799 (1) - Add finish?
3. 00:59:283 (6) - Ctrl+G for better flow?
4. 01:37:218 (1,1) - Ctrl+J and move it like this? http://puu.sh/dUPaH/c16c7d9eb5.jpg I guess it's better flow like that
5. 01:39:541 (1) - Not necesary NC, it have same SV as previous 0.75
6. 01:44:864 (1) - Following the guitar sound that spinner should be stop at 01:47:282 -

1. 00:12:444 (2,3,4) - NC for each slider? because it have diffrent SV same as Hard
2. 00:21:928 (2) - Delete clap on head, then add whistle on tail and add whistle on head here 00:22:315 (3) -
3. 00:23:670 (1,1,1) - 01:26:186 (1,1,1) - Why did you spam NC there? the SV is not change btw, I think that's not necesary, remove them?
4. 00:25:993 (1,2,3,4) - I guess you should NC single of them, because anti jump and I though they were stream when play
5. 00:27:541 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above
6. 00:31:412 (3) - Ctrl+G for better flow?
7. 00:57:928 (3) - Delete clap on tail
8. 00:59:283 (4) - Change into whistle instead? and add whistle on this one 00:59:476 (5) -
9. 01:09:154 (4) - Add clap?
10. 01:22:122 (2,3) - Such a big jump there, well since you copy paste this patern 01:21:735 (1,2,3,4) - how about make them closer?
11. 01:29:476 - Add note there? kinda odd when play when you missing a note there on downbeat
12. 01:39:540 - There also add a circle with clap to fit more the drum sound
13. 01:44:864 (1) - Following the guitar sound that spinner should be stop at 01:47:282 -

Oyatsu wrote:

Hello, from my queue! This is my first mod in 2015
Happy New Year!!~ ^^ happy new year
[General]

1. You didn't choose nice combo colors. Feel it is quite simple. Try my idea for an example?
   
   Example

   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 148,145,200
   Combo2 : 14,165,10
   Combo3 : 249,123,218

   oh, was I supposed to check the "enable custom colors" box? Because the colors in your screenshot look different from the colors I see...
   
2. Please remove Widescreen Support and Letterbox during breaks because your map didn't have SB and break. So they are useless. Fixed
3. The current size of BG isn't rankble. It should be 1366x768 or 1024x768will fix
4. Remove soft-sliderslide5 from your beatmap folder. When you use slidertick, it isn't necessary to use sliderslide, because tick is just tick, no need to silent the moving-slider sound. I don't understand why I need to remove it, but since I have no clue how to hitsound, I'll take your word for it. More explanation (by anyone) would be helpful though no wait I was wrong I do need soft-sliderslide5 otherwise you can hear the sliderroll in parts of the song, like during 01:20:186 (2) - on Easy.
5. Add to tags: I wanna say that I'm not your brother right now! as an English source. Fixed
6. Add opening to tags, too. Fixed
7. For all difficults, the last spin 01:44:864 (1) - should really be ended at 01:47:186 - , current point time is wrong because there isn't sound Fixed

[Insane]

1. From 00:01:218 - to 00:12:444 - , you can hear, all we have is just voice. it is really calm, I sugguest discreasing the volumn to 30~40%. Won't be sensible if you used 80%. Also, i want to use whistle default to put this part, that would be nice. Current is quite silent and boring fixed, forgot to change volume originally
2. 00:01:993 (2,3,6,7,1) - 1/2 rhythms here make me feel so bad, this is an Insane diff, it need being more difficult. I want to increase the distance among them, stacks aren't beautiful in this case it's a really slow and calm part, so I'm not that sure if it really needs to be more difficult. I'll see what I can do to make the stacks look better though...
3. 00:04:315 (1) - Its appearance is so ugle for me. I guess you will like mine:
   
   Example

   
   fixed, thanks for the idea~
4. 00:11:477 (2) - Move it up and to the right abit will be better flow fixed
5. 00:14:960 (4) - Move to 92/284 will be nicer pattern fixed
6. 00:19:605 (7) - THis slider is quite weird since it overbeated at big tick. Also, 00:19:993 (8) - I really didn't hear any sound which this followed.
   I want to stop stream at 00:19:605 - , then creating a slider starting 00:19:799 - to 00:19:992 - not exactly sure what you're referring to here, but I made the changes you listed.
   
   Example

   
7. 00:21:928 (2) - I really didn't hear any drum-sound at head. Remove it pls, so bad fixed
8. 00:25:993 (1) - Add finish will be more sensible instead fixed
9. 00:29:089 (1) - ^ finish default fixed fixed
10. 00:30:444 (1) - Move the middle point to 68/204 to fit better fixed, geez i suck at blanketing
11. 00:31:993 (1) - Move the middle point to 308/108 fixed
12. 00:33:541 (1) - The appearance is ugly imo, let you try mine for it: fixed
    
    Example

    
13. 00:37:218 (2,3) - The current flow isn't good for, pattern is too. I sugguest moving 00:37:218 (2) - to 148/112, then move 00:37:605 (3) - to 76/152 hmm, but doesn't this still leave the pattern essentially the same - just with better blanketing? I'm starting to wonder if something didn't update correctly...
14. 00:40:509 (1) - No need NC, i sugguest removing it not sure why I had that, fixed
15. 00:41:379 - There is drum-sound here, why do u ignore it? Put it a circle pls I was following the sounds of the violin (or whatever instrument it was there), I'm not sure how I'd add a note here...
16. 00:46:702 (2) - Remove clap from its head, so noisy though the instrument of song doesn't have it not sure why I had that, fixed hitsounds around it
17. 00:50:766 (1) - Add finish at head, u can hearm right? fixed
18. 00:55:799 (2) - Opposite slider - I mean Ctrl+G will be more interesting flow and pattern for me fixed
19. 00:57:541 (2) - Move the middle point to 396/92, it looks more blanket fixed
20. 00:57:928 (3) - Remove whistle and clap from head, again, don't make what the song didn't show you fixed
21. 01:00:057 (1) - same issue as 00:04:315 (1) - fixed
    
    Example

    
22. 01:06:153 - Add circle since I could hear there is a sound here. fixed
23. 01:12:347 - ^ I feel like it's better to stick with the vocals
24. 01:15:541 (1) - Remove finish from head, I didn't hear it. 01:11:864 (1,2,3,4) -
25. 01:17:670 (1) - Really, this neednt NC but it looks pretty I'll see what others say
26. 01:18:444 (3) - Remove clap fixed
27. 01:23:283 (5) - NC fixed
28. 01:32:767 (2) - Move to the right abit (184/192) to anti-stack with 01:32:186 (4) - not exactly understanding this...sorry D:
29. 01:34:896 (4) - Move the middle point to 188/44 will looks more blanket fixed
30. 01:35:283 (5) - ^ fixed
31. 01:36:734 - Add circle pls I don't really hear something that would need me to add a circle on the bass line, my ears could be wrong.
32. 01:39:540 - This sound is so loud and strong, ignore it isn't a nice way. I sugguest adding circle fixed
33. 01:43:993 (1,2) - Pls anti-overlap this, I thought they are 1/4 rhythm. It is insane and I feel like it's readable as-is...taking it out of overlap makes it look ugly imo

[Hard]

1. From 00:01:218 - to 00:12:444 - same problem as Insane fixed
2. 00:02:573 (3) - THis slider ends at 00:03:544 - is quite weird for me since no have any sound at there. Voice at 00:03:347 -00:03:734 - 00:04:121 - is good and louder than other sounds, why not catch this sound? Try my rhythm fixed
   
   Example

   
3. 00:14:186 (2) - Move to 164/260 will be nicer flow fixed
4. 00:15:735 (2) - Move the middle point to 388/280 to be blanket fixed
5. 00:19:412 (6) - Move the middle point to 236/132 to ^ fixed
6. 00:17:669 - I don't understand why you empty at 00:17:669 - and 00:18:057 - . They have sounds, too unatural and weird to empty when playing fixed
7. 00:18:251 (3) - Move the middle point to 284/136 fixed
8. 00:22:896 (1) - Add finish default at head, i can hear it and so do you fixed
9. 00:25:993 (1) - ^ fixed
10. 00:27:540 (1) - ^ fixed
11. 00:28:509 (5) - Pls remove clap from its tail, so strong although the song is calm fixed
12. 00:31:412 (4) - I want it to be an opposite slider, i mean Ctrl+J it. So, the flow to 00:31:993 (1) and pattern will be great nice idea!~
13. 00:33:541 (5) - Move the middle point to 352/328 and tail to 436/300. It will look more blanket fixed
14. 00:34:122 (6) - Move to 400/168 to be blanket fixed
15. 00:36:638 (1) - Add whistle at head whoops, somehow forgot
16. 00:44:380 (1) - The appearance is ugly, see my example: fixed
    
    Example

    
17. 00:48:831 (3) - Move the middle point abit up (176/160) to be blanket fixed
18. 00:52:896 (2) - Add finish default at head fixed
19. 01:01:605 (1) - Pls fit the distance with previous note and note after fixed distance spacing
20. 01:06:251 (1) - Move the tail to 340/324 fixed
21. 01:29:283 (4) - Move the middle point to 188/244 fixed
22. 01:36:057 (2) - Its tail is too near with 01:35:670 (1) - . Move to 464/136 to fit fixed
23. 01:36:734 - There is drum sound here, I sugguest putting a circle added
24. 01:39:541 (1) - No need NC fixed

[Normal]

1. From 00:01:218 - to 00:12:444 - same problem as Insane fixed
2. 00:10:509 (1) - Overlap here isn't good, since this diff is for noob players, you can't know this is 2/1 rhythm. I sugguest anti-overlapping here fixed
3. 00:12:251 (1) - Add finish hitsound fixed
4. 00:22:896 (1) - ^ at head fixed
5. 00:25:993 (1,2) - Pls, don't overlap. I highly recommend, let map 1/2 distance as normally. fixed
6. 00:27:541 (1,2) - same problem as above fixed
7. 00:38:186 (1) - Move the middle point to 28/276 to fit the slider better, then fix the distance for next note fixed
8. 00:39:928 (1) - Add finish at head fixed
9. 00:43:025 (3,4) - Anti-overlap fixed
10. 00:47:670 (1) - Add finish at head fixed
11. 01:03:154 (1) - ^ fixed
12. 01:10:896 (3,4) - I sugguest changing into 1/2 slider, it will works better than 2 single circles fixed
13. 01:36:637 - Add a circle here since the song shows me the drum-sound. fixed
14. 01:38:766 - Add finish fixed
15. 01:39:541 (2) - Add finish at head fixed
16. 01:43:993 (1,2) - Anti-overlap pls fixed
17. 01:00:638 (2) - Move the 4th point (from right to left) to 264/88 will look nicer fixed

[Easy]

1. From 00:01:218 - to 00:12:444 - same problem as Insane fixed
2. 00:10:508 (1) - I sugguest ending the slider at 00:11:476 - , since there is voice-sound here, the current ending time is nothing, it is natural fixed
3. 00:12:057 (1) - Add finish fixed
4. 00:15:154 (1) - Please remove NC, it isn't necessary fixed
5. 00:15:154 (1,2) - I want them to be more blanket and nicer pattern. try my example, they needs being larger curved level fixed
   
   Example

   
6. 00:22:896 (1) - Add finish at head fixed
7. 00:25:992 (1) - ^ fixed
8. 00:27:541 (2) - ^ fixed
9. 00:29:089 (1) - ^ fixed
10. 00:35:283 (1) - Move the middle point to 264/356, then move its tail to 308/268, then fix the distance for next circle. They will look more blanket fixed
11. 00:36:831 (3,4) - same problem as 00:15:154 (1,2) - fixed
12. 00:39:928 (1) - Add finish at head fixed
13. 00:47:670 (1) - ^ fixed
14. 00:50:766 (1) - ^ fixed
15. 01:00:831 (2) - Move the middle point to 160/356 fixed
16. 01:03:154 (1) - Add finish at head. fixed
17. 01:31:025 (1) - ^ fixed
18. 01:44:767 (1) - Move to 01:44:767 (1) - , then move 01:44:864 (1) - to 01:44:864 (1) - I don't understand this...

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You need to work more on your map. There are still many problems having to fix. Good luck! hagh I know >< thanks for modding~

1. i can't hitsound
2. i suck at blanketing
3. holy moly my normal is ugly

Mako Sakata wrote:

Helloooo from my queue~

[Easy]

1. So it's ok to have diffrent SV now on Easy? i'm not sure, i originally had this song with 2 BPM settings...I'd believe a tempo change like this would allow for an SV change, but idk. If not, I'll remap the beginning I guess.
2. 00:12:057 (1) - Add whistle finish on spinner? added finish from previous mod
3. 00:18:637 (4) - NC? it's like you put NC after two downbeat, so why not on this one too fixed the previous instance
4. 00:47:282 (4,1) - For an easy I guess it's not recomended to have stack, but if necesary that stack at least must be visible for player, so how about move that and stack it on (1)'s head? fixed~
5. 00:50:767 (1) - Add finish on tail? added~
6. 01:15:154 (4) - Move that to x:256 y:192 for better triangle and stack done~
7. 01:40:315 (1,1) - Is not that spinner is just too close on the timeline? I guess should be a proper time before and after spinner for an Easy, so maybe you can delete this circle 01:40:315 (1) - and start the spinner on 01:40:315 - instead? i feel like what i have now is fine, because i need a note for the vocal/drum that hits there - having the spinner start there wouldn't accomplish that.
8. 01:44:767 (1,1) - Same as above same as above
9. 01:44:864 (1) - Following the guitar sound that spinner should be stop at 01:47:282 - fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:10:509 (1) - I guess it's better for you to follow the strong vocal on this part 00:11:089 - so how about shorter that slider into this http://puu.sh/dUKpx/e2e9458ec2.jpg instead? then you can start the spinner here 00:12:057 - so it'll also get more time before the spinner yes this is better, fixed
2. 00:10:509 (1) - I think that stack is not really necesary and kinda out of place, how about Ctrl+J that and move around to have something like this http://puu.sh/dUKx1/4bb0ca83fa.jpg fixed
3. 00:12:057 (1) - Add whistle finish on spinner? added finish from previous mod
4. 00:21:347 (4) - Rotate that -15 degree? to have better blanket with 00:20:573 (3) - something like this http://puu.sh/dUKR3/bf0ca98dde.jpg and re-arrange next notes on DS tried to do something like that...i agree that the blanket looks bad right now
5. 00:37:605 (7) - 00:31:412 (5) - Add whistle on tail? whistles on tails weren't supposed to be there, so removed
6. 00:47:089 (5) - Add whistle on head? to emphize more the drum sound fixed
7. 01:01:411 (3) - Add whistle on head? it have same same rhythm as 01:01:024 - while slider tick on red tick have that drum sound, well I think it's better sounded like that fixed
8. 01:02:960 (6) - Add whistle, same reason as above fixed
9. 01:14:186 (4) - Change whistle with clap? then you can also swap hitsound between them 01:17:670 (5,6) - to have same sound changed all to whistles for consistency
10. 01:23:863 - It's a strong vocal there, why not map that one? maybe a rhythm like this sound better http://puu.sh/dUMxv/7060cd5c72.jpg fixed
11. 01:24:444 (5) - Add clap on tail? it's something same as 01:11:864 (1,1) - not in this case, previous was for emphasis of a strong music part arising from more silence. I should probably remove the previous clap...
12. 01:26:573 (3) - Change whistle into clap on head sounds weird imo
13. 01:29:283 (3) - Delete clap on tail? kinda too loud for me removing ruins the hitsound pattern
14. 01:44:864 (1) - Following the guitar sound that spinner should be stop at 01:47:282 - fixed
    
    Also if you change some hitsound, make sure to apply on Hard and Insane too, to make it consistent haghughariguhadfuhgasjdf;sdf; i'll check over consistency later

[Hard]

1. 00:11:477 (4,5,6,7,1) - I'm a bit concern about that one, not sure how to put it but when I play it's like I can't follow up with the SV change especialy when it comes to (1) the fastest one, maybe you can NC every single of them I'll look into different spacing options for this
2. 00:19:799 (1) - Add finish? yup
3. 00:59:283 (6) - Ctrl+G for better flow? I like the back-and-forth feel of these sliders I have currently
4. 01:37:218 (1,1) - Ctrl+J and move it like this? http://puu.sh/dUPaH/c16c7d9eb5.jpg I guess it's better flow like that made changes in previous mod
5. 01:39:541 (1) - Not necesary NC, it have same SV as previous 0.75 fixed
6. 01:44:864 (1) - Following the guitar sound that spinner should be stop at 01:47:282 - fixed

[Insane]

1. 00:12:444 (2,3,4) - NC for each slider? because it have diffrent SV same as Hard I was warned by Lust to not NC spam...
2. 00:21:928 (2) - Delete clap on head, then add whistle on tail and add whistle on head here 00:22:315 (3) - fixed
3. 00:23:670 (1,1,1) - 01:26:186 (1,1,1) - Why did you spam NC there? the SV is not change btw, I think that's not necesary, remove them? NC is for emphasis on the repeating sliders, I guess I'll remove on more complaints.
4. 00:25:993 (1,2,3,4) - I guess you should NC single of them, because anti jump and I though they were stream when play I was told by Lust to remove the NCs here lol
5. 00:27:541 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above ^
6. 00:31:412 (3) - Ctrl+G for better flow? I like the current back-forth pattern, fits vocals pretty well
7. 00:57:928 (3) - Delete clap on tail this feels like it'd break the hitsounding pattern
8. 00:59:283 (4) - Change into whistle instead? and add whistle on this one 00:59:476 (5) - I like my current hitsounds since they emphasize the jumps...but I guess they don't follow the song...hagh
9. 01:09:154 (4) - Add clap? added a finish
10. 01:22:122 (2,3) - Such a big jump there, well since you copy paste this patern 01:21:735 (1,2,3,4) - how about make them closer? I think this is fine, and it still works well. It is an insane, after all.
11. 01:29:476 - Add note there? kinda odd when play when you missing a note there on downbeat I was following the vocals, but I guess this does feel kinda awkward. I'll wait for more mods before changing just now.
12. 01:39:540 - There also add a circle with clap to fit more the drum sound yup, fixed
13. 01:44:864 (1) - Following the guitar sound that spinner should be stop at 01:47:282 - fixed~

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Very neat mapset there, goodluck~

Lythryn wrote:

irc mod by requesterino

1. From 00:29:089 (1) - to 00:53:767 (8) - I don't see a reason to use the snare every second and fourth beat (it is not in the song), so I think you should remove them.

1. Cool diff
2. Blankets look a bit sloppy here and there, so if you care about that I suggest that you go through the map

1. Same about blankets (e.g. 00:04:315 (1) - )
2. Maybe AR7.5 would fit better (density and stacks, quite a high SV as well)

1. Same about blankets

1. Same about blankets (00:58:509 (3) - wut? )

A Mystery wrote:

Hello! From my queue

General

1. From 00:29:089 (1) - to 00:53:767 (8) - I don't see a reason to use the snare every second and fourth beat (it is not in the song), so I think you should remove them. Hmmmm I guess I'll see what others say about this

Insane

1. Cool diff :3
2. Blankets look a bit sloppy here and there, so if you care about that I suggest that you go through the map ><

00:03:734 (5,6) - Wouldn't it be better to switch the rhythms? The "ta" in "watashi' (or something, I don't speak japanese) sounds like a stronger tick that should be tapped instead. Very minor though sounds better to me!
00:08:573 (2) - 1 pixel to the right for perfect stack done
00:21:347 (1) - Blanket? tried to fix a bit, i'm really bad at blanketing ughh how do bezier curves even work
00:53:283 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - I suggest curving this stream of something, I just don't really like the overlap between 00:52:896 (2,3) - I prefer it as is now, I actually like the overlap - gives a more "sharp" contrast for this section. I guess if more people say it looks ugly I'll change, never been good at design anyways ha
00:58:315 (1) - Remove the whistle on the slider body lol how did that get there, fixed
01:16:896 (1) - 01:17:670 (1) - Idk, wouldn't it play a lot better when both were ctrl+g'd? hmm that does seem nice...but it kinda ruins the pattern i was going for...i'll think about it
01:23:863 - It feels wrong to ignore the vocals here while you mapped them throughout the rest of the song. Consider adding a circle fixed kinda, not sure how to position the note though...
01:44:960 (1) - Make the spinner end a bit softer (~30% maybe?) done!

Hard

1. Same about blankets (e.g. 00:04:315 (1) - ) messed around with some blankets, god why do i suck at this, i point out problems in other people's blankets but CANT FIND PROBLEMS WITH MY OWN
2. Maybe AR7.5 would fit better (density and stacks, quite a high SV as well) i'll think about this/ask around before changing

00:10:121 (4) - Stack fixed
00:19:412 (8) - ^ fixed
00:25:605 (2) - Ctrl+g? It would add a nice little jump as well I prefer the current pattern :/
01:14:573 (6,7) - This stack might be a little confusing, I think players would just tap too early. Consider moving the slider or circle I think I need to remap that pattern as a whole, I'll do something about it.
01:16:895 (1) - Remove the whistle on the slider body fixed
01:23:863 - Again, the vocals should be mapped imo fixed
01:40:315 (3) - NC fixed

Normal

1. Same about blankets

01:40:315 (3) - NC fixed
01:44:766 (1) - Why not use the same rhythm as the Insane and Hard? It's not like it's harder to play or something, and there is plenty of time after the previous spinner according to Kibbleru, I need more recovery time after a spinner on normal, and putting a slider there (making the same rhythm as previous) is unrankable D:

Easy

1. Same about blankets (00:58:509 (3) - wut? )

00:24:444 (3) - Remove whistle from the slider body fixed
00:25:993 (1,2) - I don't think it was your intention for the slider ticks to be snares fixed
01:37:218 (1) - 01:40:315 (1) - Where these supposed to be stacked? If not, I suggest doing so since it looks weird now oh yup fixed lol
01:44:766 (1) - Let it end one tick later like in the other diffs fixed

Good luck! Have a starAhhh thank you so much >//<

1. I'm worried about your current usage of sliderticks. As stated in the Ranking criteria:
   

   Slider tick hitsounds are discouraged. If you want to use them, then make sure that their volume is balanced (i.e. notably quieter than regular hitsounds). A very loud slider tick, especially when only used once or twice, would be extremely jarring.

   Specifically, I speak of soft-sliderslide4, which has actually the same volume level of soft-hitclap4 and is a generally loud hitsound, so if you could lower down this sliderticks' volume a bit, you will be on a safer spot.
2. It is good if you are setting the volume levels more appropriately to certain sections of a song. Take the following as an example:
   00:29:089 - Notice how the music tones down at this point compared to the previous section 00:13:605 - . Leaving both sections on the same volume level doesn't make much sense, so lowering the volume on the calm section about let's say ~30% makes it sound more appealing to the track.
   Think about it, I'm sure you can came up with an appropriate setting yourself. And to ease up the process, you can copy the green lines between your diffs by using the hitsound copier: t/131540
   Also, you are using two different volume setups at the moment, so might be really good if you make usage of that tool to keep it consistent throughout your diffs.
   
   I'm leaving out hitsound mod for now since i'm unsure if you want to make it consistent between all diffs (HSing only Insane and then copying everything to the other diffs).
3. So I saw a lot of discrepancies between your objects in your easier diffs, certainly caused by the usage of Grid Snap. It would be good if you could check it on every note again by clicking on the specific object and check it on the upper-right side of the editor, see the yellow numbers:
   
   SPOILER

   
   Yes it's exhaustive work orz, I tried to find out the ones that were really obvious, but it's good if you can check yourself again.

1. HP2 would be better, 3 is a bit over the top and the map has a moderate amount of objects for an easy diff already.
2. 00:01:218 - Starting of a map with 0.45SV makes it extremely sluggish to play, even for easy dfifficulties. Adiitionally, you should refrain from having such big SV gaps at this stage since it will certainly confuse new players.
   I recommend you set the SV multiplicator at 0.9x here.
   Also, the whole intro misses hitsounds, setting whistles on strong beats (e-g strong piano notes) is advised.
3. 00:16:702 (3) - NC
4. 00:27:541 (2) - Spacing is confusing here since 00:27:541 (2,1) - are really close to each other. It would be good if you could space them out a bit more.
5. 00:50:767 (1) - I'd use the following rhythm here since 00:52:315 - is a strong beat that should be played:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:08:573 (2,1) - Watch your spacing here (and blanket it better :p)
7. 01:39:541 (2) - Make this a slider to follow the beat at 01:39:928 - as well.
8. 01:40:315 (1) - I recommend you delete this NC, it usually confuses players at this stage and isn't really necessary at all.
9. Solid easy, but fix the beginning up!

1. 00:01:218 (1,2,3) - Starting the 2nd easiest diff with 1/2 beats is really not adviced, please delete the circle.
2. 00:07:412 (1,2) - Could avoid this polarity issue (switching from red to white tick polarity) by deleting two and making 1 a backslider.
3. 00:08:960 (3,1) - 1.5xDS spacing would be good.
   I feel the pace of this section is still really slow, please consider to use a higher SV multiplier here (~0.75x) so you don't surprise players too much after the spinner with double SV.
4. 00:28:508 (1) - Unnecessary NC, delete.
5. 00:33:540 (5) - 00:36:637 (4) - NC
6. 00:41:863 - Comparing to 00:29:089 - , you start this section off with regular 1/1 beats while the other one starts with 1/2 rhythm patterns already, making your rhythm really inconsistent.
   You should follow the vocals here thoroughly, and I think the following rhythm patterns would suit in the style you are trying to achieve for this map:
   http://puu.sh/gp3m7/c96d748018.jpg
7. 01:21:734 (3) - NC
8. 01:33:347 (3) - Again, care for your spacing, you should try to keep it more constant around 1.0xDS
9. 01:39:540 (2,1) - ^
10. ~~~

1. Add HP/OD+1, I feel your current setting for hard is too forgiving.
2. 00:05:863 (1) - Delete NC. Same at:
   01:11:864 (1) -
3. 00:12:057 (4) - NC. Same at:
   00:18:251 (5) - 00:33:541 (3) - 00:39:928 (4) - 01:13:799 (4) - 01:29:283 (4) -
4. 00:12:831 (6) - I think it's good to at least NC here, makes the SV-increasing sliders it more intuitive to play.
5. 00:22:702 (5) - Take care of your spacing.
6. 00:25:025 (6,1,2,1) - ^
7. 00:24:444 (5,1) - NC on 5 instead.
8. 00:43:993 (3,4,1) - Triple-stacking here kind of takes away the momentum at this point as it forces a stop. How about spacing them out with 1.1xDS?
9. 01:02:766 (3) - A 1/2 slider would fit in well here to follow the vocal as well.
10. 01:10:896 (1,2) - As you are NCing here, it'd be good if you put a jump between 01:10:509 (4,1) - to justify this NC.
11. 01:12:444 (1,2,3) - Jumping between to 2 makes no sense here since there is nothing on the beat to emphasize. Instead, go with this:
    http://puu.sh/gp4JO/d3bf33fdeb.jpg
12. Is good.

1. Might consider to add 0.5 to the OD of this map.
2. I am concerned about the spread between you Hard and Insane diff. The issue is that your Insane introduces long streams (also some higher-spaced ones) and triples and your hard diff only has one of them at the end.
   It's difficult to tell, since boosting up the hard with triples makes Normal-Hard spread bad/unrankable orz. Consult some BNs/QAT and ask them about the spread issue here. The star rating might not imply it, but this might be a real issue.
3. 00:11:864 (1) - Switch this off with a circle and a slider starting at 00:12:057 - instead to be able to make a similar effect like in your hard diff.
4. 00:12:444 (2,3,4) - Here, it is advisable that you NC all of these sliders as the SV changes are somewhat noticeable.
5. 00:18:444 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This will certainly cause a big spread issue between your Hard diff and Insane, as you never used an actual triple in the hard diff (that means three 1/4 circlebeats, not speaking of backsliders) and suddenly put in a long stream in the highest diff.
   Hard to tell if you could leave it as it is, it actually fits in well >< You could switch 00:19:025 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this stream off with a 2x repeat + 1x repeat slider to ease it up.
6. 01:30:444 (4) - Swap this off with 2 circles would be good , strong beat at 01:30:444 (4) - should be played too.
7. Looks good, but it could be a bit more polished. I feel with a few more quality mods, you can improve the structure of this map.

-Nanaka- wrote:

hi
from My Modding Queues


red: unrankable issue.
blue: maybe unrankable issue,Highly recommended.
bold: should fix.

General

1. [quote="Ranking Criteria":1337]Hitsounds must have an acceptable range of delay under 5ms, unless there's a special purpose. Every hitsound file should start in time, preferrably at 0ms. This is to ensure that every map doesn't sound mistimed, and therefore could provide acceptably synchronized rhythm feedback to players.soft-hitfinish3
   soft-hitfinish4
   
   SPOILER

   
   http://puu.sh/gkrRm/adab6f8177.rar
   try this instead
   
   Ahhhh thank you so much for fixing this for me >< I didn't know about this (and kinda took hitsounds from other people's maps...
   
2. i think it's required to remove audio from video. should probably check this Shoot, I forgot about this. I'll fix this soon, need to find a way to remove audio from a video without making the video looking like crap...
3. Easy Normal. Tick Sound Vol -10% better, Fix plz Done, I think. Not exactly sure how to just decrease sound of ticks - should I audio edit it? For now, just lowered all sound effects to 70%.

Easy

1. 01:09:347 - 01:10:895 - add Finish fixed~

Normal

1. 00:28:508 (1) - I think 00:28:508 - Finish 00:29:089 - whistle added the whistle, not so sure about the finish
2. 00:58:121 (3,4) - hm... 00:57:540 (2) - ur vocal follow
   
   SPOILER

   
   fixed rhythm
3. 01:09:347 - ^ fixed~
4. 01:14:766 (5) - delete? 01:14:379 (4) - 1/2 reverse fixed, i should learn to use repeat sliders more often lol
5. 01:44:766 (1) - delete 01:44:573 - I think 1/2 slider,Natural melody & add Finish changed for now

Hard

1. 00:19:025 (7) - 1/2 slider plz fixed
2. 00:25:993 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - The wide Distance than Insane,change pattern Changed into sliders, I guess that's easier to play.
3. 00:32:573 (2) - Stack whoops, fixed~
4. 00:57:541 (2,3,4) - rhythm is difficult fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:09:347 - finish fixed
6. 01:16:121 - add Note fixed
7. 01:40:315 (1) - Finish

I ended up remapping a good portion of hard to make the overall rhythms easier~

Insane

1. AR8.5 recommended i swear it was at AR8.5 before, must've accidentally changed something
2. 00:22:895 (1) - blanket fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:23:670 (1,1,1) - NCspam & slider pattern,doesn't make sense to me personally I feel like the pattern is fine, as it fits with the guitar or whatever instrument that is in the background. I might remove the NC spam if more people don't like it...
4. 00:28:508 (5) - NC？ok~
5. 00:49:799 (3,4) - Ctrl+G rhythm,It will play naturally changed the pattern instead
6. 00:52:896 (2,3) - It is difficult to this sense of distance to understand.....Stack or keep away or
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:57:541 (2) - check blanket tried to fix lol
8. 00:56:960 (1,1) - stack whoops, fixed
9. 01:00:638 (2,3) - Ctrl+G rhythm ehh, feels weird. re-positioned some of the sliders though
10. 01:09:347 - Finish added
11. 01:10:122 (3,4,5,6,1) - Is funny star form fix it i don't really see what's wrong with it...i personally think its fine, more details would be really helpful here :3
12. 01:23:282 (1) - Remove NC done~
13. 01:23:282 (1,1) - same as DS I don't really understand what this means

Nice map
gl

mod time: 1.5hour

Pho wrote:

I don't have forgotten =w=/
Sry for late, was busy with other stuff. I'll mod this as soon as you applied Nanaka's mod, just call me in-game or i'll lookup myself everyday until it's done ww.

Pho wrote:

I don't have forgotten =w=/
Sry for late, was busy with other stuff. I'll mod this as soon as you applied Nanaka's mod, just call me in-game or i'll lookup myself everyday until it's done ww.

Will use this as a placeholder.

Allright, let's do this.

Bold: Fix quickly/unrankable stuff
Red: Highly recommend

[General]

1. I'm worried about your current usage of sliderticks. As stated in the Ranking criteria:
   

   Slider tick hitsounds are discouraged. If you want to use them, then make sure that their volume is balanced (i.e. notably quieter than regular hitsounds). A very loud slider tick, especially when only used once or twice, would be extremely jarring.

   Specifically, I speak of soft-sliderslide4, which has actually the same volume level of soft-hitclap4 and is a generally loud hitsound, so if you could lower down this sliderticks' volume a bit, you will be on a safer spot. Fixed, lowered them by maybe 20% or so. So that's what the previous mod was talking about, hue
2. It is good if you are setting the volume levels more appropriately to certain sections of a song. Take the following as an example:
   00:29:089 - Notice how the music tones down at this point compared to the previous section 00:13:605 - . Leaving both sections on the same volume level doesn't make much sense, so lowering the volume on the calm section about let's say ~30% makes it sound more appealing to the track.
   Think about it, I'm sure you can came up with an appropriate setting yourself. And to ease up the process, you can copy the green lines between your diffs by using the hitsound copier: t/131540
   Also, you are using two different volume setups at the moment, so might be really good if you make usage of that tool to keep it consistent throughout your diffs.
   I'm leaving out hitsound mod for now since i'm unsure if you want to make it consistent between all diffs (HSing only Insane and then copying everything to the other diffs).
   Added more volume variations, especially in the places you mentioned. Also, that program looks really useful, especially for keeping hitsounds consistent. But like you said, I feel like I should hitsound only Insane and then copy it to the other diffs, with the help of that program :3
   
3. So I saw a lot of discrepancies between your objects in your easier diffs, certainly caused by the usage of Grid Snap. It would be good if you could check it on every note again by clicking on the specific object and check it on the upper-right side of the editor, see the yellow numbers:
   
   SPOILER

   
   Yes it's exhaustive work orz, I tried to find out the ones that were really obvious, but it's good if you can check yourself again. oh boy time to look through all of these...

[Easy]

1. HP2 would be better, 3 is a bit over the top and the map has a moderate amount of objects for an easy diff already. done
2. 00:01:218 - Starting of a map with 0.45SV makes it extremely sluggish to play, even for easy dfifficulties. Adiitionally, you should refrain from having such big SV gaps at this stage since it will certainly confuse new players.
   I recommend you set the SV multiplicator at 0.9x here.
   Also, the whole intro misses hitsounds, setting whistles on strong beats (e-g strong piano notes) is advised.
   Applied everything as mentioned.
3. 00:16:702 (3) - NC
4. 00:27:541 (2) - Spacing is confusing here since 00:27:541 (2,1) - are really close to each other. It would be good if you could space them out a bit more. fixed
5. 00:50:767 (1) - I'd use the following rhythm here since 00:52:315 - is a strong beat that should be played:
   
   SPOILER

   
   fixed
6. 01:08:573 (2,1) - Watch your spacing here (and blanket it better :p) fixed, i think lol rip blankets
7. 01:39:541 (2) - Make this a slider to follow the beat at 01:39:928 - as well. fixed~
8. 01:40:315 (1) - I recommend you delete this NC, it usually confuses players at this stage and isn't really necessary at all. fixed
9. Solid easy, but fix the beginning up!

[Normal]

1. 00:01:218 (1,2,3) - Starting the 2nd easiest diff with 1/2 beats is really not adviced, please delete the circle.
2. 00:07:412 (1,2) - Could avoid this polarity issue (switching from red to white tick polarity) by deleting two and making 1 a backslider.
3. 00:08:960 (3,1) - 1.5xDS spacing would be good.
   I feel the pace of this section is still really slow, please consider to use a higher SV multiplier here (~0.75x) so you don't surprise players too much after the spinner with double SV.
   Ended up remapping the intro with 0.75x sv instead.
4. 00:28:508 (1) - Unnecessary NC, delete. done
5. 00:33:540 (5) - 00:36:637 (4) - NC
6. 00:41:863 - Comparing to 00:29:089 - , you start this section off with regular 1/1 beats while the other one starts with 1/2 rhythm patterns already, making your rhythm really inconsistent.
   You should follow the vocals here thoroughly, and I think the following rhythm patterns would suit in the style you are trying to achieve for this map:
   http://puu.sh/gp3m7/c96d748018.jpg
   yup, changed accordingly
7. 01:21:734 (3) - NC added
8. 01:33:347 (3) - Again, care for your spacing, you should try to keep it more constant around 1.0xDS fixed
9. 01:39:540 (2,1) - ^
10. ~~~

[Hard]

1. Add HP/OD+1, I feel your current setting for hard is too forgiving. ok done
2. 00:05:863 (1) - Delete NC. Same at:
   01:11:864 (1) -
3. 00:12:057 (4) - NC. Same at:
   00:18:251 (5) - 00:33:541 (3) - 00:39:928 (4) - 01:13:799 (4) - 01:29:283 (4) -
4. 00:12:831 (6) - I think it's good to at least NC here, makes the SV-increasing sliders it more intuitive to play.
   All NCs were applied
5. 00:22:702 (5) - Take care of your spacing. aww i thought this was ok, lowered spacing to 1.1x
6. 00:25:025 (6,1,2,1) - ^ lowered spacing to 1.1x, but kept last pattern the same (avoiding overlaps)
7. 00:24:444 (5,1) - NC on 5 instead. done
8. 00:43:993 (3,4,1) - Triple-stacking here kind of takes away the momentum at this point as it forces a stop. How about spacing them out with 1.1xDS? ok~
9. 01:02:766 (3) - A 1/2 slider would fit in well here to follow the vocal as well. done, kinda ended up making a large jump though, not sure...
10. 01:10:896 (1,2) - As you are NCing here, it'd be good if you put a jump between 01:10:509 (4,1) - to justify this NC. made a jump there
11. 01:12:444 (1,2,3) - Jumping between to 2 makes no sense here since there is nothing on the beat to emphasize. Instead, go with this:
    http://puu.sh/gp4JO/d3bf33fdeb.jpg hmm, i don't see much of a difference between these two. I like how the original version looked, but I guess having a more-even spacing is better here
12. Is good.

[Insane]

1. Might consider to add 0.5 to the OD of this map. ok~
2. I am concerned about the spread between you Hard and Insane diff. The issue is that your Insane introduces long streams (also some higher-spaced ones) and triples and your hard diff only has one of them at the end.
   It's difficult to tell, since boosting up the hard with triples makes Normal-Hard spread bad/unrankable orz. Consult some BNs/QAT and ask them about the spread issue here. The star rating might not imply it, but this might be a real issue. oh boy >< ok i'll see what i can do
3. 00:11:864 (1) - Switch this off with a circle and a slider starting at 00:12:057 - instead to be able to make a similar effect like in your hard diff.
4. 00:12:444 (2,3,4) - Here, it is advisable that you NC all of these sliders as the SV changes are somewhat noticeable. lol ive been hearing mixed stories about this - some people tell me to remove it, some people tell me to add. rip, added. let's see what happens now~
5. 00:18:444 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This will certainly cause a big spread issue between your Hard diff and Insane, as you never used an actual triple in the hard diff (that means three 1/4 circlebeats, not speaking of backsliders) and suddenly put in a long stream in the highest diff.
   Hard to tell if you could leave it as it is, it actually fits in well >< You could switch 00:19:025 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this stream off with a 2x repeat + 1x repeat slider to ease it up. i do like the repeat idea, and also it does seem like this stream is a bit too long. Not changing for now because I do like when these streams occur and since the music reflects them pretty well, I guess I'll go ask others about the difficulty spread issue...
6. 01:30:444 (4) - Swap this off with 2 circles would be good , strong beat at 01:30:444 (4) - should be played too. seemed kinda awkward at first, but I guess it does play well. fixed~
7. Looks good, but it could be a bit more polished. I feel with a few more quality mods, you can improve the structure of this map.

That's it for now. The set still needs a bit more work, but isn't too far from rankable state already. lol
I didn't focus on hitsounds yet, so getting two more quality mods on hitsounds in general and the structure of of your Insane diff would be good. If you have done so, you can call me back for a recheck.
Until then, good luck with this set! /o/

1. Ask around about issues with the difficulty spread
2. Remove audio from video
3. Hitsounding mods/Check over hitsounds
4. Fix/Add hitsounds to the intro, if necessary

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

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General

1. Imo the soft-sliderticks have low volume then soft-hitclap.wav which is louder.Why you not try to increase the volume of the soft-sliderticks ? was told by previous modders that sliderticks should be softer.

Easy

1. 00:05:863(1)- Instead adding here a 1/1 slider with repeat , I prefer to add a 1/1 slider without repeat and a circle to follow the vocal and the piano much better http://puu.sh/gAmZ2/5b5da89b28.jpg this would ruin the current rhythm that follows the vocal change on the red tick. Keeping it as a reverse slider also makes it easier to play.
2. 00:14:379()- I feel there's beat which is ignored D: I suggest to add an 1/1 slider to full the beat better I'd like to add stuff here, but for easy difficulty, you need at least one full measure of rest after a spinner. This was painfully confirmed by beatmap nominators rip
3. 00:26:384(1,2)- Here you tried to make a pattern as I see there but it doesn't look so nice and it will ruin the cursor movement and the flow.Move the last gap of (1)- to 115|65 and then try to make both sliders equal to have an acute pattern.It should be like here : http://puu.sh/gAnwm/3aaf1aeb0e.jpg] fixed!~
4. 00:32:186(1)- This slider touch the HP bar and it's visible in gameplay and testplay.Try to move it to 262|54 to avoid the HP bar touch fixed
5. 00:36:831(3)- I think it's better to make ctrl+j for a better cursor movement and playability and for a better pattern with (4)- and (5)- changed the shape
6. 00:39:928(1)- Imo the slider is too close from HP bar.A little and it will touch D: I suggest to move it to 364|79 to avoid the HP bar touch moved it down a tad
7. 00:51:928(2)- I suggest to place it to 118|193 to make a blanket with previous slider for a better cursor movement and playability fixed!~
8. 01:08:573(2,1)- I think this blanket needs adjustement cuz it doesn't look so good imo D: You just should adjust (1)- like here : http://puu.sh/gAoEz/0a82e9014e.jpg to the blanket look much better then before.Also you will improve the cursor movement and the flow lol, tried to fix it, not sure how well it looks hahaha
9. 01:44:766(1)- This spinner should be snapped to white tick cuz it's almost unsnnaped I'm not sure : http://puu.sh/gAp5S/201f329ff1.jpg idk why you snapped it to blue tick to be unsnapped =/ that's where the song ends, so it makes sense to land on a blue tick. Also confirmed by Kibbleru and a few other modders.

Normal

1. 00:05:864(3)- Same as easy.Try to place here an 1/1 slider and a note : http://puu.sh/gApDW/7d7c797301.jpg to follow the piano and the vocal better doesn't seem like it follows the rhythm as well, honestly...the end of the 1/1 slider doesn't exactly land on anything strong at that point
2. 00:21:347(3,4,5)- Maybe you should move this pattern to 148|44 cuz (3)- is too close from HP bar and I said to move the whole pattern to avoid the HP bar touch fixed
3. 00:28:121(2)- I suggest to move this note to 358|163 for be more playable and for a better cursor movement i don't really understand why, looks weird lol
4. 00:28:508(3)- Try to improve this slider cuz the curved part doesn't look so nice imo D: Here's my example : http://puu.sh/gAq8H/9766c1da4b.jpg It will looks more better than before lol, tried fixing it orz, honestly probably still looks like ass
5. 00:54:637(2,3,4)- Move the whole pattern to 217|259 to avoid the HP bar touch because (3)- and (4)- touch the HP bar fixed~
6. 01:00:057(1)- I suggest to move it to 262|257 to make it equal with previous slider for a better cursor movement moved somewhat
7. 01:09:347(1)- Another HP bar touch D: Move it to 228|34 to avoid the HP bar touch fixed
8. 01:12:444(1)- I suggest to move it to 136|88 to stack it with the previous 2 notes cuz it looks like a bad overlap D: and it looks untidy imo moved elsewhere instead of stacking
9. 01:44:766(1)- Same as easy.Snapped on white ticksee previous comments

Hard

1. 00:08:960(3,4)- Here's a bad stack.(4)- is not stacked well with (3)-'s tail.Move it to 198|109 for a better stack fixed and checked all stacks in intro, found and fixed 2 of them.
2. 00:12:444(2)- I suggest ctrl+g for a better playability.Also apply this on 00:13:218(2)- same reason changed!~
3. 00:13:606(1,2)- This pattern looks weird to me imo D: I suggest to move it to 110|244 for a better pattern and also you will improve the cursor movement and the playability http://puu.sh/gArxd/1b776b7496.jpg lol, i fixed this before reading this hahaha
4. 00:19:024(3,4)- The pattern it's not so good and the cursor movement will be ruined D: I suggest to move (4)- to 166|300 for a better pattern,cursor movement and for a nice playability http://puu.sh/gAsgB/7c0dfc2ec8.jpg hmm, i think this part is fine
5. 01:28:702(4)- You forgot to put the clap on slider's tail fixed, just never updated lol rip
6. 01:32:573(1)- Place it to 216|80 to avoid the HP bar touch cuz it touch the HP bar D: fixed
7. 01:44:766(1)- Same as easy and normal

Insane

1. 00:05:863(3)- Ctrl+g ? A jump wouldn't hurt while this is Insane diff xD but it's better to add NC here cuz there're new vocals a jump here wouldn't work too well imo, the whole part is pretty calm, jump is kinda uncalled for too. adding NC would also break my NC pattern.
2. 00:08:573(2)- Here it's a bad stack.To avoid this,place it to 297|214 for a better stack with (1)- 's tail fixed!
3. 01:32:767(2)- Try to avoid this http://puu.sh/gAwip/fd3c1481f8.jpg This is pixel touch and it looks untidy imo D: Try to find another placement of the note to avoid the pixel touch but be careful do not ruin the star pattern fixed it in an...interesting way. we'll see how this goes hue
4. 01:37:218(1)- Instead adding a 1/1 slider with repeat,I suggest to use a simple 1/1 slider and then 2 notes to follow the vocal much better http://puu.sh/gAx85/c12621b5a2.jpg changed up the rhythm so that it fits the vocals more~
5. 01:44:766(1)- Same as easy,normal and hard
   
   Looks fine to me >w<

Good mapset but be careful on metadata and video offset.I think the metadata is almost correct but a double-check from a japanese QAT doesn't hurt ;D and about video offset talk with some BNs or QATs.If you not find , call me ;D I'll help you

Good Luck ~

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

Btw missed something

There's a huge gap between Hard diff between Insane diff.Lemme explain the reason :3 Hard diff have 2.98 stars while Insane diff have 4.07 stars D: I suggest to simplify the Insane diff

Thanks for understand ;D ~

EDIT: About the last spinner you're right >///< I was so tired then and yea my crazy brain

DahplA wrote:

Hi, DahplA here posting from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding team. This is a response in regards to this request. Please be sure to vote here on how helpful our mod was.

Insane

1. 00:10:121 (4) - Wouldn't it make more sense for this to be stacked under previous slider the spacing would be kinda off in that way
2. 00:12:057 (2,1,1,1) - Why don't you use copy+paste then rotate the sliders around so they are the same direction this pattern is pretty cool though, stole the idea from various other maps hue
3. 00:21:928 (2) - Fix blanket tried to fix lol
4. 00:27:541 (1,2,3,4) - This isn't straight rip i think its straight now
5. 00:41:283 (4) - I'd recommend either stacking this or moving it away from the slider i've seen other maps do this, and this was suggested by a few other modders - I personally think it looks cool, but I'll ask around for some other people
6. 00:58:896 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Jumps are a bit far for the tempo of this map will remap, this section has been on my remap list for a while now
7. 01:11:864 (1,2,3) - Make this a 1/2 slider with reverse i feel as if three stacked notes gives more emphasis to the vocals, but i'll think about it lol
8. 01:27:347 (2) - This may be a bit hard to read should be fine, it is an insane after all. Didn't have any testplayers miss/mention that one either.
9. 01:20:767 (2) - Maybe stack on 01:19:605 (4) - fixed~

Hard

1. 00:58:508 (1) - Stack whoops, fixed
2. Overall the map is very easy, considering star rating. I'd recommend beefing up the difficulty on this. I'll be doing a mix of both - increasing difficulty slightly on hard while decreasing the streams on insane. Hopefully I can get this difficulty issue ironed out...

Most of it was very well mapped, not too many flaws I could pick out, especially with Easy and Normal. yay~

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

Btw missed something

There's a huge gap between Hard diff between Insane diff.Lemme explain the reason :3 Hard diff have 2.98 stars while Insane diff have 4.07 stars D: I suggest to simplify the Insane diff

Thanks for understand ;D ~

Pho wrote:

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

Btw missed something

There's a huge gap between Hard diff between Insane diff.Lemme explain the reason :3 Hard diff have 2.98 stars while Insane diff have 4.07 stars D: I suggest to simplify the Insane diff

Thanks for understand ;D ~

You can't and should NEVER determine spread issue just by looking at the star rating. Besides, a difference of ~1 star diff is actually pretty good.

The issue was because Hard only had one triple while the Insane had a moderate amount of triples and also streams in it. The spread was fine already since Hard had a few triples and a ministream added, now i kind of miss that long stream i pointed out red before in the Insane (current solution works too btw)